Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Quick Recap of the Arc: After Aarav's encounter with kim Min-soo as Avinash Kim Min-soo ran away. Then Kunle got invitation from the Carnival of death (COD) to save him and for Aarav's alterior motive aarav and Yoo-Jung decided to go with him and joined them Becky and also Caroline who wanted undiscovered her father's murderer.

In carnival with Aarav and Yoo-Jung's help they clear each floor and Aarav was taking all game master out until at floor 3 they got tricked by the game master and lost becky there.

Later they are joined by another team's 2 remaining players (Mira&Daryl) and they entered the 4th floor where they got summoned into another world to complete a quest, Save this world from demon kind and from the demon king and an side quest to save both of Priestesses twin daughters(Eira&Sola). To save them Aarav made a sacred bond(Marriage by earth means) with both of daughters them and get into a physical relationship with them.

*End of recap*

 

[Ak47203]

Waiting for next update

 

[CFL7897]

bhai Ek Sawal hai..

Arav ke pass Jo Evil heart hai kya vah mother spirit ko divor karne ke bad Aaya?

Aryan Apne do core ko sprit thread Se bandh Diya Hai Jiski vajah se unke bich ka energy balance rahega Lekin Evil heart kya ...Unse lagatar energy Nahin khinchega??

jahan tak Samajh Mein Aaya Hai Jo 50% fulfill ka requirement hai vah Arya Ki Jaan bachane Ke Liye Baki ka 50% ka kya hoga aur uska kya effect Padega??

 

[Parthh123]

Pahle 3din ka schedule tha writer saheb ka ab koi schedule nhi hafte me ya do hafte me kbhi bhi update denge jb unka mn krega aur time rat ke 11bjje ke pahle nhi wo bhi jis din ka kahenge uske do din bad aur time 11ke bad. Yar sb writer ki apni timing hoti hai apne kam hote hai wo free me likhte hai but kya reader faltu hai???????? Unka koi time value nhi hai??! Agr kisi writer ke pass itna time nhi hai to kripya story hi na suru kre aur agr usne suru kiya hai to timely update de.

 

[mandeep2244]

Waiting bhai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Pahle 3din ka schedule tha writer saheb ka ab koi schedule nhi hafte me ya do hafte me kbhi bhi update denge jb unka mn krega aur time rat ke 11bjje ke pahle nhi wo bhi jis din ka kahenge uske do din bad aur time 11ke bad. Yar sb writer ki apni timing hoti hai apne kam hote hai wo free me likhte hai but kya reader faltu hai???????? Unka koi time value nhi hai??! Agr kisi writer ke pass itna time nhi hai to kripya story hi na suru kre aur agr usne suru kiya hai to timely update de.

Time ki value? Konsa time waste ho raha hai? Aur konse 2 din baad ata hai?

Pehli baat koi date nahi di to wait kyu Karna? Agar time aage bhi ho to 2-3 ghante pehle inform karta hu ke koi intezar me baitha nahi rahe, Pehle ap ko schedule se dikkat thi ab ap ko intezar se dikkat hai.


Agar ap ko itni problem hai to ap aage kisi aur story ko padh sakte hai! Main ne kabhi kisi ko baandh ker nahi rakha, Aise to har baar ap ki taraf se bhi mujhe negativity he aa rahi hai.


Schedule main khud ke liye rakhta tha ke main khud ko motivate ker saku! Kyu ke sirf nice updates kehne se likhne ka mann nahi karta hai, Ye story main complete karunga he kyu ke main ne mehnat ki hai.


Agar ap saath rahe gye to good agar ap saath nahi bhi ho gye to safar chal he raha hai, Aur main apne reader's ki respect karta hu aur bohat zyada karta hu.


Ye he kaaran hai ke main unhe pehle inform bhi karta hu aur wo samajhte bhi hai, Lekin jo yanha sirf so called majboori me time nikal ker padhne ate hai unhe main reader's he nahi kehta, Hope ke ap ko samajh aye gi.


Apna khayal rakhiye ga, Sayonara!!!

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Next update 9th ya 10th June ko aye ga! Ye update bhi bada hoye ga aur khaas bhi hoye ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Also, Abhi tak target nahi huwa

 

[Parthh123]

Bhai

Time ki value? Konsa time waste ho raha hai? Aur konse 2 din baad ata hai?

Pehli baat koi date nahi di to wait kyu Karna? Agar time aage bhi ho to 2-3 ghante pehle inform karta hu ke koi intezar me baitha nahi rahe, Pehle ap ko schedule se dikkat thi ab ap ko intezar se dikkat hai.


Agar ap ko itni problem hai to ap aage kisi aur story ko padh sakte hai! Main ne kabhi kisi ko baandh ker nahi rakha, Aise to har baar ap ki taraf se bhi mujhe negativity he aa rahi hai.


Schedule main khud ke liye rakhta tha ke main khud ko motivate ker saku! Kyu ke sirf nice updates kehne se likhne ka mann nahi karta hai, Ye story main complete karunga he kyu ke main ne mehnat ki hai.


Agar ap saath rahe gye to good agar ap saath nahi bhi ho gye to safar chal he raha hai, Aur main apne reader's ki respect karta hu aur bohat zyada karta hu.


Ye he kaaran hai ke main unhe pehle inform bhi karta hu aur wo samajhte bhi hai, Lekin jo yanha sirf so called majboori me time nikal ker padhne ate hai unhe main reader's he nahi kehta, Hope ke ap ko samajh aye gi.


Apna khayal rakhiye ga, Sayonara!!Bhai readers ki respect ki bat krte ho aur Sunday bolkar tuesday night update diye ye kya sahi tha???? Dusri bat mujhe problem apse nhi hai balki aise writer se hai jo story suru krte hai to aise jaise readers pe ehsaan kiye ho. Mera kahna sirf itna hai hai kisi bhi writer ke liye ki agr story likhni hai to timely likho nhi to suru hi mt kro. Es forum pe ap check kr lijiye gini chuni stories hai jo complete hai baki sb adhe adhuri writer ek sath kai stories suru kre hai aur ek bhi complete nhi krte aur demand likes ki aise krenge jaise hm unke kharide hue hai. Rahi bat apki to abhi tak apka nature aur stories dono hi hme bahut psnd ayi hai but abhi jo itna delay ho rha hai updates ko lekar usse problem hai. Apne gap liya hme koi problem nhi hui kuki apki apni personal life hai apne hta kar gap liya but wapis aakr apne update likhne kj rate itni slow rakhi hai usse problem hai. Dusri bat agr ap nhi chahte ki mai apki storh pdh to koi bat nhi nhi pdhunga. Hmne apje har update sirf lag 2ke alwaa likes kiye hai jitna ho sakama comment kiya.

Writer ap hai ap jo chahe kre hm reader ka kya hi time value krta hai. Apke according ap apne hisab se update denge aur writer apne time ke hisab se pdhe. Fir ye likes aur comment ke number ku matter krte hai???
Baki mai leave kr rha hu xforum ki stories pe like aur comment krna. Bue bye sayonara

 

[Parthh123]

Half comment apke comment me type ho gya hai.

 

[Chinturocky]

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