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Dui part Mein post kar doEk dikkat ho gayi hai guys. Update bahut zyada khich raha hai. 12k already cross kar chuka hai aur scene abhi bhi baaki hai mid ka... Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karu.
Basically do erotic scenes hai. Ek Parijaat ghar waala aur ek... Veer and Purvi ka. Veer and Purvi waala complete ho chuka hai but Parijaat ghar waala abhi aur baaki hai. Aur, 12k words already ho chuke hai. Limit itni hi hai post karne ki... Toh mein confused hu. Beech me wo scene adhura pada hua hai.
Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua. Kya kiya jaaye batao tumlog?
Jaldi jaldi attendance lagao man. Toh decide kare phir... It's the first time I'm asking for any suggestion.
Kyunki, meri samajh me nahi aa raha.The only logical solution looks like to either shorten a scene or remove one from this update ab limit cross ho chuki toh update aur lamba khichega nahi,baakiyo ko bolne do kya bolte haiEk dikkat ho gayi hai guys. Update bahut zyada khich raha hai. 12k already cross kar chuka hai aur scene abhi bhi baaki hai mid ka... Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karu.
Basically do erotic scenes hai. Ek Parijaat ghar waala aur ek... Veer and Purvi ka. Veer and Purvi waala complete ho chuka hai but Parijaat ghar waala abhi aur baaki hai. Aur, 12k words already ho chuke hai. Limit itni hi hai post karne ki... Toh mein confused hu. Beech me wo scene adhura pada hua hai.
Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua. Kya kiya jaaye batao tumlog?
Agar update ko aur lamba nahi khichna chahte to scene aadha clif hanger type rakh dijiye yaa phir edit krke sirf tease krke chhod dijiye.Ek dikkat ho gayi hai guys. Update bahut zyada khich raha hai. 12k already cross kar chuka hai aur scene abhi bhi baaki hai mid ka... Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karu.
Basically do erotic scenes hai. Ek Parijaat ghar waala aur ek... Veer and Purvi ka. Veer and Purvi waala complete ho chuka hai but Parijaat ghar waala abhi aur baaki hai. Aur, 12k words already ho chuke hai. Limit itni hi hai post karne ki... Toh mein confused hu. Beech me wo scene adhura pada hua hai.
Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua. Kya kiya jaaye batao tumlog?
Dono me se ek scene next update me beth sake to try karlo BhaiEk dikkat ho gayi hai guys. Update bahut zyada khich raha hai. 12k already cross kar chuka hai aur scene abhi bhi baaki hai mid ka... Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karu.
Basically do erotic scenes hai. Ek Parijaat ghar waala aur ek... Veer and Purvi ka. Veer and Purvi waala complete ho chuka hai but Parijaat ghar waala abhi aur baaki hai. Aur, 12k words already ho chuke hai. Limit itni hi hai post karne ki... Toh mein confused hu. Beech me wo scene adhura pada hua hai.
Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua. Kya kiya jaaye batao tumlog?
Dikkat wahi hai na... End part completed hai. Mid part... Parijaat ghar waala... Wo abhi complete nahi hai. Toh update like... Beech me adhura hai utna section. Baaki completed hai. Aur, utne me hi 12k words cross ho chuke hai.Dui part Mein post kar do![]()
Bhai fir purvi wala scene next update me set kardo... Update ke hisaab se konsa scene jyada jaruri hai use hi try karoDikkat wahi hai na... End part completed hai. Mid part... Parijaat ghar waala... Wo abhi complete nahi hai. Toh update like... Beech me adhura hai utna section. Baaki completed hai. Aur, utne me hi 12k words cross ho chuke hai.