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Hello Dear Readers,
Its me Your ex Rival, Aap sab dosto k liye aik aur koshish ly k aane k liye aaya hoon aik baar phir sy wapis aur har baar ki tarah nayi id sy q k iss baar bhi gmail ka password bhool gaya hai aur gmail phir wo wali delete krr di hai. Last story ka naam pata nahi kia rakha tha aur waise bhi mujhe yaad nahi k uss ko mai kaise likh raha tha so uss ko continue nahi krr sakta so iss wajah sy mujhe wapis sy saara kuch naye sy likhna ho gaa.
Hope k aap sab log support kro gy mujhe aur iss story ko.
 
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Doston chand aik cheezain aap sy discuss krni hain jo k aage jaa k shayad aap poochain

kia ye reality par based ho gi ???

NO , ye story 100% Fictional hai iss mai kisi kirdar ka kisi ki haqeeqi zindagi sy koi lena dena nahi ho gaa

Kia iss story mai incest ho gaa ???
Jawab hai k G nahi but haan ---------- yaani k Incest buss close relatives k saath ho sakta hai yaa koi aur character incest krry gaa but main character nahi

Update kab do gy ???
Dosto Pehle mera iss sawal ka jawab hota tha k har roz aik yaa 2 din mai aik lekin mai apne waadon par poora utar nahi paata tha lekin ab tou mazeed halat bigad gaye hain I have a job aur mai uss par bhi focus kroon gaa aur saath saath meri studies par bhi so iss wajah sy updates may be week mai 1 yaa 2 -------- baaki free time par bhi depend krta hai aur iss par bhi k mery mind mai koi acha idea aata hai k nahi q k aisa hota hai k kai kai din mind mai blockage si ho jaati hai aur insan sahi sy kuch dhang ka likh nahi paata so -------------- update ka koi schedule nahi ho gaa jab bane gi de doon gaa

Story mai Muslim character q daale --- Hindu character q daale ???
Meri stories mai Religion ka koi link nahi raha hai aur raha bhi hai tou wo bass naam tak ka raha hai ---------- mai stories likhta hoon apne maze k liye aur readers k maze k liye so mai nafrat bhara kaam tou krne wala nahi so mai kisi aik religion ki taraf daari nahi kroon gaa

Main kon hoon ???
Mai aik Insan hoon ladka / mard hoon aur iss forum ka reader bhi aur nakaam ashiq k jaise aik nakaam writer bhi ---- iss sy ziada koi detail de nahi sakta.


Story ki language kia hogi ???
Story saari ki saari Hinglish mai chale gi lekin mujhe hindi utni hi aati hai jitni movies sy dekh k yaad krr paaya hoon baaki saari Urdu hogi lekin mai koshish poori kroon gaa k Urdu words kam sy kam use kroon aur hindi words ka ziada use kroon.

Acha yaar meri story mai naa aik chutiya cheez hoti hai aur wo hai re-incarnation yaani k doobara janam kisi aur sharir mai --------- lekin mai advance mai hi bata doon k uss ka saara scene Pehli do updates mai clear krr Diya jaaye gaa aur uss k baad story normal chale gi aur haan chineese manga k jaise re incarnation k baad Hero ko bass aik system doon gaa (thoda bohut bakwass tareen part hissa hai story ka but hope krta hoon k aap sath nahi chodo gy)

Baaki aap sab ki dua chahiye story likhne k liye
Khuda Hafiz
 
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Uthjaa Haram Khor ………….. kab tak bistar mai pada charpai torta rahe gaaa
aur issi k saath hi gaon k kisi ghar mai aik ladke ko uthane k liye aurat aayi
uss ladke ki bhi neend aisi k jaise ghar baar bech k soya huwa ho
tabhi wo aurat jo ghusse mai thi uss ny uss ladke ki charpai ki aik taraf sy pakda aur poori takat laga k charpai palat thi aur issi k sath hamra hero yani k wo ladka dhadam sy neechy jaa gira zameen par
Ladka= KIa hai (ghusse mai chilla k) ---- lekin samne uss aurat ko dekh k foran billa bante huwe chachi tum
Aurat= haramzaade tujhe kitni baar kaha hai k khud sy uth jaaya krr
Ladka= Wo chach…………..
Aurat= ab chal bartan pakad aur dooodh dhoh k laa ------- aur haan aaj der ki naa tou mujh sy bura koi nahi ho gaa
Ladka= g thik hai chachi
aur ye bol k wo ladka uss k pass sy hota huwa nalke (nal) k paas jaa k hath mun ko dhota hai aur phir kitchen sy bartan utha k Bahir chala jaati hai
Ladka= Naam tou shyad paalne wale ny ----- Badar Rafi Rakha tha lekin Bachpan mai Bandar aur ab Rafi naam sy jaana jaati hai -------- Rafi bhi wo kehte hain jo pyar sy bulain wrna tou koi kaalu koi kalwa koi black hole aur iss tarah k naam sy pukarata hai

badar rafi------- Kad 6 ft 3 inch ………….. dikhne mai kisi pehlewan sy kam nahi aur Chal bhi mard k bache jaise ------- Banane wale ny Haseen bhi kamal ka banaya tha aur nain nakash bhi aise k ache ache nawabon ko peachy chor jaaye lekin iss ki buri kismet aisi k iss k sir mai pichle 10 saal sy aik tumar tha aur uss ki wajah sy naa sahi sy kuch iss ko yaad rehta tha naa sahi sy kuch parh paata tha ……….. aur bhi masle the lekin aik masla aisa tha k jiss ny iss ki achi bhali surat ko kharab krr rakha tha aur wo thaa iss ka kaala hona
uss tumar ki wajah sy Rafi k khoon mai kuch aisa barh gaya ta jo iss ki jild ko Andar sy kala krta jaa raha tha aur ussi k sath sath Rafi kisi African kale sy bhi ziyada kaal ho gaya tha
pichle kuch saalon sy ye Hakim Sarfraz (yaa Ved Sarfraz ki khidmat mai raha aur ussi sy bohut kuch seekhne ki koshish ki) apne maa baap ka tou iss ko pata nahi tha k kon the unko kia huwa tou issi wajah sy Hakim ny iss ko apna pota bana rakha tha
Uss k foran sy camery ko on krta hai aur video banane lag jaata hai wo video banane mai itna magan ho gaya tha k uss ko ye dyhan hi nahi raha k wo chat par khada huwa hai thodi derr mai wo aurat apni jhantain saaf krr k jaise hi paani daal rahi thi apne jisam par k tabhi aik kamre mai sy aik cheekh nikli aur agle hi pal Rafi k munh k paas sy aik joota Rafi jaldi sy apne camera ko uthata hai aur peachy kamre par sy hi challang maar k jaldi sy janwaron wale dery ki taraf dorr laga deta hai idhar uss kamre mai sy jo ladki nikli thi wo apna munh pakad k khadi ho gayi k ye uss ny kia krr Diya baaki Kamron mai sy bhi jaldi sy uss k bhai aur Bhabhi nikli ki khuda khair kry kia ho gaya lekin tab tak wo ladki samajh chuki thi k wo saya aakhir kis ka tha saroo= kia hai saba q chilai ho Saba = wo wo bhai achanak sy mujhe aise laga jaise mujhe kisi ny kandhe sy pakda (wo jhooth bol gayi q k wo nahi chahta thi k kisi ko pata chale k koi uss k ghusal khaane sy uss ki Bhabhi ko dekh raha hai Saroo biwi= 22 saal ki ho gayi hai----------- q hamare saath saath gaon ki neend haram krne par tuli hai Saroo= bachi nahi rahi tu ab …….. kuch soch samajh k harkat ki krr ----------- aur joote kidhar hain tery saba jaldi sy apne haath mai pakde aik joote ko neechuy farsh par phainkti hai aur boli aik mila hai doosra idhar kahin pada ho gaa Saroo biwi = so jao sab agar ab neend aati hai tou ------- wrna maharani sahiba ny tou neend uda di hai wo abhi itna bol hi rahi thi washroom mai sy uss ki jethani khud ko sarhi mai lappet ki nikli k bdekhy bahir kia huwa hau
uss ka naam Bushra tha

Bushra= abhi so mat ---------- uth gayi ho tou mera haath batao aur tu saba chal jaldi sy aisa krr jhadoo maarna shuru krr aaj tujhe dekhne walon ny aana hai
Saba= kiaa aj phir sy
Bushra= nahi tou kia tujhe saari zindgi tery bhai hi paalain gye ---------- aik tou tera baap uss kal k chore k naam sab kuch krr gaya aur ab tu ………….
Saba= bass kro Bhabhi ---------koi baat krne wali kro ---------- dono bhai mil k uss ka aadha bhi nahi kamate ooper sy ghar k kaam...………
Bushra= dekh liya apni behen ko kaise kenchi k jaise zuban hai iss ki
Saroo= Saba chup chaap jo Bhabhi keh rahi hai krr ---------- Abba g ki wajah sy bardasht kia huwa tha tujhe ----- ye naa ho k ………..(chup)
Saba= ye naa ho k mujhe nikal do---------- haan bhai mai maheeny ka lac tou khud ko bech k bhi nahi dy paon gii--------- iss ghar mai tou …………………
Saroo = Sabaaaaa (chillla k )
Saroo biwi= issi liye kehte hoon jo Rishta aata hai haan kro aur chalti kro iss ko ----------- kal ko tou iss ka hosla aur badh jaaye gaa
Bushra= uss thakurain ki wajah sy bachi huwi hai wrna wo naa hoti tou iss ko tou mai kab ka chalta krr deti
Saba= haan chalo abhi bhi apni aukat tou yaad hai tum dono ko
saba ny ye baat ki hi thi k Sarooo aik zorrdaar tamacha dy k uss k munh par maarta hai
Saroo= Bakwas naa kro ---------- Bhabhi bhi hai tumhari aur tum sy badi bhi ------------- chal maafi maang
Saba= ab agar tum ny haath lagaya naa tou kasam khaati hoon mai k pichle saara lihaaz bhool jaon gi ------- tujhe panchayat mai naa laa k khada kia tou …………….
Saroo aaage badh k wapis sy maarne wala tha lekin uss ki biwi aur betian uss ka haath pakad k uss ko rokk leti hain jab k Saba uss ko aik chidhane wali smile pass krti hai aur wapis kamre mai chali jaati hai
Saroo= Bushra Bhabhi koi acha saa rishta dekh k chalta kro -------- aap bhi jo rishte laa rahi ho wo nikame nikhaton k hain tabhi tou thakurain baar baar beech mai aa jaati hai
Bushra= ab ki baar jo rishta hai wo 12 paas ladke ka hai ------ ladka sheher mai bade mall mai kaam krta hai

marne k baad tou bass samjho iss ladke ki zindagi jahanum bana di gayi ho q k Marne sy Pehle Hakim jaate jaate apna sab kuch issi k naam krr gaya aur ye cheez iss ko hakim k khandan ka sb sy bada dushman bana gayi
Rafi bartan liye jaise hi ghar sy bahir nikla tou uss ko yaad aaya k uss ki light tou uthayi hi nahi tou wo tabhi peeche muda aur man mai sochta huwa kamre mai jaane laga
Rafi man mai= Kia Zamana aa gaya hai --------- jiss ka naam sun k Thakuron ki sansain tham jaati thi us k bety ko Thakuron k nokaron ny apna nokar bana k rakha huwa hai
aur tabhi jaise hi wo apne kamre k paas wapis pohncha tou uss ko paas mai ghusal khaane ki light on nazar aayi
Rafi= itni subah subah kon naha raha hai (man mai)
Rafi abhi yehi soch hi raha tha k tabhi ghusalkhaane ki deewar par kapde aa lage (yaani k abhi jo Andar tha uss ny deewar par kapde latkaye)
Rafi ki nazar jaise hi uss k kapdon par padi tou uss k chehre par aik kameengi chaa gayi aur wo jaldi sy Andar kamre mai gaya aur apne bag mai sy aik camera ko nikalta hai aur dabbe paon ghar sy bahir nikalta hai………
ghar sy bahir nikal k wo ghar k peachy jaati haia aur bahir paas mai hi lage aik darakht par paon rakhte huwe wo uss darakht par charh jaati hai aur uss sy phir peachy k Kamron ki chaton sy hota huwa wo uss ghusal khane k bilkul ooper aa gaya tha
uss ghusal khaane ki chat nahi thi lekin uss ki side par aik zero kaa bulb laga huwa tha jiss ki Roshni k neechy 40 saal ki aik bharpoor jawani sy maala maal aik sanwle rang ki aurat beth hui apni jhantain saaf krr rahi thi
Zero k bulb ki Roshni mai bhi ooper khade Rafi ko sab saaf nazar aa raha tha aur wo kameeny pan sy bhara huwa

Saroo= chalo shukar hai ----------- ab tou phir thakurain bhi beech mai nahi pade gi --------- Saba k jitna padha huwa hai ------ kamata bhi theek thaak ho gaa
Bushra= bass masla ye hai k --------
tabhi bahir darwaza knock huwa aur Andar aik aadmi aaya
Admi= Saroo sab khair tou hai naa thodi derr Pehle chillane ki awaz aay thi
Saroo= sab khairan hai bhai saab ----- wo bass saba kamli ka tarah nikal gaya tha (sarooo foran sy aise baat krne laga jaise saba sy bada pyar krta ho)
Admi= chalo Shukar hai wrna gaon k halat tou tujhe pata hai -------- kuch din Pehle kia huwa tha
Saroo= g bhai saab ----- baaki aao naa betho ------------- chai banao bhai saab k liye (apni biwi ko kehta hai)
aadmi= are nahi mai chalta hoon dery par bhi jaana hai ----- Thakur saab ki dairy k liye doodh bhi dohna hai naa
Saroo= thik hai bhai saab ----- Rab rakha

idhar Rafi dery par zehen mai sochta huwa k shukar hai k aaj tou wo bach gyaa kisi ny uss ki shakal nahi dekhi naa hi uss ko bahir koodte huwe
Rafi= ye mujhe kia ho gaya hai -------------- aakhir mai apne jazbaat ko kaabu q nahi krr paa raha -------- meri dushmani k laiq ye chintian nahi hain ------------ Rafi ------ Nahi ye log nahi hain jin ko tum ny sabak sikhana hai
Kamlesh iss baar mai tumhain chorron gaa nahi aur yehi keh k wo apne haath ki muthi kass leta hai aur kuch yaad krne lagta hai
 
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Kamlesh iss baar mai tumhain chorron gaa nahi ---------- 8 saal ------- Saal saal ho gaye hain aaj --------- 8 saal sy pagal bana ghoom raha hoon mai sirf tumhari wajah sy --------------------- aur ye keh k Rafi apni muthi band krta hai aur 8 Saal pehle ka sab kuch yaad krne laga k kaise aik hi jhatke mai wo Choudhary ka bhi choudhary ka beta huwa krta tha bhale hi duniya ki nazar mai uss ka baap aik mamooli saa nokar tha lekin Choudhary aur thakur uss ka naam sun k kaamp jaate the ------------- aisa sahks k jiss ny aik din mai mout k farishte sy bhi ziada jaanain li hon ------------------- 5 states par raaj kiya ho aur Thakuron ko apne jooe ki nok par rakha ho

Rafi yehi sab sochte sochte apna kaam khattam krta hai aur doodh doh k janwaron ko bahir baandhta hai q k thodi derr mai hi dhoop aa jaani thi aur kutty ko baandh k wapis ghar ki taraf chal deta hai uss ko saba ki wajah sy thoda thoda dar bi lag raha tha k kahin uss ny usse dekh naa liya ho lekin iss cheez k chances bohit kam the iss wajah sy wo araam sy doodh wale bartan ko utha k ghar wapis chala gaya

ghar wapis jaane k baad jab uss ny ghar mai shant mahol dekha aur uss ko dekh k kisi ny koi khaas reaction naa diya tou wo samajh hi gaya k saba ko pata nahi chala

Ye lo chachi doodh (bushra ko doodh ka bartan pakdate huwe

Bushra= itni derr q laga di (ghusse mai)

Rafi= Wo bhains kal koi khulli chorr aaya tha uss ko dhoonde mai wakt lag gaya

Bushara bhi chup krr gayi aur Rafi bhi apne uss store numa kamre mai chala jaata hai thodi derr baad rafi apne kamre sy aik dhoti kurta pehen k nikalta hai aur haath mai aik shopper ly k gaon k bahir ki taraf bane huwe akhade ki taraf chal deta hai --------- bushra bhi har baar k jaise tanzz krti hai lekin rafi uss ko ignore krr k akhade chala jaata hai wahan par 2 3 ghante jaise ved g rafi sy training krwaya rte the waise krta hai aur phir apne jisam par poora ved jii ki khaas jadi bootion wala tell laga k poore dam sy neher ki taraf dorr k jaata hai aur jisam ko garam krr k wahan neher mai challang maara deta hai ved ji k tariqe sy banai huwa khaas dawai aur tel ko pee krr aur uss dawai ki wajah sy aise asar huwa uss k jisam mai jaise k uss ko jisam k andar aag lag gayi ho

agar koi aam insaan iss tarah paani mai koode tou yaa tou wo iss kadar thande paani sy marr jaaye yaa bhi garam jisam aur thande paani ki wajah sy aik dum thande hone ki wajah sy uss ko sard garam bukhar ho jaaye lekin iss dawai ki wajah sy iss kadar thande yakh paani mai bhi rafi 2 ghante tak khud k haath pairpar 20 20 kilo k lohe k kade baand k kaafi derr tak tairaki aur under water boxing krta raha

aur issi ajeebo ghareeb tarike ki wajah sy hi rafi ka jisam jaise kisi lohe ki maanind ho chuka tha ---------------- 14 inch ka lund aur uss ki chamdi bhi aise jaise baaki jisam ki ----------------- suwar sy ziada sakht chamdi ho chuki thi rumi ki ------------------ itni sakt jaise rozz hazaraon dande khaata ho apne jisam par ----------- khair tareeka bhi tou aise hi tha Rafi ko aaj bhi yaad hai k jiss dose sy wo khud ko train krta hai kabhi uss k 5 garam khaane k baad 2 min tak wo paani mai jaata tha aur agla 5 6 ghante tak wo bas poore jisam mai dard mehsoos krta tha lekin bade kaamon k liye jigry bhi bade chahiye hote hain aur unn ka result bhi aur waise hi rafi k saath ------------ ankhon k ilaawa iss k poore jisam mai aur koi aisi cheez nahi hain jiss par koi waar kry tou rafi ki cheekh nikle

rafi ko jab kaafi tezz thand lagne lagti hai tou wo uss shopper mai sy sabun ko nikalta hai aur naha k saara tell khud sy saaf krta hai aur phir wahin pass mai aik jhaad k peechy jaa k kapde tabdeel krta hai q k ab tak 9 bajj chuky the ----------

wahin doosri taraf kisi bechari ladki ki aankh aik darawne sapne sy khulti hai

Reshma (uss ladki ki ikloti dost jo kal raat ussi k sath soyi thi)

Reshma= kia huwa Sahiba -------- koi bura sapna dekha kiyaa

Sahiba= Reshma mai ------------- mai tujhe bata rahi hoon ----- mai tujhe bata rahi hoon mai marr jaon gi mai uss thakur sy shadi nahi kroon gi ------------ maa ko bol dy mai marr jaon gi mai thakuron ki bahu nahi banoon gi

Reshma apne sir pakadte huwe ------------ ladkian iss umar mai shadi k sapne dekhna chahti hain aur tum ho k ulta aise sapnon sy darr rahi ho

Sahiba= TU jaanti hai phir bhi

Reshma= come on yaar ------- just kidding------------ aur meri jaan abhi sy tum q ghabra rahi ho abhi tou kaafi wakt hai iss cheez mai

Sahiba= Reshma tu nahi jaanti --------------- Thakur tou kal bhi aaye huwe the -------------- ye tou meri zidd hai jo ab tak rukke huwe hain ---------- aur waise bhi agle mahine meri degree bhi poori hone wali hai---------------- uss k baad wo nahi rukhain gye

Reshma= Dont worry meri jaan mai krti hoon Aunty sy baat ------------- Aunty tum sy bohut pyar krti hain ------------- she definately will opose this after knowning that …………………….

Sahiba= Kitni baar kaha hai tumse sy k mama ka naam mat liya kro mujh sy ----------------- Badar Rafique Uncle k marne k baad sy tou Mama jaise badal si gayi hain ------------ And dont forget k mama ki hi wajah sy aaj mujhe uss ladke sy shadi krni padd rahi hai

Reshma= Sahiba kesi baat krr rahi ho Aunty ………………….

Sahiba= Leave it ………….. chalo utho waise bhi subah ho gayi hai (wo reshma ki baat ko un suna krti hai aur bistar sy uth k washroom jaane lagti hai_

Reshma Man mai (Bewakoof ladki tumhare paas aur koi raasta bhi nahi hai -------------- agar tumhare ghar wale bhi saath dety tou bhi tumhain uss ladke sy bachana bada mushkil tha aur ooper sy ab tou tumhari family bhi iss shadi ko krna chahte hain)

jab k yehi baat sahiba bhi Washroom mai jaane k baad diwar sy lage sochne lagi

Sahiba= Mumma Mumma --------- Mumma aap jaanti bhi hain k aapki baitu kitne dard mai hai but aap ----------- aap ho k mery hi khilaaf khadi ho--------------- aap tou kitna pyar krti thi naa mujh sy ---------------- Aap ko pata bhi hai k i doesnt like Thakur's They killed Uncle Badar but Aaao unhi ki ladke sy meri shadi ------------- I hate you mumma i hate you (aur ye keh k wo ladki rone lagi)

Rafi bhi apne ghar wapis lota aur apne kapde jo geely the un ko nichod k taar par sukhne k liye latka deta hai ----------- wo abhi ye krr hi raha hota hai k uss k peechy saba aa k khadi ho jaati hai

Saba= mujhe tum sy aisi umeed nahi thi

Rafi= kia matlab kesi ----------- tum rozana dekti tou ho mai ho dhota hoon ------- ab ye naa kehna k tumhain aaj pata chala hai k ……………

Saba= mai iss ki baat nahi krr rahi subah wali baat ka keh rahi hoon

Rafi ki baayin aankh phadphadai lekin rafi jaldi sy khud ko sambhalte huwe bola ------------- Subah ----- Subah kia huwa ----------

Saba= bhole ban rahe ho

Rafi= Arre jab batao gi nahi tou kaise pata chale gaa tum jaanti tou ho k subah subah mai kahan jaata hoon ---------- aur bhala tum mujh sy pehle kabhi jaagi ho jo mai tum sy subah milta

Saba= tou wo jo tumhare naak k saamne sy jooti nikli thi wo munh par lagti tou yaad aata

Rafi= O bibi subah subah bhang tou nahi pee li kiaa (Rafi ulta uss par chadhte huwe)

Rafi ye baat krta hi hai k agle hi pal Saba uss k kaan sy pakadti hai aur Joota utar k boli

Saba= kia kaha Bibi ----------- kameeny (aur wo Rafi ki tashreef par joote maarne lagi

Saba subah batati naa bhabhi tou phir dekhti kaise tumhain ye baatain soojhti (saba ny ye baat ki hi thi k Rafi jaldi sy seedha hota hai jiss wajahs ys saba sy kaan chhoot jaata hai aur agle hi pal Rafi jaldi sy Saba ko peechy dhakka dy k deewar k saath laga leta hai aur jaldi sy aik haath sy uss k haath pakad k doosra hath uss k gaal par rakhta hai

Saba= aa aah Rafi chhod kameeny kia krr raha hai koi dekh ly gaa

Rafi= kia kaha Chachi ko batao gi -------- meri shikayat lagao gi

Saba= kameeny chhod ----- koi dekh ly gaa ------------ Rafi chhod nahi tou kasam sy bohut pitayi kroon gi ----------------------

Saba itna boli hi thi k Rafi jaldi sy aage aik dum uss k kareeb ho jaata hai ----------- itna kareeb k wo almost uss sy chipak hi gaya tha

Rafi= kia batao gi

Saba ki tou halat hi kharab ho gayi thi ----------- aik tou uss ko itna kareeb paa krr aur doosra wo bhi open mai chatt par din k wakt -----------

Saba ka chehra paseeny sy bharr gaya --------

saba= Dari sehmi awaz mai )= Rafi please jaane dy koi dekh ly gaa

Rafi= dekh leny do jahan chachi ny nikalna hai wahan tum bhi unka saath dy dena

Saba= pagal ho kia -------- tumhain lagta hai mai tumhari shikayat lagaon gi (thodi narazgi aur thode dar bhari awaz k saath)

Rafi agle hi pal uss ko chorr k peeechy ho jaata hai aur aas paas dekhta hai tou aas paas koi bhi nahi tha chatton par aur phir rafi jaise hi saba ko kuch bolne hi wala hota hai k agle hi pal uss k munh par aik zorr ka chaata parta hai aur wo dekhta hai tou saba k gaal ansooun sy bharre huwe the

Saba= ye sila dety ho tum khud sy pyar sy baat krne walon ko (aur wo wahin sy rote huwe neechy chali gayii jab k Mai yahin jam k khada ka khada reh gaya)

Mai sochne laga k ye maine kia krr diya --------- mai aisa tou kabhi nahi tha ……. mai tou unki bhi bardasht krr leta tha jo mery khilaf hote the lekin aaj tou bass halke k darr sy maine ye kia krr diya

mai= Ye tum ny kia krr diya Raf nahi Rafi nahi Maine papa ka naam iss wajah sy nahi rakha tha k mai unka naam dy krr khud ko ye krta phirron Radi kameeny tum ny ye kia krr diya ------------ Kabhi suna hai tum ny papa k baare mai aisa k unhon ny khud k hi kisi saath k saath yyoon kia ho -------------------- Fuck Rafi ( aur mai wahin khada ho k khud sy hi ye baat krne laga lekin tabhi maine mery pichle 3 mahine ki routine dekhi aur mai phir wahin apna sir pakad k beth gaya q k ye aaj pehli baar nahi tha k maine ghusse mai koi kaam kia ho

balke pichle kai maheenon sy balki jab sy operation huwa hai tab sy mujh mai Hawas aur Ghussa bohut ziada badhne laga tha aur Ved g ki mout ki wajah sy mujhe iss baat ka ziada ehsas nahi huwa lekin ab ……………….

Mai yehi sabhi soch k apna sir pakad k wahin beth gaya k 2 min baad mujhe saba ki awaz aayi

Saba= chalo shukar hai k itna tou pata chal gaya hai tumhain k tumhain aisa nahi krna chahiye tha

Mai= Saba wo So…………….

Saba= its ok ------------- chalo ab jaldi chalo bade thakur saab tumhain bula rahe hain Reeti ki call aayi hai

Mai= Saba mai sach mai aisa nahi krna chahta tha wo bass mai subah sy ghusse aur hawa……………

Saba= shhhhh ---------- baad mai baat karain gye -------- abhi jao thakur saab ghusse main hain tum ny unki calls pick nahi ki naa iss wajah sy

Mai= chud gaye guru ( aur itna bol k mai jaldi sy Wahan sy neechy bhaga aur bike ly k jaldi sy Haveli pohncha )

andar pohncha tou thakur saab hamesha ki tarah bahir lawn mai hi bethy the lekin aaj uss haath mai akhbar nahi thi aur naa hi chaaye balke aaj wo thde ghusse mai betha huwa tha aur gate ki hi taraf dekh raha tha

mujhe dekhte hi wo ghusse sy uth khada huwa aur meri taraf aane laga tou peechy sy uss ko reeti ny koi baat ki tou wo wahin rukk gaya

Mai uss k paas gaya

Mai= malik maaf kijye gaa wo mai ……………

B thakur= haram khorr tujhe iss liye phone tou nahi ly k diya huwa k tu meri calls hi naa uthaye

Mai= malik wo …………….

Reeti= Rafi lets go ------------ Bade papa aap shaant rahiye naa …………. aapko kaha bhi hai k aap ka BP shoot kr jaata hai ………….. Relax please

wo budha madarchod Reeti ki baat sunta hai tou khud ko thoda shant krta hai lekin phir bhi mujhe ghusse mai dekhta raha …………

Reeti= Bade papa aapko pata hai na ye meri Best friend ka bhateeja hai (narazgi sy uss ko boli)

B thakur= par beta jis kaam k liye rakha tha iss ko naa wo dhang sy krta hai naa hi wakt par call ko uthata hai kal ko yahan zaroorat pad gayi tou aise hi aaye gaa ye )
Mai= Thakur saab ghalti ho gayi iss baar maaf krr dain ainda aise nahi ho gaa ------------ wo darasal subah ……………..
B thakur= thik hai thik hai – Reeti bitya ko apni saheli k ghar jaana hai aur iss ko wahan ly jao aur haan tum ny andar beti k saath nahi jaana aur naa hi guards ko ly k jaana iss ki dost ko aise pasand nahi ------------- bahir hi intezar krna hai


Mai tabhi jaldi sy car ki taraf chala gaya jab k Reeti bhi mery peechy peechy aane lagi

Reeti= you idiot ------- call q nahi uthai --------- bewakoof pehle bhi bade papa aur kamlesh chacha tum par ghussa rehte hain aur ooper sy tum Saba k loiye aur pareshania badha rahe ho ----------- shukar kro k aaj tou mai thi koi aur ghar ka bahir jaa raha hota tou pata hai phir tumhare saath kia hota

Mai= Reeti malkin aapke hote huwe bhala mujhe kuch ho sakta hai hai

Reeti= Reeti malkin bhala aap k hote huwe mujhe kuch ho sakta hai kia (chida k munh terha krr k boli) --------- Mr Badar Rafi sahib mujhe koi shoq nahi hai dada g sy aap ko baar baar bachwane ka ye tou bas saba ka munh khata hai sochti hoon uss k bimar baap ki tum ny itni care ki hai uss k liye hi sahi tumhain bacha leti hoon ------------ ye mat sochna k kabhi kisi aur case mai bhi bhanse tou mai aaon gi tumhain bachane
Rafi= chalo kisi naa kisi bahane tou aap bachati hain---------- aapka itna bachana hi mery liye kaafi hai
Reeti= chhed rahe ho (thoda serious tone mai)
Rafi= Mai ghar sy aukat aur shakal dekh k nikalta hoon Reeti malkin ------- meri haisiyat mujhe aapka naam leny ki ijazat nahi deti aap itna aage ka soch rahi hain
Reeti= achi baat hai wrna mai aise mamle mai saba ka bhi lihaaz nahi kroon gi------------- waise saba ko bhi maine bulaya tha wo nahi aayi kher tou hai naa

Mai= g wo aaj unko dekhne wale aa rahe hain

Reeti= phir sy ???? aik tou iss ki bhabhion ko bhi chain nahi hai --------- mummy ny mana na kiya hota tou inko tou dekh leti mai
Reeti= ab ki baar kia nuks hai ladke mai
Mai= dekha tou nahi lekin suna hai k ladka ladka nahi aadmi hai -------- 30 32 saal ka aur aik shadi pehle kar rakhi hai

Reeti= gaadi wapas modd aaj dekkh tu phir mai un dono ka kia haal krti hoon ------------ unki itni himmat k wo mery kehne k bawajjud aise logon ko ghar saba ko dekhne aane ki ijjazat dain

Mai= par Reeti malkin wo aapki mummy g pehle bhi aapko,…………….

Reeti= jitna kaha hai utna kro

Mai= G malkin (aur ye bol k mai car ko wapis ghar ki taraf ghuma deta hoon)

ghar pohnchne k baad mai tou ghar k andar nahi jaata q k mai jaanta tha k iss ladki ki zuban bohut gandi hai aur haath bhi chala leti hai maar tou padni hi padni thi aur yehi huwa thodi derr baad bushra sahiba k kapde phatte huw aur reeti k haath mai danda aur de dena dan wo maarne par lagi hui aur saba uss ko rokne mai -------------- bushra k baar saroo ki biwi ka bhi yehi haal huwa aur mai mast baaki logon ki tarah bahir khada ho k dekh raha ta aur enjoy krr raha tha

Reeti ki jab saans phooli tab tak wo dono tou adh mari ho chuki thi aur Saroo bechare ki tou himmat nahi ho rahi thi k darwaze sy bahir pair rakhe wo tou bass sir jhuka k khada huwa tha wahin darwaze mai

agle din pir Bushra ka sohar awapis aaya aur thakur saab k paas ly k gaya dono aurton ko insaaf k liye bushara k husband ka naam billu tha jo k doosre sheher mai bank mai kaam krta hai aur wahin apni do betion k saath rehta hai jo apni parhai k liye wahin rehti hain

waise tou billu aur bushra ki apas mai nahi banti thi lekin yahan baat aisi nahi thi k wo wahin chup chaap bethta

Billu= par malik aap dekhiye tou suraiya bhabhi ki tou dono taangon par aik bhi jagah aisi nahi hai jahan choti malkin ny danda naa maara ho aur meri biwi ki tou aisi halat hai k wo naa chalne ki naa bethne ki naa sone ki ---------------- choti malkin ny kal inko gaon k samne maara hai
Thakur= arre bhai jab Reeeti ny faisla krr diya tha tou ye dono q uss k khulaf jaa rahi thi ---------- ab tum logon ko sharam nahi aati behen ko aise bechte huwe tou zahir si baat hai wo uss ki dost hai wo tou aaye gi

Billu= malik ye aap kaise baat krr rahe hain ------------ bhala ham apni behen ko q bechne lage ------------ Maana k ladke ki umar thodi ziada hai lekin malik ham jaison k liye aise rishne kisi naimat sy kam nahi hain ------------- apna ghar hai sheher mai uss ka apna karobar hai aur itna tou kamata hai k wo dpno ka pet bhar sake (bhale hi billu ko ye rishta khud manzoor nahi tha lekin wo ab munh par aise apne bhai ki ghalti bhi nahi bata sakta tha) aur malik ham ny kon si baat pakki ki thi abhi tou ladke wale aane the
Reeti mom= dekho bhai sahab (wo dill ki kaafi naram hain aur sab ki izzat krti hain) ---------- maana k Reeti ny ghalat kia hai lekin aap bhi apnu behen ki kuch zimme daari utain ---------- aur waise bhi abhi tou Hakim saab ki mout ko 4 mahine nahi huwe aur aap iss kadar tang aa gaye hain) chaar 6 mah intezar krain koi acha rishta aa jaaye gaa

Billu= aapki baat thik hai malkin lekin

Thakur= lekin kia -------- ab kia hamari beti yahan aa k tum sab sy maafi maange

Billu= nahi malik mai ye nahi keh raha le…………..

Thakur= dekh billy tery baap k saath taaluq ki wajah sy mai itni teri sun raha hoon ---------- wrna tu jaanta hai mujhe --------- jaa chal shabash uth ------ mai aik kaam wali ko bhej doon gaa kuch din kaam krne warna tum ny tou phir reeti ko ghussa dilwane k liye apni behen sy kaam krwana hai

Billu kuch naa bola aur chup krr k khada ho gaya aur phir wapis chala gaya

Reeti mom= papa g Reeti ka kuch karain --------- aap ny hi uss ko bigada hai ------------ ghussa uss ki naak par rehta hai jiss ko dill krta hai uss ko maarti phirti hai aise kaise chale gaa
B thakur- ab kia krr sakta hoon ------------ Veeru ki ikloti aulad hai ladli tou hogi

Reeti mom= aise tou din ba din ham dushmano ki tadad barha rahe hain kal ko yehi log hamare liye masla karain gye
B Thakur= hahahahaah Bahu tum bhi naa ---------- cheentian haathi ko nahi maar sakti --------------- lagta hai Gunman dekh dekh k tum ye samajhne lagi ho k ham logon ko jaan ka khatra hota hai ------- Bahu ye Ginman tou bass logon ko dikhane k liye hain wrna aaj bhi Thakur naam ka hi itna dar hai k jiss k naam k sath laga ho uss k samne gardan jhuki hui hoti hai aise logon ki
Reeti mom= papa issi wajah sy wo bigad rahi hai ---------- naa aap uss ko rokte hain balke aap ki ye baatain uss ko aur hosla deti hain Main tou bass yehi darti hoon k aik Hakim khada huwa tha aise logon sy aur uss ny itni laashain girai thi k aaj tak uss khoon sy zameen laal hai kahin koi aur Haki……………..

B thakur= Hakim ko chiudharion ka sahara haasil tha bahu aur phir uss Hakim ka aur choudharion ka anjaamtum dekh chuki ho ------- Choudharion ki sab sy Ladli beti ko biyah raha hoon Kamlesh k uss bety sy jiss ko apnon mai sy hi rishte sy naa krdi thi

Reeti= papa mujhe tou wo ……………

B thakur= jao bahu chaye ly aao ---------- tumhari inhi baaton ki wajah sy Veer buzdil ho gaya tha ------------ mujhe bhi aisi baatain suna suna k na mard krr do gi tum

ye update late ho jaane ki wajah sy kal hi aik aur update dy doon gaa sorry k torr par
 

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Aise hi Rafi k din guzar rahe the aur uss k baap ki anneversary ko din kareeb sy kareeb aate jaa rahe the

tabhi kahin par aik ladke ka scene dikhaya jaata hai jo sharab pee k betha huwa tha aur kisi ladki ki photo ko choomte huwe kisi ko chod raha tha

wo ladka tha Kamlesh thakur ka sab sy bada beta aur apne baap ki tarah bigda huwa ------------ Aik number ka sharabi aur zaani --------- jab kabhi jiss ladki par dill aa jaaye uss ko utha leta hai aur kuch din istemal krne k baad yaa tou wo ladki ko khud maar deta hai yaa ladki khudkushi krr leti hai

aaj sy 8 saal pehle jab thakuron aur choudharion k beech aman ka samjhota huwa tha tou uss wakt ye shart rakhi gayi thi k dono ghar aik doosre k gaon mai nahi aa sakte aur koi ghalat kaam nahi krr sakt lekin kamlesh ka ye beta iss k liye tou wo shart jaise laagu hi nahi hoti thi ----------- aisa ladaka aur pehlwan k man mai aaye tou akaile hi choudharion k gaon mai ghuss jaaye aur wahan sy ladkian utha k aa jaaye ----------- Nashe mai dhutt jiss taraf munh krta hai wahin jaata hai aur apna kahar barsata hai ----------- kabhi kisi ka darr nahi k kahin koi maar naa daale ---------- har wakt aik pistol dubb mai bandook kandhe par aur sharab ki bottle ye iss k saathi hain ----------- sote jaagte ye 3 cheezain hamesha iss ka sath rehti hain ----------- Aur aise hi kaamon ki wajah sy Gaon wale tou gaon wale iss k apne ghar wale bhi iss sy darte hain

unko pata hai k har wakt nashe mai hota hai kia pata kab kia krr jaaye ---------- aur waise bhi kamlesh ka beta hai jiss ny khud apne baap ko akhade mai nanga (term) krr diya tha ye tou phir pehelwani mai uss sy 2 haath aage hai----------- iss ki issi nature ki wajah sy koi iss ko apni beti nahi biyata tha thakuron mai sy lekin iss ki shadi Aik choudhrain aur Choudharion k sardar ki bhateeji ki beti k sath teh hui ui hain---------------- mangni aaj sy 8 saal pehle hi krr di thi samjhote ki madd mai

waise tou iss ladke ko kisi sy shadi krne naa krne sy fark nahi padta lekin naa jaane uss ladki mai aisa kia dikha iss ko k isss ny uss ladki ko zidd bana liya ------------ kuch saal pehle jab uss ladki ny mana kia tou ye ladka Choudharion ki haveli mai ghuss k andar firing krta rha --------- koi choudhary iss ko rokk nahi paya ----------- unke ghar mai khade ho k keh k aaya tha k agar Sahiba meri naa hui tou Mirza mai koi zinda nahi chodoon gaa

wo din gaya aur aaj kaa aaya khud kamlesh aur Bada thakur bhi iss ko kisi cheez k liye naa nahi krta ----------- mout ka iss ko darr nahi aur Takat mai iss ko koi hara nahi sakta

aaj bhi ladki ko chodte huwe iss k haath mai uss sahba ki tasveer thi

Ranveer= Sahiba --------- Sahiba kahan tak bhaago gi ------------ ab tou suna hai aik maheeny baad tumhara aakhri imtehaan hai ------- dy lo ussi din tum ko utha k ly jaon gaa aur apni dulhan banaon gaa --------- Main bhi dekhata hoon k kis ki itni himmat hai jo mery haath sy tumhara haath churra ly jaaye ---------------------- jitne mirze the maine saare maar diye ------- hahahahhahaah Ab koi mirza zinda nahi iss shsher mai aur ye soch k wo zorr zorr sy hansne lagta hai aur phir uss ladki ko goli maar deta hai aur apne kapde pehen k wahan sy nikal jaata hai uss ladki k ghar sy

yahin doosri taraf iss ladke ka aik jaani dushman tha ----------- Uss ka maan tha Farhad Choudhary ------------- kehne ko tou Sahiba ka cousin lekin uss ka sahiba k saath bass 2 cheezon ka rishta tha ----------------- Zameen ka aur Nafrat ka

Nafrat iss wajah sy k Sahiba ki shadi Ranveer sy honi hai aur Zameen ka rishta yaani k shareeky ka rishta ------------ ye Ladka 2 cheezain chahta tha ------ yaa tou Sahiba marr jaaye yaa uss k saath kuch aisa ho k Ranveer ka munh kaala ho jaaye ----------------- 5 saal pehle Ranveer ny iss ladke ko akhade mai maara tha aur itna maara tha k uss k baad sy iss ladke ny pehelwani chorr di thi aur apni zindagi ka bass aik hi maqsad bana liya tha k kisi tarah ranveer sy badla lena hai uss k liye chahe jiss hadd tak jaana pade jaaye gaa aur doosra ye k agar ssahoba ko uss k dushman ki biwi banna hi banna hai tou ye bhi Ranveer ki cousin Reeti sy shadi kry gaa

Ranveer ko tou iss sab mamle sy fark nahi padta tha lekin Bade thakur ny Reeti ki shadi iss sy krne k liye saaf saaf naa keh di thi jiss wajah sy ye bohut tapp gaya ta aur ab ye bass yehi soch raha tha k aise naa sahi tou wise hi jaise Ranveer krta hai ---------- ye aaj reeti ko utha ly gaa aur ye aaj yehi soch k apne 2 4 doston k saaath reeti ki gaadi ka peecha krr raha tha

Reeti car mai kisi sy phone par baat krr rahi thi aur gaadi aista aista sheher k kareeb pohnchti jaa rahi thi (thakuron k gaon sy lagbhag 10 km tak gaadi door aa chuki thi)

Reeti= yeah yeah ----- dekho uss ko bithao ------------ mai bass abhi 5 min mai pohnchne wali hoon ------------- He is a big Shark is Hotel buissness dekho aaj agar ham ny ye…………………….aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

aik dum sy break lagne ki wajah sy Reeti ka sir dashboard sy jaa takraya ------------------- Reeti madarchod andha hai kiyaaaa zorr sy chillai (uss k haath sy phone girr gaya tha )

reeti phone ko uthati hai aur jaise hi aur kuch bolne wali thi k Rafi bola

Rafi= Malkin neechy hi rahiye mujhe mamla sahi nahi lag raha (Rafi apne saamne gaadi mai sy utarte huwe logon ko dekh k bola)

Reeti= What (aur wo bina kuch dekhy gaadi ka darwaza kholti hai uss ko laga k gaadi k samne koi aa gaya ho gaa )

Rafi jo car ko reverse krne wala tha wo jaldi sy gaadi ki handbreak khenchta hai aur pistol ko haath rakhta hai aur bahir nikalta hai

Reeti= Kon ho tum log aur tumhari himmat kaise hui Meri gaadi k saamne aise gaadi laane ki (ghusse mai cheekhte huwe boli)

tabhi samne sy wo sabhi log gaadi par golian chalane lage

aur ye sab dekh k tou reeti cheekhne lagi aur jaldi sy peechy ki taraf bhaagi

Raqfi bhi jo bahir nikal raha tha jaldi sy gaadi k peechy jaata hai aur wahin sy golian chalane lagta hai

Rafi= madarchod bhaag kahan rahi hai idhar maa chuda (Wo Reeti ko bhaagta dekh ghusse mai chilaya q k uss ny iss ko mana bhi kiya thak gaadi sy naa utre ab padd gayi naa museebat gale)

Reeti ny uss ki baat naa sunni tou Rafi jaldi sy car ki diggi par goli maar k uss ka lock kholta hai aur peechy sy auto Ar nikalta hai aur uss ko gaadi sy side par nikal k khulle fire krne la jaata hai

abhi tak tou Raf pistol sy golian chala raha tha aur seedhi chala bhi nahi raha tha tou wo sab saare khulle mai khade huwe the lekin yoon aik dum sy gun k fire krne sy 1 2 golian Farhad ko lagi aur uss k saath k ladkon ko bhi kuch lagi -------------- wo log bhi jaldi sy apni gaadi ka cover leny k liye peechy bhaage lekin Rafi jaldi sy apni car k peechy sy nikalta hai aur unn par seedhi golian chorr deta hai jiss wajah sy Kaafi saari golian Farhad ko pakad k ly jaane wale logon (nokar aur kuch uss k dost) unko lagi ------------ kuch tou wahin girr gaye lekin kuch gaadi k peechy chhup gaye

Reet bhi jo khet wali side par bhaag rahi thi peechy mudd k dekhti hai tou Rafi bahir khulle mai gun ly k khada huwa tha aur uss k saamne 4 5 lashain padi hui thi jab k uss sy kuch faasle par 3 gaadian khadi hui thi ------------ Rafi jaldi sy aage ki taraf bhaaga q k wo samah gaya ta k ye log ab wapis bhaagain gye aur wo nahi chahta tha k inn mai sy ab koi wapis jaaye

Reeti bhi apni car ki taraf wapis bhaagi aur Peechy sy Rafi ko awaz lagati hai
Reeti= Rafiii Unka peecha naa kro gaadi start kro ---------= lets go ----- oyee maine kia ……………………….aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh aaaaa aaa (Rafi jo be inteha ghusse mai tha wo seedha Reeeti ki taraf bhi golian chala deta hai lekin jaan boojh k uss k pairon k kareeb jiss wajah sy Reeti wahin dar k koodne lagti hai

lekin tabhi Rafi ko gaadi k satart hone ki awaz sunai di tou wo aur tezzi sy gaadi ki taraf bhaaga (abhi saare log gadi mai bethy nahi the lekin rafi ko kisi k cheekh cheekh k ye kehne ki awaz sunai di k mai Farhad choudhary hoon mai tum logon ko chorron gaa nahi ) tumhain mai chorron gaa nahi (aur tabhi Rafi ko wo ladka nazar aaya jo ye sab cheekh cheekh k keh raha tha (wo gaadi mai beth chuka tha aur peechy wala sheesha jo toot chuka tha uss mai beth k cheekh raha tha ------------ Rafi jaldi sy apni bandook ka nishana uss par lagata hai aur uss gaadi par golion ki baarish krr deta hai aur ------------ wo ladka bhi jaldi sy chuppta hai lekin uss k baaki admi jo abhi gaadi mai chadh rahe the wo log golion ki bhent chadh gaye …………………

lekin wo gaadi wahan sy nikala gayi ………………… lekin tabhi achanak sy mery sir mai peeechy sy zorr sy kuch lagta hai ------- itni arse sy training ki wajah sy mujhe dard mehsoos huwa lekin maine khud ko girne sy bacha liya ----------- lekin mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi thi k sab tou marre huwe the aakhir mujh par peechy sy hamla kis ny kiya

Main jaise hi peechy mudd k dekhta hai tou danda Reeti k haath mai tha aur wo darr sy kaamp rahi thi q k Rafi ko uss dande sy ziada kuch asar nahi huwa tha

main ghusse sy uss ki taraf kadam badhata hai lekin tabhi meri chaati mai shadeed dard mehsoos hota hai mujhe aur main wahin ghutno par aa jaata hoon mery haath sy pistol choot k girr jaata hai lekin mai bandook k sahare beth gaya ----------

Mai= Haramzaadi kuttiya ………… issi wajah sy teri jaan bachai hai maine k tu mujhe hi maare (Ghusse mai aur dard mai Rafi wahin bethty huwe bola)

Reeti= Namak Haram jiss ka khata hai uss ko hi kaat ta hai ---------- teri himmat kaise hui mujh par golian chalane ki

mujhe shadeed dard khaaye jaa raha tha lekin mai jaanta tha k abhi agar yahan sy naa nikla yaa tou mujhe thakur maar dain gye yaa apni sulah k chalte choudharion k hawale krr dain gye --------------- Rafi Dard mai hi poori jaan laga k uthta hai aur Reeti par bandook taan leta hoon ---------------------

Mai= Golian lagi hain mara nahi hoon ---------------- ye mat bhoolo k ab bhi bandook kis k haath mai hai ---------- Ahhhhh (rafi ko wapis sy aik dard ki leher uss k seene mai uthi)

Reeti jo bandook k nishane par thi darr k maare uss k haath sy danda chhoot gaya

Reeti= dekh Dekh rafi ------ maine tera kia bigada hai ------ dekh mai tou tujhe bass bachati hi rahi hoon

reeti= Tujh sy badi Randi aur kuttiya maine aaj tak nahi dekhi ------------ haram zaadi wo madarchod tujhe uthane aaya aik tou maine 3 golian khaa k tujhe bachaya ulta tu mujh par hi hamla krr rahi hai ---------------- khair iss mai tera nahi tery khandan ka kasoor hai -------------- Thakuron ka khoon hi aisa hai

Reeti ko bhi uss ki baat samajh aa gayi k Rafi ny uss ko peechy rakhne k liye uss par golian chalayi thi naa k uss ko maarne k liye lekin uss ko Rafi k munh sy khud k baare mai aisa sunn k ghussa bhi bohut aa raha tha

Reeti= chalo hospital ------------ tumhain golian lagi hain .

Mai= chalo kahan aap apni idhar hi maa chudao -------------- mai kiya tumhain ab saath ly jaon k baad mai thakur aa k mujhe pakad lain saale dhoke baaz kutte ----------- peeth par waar krne wale

Reeti= ye tum kia bakwas krr rahe ho samajh bhi aa rahi hai ------------- mai hoon jo sun rahi hai koi aur hota tou ………………

Mai= tu saba ki dost naa hoti tou ab tak inn baakion ki saath teri bhi laash padi hoti yahan -------------- q k tumhain zinda rakhne ka bhi mujhe koi faida nahi jaise tum ny meri peeth par waar kiya tum sy bade bhi aise hi karain gye (aur wo chalte chalte apni gaadi k paas khola aur uss ka darwaza khol k uss mai entre huwa)

Reeti jaldi sy peechy wale darwaze sy peechy beth gayi (halan k pehle wo aage hi bethti thi uss ko peeche bethna pasand nahi tha)

Main= Dekho reeti aakhiri baar keh raha hoon agar chahti ho k tumhare ghar walon ko iss gaadi mai sy tumhari laash naa mile tou nikal jao meri gaadi sy -------- (dard ko bardasht krte huwe mai mushkil sy bola)

Reeti= Mai kasam khaati hoon ab tum par hamla nahi kroon gi ------ pehle k liye bhi sorry mujhe laga tum bhi bikke huwe ho iss wajah sy mujh par goli chalai

Mai= Randi ki bachi jab tujhe kaha tha k andar hi maa chuda tou bahir maa q chudane nikli thi -------------- samajh nahi aata tujhe (mera tou pehle sy hi ghusse sy burra haal tha q k mai thakuron ko jaanta tha wo tou meri harkaton ki wajah sy kab sy mujh sy peecha chudwana chahte the q k maine ved wali deal poori nahi ki thi aur ab tou choudharion k itne bande maine maar diye the aur mujhe nahi lagta k unka beta bhi bache gaa iss wajah sy wo mery peechy tou padain gye hi padain gye aur meri 8 saal sy yahan rehna aur mehnat saari bekar gayi iss wajah sy mai Iss kuttiya par shadeed ghusse mai tha)

Reeti= Rafi i know tum ghusse mai ho but mind your language -------- tum jaante ho naa k mumma k baare mai main kuch nahi sunn sakti

tabhi mujhe Reeti ki ghar main postion yaad aayi aur mujhe abhi bhi halki si hope dikhi mery maksad mai kamyaab hone ki

Mai= Tou main gaalian q naa doon tumhain ---------- tumhari aik ghalti ki wajah sy maine lagbhag 10 bandon ko jaan sy maar daal hai ---------- ab saari umar kanoon sy bhaagta phirron gaa Choudhary alag dushman banain gye meri jaan k aur tera wo madarchod dada ---------- wo tou apne faide k liye maa bech dy dushmano ko mai tou phur aik nokar hoon tujhe lagta hai wo mujhe chodharion ko nahi soumpy gaa

Reeti= mai kasam khaati hoon aisa kuch nahi ho gaa ------------ naa police naa hi choudahrion ko koi tumhare kareeb aane dy gaa

Mai= aur wo kon tha jiss ny mery sir mai danda maara ------------- tumhain uss wakt nahi pata tha k meri bhala unn sy kia dushmani jo main unn ko maar raha hoon ---------- ye tou shukar hai k meri sakht jaan hai agar main wahan beshosh ho jaata tou aankh tou meri jahanum mai hi khulni thi (ghusse mai)

Reeti= Rafi sorry i know meri ghalti hai but please abhi tum yahan mazeed time zaiya naa kro ------------ car ko bhi damage huwa hai pata nahi kitni derr chale gi ------ lets go to hospital first tum side seat par aa jao mai car drive krti hoon

Mai= wah aur main ab tum par bharosa krron (main car ko start krta hoon aur un logon ki lashon par sy guzarete huwe khet mai gaadi daal k uss gaadi ko cross krta hoon aur sheher k kareeb tou pohnch hi chuky the ham tou jaldi sy sheher mai gaadi ly k jaane lagta hoon

Reeti= Rafi tum bharosa kro main bhala q ………….

mai= agar tumhain lagta hai k tum aisa kuch krr sakti ho tou khao apni maa aur apne baap Veer Thakur ki kasam k tum ko unki laash dekhna bhi naseeb naa ho agar tyhakuron ny mujhe kanoon ko becha yaar choudharion ko

Reeti= mai mom dad ki kasam khaati hoon k aisa kuch nahi ho gaa--------------- jab tak main zinda hoon naa iss case ki wajah sy tumhain koi choudharion k hawale kry gaa naa hi kanoon k hawale -------------- mai sab india ka number 1 lawyer hire kroon gi tumhare liye ------------- aakhirkaar tum ny meri jaan bachai hai tum ny mujhe samajh liya rakha hai ……………

mujhe ab yakeen ho gaya k ab aur kuch huwa na huwa mujhe itna wakt tou ye zaroor dilwa dy gi k main bhaag sakoon aur yehi soch k mai gaadi ko hospital mai seedha main gate k samne jaa k rokta hoon aur apni gun samait seedha hospital mai hi mai main gate sy entre hone wala tha k walin meri ankhon k samne andhera chaa gaya aur mery munh sy bass itna hi nikal paaya k

Ashad u allah iliah ha…………………………………………. aur phir mera jisam wahin main gate k samne dhadam sy gira aur aik cheekh goonjhiiiiiii

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Ye cheekh naa tou Reeta ki thi aur naa hi Saba yaa aur kisi ghar wale ki

ankhain tou meri bandh ho gayi thi magar ye cheekh mery zehen main bhi goonji aur iss cheekhne wale insan ki wajah sy main mand hi mand muskraya k ab agar golion ki wajah sy naa mara tou thakuron aur choudharion sy itna wakt mujhe zaroor mil jaaye gaa k main kahin door bass jaon yahan sy

aakhir ye cheekh kis ki thi ? …………………….

Rafi ka koi aisa dost jo kisi mehkme mai afsar ho yaa koi aisa jo thakuron jitna takatwar ho??

yaa koi aisa jo reeti sy bhi ziada thakuron k ghar mai pakad rakhta ho ?????

jawab k liye kariye intezar agli update kaa
 

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Update iss week do aani thi lekin laptop ki window ki you notes wala app bhi udd gaya tha so doobara zy likhi aaj .... Pics ki farmaizh thi aik Reader ki tou aaj pocs dhoond kar pics k sath update doon gaa
 

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Aap log yakeen kro yaa na kro par Wapis sy mera Sara Data udd chuka hai aur iss baar ghalti sy hi huwa hai q k main files ko save krne k liye doosri disk mai transfer krr raha tha aur aik file k chakkar main har cheez ki maa chud gayi aur meri subah 9 sy 2 baje tak ki saari mehnat ki maa chud gayi ------------- khair ab transfer krr li hai wapis sy likhna shuru krta hoon ---- umeed hai k kal aapko update sahi sy mil jaaye gi -- beherhaal filhal k liye khuda hafiz
 
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