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adhyaay 30: jeevan bhar ke lie ek paropakaaree
"mere paas aksar aane ka vaada karo, theek hai? saptaah mein kam se kam ek ya do baar to theek hai," ledee kailista ne apane pote ko gale lagaate hue kaha.

"samajh gaee, daadee," tharteen ne javaab diya. "main agalee baar remee ko bhee laoongee. mujhe yakeen hai ki vah aapase milakar khush hogee."

"to main isaka intazaar karoongee," ledee kailista ne kaha. "hans, behatar hoga ki tum zaayan ke sampark mein raho, taaki ham usakee yaatraon ka kaaryakram bana saken, theek hai?"

"haan, meree ledee." hans ne sveekrti mein apana sir jhukaaya.

alavida kahane ke baad, tharteen aakhirakaar leventis nivaas se chale gae. haalaanki, jab ve chale gae, to unhonne kaheen se do logon kee nazar ko mahasoos kiya.

yah maikal aur vah boodha aadamee, aarthar ho sakata hai, tharteen ne socha. aisa lagata hai ki is jagah par meree yaatra ne faayada uthaaya hai.

vah na keval apanee daadee ke saath ek majaboot sambandh banaane mein saksham tha, balki vah parivaar ke kulapati, saath hee apane sabase bade bete par bhee ek chhaap chhodane mein saksham tha.

paanch minat baad...

"yahaan aap le lo, yuva maastar," hans ne sheeshee tharteen ko dee, jisamen ledee kailista ne apane khoon kee ek boond daalee thee.

paartee se pahale vah ise keval ek sankshipt nazar se dekhane mein kaamayaab raha tha. lekin ab, ladaka aakhirakaar ise kareeb se dekhane mein saksham tha.

jaisa ki mainne ummeed kee thee, jahar pahale se hee usake poore shareer mein phail gaya hai, tharteen ne socha. ab mujhe samajh mein aaya ki doktar keval jahar ko dabaane mein saksham kyon the aur ise theek se khatm nahin kar pae. jahar mein ek abhishaap bhee hai. saubhaagy se, main is tarah kee kisee cheez se nipat sakata hoon.

hans, jo kaar chala raha tha, ne riyaravyoo mirar ko dekha aur tharteen ke bhaavon ko dekha. vah kisee bhee sanket kee talaash kar raha tha jo use bata sake ki ladaka apane guru ke lie ek ilaaj khojane mein saksham hoga.

lekin minat maun mein beet gae.

jaise hee hans terah se poochhane vaala tha ki kya vah apanee daadee ko theek kar paega, ladake ne apanee hathelee oopar kee or uthaee.

isase hans jo kuchh bhee kahane ja raha tha, vah ruk gaya. terah ne jo doosaree cheez kee, vah batalar ko kuchh na kahane ka sanket dete hue apanee ungalee hothon par rakh lee.

phir ladake ne kaar mein kaee jagahon kee or ishaara karane se pahale apane kaan kee or ishaara kiya.

haind ko turant samajh mein aa gaya ki paanch varsheey bachcha usase kya kah raha tha.

aisa lag raha tha ki kaar mein jaasoosee kee gaee thee, aur unakee baatacheet par logon kee nazar thee.

choonki batalar ko chetaavanee dee gaee thee, isalie usane terah se kisee bhee tarah kee baatacheet shuroo nahin kee aur apana dhyaan sadak par kendrit kiya. agale adhyaay pooree tarah se (n)ov(𝒆)l/bin(.)chom par apadet kie jaenge

paanch minat baad, ve terah ke nivaas par pahunch gae.

ladake ne hans ko ishaara kiya ki vah usake peechhe ghar ke andar chale aae taaki ve nijee taur par baat kar saken.

remee, jo usake aane ko bhaamp gaya tha, khushee-khushee usakee or dauda. apanee bahan ke tej kadamon ko dekhakar, tharteen muskuraaya.

use gale lagaane aur usake sir par thapathapaane ke baad, usane usaka haath pakada aur apanee maan kee talaash kee taaki vah thodee der ke lie usakee bahan kee dekhabhaal kar sake.

remee ek hoshiyaar ladakee thee, aur tharteen nahin chaahata tha ki jab vah ledee kailista kee haalat ke baare mein hans se baat kare to vah vahaan ho.

ek mauka tha ki vah galatee se isaka jikr kar sakatee thee, jisase usakee bhavishy kee yojanaen khatare mein pad jaateen.

saubhaagy se, remee ne nakhare nahin dikhae aur na hee us par jor diya ki vah usake saath aae. do minat baad, vah aur hans aakhirakaar usake kamare mein pahunch gae, jahaan ve aakhirakaar nijee taur par baat kar sakate the.

"theek hai, chalo un cheezon se shuroo karate hain jo tum pahale se jaanate ho," tharteen ne hans ko sophe par baithane ka ishaara karate hue kaha. "sabase pahale, zahar daadee ke shareer mein pahale hee phail chuka hai. yah dheere-dheere unake shareer ko kharaab kar dega, aur agar agale das saalon mein isaka ilaaj nahin kiya gaya, to shaayad unakee mrtyu ho jaegee."

hans tharteen ke anumaan se hairaan tha kyonki yah duniya ke sabase shaktishaalee heelar ka nidaan bhee tha.

usane ullekh kiya ki, agar usake shareer mein zahar nahin nikaala gaya to ledee kailista ke paas jeene ke lie zyaada se zyaada das saal hee bache hain.

batalar pahale se hee ladake kee buddhimatta se prabhaavit tha, lekin usake spashteekaran ke baad, vah yah sochane se khud ko rok nahin paaya ki ladaka bhee bahut gyaanee tha.upachaar kala.

is vajah se, use ummeed thee ki usakee maalakin aakhirakaar apanee peeda se ubar jaegee.

"main aapako vivaran se bor nahin karoonga, lekin haan, daadee ko theek kiya ja sakata hai," terah ne kaha. "aapako kaee saamagriyaan ikattha karane kee aavashyakata hogee, aur unamen se kuchh avishvasaneey roop se durlabh hain. choonki mujhe ek soochna Deni thi
 
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Annual Story Contest - XForum
Hello everyone!
We are thrilled to present the annual story contest of XForum!
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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 8000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

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Entry thread 25th March ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2025 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.

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