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Sahi hai bhai esa HOTA rehta hai Kafi logo ko is se niklne Mai Bohat time lag jata hai Apny jaldi recovery Ke hai keep write keep posting we are with youPehle se toh mood better hua hai. Aur, maine likhna bhi start kar diya hai.
It's been a while since I wrote any humour sequence. So, I thought this is a nice stage to bring those sequences before the arc takes the intense turn. I'm glad you liked it.This update was refreshing, hillarious and full of fun. Previously also you have written many sentences full of laughter, but this is first time such a long sequence was written
That's true.<Kavya : Uhm…! P-Par, Bhaiya ke phone ki location aise track karna kya sahi tha, Tejal didi?>
Kavya, the simpleton, honest, not liking to doubt Veer.
It's Arohi being Arohi. She doesn't talk much with other guys. The only guy she talks a lot with is none other than Veer. And, she just showed her seductive side to another random man just to get the seat. That's why she hated it. She thinks a lot about these little details.<Arohi : Maybe, he wants something which you can't give to him.>
Hahaha... the intelligent one, first one to poison everyone with the word S….E….X…!!! Later, a thought may come in everyone's mind, 'Why not...' The blushing of Tejal, her voilent protest for remembering Parijat incident. Hmmm...'
<Kavya : Ugh-!!! Blame her!!! Not me!!! Usi ne mujhe sikhayi hai.>
I like Kavya, plain and transparent.
<Arohi : If you don't mind…! Please, aap kahi aur baith sakte hai? Please?>
Yes, Arohi's looks are enough to kill a boy, sweet talking is cream on the... hmmm... poison.... Hahaha...
<Arohi : I… I showed my vulnerable side to a random guy… other than Veer. And, I hate it!!!>
Ye kya tha... Is it the sexy and the seductress Arohi...
Haha! Thanks a lot.<Arohi : Veer and Kritika are dating each other!!!>
Itni saaf baat bhi nahi karni chahiye ki bacche ki jaan hi chali jaaye.
<Waiter : Your order, Sir?>
This sequence of giving order was hilarious, it is just good luck of waiter that he was not killed by Tejal. Again, icing on the cake was Watermelon Crush.
Nope! Keep it coming. Readers's reviews never gets boring for me. I always enjoy reading their thoughts and analysis.Uske baad jo dialog baji huyi Veer aur Kritika ke beech, haatho ka prayog, bahut kuch seekhna hai, Kavya se secret, rumaal munh me ghus jana, pakadna sikhaya, sahi angle bataya, laal gaal, kutti, pura train kar dunga, itna bada sambhaal paogi, first time tha, bade ki aadat lag jaaye toh fir chhoto ko, thoda rough, sahi rythm, sahi position, Get me some beer, Kavya se jalan, movements ekdum sahi, raat me aa paati, sab ke saamne, M-Mujhe bhi chahiye-, Kaha se seekha, zyada satisfaction, bed or cushion, sabhi holes me daalne, so dirty, and lastly... It's… SEX, It's… BILLIARDS.
Aur, fir Arohi ke dimag ki batti jali.
I could have written appreciating this whole sequence in two lines, but I wanted to walk through it, enjoying it, my apologies if it has become long and boring.
But the problem is...Ragini is another character who evokes pity. She loves Veer and wants to own him. Sensing this Suman has cleverly told everything about Veer so that either Ragini moves away from Veer and stop being over possessive, or start accepting him as he is.
Nidhi is the highlight of this arc. We'll see how beautifully she'll come into limelight in this arc. Just a bit patience and we'll be into this intense rush filled arc.Again Nidhi has antagonized Veer, looks as if they have not progressed a bit in their relationship. Hopefully, by the end of this arc, Nidhi surrenders to Veer's love.
We'll see what's cooking there eventually. The greater threat is lingering in the Mumbai itself. The serial killer.So the Living God has reached Morocco. It seems he is offering some type of missile launcher which can launch nuclear weapon on Spain. I am linking the fact that Rebecca has taken radioactive material from mines is China. Now it seems the duo in Spain and the girl in Australia are System Holders on the side of Living God. We may hear some upheavals from Australia soon.
Sure sure!!!I am taking 'Living God' as Mr X from now on unless proven otherwise.
That's indeed very true. I had to brainstorm a lot. And, you know what's tougher than writing horror? It's comedy. May seem like a false statement to you but it's actually true. Or you can say that they both are equally tough.What a fabulous update.
The misunderstanding was designed so meticulously... Dekhne me kitni simple si feel hoti h... But to create a misunderstanding requires a lot of thinking... Specially if it has to be comedic
Yup yaha!They were talking about the billiards... But Tej nd company misunderstood for the sex...
nd the way Arohi was just delivering comments was so cute... The way she said S...E...X...
It's complicated. The way she approaches Veer is very... You know... She's kinda desperate. So, she often doesn't think over sensitively which later results in her loss.I can feel how she would have voiced that out... Tejal blushing on the mention of sex... Fully realising the angst she has whenever it comes to parijat ladies.... Tejal's approach backfired and now Veer is disappointed... I mean... There's no need to get angry over her... She's such a sweet soul nd only wants Veer to acknowledge her nd share everything... She's that sister who wants everything to be done in her company... Nd I love such people...![]()
That's her charmKavya saying kutti was the new highlightImagine sucha cute girl with a cute face says kutti with tears in her eyes.....
I can't even...![]()
Nidhi is the major highlight of this arc too. Just wait and watch how this arc will play with your anxiety.Nd the nidhi part... It makes me want to sigh everytime I see their interaction... Just freaking hug each other... Godddd... It's so annoying... They love each other yet they are not trying their best.... Nidhi is the most conservative nd reserved character in the story... Juhi is the best girl... She's the cutie...
I'll leave that to you.Nd the last part... I have a question... The person with '??' nd Mr. X are same??? Or they are different???
You can take guesses. There's no harm in making guesses. And, thanks a lot for this revo. Keep supporting as usual.If they are the same... Then I'm afraid... If they are different... I don't know why but I feel much secure if they aren't the same...
Because of the same person is doing all this... Then that guy is a scary dude... Nd it's giving me some creepy vibes....
Thnx for this wonderful big update... Keep writing sir...![]()
Uska Target hai,Are bhai kaha gaye kya hua bro mar var toh nhi Gaye kya are are yaar 15 din ke upar ho gaya hai update nhi dete or like mangte ho har baar ka hai ek bar ho toh chalo jane bhi de lekin 2 week 3 week gayab rehte ho fir akar ek update de kar gayab ho jate ho ek saal se tumhara yehi chal raha hai or abhi haal mein bole ki Wednesday ko update karoge toh har wed ko update do ek time bata do ek din choose karlo lekin tum toh gayab ho jate ho mr. India 2.0 ho kya aaj kal mein update karo bhai 3 saal se upar ho gaya yeh story khatam nhi hua chalo achcha hai khatam nhi hua maza bhi aa raha hai lekin time se update toh karo
Tumko bhi hona hai?Uska Target hai,
nahi dega![]()