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ZAKHAM YA PYAR (BHAI & BAHEN)
UPDATE 1
Time:- 6:15 PM
Sunset time Par koi cheese Teji se badi ja rahi thi. dikhne mein Ek car dikh rahi thi Jo Kisi Raste (Road) per bahut Teji se badi ja rahi thi. Rasta dikhne Mein To mountainside Road tha. Road ke side mein ek rever baheri thi.(mountainside rever please try to understand friend)
Car Dekhne Mein To bahut mahange dikh rahi hai. Lagta Hai Kisi Amir Insan ki thi.
(In side a car)
Car ke andar 2 log the Kisi Pareshani me lag rahe the. Lagne Mein To Pati Patni Lagte Hain.
Andar me Ek Aurat Kisi pareshani mein aur dard bhari awaaz mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi dard me.
Aurat:-( Dard Mein Thodi jor se) aur kitni der aap lagenge. Sh.... aap mujhse Nahin Raha Jata.
Side mein driving seat per Ek aadami
Adami:- (pareshani se) bus Thodi hi der sweaty (Achcha feel Karate hue). Pahadi ( mountain route ) ke Paar Hote Hie Shahar pahunch japenge. Try to understand Re...
Phir wo Aurat
Aurat:- (khaste hue) hai kya ho raha hai Hamare sath. Kaun the ho.
Adami:- (sochte hue) Dekho Mujhe Nahin maloom. Par Jitna Abhi Tak Hote Hue a raha hai usse hi pata chal raha hai ki koi aapna.
Aurat:- kaun hai vah ho. Kyon Hamare Piche Pade Ho. Bataiye Mujhe aap..
Phri wo Adami
Adami:- (sochne ke bad) mujhe nahin Maloom per Koi dost ya Koi Hamare family member mese ya koi aisa Jise Ham ignore kar rahe hain.
Aurat:- aisa hai to Abhi Tak Hame Maloom Kyon Nahin Pada Uske bare. Kya isliye Hamare. ......
Adami:- Shayad Aisa Hi Kuchh!
Aurat:- ( Roti Hui awaaz mein) dekhiae mujhe kuchh Nahin maloom per Hamare laal ko.
Aurat Itna bol pati. usse pahle
Adami:- Dekho sweaty duniya ki koi takat se Kuchh kar Nahi Sakti tab tak Uske {Mata-Pita} ke Hote hue.
Phir wo Aurat
Aurat:-( Rote Hue) Kyu hamre A... ke Piche Pade use Mausam Ke ( khansi ke sath) dekhiae mujhe kuchh Nahin maloom per aaj mujhe aap (Uske Husband se) wada kijiye Mujhse ki mere bache ko Kuchh Nahin hoga. (Jor ki khansi ke sath)
Wada kijiye mujhse !
Phir wo Adami. Apni Wife Halat kharab hoti dekh. Use
Adami:- (Uske wife ke Hath ko thamte hue)Dekho R.... mujhe nahin maloom vo log kya Chahte Hain per bhi main tum main matlab ki (pyar se uske ek hoth se uske wife ke gardan ke bal selate hue) °SHADOW KING° tumse wada Vada Karta Hun Ki Mere Hote hue Hamare bache ko Kuchh Nahin hoga. Hae wada hae mera tumse jaan.
Thodasa ruke Phir
Adami:- ab rona band karo Re.... Thodi der mein ham Ham Guru ji ke pass Honge. Meri Unse bat ho chuki hai. Wo poochh Chuke Hae.
Vah ab dekh raha tha ki uski wife ki halat kharab hoti ja rahi hai. isliye usne driving per focus karna sahi samja. Kuchh der tak Aisi Car Chalti Rahi tab use Kuchh nakaratmak Urja ka aabhas hua. (Pareshani Mein Rahane ki vajah se usne use chij ko thoda ignore kiya) Kuchh Samay bad use piche se Kuchh Awaaz Sunai Diye. hey Awaaz Kisi truck ki thi.
Uska driver horn bajate ja raha tha. Truck bhi Kafi speed Mein thi. Usne ab car ke side mirror Se Dekha to use Laga ki aap speed Badha kar Aage chale jana chahie. (per usne ek baat notice ki aamtaur per truck ki speed mountain side per slow hoti hai use Thodi Si shanka Hui.) Usne side Dene Ki vajah Apne is car ko speed mein Aage karne ki koshish ki. Parantu us truck driver ne speed Badha kar pagalon ke Jaisi horn bajate ja raha tha. Usne truck Driver Ki Tarah dekhne ki koshish ki. Per use Kuchh Ajeeb Sa mahsus Hua. (Thoda sochte hue) Usne apni car ki speed kam ki .tab bhi us Truck Driver ne apni truck ko Aage Le Jaane Ke bajay. Uski car ke Baju mein Aakar chalane Laga. Tab usne truck driver ko dekhne ki koshish ki to usne Dekha usmein Jo Insan tha use Dekhkar. apni car ki speed Badha Di. (Pareshan Sa Hone Laga)
Adami:- (shock!) Ye kese ho sakta hai.
Usne ab apni wife ko Dekha vah Kafi had Tak Shant ho chuki thi. Jyada Rone ki vajah se so chuki thi.
(In side a truck)
Wo shask:- (Hanste hue Gair Dal ke) ha!haa!ha! ha!ha! aur Kitna Bhag Ho Gaye.
per Ho Akela nahin tha Uske Baju ke seat par Ek aadami Tha. Jo usse baat karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Ad:- hey bus kar ap hae khel. Ho Jitna der Jinda rahenge utani Hame pareshani Hogi.
Wo shask:- Khel to aap ab Shuru Hua Hai ab dekh.
Usne use car ke upar Kuchh Ajeeb Si chij Apne Hath se Chudi.
(In side a car)
Ab usne apni wife ko jagane ki koshish ki.
Adami:- (Hath se) Re... Re....
Usse pahle hi Ek chij Uske car se Aakar Chhu gai. Car ap Mountain ke Road ke right Tarn per chal rahi thi. Jiski vajah se. Car dis balance ho kar apni side ke road ke Beri Gate ko Tod Ke rever ki taraf badhane Lagi uske pahle hi.
(In side a car)
Adami:- ( uski Aankhen Neeli Roshani nikalne Lagi.) *Smash**
(Samay Jaise ke Ruki Gaya!)
Aap bahut hua!
Car pani ke andar Jaane Se pahile hei. Car ruk gai. Our Kisi Ne use Road ke side mein jo mountain per tha use per lakar Rakh Di.
(In side truck)
(Truck aap ruk chuki thi aur vah donon ab Road per Khade hue)
Wo shask:- (Hanste hue) bahut acche Tumse Hi ummid thi °SHADOW KING°!
Dusra Insan
Ad:- kya abhi bhi vah tumse Lad sakta hai!
Phir Wo shask:- bilkul Nahin Kyunki uski aur uski biwi ki Ladne ki halat mein nahi hai jaldi vah chij mere pass Hogi aur tu Mujhe Hukum Dena band kar kamine.
Ad:- Dekho Mujhe . Nahin maloom Tumhen jo karna ho tum karo sirf Mujhe vah donon Mare hoe chahie.
Wo shask:- theek hai Kyu Nahin dunga . Our Jyada bola to Tujhe Bhi Madarchoda Un Jaisi Mot dunga.
Phir Ho Aage badhane Laga.
(In side a car)
Dhamake Ke Karan us aurat Hosh a gai.
Aurat:- (uske pati se) hey kya ho raha hai!
Phri usne Dekha ki seat per Koi Nahin Hai usne Apne pati ko dhundhne ki koshish ki to usne Dekha vah Bahar..
Adami:- (car ke pass aapke) Re... Tum andar hi Raho! (Apni Wife se)
Phir wo shask Kuchh Duri per Aakar ruk gaya aur bolane Laga
Wo shask:- (Hanste hue) surprise! My dear friend!
Tumhen kya Laga aise hi mar jaunga. Meri Maya Itni Saral nahin hai mere dost.
Phir wo Adami:- (gusse se) dost Kisko bol raha hai Kamine. Kya Milega Tujhe ye Karke aur Kyu chahie vah chij tuje °DEEN°. Our Kahan gaya ho dost Mera jo aapane Se Pahle dusron Ke bareme sochte Hue chalta tha. Mujhe sharm Aati Hai ki Tum Jaise Insan ke sath Maine ek samay par kam Kiya Karta Tha.
Phir wo shask:- (Tali bajate hue) Tu pahle bhi aise hi tha .Ab Bhi vaise hai hae. (Iske bad usko Dekhkar) Teri aur us buddhe ki samajh Ek Jaisi Hai. Wese bhi Na Mujhe pahle Kisi Ki fikra Thi na abhi. Mujhe sirf wo chij chahie thi Jo Mujhe Kuchh had Tak Mil Bhi gai. Us buddhe se. per aap mujhe Teri Aur Teri biwi ki Maut chahie Ab. Aur ha Tere ho so called bacha. Dekh Mujhe jyada baat karne ki Aadat Nahin Hai. per Kya Karu Tere sath purani Dosti jo nibhaani hai mere dost.
Adami(°SHADOW°):- dekh °DEEN° Mujhe Teri Irade Nahin maloom per. Itna Jarur Jaanta Hun Ki Tere Piche aur koi to hae.
Phir wo shask(°DEEN°):- Tum sach mein bahut samajhdar ho mere dost. Vaise Rahi Baat Ladne ki. Wo to tume bhi Maloom Hai ki Tum Mujhse Jyada samay tak tik Nahin paoge . Kyu sahi kaha na °SHADOW KING°.
Adami( °SHADOW °):- vaise bhi mere bacche ne Tumhara Kya Bigada hai haramzade . Vaise bhi Rahi baat Ladne ki wo to Samay hi bataega.
Shask(°DEEN °):- Mujhe Kya murkh samjha hai Kya Tumne. Tera Woh baccha Sadharan baccha Nahin Hai. Vaise bhi Tumhare marne ke bad uski Bari hai.
Adami(°SHADOW °):- (gusse mein jor se) Aisa Suchna Bhi Mat Us ke Baap ke Hote Hue Sambhav Nahin.
Shask(°DEEN°):- pahle Maine Socha Tujhe aur Teri Biwi ko namaru. Tujhe Mera Gulam banalu. Per kyu kare Koi Mujhe Tujhe Aur Teri biwi ko marne se Kuchh faydemand chij De De to deal Buri Nahin hai. Kyu sahi kaha na . Aur ho koi nahin Tera Apna ho to.
Adami(°SHADOW °):- (serious Hote hue) kaun hai vah.
Shask(°DEEN °):- are bhai Tum To Bade serious Ho Gaye Koi Nahin wo Mere Sath hi hai. Yahan per.
Uske badh
Shask(°DEEN°):- bahut ho gai ab Baat.
FIR Uske Hath Mein Talwar a Gayi aur uske kapde bhi badalne Lage. Wo Apne asali Roop Mein Aane Laga.
FIR shuru ho gaya donon mein yuddh
°SHADOW° Bhi uski Talwar se usse Lad raha tha. Donon ki takat ek dusre ke Bhari padane Lagi Thi. Donon bhi flash ki speed se Lad rahe the.
Shask (°DEEN°):- Tum Kitni bhi koshish kar lo °SHADOW° harna Tum Hi Hai.
Uske bad (°DEEN°) kuch ka tham Piche Hata usne Apne Hathon Mein Se Kuchh magical bolls uski Taraf Chhod Diye °SHADOW° Unse Bach to Gaya.per unmen se ek crystallite ball jakar Car ko laga. FIR °SHADOW° hei Dekhte hei. flash ke speed se andar beti uski wife ko bachane Chala Gaya. Car ke blast hone se Kuchh second mein hi usne apni wife ko bahar nikal ke ek side mein a Gaya.
Shask(°DEEN °):- (Unki Taraf Dekhkar) namaste Bhabhi ji kaisi hai aap. Sab Kushal Mangal
Fir usne apni wife ko apne godi main se Utara. FIR aurat Badi ghabrate hue usse.
Aurat:- yah kya ho raha hai ya. Our aap is halt mein. (Aur dusri Taraf Dekhkar) Tum Yahan kese. Tum To Kuchh Salon pahle hi. (Aur us Aurat Ki Halat kharab hoti hue)
Phir uska Husband
Adami(°SHADOW °):- (uski wife ko Ek Jagah baithati Hui) Tum Chinta mat karo Re.... Kuchh hi Samay main hum vahan Honge.
Itna bol Pata usse pahle hi. °DEEN° uske upar Hamla karna Shuru kar diya. donon Ek dusre ka hamle ka jawab de rahi the. Phir donon thoda alag hue.
Adami(°SHADOW °):-(man me) aise hi chalta Raha To mein Har Jaunga pahle se hi Bahut Si energy kharch ho chuki hai. Nahin main ye se har nahi man sakta (lambi lambi Sans lete hue) hun mujhe kuchh To Kuchh karna chahiye.
Ek Aadarsh Shakti °DEEN° se baat karte hue:- Tumhen kya lagta hai °DEEN ° Tum ise Maar Loge.
Phir °DEEN°:- Aap Yahan per.
Aadarsh Shakti use:- ha Kyunki Mujhe Maloom Hai ki in donon Ko maarna Itna Aasan Nahin Hai Jitna Tum samajh rahe ho.
°DEEN°:- to Fir kya. unke Hathon Mein mar jau.
Aadarsh Shakti:- Maine kab Kaha °DEEN°. Inhe ek hi chija maar sakti hai.
°DEEN°:- to kya. batai Mujhe jaldi.
Aadarsh Shakti use Kuchh batati hai. Uske bad ho.
Is bar ladte hue usne °SHADOW° per bahut si jagah war Kiya. °DEEN° Badi furti Mein dikh raha tha. iski vajah se wo °SHADOW° per Havi Hota ja raha tha. Is bar °DEEN° thoda sa Piche hat Gaya. Badi furti se °SHADOW° ki tarf badhane Laga. °SHADOW° Khud Ko sambhalte hue. Is bar Jaise hi °DEEN° Uske Kareeb Aaya donon ki Talware Ek dusre se takraai. Talwar takra tehi °DEEN° Ne Uske chest per jor se laat mari. °SHADOW° bahut Dur jakar Gir Gaya. Khud Ko sambhalte hue. Pareshan Hone Laga. Jis Ka Dar tha Vahi Ho.
Phir wo °DEEN°:- thik hae bahut ho gaya ab talwarbaji ka khel (Itna bolate Hi Ho Apne Hath Mein Ek Khanjar Manga Kar)
Fight ke dauran °Shadow° ko bahut se jaga Chote I hui thi. °Shadow° ki energy kam hone ke Karan wo apne ap ko acche se heal ( healing power) Kiya nahi jahra tha. Fight me uska Ek hath Jakhmi ho chuka tha. usse Khoon Bahe ja raha tha. Uski wife ki bhi Badi Khabar haalt mein thi. (Use aap samajh Nahin a raha tha ki kya kiya jaaye) Uski wife Halat Aisi Nahin thi ki vah Kuchh Kar Paye. FIR °DEEN° uske wife tarf dekh.
°DEEN° (Shaitani Muskan ke sath) Uski wife ki tarah badhane Laga. Hey dekh kar °SHADOW °
DEEN:- kesi he Bhabhi ji. (Muskan ke sath) Badi dard me dikh rahi ye aap . Chalo koi na. Ham a gaye hain na aap ko is Dard Se Mukti karane. Hamesha ke liye.
(Us Aurat ka dard thoda jadha tha)
Aurat:- (dard bhari awaaz mein) kammiine.
Jaisi Ho Khanjar us Aurat upar chalata hae to. Ek awaaz dard bhari
Ye kesi our ki nahi thi. Ye °SHADOW ° thi.
Uske back per wo Khanjar Laga tha. Uski wife ko bachte hoe.
Wo Aurat:- (jor se Rote Hue) Sh....!
°DEEN °:- (Shaitani Hansi Ke Sath) Yahi he wo Dard iska mein Intezar kar raha tha.
°SHADOW° ke Peeth per Khanjar Laga ne ke badh. Munh se Khoon nikalne Laga. Aur uske Munh se ek hi naam( Re...)
Aurat:- Nahii. Yesa nahi nahi ho sakta. (Uske bad wo Aurat Pairon per jor Laga te hue badhane Lagi uske Pati ke our)
°SHADOW ° ko Kanjar Lag ne ke badh . Khanjar mein se ek Roshni nikalne Lagi. Wo dard se uski Taraf Aati Hui uski wife ke gale lag gaya. (Uski Aankhon Mein Khoon ke Aansu the) our ek dard.
°DEEN°:- Ao deko shuru hogi Laila Majnu ki sad story.
Wo Aurat uske Pati ke gale lakar.
Aurat:- (rote Hue aur tuti hoe Awaaz ke sath) ky..u kyu Hamare sath isa.
Phir wo Adami
Adami(°SHADOW °):- Mujhe.. mujhe maaf kar dena Jaaa.n mein Tumhara wada na..hi nibapa..ya. hamara.. (Kitna bolata us ke pahile hei)
Aurat:- (rote Hue)Nahin Aisa mat boliye aap.
Phir wo
°DEEN°:- (muskurate hue) uski Chinta tum mat karo mere so called dost.
Phir SHADOW our uski wife uski taraf dekh te hoe.
Aurat:- (gusse se aur jor) hasale Jitna hansna hai utna hasale dusht. Ek din ise hi tadape ga.
Ek maa ka wada hae . Jesne marte Samay bhi apne bache ko sine se na laga pahi.
Phir °DEEN°:- (Hanste hue) kon kon kon Mare ga mujhe. Ha.ha...
Adami(°SHADOW °):- (gusse se dekh kar) Ha..mara hamara A.... Hamara beta.
°DEEN°:- Ho Jiska Aaj he ya kal. Wo Mare ga mujhe.
FIR vahan per Ek aadami Aaya (Jo bahut Samay se unhen Dur Se dekh raha tha) wo Hanste Hue aa raha tha. Use dekh °SHADOW° aur uski Patni. Shauk Ho Gaye.
Ad:- Sahi Kaha Tumne (Hanste hue)
°SHADOW°:- (chokte hue) Tum.
Wo Adami:- ha main kutte tera..... .
Jab Sidhi ungali se Gina nikale to apno ko bhi maarna padta hai.
Ab °SHADOW° aur uski wife niche ghutnon ke bal Gir Chuke the. Phir °SHADOW° behat gusse se.
°SHADOW°:- (uski taraf gusse se Dekhte hue)Tu..m Tum Itna niche Gir jaaoge. Mai..ne kabhi socha bhi nahin tha.
Aurat:- (gusse se) aap ko sharm Nahi aai apne hi.......
Phir wo Ad:- (gusse se) bus Karo ab Tum donon ki bakwas. Sidha sidha man Jaate to aaj esi halat mein nahin rahte. (°DEEN° ki Taraf dekh kar) Maar Dal ene jaldi.
°DEEN°:- kutte Kitni bar bola Tujhe Mujhe order dena band karne ko. Ab Jyada bola to Tujhe Bhi yaa Dafan kar dunga.
Vo aadami darte hue:- han han theek hai theek hai .
ab °SHADOW° ki sase kam hoti ja rahi thi. Phir °DEEN° °SHADOW° ke pass jakar. Piche se us Khanjar ko pit mein dalne Laga. Ab pura Khanjar andar Chala Gaya. (With handle) Khanjar Bada hone ke Karan. Wo aar paar ho gaya. Jo jake uski lip ti hue wife ko laga .
Aurat:- aa.aaaa.a !
°SHADOW°:- mu. jhe maa.f ka..r dena na.aa. Re...
Phir donon ne pran tyag diye. Marte Samay donon ke Andar Se Ek Roshani Nikali. Wo kisi our chali gayi. Par ka!
Donon ke marne ke badh °DEEN° Chehre per Muskan To Nahin thi. Per Koi Gam bhi Nahin.
Phir °DEEN°:- (us Adami se) Inki body ko thikane Laga the na.
Phir Ad:- uski Chinta tum mat karo. Our we se bhi Mere Gali ke Kate hat Gaye. Our ha tumari chija Tume jald mil jayegi.
Uske badh °DEEN° Kahin or Jaane Laga.
Phir waha ek Roshani °DEEN°:- kahan ja rahe ho °DEEN°.
Phir °DEEN°:- vahi jaha wo ha jana chahie waha.
Adrishya Shakti:- ye sa soch na bhi nahi .
°DEEN°:- kyu! Ab kya baki regaya.
Phir wo adrishya shakti:- Kyu ki... (Kuchh batate hue)
°DEEN°:- (gusse se) marne ke badh bhi picha nahi choda uno ne. Ab kya Hath per Hath Rakhe baitha rahu.
Adrishya Shakti:- kis ne kaha. Ek rasta hai.
°DEEN°:- To kya!
Adrishya Shakti:- To suno ......!
°DEEN°:- per!
Adrishya Shakti:- per war Kuchh Nahin. Yahi ek rasta bachta he.
°DEEN°:- (sochte hue) To thi hae. Yahi sahi.
Phir °DEEN° us Adami ke pass jakar
Kuchh batata hae.
Wo Adami:- Main Aisa nahin kar sakta.
°DEEN° :- kyu bosdike Teri lugai Hai Kya vah.
Adami:- per mere kam kya.
DEEN:- (uske pich wade per lat mar kar) BC Tera per war mujhe kuchh Nahin maloom. Wor Mere kam main Teri vajah se Kuchh hua to . Tu Khud Jaanta hai Tera Kya Hoga.
Phir wo Adami:- (use thoda gusse se dekh kar) thik hae.
°DEEN° muskurate Hue vahan se gayab ho jata hai.
after 25 years! ......
Now the story will begin!
Continuous with next update....
Continuous with next update....
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