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Ohh NYC update matlab kisi ne time machine banyai and time travel kiya uski wahjse yeh sab hua...or time line tut gayi....Aage mujhe lagta h yeh kisi or kahani se relate karega (like the time machine story)...jaha par time machine banayi gayi thi and time travel bhi kiya tha...jiski wahjse se...

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NYC update..Ab kya har ek earth khatre mai h yeh story toh badthi h jaa rahi h jaldi karo mayank varna earth 2 khatam ho jayega.... Sala yeh ladai mast hoti h manthan ki or Dexter ki....bichra Dexter hamesh har jata h ??? Dekhte h ab aage kya hota h...

Haa laga h tha ek new earth hoga but baki log kaha gaye....Wo log shayad shayad earth-2 pai chale gaye h may be mera guess sahi ho....Or yeh dono Samar and trod mayank kai sath Jake help karange zoriones ko marne kai liye ya a phir help karnge ki unhe kaise haraya jayega....bichar ajit ko akela...

nice update 26 Ab yeh konse earth pai aa gaye wapas sala yahi bhi dhamaka matlab or ek earth ki watt lag gayi...Story or bhi confuse hoti ja rahi h....Baki sab kaha gaye....

Tu saale Tu saale kbhi nhi sudhrega @The_lost_love.... ?????? Bhai baki kai aage kai sab updates padhne kai bad samjh mai aa gya ???? suspense tha waise....

Nice update..... Earth 1 par earthquake matlab earth-1 bhi khatre mai hai....Yaha pai naya suspense h lagh raha h ab??...Lekin phir manthan (mayank) ek h moment mai dono earth ko kaise bachyega....or ab yaha agar manthan aa gaya h toh woh pari ko apne sath leke Jake apne earth mai mujhe aise...

Bhai yeh dusra Dexter kaha se aya ek toh pari kai sath juda tha isliye woh earth 1 par tha but yeh dusra.....Ky yeh bhi manthan se badla lena chahta h...

Waiting for next update....

Dost mujhe is story mai do teen naate kuch samja nahi....First coronal city mai jaha par energy ka nishant mile the wahi se portal open hoke sam mumbai Jake aaye toh phir jab sam kuch logo ko bachane jata h tab ek ladki mar jaati h uskai samne jis kai wahj se wo khud ko doshi manta h....Par wo...

Bhai iska matlab portal open hua or sam mumbai chala gaya or wapas aa gaya lekin yeh kaise possible h ????...

I not understanding it....Yeh kaise possible h agar koi chiz inter dimensions karkai aati h like dinosaurs wo toh wapas kaise gayab ho sakta h....Or yaha pai jo zorians ka khoon mila toh body kaha par gayi....

NYC story bhai....Aage ka update jaldi bhajo....Waiting for it....

Ha or ek baat Dexter wapas kaise aya jab worm hole open hua toh usko usmai jana chahiye tha jaise mayank ne plan kiya tha....And yeh baat kuch samjh mai nahi ki Dexter mayank kai piche q padega q ki wo toh ek TIME h insan nahi jo badala le....????? Plz jara yeh clear karna....

Excellent Excellent story ????....Waiting for the part 2....Lekin end mai yeh samajh mai nahi aya ki earth 1 ki pari zinda kaise ? Or usne bola ki wo jab black hole mai gayi manthan (mayank) piche and Dexter se Judi thi....To usne time kai bare mai kab padha ????Yeh samjh mai nahi aya.... Plz...