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Incest Raju – Sab kaa Rakhwala aur Khushiyaan dene waala (completed)

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komaalrani said:
एक तो विलम्ब से कमेंट के लिए खेद लेकिन दो तीन जरूरी बातें

इस अपडेट में आपके एरोटिक सीन, खास तौर से फोरप्ले वाले थोड़े ज्यादा डिटेल में है जो लेखक की परिपक्वता, उसकी कल्पना क्षमता और शैली को दिखाते हैं। सुधा की मालिश वाले सीन में ये बात बहुत अच्छे से उभरी और साथ में जो चित्र हैं, सोने में सुहागा, मालिश का एक एक पार्ट आपने एकदम डिटेल में दिखाया और न सिर्फ फिजिकल पार्ट बल्कि मन के अंदर भी जो खेल मच रहा है जो ऐसी पंक्तियों से आपने पाठकों तक पहुँचाया

सुधा की हालत बहुत खराब हो रही थी, सुधा आस्मां में उड़ने लगती है

शायद किसी दूसरी कहानी में अब तक सेक्स सीन शुरू हो जातालेकिन आपने अपने ऊपर जो नियंत्रण रखा वही एक अच्छे लेखक की पहचान है।

दूसरी बार शुरू के भाग को पढ़ कर लगा माँ, माँ होती है। वह कहानी मीन मात्र इन्सेस्ट के लिए नहीं है, वह सिर्फ एक देह नहीं है, पुरुषो के लिए भोग्या, बल्कि राजू की हितचिंतक भी, एक रणनीतिक सलाहकार भी और मित्र भी,

बहुत ही बढ़िया अपडेट।
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Thank you for the wonderful review Madam...You are absolutely true...I made a conscious decision not to have sex between Raju and Sudha during her Maalish. it really fires and ignites the desire of Sudha...hopefully aage jaa kar Sudha ki kaamagni acche se bujh jaayegi :)

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urc4me said:
Sudha, Mala aur Thakurain to Raju se liptegi hi Der Saber magar Ratana ka Raju ko samarpan dekhne layak hoga. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
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Thank you Bhai...mujhe pata hai..bahut log shayad Raju aur Ratna kaa milan kaa wait kar rahe hai..jaise aapne sahi kaha...Ratna apne aapko Raju ko kaise "samarpan" karti hai dekhne waali baat hogi...uspar bhi thoda soch rakha hai...hopefully jab bhi woh hoga..aapko pasand aayega :)
Much Thanks for your comment...lekin bahut dinon ke baad :)

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Update 26: Thakur ki kaarnaame

Ratna aur Sudha ki Hot and Sexy baatcheet

Agli subah..

Ratna uth kar chai bana kar Sudha ke kamre mein aati hai to dekhti hai ki Sudha badi chain ki neend so rahi hai..

Ratna Sudha ko uthaati hai..Sudha bade kaamuk andaaz mein angdaai lete hue uthti hai…

Ratna ko dekh kar jaldi se bathroom jaakar fresh ho kar aa jaati hai.

Ratna: le chhoti..chai pee le

Sudha: chai peete hue Ratna ki taraf muskuraati hue dekhti hai.

Ratna: abhi teri kamar kaa dard kaisa hai? Raju ne acche se maalish kiya ki nahi?

Sudha: Sach bataaon didi…khul ke bataaon didi?

Ratna: haan…tere aur mere beech mein chupa kya hai..

Sudha: didi Raju ne maalish to ekdum acche se kiya hai..aur abhi dard bhi nahi hai…lekin usne mere tan ki aag ekdum bhadka diya hai…kal raat se meri poori choot geeli hui hai…aur ras baha rahi hoon aur rukne kaa naam nahi le raha hai….dekho…aur aisa keh kar Sudha Ratna kaa haath pakad kar apne choot pe rakh deti hai..

Ratna: haath hata kar..tu to sach mein bahut geeli hui ho..lagta hai jaise tu peshaab kar rahi hai…lagta hai kar raat ko tune bahut maje kiye hai

Sudha: khaak maja didi…usi ne mujhe is haalat mein chhod ke chala gaya hai..ab mera yeh haal hai ki baar baar mujhe panty badalni padegi..dekh rahi ho naa..kitni geeli padi hui hai..

Ratna: to phir to panty pehanna band kar de…waise bhi yeh panty itni chhoti hai ki pehno yaa naa pehno ko farak nahi padta…(woh ek thong type panty thi)..waise tu is panty mein bahut sexy lag rahi hai…

Sudha: kya karoon..kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai.

Ratna: aisa kya kiya raju ne?

Sudha: arre didi..yeh poocho ki kya nahi kiya….poora badan maalish kar diya…aur maalish karte karte mujhe bhi poora nanga kar diya…choot..gand…sab acche se maalish kar diya..mere tan mein aag bhadka kar chala gaya.. ab tum hi bataao..main kya karoon..

Ratna: karna kya hai…mauka dekh kar Raju ko apne mein samaa le…teri jagah main hoti to main yehi karti.. (abhi sirf Ratna ko hi pata tha ki Raju un sab se shaadi karna chahta hai)

Sudha: thoda aascharya se..didi..tumko bura nahi lagega..

Ratna: bura kya lagna hai…Raju to hum sabka hi hain naa..jab woh hum sabka kaa itna khayal rakhta hai to tum bhi uska khayal rakh lo..aur yeh keh kar Ratna Sudha ko aankh maar deti hai

Sudha: didi..tum kitni acchi ho..aur hum sab kaa kitna khayal rakhti ho…

Yeh keh kar Sudha Ratna ko gale laga leti hai..aur jab dono thoda alag hote hai to Sudha khushi mein Ratna ke honth dheere se choom leti hai..aur jhat se alag ho jaati hai

Sudha: bura mat maan-na didi..mujhe bahut khushi hui..isiliye aisa kiya..

Ratna: thode pyaar se…aisa bhi koi karta hai kya pagli..Sudha thoda ruaasi hokar Ratna ko dekhti hai…

Sudha kuch bolne ko hoti hai ki ratna uska sar pakad kar aage karti hui usko apne baahon mein lekar uske honth zor se choomti hai. Sudha thoda chakra jaati hai..lekin 1 min mein hi Ratna kaa saath deti hai kiss mein. 1 min baad Ratna dheere se Sudha ke kaan mein…apna mooh khol…aur jaise hi Sudha thoda mooh kholti hai to Ratna uski zubaan choosne lag jaati hai aur is baar dono ek gehre kiss mein doob jaate hai…yeh kiss almost 5 min tak chalta hai..



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Kiss todne ke baad….

Ratna: kyun re…tere mard ko tune kabhi aisa kiss nahi kiya kya?

Sudha: chhodo naa didi..us kalmuhe kaa baat kyun karti ho? Mood kharab ho jaayega..woh to bas chadh jaata tha aur 2 min mein khallas ho kar mujhe pyaasi chhod jaata tha.

Ratna: theek hai..tera mood abhi theek karti hoon..aur yeh kehte hue uske sudol chuche masal deti hai.

Ratna: teri chuchi to ekdum mast aur bhare hue hai re..thode bade bhi lag rahe hai.. (man mein sochti hai…thode din aur ruk jaa…Raju ise aur bade kar dega)

Sudha: didi…tum mera mood theek nahi kar rahi ho..chuchi daba kar meri choot ki garmi aur zyaada badha rahi ho..

Ratna apna haath hata leti hai aur kehti hai chal..theek hai..bahut ho gaya..chai pee le..main Raju ko jaga kar aati hoon..jaate jaate Ratna jab darwaaze ke paas pahuncti hai to use kuch yaad aata hai..aur palat kar Sudha ke paas aati hai aur dheere se kaan mein kehti hai…apna haath Sudha ke choot pe rakh kar…ise hamesha ekdum saaf aur chikna rakhna…phir aankh maar ke bahar chale jaati hai.

Sudha: theek hai didi..main bhi fresh ho kar aati hoon..

Thakur ke Ghar..

Subah Mala naha kar kitchen ki taraf jaa rahi thi. Woh Thakur ke kamre ke saamne se guzarti hai to jigyaasa varsh who Thakur ke kamre mein jhaankti hai to use Thakur ki baatein sunaayi deti hai.

Thakur: Sun re..main aa raha hoon…chhote se kehna ke maal taiyyar rakhe..12 baje tak aa jaaonga

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Thakur: Theek hai..main aa raha hoon. Kuch gadbad mat karna.

Aur phir Thakur phone rakh deta hai.

Mala chhupke se wahan se nikal jaati hai..

Ek ghante baad jab Thakur ghar se nikal jaata hai to Mala ek naukar ko Raju ke ghar bhej kar Raju ko bulwaati hai.

Naukar Raju ke ghar jaa kar Raju ko bulaata hai.

Naukar: saabji..maalkin aapko jaldi bula rahi hai.

Raju: kyun?

Naukar: mujhe pata nahi.

Raju: theek hai..jaao..main aata hoon.

Naukar: Maalkin ne kaha hai ki aap ghar mein sambhal kar jaana.

Raju: theek hai..bataane ke liye shukriya. Main sambhal kar jaaonga…

Itna kehte hi Naukar nikal jaata hai.

Ratna aur baaki dono bhi tab tak baahar aa jaate hai aur Raju se poochte hai

Raju: pata nahi..jaana padega…shayad kuch baat ho gayi ho..maine unse madat jo maangi thi..

Ratna: theek hai beta..zara sambhal kar jaana.

Phir Raju Mala se milne nikal jaata hai aur sambhal kar uske ghar jaata hai.

Mala aur Kaamya dono Raju kaa hi intezaar kar rahe the

Raju: Malkin, aapne mujhe bulaaya..kya baat hai?

Mala: dekho Raju..mujhe zyaada to pata nahi..lekin aaj subah maine Thakur ko kisi se baat karte hue suna ha..ki koi maal taiyyar rakhe..woh kis maal ke bare mein keh rahe the..mujhe pata nahi..lekin mujhe kuch theek nahi laga..isiliye socha ek baar tumhe bata doon. Tum chaho to kuch pata kar sakte ho.

Raju: theek hai Malkin..pata karta hoon..bataane ke liye shukriya.

Mala: theek hai…agar wahan kuch dekh liya to mujhe bataana..shaayad main kuch madat kar sakti hoon tumhaari.

Raju: Zaroor Malkin…lekin yeh Thakur gaye kaha hai?

Mala: Who XX gaon ki taraf gaya hai…lekin pata nahi wahan kaun si jagah..tumhe hi dhoondhni padegi.

Mala: Aur suno..yeh ek phone rakh lo..agar zaroorat pade to phone kar dena..sirf mera aur Kaamya kaa number hi hai.

Raju: theek hai malkin..main hi dhoondhne ki koshish karta hoon aur is phone ke liye shukriya. Wahan se aane ke baad aapko yeh lauta doonga.

Raju itna keh kar wahan se sambhal kar nikal jaata hai..

Thakur ki Khoj:

Raju phir Thakur ko dhoondhne nikal jaata hai..jab who doosre gaanv jaata hai to wahan thodi bahut bheed hoti …use samajh mein nahi aata ki kya kare yaa naa kare..woh aise hi galiyaan ghoom kar dhoondhne ki koshish karta hai..

1-2 ghante ke baad jab use kuch nahi milta to niraash ho kar waapas jaane ki soch leta hai..

Woh thaka hua tha to ek chai ki tapri mein baith kar chai pee raha hota hai sochte hue ki baat kuch bani nahi..

Itne mein ek aadmi aakar chai waale se poochta hai ki accha khaana kahan milega.

Chai waala use bata deta hai lekin Raju jab yeh baat sunta hai to use thoda ajeeb lagta hai..chhota gaanv hai..logon ko aasaani se sab pata hota hai to phir yeh aadmi ko kyun nahi pata..

Raju us aadmi kaa peecha karta hai dhyaan se..

Woh aadmi kuch khaane kaa saaman lekar gaanv ki doosri taraf nikal jaata hai..Raju bhi uska peeche karta hai..aur usse kuch doori banaaye rakhta hai taaki woh aadmi Raju ko naa dekh le.

Woh aadmi gaanv se baahar nikal jaata hai aur gaanv se door ek puraane ghar mein ghus jaata hai..woh ghar ekdum road se door alag hi jagah par tha aur ghane pedon se thoda Dhaka hua tha..Raju bhi dheere aur chupke se us ghar ke paas jaata hai..lekin use andar dekhne ke liye kuch khaali jagah/khidki milta nahi hai..woh sochta hai ki kya kare..

Raju yeh bhi dekh leta hai ki us ghar ke peeche gaadiyan bhi thi..jo ki Thakur ki gaadiyaan thi..

Phir dheere se darwaaza kholne ki koshish karta hai to uska kismet use saath deta hai aur darwaaza khul jaata hai. (kyunki yeh ghar road se bahut door aur ghane pedon ke beech mein tha..to aadmi ne darwaaza band nahi kiya tha..yeh soch kar ki abhi is waqt koi nahi aayega).

Raju dheere se andar jaata hai to karma poora andhera tha..woh kisi tarah aage badhta hai to use ek aur darwaaze kaa ehsaas hota hai. Raju dheere se woh darwaaza kholta hai to use andar kaa nazaara dikhta hai..andar kaa nazaara dekh kar Raju ke hosh ud jaate hai.

Andar Raju ne kya dekha…who jaldi hi next update mein pata chalega..

Note: A relatively small update..been quite busy with my work..but did not want to prolong the gap between updates..isiliye thoda chhota update hi sahi..post kar diya hai :) Thank you.https://ibb.co/Kh6h24x
 
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