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Hello Dear Readers,
Its me Your ex Rival, Aap sab dosto k liye aik aur koshish ly k aane k liye aaya hoon aik baar phir sy wapis aur har baar ki tarah nayi id sy q k iss baar bhi gmail ka password bhool gaya hai aur gmail phir wo wali delete krr di hai. Last story ka naam pata nahi kia rakha tha aur waise bhi mujhe yaad nahi k uss ko mai kaise likh raha tha so uss ko continue nahi krr sakta so iss wajah sy mujhe wapis sy saara kuch naye sy likhna ho gaa.
Hope k aap sab log support kro gy mujhe aur iss story ko.

 

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Doston chand aik cheezain aap sy discuss krni hain jo k aage jaa k shayad aap poochain

kia ye reality par based ho gi ???

NO , ye story 100% Fictional hai iss mai kisi kirdar ka kisi ki haqeeqi zindagi sy koi lena dena nahi ho gaa

Kia iss story mai incest ho gaa ???
Jawab hai k G nahi but haan ---------- yaani k Incest buss close relatives k saath ho sakta hai yaa koi aur character incest krry gaa but main character nahi

Update kab do gy ???
Dosto Pehle mera iss sawal ka jawab hota tha k har roz aik yaa 2 din mai aik lekin mai apne waadon par poora utar nahi paata tha lekin ab tou mazeed halat bigad gaye hain I have a job aur mai uss par bhi focus kroon gaa aur saath saath meri studies par bhi so iss wajah sy updates may be week mai 1 yaa 2 -------- baaki free time par bhi depend krta hai aur iss par bhi k mery mind mai koi acha idea aata hai k nahi q k aisa hota hai k kai kai din mind mai blockage si ho jaati hai aur insan sahi sy kuch dhang ka likh nahi paata so -------------- update ka koi schedule nahi ho gaa jab bane gi de doon gaa

Story mai Muslim character q daale --- Hindu character q daale ???
Meri stories mai Religion ka koi link nahi raha hai aur raha bhi hai tou wo bass naam tak ka raha hai ---------- mai stories likhta hoon apne maze k liye aur readers k maze k liye so mai nafrat bhara kaam tou krne wala nahi so mai kisi aik religion ki taraf daari nahi kroon gaa

Main kon hoon ???
Mai aik Insan hoon ladka / mard hoon aur iss forum ka reader bhi aur nakaam ashiq k jaise aik nakaam writer bhi ---- iss sy ziada koi detail de nahi sakta.


Story ki language kia hogi ???
Story saari ki saari Hinglish mai chale gi lekin mujhe hindi utni hi aati hai jitni movies sy dekh k yaad krr paaya hoon baaki saari Urdu hogi lekin mai koshish poori kroon gaa k Urdu words kam sy kam use kroon aur hindi words ka ziada use kroon.

Acha yaar meri story mai naa aik chutiya cheez hoti hai aur wo hai re-incarnation yaani k doobara janam kisi aur sharir mai --------- lekin mai advance mai hi bata doon k uss ka saara scene Pehli do updates mai clear krr Diya jaaye gaa aur uss k baad story normal chale gi aur haan chineese manga k jaise re incarnation k baad Hero ko bass aik system doon gaa (thoda bohut bakwass tareen part hissa hai story ka but hope krta hoon k aap sath nahi chodo gy)

Baaki aap sab ki dua chahiye story likhne k liye
Khuda Hafiz

 

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Uthjaa Haram Khor ………….. kab tak bistar mai pada charpai torta rahe gaaa
aur issi k saath hi gaon k kisi ghar mai aik ladke ko uthane k liye aurat aayi
uss ladke ki bhi neend aisi k jaise ghar baar bech k soya huwa ho
tabhi wo aurat jo ghusse mai thi uss ny uss ladke ki charpai ki aik taraf sy pakda aur poori takat laga k charpai palat thi aur issi k sath hamra hero yani k wo ladka dhadam sy neechy jaa gira zameen par
Ladka= KIa hai (ghusse mai chilla k) ---- lekin samne uss aurat ko dekh k foran billa bante huwe chachi tum
Aurat= haramzaade tujhe kitni baar kaha hai k khud sy uth jaaya krr
Ladka= Wo chach…………..
Aurat= ab chal bartan pakad aur dooodh dhoh k laa ------- aur haan aaj der ki naa tou mujh sy bura koi nahi ho gaa
Ladka= g thik hai chachi
aur ye bol k wo ladka uss k pass sy hota huwa nalke (nal) k paas jaa k hath mun ko dhota hai aur phir kitchen sy bartan utha k Bahir chala jaati hai
Ladka= Naam tou shyad paalne wale ny ----- Badar Rafi Rakha tha lekin Bachpan mai Bandar aur ab Rafi naam sy jaana jaati hai -------- Rafi bhi wo kehte hain jo pyar sy bulain wrna tou koi kaalu koi kalwa koi black hole aur iss tarah k naam sy pukarata hai

badar rafi------- Kad 6 ft 3 inch ………….. dikhne mai kisi pehlewan sy kam nahi aur Chal bhi mard k bache jaise ------- Banane wale ny Haseen bhi kamal ka banaya tha aur nain nakash bhi aise k ache ache nawabon ko peachy chor jaaye lekin iss ki buri kismet aisi k iss k sir mai pichle 10 saal sy aik tumar tha aur uss ki wajah sy naa sahi sy kuch iss ko yaad rehta tha naa sahi sy kuch parh paata tha ……….. aur bhi masle the lekin aik masla aisa tha k jiss ny iss ki achi bhali surat ko kharab krr rakha tha aur wo thaa iss ka kaala hona
uss tumar ki wajah sy Rafi k khoon mai kuch aisa barh gaya ta jo iss ki jild ko Andar sy kala krta jaa raha tha aur ussi k sath sath Rafi kisi African kale sy bhi ziyada kaal ho gaya tha
pichle kuch saalon sy ye Hakim Sarfraz (yaa Ved Sarfraz ki khidmat mai raha aur ussi sy bohut kuch seekhne ki koshish ki) apne maa baap ka tou iss ko pata nahi tha k kon the unko kia huwa tou issi wajah sy Hakim ny iss ko apna pota bana rakha tha
Uss k foran sy camery ko on krta hai aur video banane lag jaata hai wo video banane mai itna magan ho gaya tha k uss ko ye dyhan hi nahi raha k wo chat par khada huwa hai thodi derr mai wo aurat apni jhantain saaf krr k jaise hi paani daal rahi thi apne jisam par k tabhi aik kamre mai sy aik cheekh nikli aur agle hi pal Rafi k munh k paas sy aik joota Rafi jaldi sy apne camera ko uthata hai aur peachy kamre par sy hi challang maar k jaldi sy janwaron wale dery ki taraf dorr laga deta hai idhar uss kamre mai sy jo ladki nikli thi wo apna munh pakad k khadi ho gayi k ye uss ny kia krr Diya baaki Kamron mai sy bhi jaldi sy uss k bhai aur Bhabhi nikli ki khuda khair kry kia ho gaya lekin tab tak wo ladki samajh chuki thi k wo saya aakhir kis ka tha saroo= kia hai saba q chilai ho Saba = wo wo bhai achanak sy mujhe aise laga jaise mujhe kisi ny kandhe sy pakda (wo jhooth bol gayi q k wo nahi chahta thi k kisi ko pata chale k koi uss k ghusal khaane sy uss ki Bhabhi ko dekh raha hai Saroo biwi= 22 saal ki ho gayi hai----------- q hamare saath saath gaon ki neend haram krne par tuli hai Saroo= bachi nahi rahi tu ab …….. kuch soch samajh k harkat ki krr ----------- aur joote kidhar hain tery saba jaldi sy apne haath mai pakde aik joote ko neechuy farsh par phainkti hai aur boli aik mila hai doosra idhar kahin pada ho gaa Saroo biwi = so jao sab agar ab neend aati hai tou ------- wrna maharani sahiba ny tou neend uda di hai wo abhi itna bol hi rahi thi washroom mai sy uss ki jethani khud ko sarhi mai lappet ki nikli k bdekhy bahir kia huwa hau
uss ka naam Bushra tha

Bushra= abhi so mat ---------- uth gayi ho tou mera haath batao aur tu saba chal jaldi sy aisa krr jhadoo maarna shuru krr aaj tujhe dekhne walon ny aana hai
Saba= kiaa aj phir sy
Bushra= nahi tou kia tujhe saari zindgi tery bhai hi paalain gye ---------- aik tou tera baap uss kal k chore k naam sab kuch krr gaya aur ab tu ………….
Saba= bass kro Bhabhi ---------koi baat krne wali kro ---------- dono bhai mil k uss ka aadha bhi nahi kamate ooper sy ghar k kaam...………
Bushra= dekh liya apni behen ko kaise kenchi k jaise zuban hai iss ki
Saroo= Saba chup chaap jo Bhabhi keh rahi hai krr ---------- Abba g ki wajah sy bardasht kia huwa tha tujhe ----- ye naa ho k ………..(chup)
Saba= ye naa ho k mujhe nikal do---------- haan bhai mai maheeny ka lac tou khud ko bech k bhi nahi dy paon gii--------- iss ghar mai tou …………………
Saroo = Sabaaaaa (chillla k )
Saroo biwi= issi liye kehte hoon jo Rishta aata hai haan kro aur chalti kro iss ko ----------- kal ko tou iss ka hosla aur badh jaaye gaa
Bushra= uss thakurain ki wajah sy bachi huwi hai wrna wo naa hoti tou iss ko tou mai kab ka chalta krr deti
Saba= haan chalo abhi bhi apni aukat tou yaad hai tum dono ko
saba ny ye baat ki hi thi k Sarooo aik zorrdaar tamacha dy k uss k munh par maarta hai
Saroo= Bakwas naa kro ---------- Bhabhi bhi hai tumhari aur tum sy badi bhi ------------- chal maafi maang
Saba= ab agar tum ny haath lagaya naa tou kasam khaati hoon mai k pichle saara lihaaz bhool jaon gi ------- tujhe panchayat mai naa laa k khada kia tou …………….
Saroo aaage badh k wapis sy maarne wala tha lekin uss ki biwi aur betian uss ka haath pakad k uss ko rokk leti hain jab k Saba uss ko aik chidhane wali smile pass krti hai aur wapis kamre mai chali jaati hai
Saroo= Bushra Bhabhi koi acha saa rishta dekh k chalta kro -------- aap bhi jo rishte laa rahi ho wo nikame nikhaton k hain tabhi tou thakurain baar baar beech mai aa jaati hai
Bushra= ab ki baar jo rishta hai wo 12 paas ladke ka hai ------ ladka sheher mai bade mall mai kaam krta hai

marne k baad tou bass samjho iss ladke ki zindagi jahanum bana di gayi ho q k Marne sy Pehle Hakim jaate jaate apna sab kuch issi k naam krr gaya aur ye cheez iss ko hakim k khandan ka sb sy bada dushman bana gayi
Rafi bartan liye jaise hi ghar sy bahir nikla tou uss ko yaad aaya k uss ki light tou uthayi hi nahi tou wo tabhi peeche muda aur man mai sochta huwa kamre mai jaane laga
Rafi man mai= Kia Zamana aa gaya hai --------- jiss ka naam sun k Thakuron ki sansain tham jaati thi us k bety ko Thakuron k nokaron ny apna nokar bana k rakha huwa hai
aur tabhi jaise hi wo apne kamre k paas wapis pohncha tou uss ko paas mai ghusal khaane ki light on nazar aayi
Rafi= itni subah subah kon naha raha hai (man mai)
Rafi abhi yehi soch hi raha tha k tabhi ghusalkhaane ki deewar par kapde aa lage (yaani k abhi jo Andar tha uss ny deewar par kapde latkaye)
Rafi ki nazar jaise hi uss k kapdon par padi tou uss k chehre par aik kameengi chaa gayi aur wo jaldi sy Andar kamre mai gaya aur apne bag mai sy aik camera ko nikalta hai aur dabbe paon ghar sy bahir nikalta hai………
ghar sy bahir nikal k wo ghar k peachy jaati haia aur bahir paas mai hi lage aik darakht par paon rakhte huwe wo uss darakht par charh jaati hai aur uss sy phir peachy k Kamron ki chaton sy hota huwa wo uss ghusal khane k bilkul ooper aa gaya tha
uss ghusal khaane ki chat nahi thi lekin uss ki side par aik zero kaa bulb laga huwa tha jiss ki Roshni k neechy 40 saal ki aik bharpoor jawani sy maala maal aik sanwle rang ki aurat beth hui apni jhantain saaf krr rahi thi
Zero k bulb ki Roshni mai bhi ooper khade Rafi ko sab saaf nazar aa raha tha aur wo kameeny pan sy bhara huwa

Saroo= chalo shukar hai ----------- ab tou phir thakurain bhi beech mai nahi pade gi --------- Saba k jitna padha huwa hai ------ kamata bhi theek thaak ho gaa
Bushra= bass masla ye hai k --------
tabhi bahir darwaza knock huwa aur Andar aik aadmi aaya
Admi= Saroo sab khair tou hai naa thodi derr Pehle chillane ki awaz aay thi
Saroo= sab khairan hai bhai saab ----- wo bass saba kamli ka tarah nikal gaya tha (sarooo foran sy aise baat krne laga jaise saba sy bada pyar krta ho)
Admi= chalo Shukar hai wrna gaon k halat tou tujhe pata hai -------- kuch din Pehle kia huwa tha
Saroo= g bhai saab ----- baaki aao naa betho ------------- chai banao bhai saab k liye (apni biwi ko kehta hai)
aadmi= are nahi mai chalta hoon dery par bhi jaana hai ----- Thakur saab ki dairy k liye doodh bhi dohna hai naa
Saroo= thik hai bhai saab ----- Rab rakha

idhar Rafi dery par zehen mai sochta huwa k shukar hai k aaj tou wo bach gyaa kisi ny uss ki shakal nahi dekhi naa hi uss ko bahir koodte huwe
Rafi= ye mujhe kia ho gaya hai -------------- aakhir mai apne jazbaat ko kaabu q nahi krr paa raha -------- meri dushmani k laiq ye chintian nahi hain ------------ Rafi ------ Nahi ye log nahi hain jin ko tum ny sabak sikhana hai
Kamlesh iss baar mai tumhain chorron gaa nahi aur yehi keh k wo apne haath ki muthi kass leta hai aur kuch yaad krne lagta hai

 

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