Fantasy Adventure of karma (by pintu bhai)

[king of darkness0411]

Hi dosto main yaha xp ki ek completed story ko post kar raha hu jisko pintu bhai ne likha hai story wese hi hogi jesi ki hai bas main usme images dal dunga


( note- mere old story ki baate na kare please )

 

[king of darkness0411]

INDEX 1

 

[king of darkness0411]

Main characters

Hero .. Karma



Soloman doughter Kristine




Mili lili two orphan sisters



Spirit king simba




Dragon king





Kingdom melbolina

King soloman

.brothers john henry

hilmont henry

john Henri Dougherty rose henri

Kingdom Brunel king marshal

Son sintel

Night gasper

Elf princess .. Lelina gowaski king genjo gowaski

 

[Last benchers]

Ye story b Mt likho..already 2, bar post ho gya hai ..

 

[king of darkness0411]

Ye story b Mt likho..already 2, bar post ho gya hai ..

Par koi puri complete nahi hai

 

[king of darkness0411]

update 1

Ye kahani meri hai main kon hu main bhi nahi janta kiu ke main ek
anath hu mera number hai 131 wa .. Ha number main din dayal
anathalay ka 131 was bachha hu kisi ko mere janam meri family ka
kuch bhi nahi pata..
Main ek aam sa bachha hu amathalay me siksha bahut hi sadharan
hai aur sirf gyan ki sikhaiyi gayi hai .. Babhar bichar adhayatmik gyan
deh charcha bas yahi sab yu kahe ke bahari duniya matlab sirf school tak hi hamara connection tha...
Main 12 me padhta hu anathalaya me bahut mehnat karke kuch rojgar
kiya jisse Maine ek achhe school me admission li thi lekin kuchi
samay me pata chal gaya ye mahnge school hamare jaiso ke liye nahi
hote isliye tin mahino se main school fees nahi bhar pa raha hu sayad
kal mera school me akhri din ho last date school fees bharne ka lekin
nahi bhar payunga anathalay ka bhi hal bura hai ..
Are ha Maine apna naam hi bataya waise to kayi naam se log mujhe
pukarte hai lekin jo naam mujhe pasand hai wo hai karma ..kiu ke
karm se upar kuch nahi hota Maine sirf sahna sikha hai isliye kabhi
jindagi se koi ash na rakhi school me bhi kabhi kisi se khas dosti nahi
rakhi na ladkio ki taraf kabhi dekha khud ki had ko janta tha..
Isliye na mera koi khas dost hai na gf hai..hamesha khamosh rahta hu
log jo bhi kehte hai sunta hu kabhi koi achhi baat kehta hai kabhi buri
main sab sehna sikha hai .. Bas apne karmo pe dhayan lagaye huye
hu kiu ke dil kehta hai mere karm agar achhe honge ek na ek din
mujhe sachi khushi hasil hogi..
Shubha shubha taiyar ho main school ke liye nikla mere kandhe
kitabo ka bag tha sadharan uniform tha jaise blezer hote hai kafi
mehnga pada tha 2 saal pehle kharida tha ..lekin abtak kafi sambhal
ke pehenta hu ..
Anatgalay se school 1 ghante ki duri pe tha paidal hi jata hu hu Aj bhi
ja raha hu ..
Kolkata ke bhid bhad bale rasto ko par kar badabazar ki aur badh raha
tha main highway se connected tha gadio ki raftar kafi tezz tha ..
Main road ke kinare kinare chal raha tha footpath pakad ke dil Rone
ko kar raha tha jeb khali tha aaj school ka fees dene ka akhri din tha
pura school mujhe hamdardi ke najar se dekhta tha main khud ko
unsab ke najro se bachane ki kosis karta tha lekin ye sambhab na tha
main anath kahi na kahi meri jindagi pe habi pad jati thi Maine
sabkuch kismat man liya tha aur apna karm kiye ja raha tha..
School pahuch te hi teacher ne mujhe sidhe head teacher ke pass
bhej diya

 

[Last benchers]

Par koi puri complete nahi hai

Kon kah Bhai complete nhi Hui hai.dangue part 2. Tk complete ho chuka hai...

 

[king of darkness0411]

update 2

Main aage badh gaya ..office me..
Head teacher.. Karma beta tum jante ho aaj tumhara akhri date tha..
Main... Ji Sir main janta hu ..
Head teacher.. Phirvi tum fees nahi bhar paye mere pass aur koi chara
nahi hai ..
Main.. Ji sir jo aap thik samjhe..
Head teacher apni kursi pe baith mera school leaving sertificate pe
Sign kar mujhe dete huye..
Head teacher.. Beta karma mayus mat hona padhayi jari rakhna yaha
nahi lekin government school me hi sahi..
Main.. Ji main samajhta hu teacher .. To thik hai aab main chalta hu..
Maine certificate liya aur usko dekhte huye school ke bahar nikal aaya
mera man dil khol ke Rone ko kar raha tha galati meri hi thi Maine
apne aukat se upar ka ash laga liya tha kisi tarah ek saal par kar liya
lekin final year me hi Jana pad raha hu bas ye saal par kar leta phir
sayad kahi Clark ki noukri mil hi jati lekin jindagi ne phirse ek baar
mera sath dene se mana kar diya..
School se nikal main pass me hi ek garden tha waha pahuch gaya ped
ke niche bag rakh hatho me wo certificate liye bas usi ko niharne
laga..
Mujhe hosh na tha certificate ko niharta raha kab asman me kale
badal chaye kuch ehsaas hi nahi hua tabhi joro ki barish suru ho gayi
tabhi kuch chote chote bachhe jo park me football khel rahe the wo
bhagte huye akar ped ke niche khade ho gaye mujhe bhi hosh agaya
pani ki bundo se..
Bachhe man ke sachhe unko dekh apna bachpan yaad karne laga
anathalay ke bachho ke sath khelna yaad agaya tabhi ek bachhe ke
Rone ki awaj sun Maine dekha to wo 5 saal ka ek bachha tha uske
sath sayad uski bahan thi wo bhi 6 saal ki hogi..
Bachha kisi aur ishara kar roye ja raha tha aur ladki usko samjha ne ki
kosis kar rahi thi lekin bachhe to bachhe hote hai unko jab jo chij
chahiye wo chahiye asal me pani barasne ke karan bachha apna
chota sa football khule me hi bhul gaya tha lekin ab barish ho rahi thi
lekin usko uski football chahiye thi..
Main apna GAM ek palms bhul gaya mujhe bachhe ki masumiyat badi
achhi lagi..
Main.. Kya naam hai tumhara..
Bachhe.. Bittu ..mera ball mera ball..
Main.. Koi baat nahi main lekar aata hu tum yahi ruko achhe bachhe
rote nahi..
Main ped ki chao se nikal karib 50 miter dur pade football ko lane age
baadh gaya aur jaise hi football lene jhuka tabhi asman me jod ki bijli
chamki aur boooommmmmm...
Roshni hi roshni dhire dhire meri ankhe khulne lagi lekin kuch bhi
najar nahi araha tha sirf roshni hi roshni jaise mere ankho ke samne
dhuye ka kohra chaya ho safed roshni ke dhuye ka..main kuch dekh
nahi pa raha tha main utne laga main khada ho gaya lekin mujhe wo
bhi mahsoos nahi hua main jispe khada hu Maine mere hath paw
mera Sharir dekhne ki kosis ki lekin wo bhi nahi dekh pa raha tha sirf
safed dhuye ya roshni ko chod ke ..
Tabhi ek awaj ne mera dhayan apni taraf khicha..
Awaj.. Putra ..
Main.. Kon kon ..
Awaj.. Putra putra.. Awaj jaise mere kano me gunj rahi thi kaha se
arahi kon keh raha tha kuch samajh nahi pa raha tha tabhi awaj phir
aayi..
Awaj.. Putra putra..
Main.. Kon bol raha hai main kaha hu mujhe kuch dikhayi kiu nahi de
raha main hu kaha..
Awaj.. Putra ye yamlok hai ..
Main.. Yamlok hahaha kon hai aap kiu mazak kar rahe hai aur mujhe
kuch dikh kiu nahi raha..
Awaj.. Tum yamlok dekh nahi sakte kiu ke tumhara jivan kal purn nahi
hua hai..
Main.. Matlab ..
Awaj.. Putra ek dev bhul ke karan tumhara jivan kal samay se purba hi
samapt ho gaya ..
Main.. Kya keh rahe hai main mar chuka hu kaise kab mujhe kuch
yaad kiu nahi..
Awaj.. Putra tumhara aksmik mrityu hua jiska tumhe bhi pata nahi
chala bidyut ke ek prahar se tumhara manav deh jalkar rakh ho gaya
aab tum sirf ek roshni ka ansh ho..

 

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