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Ek ladke ka sareer kisi samundar ke niche bane ice mountain ke pass pada hua tha. Pura sareer neela pad chuka tha aur bahut sari goliyo ke nissan uske badan par mojud the.

Thand ki vajah se ek alag hi layer banne lag gaye thi uske sareer ke upar aur dekhne se to uske sareer me praan ho? Aisa lag nahi raha tha

Pata nahi vo kabse es samundar me bah raha tha aur ab jake use thand me dafan hone ka mokka mila tha lekin uski kismat etni bhi achi nahi thi ki vo aaram se mar bhi sake kyuki uske aas pass kuch jungle aadmi jo aa chuke the

Ek ne niche jhuk kar check kiya to uski saase abhi bhi chal rahi thi to sabhi ne mil kar use utha liya aur apne nivaas par le jane lage

Ek bahut bada samundar jiske aas pass life hone ke koe chances hi na ho vaha par ek ice mountain aur us par logo ka hona hume lagbhag impossible hi lagega lekin aisa yaha ho raha tha

Barso se yaha dunia se alag ye ek prajati rahti thi. Eske sareer aur atma ne jaise thand se dosti kar li thi tabhi to ye sirf janwaro ki ek khaal pahne bhi yaha survive kar pa rahe the

Ye ek tarah ki tribe thi jinhe tribu kahte the. Communication ka ek hi madham tha enko jo hum aur aapke samjh me nahi aa sakta. Jada sankha nahi bachi thi enki. Kuch ko samundari jeev kha gaye to kuch umar ke padaav ke aage haar gaye lekin abhi bhi ye apni pahchan bachane ke liye lad rahe the

Vaise to yaha koe aur aata bhi nahi tha jiske kuch reason bhi the jaise kisi ko jankari nahi hona sath me yaha aisa kya milega kisi ko ki vo yaha aaye? Kisi prakaar ke kajhane ki sambhavna bhi yaha nahi tha aur aas paas samundar ki satath ke jitne hi pani me pahad mojud the jo kisi ko yaha aane se pehle hi samundar ki gaud me sula lete the

Kisi tarah aaj itihaash me pehli baar koe yaha par pahucha tha lekin vo vapas kabhi uth bhi payega ya nahi eski sambhavna bhi bahut kam hi thi

Tribu tribe ke logo ne us ladke ko ek jagah lita diya aur nanga karke uske jhakham dekhne lage. Jo thand ki vajah se buri tarah sukh chuke the esliye hi vaha aag jalaye gaye aur fir ek bujurg ne us ladke par treatment karna suru kiya

Vo apni bhi bhasa me kuch kuch baatein kar rahe the jo hume samjh nahi aa rahi thi

Sari goliya nikal kar janwaro ke sareer se banaye gaye dawae us ladke ke sareer par laga di aur fir khaal se usko ache se dhak diya taki use thand na lag sake aur fir vapas apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door esi samundar me ek search operation chal raha tha jiski saari ummede toot chuki thi aur vapas jane ka order ka wait kar raha tha

Vo doond to essi ladke ko rahe the lekin ab sayad unhone bhi maan liya tha ki esko bhi baki sab ki tarah samundar ne apni gehare me sula liya hai

Unko abhi tak vapas aane ka order nahi mila tha esliye beman se hi lage pade the lekin vo apni manjil ke bahut door the

Agar kisi tarah vaha tak pahuch bhi jate to bhi mumkeen hai ki vo us ladke ko nahi dund pate. Lekin vo ladka unke liye bahut jaruri tha. Hazaro crore ruppee lage the uske upar research karne aur implement karne me

Aise me usko etni aasani se kho to nahi sakte the. Agar dead body hi mil jati to uspar hi thodi bahut research ki ja sakti thi aur agle subject par aur ache dhang se kaam kiya ja sakta tha

Esliye hi rescue team ko abhi tak vapas nahi bulaya gaya tha. Ek tarah se ek chamatkar ka hi intezaar ho raha tha ki aisa kuch ho jaye aur vo ladka unhe mil jaye

Filhaal to vo apni saalo ki nind puri kar raha tha. Jab se vo ek insaan ki jagah ek subject bana tha tab se hi usko na to sone diya jata tha aur na khane. Usko to jeene ka bhi hak nahi tha. Ek jocker ki tarah bas jo nachta ja raha tha aur ring master use nachata

Aaj moka mila tha sone ka to etni jaldi to vo uthega nahi.


Tribes ke logo ne to apna kaam kar diya tha ab to us ladke par hi tha ki vo kab uthna chahega esliye usko uski halaat par chhod kar vo log apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door kuch mahino baad

Doctor- nahi to mar nahi sakta. Mera subject hai vo maine experiment kiya hai us par etni aasani se to vo nahi marega bilkul nahi marega

Chief- aap aur main bilkul bhi realistic nahi hai lekin ab to mahine gujar gaye aur hume ab ye manana chahiye ki subject 001 ab mar chuka hai aur mission fail ho gaya hai

Doctor- main nahi maan sakta

Chief- aapke manane ya na manane se sachai badal nahi jayegi doctor. Behatar yahi hoga ki aap us se aage badhe aur apna mission continue rakhe

Doctor- he was special. Uske jitni na to kisi me sahanshakti thi aur na talent. Baki sab subject to first phase me hi haar maan lete hai

Chief- vo bhi to kahi se aaya hi tha na. Indian tha na vo? Aur suna hai indian mentally bahut strong hote hai? To kyu na hum vaha se hi aise subjects utha kar laye?

Doctor- bahut waqt aur paise kharch ho chuke hai.

Chief- vohi to main kah raha hu bahut paise kharch ho chuke hai aur agar ab aap fail hue to aapke sath kya kya hoga ye aap bahut ache se jante ho

Doctor- janta hu.

Doctor- lisa lab dobara tayar karo hum vapas se experiment start kar rahe hai aur chief mujhe aur bahut sare subjects ki jarurat padegi aur vo sab tough hone chahiye

Chief- ye last chance hai aapke pass doctor. Mujhe disappoint mat karna
Etna bol kar chief vaha se chala jata hai aur doctor apni secretary lisa ke sath lab me chala jata hai


Etne mahino ki gehri nind ke baad aakhir kar us ladke ke sareer ne movement karni suru kar di thi. Sayad nind puri ho chuki thi uski lekin jada hil dul nahi pa raha tha

Thand ne uske ango ko jakad liya tha bas ek aankh hi thi jo khul chuki thi uski aur apne aas pass dekhne aur samjhne ki kosis karne me lagi thi

Upar to bas khula aasman dikh raha tha jis se usne ye to andaja laga liya tha ki vo jaha hona chahiye vaha nahi tha lekin use hona kaha chahiye tha?

Na to use ye yaad aa raha tha ki vo kaun hai, na ye ki vo yaha kaise aaya aur na hi use ye pata tha ki vo kaha hai?

Dimag par jor daalne par ek bahut tej dard utha uske sar me aur ek dundhli si tasveer nikali dimag se jise vo pahchan nahi paya

Dard ne apna kaam kiya aur vo vapas behosh ho gaya

Uski hal chal se tribe ke log uske pass aa chuke the aur jaldi se apne hakim ko bula laye

Jab usne check kiya to ek rahat ki saas li mano vo jaan gaya tha ki ye ladka apni jindagi ki jung jeet chuka hai aur bahut jaldi uth khada hoga

Usne apne aadmiyo se apni bhasa me kuch bola aur fir uske sareer par ek lep lagane laga.

Ek bhi ang bina lep ke nahi chhoda tha usne aur fir vahi aag jala kar bath gaya

Jada der nahi lagi us lep ko pathar jaisa hard banane me aur hakim bade dhayan se pure sareer ka bathe bathe nirakshan karne laga

Jaise jaise vo lep kathor banta ja raha tha vaise vaise tribes ke logo ka excitement bhi badh raha tha aur vo jor jor se hukar marne lag gaye

Hu hu hu hu aur dando ki thak thak thak ko aawaz hi vaha gunj rahi thi
Aur

Ahhhhhhhhhhh karte hue us lep ko fadte hue vo ladka uth khada hua vahi tribes wale aur jor jor se hukar marne lage

Ek baar charo taraf usne najar ghumae aur fir uske sareer ne uska sath chhod diya aur vo ghutne par aa gaya

Abhi hosh me hi tha lekin khade hone ki himmat nahi ho pa rahi thi. Hakim me use sahar dekar vahi ek pathar par batha diya aur khud uske samne bath gaya

Dard to bahut saaf dikh raha tha ladke ke aankhon se lekin dar ka namonisan tak nahi tha

Vo bas najare uthaye charo taraf dekh kar khud kaha hai aur use yaha kya kya khatra hai aur sath me yaha se kaise nikal sakta hai ye analysis karne lag gaye

Dimag etni tej chal raha tha ki uski dhadkan fadfadane lag gaye thi lekin apne chehre par vo kuch bhi show nahi hone de raha tha

Ladka- main kaha hu?
Use idea to ho gaya tha lekin ye puch kar vo un tribes walo ke man ka bhaav janana chah raha tha

Lekin vaha se to koe jawab hi nahi aaya. Sab bas use ghure ja rahe the bol koe nahi raha tha

Ladka fir vapas khada hua aur “main kaha hu” es baar thodi tej aawaz me bola lekin natija vahi

Ladka man me behan ke lode hai kya sab yaha? Ya gunge bahre haaaaa es se aage vo apne man me bhi kuch bol pata uske dimag ki ghanti baji aur fuccckkkkk bas ye chhikhte hue vahi vapas bath gaya

Vo samjh gaya tha ki ye koe tribe ke log hai aur unka aur eska conversation sirf sign language se ho sakta hai kyuki na to vo kuch samjh payenge aur na ye khud

Tabhi vaha ek chhota ladka aaya jiske hath me ek polythene type ka ek packet tha aur usne us ladke ko dene ke liye hath aage badha diye

Ladke ne bhi be man se use le liya aur fir khol ke dekhne laga

Usne kuch paise the jo ab sirf naam ke paise bache the pani ne use buri tarah gala diya tha lekin us packet me ek bahut kaam ki chhij mili use aur vo tha uska passport

Ink puri fail chuki thi lekin vo naam aur photo bahut ache se dekh pa raha tha

Aur usme naam likha tha
RUTHVEN SHAW

Waqt aage badha aur ruthven theek hone laga. Tribes ke logo ne uski bahut madad ki aur ruthven ke dil me ek jagah bana li

Besak vo vapas me bol kar baatein nahi kar pate the lekin isharo aur emotions apna kaam bakhubi kar rahe the

Kuch dino baad ruthven ko bhi laga ki vo ab pehle se kafi theek ho chuka hai aur agar khud ko dundna hai to fir yaha se nikalna hi padega esliye usne baki sab ko isharo me apne jane ka bata diya jise baki sab ne bhi accept kiya

Uske liye ek choti lakdi ki boat banaye gaye aur kuch khane ka saman rakha aur use vida kar diya gaya. Es se jada vo use kuch de bhi nahi sakte the aur dekha jaye to unhone hi use uski jindagi vapas di thi es se badh kar koe kisi ko kya hi dega?

Ruthven vaha se nikal chuka tha aur chal diya tha apne apko dundne vahi dusri taraf mahino ki khauj been ke baad bhi jab unhe ruthven ka pata nahi chala to apne dil par pathar maar maar kar unhone bhi declare kar diya ki

Subject 001 is dead vahi ruthven kisi tarah kinare pahuch gaya aur pata nahi kitne mahino baad aaj usne vapas jamin ke darshan kiye…..

Shuruaat to bahut jabarjast hai bhai. Agle update ka Intzaar hai

 

[parkas]

For starting new story thread.....

 

[krish1152]

for start new story

 

[parkas]

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Ek ladke ka sareer kisi samundar ke niche bane ice mountain ke pass pada hua tha. Pura sareer neela pad chuka tha aur bahut sari goliyo ke nissan uske badan par mojud the.

Thand ki vajah se ek alag hi layer banne lag gaye thi uske sareer ke upar aur dekhne se to uske sareer me praan ho? Aisa lag nahi raha tha

Pata nahi vo kabse es samundar me bah raha tha aur ab jake use thand me dafan hone ka mokka mila tha lekin uski kismat etni bhi achi nahi thi ki vo aaram se mar bhi sake kyuki uske aas pass kuch jungle aadmi jo aa chuke the

Ek ne niche jhuk kar check kiya to uski saase abhi bhi chal rahi thi to sabhi ne mil kar use utha liya aur apne nivaas par le jane lage

Ek bahut bada samundar jiske aas pass life hone ke koe chances hi na ho vaha par ek ice mountain aur us par logo ka hona hume lagbhag impossible hi lagega lekin aisa yaha ho raha tha

Barso se yaha dunia se alag ye ek prajati rahti thi. Eske sareer aur atma ne jaise thand se dosti kar li thi tabhi to ye sirf janwaro ki ek khaal pahne bhi yaha survive kar pa rahe the

Ye ek tarah ki tribe thi jinhe tribu kahte the. Communication ka ek hi madham tha enko jo hum aur aapke samjh me nahi aa sakta. Jada sankha nahi bachi thi enki. Kuch ko samundari jeev kha gaye to kuch umar ke padaav ke aage haar gaye lekin abhi bhi ye apni pahchan bachane ke liye lad rahe the

Vaise to yaha koe aur aata bhi nahi tha jiske kuch reason bhi the jaise kisi ko jankari nahi hona sath me yaha aisa kya milega kisi ko ki vo yaha aaye? Kisi prakaar ke kajhane ki sambhavna bhi yaha nahi tha aur aas paas samundar ki satath ke jitne hi pani me pahad mojud the jo kisi ko yaha aane se pehle hi samundar ki gaud me sula lete the

Kisi tarah aaj itihaash me pehli baar koe yaha par pahucha tha lekin vo vapas kabhi uth bhi payega ya nahi eski sambhavna bhi bahut kam hi thi

Tribu tribe ke logo ne us ladke ko ek jagah lita diya aur nanga karke uske jhakham dekhne lage. Jo thand ki vajah se buri tarah sukh chuke the esliye hi vaha aag jalaye gaye aur fir ek bujurg ne us ladke par treatment karna suru kiya

Vo apni bhi bhasa me kuch kuch baatein kar rahe the jo hume samjh nahi aa rahi thi

Sari goliya nikal kar janwaro ke sareer se banaye gaye dawae us ladke ke sareer par laga di aur fir khaal se usko ache se dhak diya taki use thand na lag sake aur fir vapas apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door esi samundar me ek search operation chal raha tha jiski saari ummede toot chuki thi aur vapas jane ka order ka wait kar raha tha

Vo doond to essi ladke ko rahe the lekin ab sayad unhone bhi maan liya tha ki esko bhi baki sab ki tarah samundar ne apni gehare me sula liya hai

Unko abhi tak vapas aane ka order nahi mila tha esliye beman se hi lage pade the lekin vo apni manjil ke bahut door the

Agar kisi tarah vaha tak pahuch bhi jate to bhi mumkeen hai ki vo us ladke ko nahi dund pate. Lekin vo ladka unke liye bahut jaruri tha. Hazaro crore ruppee lage the uske upar research karne aur implement karne me

Aise me usko etni aasani se kho to nahi sakte the. Agar dead body hi mil jati to uspar hi thodi bahut research ki ja sakti thi aur agle subject par aur ache dhang se kaam kiya ja sakta tha

Esliye hi rescue team ko abhi tak vapas nahi bulaya gaya tha. Ek tarah se ek chamatkar ka hi intezaar ho raha tha ki aisa kuch ho jaye aur vo ladka unhe mil jaye

Filhaal to vo apni saalo ki nind puri kar raha tha. Jab se vo ek insaan ki jagah ek subject bana tha tab se hi usko na to sone diya jata tha aur na khane. Usko to jeene ka bhi hak nahi tha. Ek jocker ki tarah bas jo nachta ja raha tha aur ring master use nachata

Aaj moka mila tha sone ka to etni jaldi to vo uthega nahi.


Tribes ke logo ne to apna kaam kar diya tha ab to us ladke par hi tha ki vo kab uthna chahega esliye usko uski halaat par chhod kar vo log apne kaam me lag gaye

Vahi kahi door kuch mahino baad

Doctor- nahi to mar nahi sakta. Mera subject hai vo maine experiment kiya hai us par etni aasani se to vo nahi marega bilkul nahi marega

Chief- aap aur main bilkul bhi realistic nahi hai lekin ab to mahine gujar gaye aur hume ab ye manana chahiye ki subject 001 ab mar chuka hai aur mission fail ho gaya hai

Doctor- main nahi maan sakta

Chief- aapke manane ya na manane se sachai badal nahi jayegi doctor. Behatar yahi hoga ki aap us se aage badhe aur apna mission continue rakhe

Doctor- he was special. Uske jitni na to kisi me sahanshakti thi aur na talent. Baki sab subject to first phase me hi haar maan lete hai

Chief- vo bhi to kahi se aaya hi tha na. Indian tha na vo? Aur suna hai indian mentally bahut strong hote hai? To kyu na hum vaha se hi aise subjects utha kar laye?

Doctor- bahut waqt aur paise kharch ho chuke hai.

Chief- vohi to main kah raha hu bahut paise kharch ho chuke hai aur agar ab aap fail hue to aapke sath kya kya hoga ye aap bahut ache se jante ho

Doctor- janta hu.

Doctor- lisa lab dobara tayar karo hum vapas se experiment start kar rahe hai aur chief mujhe aur bahut sare subjects ki jarurat padegi aur vo sab tough hone chahiye

Chief- ye last chance hai aapke pass doctor. Mujhe disappoint mat karna
Etna bol kar chief vaha se chala jata hai aur doctor apni secretary lisa ke sath lab me chala jata hai


Etne mahino ki gehri nind ke baad aakhir kar us ladke ke sareer ne movement karni suru kar di thi. Sayad nind puri ho chuki thi uski lekin jada hil dul nahi pa raha tha

Thand ne uske ango ko jakad liya tha bas ek aankh hi thi jo khul chuki thi uski aur apne aas pass dekhne aur samjhne ki kosis karne me lagi thi

Upar to bas khula aasman dikh raha tha jis se usne ye to andaja laga liya tha ki vo jaha hona chahiye vaha nahi tha lekin use hona kaha chahiye tha?

Na to use ye yaad aa raha tha ki vo kaun hai, na ye ki vo yaha kaise aaya aur na hi use ye pata tha ki vo kaha hai?

Dimag par jor daalne par ek bahut tej dard utha uske sar me aur ek dundhli si tasveer nikali dimag se jise vo pahchan nahi paya

Dard ne apna kaam kiya aur vo vapas behosh ho gaya

Uski hal chal se tribe ke log uske pass aa chuke the aur jaldi se apne hakim ko bula laye

Jab usne check kiya to ek rahat ki saas li mano vo jaan gaya tha ki ye ladka apni jindagi ki jung jeet chuka hai aur bahut jaldi uth khada hoga

Usne apne aadmiyo se apni bhasa me kuch bola aur fir uske sareer par ek lep lagane laga.

Ek bhi ang bina lep ke nahi chhoda tha usne aur fir vahi aag jala kar bath gaya

Jada der nahi lagi us lep ko pathar jaisa hard banane me aur hakim bade dhayan se pure sareer ka bathe bathe nirakshan karne laga

Jaise jaise vo lep kathor banta ja raha tha vaise vaise tribes ke logo ka excitement bhi badh raha tha aur vo jor jor se hukar marne lag gaye

Hu hu hu hu aur dando ki thak thak thak ko aawaz hi vaha gunj rahi thi
Aur

Ahhhhhhhhhhh karte hue us lep ko fadte hue vo ladka uth khada hua vahi tribes wale aur jor jor se hukar marne lage

Ek baar charo taraf usne najar ghumae aur fir uske sareer ne uska sath chhod diya aur vo ghutne par aa gaya

Abhi hosh me hi tha lekin khade hone ki himmat nahi ho pa rahi thi. Hakim me use sahar dekar vahi ek pathar par batha diya aur khud uske samne bath gaya

Dard to bahut saaf dikh raha tha ladke ke aankhon se lekin dar ka namonisan tak nahi tha

Vo bas najare uthaye charo taraf dekh kar khud kaha hai aur use yaha kya kya khatra hai aur sath me yaha se kaise nikal sakta hai ye analysis karne lag gaye

Dimag etni tej chal raha tha ki uski dhadkan fadfadane lag gaye thi lekin apne chehre par vo kuch bhi show nahi hone de raha tha

Ladka- main kaha hu?
Use idea to ho gaya tha lekin ye puch kar vo un tribes walo ke man ka bhaav janana chah raha tha

Lekin vaha se to koe jawab hi nahi aaya. Sab bas use ghure ja rahe the bol koe nahi raha tha

Ladka fir vapas khada hua aur “main kaha hu” es baar thodi tej aawaz me bola lekin natija vahi

Ladka man me behan ke lode hai kya sab yaha? Ya gunge bahre haaaaa es se aage vo apne man me bhi kuch bol pata uske dimag ki ghanti baji aur fuccckkkkk bas ye chhikhte hue vahi vapas bath gaya

Vo samjh gaya tha ki ye koe tribe ke log hai aur unka aur eska conversation sirf sign language se ho sakta hai kyuki na to vo kuch samjh payenge aur na ye khud

Tabhi vaha ek chhota ladka aaya jiske hath me ek polythene type ka ek packet tha aur usne us ladke ko dene ke liye hath aage badha diye

Ladke ne bhi be man se use le liya aur fir khol ke dekhne laga

Usne kuch paise the jo ab sirf naam ke paise bache the pani ne use buri tarah gala diya tha lekin us packet me ek bahut kaam ki chhij mili use aur vo tha uska passport

Ink puri fail chuki thi lekin vo naam aur photo bahut ache se dekh pa raha tha

Aur usme naam likha tha
RUTHVEN SHAW

Waqt aage badha aur ruthven theek hone laga. Tribes ke logo ne uski bahut madad ki aur ruthven ke dil me ek jagah bana li

Besak vo vapas me bol kar baatein nahi kar pate the lekin isharo aur emotions apna kaam bakhubi kar rahe the

Kuch dino baad ruthven ko bhi laga ki vo ab pehle se kafi theek ho chuka hai aur agar khud ko dundna hai to fir yaha se nikalna hi padega esliye usne baki sab ko isharo me apne jane ka bata diya jise baki sab ne bhi accept kiya

Uske liye ek choti lakdi ki boat banaye gaye aur kuch khane ka saman rakha aur use vida kar diya gaya. Es se jada vo use kuch de bhi nahi sakte the aur dekha jaye to unhone hi use uski jindagi vapas di thi es se badh kar koe kisi ko kya hi dega?

Ruthven vaha se nikal chuka tha aur chal diya tha apne apko dundne vahi dusri taraf mahino ki khauj been ke baad bhi jab unhe ruthven ka pata nahi chala to apne dil par pathar maar maar kar unhone bhi declare kar diya ki

Subject 001 is dead vahi ruthven kisi tarah kinare pahuch gaya aur pata nahi kitne mahino baad aaj usne vapas jamin ke darshan kiye…..

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Lone survivor]

So ek baar fir se is foram ke one of most consistent writer apni wk new story ke sath wapas aa gaye hai. Sbse phle for your new story.
Mai hope karta hu ki aapki ye story aapki ab tak ki baki sabhi story's se sbse jyada famous ho jise foram par jyada se jyada log pyar de.

Thank you so much for the love bhai. Hope to see you more frequently here

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot bahot Mubarak baad bhai nahi Kahani shuru kerne ke liye
Ruthven ke under zaroor kuch aisa hoga jisse search kerne walo ko bahot faida hone wala ho isliye usko itni shiddat se dhoondh rehe The lekin yeh bahi sahab tow ek alag hi Dunia m pahoch gaya tha barf m rehne wale tribe
Baherhal ab bahot dino ke baad Zameen ke darshan ho gaye h ab dekhna yeh ki yaha se Zindagi ki shuruwat hoti h
Bahot khoob shaandar lajawab shuruwat

Much love mere bhai. Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Everyone has a story

for new story

Thank you so much bhai.
Umeed rahegi aapke sath ki yaha

 

[Lone survivor]

for the new story........
waiting for next update

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Shuruaat to bahut jabarjast hai bhai. Agle update ka Intzaar hai

Thank you bhai