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Fantasy Bewash (meri atmakatha)

Hot_monica

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Hello readers , me ek nayi kahani likhne ja rahi hun jiski sirsak hai ' Bewash '.

koun kyun aur kaise Bewash hai kya hoga uski jindegi me . kaise bitegi uski din aur Raat sab janenge is kahani me .


asa karti hun sabko meri yeh nayi story pasand ayegi .

yeh kahani Puri ki Puri kalpnik hogi jisme kisi bhi manusya se samanta nahri rahegi agar rahegi to wo sanyog Matra hogi .


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:congrats: For staring new story thread...
 
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waiting for the next update....
 
Hot_monica

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SUNSAN ELAKE ME ADHMARI SI LADKI JISKI SARIR ME KAPDE SAB FATE HUE HAI AUR CHARO TARAF HAWSI KUTTE GHERE HUE THE . LADKI KI ANKHO KE SAMNE SAB DHIRE DHIRE UJHAL HONE LAGA THA . MANO LADKI KI JAAN NIKAL JAEGI KUCHH HI SAMAY ME .


USKI SARIR ME BAHUT HI SARE NAKHUN KE NISAN KE SATH DANT GADHE HUE TAJE TAJE GHAV KE NISAN BHI DIKH RAHE THE .


Aur thodi hi der me ladki ki ankhe Puri band ho gayi .


Ek ladki cheekh ke sath hi apne nind se jag gai .

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh


jab wo nind se jagi to Khan Khan ki awaj usse sunai di .


jab wo awaj ki aur dekhne lagi to payi ki uske hath aur pair janeeron me kaid hai .

aur uske sarir pe sirf fate kapde the .


yeh sab dekh uske bite hue samay ko yaad karne lagi .

kaise wo iss halath me pahunchi aur iss halath ki jimmedar koun hai .

kal Jo itne jakham the uske sarir me aj uski nisaan Tak nahi dikh Rahi thi . mano wo Wolverine ki beti ho par takat bilkul bhi nahi
 
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Hot_monica said:
SUNSAN ELAKE ME ADHMARI SI LADKI JISKI SARIR ME KAPDE SAB FATE HUE HAI AUR CHARO TARAF HAWSI KUTTE GHERE HUE THE . LADKI KI ANKHO KE SAMNE SAB DHIRE DHIRE UJHAL HONE LAGA THA . MANO LADKI KI JAAN NIKAL JAEGI KUCHH HI SAMAY ME .


USKI SARIR ME BAHUT HI SARE NAKHUN KE NISAN KE SATH DANT GADHE HUE TAJE TAJE GHAV KE NISAN BHI DIKH RAHE THE .


Aur thodi hi der me ladki ki ankhe Puri band ho gayi .


Ek ladki cheekh ke sath hi apne nind se jag gai .

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh


jab wo nind se jagi to Khan Khan ki awaj usse sunai di .


jab wo awaj ki aur dekhne lagi to payi ki uske hath aur pair janeeron me kaid hai .

aur uske sarir pe sirf fate kapde the .


yeh sab dekh uske bite hue samay ko yaad karne lagi .

kaise wo iss halath me pahunchi aur iss halath ki jimmedar koun hai .

kal Jo itne jakham the uske sarir me aj uski nisaan Tak nahi dikh Rahi thi . mano wo Wolverine ki beti ho par takat bilkul bhi nahi
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Nice update...
 
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parkas

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Hot_monica said:
SUNSAN ELAKE ME ADHMARI SI LADKI JISKI SARIR ME KAPDE SAB FATE HUE HAI AUR CHARO TARAF HAWSI KUTTE GHERE HUE THE . LADKI KI ANKHO KE SAMNE SAB DHIRE DHIRE UJHAL HONE LAGA THA . MANO LADKI KI JAAN NIKAL JAEGI KUCHH HI SAMAY ME .


USKI SARIR ME BAHUT HI SARE NAKHUN KE NISAN KE SATH DANT GADHE HUE TAJE TAJE GHAV KE NISAN BHI DIKH RAHE THE .


Aur thodi hi der me ladki ki ankhe Puri band ho gayi .


Ek ladki cheekh ke sath hi apne nind se jag gai .

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh


jab wo nind se jagi to Khan Khan ki awaj usse sunai di .


jab wo awaj ki aur dekhne lagi to payi ki uske hath aur pair janeeron me kaid hai .

aur uske sarir pe sirf fate kapde the .


yeh sab dekh uske bite hue samay ko yaad karne lagi .

kaise wo iss halath me pahunchi aur iss halath ki jimmedar koun hai .

kal Jo itne jakham the uske sarir me aj uski nisaan Tak nahi dikh Rahi thi . mano wo Wolverine ki beti ho par takat bilkul bhi nahi
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Hot_monica ji....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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dhparikh

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Hot_monica said:
SUNSAN ELAKE ME ADHMARI SI LADKI JISKI SARIR ME KAPDE SAB FATE HUE HAI AUR CHARO TARAF HAWSI KUTTE GHERE HUE THE . LADKI KI ANKHO KE SAMNE SAB DHIRE DHIRE UJHAL HONE LAGA THA . MANO LADKI KI JAAN NIKAL JAEGI KUCHH HI SAMAY ME .


USKI SARIR ME BAHUT HI SARE NAKHUN KE NISAN KE SATH DANT GADHE HUE TAJE TAJE GHAV KE NISAN BHI DIKH RAHE THE .


Aur thodi hi der me ladki ki ankhe Puri band ho gayi .


Ek ladki cheekh ke sath hi apne nind se jag gai .

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh


jab wo nind se jagi to Khan Khan ki awaj usse sunai di .


jab wo awaj ki aur dekhne lagi to payi ki uske hath aur pair janeeron me kaid hai .

aur uske sarir pe sirf fate kapde the .


yeh sab dekh uske bite hue samay ko yaad karne lagi .

kaise wo iss halath me pahunchi aur iss halath ki jimmedar koun hai .

kal Jo itne jakham the uske sarir me aj uski nisaan Tak nahi dikh Rahi thi . mano wo Wolverine ki beti ho par takat bilkul bhi nahi
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Nice update...
 
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waiting for the next update....
 
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