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UPDATE –28
Turnament day 2 love and thunder part 1
RECAP—Pichle update mai apne padha ki hostel mai sabi raj ke u achanak gayab hone ki wajah puch rahe the toh dusri taraf sonali ne paka irada kar liya tha ki ab wo Raj se is mamle ko shortout karke he rahegi ....aur wanhi jaggu puri planning kar chuka h ki raat ko jab Raj wapas lotega tab uspe hamla karega aur badla lega ..javed aur ravi bi raghu ke bharose h ab ki wo unka match mai harakar badla lega ...
Ab agaiiii
Sab morning mai ready the kyoki turnament ki wajah se senior classes ka 2 din off rakha gaya tha taki sab enjoy kare
Pti sir – congratulations to Raj ye final mai pahuch chuka h iska opposite wrestler last match jeet gaya but enjury ke karan out ho gaya h so hamara match ab 7 pm hoga toh aj hum morning free h toh aj hum shimla ghumenge
Sab khus ho gaye the aj ek ajib baat thi subhe se he richa bus raj ko nihare ja rahi thi aur Raj aj bilkul shant aur chup tha khair sabi bus mai chade aur nikal pade shimla ridge ki taraf main toh bus apne pti sir ki bike pe he tha aur mast asspass ke nazare dhek raha tha hum jaise jaise apne destination pe pahuch rahe the view bahut he pyara hota ja raha tha sab bus se utar kar sare ghumne lage main ek jagah pe baith gaya aur hills view ka lootf uthane laga richa mere pass aake baith gayi
Maine uske gale mai hath dalke usko apne se chipka liya aur wo bi aj bina bole mujse chipki rahi sayad uske man mai bi pyar ka ahsas jag gaya tha ya kal ki koyi baat uspe asar kar gayi thi ye toh ye khud he jantithi ya upar wala ... aur main man mai dar raha tha ki kanhi shweta ne sach na bata diya ho dono he ek ajeeb si kasmakas mai the aur ek dure ki taraf pyar se dhek rahe the sayad ye hamare pyar ka pahla ahsaas tha na wo kuch bol rahi thi na main ..bus ek dusre ko dhekhe ja rahe the aur ye khoobsurat wadiya aur suhana mousam bi hamra sath de raha tha hum dono ko he kisi ki parwah ni thi hum toh duniya se dur hamari pyar ki duniya mai bhade ja rahe the mere hoth dheere dheere richa ke hotho ki taraf ja rahe the aur uski bi halat aisi he thi usai ahsaasho gaya tha ki kya hone wala h mere dil ki dhadkan tez hoti ja rahi thi meri jindgi ka pahla kiss tha aur uska bi richa ki ankhe band thi mere jism mai uski khusboo sama rahi thi mere hoth jaise he uske hotho se mile muje ek current ka ahsaas huva mere hoth puri trah uske hotho se judh gaye the meri ankhe bi band ho gayi thi main swarg mai pahuch chuka tha mere hoth richa ke hotho ke ras ko pi rahe the aur muje sahad ki mithas ka ahsas ho raha tha humai pata he ni laga ki kitni dair ho gayi h main jab dheere se piche huva tab bi richa ki ankhe band thi usne ankhe kholke meri taraf dhekha usko meri ankho mai besumaar pyar dikh raha tha khud ke liye hum aise he ek dusre mai khoye the is baat se anjaan ki shweta suchitra komal sunil kriti and deepika aur uska group hame charo taraf se gher ke khada h aur hamre is pure seen ko bade gor se nazdeek se dhek raha h
Sunil—abe kamine thodi jagah toh dhek liya kar ...
Main—bina dhekhe he bola hamesa meri lugayi mat bana kar aj toh bakhs de dhek ni raha teri bhabhi kiss de rahi h kabab mai log toh haddii bante tu haddaaa ban raha h dafa ho ja kuch dair...
Sunil—ek baar charo taraf dhek le phir boliyo ...
Maine upar dhekha toh fatak se khada ho gaya
Main—shwetaaa ... Deepika mam..i mean didi sorry mam sorry didi.....
Deepika—shant Raj shant
Mera sala popat ho gaya tha
Main bus nichi gardan karke khada ho gaya richa bechari sharm ke mare komal ko pakadke nikal gayii uska chehra pura sharam ke mare laal ho gaya tha wo toh nikal gayi aur sab meri khichayi karne lage
Shweta—bhai finaly kisskya baat h akhir ye maan he gayi apke pyar ke agai jhuk gayi ek saal lag gaya apko kiss lene mai ha ha ha...
Deepika-- little brother raj seriously r u in love i m so happy for u ...and if i m right it was your first kiss....
Main ab kya he bolta aur bhag gaya un sabse dur aur wo sabi bus jor jor se hans rahi thi ...hum phir jhakoo temple bi ghumne gaye wanha richa aur muje akele rahne ka time kafi mila hum ek kone mai akele baithe the
Richa – Raj
Main—hmm
Richa – main tumhare sath rahna chati hu whole life pata ni kaise but muje lagta h main tumahre sath khus rahti hu i
realy want you...
Main—bi tumhare sath puri jindgi bitana chahta hu richa i love u so much
Richa-- hmm i love u to raj hum kabi alag ni honge na
Main—jaan main ek simple ladka hu aur meri jindgi mai sirf tum ho aur dadaji h itni he jindgi h meri mere pass paisa bi ni h kya rah paogi mere sath kar paogi adjust tum ek bahut bade gharki ladki ho apne mata pita ki khwaisho ko pura karo agar wo maan gaye toh jarur karenge hum par kisi ka dil dhukha ke hum alag ni ho sakte h.....
Richa – mere papa ke pass bahut paisa h main rah lungi main khus hu u love me bus
Maine—uske hotho ko phir se chumna shuru kar diya aur thodi dair baad kaha abi time h tum aram se soch ke confirm karna main 12th class mai ayenge tab batana taki hum agai ki life ka decied kar sake aur apni family se bi puch ache se puch lena kyoki unki khusi sabse upar h..... Unhone tumhe is layak banaya h toh tumhe bi unhe khus rakhna chahiye....
Richa --- hmmm
Aur hum ek dusre ki banho mai simte rahe aur aj ka pura din enjoy kiya ye mera sabse lucky day tha phir hum sab ne halka fulka khaya isbaat se bekhabar tha main ki ek black Scorpio hamara picha start se kar rahi h jo ek ane wale tufaan ka sanket h...khair muje kya pata main toh apni jaan ke hotho ke ras pine aur uske nashe mai itna busy tha ki sab he bhul gaya sach kaha h duniya ne ladki ke ate he dimag lode pe aur loda dimag mai ghus jata h...
Gunda--- bhai us lounde ke sath koyi security ni h aur ek khuskhabri h
Jaggu –jaldi bol
Gunda—bhai wo bus mai ni aya h ek teacher ke sath he ghum rahah bike pe hum asani se utha sakte h
Jaggu – ha ha ha ab marega sala kutte ki maut ..tikh h tu piche laga rah aur koyi chook ni sab plan ke heesab se hoga
Aur jaggu ne mood kar apne sathiyo ko aj ka plan bataya aur kaha koyi galti ni honi chahiye h us lounde ko jinda uthana h jayda uchal kood kare toh thukayi kar dena aur kal baki ke log drugs yanha safe leke aoge.
Sab ek sath ji boss aur lag gaye aj ki taiyari mai
In commissioner office –
Sonali – sir jaggu ka abi tak pata ni laga h aur ap us turnament mai as chief guest ja rahe h sir muje apke support ki kabi bi jarurat pad sakti h
Commissioner – sonali police ki duniya ke ilaawa bi duniya h dhekho usai aur muje kuch ni sunna tum chalogi jaggu aj ni toh kal pakda jayega par beta tum apni personal life ko bi thoda jiyo
Sonali --- ji sir apki baat ko kaise mana kar sakti hu main apse jab bi argue karti hu ap mere papa ki trah baat karne lag jate h...aur muje haar manni padti h
Commissioner –ok toh sharp 6.30pm pahuch jana aur civil dress mai ana ok har jagah police nahi.. ..
Sonali – khadi huvi aur salute kiya aur nikal gayi jate huve wo thane pahuchi aur puri police force ko alert par laga diya tha ki wo jaggu ko dhundti rahe ..
Din nikalte time ni lagta h sab masti karte rahe aur time ho gaya tha school jane ka
50 gunde sahar mai ek ek kar alag alag roop banakar enter ho chuke the aur ashram ki aur jane wali road par ek jagah ikkate ho rahe the unke pass lohe ki rodes hockey chain dande the kyoki jaggu raj ko jinda pakadna chahta tha is liye jaggu ne apne sathiyo ke sath ye hathiyar bhejna he sahi samja aur jaggu ke baki admi sahar mai se drugs lane ke liye ikhatha ho rahe the pura sahar aj gundo se bhara huva tha par kisi ko aahat bi na thi....
Time 5pm xxschool turnament place.....
Hum andar pahuch chuke the main bi dress change kar chuka tha 7 baje muqabla shuru hona tha main dressing room mai name announce hone ka wait kar raha tha
Aur 2 log apne bhade ke tatoo ko samjha rahe the dhek raghuu tu naak mat katwana kalu ki trah warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga
Raghuuh- bhai apne dhekha na maine isai pahle wale pahlwan ki kya halat ki ap bus baitho aur enjoy karo
Javed aur ravi – tikh h raghu agar dil khus kar diya toh 10 lakh dunga samja apni baat sirf 5 ki he huvi thi pahle muje badla chahiye h
Raghu toh jhoom utha 25+10 35 laakh milenge bhai ho jayega kaam
Guests ane shuru ho gaye the commissioner aur khel mantri bi aye huve the aur unke sath thi sonali jo charo taraf security ko bi dhek rahi thi tabi uski nazar sunil par padi aur usai wo chahra jana pahchana laga kyoki thane mai khoob hadkamnp macha tha isliye usai ache se yaad ni h. Araha tha uska chehra..
Sunil -; ye yanha kyo ayi h
Shweta – koun
Sunil ye police wali isi ne giraftar kiya tha raj ko
Shweta--- kutti Sali keede lagenge
Deepika – are kise gali de rahi h
Shweta kisi
Deepika – ok match start hone wala h
Itne mai name announce huva toh dosto aj ka turnament hariyana ke sher under 17 age ke state champion raghunath aur ek naya sitara jisne ate he apna jalwa dikhaya h jo dhekne mai bhale he takatwar kam dikhta ho par isne is turnament mai apne kuch he daanv mai wreslers ko chit jar diya h pesh h mr Raj singh heemachal se
Aur meri entry huvi local schools ke kafi students aye the aur hamari school ki toh 2 buses ayi huvi thi puri jagah full thi
Sonali – ye yanha kal itni maar khane ke baad bi aur ye student h is school ka toh main sach mai he galti kar baithi thi aur ye wrestler h tabi isne sabko utha utha ke fenk diya .....abi amatuer h jawani foot rahi h
Commissioner – tum bi wahi soch rahi ho jo main soch raha hu
Sonali – yes sir aur acha raha apne muje bula liya ..aur ek smile uske chehre pe agayiii
Main pahuch gaya aur samne raghu khada tha usne ek baar ravi aur javed ki taraf dhekha jo maine bi dhek liya
Raghu – bache tune galat admi se panga le liya h
Main –chal be bhade ke tattoo teri aukat ni h bhokne ki samja
Raghu—wo abi pata lag jayega
Refree ne sitii bajayii
Raghu meri taraf aya hum dono ke panje ek dusre ke hatho mai the kabi wo muje dhakel raha tha kabi main usai achanak usne muje gale se pakad ke niche gira diya aur mere chahre ko jamin mai dabane laga aur bola bacha h tu hawa mai kam uda kar maine usai kaha tere baap ne shuruwat he ni kari h abi tak udne ki phir maine uske hath ki pakad chudayi aur dubara khada ho gaya..
Sonali muje he dhek rahi thi aur man mai boli garmi bahut h tab manu jab isai haraye par lagta ni h isai hara payega ye toh bahut takatwar lag raha h udhar se sunil chilla raha tha ki maar sale ko sabi ladkiya jo jor se raj raj chilla rahi thi
Hum dono phir aamne samne the wo muje aur main usai dhek raha tha
Raghu – aj inhi loundiyo ke samne tuje haraunga phir dhekhunga teri ye akad
Main – beta khandani akad h tujse na niklegi ye mere khun mai aur mera khun ab khol raha h ab tuje dikhata hu akad
Main bhaga samne usne pakadne ki kosis ki main jump marke uske piche aya aur dheere se uske sar pe tapli mari wo phir palta main phir uske piche tha phir se uske pichwade pe chapat mari ye seen dhek sab jor se hasne lage the jisai raghu gusai mai pagal saand ki trah ho gaya tha jo main chahta tha is baar jaise he usne muje pakadna chaha maine uska hath pakadkar jor se patka wo khada huva he tha ki maine uske piche se jake pakad ke puri takat se fenka uthake raghu gira 6 foot dur jake main khadahuva aur uski aur dhek ke bola beta is khun ki akad dhek li na tune aja ek baar aur ho jaye raghu ki toh gaand he jali padi thi wo pagal he ho chuka tha ab ki baar jaise he muje pakadne aya main side mai hata aur uske kandhe ko apne hath mai fansa ke patka sale ko sidha niche wo farsh par gira aur jor se chillaya kyoki solder dislocated ho gaya tha uska main bina deri kiye usai phir uthaya aur dono hathse kandhe pe dala aur circle se bahar niche janha javed aur ravi baithe the wanha fenk diya aur unhe dhek ke bola har father ka ek god father hota h aur guess who wo main hu dont mess with nirwana jo shuru tune kiya usai khatm main karunga ....Aur main puri tarike se khatm karta hu wait and watch aur match over ho gaya tha sab congrates kar rahe the muje sonali bi ayi
Sonali—congratulations
Shweta—pahle bhai ko arrest kar liya sb congratulations main papa ko phone ni karti toh ap toh chodti bi ni bhai ko
Main – shant jhansi ki rani shant and thank you inspector mam
Shweta – ab ap jayiye
Sonali bechari bolna chahti thi par chali gayi aur jate huve bi usne ek look se muje dhekha
Prize distribution ho raha tha aur sonali duety. Ki wajah se chali gayi thi muje first prize 25 lakh ka check mila jiske milne pe sabne party mangni suru kardi thi aur maine sabko bola party mere tarike se hogi veg ya non veg ya jaise bi meenu ap decied karlo Sunday ko hogi jheel ke pass ok
Sab khus the ki maine ha toh bhari aur sab bus mai chad gaye aur nikal gaye maine pti sir se bola sir mithayi leke chalni h ashram ke liye toh unhone ne bi ha bhari school bus pahle ravana ho chuki thi...
Sonali ghar pahuch ke kapde change karke rest kar rahi 2 hour ho chuke the turnament finish huve
Tring tring tring tring lagatar sonali ka phone vibrate ho raha tha Sonali naha ke ayi thi aur usne phone ko ring hota dhekha toh uthaya
Samne se—mam hamla hone wala h
Sonali –chonk kar kya... kanha pe aur kispe
Samne se – shimla school mai competition tha aj uske andar participate kiya tha ek ladke ne
Sonali – jor se...maine pucha koun
Samne se---- aj winner tha wo naam ni pata
Sonali—kya.... kaha winner kis jagah pe hoga hamla
Samne se school ke raste mai hoga abi ...
Aur sinali bhagi lower tshirt mai he ......
Sonali ---main kuch ni hone dungi tumhe raj...........wo itni jayda soch mai agayi thi ki apni service revolver bi ni le gayi sath mai
Love ke baad ab ek thunder uth gaya tha bahar aasman mai sayad koyi tufaan utha tha bijliya kadak rahi thi half hour lagte h agar speed se jaye toh par aj ye half hour bahut lambe hone wale the....
Aj ke liye itna he next update action aur dialouge ki bharmaar hogi dhekna hoga ki sonali sahi time pe pahuch payegi kya hoga jab raj ka samna 50 logo se hoga....
2800 words ka update h koyi galti hi toh mafi enjoy kijiye
Mast update
Sub apna apna planning kr rhe hai tab to agle update me bahut hi maza ane wala haiUpdate 27
Turnament day 1 after fight and Day 2 planning
Recap – last update mai apne Dhekha ki ek galat fahmi ke chalte sonali ne Raj ko giraftar kar liya aur thane mai usko maro aur is action ka reaction bahut bura huva state ke minister aur sab bade adhikari thane mai aa pahuche aur guruji ki entry huvi jiske baad sonali ka marna tay tha aur raj jaise he usai marne laga tabi joginder ka call aya aur dono ke bich kuch bate huvi aur Raj ne sanoli ko chod diya......phir sp aur commissioner ne usai samjaya aur sonali ne bi is mamle ko short out karne ki soch li h....
Ab agaiii----
Raj guruji aur sunil shweta sab car mai ja rahe the guruji alaga car mai the....
Shweta --- rote huve bhai ap tikh toh ho na hame pahle hospital jana chahiye dr ke pass ..
Main—maine usko side se apne gale se lagaya aur kaha dhek main bilkul tikh hu tere samne hu itni chot mere liye kuch ni h rote ni h
Sunil--- chup tha phir gusai se bola wo pichle ek hour se he ro rahi h jab se tere pakde jane ki baat pata lagi h isne uncle ko bi call kiya tha..
Main--- shweta chup ho ja dhek main tikh hu aur uncle se meri baat ho gayi h unhi ke call ate he muje chod diya tha unke call pe minister sp sab agaye the
Shweta – ha dhekha tha maine ap agai se aisa kuch ni karenge aur aj ke baad in class ki chudailo se dur rahenge gandi ladkiya jinhe bolne ka bi akal ni h gamandi amir ghar ki kutiya kanhi ki galich Sali ....
Sunil aur maindono he hairan the ki aj isne gali di hame itne saal sath ho gaye the pahli baar isne aisa kiya h
Aise he hum shweta ko pahle hostle chod ke aye aur usai kah diya tha ki thane wali baat kisi ko ni batayegi koyi kuch puche toh koyi kahani suna dena....
In ashram
Guruji --- sunil ye oshidi usai laga dena aur ye goliya usai de dena aur kah dena roj raatko isai niyamait roop se yani regular le
Sunil ji guri ji
Guruji – putra aise he uske sath rahna tumhe chupkar uska sath dena h tumhari hakikat kisi ko na pata lage sabko yahi lage ki raj busakela h aur tum uske sath padhte ho Ab jao ...aram karo
Main aram se leta huva tha sunil aya aur oshidi uske hath mai thi meri pith mai lagane laga
Main—sale lugayi mat bana kar har waqt wo bi aise react ni karti jaise tu karta h itni bhundii sakal bana ke.
Usne itna suna aur jor jor se ragad ke lagane laga aur muje dard aur jabardast jalan hone lagi
Main—galti ho gayi sorry sorry dubara ni bolunga na tokunga
Sunil – unsabko aj mar dena chahiye tha samja tu nahi rokta toh sab mare ja chuke hota dubara roka na toh tere he pichwade mai daal dunga chaku..
Main – tikh h bhai kaha na dubara ni rokunga waise us inspector ki aukat usai maine dikha di thi par bhai uske bare mai jaanke yar hamdardi ho gayi us sai aur sabi uski tarif he kar rahe the ki imandar h heematwali h acha laga ki koyi toh imandar h aur sanbse badi baat joginder uncle ne mana kiya usai kuch karne se isliye chod diya bhaiii kuch bi ho yaar sunil inspector bahut hot thi
Sunil --- itni maar khali tune abi bi hot dikh rahi h tharki sale. tikh h ab ye goli le le aur aram kar thodi dair baad khana khayenge ok main ata hu
Inhe chodte h aram karne dete h wanhi dusri taraf---
Jaggu--- ha bol kya khabar h
Gunda-- bhai wo sonali ne us londe ko utha liya tha
Jaggu—kyo usne kyo uthya puri baat ek baar mai bata samja
Gunda – ji bhai uski ladayi huvi thi mall ke bahar aise he puri baat bata ta gaya aur last mai bhai jab main thane ke pass pahucha toh pata laga SP khud usai chudane aya tha kafi bhari panga huva tha muje lagta h amir ghar ka ladka h isiliye sab aye the hame aur hoshiyaar rahna padega...
Jaggu--- amir ghar ka h toh kya marna he padega usai aur kal wo marega jab wo apne school ki taraf wapas jayega ham us sunsaan ilake mai hamla karenge aur usai utha ke yanha layenge aur phir in bhukhe kutto ke bich mai daal denge aur sale ko tadpta huva dhekhunga tu bus ye pata kar ke rakhna uske sath koyi security toh ni h na
Gunda ji bhai aj bi vaise security ni thi aur kal ka bi main dhayan rakhunga aur khabar kar dunga..
Jaggu --- ha tikh h aur sahar ke loundo ko ikkahta kar le drugs adde pe lana h kuch gadbad huvi toh wo police se bheedne ko taiyar rahenge aur hamara maal surakhsit rahega...
In hospital ---
Sonali --- aj ke liye jo huva uske liye maafii mangti hu
Havaldar – mam hum jante h ki ap kya ho aur kaisi ho isliye ap itna nahi soche apki toh khud jaan badi muskil se bachi h aur isi bahane hame rest mil jayega hadiya tuti h wapas jud jayengi puri trah se ...ap rest kijiye jaggu ko pakadna h abi ..
Sonali – ok
Aur wo police jeep main ghar nikal gayi raste mai man mai sochti ja rahi thi ki mr Raj ab tumsee dubara milna he padega akhir tum chij kya ho jo kam umar mai bi police walo se bheed gaye aur ek hour mai he itna hadkamnp macha diya .who r u Raj ...aur sonali chahre pe ek muskaan thi jo sayad kisi ka bi katal karne ke liye kaafi thi kyoki sonali khud bla ki khoobshurti ki malkin jo thi uski 34 ki breast 28 ki kamar fair rang aur police ki vardi mai kayamat he lagti thi....
In hostel
Dhek shweta tu bata rahi h ya nahi...ye thi kriti jo lagatar shweta se raj ke bare mai puche ja rahi thi kyoki sabko raj jab ho mall mai halafulka khane gaye the uske baad se ni mila tha isilye sab sheta se puchne uske piche room mai aagaye the .Richa komal suchitra aur kuch senior girls thi jo uske room mai ayi thi
Deepika—shweta bata de please
Shweta--- ok pahle kriti tu baith ja toh sun bhai ka thode pareshan the isliye hum wanha se ghumne kanhi aur chale gaye the...
Deepika aur sabi bus itni si baat
Shweta—aur kya humne khoob enjoy kiya ek taxi se hum sunset point gaye wanha kya nazara tha humghume phire phir kuch halka fulka khake aagaye car toh tumne dhekhi he thi jo chodne ayi thi tumhare samne sunil khud niche bi utra tha........
Sab shant ho gaye the uski baat sunke ...
Dusri taraf boys hostel mai
Ravi – Teri aj ki planing toh fail ho gayi raghu mai dum h ya ni ya wo bi raj ke hath maar khake pada rahega kalu ko foukat mainpaise aur dene pade
Javed – ab muje thodi na pata tha ki wo chutiya kalu gaandu niklega ..koyi ni kal raghu he uska ilaj karega ...
Ravi – koyi ni agar wo na kar paya toh jaggu toh h he .hamara kaam har haal mai ho he jayega ... Humai toh bus intezar karna h Aur dono aise he bate karte rahe
Par in dono se dur ek shakhs tha jo gahri soch mai tha aur wo behad he chintit sakal banaye room mai ghoom raha tha aur thodi dair u he ghumte huve ...unhone kuch socha aur chal diye thodi dair baad.... Wo ek room ke samne darwaja khatkhataya aur ek shaks bahar aya ek kaam h usai karna h kal jab tak Raj apne ashram tak ni pahuch jata h bina kisi ki nazar mai aye uski rakhsa karni h koyi bi chahe koyi bi aye koyi bi usai khatm kardena h bina saboot diye raj ashram mai ya school mai h tab tak dikat ni h bahar aj bi log uske bare mai pata kar rahe h
Samne se ho jayega main kisi ki bi nazar mai aye uska dhyan rakhunga...
Kal ka din bahut kuch lane wala h shatranj ki bazi mai pyade bhidne wale h sabki day two ki planing ho chuki h. agai ke updates love and thunder se bharpur honge .......
UPDATE –28
Turnament day 2 love and thunder part 1
RECAP—Pichle update mai apne padha ki hostel mai sabi raj ke u achanak gayab hone ki wajah puch rahe the toh dusri taraf sonali ne paka irada kar liya tha ki ab wo Raj se is mamle ko shortout karke he rahegi ....aur wanhi jaggu puri planning kar chuka h ki raat ko jab Raj wapas lotega tab uspe hamla karega aur badla lega ..javed aur ravi bi raghu ke bharose h ab ki wo unka match mai harakar badla lega ...
Ab agaiiii
Sab morning mai ready the kyoki turnament ki wajah se senior classes ka 2 din off rakha gaya tha taki sab enjoy kare
Pti sir – congratulations to Raj ye final mai pahuch chuka h iska opposite wrestler last match jeet gaya but enjury ke karan out ho gaya h so hamara match ab 7 pm hoga toh aj hum morning free h toh aj hum shimla ghumenge
Sab khus ho gaye the aj ek ajib baat thi subhe se he richa bus raj ko nihare ja rahi thi aur Raj aj bilkul shant aur chup tha khair sabi bus mai chade aur nikal pade shimla ridge ki taraf main toh bus apne pti sir ki bike pe he tha aur mast asspass ke nazare dhek raha tha hum jaise jaise apne destination pe pahuch rahe the view bahut he pyara hota ja raha tha sab bus se utar kar sare ghumne lage main ek jagah pe baith gaya aur hills view ka lootf uthane laga richa mere pass aake baith gayi
Maine uske gale mai hath dalke usko apne se chipka liya aur wo bi aj bina bole mujse chipki rahi sayad uske man mai bi pyar ka ahsas jag gaya tha ya kal ki koyi baat uspe asar kar gayi thi ye toh ye khud he jantithi ya upar wala ... aur main man mai dar raha tha ki kanhi shweta ne sach na bata diya ho dono he ek ajeeb si kasmakas mai the aur ek dure ki taraf pyar se dhek rahe the sayad ye hamare pyar ka pahla ahsaas tha na wo kuch bol rahi thi na main ..bus ek dusre ko dhekhe ja rahe the aur ye khoobsurat wadiya aur suhana mousam bi hamra sath de raha tha hum dono ko he kisi ki parwah ni thi hum toh duniya se dur hamari pyar ki duniya mai bhade ja rahe the mere hoth dheere dheere richa ke hotho ki taraf ja rahe the aur uski bi halat aisi he thi usai ahsaasho gaya tha ki kya hone wala h mere dil ki dhadkan tez hoti ja rahi thi meri jindgi ka pahla kiss tha aur uska bi richa ki ankhe band thi mere jism mai uski khusboo sama rahi thi mere hoth jaise he uske hotho se mile muje ek current ka ahsaas huva mere hoth puri trah uske hotho se judh gaye the meri ankhe bi band ho gayi thi main swarg mai pahuch chuka tha mere hoth richa ke hotho ke ras ko pi rahe the aur muje sahad ki mithas ka ahsas ho raha tha humai pata he ni laga ki kitni dair ho gayi h main jab dheere se piche huva tab bi richa ki ankhe band thi usne ankhe kholke meri taraf dhekha usko meri ankho mai besumaar pyar dikh raha tha khud ke liye hum aise he ek dusre mai khoye the is baat se anjaan ki shweta suchitra komal sunil kriti and deepika aur uska group hame charo taraf se gher ke khada h aur hamre is pure seen ko bade gor se nazdeek se dhek raha h
Sunil—abe kamine thodi jagah toh dhek liya kar ...
Main—bina dhekhe he bola hamesa meri lugayi mat bana kar aj toh bakhs de dhek ni raha teri bhabhi kiss de rahi h kabab mai log toh haddii bante tu haddaaa ban raha h dafa ho ja kuch dair...
Sunil—ek baar charo taraf dhek le phir boliyo ...
Maine upar dhekha toh fatak se khada ho gaya
Main—shwetaaa ... Deepika mam..i mean didi sorry mam sorry didi.....
Deepika—shant Raj shant
Mera sala popat ho gaya tha
Main bus nichi gardan karke khada ho gaya richa bechari sharm ke mare komal ko pakadke nikal gayii uska chehra pura sharam ke mare laal ho gaya tha wo toh nikal gayi aur sab meri khichayi karne lage
Shweta—bhai finaly kiss
Deepika-- little brother raj seriously r u in love i m so happy for u ...and if i m right it was your first kiss....
Main ab kya he bolta aur bhag gaya un sabse dur aur wo sabi bus jor jor se hans rahi thi ...hum phir jhakoo temple bi ghumne gaye wanha richa aur muje akele rahne ka time kafi mila hum ek kone mai akele baithe the
Richa – Raj
Main—hmm
Richa – main tumhare sath rahna chati hu whole life pata ni kaise but muje lagta h main tumahre sath khus rahti hu i
realy want you...
Main—bi tumhare sath puri jindgi bitana chahta hu richa i love u so much
Richa-- hmm i love u to raj hum kabi alag ni honge na
Main—jaan main ek simple ladka hu aur meri jindgi mai sirf tum ho aur dadaji h itni he jindgi h meri mere pass paisa bi ni h kya rah paogi mere sath kar paogi adjust tum ek bahut bade gharki ladki ho apne mata pita ki khwaisho ko pura karo agar wo maan gaye toh jarur karenge hum par kisi ka dil dhukha ke hum alag ni ho sakte h.....
Richa – mere papa ke pass bahut paisa h main rah lungi main khus hu u love me bus
Maine—uske hotho ko phir se chumna shuru kar diya aur thodi dair baad kaha abi time h tum aram se soch ke confirm karna main 12th class mai ayenge tab batana taki hum agai ki life ka decied kar sake aur apni family se bi puch ache se puch lena kyoki unki khusi sabse upar h..... Unhone tumhe is layak banaya h toh tumhe bi unhe khus rakhna chahiye....
Richa --- hmmm
Aur hum ek dusre ki banho mai simte rahe aur aj ka pura din enjoy kiya ye mera sabse lucky day tha phir hum sab ne halka fulka khaya isbaat se bekhabar tha main ki ek black Scorpio hamara picha start se kar rahi h jo ek ane wale tufaan ka sanket h...khair muje kya pata main toh apni jaan ke hotho ke ras pine aur uske nashe mai itna busy tha ki sab he bhul gaya sach kaha h duniya ne ladki ke ate he dimag lode pe aur loda dimag mai ghus jata h...
Gunda--- bhai us lounde ke sath koyi security ni h aur ek khuskhabri h
Jaggu –jaldi bol
Gunda—bhai wo bus mai ni aya h ek teacher ke sath he ghum rahah bike pe hum asani se utha sakte h
Jaggu – ha ha ha ab marega sala kutte ki maut ..tikh h tu piche laga rah aur koyi chook ni sab plan ke heesab se hoga
Aur jaggu ne mood kar apne sathiyo ko aj ka plan bataya aur kaha koyi galti ni honi chahiye h us lounde ko jinda uthana h jayda uchal kood kare toh thukayi kar dena aur kal baki ke log drugs yanha safe leke aoge.
Sab ek sath ji boss aur lag gaye aj ki taiyari mai
In commissioner office –
Sonali – sir jaggu ka abi tak pata ni laga h aur ap us turnament mai as chief guest ja rahe h sir muje apke support ki kabi bi jarurat pad sakti h
Commissioner – sonali police ki duniya ke ilaawa bi duniya h dhekho usai aur muje kuch ni sunna tum chalogi jaggu aj ni toh kal pakda jayega par beta tum apni personal life ko bi thoda jiyo
Sonali --- ji sir apki baat ko kaise mana kar sakti hu main apse jab bi argue karti hu ap mere papa ki trah baat karne lag jate h...aur muje haar manni padti h
Commissioner –ok toh sharp 6.30pm pahuch jana aur civil dress mai ana ok har jagah police nahi.. ..
Sonali – khadi huvi aur salute kiya aur nikal gayi jate huve wo thane pahuchi aur puri police force ko alert par laga diya tha ki wo jaggu ko dhundti rahe ..
Din nikalte time ni lagta h sab masti karte rahe aur time ho gaya tha school jane ka
50 gunde sahar mai ek ek kar alag alag roop banakar enter ho chuke the aur ashram ki aur jane wali road par ek jagah ikkate ho rahe the unke pass lohe ki rodes hockey chain dande the kyoki jaggu raj ko jinda pakadna chahta tha is liye jaggu ne apne sathiyo ke sath ye hathiyar bhejna he sahi samja aur jaggu ke baki admi sahar mai se drugs lane ke liye ikhatha ho rahe the pura sahar aj gundo se bhara huva tha par kisi ko aahat bi na thi....
Time 5pm xxschool turnament place.....
Hum andar pahuch chuke the main bi dress change kar chuka tha 7 baje muqabla shuru hona tha main dressing room mai name announce hone ka wait kar raha tha
Aur 2 log apne bhade ke tatoo ko samjha rahe the dhek raghuu tu naak mat katwana kalu ki trah warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga
Raghuuh- bhai apne dhekha na maine isai pahle wale pahlwan ki kya halat ki ap bus baitho aur enjoy karo
Javed aur ravi – tikh h raghu agar dil khus kar diya toh 10 lakh dunga samja apni baat sirf 5 ki he huvi thi pahle muje badla chahiye h
Raghu toh jhoom utha 25+10 35 laakh milenge bhai ho jayega kaam
Guests ane shuru ho gaye the commissioner aur khel mantri bi aye huve the aur unke sath thi sonali jo charo taraf security ko bi dhek rahi thi tabi uski nazar sunil par padi aur usai wo chahra jana pahchana laga kyoki thane mai khoob hadkamnp macha tha isliye usai ache se yaad ni h. Araha tha uska chehra..
Sunil -; ye yanha kyo ayi h
Shweta – koun
Sunil ye police wali isi ne giraftar kiya tha raj ko
Shweta--- kutti Sali keede lagenge
Deepika – are kise gali de rahi h
Shweta kisi
Deepika – ok match start hone wala h
Itne mai name announce huva toh dosto aj ka turnament hariyana ke sher under 17 age ke state champion raghunath aur ek naya sitara jisne ate he apna jalwa dikhaya h jo dhekne mai bhale he takatwar kam dikhta ho par isne is turnament mai apne kuch he daanv mai wreslers ko chit jar diya h pesh h mr Raj singh heemachal se
Aur meri entry huvi local schools ke kafi students aye the aur hamari school ki toh 2 buses ayi huvi thi puri jagah full thi
Sonali – ye yanha kal itni maar khane ke baad bi aur ye student h is school ka toh main sach mai he galti kar baithi thi aur ye wrestler h tabi isne sabko utha utha ke fenk diya .....abi amatuer h jawani foot rahi h
Commissioner – tum bi wahi soch rahi ho jo main soch raha hu
Sonali – yes sir aur acha raha apne muje bula liya ..aur ek smile uske chehre pe agayiii
Main pahuch gaya aur samne raghu khada tha usne ek baar ravi aur javed ki taraf dhekha jo maine bi dhek liya
Raghu – bache tune galat admi se panga le liya h
Main –chal be bhade ke tattoo teri aukat ni h bhokne ki samja
Raghu—wo abi pata lag jayega
Refree ne sitii bajayii
Raghu meri taraf aya hum dono ke panje ek dusre ke hatho mai the kabi wo muje dhakel raha tha kabi main usai achanak usne muje gale se pakad ke niche gira diya aur mere chahre ko jamin mai dabane laga aur bola bacha h tu hawa mai kam uda kar maine usai kaha tere baap ne shuruwat he ni kari h abi tak udne ki phir maine uske hath ki pakad chudayi aur dubara khada ho gaya..
Sonali muje he dhek rahi thi aur man mai boli garmi bahut h tab manu jab isai haraye par lagta ni h isai hara payega ye toh bahut takatwar lag raha h udhar se sunil chilla raha tha ki maar sale ko sabi ladkiya jo jor se raj raj chilla rahi thi
Hum dono phir aamne samne the wo muje aur main usai dhek raha tha
Raghu – aj inhi loundiyo ke samne tuje haraunga phir dhekhunga teri ye akad
Main – beta khandani akad h tujse na niklegi ye mere khun mai aur mera khun ab khol raha h ab tuje dikhata hu akad
Main bhaga samne usne pakadne ki kosis ki main jump marke uske piche aya aur dheere se uske sar pe tapli mari wo phir palta main phir uske piche tha phir se uske pichwade pe chapat mari ye seen dhek sab jor se hasne lage the jisai raghu gusai mai pagal saand ki trah ho gaya tha jo main chahta tha is baar jaise he usne muje pakadna chaha maine uska hath pakadkar jor se patka wo khada huva he tha ki maine uske piche se jake pakad ke puri takat se fenka uthake raghu gira 6 foot dur jake main khadahuva aur uski aur dhek ke bola beta is khun ki akad dhek li na tune aja ek baar aur ho jaye raghu ki toh gaand he jali padi thi wo pagal he ho chuka tha ab ki baar jaise he muje pakadne aya main side mai hata aur uske kandhe ko apne hath mai fansa ke patka sale ko sidha niche wo farsh par gira aur jor se chillaya kyoki solder dislocated ho gaya tha uska main bina deri kiye usai phir uthaya aur dono hathse kandhe pe dala aur circle se bahar niche janha javed aur ravi baithe the wanha fenk diya aur unhe dhek ke bola har father ka ek god father hota h aur guess who wo main hu dont mess with nirwana jo shuru tune kiya usai khatm main karunga ....Aur main puri tarike se khatm karta hu wait and watch aur match over ho gaya tha sab congrates kar rahe the muje sonali bi ayi
Sonali—congratulations
Shweta—pahle bhai ko arrest kar liya sb congratulations main papa ko phone ni karti toh ap toh chodti bi ni bhai ko
Main – shant jhansi ki rani shant and thank you inspector mam
Shweta – ab ap jayiye
Sonali bechari bolna chahti thi par chali gayi aur jate huve bi usne ek look se muje dhekha
Prize distribution ho raha tha aur sonali duety. Ki wajah se chali gayi thi muje first prize 25 lakh ka check mila jiske milne pe sabne party mangni suru kardi thi aur maine sabko bola party mere tarike se hogi veg ya non veg ya jaise bi meenu ap decied karlo Sunday ko hogi jheel ke pass ok
Sab khus the ki maine ha toh bhari aur sab bus mai chad gaye aur nikal gaye maine pti sir se bola sir mithayi leke chalni h ashram ke liye toh unhone ne bi ha bhari school bus pahle ravana ho chuki thi...
Sonali ghar pahuch ke kapde change karke rest kar rahi 2 hour ho chuke the turnament finish huve
Tring tring tring tring lagatar sonali ka phone vibrate ho raha tha Sonali naha ke ayi thi aur usne phone ko ring hota dhekha toh uthaya
Samne se—mam hamla hone wala h
Sonali –chonk kar kya... kanha pe aur kispe
Samne se – shimla school mai competition tha aj uske andar participate kiya tha ek ladke ne
Sonali – jor se...maine pucha koun
Samne se---- aj winner tha wo naam ni pata
Sonali—kya.... kaha winner kis jagah pe hoga hamla
Samne se school ke raste mai hoga abi ...
Aur sinali bhagi lower tshirt mai he ......
Sonali ---main kuch ni hone dungi tumhe raj...........wo itni jayda soch mai agayi thi ki apni service revolver bi ni le gayi sath mai
Love ke baad ab ek thunder uth gaya tha bahar aasman mai sayad koyi tufaan utha tha bijliya kadak rahi thi half hour lagte h agar speed se jaye toh par aj ye half hour bahut lambe hone wale the....
Aj ke liye itna he next update action aur dialouge ki bharmaar hogi dhekna hoga ki sonali sahi time pe pahuch payegi kya hoga jab raj ka samna 50 logo se hoga....
2800 words ka update h koyi galti hi toh mafi enjoy kijiye
