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Abhi Renshu ne bas ek hi lethal blow maara hai. Unknown system holder haar Gaya hai bhala ye kaise keh sakte hai hum?Update 176
Bahot zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai
Aakhir kaar Renshu apne samne system dhari khade ladke ko harane m kamyab ho gaya Baki dekhte h agle update m kia batata h woh apne baare m
Erica gayi veer ki madad kerne lekin waha scene dekh ker haath pair sab fool gaye bechari ke
Jaw Long ke paas Dunia Bhar ki skills thi aise card the ki janwaro ko apne bas kia huwa tha lekin Pari sabka pata laga ker veer ki jaan bacha li nahi tow
Zabardast fight huwi veer or jaw long ki jsme jaw long hi bhaara raha lekin last AVA ne bacha lia
Lekin AVA waha kaise pohchi
Or sabse badi Jo veer Kahi thi (apne loved one ko Bachao) tow AVA ne loved one ko bacha lia
Baherhal ab dekhte yeh Jaw Long ki Kahani khatam ho gayi ya bahi bhi kuch Baki h
Bahot zabardast shaandar lajawab update
Yup! Exactly! Abhi dard dekha hi kaha hai readers ne.On the other hand mujhe lagta hai es story me abhi tak jo hua vo happy happy hua hai and from now onwards yaha readers ke dilo ke sath khilwad kiya jayega. I can see few betrayals as well as deaths in near future. (Just don’t turn sonia and arohi against veer and i am all good with the rest)
Just wait and watch. Arc ke end me surprises await kar rahe hai. Aur, agla arc bhi behatreen arc hai. Agle arc me female characters hi chhayengi jo kaafi samay se lime light se dur rahi hai. Also, itna hi nahi... Familial matters ke alawa bhi mainstream matter rahega jis se Veer ko deal karna hoga. Remember those serial killings?Nah. ye to bahut typical old kahani lag rahi hai. I dont think our writer will write something like this but mujhe lagta hai erica will start handling her father’s empire and she will be the bridge between order and legion also vo khud par dhayan dena jada suru karegi and jab vapas veer se kabhi mulakat hogi then she will be much more powerful as compared to now. Baki to waqt hi bataega werewolf bhai to kuch bhi bol kar aage hint likh deta hai aur hume vapas update padhna padta hai
Yes yes lekin kya ava ne special skill khardi thi apni Maa ke liye? Lekin Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai usne woh points kisi aur skill ko upgrade karne mai use kiye tha but mere hisab se uss ke pass knowledge jarur hai ki asi skill ya phir card ho sakte hai jis se kisi ki jaan bachyi ja sakti hai baki toh werewolf bhai ke upar hai
Dhanyavad.BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Koi na... Ye toh Mera kaam hi hai. Agar mein fix nahi karunga toh koi aur thodi karega.Ho gyi bhai sahi thank you and sorry pareshan karne ke liye
Of course. First week of April me update 177 aa hi jayega. And, length ka toh ju ko andaza hai hi. Update hamesha bada hi aata hai. So, worry not...! And, aise hi revos dete rehne ka. Keep supporting as usual.![]()
Thanks a lot bhai. Wese ek request hai. Ho sake toh revo me paragraphs de diya karo.Rongte khade kar denewaala updatetha Bhai
. Ek taraf Renshu dhamaal macha raha hai toh is taraf hamara hero toh usse bhi Kahi guna badkar apni Jaan ki baazi lagaakar qyamat laane mein tula hua hai Jaw Long ke liye
. Ava Ka entry 11th hour mein karwaakar aap ne toh hamlogon ke hosh hi uda diye Veer ke Saath Saath. Hum toh yeh hi umeed & dua Kar rahe the ki Erica kuch Tarah Veer ki sahayata Karne mein safal ho Sakegi kintu Ava ki sudden aur surprise entry ne is aasha pe paani fer Diya aur Jaw Long ke liye
bhi ghaatak attack honewaala hai Veer ki or se, bahut khoobi se Aapne toh takhta hi palat Diya, dear bro
. What a superb masterstroke indeed
. Kitne bhi taareef Karen is update
KO, Woh Kam hi padenge Aapke writing skills ke aage! Dekhte hain kaise Renshu us naye ladke se information ugalwaatha hai aur Law Jong Ka anth kaise aur kiske haathon hotha hai, aanewaale aapke dhamekedaar
updates
dwaara, dear bro
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Aur woh someone kaun hai filhal ye sabhi jaante hai.Kitne Tarah ke cards aur skills, is mine ke Jung mein istemaal kiye jaa rahe Hain, badi hairaani ki baat hai. Veer ne Sahi hi Kaha tha jab system holders aapas mein bidthe Hain toh udhar ghor kohram hi Mach jaata hai - no quarters given nor taken - no holds barred - everything is fair & just in battle for justice - in the end only truth and justice prevails. Alas, the cost it extracts is beyond anyone's imagination & expectations. Someone has to pay the price for maintaining the status quo in this world/society - a superb social message too from you, dear bro, through this masterpiece of a story. Kudos to you
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Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai.Good one . Once you give an update the next is when comes in my mind. Such a skillful writing. You keep things simple and always on to the roots. Thank you waiting for your next extravaganza.