Recent content by rohitjain
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Adultery Vo din pyar ke cheating
Good story and one suggestion please take this into your consideration That end of your story must need to be morally correct it should be win for rahul and the ending should not be like a compromise for rahul. Ending must give rahul its due and that too respectably and the girl must need too... -
Incest वो,जो नही होना था।
One of the best story i have ever read Jaldi update dena -
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Incest Innocent wife become ultimate whore
I m having a suggestion Bro if u can than please give some respect to her husband also get him new girl or he should start ignoring her There stories are not only about sex, story good writing should also go with the sex . if possible do something about husband -
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Erotica Tarak Mehta-Ek Naya Andaz (by maybe Siraz?)
Any more?- rohitjain
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Adultery Mix TMKOC Tadka
First of all nice update I have a suggestion for u don't give jai more importance than tapu when tapu or tapu-sena is there Tapu shuld be 1st and jai 2nd that's all Keep going -
Incest Mix sex story (Tv Serial TMKOC Bollywood actress)
With addition of you Character (yuvi) i think tapu is not getting wht he deserve in show i have seen tapu as the co-hero but here yuvi is replacing tapu as co-hero which i m unable to digest. So it is my humble suggestion if can give tapu that co-hero place and make a new place for yuvi Except... -
Incest Pyar hai toh pariwar hai
It was good but it was very short update -