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Likho bhai

Bahut sahi bat kahi hai bhai apne.. madhu k sth jo hua wo bilkul unreal tha or writer bolte h k wo bs reality dikhana chahte hai....us scene ki to koi b kisi trh se zrurat hi nahi thi....

Koi or is story ko continue krdo

Achi bhali story ki maa chod di ...... Lkn writer ko agr kch bolo to bhaisahab bcho k jese rone lgte hai k ab or nh likhunga ...... Alochna ko brdasht krne ki himmat hni chahiye..... Agr himmat nh to likhna chod do. Tum logic ki bat krte ho to aisi koi b story nh yha jisme logic ho. Sb fantasies...

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Superb writing

Bilkul sahi keh rahe hai bhai

Kayi sal se m xossip ka reader tha.... Fr ab xforum p hu starting se. .. lkn silent reader tha bs... Aj phli br register kiya hu bs yha comment krne k lye .. Bhai apki story bht lajawab hai isme koi shk nh ... Best h aj tk ki.. Lkn ab ap isko baki stories ki trh lkr ja rhe ho... Madhu ko uske...