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Adultery Poverty training

Policewala0110

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Hello friends my name is Anand Tata and I am a silent reader of this forum from many years and I read multiple stories. So I decided to write a wonderful story that entertain all xforum users and readers I am new in story writing so please show me my mistakes then try my hard to fix that mistakes.
Thank you once again
 
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Rita Kumar

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Hello friends my name is Anand Pathak and I am a silent reader of this forum from many years and I read multiple stories. So I decided to write a wonderful story that entertain all xforum users and readers I am new in story writing so please show me my mistakes then try my hard to fix that mistakes.
Thank you once again

welcome 💖
 

Pankaj Singh

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Hello friends my name is Anand Pathak and I am a silent reader of this forum from many years and I read multiple stories. So I decided to write a wonderful story that entertain all xforum users and readers I am new in story writing so please show me my mistakes then try my hard to fix that mistakes.
Thank you once again
Congress bro nice starting
 

Abhishek Kumar98

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Hello friends my name is Anand Pathak and I am a silent reader of this forum from many years and I read multiple stories. So I decided to write a wonderful story that entertain all xforum users and readers I am new in story writing so please show me my mistakes then try my hard to fix that mistakes.
Thank you once again
Congratulations Bhai for your new and first thread jaldi se start kardo bas hero ek rakhna ok
 

Policewala0110

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Yaar mujhe kaafi muskil aa rahi hai kahani likhne me phir bhi mai start karta hu mai aasa karta hu ki mujhe aap sabka pyar milega is kahani ke madhyam se mai is story me koi character guide nahi Dene wala kyoki isme bahot se character add honge jinko dekh kar aapko Lage ga ki yah mai character me se ek hoga lakin story is full of suspense and thriller so let's sart this story


CHAPTER 01

"Hello, Somya Medical College," Anand Tata anserwered the store phone.
"Mujhe Condom ka 1 box aur tissue ke 2 packet in room 1204 at 'The mall Road Hotel' me chahiye Jaldi " caller ne phone rakh diya.
Anand ne apna sar hilaya. Bahar abhi barish lagi Hui thi to usne order pack Kiya aur raincoat pahan kar chal Diya apne cycle par baith kar hotel ki taraf. Jab bah hotel pahucha to uski pant aur jute pure bhig chuke the lekin Khushi ki baat ye thi ki uska parcel abhi bhi sukha tha to usne aur der na karte hue room no 1204 ki taraf chal Diya . Room ke samne pahuch kar usne door knock kiya to door jald hi open ho gaya
"Ye raha aapka or" Anand dang rah gaya aur chup ho gaya kyuki saamne koi aur nahi balki uski beloved girlfriend Neha khari thi.
Usne ek white Cloak pahna hua tha, uske lambe, kaale, kuchh hair uske rup me dikhai de rahe the. Gel and shampoo ki feeki gandh uski nose par hamla kar rahi thi.
"Neha tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" usne samne khari Neha se puchha usko abhi bhi apni akho par bharosa nahi ho Raha hai.
"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho" Neha ne puchha. Uska dil toot Gaya tha aur usne ek kadam room ke andar rkha . Uske dimag me kaam karna band kar diya tha aur bah idher udher chalne laga.
"Kya hua" ek ladka robe aur slippers pahne door ki taraf aaya aur Anand ne usko jald hi pahachan liye.
"Tumhaari itni himmat ki tumne meri girlfriend ko chhua" anand se ab gussa control nahi hua aur bah chikhte hue Sahil ki taraf daur pada Usko sabak sikhane ke mansubo se.
"STOP" Neha Anand ke aage aa gayi. Thodi der ki ghabrahat ke baad usne khud par thoda control Kiya.
Bah uski ankho me dekh Raha tha " Anand mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag ho Jana chaiye"
"Break up " Usne use achambhit ankhon se dekha " Neha ham lagbhag ek saal se saath hai. Kya tum sachme mere saath abhi break up kar rahi ho."
"Haa mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag rasto par chalna chahiye " bah lagataar uski ankho me dekh Rahi thi phir tej awaz me “Tum surprised ho ? Tumahare pass na to pasise hai . Tum to muskil se apna giujara kar rahe rahe ho . Hamare beech kuchh bhi special nahi tha . Jab tak mai tumhare saath rahungee tab tak log mujhpar hasenge aur mai aisee life nahi jeena chahti . Mai apni abhi ke life se bahot khush hu. Mai 1st year me bilkul pagal thee jo tumhare saath relationship me aayi”

Usne Sahil ko hug kiya aur Anand se bola “Sahil ab mera boyfriend hai . Ab se mai tumhare saath koi bhi rista nahi rakhna chahti So Don’t bother me again in future”.

“Dekho ab tum uska beeta hua kal ho!” sahil ne alex ka majak udate hue kaha.

Anand, baha raincoat pahne mitti lage pante aur jutto ke saath khara tha , Usko is time aisa lag raha tha ki neha was right he was a complete loser . Sahil ne plastic bag uske haath se liya aur usme se condom ka packet anand ko dikhate hua bola “mai ek nice hotal me tahra hua hu aur meri girlfriend ka ex mere liye condom ka packet laya hai. Of course tumne meri bahot help ki hahaahaa”.

“tum abhi tak yaha kya kar rahe ho “ Neha Anaand par chilai.

“No , It’s good ki yah offend nahi hua. Maybe you want to see us making love” sahil ne use chidhaya.

Anand apne khayalo me puri tarah se gum ho chuka tha. Bah Dheere se ghuma aur jane laga

“Brother , tumne abhi tak paise nahi liye ? Chalo badhiya hai mujhe girlfriend ke saath gift bhi milla” Use Anand ko dukhi or nirash dekh kar bahot Khushi mil rahi thee sahil ne room ka Darwaja band kiya.

Jab Anand hotel se bahar aaya to bahar bahot barish ho rahi thi. Usne apna raincoat utara aur pani ki thandi bundo ko khud ko bhigane diya and apna dimag saant karne laga.

Neha ne use Chhod diya kyoki use lagta tha ki uske pass paise nahi hai . Aisi ladki ka chhod dena hi behtar hai par use sad kyu lag raha tha.

[Buzz Buzz!]

Uska phone pocket me vibrate hua. Anand ne phone ko jeb se nikala aur dekha , but stop jab usne number dekha to uski puri body message padhte hue kannp rahi thi.

[ After a review, The TATA family ne deciede kiya hai ki unka son Anand Tata ne Aadhikari virasat(entitled Inheritance) ko pane ki condition ko match kar liya hai. Ab se unke ASSETS par bapas se control bapis kiya jata hai]

Bean sized raindrop screen par girti hai jo likhe text ko blur kar rahi thi

Anand ka dimag bhatakne laga tha. Kya isi message ke liye bah yeh tak bhul gaya tha ki bah ek super-rich-kid hai . Bite saat salo se uski family uska Ankalan kar rahi thi jab tak bah unki harsh condition par khada nahi utar jata. Aur aaj bah din tha It’s finally over.

Whatever was his possession, it was his claim after all.
 

Riky007

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Yaar mujhe kaafi muskil aa rahi hai kahani likhne me phir bhi mai start karta hu mai aasa karta hu ki mujhe aap sabka pyar milega is kahani ke madhyam se mai is story me koi character guide nahi Dene wala kyoki isme bahot se character add honge jinko dekh kar aapko Lage ga ki yah mai character me se ek hoga lakin story is full of suspense and thriller so let's sart this story


CHAPTER 01

"Hello, Somya Medical College," Anand Tata anserwered the store phone.
"Mujhe Condom ka 1 box aur tissue ke 2 packet in room 1204 at 'The mall Road Hotel' me chahiye Jaldi " caller ne phone rakh diya.
Anand ne apna sar hilaya. Bahar abhi barish lagi Hui thi to usne order pack Kiya aur raincoat pahan kar chal Diya apne cycle par baith kar hotel ki taraf. Jab bah hotel pahucha to uski pant aur jute pure bhig chuke the lekin Khushi ki baat ye thi ki uska parcel abhi bhi sukha tha to usne aur der na karte hue room no 1204 ki taraf chal Diya . Room ke samne pahuch kar usne door knock kiya to door jald hi open ho gaya
"Ye raha aapka or" Anand dang rah gaya aur chup ho gaya kyuki saamne koi aur nahi balki uski beloved girlfriend Neha khari thi.
Usne ek white Cloak pahna hua tha, uske lambe, kaale, kuchh hair uske rup me dikhai de rahe the. Gel and shampoo ki feeki gandh uski nose par hamla kar rahi thi.
"Neha tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" usne samne khari Neha se puchha usko abhi bhi apni akho par bharosa nahi ho Raha hai.
"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho" Neha ne puchha. Uska dil toot Gaya tha aur usne ek kadam room ke andar rkha . Uske dimag me kaam karna band kar diya tha aur bah idher udher chalne laga.
"Kya hua" ek ladka robe aur slippers pahne door ki taraf aaya aur Anand ne usko jald hi pahachan liye.
"Tumhaari itni himmat ki tumne meri girlfriend ko chhua" anand se ab gussa control nahi hua aur bah chikhte hue Sahil ki taraf daur pada Usko sabak sikhane ke mansubo se.
"STOP" Neha Anand ke aage aa gayi. Thodi der ki ghabrahat ke baad usne khud par thoda control Kiya.
Bah uski ankho me dekh Raha tha " Anand mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag ho Jana chaiye"
"Break up " Usne use achambhit ankhon se dekha " Neha ham lagbhag ek saal se saath hai. Kya tum sachme mere saath abhi break up kar rahi ho."
"Haa mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag rasto par chalna chahiye " bah lagataar uski ankho me dekh Rahi thi phir tej awaz me “Tum surprised ho ? Tumahare pass na to pasise hai . Tum to muskil se apna giujara kar rahe rahe ho . Hamare beech kuchh bhi special nahi tha . Jab tak mai tumhare saath rahungee tab tak log mujhpar hasenge aur mai aisee life nahi jeena chahti . Mai apni abhi ke life se bahot khush hu. Mai 1st year me bilkul pagal thee jo tumhare saath relationship me aayi”

Usne Sahil ko hug kiya aur Anand se bola “Sahil ab mera boyfriend hai . Ab se mai tumhare saath koi bhi rista nahi rakhna chahti So Don’t bother me again in future”.

“Dekho ab tum uska beeta hua kal ho!” sahil ne alex ka majak udate hue kaha.

Anand, baha raincoat pahne mitti lage pante aur jutto ke saath khara tha , Usko is time aisa lag raha tha ki neha was right he was a complete loser . Sahil ne plastic bag uske haath se liya aur usme se condom ka packet anand ko dikhate hua bola “mai ek nice hotal me tahra hua hu aur meri girlfriend ka ex mere liye condom ka packet laya hai. Of course tumne meri bahot help ki hahaahaa”.

“tum abhi tak yaha kya kar rahe ho “ Neha Anaand par chilai.

“No , It’s good ki yah offend nahi hua. Maybe you want to see us making love” sahil ne use chidhaya.

Anand apne khayalo me puri tarah se gum ho chuka tha. Bah Dheere se ghuma aur jane laga

“Brother , tumne abhi tak paise nahi liye ? Chalo badhiya hai mujhe girlfriend ke saath gift bhi milla” Use Anand ko dukhi or nirash dekh kar bahot Khushi mil rahi thee sahil ne room ka Darwaja band kiya.

Jab Anand hotel se bahar aaya to bahar bahot barish ho rahi thi. Usne apna raincoat utara aur pani ki thandi bundo ko khud ko bhigane diya and apna dimag saant karne laga.

Neha ne use Chhod diya kyoki use lagta tha ki uske pass paise nahi hai . Aisi ladki ka chhod dena hi behtar hai par use sad kyu lag raha tha.

[Buzz Buzz!]

Uska phone pocket me vibrate hua. Anand ne phone ko jeb se nikala aur dekha , but stop jab usne number dekha to uski puri body message padhte hue kannp rahi thi.

[ After a review, The TATA family ne deciede kiya hai ki unka son Anand Tata ne Aadhikari virasat(entitled Inheritance) ko pane ki condition ko match kar liya hai. Ab se unke ASSETS par bapas se control bapis kiya jata hai]

Bean sized raindrop screen par girti hai jo likhe text ko blur kar rahi thi

Anand ka dimag bhatakne laga tha. Kya isi message ke liye bah yeh tak bhul gaya tha ki bah ek super-rich-kid hai . Bite saat salo se uski family uska Ankalan kar rahi thi jab tak bah unki harsh condition par khada nahi utar jata. Aur aaj bah din tha It’s finally over.

Whatever was his possession, it was his claim after all.
Nice plot :applause:

Par thoda se spelling par dhyan dijiye, as last me thoda samajh nahi aaya, specially message recieve honeke baad.

Keep writing :thumbup:
 

malikarman

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Yaar mujhe kaafi muskil aa rahi hai kahani likhne me phir bhi mai start karta hu mai aasa karta hu ki mujhe aap sabka pyar milega is kahani ke madhyam se mai is story me koi character guide nahi Dene wala kyoki isme bahot se character add honge jinko dekh kar aapko Lage ga ki yah mai character me se ek hoga lakin story is full of suspense and thriller so let's sart this story


CHAPTER 01

"Hello, Somya Medical College," Anand Tata anserwered the store phone.
"Mujhe Condom ka 1 box aur tissue ke 2 packet in room 1204 at 'The mall Road Hotel' me chahiye Jaldi " caller ne phone rakh diya.
Anand ne apna sar hilaya. Bahar abhi barish lagi Hui thi to usne order pack Kiya aur raincoat pahan kar chal Diya apne cycle par baith kar hotel ki taraf. Jab bah hotel pahucha to uski pant aur jute pure bhig chuke the lekin Khushi ki baat ye thi ki uska parcel abhi bhi sukha tha to usne aur der na karte hue room no 1204 ki taraf chal Diya . Room ke samne pahuch kar usne door knock kiya to door jald hi open ho gaya
"Ye raha aapka or" Anand dang rah gaya aur chup ho gaya kyuki saamne koi aur nahi balki uski beloved girlfriend Neha khari thi.
Usne ek white Cloak pahna hua tha, uske lambe, kaale, kuchh hair uske rup me dikhai de rahe the. Gel and shampoo ki feeki gandh uski nose par hamla kar rahi thi.
"Neha tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" usne samne khari Neha se puchha usko abhi bhi apni akho par bharosa nahi ho Raha hai.
"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho" Neha ne puchha. Uska dil toot Gaya tha aur usne ek kadam room ke andar rkha . Uske dimag me kaam karna band kar diya tha aur bah idher udher chalne laga.
"Kya hua" ek ladka robe aur slippers pahne door ki taraf aaya aur Anand ne usko jald hi pahachan liye.
"Tumhaari itni himmat ki tumne meri girlfriend ko chhua" anand se ab gussa control nahi hua aur bah chikhte hue Sahil ki taraf daur pada Usko sabak sikhane ke mansubo se.
"STOP" Neha Anand ke aage aa gayi. Thodi der ki ghabrahat ke baad usne khud par thoda control Kiya.
Bah uski ankho me dekh Raha tha " Anand mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag ho Jana chaiye"
"Break up " Usne use achambhit ankhon se dekha " Neha ham lagbhag ek saal se saath hai. Kya tum sachme mere saath abhi break up kar rahi ho."
"Haa mujhe lagta hai ki ab hame alag rasto par chalna chahiye " bah lagataar uski ankho me dekh Rahi thi phir tej awaz me “Tum surprised ho ? Tumahare pass na to pasise hai . Tum to muskil se apna giujara kar rahe rahe ho . Hamare beech kuchh bhi special nahi tha . Jab tak mai tumhare saath rahungee tab tak log mujhpar hasenge aur mai aisee life nahi jeena chahti . Mai apni abhi ke life se bahot khush hu. Mai 1st year me bilkul pagal thee jo tumhare saath relationship me aayi”

Usne Sahil ko hug kiya aur Anand se bola “Sahil ab mera boyfriend hai . Ab se mai tumhare saath koi bhi rista nahi rakhna chahti So Don’t bother me again in future”.

“Dekho ab tum uska beeta hua kal ho!” sahil ne alex ka majak udate hue kaha.

Anand, baha raincoat pahne mitti lage pante aur jutto ke saath khara tha , Usko is time aisa lag raha tha ki neha was right he was a complete loser . Sahil ne plastic bag uske haath se liya aur usme se condom ka packet anand ko dikhate hua bola “mai ek nice hotal me tahra hua hu aur meri girlfriend ka ex mere liye condom ka packet laya hai. Of course tumne meri bahot help ki hahaahaa”.

“tum abhi tak yaha kya kar rahe ho “ Neha Anaand par chilai.

“No , It’s good ki yah offend nahi hua. Maybe you want to see us making love” sahil ne use chidhaya.

Anand apne khayalo me puri tarah se gum ho chuka tha. Bah Dheere se ghuma aur jane laga

“Brother , tumne abhi tak paise nahi liye ? Chalo badhiya hai mujhe girlfriend ke saath gift bhi milla” Use Anand ko dukhi or nirash dekh kar bahot Khushi mil rahi thee sahil ne room ka Darwaja band kiya.

Jab Anand hotel se bahar aaya to bahar bahot barish ho rahi thi. Usne apna raincoat utara aur pani ki thandi bundo ko khud ko bhigane diya and apna dimag saant karne laga.

Neha ne use Chhod diya kyoki use lagta tha ki uske pass paise nahi hai . Aisi ladki ka chhod dena hi behtar hai par use sad kyu lag raha tha.

[Buzz Buzz!]

Uska phone pocket me vibrate hua. Anand ne phone ko jeb se nikala aur dekha , but stop jab usne number dekha to uski puri body message padhte hue kannp rahi thi.

[ After a review, The TATA family ne deciede kiya hai ki unka son Anand Tata ne Aadhikari virasat(entitled Inheritance) ko pane ki condition ko match kar liya hai. Ab se unke ASSETS par bapas se control bapis kiya jata hai]

Bean sized raindrop screen par girti hai jo likhe text ko blur kar rahi thi

Anand ka dimag bhatakne laga tha. Kya isi message ke liye bah yeh tak bhul gaya tha ki bah ek super-rich-kid hai . Bite saat salo se uski family uska Ankalan kar rahi thi jab tak bah unki harsh condition par khada nahi utar jata. Aur aaj bah din tha It’s finally over.

Whatever was his possession, it was his claim after all.
Awesome start
Pic's bhi add kijiye na
 

parkas

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:congrats: For starting new story thread.....
 
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Policewala0110

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Nice plot :applause:

Par thoda se spelling par dhyan dijiye, as last me thoda samajh nahi aaya, specially message recieve honeke baad.

Keep writing :thumbup:
Ok brother I will try my best to simplify the sentences in future thank you so much
 
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