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[Raj_sharma]

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Raj_sharma bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Thank you very much bhai ji for your valuable review and support

 

[Raj_sharma]

Badhiya update

Captain ne gangsters ko pakadne ke liye tarkib lagayi ha jack shak ke ghere me aa gaya ha kya jack mila hua ha unse ya fir wajah kuchh or hi ha ab new year per dekhte ha ki kya captain sach ka pata kaga pata ha ya nahi ya fir koi jhatka lagta ha use

Kuch to natija niklega hi bhai, dekhte hai, aage kya ho dakta hai, Thanks for your wonderful review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Amezing update. Ho sakta hai plan success chala jae. Vese kafi log najar me to aa chuke hai. Romanchak.

Dhanyawad Shetan , aapke valuable review aur superb support ke liye

 

[Raj_sharma]

Kya bat hai Raj_sharma bhai itni shudh Hindi
Read karte waqt lag rah tha
Mai Kaha Aagya Hoo yar
Lekin lagta hai kuch naya dekhne ko milne wala hai story me

Yahi to hindi ki mahima hai pyare,Khqir der se aaye, per durust aaye, per aage se late kiua to chhodunga nahiYe ander ki baat hai.

 

[Raj_sharma]

Kafi dilchasp kirdar dikh rhe hai kahani me khas kar 2 mahine ka safar samundar ka jane ab ky hoga is safar me
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Jaisa maine pehle kaha kafi INTRESTING story hai Raj_sharma bhai maja aa raha hai

Sabse pahle to tumhara welcome hai story me, ab baat karte hai story ki, to iski theme hi rahasya or romanch pe hai, isme kafi interest aayega, to padhte raho
Thanks for your wonderful wishes and review DEVIL MAXIMUM bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Kya edit kiya?

 

[Raj_sharma]

kamdev99008
avsji

Aap dono ka review pending hai bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

HalfbludPrince manish bhai, aapke sabdo ka intzaar pichli story pe bhi kiya tha, or is story per bhi kar rahe hai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Samar Singh

 

[Raj_sharma]

Agla update kal milega dosto