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Vanita medicine leke nishchint ho gyi thi. Fir bhi reh reh kar uske mann mein ye vichar aate the ke wo kya se kya banti ja rhi hai? Wo Manohar se iss ajeeb se rishte ko pasand krne lggi thi. Pati patni ke rishte mein ek baat sach hai.... agar apki sex life achi hai, to sab accha hai. Marad aur...

lol thanks for the feedback. Par Manohar ke nazariye se, uske liye ye hawas nhi hai... bss apne pyaar ko aur jo usse chahiye usse kisi bhi tarah se hasil krna hai. Everything is fair in love and war. But story aage kaisa modd legi ye jald hi apko pta lage ga. All the readers, Thank you so much...

Maine starting mein age mentioned ki thi. Yes there is big age gap but I'm not encouraging underage stuff. Maine iss story mein dono ke age and social difference ko sahi nhi bataya hai. Maine ye batane ki koshish ki hai ke jab hum differences ko ignore krne ki koshish krte hain to kya problems...

Lagbhag adhe ghante tak dono aise hi ek dusre ki bahoon mein lete rhe. Bistar par khoon ke dhabhe aur Vanita ki yoni se rista Manohar ka kaam rass... Vanita ke larki se aurat ban ne ko gawahi de rhe the. Manohar ek haath se Vanita ki peeth sehla rha tha. Aksar aisa hota hai ki larkiyaan jis...

Update will come tomorrow night.

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bss abh aur nhi... abb aur nhi rha ja rha tha Manohar se. Pyaar jo itna ho gya tha Vanita se. Wo Vanita ke masoom se chehre ko dekhe ja rha tha. fir aage baddha, apne bayein haath se Vanita ke chehre aur honth ko sehlaane lgga. fir wo apna dahina haath Vanita ke seene pe le gya, fir dheere se...

Agle din hamesha ki tarah suraj ugne ke saath Jammu shehar bhi uth gya, charon taraf chehal pehal thi. Lekin iss shehar ke do log shayad kisi aur hi duniya mein the. Pranav ke jaane ke baad abb Vanita ghar akeli thi. wo soch rhi thi ke agar Manohar ayega to wo uske saamne kaise jaa payegi. kal...

I was busy, update will come tomorrow for sure.

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Raat bhar Vanita Manohar ke baare mein sochti rhi. Na jane kyu usse kal ka intzaar tha. Aur kal aa bhi gya. lekin ye kal Vanita ki zindagi ko ek nya mod dene wala tha. Subhah huyi, Pranav office chle gye. Vanita naha dho kar Manohar ke aane ka intzaar krne lggi. aaj mausum thoda kharab tha...

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Agle din Manohar laal ne apna jholla uthya Vanita ke ghar gya. Vanita ki ek jhalak pane se jo usse khushi milti thi wo aur kisi cheez mein nhi thi. Uske liye abb Vanita hi sab kuch thi. Manohar ne door bell bjai. thodi hi der mein Vanita ne gate open kiya. Vanita ne aaj safed rang ki tight kurti...

Vanita aur Manohar ki age difference unhe life ke kis moud pe le jayegi ye kahani aage aapko batayegi. This story is about how our decisions which look harmless right now can have a huge effect on our lives in the future.

maine 2 updates pehle hi likh diye the, to abb age kam nhi kr skta, fir mujhe uske hisaab se story dobara likhni padegi. but I really appreciate your feedback. thanks