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Bhai aap meri baat ka bura mat maniyega. Aap ko story ko acchi tarah se format kar ke likhna chahiye. Ye saare updates aapne bina kisi gap ya paragraph ke likhe hain. Iss wajah se mai story ko theek se padh nahi paa raha. Ho sake to pichle updates ko edit kar dein. Ya phir kam se kam aane wale...

रौनी भाई से एक शिकायत है कि वो अपनी कहानियों में इंडेक्स नहीं देते हैं। 😂😂😂 इसलिए ये रहा इस कहानी का पूरा इंडेक्स Page Nos: 1, 5, 8, 14, 16, 21, 25, 27, 29, 31, 36, 38, 43, 46, 51, 53, 57, 61, 63, 64, 66, 69, 73, 75, 78, 84, 88, 93, 105, 108, 111, 115, 118, 122, 125, 128, 129, 133, 137, 139...

Bhai, agar ye maa bete ki story nahi hai to category Adultery mein change karo.

Bhai to bina images ke likho, jaise ke apne first part likha tha.

Bhut acchi shuruat ki hai apne. Kripya update samay par dete rahen. 🙏

Bhai, update thoda bada do. Aur situations ko thoda detail mein likho. Sirf video pe sab kuch mat chhodo. 🙏

Bhai, bhut hi badhiya likh rahe ho. Issi tarah se kahani ko aage badhate rahe. 🤩

Bhai, yeh story Incest hogi ya issi tarah puri family ko doosron se chudta dikhaoge. 🙏

Story acchi chal rahi thi lekin apne bina wajah ke patients ke sath sex dikha diya, jis ki ke bilkul bhi jaroorat nhi thi. Ab ye story Incest story nahi rahi. Ye sirf mera opinion hai, aap story apne hisab se aage badha sakte hain. 🙏

Thanks a lot! I was looking for an index.

I thought this is going to be an incest story. But now you have changed it to something else. Also I don't like thook and all that stuff. I find it disgusting. :headache3: