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Thanks yaar for your honest review! Achha laga ki aapko writing, emotions, aur LOC ka atmosphere pasand aaya. Abir-Zahra ka romance, unka emotional conflict, aur action scenes ka balance bhi aapne notice kiya — dhanyavaad! Rating thoda kam kyun? - Farooq ka character thoda *flat* laga...

Bhai try bahut din baad ki hai story writing ki, aage sudhar karunga apne stories me bhul chuk ke liye maafi

बंदिश written by adirshi Positive Points (Achhi Baatein): 1. Emotional Depth (Bhaavnaon Ki Gehraai):Story mein emotions bahut strong hain, especially Varsha ka dard aur Amit ka pyaar. Dil ko chu jaata hai. 2. Realistic Characters (Asliyat Waale Characters): Varsha aur Amit ke feelings aur...

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घोर पाप - एक वर्जित प्रेम कथा Written by - vakharia Rating: 8.5/10 Positive Points (Achha Kya Tha): Engaging Storyline – Plot mysterious aur intriguing tha, puraane raajaa, tantra-mantra, aur maa-beta ke complicated relationship ne pakda rakha. Strong Characters – Shakini aur Kaamshastra...

विधिलिखित Written by - Adirshi Rating: 8.5/10 Positive Points (Strong Side): 1. Rich Storyline: History, politics, aur prem ka emotional mix. Rajasthani culture aur Maratha bravery ka zabardast portrait. 2. Deep Characters:Gauri ka journey (weak lover se warrior tak) aur Vidhyadhar ka...

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वेवफा बुलबुल by Bulbul_Rani Positive Points 1. Emotional Depth :Story mein Akash ki inner conflict, betrayal ka dard, aur ghar ki barbaadi ka jazbaat bahut strong hai. Uske dil ke dard ko padhkar reader bhi emotional ho jata hai. 2. Realistic Characters - Bulbul ka confusion, Akash ka...

- "KALANK" Written by - Aakash Rating 8/10 Yeh kahani AI ke galat istemal (deep fake nudes) aur samajik stigma ke khatarnaak asar ko dikhati hai. Aaradhya ki kahaani se pata chalta hai ki gender-based violence, family ki izzat, aur mental health jaisi issues kitni destructive ho sakti hain. Gaon...

"Tujhse Shuru Tujhpar Khatm" Written by - Aakash Rating: 7.5/10 Achhi Baatein (Positive Points) 1. Dard Bhari Mohabbat Ki Kahani – Story mein pyaar, alvida, aur gum ka ehsaas bahut gehrai se utra hai. Jaise "Surmai shaam, dhalte suraj ki aakhri kirne..." jaisi lines dil ko chhoo jaati hain...

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