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UPDATE-02
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Apne charo taraf ka aakalan karke ruthven ye pata lagane ki kosis karne laga ki vo kaha hai aur use thoda thoda idea bhi hone lag gaya tha lekin thand ne uske dimag ke sath khilvaad karna suru kar diya tha

Phate purane kapdo me tha vo aur yaha par barf gir rahi thi. Tapman minus me tha aur uske kapdo ke upar barf jamna suru ho gaye thi.

Abhi tak to vo naav chala raha tha mahmat kar raha tha eski vajah se blood flow ache se circulate ho raha tha aur vo thand se lad pa raha tha lekin jaise hi body ko aaram mila thand ne apna jalwa dikhana suru kar diya tha

Upar se shaam ka samay ho gaya tha matlab ye raat bahut kathin hone wali thi uske liye

Main rasta aur sadak chhod kar vo aisi jagah se chalne laga jaha par camera vagra bilkul nahi ho aur khud ko bachata hua koe theek se jagah dundne ki kosis karne laga

Uska dimag use apne aap bata raha tha ki use kis aur jana chahiye aur uske kadam apne aap us aur ki aur chal rahe the

Abhi to thand ka parkop hi chal raha tha ki bhukh ne bhi apna kamal dikhana suru kar diya. Dohri maar se koe kab tak hi lad sakta tha?

Esliye ab khana bhi dundna tha lekin paise uske pass kisi ke liye nahi the.

Koe agar use dekhta to bhi vo koe mangane wala hi lagta jaise uski halaat thi es waqt ya fir use koe lutera samjh ke maar deta

Uske sath kya kya ho sakta hai ye sab to bahut pehle hi usne soch liya tha aur uske sath hi ye bhi soch liya tha ki kab use kya karna padega agar aisi halaat bani to

Tabhi use ek ghar ke bahar aag jali dikhi jo almost apne ant par thi. Ruthven bhag kar vaha pahucha aur jaldi se uske pass bath gaya

Aag ki garam garam taap ne jaise usko ek rahaat di lekin ye jada der chalne wali thi nahi aur sath me bhukh bhi usko katheen prashan puchne lag gaye thi

Aisa lag nahi raha tha ki es raat ko usko kuch khane ko milega lekin fir khula us ghar ka darwaja

Jiski sirf ahaat matar ne ruthven ke kaan khade kar diye aur vo vaha se bhagne ki sochne lag gaya. Pair daudne ke liye aage aa chuke the ki

“Who are you? What you are doing here” ek behad surili aawaz uske kaano me gunji aur use rukne par majbur kar gaye aur uski six sense se bata diya ki abhi yaha koe khatra nahi hai

Lady- i am asking you. Ek baar fir us aawaz ne mahool ko sahadnuma kar diya
Aur pehli baar apni aankh utha kar ruthven us chehre ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paya

Samne doodh si dhuli ek ladki jiska pura sareer bhari bharkam kapdo se dhaka hua tha uske samne aaye

Ruthven ne turant hi us se najar hata li aur fir bade izzat ke sath bola
Sari baatein english me ho rahi hai yaha

Ruthven- maam thand bahut hai. Aag dekha to ruk gaya

Vo ladki ruthven ke kapdo aur halaat se jaan gaye ki esko pass na rukne ko jagah hai aur khane ko khana. Ye raah chalta fakir hai

Fir bhi vo kisi stranger ko apne ghar ke samne jada der nahi rukne dena chahti thi. Ek to vo ladki dusra vo akeli rahti thi aur tisri baat ki agar kuch anhoni ho gaye to es thand me koe apne ghar se bahar nikal kar use bachane bhi nahi aayega

Ye sab sochte hue usne ruthven ko vaha se jane ko bol diya jise sun kar vo bhi bina kuch bole sar jhuka kar mud gaya

Lekin jab us ladki ne use jata dekha to uske hath lagbhag kaap rahe the, kapde jagah jagah se fate hue the aur dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki bahut dino se bukha hai.

Lady- wait
Ruthven muda aur uske chehre ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paya

Lady- wait here
Ye bol kar vo vapas ander chali gaye aur gate band kar liya obviously apni safety ke liye

Dhan daram karna chahiye lekin khud ki safety pehle dhayan rakhni jada jaruri hai

Do minutes hue the ki gate ek baar firse khula ruthven jaha khada tha abhi bhi vahi khada raha ek inch bhi apne jagah se nahi hila tha vo

Ladki ke hath me ek wollen jacket thi aur ek disposable plate jisme khana

Ruthven ne jaise hi khana dekha vo ladki ki taraf badha jiski vajah se vo ladki thoda dar gaye aur piche ho gaye
“Vahi raho” vo apne gate se hi boli aur ruthven ke pair vapas ruk gaye

Ladki- ye yaha rakh rahi hu le jana aur yaha vapas mat aana aur aapki information ke liye bata du ki mere pass gun bhi hai
Vo ladki ne jaise use chetaya aur fir kapde khana rakh kar vapas gate band kar liya

Ruthven ko sab samjh me aagya tha aur ye bhi ki ye ladki bluff kar rahi hai aur ye sochte hi saalo baad uske chehre par ek halki si muskaan aaye

Fir jab use laga ki gate band ho chuka hai to vo aage badha aur jaldi se jacket pahan li aur fir vahi gate par bath kar bukhe ser ki taraf khane par toot gaya

Vahi vo ladki khidki se sab dekh rahi thi. Thoda dari hue bhi thi esliye chhup kar dekh rahi ki vo kar kya raha hai aur yaha se gaya bhi hai ya nahi

Ruthven ko do minute bhi nahi lagi thi khana sara khatam karne me fir waste plate vahi par rakhe dustbin me dali ek baar gate ki taraf dekha fir halki se sukriya karke vaha se aage badh gaya

Ladki ko bhi ab rahat mahsus hue aur khushi bhi ki usne kisi ki madad ki hai fir vo bhi khidki se hat gaye aur apne bistar par jakar so gaye

Vahi ruthven vaha se nikal gaya. Ab use thodi rahat mahsus ho rahi thi kyuki pet me khana ja chuka tha aur ab sareer par bhi kuch tha jo use thoda bahut thand se bacha raha tha

Dimag ache se kaam karne lag gaya tha aur ab vo apne bare me sochne lag gaya tha.

Vo kaun hai? Kaha se aaya hai? Kyu etne sare goliyo ke nissan hai uske sareer par? Aakhir kya pahchan hai uski?

Sawal to bahut sare the lekin jawab ek ke bhi nahi the uske pass aur ab tak to usne ye andaja laga hi liya tha ki es jagah se uska koe nata nahi hai.

Agar khud ko dundna hai to yaha se nikalna hi padega lekin kaise? Kaise vo yaha se nikal sakta tha?

Uske pass na to paise the aur na koe resources. To vo kaise yaha se nikal sakta tha aur sabse badi baat ki agar police ke hathe chhad gaya to kaise apne aapko bachega?

Vo innocent to hai nahi aur khud ke bare me kuch janta bhi nahi hai fir kaise vo apne aapko defende kar payega?

Esliye usne socha pehle thode bahut paise ikhathe kiye jaye vo bhi bina kisi ki najro me aaye bagar fir aage ke bare me socha jaye

Ab paise kamane ke liye ya to legally kuch kaam kiya jaye ya fir illegal tarika apnaya jaye lekin uske dil ne illegal tarike ko nakaar diya to

Jaise hi kaam ka socha sabse pehle to usi ladki ka khayaal aaya jisne use khane ko diya tha fir yaad aaya uske gate ke samne lage work dress ki jo kisi super market ki lag rahi thi. Ghar bahut acha bana hua tha aur salike se sajaya dikha tha jiska matlab tha ki vo jaha bhi kaam karti hai us jagah ko own karti hogi

Ladki kind hai aur helpful bhi to agar vo vapas use kisi needed situation par dekhegi to jarur uski madad karegi lekin us se pehle khud ko uske samne aisa prateet karna hai ki use mujhse koe khatra nahi hai

Main bas waqt ka mara hua hu jise sath aur kaam ki bahut jarurat hai. Vaise to super market me bahut log aate jate hai jo ki ruthven ke liye bilkul bhi achi baat nahi thi lekin fir bhi usne risk uthane ka fasla kiya aur

Bahut sari permutation and combination laga kar ye sunischit kar li ki vo ladki konse market me kaam karti hai aur fir vahi jagah dekh kar sone ki kosis karne laga

Thand bahut thi to bahar aise khule me nind to aane se rahi upar se sareer jo jakad raha tha vo alag. Aise me kisi tarah bas ye raat gujar jaye vohi bahut badi baat hai

Ruthven ki jitni buri halaat hai dunia ke us paar kuch logo ki halaat bhi us ke jaisi hi hai jinme se sabse mukhya hai humare doctor sahab

Ruthven to unke liye mar chuka tha aur unka ek matar safal kahlane wala subject bhi. Us se pehle bhi na jane kitno par test kiya gaya aur uske baad bhi bahut par test ho chuka hai lekin final stage to chhodiye pehli dusri stage tak nahi pakad pa rahe uske subjects

Waqt bahut raftaar se nikal raha hai aur etne paise aur resources kharab kar ke doctor ka ant bilkul bhi acha nahi hone wala ye vo ache se janta hai esliye jaldi se jaldi result dene ke liye din raat ek kiye hue hai vo

Lisa- doctor you should rest a bit. Aapne pichle ek week se ghar nahi gaye ho. Ye health ke liye acha nahi hai

Doctor- shut up and focus on your work. Agar hum es baar bhi fail hue to meri to sirf jaan jayegi lekin tumhre sath kya kya hoga vo khud bhi soch lo tum. Etne darinde nochenge na tumhe ki tumhe maut jada achi lagne lag jayegi esliye jab tak hum safal nahi ho jate tab tak koe ghar nahi jayega

Lisa bhi doctor ke aise bolne se kapne lag gaye thi. Mano uske aankhon ke samne vo drashay aa gaya ho jab bhukh bediya usne noch noch kar kha rahe the

Doctor- acha hai jo tumne bina bole imagine kar diya. Ab rest karne ka ya health ke bare me sochne ka bhoot utar gaya hoga tumhra?

Lisa- hum subject 001 jaise hi aur chahiye honge. Jo same conditions me gujare honge vo sayad humare liye jada behatar honge

Doctor- janta hu. Ek school ka bacha sadyantro ka sikar fir girta padta dubta pahucha samundar ke us par jaha mila use ek doctor jisne use di jeene ki ek naye vajah. Kya hi banda tha vo. 21 saal ki umar me usne vo sab kar dikhaya jo baki sab aaj tak nahi kar paye. He was one of a kind aur ab hume uske hi jaise aur chahiye tabhi humar udhaar ho sakta hai. Go and bring some new subjects aur check kar lena jo humare liye kaam ke ho sirf unhe ko leke aana baki kisi ko nahi.
Samjhi!!!!

 

[krish1152]

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[parkas]

UPDATE-02
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Apne charo taraf ka aakalan karke ruthven ye pata lagane ki kosis karne laga ki vo kaha hai aur use thoda thoda idea bhi hone lag gaya tha lekin thand ne uske dimag ke sath khilvaad karna suru kar diya tha

Phate purane kapdo me tha vo aur yaha par barf gir rahi thi. Tapman minus me tha aur uske kapdo ke upar barf jamna suru ho gaye thi.

Abhi tak to vo naav chala raha tha mahmat kar raha tha eski vajah se blood flow ache se circulate ho raha tha aur vo thand se lad pa raha tha lekin jaise hi body ko aaram mila thand ne apna jalwa dikhana suru kar diya tha

Upar se shaam ka samay ho gaya tha matlab ye raat bahut kathin hone wali thi uske liye

Main rasta aur sadak chhod kar vo aisi jagah se chalne laga jaha par camera vagra bilkul nahi ho aur khud ko bachata hua koe theek se jagah dundne ki kosis karne laga

Uska dimag use apne aap bata raha tha ki use kis aur jana chahiye aur uske kadam apne aap us aur ki aur chal rahe the

Abhi to thand ka parkop hi chal raha tha ki bhukh ne bhi apna kamal dikhana suru kar diya. Dohri maar se koe kab tak hi lad sakta tha?

Esliye ab khana bhi dundna tha lekin paise uske pass kisi ke liye nahi the.

Koe agar use dekhta to bhi vo koe mangane wala hi lagta jaise uski halaat thi es waqt ya fir use koe lutera samjh ke maar deta

Uske sath kya kya ho sakta hai ye sab to bahut pehle hi usne soch liya tha aur uske sath hi ye bhi soch liya tha ki kab use kya karna padega agar aisi halaat bani to

Tabhi use ek ghar ke bahar aag jali dikhi jo almost apne ant par thi. Ruthven bhag kar vaha pahucha aur jaldi se uske pass bath gaya

Aag ki garam garam taap ne jaise usko ek rahaat di lekin ye jada der chalne wali thi nahi aur sath me bhukh bhi usko katheen prashan puchne lag gaye thi

Aisa lag nahi raha tha ki es raat ko usko kuch khane ko milega lekin fir khula us ghar ka darwaja

Jiski sirf ahaat matar ne ruthven ke kaan khade kar diye aur vo vaha se bhagne ki sochne lag gaya. Pair daudne ke liye aage aa chuke the ki

“Who are you? What you are doing here” ek behad surili aawaz uske kaano me gunji aur use rukne par majbur kar gaye aur uski six sense se bata diya ki abhi yaha koe khatra nahi hai

Lady- i am asking you. Ek baar fir us aawaz ne mahool ko sahadnuma kar diya
Aur pehli baar apni aankh utha kar ruthven us chehre ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paya

Samne doodh si dhuli ek ladki jiska pura sareer bhari bharkam kapdo se dhaka hua tha uske samne aaye

Ruthven ne turant hi us se najar hata li aur fir bade izzat ke sath bola
Sari baatein english me ho rahi hai yaha

Ruthven- maam thand bahut hai. Aag dekha to ruk gaya

Vo ladki ruthven ke kapdo aur halaat se jaan gaye ki esko pass na rukne ko jagah hai aur khane ko khana. Ye raah chalta fakir hai

Fir bhi vo kisi stranger ko apne ghar ke samne jada der nahi rukne dena chahti thi. Ek to vo ladki dusra vo akeli rahti thi aur tisri baat ki agar kuch anhoni ho gaye to es thand me koe apne ghar se bahar nikal kar use bachane bhi nahi aayega

Ye sab sochte hue usne ruthven ko vaha se jane ko bol diya jise sun kar vo bhi bina kuch bole sar jhuka kar mud gaya

Lekin jab us ladki ne use jata dekha to uske hath lagbhag kaap rahe the, kapde jagah jagah se fate hue the aur dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki bahut dino se bukha hai.

Lady- wait
Ruthven muda aur uske chehre ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paya

Lady- wait here
Ye bol kar vo vapas ander chali gaye aur gate band kar liya obviously apni safety ke liye

Dhan daram karna chahiye lekin khud ki safety pehle dhayan rakhni jada jaruri hai

Do minutes hue the ki gate ek baar firse khula ruthven jaha khada tha abhi bhi vahi khada raha ek inch bhi apne jagah se nahi hila tha vo

Ladki ke hath me ek wollen jacket thi aur ek disposable plate jisme khana

Ruthven ne jaise hi khana dekha vo ladki ki taraf badha jiski vajah se vo ladki thoda dar gaye aur piche ho gaye
“Vahi raho” vo apne gate se hi boli aur ruthven ke pair vapas ruk gaye

Ladki- ye yaha rakh rahi hu le jana aur yaha vapas mat aana aur aapki information ke liye bata du ki mere pass gun bhi hai
Vo ladki ne jaise use chetaya aur fir kapde khana rakh kar vapas gate band kar liya

Ruthven ko sab samjh me aagya tha aur ye bhi ki ye ladki bluff kar rahi hai aur ye sochte hi saalo baad uske chehre par ek halki si muskaan aaye

Fir jab use laga ki gate band ho chuka hai to vo aage badha aur jaldi se jacket pahan li aur fir vahi gate par bath kar bukhe ser ki taraf khane par toot gaya

Vahi vo ladki khidki se sab dekh rahi thi. Thoda dari hue bhi thi esliye chhup kar dekh rahi ki vo kar kya raha hai aur yaha se gaya bhi hai ya nahi

Ruthven ko do minute bhi nahi lagi thi khana sara khatam karne me fir waste plate vahi par rakhe dustbin me dali ek baar gate ki taraf dekha fir halki se sukriya karke vaha se aage badh gaya

Ladki ko bhi ab rahat mahsus hue aur khushi bhi ki usne kisi ki madad ki hai fir vo bhi khidki se hat gaye aur apne bistar par jakar so gaye

Vahi ruthven vaha se nikal gaya. Ab use thodi rahat mahsus ho rahi thi kyuki pet me khana ja chuka tha aur ab sareer par bhi kuch tha jo use thoda bahut thand se bacha raha tha

Dimag ache se kaam karne lag gaya tha aur ab vo apne bare me sochne lag gaya tha.

Vo kaun hai? Kaha se aaya hai? Kyu etne sare goliyo ke nissan hai uske sareer par? Aakhir kya pahchan hai uski?

Sawal to bahut sare the lekin jawab ek ke bhi nahi the uske pass aur ab tak to usne ye andaja laga hi liya tha ki es jagah se uska koe nata nahi hai.

Agar khud ko dundna hai to yaha se nikalna hi padega lekin kaise? Kaise vo yaha se nikal sakta tha?

Uske pass na to paise the aur na koe resources. To vo kaise yaha se nikal sakta tha aur sabse badi baat ki agar police ke hathe chhad gaya to kaise apne aapko bachega?

Vo innocent to hai nahi aur khud ke bare me kuch janta bhi nahi hai fir kaise vo apne aapko defende kar payega?

Esliye usne socha pehle thode bahut paise ikhathe kiye jaye vo bhi bina kisi ki najro me aaye bagar fir aage ke bare me socha jaye

Ab paise kamane ke liye ya to legally kuch kaam kiya jaye ya fir illegal tarika apnaya jaye lekin uske dil ne illegal tarike ko nakaar diya to

Jaise hi kaam ka socha sabse pehle to usi ladki ka khayaal aaya jisne use khane ko diya tha fir yaad aaya uske gate ke samne lage work dress ki jo kisi super market ki lag rahi thi. Ghar bahut acha bana hua tha aur salike se sajaya dikha tha jiska matlab tha ki vo jaha bhi kaam karti hai us jagah ko own karti hogi

Ladki kind hai aur helpful bhi to agar vo vapas use kisi needed situation par dekhegi to jarur uski madad karegi lekin us se pehle khud ko uske samne aisa prateet karna hai ki use mujhse koe khatra nahi hai

Main bas waqt ka mara hua hu jise sath aur kaam ki bahut jarurat hai. Vaise to super market me bahut log aate jate hai jo ki ruthven ke liye bilkul bhi achi baat nahi thi lekin fir bhi usne risk uthane ka fasla kiya aur

Bahut sari permutation and combination laga kar ye sunischit kar li ki vo ladki konse market me kaam karti hai aur fir vahi jagah dekh kar sone ki kosis karne laga

Thand bahut thi to bahar aise khule me nind to aane se rahi upar se sareer jo jakad raha tha vo alag. Aise me kisi tarah bas ye raat gujar jaye vohi bahut badi baat hai

Ruthven ki jitni buri halaat hai dunia ke us paar kuch logo ki halaat bhi us ke jaisi hi hai jinme se sabse mukhya hai humare doctor sahab

Ruthven to unke liye mar chuka tha aur unka ek matar safal kahlane wala subject bhi. Us se pehle bhi na jane kitno par test kiya gaya aur uske baad bhi bahut par test ho chuka hai lekin final stage to chhodiye pehli dusri stage tak nahi pakad pa rahe uske subjects

Waqt bahut raftaar se nikal raha hai aur etne paise aur resources kharab kar ke doctor ka ant bilkul bhi acha nahi hone wala ye vo ache se janta hai esliye jaldi se jaldi result dene ke liye din raat ek kiye hue hai vo

Lisa- doctor you should rest a bit. Aapne pichle ek week se ghar nahi gaye ho. Ye health ke liye acha nahi hai

Doctor- shut up and focus on your work. Agar hum es baar bhi fail hue to meri to sirf jaan jayegi lekin tumhre sath kya kya hoga vo khud bhi soch lo tum. Etne darinde nochenge na tumhe ki tumhe maut jada achi lagne lag jayegi esliye jab tak hum safal nahi ho jate tab tak koe ghar nahi jayega

Lisa bhi doctor ke aise bolne se kapne lag gaye thi. Mano uske aankhon ke samne vo drashay aa gaya ho jab bhukh bediya usne noch noch kar kha rahe the

Doctor- acha hai jo tumne bina bole imagine kar diya. Ab rest karne ka ya health ke bare me sochne ka bhoot utar gaya hoga tumhra?

Lisa- hum subject 001 jaise hi aur chahiye honge. Jo same conditions me gujare honge vo sayad humare liye jada behatar honge

Doctor- janta hu. Ek school ka bacha sadyantro ka sikar fir girta padta dubta pahucha samundar ke us par jaha mila use ek doctor jisne use di jeene ki ek naye vajah. Kya hi banda tha vo. 21 saal ki umar me usne vo sab kar dikhaya jo baki sab aaj tak nahi kar paye. He was one of a kind aur ab hume uske hi jaise aur chahiye tabhi humar udhaar ho sakta hai. Go and bring some new subjects aur check kar lena jo humare liye kaam ke ho sirf unhe ko leke aana baki kisi ko nahi.
Samjhi!!!!

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update.....

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for another story bhai.

इस कहानी का नायक इक्कीस वर्षीय रूठवेन यादव है जो एक नेक , भलमनसाहत और छल - कपट से परे इंसान प्रतीत हो रहा है ।
अब तक के अपडेट से यही समझ आ रहा है कि इस लड़के के साथ न सिर्फ उसके परिवार वालों ने बेरहमी और सौतेलापन दिखाया है बल्कि कुछ अज्ञात शक्तियों ने भी इसके शरीर पर एक्सपेरिमेंट करने के बहाने काफी जुल्म किया है ।
इस लड़के के साथ ऐसा क्यों और किन किन लोगों ने किया है , यह जानना बाकी है । इस लड़के के शरीर पर किस तरह एक्सपेरिमेंट किया जा रहा है और इस लड़के मे ऐसी क्या खूबियां है , यह भी एक बड़ा सवाल है ।
और यह भी देखना है कि इस लड़के के अंदर कोई सुपर नेचुरल जैसी शक्ति तो नही !

स्टार्टिंग बहुत ही खूबसूरत है । आप के लेखन के प्रति डेडिकेशन और समर्पण भाव पर किसी को जरा सा भी डाऊट नही है। यह हम पहले भी देख चुके है।

दोनो अपडेट बहुत ही बेहतरीन थे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग।

 

[Junaid420]

UPDATE-01
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Ek ladke ka sareer kisi samundar ke niche bane ice mountain ke pass pada hua tha. Pura sareer neela pad chuka tha aur bahut sari goliyo ke nissan uske badan par mojud the.

Thand ki vajah se ek alag hi layer banne lag gaye thi uske sareer ke upar aur dekhne se to uske sareer me praan ho? Aisa lag nahi raha tha

Pata nahi vo kabse es samundar me bah raha tha aur ab jake use thand me dafan hone ka mokka mila tha lekin uski kismat etni bhi achi nahi thi ki vo aaram se mar bhi sake kyuki uske aas pass kuch jungle aadmi jo aa chuke the

Ek ne niche jhuk kar check kiya to uski saase abhi bhi chal rahi thi to sabhi ne mil kar use utha liya aur apne nivaas par le jane lage

Ek bahut bada samundar jiske aas pass life hone ke koe chances hi na ho vaha par ek ice mountain aur us par logo ka hona hume lagbhag impossible hi lagega lekin aisa yaha ho raha tha

Barso se yaha dunia se alag ye ek prajati rahti thi. Eske sareer aur atma ne jaise thand se dosti kar li thi tabhi to ye sirf janwaro ki ek khaal pahne bhi yaha survive kar pa rahe the

Ye ek tarah ki tribe thi jinhe tribu kahte the. Communication ka ek hi madham tha enko jo hum aur aapke samjh me nahi aa sakta. Jada sankha nahi bachi thi enki. Kuch ko samundari jeev kha gaye to kuch umar ke padaav ke aage haar gaye lekin abhi bhi ye apni pahchan bachane ke liye lad rahe the

Vaise to yaha koe aur aata bhi nahi tha jiske kuch reason bhi the jaise kisi ko jankari nahi hona sath me yaha aisa kya milega kisi ko ki vo yaha aaye? Kisi prakaar ke kajhane ki sambhavna bhi yaha nahi tha aur aas paas samundar ki satath ke jitne hi pani me pahad mojud the jo kisi ko yaha aane se pehle hi samundar ki gaud me sula lete the

Kisi tarah aaj itihaash me pehli baar koe yaha par pahucha tha lekin vo vapas kabhi uth bhi payega ya nahi eski sambhavna bhi bahut kam hi thi

Tribu tribe ke logo ne us ladke ko ek jagah lita diya aur nanga karke uske jhakham dekhne lage. Jo thand ki vajah se buri tarah sukh chuke the esliye hi vaha aag jalaye gaye aur fir ek bujurg ne us ladke par treatment karna suru kiya

Vo apni bhi bhasa me kuch kuch baatein kar rahe the jo hume samjh nahi aa rahi thi

Sari goliya nikal kar janwaro ke sareer se banaye gaye dawae us ladke ke sareer par laga di aur fir khaal se usko ache se dhak diya taki use thand na lag sake aur fir vapas apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door esi samundar me ek search operation chal raha tha jiski saari ummede toot chuki thi aur vapas jane ka order ka wait kar raha tha

Vo doond to essi ladke ko rahe the lekin ab sayad unhone bhi maan liya tha ki esko bhi baki sab ki tarah samundar ne apni gehare me sula liya hai

Unko abhi tak vapas aane ka order nahi mila tha esliye beman se hi lage pade the lekin vo apni manjil ke bahut door the

Agar kisi tarah vaha tak pahuch bhi jate to bhi mumkeen hai ki vo us ladke ko nahi dund pate. Lekin vo ladka unke liye bahut jaruri tha. Hazaro crore ruppee lage the uske upar research karne aur implement karne me

Aise me usko etni aasani se kho to nahi sakte the. Agar dead body hi mil jati to uspar hi thodi bahut research ki ja sakti thi aur agle subject par aur ache dhang se kaam kiya ja sakta tha

Esliye hi rescue team ko abhi tak vapas nahi bulaya gaya tha. Ek tarah se ek chamatkar ka hi intezaar ho raha tha ki aisa kuch ho jaye aur vo ladka unhe mil jaye

Filhaal to vo apni saalo ki nind puri kar raha tha. Jab se vo ek insaan ki jagah ek subject bana tha tab se hi usko na to sone diya jata tha aur na khane. Usko to jeene ka bhi hak nahi tha. Ek jocker ki tarah bas jo nachta ja raha tha aur ring master use nachata

Aaj moka mila tha sone ka to etni jaldi to vo uthega nahi.


Tribes ke logo ne to apna kaam kar diya tha ab to us ladke par hi tha ki vo kab uthna chahega esliye usko uski halaat par chhod kar vo log apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door kuch mahino baad

Doctor- nahi to mar nahi sakta. Mera subject hai vo maine experiment kiya hai us par etni aasani se to vo nahi marega bilkul nahi marega

Chief- aap aur main bilkul bhi realistic nahi hai lekin ab to mahine gujar gaye aur hume ab ye manana chahiye ki subject 001 ab mar chuka hai aur mission fail ho gaya hai

Doctor- main nahi maan sakta

Chief- aapke manane ya na manane se sachai badal nahi jayegi doctor. Behatar yahi hoga ki aap us se aage badhe aur apna mission continue rakhe

Doctor- he was special. Uske jitni na to kisi me sahanshakti thi aur na talent. Baki sab subject to first phase me hi haar maan lete hai

Chief- vo bhi to kahi se aaya hi tha na. Indian tha na vo? Aur suna hai indian mentally bahut strong hote hai? To kyu na hum vaha se hi aise subjects utha kar laye?

Doctor- bahut waqt aur paise kharch ho chuke hai.

Chief- vohi to main kah raha hu bahut paise kharch ho chuke hai aur agar ab aap fail hue to aapke sath kya kya hoga ye aap bahut ache se jante ho

Doctor- janta hu.

Doctor- lisa lab dobara tayar karo hum vapas se experiment start kar rahe hai aur chief mujhe aur bahut sare subjects ki jarurat padegi aur vo sab tough hone chahiye

Chief- ye last chance hai aapke pass doctor. Mujhe disappoint mat karna
Etna bol kar chief vaha se chala jata hai aur doctor apni secretary lisa ke sath lab me chala jata hai


Etne mahino ki gehri nind ke baad aakhir kar us ladke ke sareer ne movement karni suru kar di thi. Sayad nind puri ho chuki thi uski lekin jada hil dul nahi pa raha tha

Thand ne uske ango ko jakad liya tha bas ek aankh hi thi jo khul chuki thi uski aur apne aas pass dekhne aur samjhne ki kosis karne me lagi thi

Upar to bas khula aasman dikh raha tha jis se usne ye to andaja laga liya tha ki vo jaha hona chahiye vaha nahi tha lekin use hona kaha chahiye tha?

Na to use ye yaad aa raha tha ki vo kaun hai, na ye ki vo yaha kaise aaya aur na hi use ye pata tha ki vo kaha hai?

Dimag par jor daalne par ek bahut tej dard utha uske sar me aur ek dundhli si tasveer nikali dimag se jise vo pahchan nahi paya

Dard ne apna kaam kiya aur vo vapas behosh ho gaya

Uski hal chal se tribe ke log uske pass aa chuke the aur jaldi se apne hakim ko bula laye

Jab usne check kiya to ek rahat ki saas li mano vo jaan gaya tha ki ye ladka apni jindagi ki jung jeet chuka hai aur bahut jaldi uth khada hoga

Usne apne aadmiyo se apni bhasa me kuch bola aur fir uske sareer par ek lep lagane laga.

Ek bhi ang bina lep ke nahi chhoda tha usne aur fir vahi aag jala kar bath gaya

Jada der nahi lagi us lep ko pathar jaisa hard banane me aur hakim bade dhayan se pure sareer ka bathe bathe nirakshan karne laga

Jaise jaise vo lep kathor banta ja raha tha vaise vaise tribes ke logo ka excitement bhi badh raha tha aur vo jor jor se hukar marne lag gaye

Hu hu hu hu aur dando ki thak thak thak ko aawaz hi vaha gunj rahi thi
Aur

Ahhhhhhhhhhh karte hue us lep ko fadte hue vo ladka uth khada hua vahi tribes wale aur jor jor se hukar marne lage

Ek baar charo taraf usne najar ghumae aur fir uske sareer ne uska sath chhod diya aur vo ghutne par aa gaya

Abhi hosh me hi tha lekin khade hone ki himmat nahi ho pa rahi thi. Hakim me use sahar dekar vahi ek pathar par batha diya aur khud uske samne bath gaya

Dard to bahut saaf dikh raha tha ladke ke aankhon se lekin dar ka namonisan tak nahi tha

Vo bas najare uthaye charo taraf dekh kar khud kaha hai aur use yaha kya kya khatra hai aur sath me yaha se kaise nikal sakta hai ye analysis karne lag gaye

Dimag etni tej chal raha tha ki uski dhadkan fadfadane lag gaye thi lekin apne chehre par vo kuch bhi show nahi hone de raha tha

Ladka- main kaha hu?
Use idea to ho gaya tha lekin ye puch kar vo un tribes walo ke man ka bhaav janana chah raha tha

Lekin vaha se to koe jawab hi nahi aaya. Sab bas use ghure ja rahe the bol koe nahi raha tha

Ladka fir vapas khada hua aur “main kaha hu” es baar thodi tej aawaz me bola lekin natija vahi

Ladka man me behan ke lode hai kya sab yaha? Ya gunge bahre haaaaa es se aage vo apne man me bhi kuch bol pata uske dimag ki ghanti baji aur fuccckkkkk bas ye chhikhte hue vahi vapas bath gaya

Vo samjh gaya tha ki ye koe tribe ke log hai aur unka aur eska conversation sirf sign language se ho sakta hai kyuki na to vo kuch samjh payenge aur na ye khud

Tabhi vaha ek chhota ladka aaya jiske hath me ek polythene type ka ek packet tha aur usne us ladke ko dene ke liye hath aage badha diye

Ladke ne bhi be man se use le liya aur fir khol ke dekhne laga

Usne kuch paise the jo ab sirf naam ke paise bache the pani ne use buri tarah gala diya tha lekin us packet me ek bahut kaam ki chhij mili use aur vo tha uska passport

Ink puri fail chuki thi lekin vo naam aur photo bahut ache se dekh pa raha tha

Aur usme naam likha tha
RUTHVEN SHAW

Waqt aage badha aur ruthven theek hone laga. Tribes ke logo ne uski bahut madad ki aur ruthven ke dil me ek jagah bana li

Besak vo vapas me bol kar baatein nahi kar pate the lekin isharo aur emotions apna kaam bakhubi kar rahe the

Kuch dino baad ruthven ko bhi laga ki vo ab pehle se kafi theek ho chuka hai aur agar khud ko dundna hai to fir yaha se nikalna hi padega esliye usne baki sab ko isharo me apne jane ka bata diya jise baki sab ne bhi accept kiya

Uske liye ek choti lakdi ki boat banaye gaye aur kuch khane ka saman rakha aur use vida kar diya gaya. Es se jada vo use kuch de bhi nahi sakte the aur dekha jaye to unhone hi use uski jindagi vapas di thi es se badh kar koe kisi ko kya hi dega?

Ruthven vaha se nikal chuka tha aur chal diya tha apne apko dundne vahi dusri taraf mahino ki khauj been ke baad bhi jab unhe ruthven ka pata nahi chala to apne dil par pathar maar maar kar unhone bhi declare kar diya ki

Subject 001 is dead vahi ruthven kisi tarah kinare pahuch gaya aur pata nahi kitne mahino baad aaj usne vapas jamin ke darshan kiye…..

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