Incest KHAMOSHIYAN ( nafrat maa bete ka)

[Kuchnahi24]

waahhh kya update hai… but too dark deva ka kalu aur uski maa ko marna thoda jyada laga ho sakta hai unko maara na ho gayab kiya ho rampal ko tadpane ke liye….

Anu ki to duniya hi loot chuki h ab .. aage uski agni pariksha hai Jyoti ke jaise …

Gunja to pak saaf nikli past mai …. jyoti ke ye bahut aacha kiya khud se haveli aa gai hai…. Ek to kaam aisa kar diya hai usne jo deva ko sukoon pahuchayega …
Par uske abhi itni raaz hai ki deva aur uske beech ki khamoshiyou ki shuruat to ab hogi…

Kuch to reason hoga jo wo chup the ya wo bewkoof hi the … ab dekhte hai deva ka kahar kaise tutta hai us par ….
Jyoti ne kamal ko bhi chod diya sabit karta hai ki beta to wo deva ko hi manti h wo to us uska dil bahlane ke liye beta maan rahi the…
Baki aage dekhte hai kya kya hota hai …
Bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne

 

[maakaLover]

Yar aab kyaa bolun me ....is writer ke bare mee...
ISke har update pichle update se ache hoti hai ...aur iss bande ko pata hai ke audience ke emotion se kaise khelna hai ....

Abhi taak hum deva aur jyoti ke bich ke emotion...unke bich ka dard ko mahsus ker paa rhe thee...

Per aab hum anu aur Abi ke bhi dard ko ...unke nafrat ki mahsus ker paa rheen hai ....kitne aasne se iss ne hame ..Anu aur Abi ke story me bhi engage ker liyaa....

Bhai bahhhhh....maja aa gya padh ker...aur jyoti ko havali me wapas Lana....ka tarika ....me chalange ker sakta hu ke kisi ne nhi socha thaa ke jyoti esi havali me wapas lote gee....bilkul logic ke sath isne jyoti ko havali me wapas laya hai ....

Kamal ke ho aap writer sahab ...bus itna do...me kaha rehta hu ..ye baat aapko kaise pata...

Aur apke ye story dekhna ek hit hoge....log iss story ko copy ker ke apne story likhenge....ye mere bhawisya wani hai yaad rekhan

Thanks for expressing a bit of my feelings which I was unable to express succinctly

 

[maakaLover]

waahhh kya update hai… but too dark deva ka kalu aur uski maa ko marna thoda jyada laga ho sakta hai unko maara na ho gayab kiya ho rampal ko tadpane ke liye….

Anu ki to duniya hi loot chuki h ab .. aage uski agni pariksha hai Jyoti ke jaise …

Gunja to pak saaf nikli past mai …. jyoti ke ye bahut aacha kiya khud se haveli aa gai hai…. Ek to kaam aisa kar diya hai usne jo deva ko sukoon pahuchayega …
Par uske abhi itni raaz hai ki deva aur uske beech ki khamoshiyou ki shuruat to ab hogi…

Kuch to reason hoga jo wo chup the ya wo bewkoof hi the … ab dekhte hai deva ka kahar kaise tutta hai us par ….
Jyoti ne kamal ko bhi chod diya sabit karta hai ki beta to wo deva ko hi manti h wo to us uska dil bahlane ke liye beta maan rahi the…
Baki aage dekhte hai kya kya hota hai …
Bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne

Hmmm, tumne kyi points ko bhut shi se pakda h especially kamal wala

 

[paand]

Bhai Kya mast update diya man khush ho gya ab dekhai aage kya par jo bhi hoga achha hoga q ki aap likhto ho bahut
Ab next update aana time baat dijiye
Qki bas aap ki story ko read kar ke emotions ho jate hai
Isliye ab next update wait karenge aap update jab bhi do par long update dena bhia istahar

 

[soank]

waahhh kya update hai… but too dark deva ka kalu aur uski maa ko marna thoda jyada laga ho sakta hai unko maara na ho gayab kiya ho rampal ko tadpane ke liye….

Anu ki to duniya hi loot chuki h ab .. aage uski agni pariksha hai Jyoti ke jaise …

Gunja to pak saaf nikli past mai …. jyoti ke ye bahut aacha kiya khud se haveli aa gai hai…. Ek to kaam aisa kar diya hai usne jo deva ko sukoon pahuchayega …
Par uske abhi itni raaz hai ki deva aur uske beech ki khamoshiyou ki shuruat to ab hogi…

Kuch to reason hoga jo wo chup the ya wo bewkoof hi the … ab dekhte hai deva ka kahar kaise tutta hai us par ….
Jyoti ne kamal ko bhi chod diya sabit karta hai ki beta to wo deva ko hi manti h wo to us uska dil bahlane ke liye beta maan rahi the…
Baki aage dekhte hai kya kya hota hai …
Bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne

Bhai usne kalu aur uske maa ko bina derd diye mara hai ...aur usne clear Kiya hai ke kalu ek mund bhudhi lerka thaa....to usee aage chal ker kafe taklif jhelne pertee....usne kalu aur shudha ko mar ker apna badla liya hai rampal se ...aur esi dark character wale logon ka badla esaa he hota hai ....wo apne dusmano ko jaan se nhi marte ...usee jinda rekhte hai ..aur unhe derd dete rehte hai ....

Aur story me pahele se clear hai ke deva ek dark character hai ...usee hum hero man rhee hai ..per asal me wo ek villen hai...wo apna badla lene ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai ....

Aur rhee baat khamoshi ke ..to jyoti ke yhi KHAMOSHIYAN aaj deva ko esaa bana diya hai...aab mujhe pata chala iss story ka taitel KHAMOSHIYAN kyu hain....

 

[soank]

Hmmm, tumne kyi points ko bhut shi se pakda h especially kamal wala

Sukrya Bhai ...esii writers ko hamesa saharana chaye ....bahot kam milte hai esii writer

 

[soank]

Bhai Kya mast update diya man khush ho gya ab dekhai aage kya par jo bhi hoga achha hoga q ki aap likhto ho bahut
Ab next update aana time baat dijiye
Qki bas aap ki story ko read kar ke emotions ho jate hai
Isliye ab next update wait karenge aap update jab bhi do par long update dena bhia istahar

Haa bhai mujhe bhi aab wait nhi ho rhaa ...jub deva hoss me aayega ....fir hoga gunja vs jyoti for deva

 

[maakaLover]

Haa bhai mujhe bhi aab wait nhi ho rhaa ...jub deva hoss me aayega ....fir hoga gunja vs jyoti for deva

Same condition with me

 

[paand]

Haa bhai mujhe bhi aab wait nhi ho rhaa ...jub deva hoss me aayega ....fir hoga gunja vs jyoti for deva

Bas ab ek or request hai bas is baar update jaldi de bas or kuch nahi please bhai update jaldi dena

 

[Vishalji1]

Lajawaab lajawaab lajawaab update