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Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Abhi toh scenes sajj rahe hai. Visfot hoyega jald hi. Aur, fir arc intense hoyega. Logo ki dhadkane badhengi. Aur, ek naye suspense ke saath iski samaapti hogi.Is update me bahut saare naye dhaage naye tarike se khul rahe hai…hamesha ki tarah umeend hai bunawat aur kasawat dono hi hi bahut sundar aakaar legi…![]()
190 tak pahuchne me toh waqt lagega abhi. Harr update 10k words ke approx ka hota hai. Toh utna hi time bhi lagta hai likhne me. Upar se readers bhi slow hai abhi.Yes Physics ke law ko aap likhe story me maja aayega padh kar aur sath me Chemistry ke bare me aapne to pahle bhi radioactive elements ki baat ki hai.
# maja aayega aap 190 updates Tak pura kijiye main ek sath padhunga.
That's where realism shines.Itihaas ka sabse late lateef mission hai jo abhi tak poora nahi hua hai
Saari duniya idhar ki udhar ho gayi Paris or Crimson kaand se lekar Poora ka poora china arc nipat gaya... lekin ye mission abhi tak adhar me latka hua hai...
Sala Kaera ka mission na hua G*vernment ka Project hua pada hai..![]()
Thanks a lot.Congratulated in advanced for cross 4000 pages, no doubt this story is one of my favorite story (other silent readers like me).Hope it will go on and on.
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Bahut bahut dhanyavad.नमस्कार Werewolf भाई और साथ हीं 4000 पेज पूरा होने की एडवांस बधाई_
16 अगस्त 2021 को इस शानदार कहानी का
We'll see Julia too in this arc.Juliaek achchi advisor hai
Sach mai wo Kaera ke liye kuch karna chahati hai
Samay - Samay par apni sahi advice bhi deti hai
Veer ko kaafi pasand karti hai
Such a good Character
Aage dekhte hai Julia aur kya - kya karti hai
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What if will remain what if...Plot twist - what if Julia comes out as a system holder![]()
For me,,, this story is not within the ambit of one of the favourite stories,,, it has its own special place
Shukriya mitr.This is indeed a special story, there is nothing like this story on this platform
Koi baat nahi sir main wait kar lunga jaise itne dino se kar raha hoon.Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Abhi toh scenes sajj rahe hai. Visfot hoyega jald hi. Aur, fir arc intense hoyega. Logo ki dhadkane badhengi. Aur, ek naye suspense ke saath iski samaapti hogi.
190 tak pahuchne me toh waqt lagega abhi. Harr update 10k words ke approx ka hota hai. Toh utna hi time bhi lagta hai likhne me. Upar se readers bhi slow hai abhi.
That's where realism shines.
Agar mission ko turant complete karwa diya gaya hota toh iska matlab tha ki Kaera ke emotions ek jhatke me aa gaye... Jo ki possible hi nahi.
I mean aise dekho ki doctor ne patient ko dawayi di aur patient ne dawayi nigli nahi ki woh ek jhatke me theek ho gaya. Kya ye kahi se bhi logical hai? Same goes for Kaera's emotions. It takes time. Woh alag alag emotions se ab guzregi.
Ab woh feel karegi ki pain kya hota hai, jealousy kya hoti hai, sadness kya hoti hai, happiness kya hoti hai. And, when she'll feel all those emotions one by one. Eventually... She'll become what she used to be in her childhood... And then... Veer will hear the sound of the notification.
Thanks a lot.
Bahut bahut dhanyavad.
We'll see Julia too in this arc.
What if will remain what if...
Shukriya mitr.![]()
Kyu ilhamwisher bhai!...aa gya swaad??Ek Target toh poora ho nahi paa raha tum log se abhi.week me do update chahiye hai.
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Ye toh spoiler puch liya ju ne.Nd the last part... I have a question... The person with '??' nd Mr. X are same??? Or they are different???
If they are the same... Then I'm afraid... If they are different... I don't know why but I feel much secure if they aren't the same...
Because of the same person is doing all this... Then that guy is a scary dude... Nd it's giving me some creepy vibes....![]()
Ohhhh... So that means you won't tell us....Ye toh spoiler puch liya ju ne.![]()
I got itYe toh spoiler puch liya ju ne.![]()
That's right!Ohhhh... So that means you won't tell us....We'll have to find out about this by our own... Nd... Mere guesses most of the times fuddu hote h...
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I got it![]()
Okay....That's right!Just have patience and everything will disclose on its own.
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Mujhe nahi lagta mujhse zyada kisi kahani me itni hints koi drop karta hoga...Okay....
Kuch to hints de dia kro hume atleast...![]()