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Chapter IV: The Shadow Heist Giles called Rat, a staggering, onion-scented drunk; he almost immediately started leering at Runa with fake bows, slurring, “M’lady, a vision!” He was polite but sounded like bragging about his ability, “Dodged ten gibbets, I did!” Runa grimaced, whispering in my...

Chapter III: Blackthorn We were following the river. The forest exhaled a fetid breath, its pulse a snarl of vines and rot as it was getting thinner with every hoofbeat. Whisperwind’s hooves sank into the muck, while Ember snorted as Runa pulled her rein. The air was still thick with last...

Chapter II: Black Forest The crack of dawn painted the horizon with a soft pink glow as we approached the tavern—The Sly Fox. The building nestled at the forest's edge, where the cobblestone road forked into two, each path disappearing into the dense foliage like serpents eager to swallow...

Chapter I: Liora As I was about to enter the throne room, the guards stationed outside stopped me. Presumably, something important was unfolding within my father's court—something I was not yet privy to. As I waited, my gaze wandered through the grand hall of Castle Valthorne. It was a...

Res for Index Chapter I: Liora Chapter II: Blackforest Chapter III: Blackthorn Chapter IV: The Shadow Heist

DISCLAIMER This is my original work, not copy-pasted, so treat it accordingly This is not erotica, so if that's what you're looking for, this story probably isn't for you. If you're not comfortable with advanced English, you may find certain sections challenging. My apologies in advance if...

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It is a really good point you have raised. Let me tell you, you can write an entire story with AI only. There are several AI programmes for that. In fact, a few are so advanced (paid) that you can hardly differentiate them from a real writer. But, for writing a story entirely through AI, you...

Thanks, dude, for reading my story and reviewing it. I'm glad that you like the writing style and the atmospheric build-up. I am also glad that you don't like the subject and you find it disturbing, you know what I mean. Thanks again for reading it :dost:

Vakharia, I’m honestly speechless after reading your review of A White Ship with a Red Sail. You’ve got me over here grinning, tearing up, and laughing all at once with your incredible words! The way you described Anurag’s Bollywood-hero vibes, Aarshi’s fairy-tale fragility, and that gut-punch...

Thank you Acronym :dost: so much for taking the time to read and review my story A white ship with a red sail. I’m truly grateful for your thoughtful and detailed feedback, which highlights both the strengths and areas for improvement. Your kind words about the bittersweet climax with the...

Thanks Aakash, for reading my story. Mujhe khushi hai aapko mera story ka plot achcha laga. Naration drag ho gaya, lambi batei or choti si message. I got it. :dost: Main aapka avari hu ki aapne apna kimti time nikalke na sirf meri story padhi, balki apna valuable advice bhi diya. Thanks again...

:dost: Thanks, Bro, for your valuable comment. Sach main, story last main thoda tez ho gaya, waise wo intended to that ke story ke attitude ke sath speed bhi match kare, but I think I overdid it. Thanks for pointing it out. Cheeres. B-)

Thanks, dude, for reading my story and your kind words. Indeed, it is not the story you should cherish, I went all-in with this one. I will keep your suggestion in mind. Cheers. :-)