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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

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  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

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  • Kuch nahi bann paega

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Werewolf

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Great update. Story me koi bhi loose end nahi chhoda hai. Pehle Nidhi ka POV, phir Ragini ka, aur ab Parijaat kaise shuru hua, kaise uska naam pada, pura past hi saamne khol kar rakh diya hai. Padmini ke ghamand aur murkhta ne un sab ko is bandhan me hamesha ke liye baandh diya. Bas, ek baat yeh huyi ki unko Baldev Singh ke pariwar ke keval ek hi mard ke saath baandha gaya tha.
Nidhi waale update me Nidhi ka POV nahi tha wo. Bas Nidhi par focused tha entirely. Narration third person perspective waala bj tha. Ragini ka zaroor POV tha.
Ek khaas baat yeh huyi ki Mahadevanand Maharaj ne Baldev ko Rajan keh kar sambhodhit kiya, saaf hai ki unke purvaj Raja/ Maharaja the. Is update ko padh kar aisa laga jaise munh me jaate huye niwale ko kisi ne cheen liya hai. Aisa lag raha tha ki Neel Mani ka rahasya ab saamne aayega, par reh gaya. Waise kafi kuch pehle iske baare me likha hua hai.
Aayega. Wo bhi aayega. Uski bhi apni kahani hai. Aur, vast hai. Iss update me dikhana namumkin tha. Aage dekhenge hum.
<'Maharaj! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, kintu aap neel mani ko apne tan se juda hone mat dena. Warna anarth ho jayega.'>

<Aur woh neel mani? Woh wahi uss yuddh bhumi me ret me kahi dafn hoke reh gaya. Raja Param Veer Singh ke vanshaj bhi dheere dheere khatam ho gaye. Ek itni behatreen peedhi ka dukhad ant.>

Saaf hai ki Baldev aur ab Veer isi Raj Parivar se sambandhit the, isi liye yeh mani Bhavna ko mili aur ab Veer ke gale me hai. Yeh uski raksha karti rahegi. Ab iska origin kahan se hua, yeh bhi kisi update me aayega hi.
Yes. But ab wo Raja nahi rahe. Aam Aadmi bann chuke the. Raja jaisi peedhi agar aam Aadmi bann ke rehne lage toh kahi na kahi ye degradation hi tha.

Bhale hi wo bahut bade aadmi the as per the haveli. Lekin, compared to a king, he wasn't anything. Neel mani ke tann se juda hone ki wajah se hi aage ki peedhi barbaad hui. Unme degradation aaya. Otherwise, Veer aaj ek Raja hota. Par, choonki ab wahi Neel mani uske galey me hai. He's progressing on his route to become one.
Raman kaise Dhananjay tak pahuncha aur kaise usne uski jayedad par kabja kar liya, yeh bhi link ho gaya. Veer tak kaise pahuncha, weh bhi clear ho gaya. To Damian ko Ranjeet ke baare me pata tha.
Raman nahi pahucha. Ranjeet pahucha. Raman toh Patna me baitha-baithe hi sab karwa raha tha. Wo waha se nikla hi nahi kahi.
One thing is to be appreciated, so smoothly you have shifted from Bhojpuri to Rajasthani dialect, hats off to you.
Dhanyavad. Waise maine itne zyada koi words use nahi kiye. I kept it simple and generally used language.
These updates make the story realistic, and I like them. They make the story complete. Nothing is in vain.
Thanks a lot. ✨
Veer ko 'Mystic Touch' skill mil gayi hai. 'Legendary Skills (Cross Categary)' shayad apne missions ko complete karne ke baad mil jaaye. Par Pari se jhagad liya, this is nor Veer style, he has really changed, for good or worst.
Mystic Touch nahi bhai. Mystic Stroke. Aur, ye skill nahi hai. Perk hai. :declare:
Perks tab hi milte hai jab aap mission ko complete karo. 3 random perks rehte in the form of question mark. Unme se ek select karna hota hai. Ab wo supportive bhi ho sakte hai, toh kaho khud ke liye haanikarak bhi ho sakte hai. That's why they are called the perks. Lekin completely disadvantageous nahi hote. Kuchh na kuchh zaroor offer karte hai.

Kuchh limited time ke liye ho sakte hai toh kuchh permanent. Mostly, limited usage ke liye rehte hai kyunki, har mission completion par aapko ek milta hi hai. Toh, isliye mostly time based rehte hai.

But Veer lucky tha.. he got a rare one. Aur wo bhi permanent one. Mystic Stroke. It helps him to draw, sketch, paint, illustrate at a higher level. Hope samajh aa gaya hoga. Aur, inhi missions complete karne ke baad jo perks select karne ki screen khulti hi... Use hi perk hunt kehte hai. Jo system level 10 ho jaane ke baad open hoti hai.

Ava ke paas bhi ek perk hai. Uske full status me dekhna jaake first page par. Lekin, woh uska use nahi kar sakti. Kyunki, uska system level 9 par hai. Aur, perk hunt level 10 pe unkock hota hai. Ava ko wo perk Jaw Long ki fight se mila tha. :declare:
Again, a great update.
Thanks and keep supporting. ✨
 

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Do you really want to challenge me? ME??? :Huhh:
Alright then... I accept your challenge. But what will I get in return? :hinthint: The reward should be there as well.
What more do u want than a reader like me?? 🤣 I'll give more awesome possum reviews... 🥳
 

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Rihanna here's your answer :

Ghee? —> Ghee agni tatva ka carrier hai. Sabhi pooja paath me istemal hota hai. Spiritual vibrations ko preserve rakhne ke liye.

Gudd? —> Mithaas aur samriddhi ka prateek hai. Daiveeya dhyaan aakarshit karne ke liye ek prakaar se chaara. A bait.

Sarso? —> Negative entities ko dur bhagaane aur aam vyaktiyo ke protection ke liye. Kinda like shield.

Haldi? —> Aura ko purify karne ke liye, aur anti-demonic cheezo se bachne ke liye.

Baal (Parijaat mahilao ke)? —> Baalo me DNA hota hai. Ek prakar se bahut hi intimate cheez hai ye. Shakti ka prateek. Aur, apni ichha se pesh ki gayi. Unke pure life force ko mitti se baandhne ke liye. (They all were virgins and carriers of shakti, feminine energy inside.)


Why 11 days? —> Because 11th day is often observed as ekadashi in the lunar cycle and is considered as one of the most auspicious days.

Clear now???
What the hell...?? How did u even come up with that? 😧😰
 

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alright, Hamen flashback mein le jata hai jaha Harikiran Singh aur Bijaipur-Mayra ke haveliyon ka itihas samne aata hai, ekdum seamless hai. Bijaipur ke Dharam Singh ka parivar, jo angrezo ke khilaaf lada, aur Mayra ke Harikiran ka khandaan, jo angrezo ke saath mila hua tha, yeh contrast story ko historical aur social weight deta hai.
Yes. Polar opposites. A striking contrast. Thanks for pointing it out. :good:
Bhavna ke parivar ka raat bhar mein jal ke khak ho jana aur Harikiran ka rutba badhna ek tragedy ka foundation rakhta hai. Yeh backstory na sirf plot ke stakes ko badhaata hai, balki yeh bhi dikhaata hai ki kaise purani dushmaniyaan aaj ke characters ke jeevan ko shape karti hai.

Harikiran ka kasayi-khaane jaise gande dhande mein haath daalna uske character ko aur bhi dirty banata hai, jo aage ke events ko justify karta hai.
Yes. Also, there was a little detail in the update as well. Raman jab Dhananjay ko samjha raha hota hai. He too gives an example where he includes 'kasaayi khaana' indicating Harikiran's kasaayi khaana. Of course, Raman ko Harikiran ke kasaayi khaane ke baare me koi knowledge nahi tha. But previous update was on slaughterhouse and now Raman's mentioning it. Again, a small detail. But missed by everyone.
Dhananjay ka character is update ka ek bada highlight hai. Woh ek aisa naujawan hai jo apne gaanv ke bandhan se tang aa chuka hai. Uska, “Manne baahar ki duniya dekhni hai,” uski restlessness aur ambition ko dikhaata hai. Uska alhadpann aur zid usko relatable banata hai, par yahi uski kamzori bhi hai.

Harikiran ka Patna chunna ek aisa sheher jo na pura urban hai na pura rural, ek shaatir move hai jo uske controlling nature ko dikhata hai. Yeh decision Dhananjay ke safar ka turning point banta hai, kyunki yahi usko Raman ke paas le jata hai. Nicely thoughtful writing.
Thanks. I couldn't just write that it was a coincidence why Dhananjay went to Patna, right? Everything must have a logic behind it. As much as you can apply... Apply it.
Raman aur Ranjeet ka raat ka scene, jaha woh Dhananjay ko lootne ki planning karte hai. Raman ka zameen ke neeche paise chhupana aur Ranjeet ko gaddi dena ek gritty stereotype realism deta hai.Yeh scene dikhata hai ki kaise yeh dono logon ki aastha se khel ke apna empire bana rahe hai.
It also shows ki kyu Raman abhi tak pakda nahi gaya. He lives in a shabby house. No one would be suspicious of him. And, the money... He hides it underground. So even if anyone comes. They won't be able to find anything.
jab Dhananjay unki baat sunn leta hai aur bhaagta hai. Uska bhaagna, Ranjeet ka peecha karna aur woh gunshots. Then Dhananjay ki maut. Dhananjay ko hum bura nahi keh sakte isliye uska mout chota sa emotional tha, aur uske baad Vandna ka Ranjeet ke haathon bandhi ban jana aur bhi dard deta hai. Yeh sequence raw aur thoda sa heartbreaking tha.
Life is unpredictable. Kab kya ho jaaye kise pata. Dhananjay ka ant dukhad tha par yahi tha jo tha. He was unlucky.
Vandna ka Bijaipur bhaag kar Abhilasha se milna is update ka sabse gehra aur emotional part hai. Abhilasha ka khulasa ki Vandna ek Parijaat ki aurat hai.

Maine pichhali review Mein keh diya tha, guess kar liya tha yah hone wala hai😁
Yes! I remember! But isi surprise se juda ek aur twist aaya. Balki, do twist. Pehla toh yeh ki Abhilasha Vandna ki maasi nikli, aur dusra yeh ki Abhilasha ne hi Vandna ki shaadi Bhanu Pratap se karwayi thi.
Parijaat ka itihas - Paramhans Mahadevanand Ji ka shraap, Padmini ka abhimaan, aur Baldev Singh ke parivar ke saath Parijaat aurton ka bandhan, yeh sab ek mythological saga jaisa laga.

Shraap ka yeh angle ki Parijaat ki aurtein Baldev ke vansh ki seva karegi, aur agar khilaaf gayi toh unka patan hoga, Vandna ke parivar ke khatma ko explain karta hai ye shraap.
Mythological toh nahi kahunga mein ise. Ise history ke context me hi rakhunga. Kyunki, shraap wagarah aaj bhi exist karte hai. Maanane waale maante hai, nahi maanane waale nahi maante. But mujhe koi doubt nahi hai ki aisi bhi cheezein exist karti hongi. Even aliens kisi zamaane me imaginagtive thing hua karti thi but aaj... Already pata lag chuka hai ki bhai humans ke alawa bhi existence hai kisi ka. Toh shraap aur paranormal jaisi cheezein bhi definitely kuchh na kuchh inka bhi zaroor hoga.
Abhilasha ka confess karna ki usne Vandna ki shaadi Mayra ke parivar mein karwayi taaki shraap apna kaam kare, aur Bhavna ke parivar ke dushman khatam ho. Ye dikhaata hai ki kaise ek purana shraap aaj ke jeevan ko tabah kar sakta hai.
Well, it was a strong curse!
Veer ka role isme ekdum complex hai. Woh ek taraf toh ek mastermind hai, jo Ranjeet ko itni shaatir tarah se khatam karta hai ki koi us par shak bhi nahi karta. Par doosri taraf, uska Pari ke saath jhagda uske andar ke moral conflict ko dikhata hai.

Pari ka roona aur sleep mode mein chala jana ek insaani rishta veer ke saath jaisa feel deta hai. Veer ka yeh kehna ki “This is the right way” aur Pari ka uske brutal hone par dukh dikhana, story mein ek moral dilemma add karta hai.
Yup! Thanks for pointing out terms that we writers understand better compared to the readers. And, also going into those details because generally readers don't care about such things. They don't pay attention to the minute details.
Dhananjay ki tragedy, Vandna ka dard, aur Veer ka badalta hua character, gehra tha.

Bhale hi yah update Bhavna ke flashback Jitna intense nahi tha, but hey i like it. Parijaat ke auraton Ka Rahasya Khul Ke Samne Aaya, Jo ki iss update ka main focus tha, aur shayad iss update Se Mujhe locket ka hint bhi Mila. Shabdon ka bhi istemal achcha Kiya gaya tha. contrast bhi sahi tha.
Thanks a lot for an in-depth review of the update. And, keep supporting as usual. :five:
 

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Waiting for next update bhai...
 
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Bro ek question hai... Aisa jruri toh nhi h ki ek vanshaj mei sirf 1 hi ldka paida ho.... Veer ke purvajo mei bhi aisa bahot si baar hua hoga ki manlo 2 ya usse jyada log ho jo apni shreshththa ko baki se upr smjhte honge... Toh ye kon decide krta h ki jyada shreshth kon h... Also if veer ko system nhi mila hota toh veer would not have been same... Kya tb bhi if parijaat would have existed toh unhe veer ki seva krni padti? Kyuki tb veer na toh utna capable hota na hi strong..
 
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Bro ek question hai... Aisa jruri toh nhi h ki ek vanshaj mei sirf 1 hi ldka paida ho.... Veer ke purvajo mei bhi aisa bahot si baar hua hoga ki manlo 2 ya usse jyada log ho jo apni shreshththa ko baki se upr smjhte honge... Toh ye kon decide krta h ki jyada shreshth kon h... Also if veer ko system nhi mila hota toh veer would not have been same... Kya tb bhi if parijaat would have existed toh unhe veer ki seva krni padti? Kyuki tb veer na toh utna capable hota na hi strong..
Kaun sarvashreshta hai iska idea toh lag hi jaata hai. Bahut si skills, fields hoti hai jaha se pata chal hi jaata tha ki kaun best hai. Aur, nahi bhi pata lagta hoga toh Ghar me hi koi task diye jaa sakte hai jis se pata lag sake.

Rahi baat Veer ko system nahi mila hota toh Veer hota hi nahi. Veer ki mrityu hone hi waali thi tabhi use system mila tha. Toh uss case me Veer nahi hota toh Parijaat ki aurtein Tej ko serve karti. Simple.
 
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Will you remove it from INCEST category. No sex, nothing is there now in story. Just boring episodes now. Starting it was good

Do anyone agree?
 
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Will you remove it from INCEST category. No sex, nothing is there now in story. Just boring episodes now. Starting it was good

Do anyone agree?
Story is not based on incest fuck fest. Incest will come in the future. It's a long story. If you want it to happen in the early updates. The story is not for you.
 
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