Recent content by xtelm

Sahi dassan tan mainu zara v ni yad ki storyline aa 😂 na hi main naam wgaira parhda hun v scense ch kise de... Bas scenes wdia hunde with gifs tan kholda eh bookmark... 😂 Je tan shauk nu hi likhda ta veere jidda likhna likh bas continue kr. Je story ch koi interest aa involvement chahidi loka...

O bhra ewe tension na le. Oh ek hi c lehnde punjab wala... Ohna da kamm aa saale bina sense to entitlement ch rehnde aa, koi dasse bc mughala shugla da raaj khatm hoye ni 200 saal hogye... Ajao zameen te... Te ah deep nam da ta shayd teri side di hi gall kr reha c... Tu likhda reh yar... Wdia...

Saari storiyan te writer ron lagge hunde k loki comment ni krde te loki ronde k update cheti ni aunde ya plot sahi ni ja reha... Ek aa bandaa aa, mahine ch ek din aa ke update suttda, jama hi unrealistic jeha plot, par pure gifs wgaira paa ke, par muth maarn da jugad kr janda... Koi bc comment...

Ek tan saala khoon hi eho jeha na apne loka da... Ke 2 adata tan jaandiya ni... Ek validation lain di... Duja appreciate na krn di... Duje wali fer v smjh aundi aa a traditionally conservative and culture wulture spiritual and religious civilization wgaira rahi aa apni dharti... Tan loka nu...

I dont remember the name but around last year i guess, i was reading a story in hindi section where a poor guy had got some supernatural powers and his life started flipping after that. Best part was that it had sex scenes which included rough n wild conversations and abuses and that was good...

O bhra tu pehla purane parts de gif update krla yar.... Ethe kinne aa jehde shuru to read krne aye... Ohna nu sala ikalla link dikhda koi photo gif ni dikhdi. Teri story wdia aa... But ghoosi na bhor ah dhilla kamm krke... Ja ke edit kr purane part n update kr pics and gifs.

Story kyo delete krdi???

Yar thoda zyada overemphasizing ni ho reha religious identities te??? Highlighting identity thik aa... But specifically degradating based on religious identity i have seen first time in deai stories since old xossip. Baki site policies waleya nu zyada pta hou.

My first comment on any story. I mostly prefer to stay silent reader. But tera story likhn da style boht wdia aa bhra. Utto jidda tu pics use krda nal and jis trah da kind of out of box storyline imagine and deliver tu kita aa... Ghatt hi loka to hunda aa... Mostly sare ohi common storyline kudi...