Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Quick Recap of the Arc: After Aarav's encounter with kim Min-soo as Avinash Kim Min-soo ran away. Then Kunle got invitation from the Carnival of death (COD) to save him and for Aarav's alterior motive aarav and Yoo-Jung decided to go with him and joined them Becky and also Caroline who wanted undiscovered her father's murderer.

In carnival with Aarav and Yoo-Jung's help they clear each floor and Aarav was taking all game master out until at floor 3 they got tricked by the game master and lost becky there.

Later they are joined by another team's 2 remaining players (Mira&Daryl) and they entered the 4th floor where they got summoned into another world to complete a quest, Save this world from demon kind and from the demon king and an side quest to save both of Priestesses twin daughters(Eira&Sola). To save them Aarav made a sacred bond(Marriage by earth means) with both of daughters them and get into a physical relationship with them.

*End of recap*

 

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[Salty~Otaku]

UPDATE 40 ~
(ASCENSION ARC)

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Pocket Dimension
#96527


Laal chaand ki chandani asmaan se hote huwe neeche zameen per bikhari huwi thi, Har taraf tabahi ke saboot the, Kanhi kisi rakshas ke shareer ke tukre to kanhi kisi rakshas ka kankal gira Huwa tha.



Wanhi ek bare pathar ke upar human size chamkadad baithi huwi thi, Uss ke bare faile huwe pankhon se pathar per saya chaya huwa tha, Chamkadad daikhne ko to sirf baithi huwi thi lekin wo har awaaz per dhayan de rahi thi.

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Sirf Chamkadad he nahi wahan faile huwe rakshas bhi daikhne ko kuch araam ker rahe to kuch apna shikar kha rahe the, Lekin wo sabhi ek dusre ki har harkat per dhayan rakhe huwe the.


Jaise ek halki si galat movement wahan jung shuru ker sakti thi, wahan the to sirf kuch he rakshas lekin wo tabahi sadharan nahi thi, Uss tabahi se he pata lagta tha ke wo sab kitne khatarnak hai.



*Crack*



Chamkadad ke kaan khare ho gye apne peeche kuch awaaz sun ker, Chamkadad jhatke ke saath peeche ghoom gayi, Uss ke saamne ek Portal khula huwa tha.



*Woooooosh*



*Slash*

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Chamkadad ko kuch samajh ane se pehle he uss portal me se kuch nikla aur uss ko katate huwe aage barh gaya, Chamkadad ne sahi samay per pankh failaye upar ki taraf ja ker critical injury se to bach gayi, Lekin uss ke ek pankh per bara ghaav ban chuka tha, Wo hava me tez move nahi ker sakti thi lekin wo khud ko hava me uthaye rakh sakti thi.



[Aarav Arya has entered Dimension #96527]




Upar laal chandani se bhare asmaan me ek System alert aa gaya, Chamkadad ne neeche daikha to neeche haatho me 2 bari swords pakre Aarav khara usse he daikh raha tha, Aarav ki ek sword ki tip se chamkadad ke khoon ki bunden gir rahi thi.

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Chamkadad bhi gusse me aa gayi, Aarav ko daikhte huwe chamkadad thora aur peeche ho gayi aur apne pankh failaye apna muh kholne lagi, Uss ke muh me energy ekathi honi shuru ho gayi.



*Screeeech*



Chamkadad ke muh se ek teekhi awaaz nikli aur uss ki direction seedhi Aarav ki taraf thi, Uss ka pressure itna tha ke raaste me hava ko cheerte huwe wo Aarav ki taraf barh rahi thi, Lekin wo Aarav chhu sakti uss se pehle Aarav wahan se hat gaya.



*Kaboooom*



Wo seedhe zameen per lag gayi, Chamkadad Aarav ke bachne se aur chidh gayi, Wanhi Aarav bhi Chamkadad per nazre garaye wanhi khara raha.



Aarav(Analyzing): Ek safe distance! Ye Chamkadad mujh se ek safe distance bana ker urr rahi hai, Hamare beech itna distance hai ke agar main kuch throw bhi karu ya khud upar jau to ye chamkadad pehle he alert ho ker bach jaye gi, Aur wanhi wo mujh se itni zada distance bhi nahi bana rahi ke mujhe dodge karne ka Chance mile, Ek monster ke liye ye Chamkadad bohat zada intelligence rakhti hai.



*Screeeech*


Chamkadad ne ek baar dobara wohi attack kia, Aarav ne backflip karte huwe ek baar dobara bach gaya aur dhayan se uss jagha ko daikhne laga, Wahan zameen neeche dhans chuki thi chamkadad ke attack se aur uss ke saath paas ka area bhi bara damage lia tha.




Aarav(Analyzing): Destructive ability! Ye sound Waves na sirf apne saamne target ko kuchalne ki kshamta rakhte hai, Ussi pal ye paas khare vyakti ke shareer ke liye bhi khatra hai, Agar main ne apne kaan Qi se cover nahi kiye hote to ab tak shayad mere kaan ke parde phat chuke hote.




Aarav ko yun shaant zameen per ghutne ke bal baitha daikh chamkadad ne ek baar dobara destructive sound waves charge karni shuru ker di, Shoot karte he wo Aarav ko hit karne ki koshish karne lagi.


*Screeeech*


Aarav shaant baitha raha aur jaise he usse uss attack ke paas ane ka ehsaas huwa Aarav ne apne haath utha liye, Aarav ke aage ek barrier ban gaya aur wo sabhi sound waves uss me chala gaya, Aur agle he pal Aarav ne chamkadad ki taraf haath karte huwe uss sound wave ko aur bhi barha ker Chamkadad ki taraf waapis phaink di.



*Screeeech*



Chamkadad abhi attack karne se vulnerable ho gayi thi, Wo waves uss ko hit ki aur uss ki chamdi uss ke shareer se alag hone lagi, Lekin uss ne khud ko bacha lia aur mushkil se hava me reh payi.



*Clank*



Chamkadad abhi uss attack se bach ker nikli he thi ke neeche Aarav ke paas ek ball levitate ker rahi thi, Uss ball me se ek bari golden chain nikal rahi thi, Uss chain ke aage ek nukila dhatuon laga huwa tha.

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Aarav apne haath ke ishare se uss puri chain ko Move ker raha tha, Chamkadad ne apne pankh failaye aur dusri taraf urne lagi, Lekin wo chain usse ghooma ker baar baar Aarav ke kareeb le aa rahi thi.




Chamkadad ko ehsaas hone laga ke wo ghayal pankh ke saath uss chain se bach nahi sakti, Chamkadad ghoomi aur apne haatho se chain pakarne ki koshis karne lagi.



*Slurp*



Chamkadad usse rok nahi saki aur wo seedhe Chamkadad ke haath me ghus gayi, Lekin chamkadad ne khud ko zada ghayal hone se bacha lia tha, Chamkadad ne dobara Aarav per attack karna chaha, Lekin Aarav usse neeche kanhi nahi dikha.



*Clang* *Clang*



Chamkadad Chain ke khankhanane ki awaaz sun ker uss taraf huwi, Saamne chains per bhaagte huwe Aarav uss ke paas aa raha tha, Chamkadad ne wahan se hatna chaha.

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*Slassshhhh*



Chamkadad beech cut ker 2 tukro me bant gayi, Aarav uss ke upar khara huwa tha, Chamkadad mar gayi aur seedhe neeche girne lagi, Aarav uss ke upar khare huwe neeche aa gaya.



*Thump*



Chamkadad neeche gir gayi aur buri tarha se kuchali gayi, Aarav uss ke upar se utra aur apna haath seedhe uss Chamkadad ki chaati me daal ker uss ka stone nikaal lia.



*Grooowwwwrrrrr*



Aarav ko pathar ke Neeche se awaaz ayi to Aarav pathar ke ant per aya, Neeche sabhi rakshas larna shuru ho gye the, Aarav aur chamkadad ke beech ki larayi ne un sab ko roke rakhe huwe trigger ko daba dia tha.


Sabhi ek dusre per lapak rahe the, Har taraf tabahi machni shuru ho gayi thi-



*Thud*



Aarav peeche ghooma aur apni taraf aa rahe ek lambe haath ko pakar lia, Aarav ke saamne ek ajeeb sa bara rakshas tha lambe haatho wala, Aarav ne uss ke haath ko pakar ker uss ko ghooma ker zameen per patak dia.



*Kaboooooom*



Uss rakshas ne dusre haath se Aarav ko kuchalna chaha lekin Aarav uchalte huwe bach gaya, Uss ka haath neeche pathar per laga aur pathar tukro me bant gaya, Aarav seedhe uss ke upar charh gaya.

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*Thud*


*Woooosh*


Uss rakshas ne haath ghooma ker Aarav per vaar karne chahe, Lekin Aarav sirf apne haatho se he uss ke haatho ko dhakail raha tha, Wo rakshas per heraan tha ke uss ke itne shaktishali prahar ko koi kaise apne haatho se rok raha hai.



Aarav: Demon Slayer!



*Slurp*


Aarav ne apne ek sword nikali aur seedhe uss ke peeche ghusa di, Sword andar jaate he uss ka pura khoon peene lagi aur wo rakshas wanhi girte huwe dum tor gaya.



Aarav waapis khara huwa aur kudte huwe pathar se neeche aa gaya, Saamne baki sabhi rakshas lar rahe the, Aarav seedhe un ke beech chala gaya aur un ke saath jo saamne aye usse cheer phaarne laga, wahan koi bhi rakshas sadharan nahi tha sabhi A rank ya above ke rakshas the.



Lekin un sabhi ki khaas ability unhe un ki duniya ke liye khatra banati thi, Ghante beet gye aur akhir un sab ke beech ki larayi khatam huwi aur sabhi rakshas ke chithade neeche gire huwe the.



Un ke beech me Aarav khoon se sane huwe khar tha, Aarav lambi saanse bhar raha tha, Aarav yahan ane se pehle bhi lar he raha tha, Itna larne ke baad Aarav exhaust hone laga tha.



*Woooosh*



Aarav ke saamne ek portal khulne laga, Wo Aarav ke agle portal me jaane ka raasta tha, Aarav ne peeche ghoom ker un sab rakshason ki taraf daikha aur aage barhne laga.



Aarav(Mumble): Sirf 28!



Aarav ne khud se kaha aur idhar udhar daikhne laga, Aarav ki nazre ek khaali jagha per thehar gayi, Aarav ne apni swords nikali aur aage barhne laga.



*Flash Steps*



Aarav agle he pal seedhe uss khaali jagha per tha, Aarav ne uchalte huwe apni sword ko hava me aage thrust ki to Aarav ke saamne ek barrier aa gaya.

Aarav ne zor lagate huwe uss Barrier me ek chhed bana dia aur seedhe andar chala gaya, Aarav ke andar ate he pura barrier toot gaya, Aarav ne apne saamne daikha aur uss ke chehre per muskurahat aa gayi.



Aarav: Yahan chupe huwe the tum! Itna dhoondne ke baad tum mil he gye mujhe, Guardian!!!

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Aarav ke saamne Hexarion se bhi bara rakshas khara huwa tha, Laal rang ka vishal rakshas kisi ke bhi hosh ura dene ke liye kaafi tha, Uss ke paas se aa raha bhayanak aura Aarav ko bhi ache se mehsoos ho raha tha.

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Aarav daikhte he usse Pehchaan gaya ke wo Infinte Prison ka guardian hai, Wanhi Guardian bhi Aarav ke uss ka barrier tor ker andar ane se khush nahi tha, Aarav pehla vyakti tha jo uss ka barrier tor ker andar aya tha.



*Raaaaargh*



Guardian gusse se dahara aur apne haath me pakri vishal talwar se Aarav ko kuchalna chaha, Uss ne talwar utha ke Aarav ke upar maari, sirf talwar ke zameen se lagne se he wahan dur tak zameen phat gayi aur ek bhayanak earthquake aa gaya.


*Woooooosh*



Aarav hava me uchalte huwe seedhe sword ke upar charh gaya aur Guardian ki taraf bhaagne laga, Lekin sword laal ho gayi aur sword me se spikes nikalne lage, Aarav ke liye wahan bhaagna mushkil hone laga.

*Clang*



Aarav ke paon per ek grip ban gayi aur wanhi ruk gaya, Aarav ne apni sword se uss grip ko kaata aur wahan se kudte huwe neeche aa gaya, Aarav abhi bhi Exhaust tha to Guardian ke paas pohanchne me usse dikkat ho rahi thi.



*Crack*



Aarav ke Neeche se ground toot ker hava me utne laga, Aarav ne upar daikha to ek bara pathar uss ki taraf aa raha tha, Aarav flash steps ki madad se wahan se ek pahar per kudte huwe bach gaya.



Aarav ne khud ko sambhala he tha ke ek Energy ball Aarav ki taraf ayi, Aarav ne apni sword Neeche rakhi aur apne saamne ek barrier bana lia, Wo Energy ball seedhe Aarav ke barrier per aa ker lagi aur Aarav khud ko bachane ki koshish karne laga.

Energy ball samne se hati to Aarav ne barrier hata dia, Aarav ke peeche adhe se zada pahar tabah ho chuka tha, Agar Aarav ne samay rehte Barrier nahi banaya hota to Aarav ke liye bhi wo ek bari pareshani ban jati.




Aarav: Tum Hexarion se zada shaktishali ho! Ek Infinte Prison ke guardian se itna to expected tha, Lekin main bhi ab pehle ki tarha kamzoor nahi hu, Mujhe prison me daalna tum logo ki kitni bari galti thi wo ab main tumhe batau ga.



Aarav ne apni swords inventory me rakhi aur khud ko ready karne laga, Position lete huwe Aarav Guardian ke uthaye ek pathar per kudte huwe uss se dusre pathar per kudne laga, Flash Steps se Aarav ki raftaar aur bhi tez ho gayi thi.



Guardian bhi ek pal ke liye Aarav ki speed ko follow nahi ker saka aur agle he pal Aarav guardian ke saamne tha, Lekin Guardian ne kuch khaas response nahi kia, Usse jaise vishwas tha ke Aarav uss ke kareeb aa ker bhi kuch nahi ker sake ga.


[Unique Ability (Will to Live) Activated]


[Current Progress (50%)]


[Endurance Increased *"&+?[$}]


[Intelligence Increased +150]


[Strength Increased +150]


[Stamina Increased +150]


[Agility Increased +150]


[Sense Increased *"&+?]


[All stats •£%®]? after the Unique Ability (Will To L+-_#*?) deactivated]



Aarav ke saamne notification aya lekin Notification window jaise forcefully khuli thi, Aarav ne ek punch banate huwe seedhe Guardian ke muh per maar dia.



*Thump*



Guardian ke haath se uss ki sword chut gayi aur wo peeche hote huwe gir gaya, Aarav ke sirf ek vaar ne uss vishal Guardian ko gira dia tha, Aarav seedhe neeche zameen per dhayan se utar gaya.



Aarav guardian ke liye ek aisi chinti ki tarha tha jo Aakar me uss se bohat choti thi, Lekin shakti uss ke barabar ki rakhti thi.



*Kaboooooom*




Guardian ne bhi Aarav ko kamzoor samajhna band ker dia aur gire huwe he ghoom ker apna haath Aarav ke upar de maara, Guardian ku raftaar ek pal ke liye itni tez thi ke Aarav bhi usse follow nahi ker paya.

Aarav ne barrier banaya lekin Guardian ka wo vaar Aarav ka barrier torte huwe usse zameen me dhasnsa deta hai, Wanhi Guardian ne ek Energy ball banate huwe Aarav ke maar di, Aarav ne khud ko cover kia lekin wo Energy itni zada thi ke Aarav urte huwe peeche paani ke jharne me ja ghusa, Uss ke shareer me jagha jagha se khoon behna shuru ho gaya.

Guardian ke uss attack ne aarav ko Surprise karte huwe hit ker lia tha, Lekin wo ek direct hit tha aur ek bhayanak hit tha, Aarav ke inner organs bhi damage ho gye the.



Aarav: Huh, You sneaky little bastard! Tum un baaki monster's ki tarha nahi ho, Tumhare saamne holdback karne ka matlab hai moat! *Smirk* Ab asli battle shuru ho ga!!!



Aarav ek pathar ko pakarte huwe baahir aya aur seedhe Guardian ki taraf daikhne laga, Guardian bhi pure josh me aa chuka tha, Aarav uss ke liye bhi full of surprises tha, Ek bhayanak muskan Guardian ke chehre per aa gayi.



*Crack* *Pop* *Crack*


Aarav ne apne joints ko crack karte huwe khud ko warm-up karna shuru ker lia, Warmp-Up karne ke baad Aarav ne Guardian ki taraf bhaagna shuru ker dia, Guardian bhi tayar ho gaya.

Aarav(Shout): Thunder Dragon!

Aarav ke kehte he uss ke paas roshni chamakne lagi aur agle he pal Aarav ke saath ek Thunder se bana dragon Levitate karte huwe uss ke saath aage barh raha tha, Dragon Aarav ke paas se aage niklate huwe seedhe Guardian ki chhati me ghus gaya.



*Grooowwwwrrrrr*


Guardian ko zordar shock laga uss ka pura shareer kaanpne laga aur uss ki dardnak cheekh vatavaran me phail gayi, Dragon ne apne shareer se Energy release karni shuru ker di aur thunder dragon ki puri lightning apne andar se baahir nikaal di.



Aarav: Sword barrage!

Aarav ne apne haath uthate huwe kaha, Asmaan me chote chote chhed ban'nne lage aur un chhedon me se swords nikal ker Guardian ki taraf launch hone lagi, Guardian ne apni Energy se khud ko cover ker lia lekin phir bhi bohat swords uss ke andar ghus gayi.



*Hunhhhhhhh*



Guardian ki peeth se kuch tentacles nikal aye aur uss ke aage shield ban gye, Kuch he pal me swords ani band ho gayi, Guardian ne Tentacles se Aarav per vaar kia to Aarav uchalte huwe peeche jaane laga, Lekin uss ke liye bhi itne bare aur tez tentacles ko dodge karna mushkil ho rahi thi.



Aarav peeche hote huwe ek safe distance bana ker ruk gaya, Apne haatho ko jodte huwe Aarav ne unhen kholna shuru kia to uss ke haatho ke beech havaon ka gola ban'nna shuru ho gaya.



Aarav: Wind Bullet!!!




Aarav ke haatho me bana hava ka gola kisi bari goli ki tarha un Tentacles ko cheerte huwe chala gaya, Aarav wanhi nahi ruka aur ek ke baad ek wind bullet shoot karne laga, Guardian ke tentacles peeche push hone lage aur akhir Guardian ko unhe wapis lene per gye.



Tentacles ke andar jaate he Aarav kp guardian dikhayi dia, Lekin wo tentacles sirf ek distraction thi, Guardian Energy release karne ke liye tayar tha aur ab ki baar matra bohat zada thi.



*Kaboooooom*


Guardian ke andar se Energy nikali aur seedhe Aarav ke paas chali gayi, Wo Energy itne bare Area ko cover ker rahi thi ke Aarav ko kanhi bhaagne ka chance bhi nahi mila.



*Screeeech*


Ek teekhi awaaz ke saath Energy release honi band huwi, Aarav ke paas ka pura Area tabah ho chuka tha, Uss pocket dimension ka ek bara hissa he alag ho chuka tha ab wahan thi to sirf darkness, Guardian khush ho gaya ke akhir wo Aarav se jeet gaya hai.



*Whooosh*



Saamne se dhul hati aur uss darkness ke beech Aarav Levitate ker raha tha, Guardian kuch samajh sakta uss se pehle he Aarav ka shareer gayab hone laga, Wo Aarav ka hologram tha aur uss ke beech me ek ball Levitate ker rahi thi.



*Clang*



Ball me se chain baahir ayi aur seedhe Guardian ke ek haath me ghus gayi, Guardian ne gusse me chain ko pakarte huwe usse tor di aur Aarav ko dhoondne laga.



“Surprise Mother Fucker!!!”



Guardian ke sar per se Aarav ki awaaz ayi, Aarav Guardian ki nazron se bach ker ek holo se khud ko replace ker ke uss ke tentacle se pehle he uss ke sar ke upar charh chuka tha.


Aarav: Kitne bare seengh hai tumhare! Kaatne me madad to chahiye ho gi na?



Aarav ne keh huwe apne haath me Qi se hava se ek blade banani shuru ker di, Guardian ne Aarav ko pakarne ke liye haath upar kiye.



“Wind Cutter”



Ek bari wind blade ko Aarav ne uchalte huwe Guardian ke horns ki taraf phaink dia, wo blade seedhe guardian ke horns per lage aur dono horn toot ker neeche gir gye.



*Grooowwwwrrrrr*



Ek baar dobara Guardian ki dardnak cheekh nikal gayi, Guardian ka gussa barh gaya aur uss ne hava me he Aarav ko jalane ke liye aag ke gole uss ki taraf phaink diye, Aarav neeche gir raha tha lekin uss me shaanti se apn haath aage kia aur ek Barrier uss ke saamne ban gaya.



*Slurp*


Sabhi aag ke gole uss barrier me chale gye, Agle he lamhe Barrier ke andar se gole aur bhi bare ho ker baahir nikalte huwe Guardian ke ja lage, Aarav ghoomte huwe seedha huwa aur apna haath seedha kia.



Aarav(Mumble): Holographic Training!



Aarav ke kehte he wahan ka mosam badalne laga, Aarav ke neeche Hologram ban'nne laga lekin wo vishaal tha, Guardian bhi usse heraani se daikhne laga, Guardian ke saamne Hexarion ka hologram tha lekin sirf ek nahi uss ke saamne Hexarion ke 3 hologram the.



Guardian move ker sakta uss se pehle he he teeno Hexarion ke paancho sar Guardian ko jakarne lage, Guardian hilna chah ker bhi hil nahi paa raha tha.



*Thud*



Aarav ek Hexarion ke sar ke upar khara ho gaya, agle he lamhe wo apne ghutnon per aa gaya, Aarav ki naak se khoon behna shuru ho gaya, Uss ka shareer apni limits per tha wanhi teeno Hexarion ke holo's bhi kamzoor ho rahe the.



Aarav(Mumble): Huh! Mujhe meri MP per bhi dhayan dena chahiye tha, Mera Mana khatam ho chuka hai aur Qi bhi lagbhag Exhaust ho chuki hai *smirk* Mujhe nahi laga tha ke tum itne shaktishali ho gye, Ab mera koi bhi attack itna powerful nahi ho ga ke tumhe khatam ker sake.



Aarav khud per he hansne laga, Lekin uss ki awaaz me mayusi nahi thi, Aarav khara huwa aur apne haath neeche ker ke upar daikhne laga, Aarav ke haatho ke paas Wind Bullet bani aur uss ke launch hote he Aarav hava me uchal gaya.




Guardian se bohat upar jaane ke baad Aarav sar Neeche karte huwe neeche jaane laga, Sabhi Hexarion khatam hone lage aur Guardian uss ke saamne tha apne haath upar ker ke Aarav ko khatam karne ke liye.



Aarav(Shout): Mera koi bhi attack tum per kaam nahi kare ga! Lekin main ne ye kabhi nahi kaha ke main tumhe maar nahi sakta, yatriyon ko apne samaan ki khud raksha karni chahiye.



Aarav ne kehte huwe apni inventory kholi aur agle he pal Aarav ke haath me Guardian ki vishal sword aa gayi, Guardian ne neeche daikha to neeche uss ki sword nahi thi, Aarav pehle he usse apni inventory me daal chuka tha.

Guardian ko Hexarion pakre huwe the wo chah ker bhi move nahi ker paa raha tha, Aarav ne apni bachi huwi Qi se puri sword ko boost ker lia.



Aarav: Deathly Thrust!



*Slurpppp*



Guardian ke sar se hote huwe chaati se sword baahir nikal ayi, Guardian wanhi gir gaya aur uss ke saath he Aarav bhi neeche aa ker gir gaya, Guardian mar chuka tha ye santushti hote he Aarav bhi wanhi laita raha, Aarav ka shareer limits ko pohanch chuka tha aur uss ki aankhe band hone lagi.


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Pocket Dimension
#96527


“Kab tak sone wale ho tum? Ab uth bhi jao”


Aarav ke kaano me awaaz ayi to Aarav hosh me aya, Mana 0 hone ki wajha se wo kab unconscious ho gaya usse bhi pata nahi chala, Aarav ne upar daikha to uss ke saamne kuch sunahare rang me chamakti cheez urr rahi thi.



Aarav ne dhayan se daikha to wo chamak kam huwi aur Aarav ko uss golden aura me chamak rahi choti si larki dikhayi di, Uss ke peeche pankh lage huwe the, Uss ka size Aarav ke haath ke barabar tha.

Aarav(Mumble): Chamakne wala Machar?



Larki(Furious): Machar kise bola? ......*Cough*.....Mera matlab main ek Mother Spirit hu spirit world se....Main he hu jo spirit world me santulan bana ker rakhti hu.....Tum mujhe tumhari saviour bhi keh sakte ho....Main ne daikha tum bina Mana ke behosh ho chuke the, Main ne tumhe Mana de ker tumhe bachaya hai.



Spirit ne apni tareef karte huwe kaha, Apni tareef ker ke uss ne saamne daikha to Aarav uss per dhayan na dete huwe MP aur HP Potion pee raha tha.

Spirit(Furious): Tum idhar dhayan kiu nahi de rahe ho? Aisa bartav kon karta hai apne saviour ke saath?




Aarav(Sigh): Huh! Tumhe nahi lagta ke ek spirit per aida behavior shobha nahi deta? Tum ne mujhe bachaya kiu ke main ne tumhe pehle uss Guardian se bachaya? Ulta tumhari wajha se wo Guardian mujhe maar deta.



Aarav ki baat sunte he spirit ka muh ban gaya, Aarav ne uss spirit ko apni senses se uss Guardian ke andar seal huwe sense ker lia tha, Last moment per Aarav ne Sword ko sahi tarha se Guardian me thrust karte huwe Guardian aur Spirit ke beech ki seal ko tor dia tha.



Aarav: Tumhe wo apne liye ek unlimited energy source ki tarha Use ker raha tha? Tumhari wajha se mujhe itni mehnat karni per gayi.



Aarav ye keh ker spirit ko saamne se hatate huwe Guardian ki laash ki taraf chala gaya.



Spirit (Sigh): Huh! Matlab tum ne galti se seal nahi tori thi? Ye sab iss ghatiya Guardian ki wajha se huwa hai, Brrrrhhh, Iss Dhoke se mere saath contract ker lia Master Slave ka aur meri shaktiyon ki madad se yahan ka Guardian ban gaya.



Spirit ne guardian ke sar per jaa ker kick maarni shuru ker di aur apna gussa shaant karne lagi, Aarav ne uss per dhayan nahi dia aur Guardian ke andar se uss ka Mana Stone nikalne laga.



Spirit: Waise....Tumhe kaise pata laga ke ye darpok yahan tha? Ye jitna bhi nakara kiu na ho, Lekin iss ka banaya Barrier sach me bohat shaktishali hai, Main bhi shayad uss barrier ko ya barrier ke andar isse sense nahi ker sakti thi.



Aarav: Main ne sense nahi kia tha! Main bohat se dimension se ho ker yahan aya hu, Har dimension me 100 se zada monster rehte the aur ek baar jung shuru hone ke baad wo jung nahi rukti, Sirf strong he ant me bachta hai, Lekin yahan utne monster nahi the matlab yahan larayi huwi thi, Lekin sabhi shaant the matlab kuch to unhe roke huwa tha kuch shaktishali, Itna pata chalne ke baad usse dhoodna utna mushkil nahi tha.



Aarav ne Stone nikal ker Inventory me se bag nikala aur uss me stone rakh ker wapis inventory me rakh dia aur baki loot lutne laga.



Spirit: Hmm, Sach kahu to mujhe nahi laga tha ke tum jeeto gye! Lekin tum ne mujhe bhi chaunka dia, Tum sirf jeete nahi mujhe bhi bacha lia, Waise ek aur baat puchni thi, Tum ne ye kiu kaha tha ke tum guardian ko dhoond rahe the?



Aarav ne Guardian ke andar se uss ki sword nikaali aur usse dhayan se daikhne laga ke uss ka kia kuch ban sakta hai? Aur usse bhi Inventory me daal lia.



Aarav: Prison ka kehna tha ke yahan se nikalne ka koi raasta nahi hai! Lekin ye galat tha, Guardian prison ke andar aur baahir aa ja sakta hai, Matlab yahan kuch to raasta hai? Yahan ate huwe kuch communication ke layak monster mile aur un se mujhe pata chala ke Guardian ke paas ek key hai, Uss ki madad se prison se kisi bhi dimension me Gate khul sakta hai.




Spirit: Lekin Guardian to mar gaya? Ab key kahan se mile gi?



Aarav: main bhi usse zinda pakarna chahta tha! Lekin main pichle 49 Pocket dimension se bina ruke larte huwe aya tha, Main already limits per tha lekin agar aj main guardian ko jaane deta to wo kab milta kise he pata tha, Lekin beech me he main ne usse zinda pakarne ka plan drop ker dia.



Spirit: Aur wo kyu?




Aarav ne Guardian ke toote huwe horn uthaye aur ek horn seedhe Spirit ke paas ker ke uss ki taraf point karne laga.



Aarav: Kyu ki mujhe Key dikh gayi thi! Tumhe sense karte he mujhe pata chal gaya ke tum he ho wo key jo gate kholti hai, Ek spirit jo apne spirit word ke santulan ko banaye rakh sakti hai uss ke liye aisa gate kholna kuch bari baat nahi hai.



Spirit ke chehre per bhi muskurahat aa gayi, Aarav ne bilkul sahi pehchana tha, Lekin wo itni easily kahan Aarav ki baat man'nne wali thi.



Spirit(Smirk): Beshak tum ne Sense ker lia ho ga! Akhir Guardian ko harane ki kshamta rakhne wale insaan se mere jaisi shaktishali Spirit ka aura kaise chupe ga, Lekin main aise he to nahi tumhari baat maanu gi, Tumhe mere saath Master Slave contract ker ke mera Slave ban'nna ho ga, Kukukuku!


Aarav: Apne jaisa bewakoof samjha hai kia? Main koi dumb Spirit nahi hu jo kisi jhanse me phans ker kisi ka so-called slave ban jau, apni halat daikhi hai kia? Agar main na ata to abhi bhi Guardian ke andar kaid hoti.



Spirit (Yell): Ye konsa tareeka hai Madad maangne ka? Tumhe meri madad chahiye aur tum mera he mazak bana rahe ho? Jao main nahi karne wali tumhari mada- *Scream* Eyyyahhhh!!!



Spirit ke bolte huwe he Aarav ne apna haath aage kia aur Spirit ek barrier ke beech me kaid ho gayi, Barrier ke andar he Aarav ne spikes bana diye jo seedhe spirit ke touch ho rahe the.



Spirit(Trembling): Tumhari banayi cheez mujhe chhu kaise paa rahi hai? Main ek Spirit hu?



Aarav: Aur main Soul Monarch ka beta hu! Mera har vaar Spirit Qi possess karta hai, Matlab main tumhe chhu bhi sakta hu aur maar bhi sakta hu, Ab tum Seedhe mere liye gate kholo gi.



Aarav ki baat sunte he Spirit kaanpne lagi, Usse nahi laga tha ke Aarav usse chhu bhi sake ga, Ek pal me uss ki akar toot gayi thi.



Spirit: Su-Suno.......Hum contract me kuch badlav ker lete hai na? *Gulp* Aisa karte hai na ke hum partner contract karte hai, Tumhare waapis apni duniya me jaane tak hum mil ker kaam ker sakte hai?


Aarav: Hmm, Sure! Waise bhi yahan se nikalne ke baad tumhara koi kaam nahi rahe ga mere paas Chamakne wale machhar?



Aarav ne Barrier hataya to Spirit baahir aa gayi, Aarav uss ke saamne khara ho gaya, Spirit mantar parhte huwe contract banane lagi aur uss ka aura Aarav ke paas ane laga, Aarav ne bhi resist nahi kia aur Contract pura hone dia.



Spirit: Ab hamara contract ho chuka hai! Ye contract sirf tumhare world pohanchne tak Valid hai, Tumhe tumhari world pohanchate he Contract complete ho jaye ga, Tumhare world pohanchne me madad karu gi, Beech me meri taraf se kisi bhi term ki violation huwi to main hamesha ke liye tumhari Slave ban jau gi.



Spirit ne contract ki terms aur baki sab kuch clear kia, Aarav ne bhi hami bhar di aur wahan se baki loot bhi uthane laga, Spirit usse muh banaye daikhti rahi.



Spirit: Gate kholne ke liye mujhe bohat Mana ki zaroorat hai! Gate ke andar tumhara Dimension dhoondne tak har pal bohat Mana consume kare ga, Agar Mana khatam huwa to hum wanhi phans jaye gye hamesha ke liye, Guardian ke paas bohat Mana tha, Lekin mujhe nahi lagta tumhare paas utna ho ga, Hume uss ka kuch karna ho ga.



Aarav ne sabhi stones aur loot utha ker Inventory aur bag me rakh li, Sab uthane ke baad Aarav waapis Spirit ke paas aa gaya.



Aarav: Uss ke liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!



Aarav ne kehte huwe apni ungli ko Spirit ke sar per rakh dia, Aarav dhayan lagane laga, Spirit bhi usse dhayan se daikhne lagi.



Aarav(Chant): Soul Binding!



Aarav ke bolte he Aarav aur Spirit ke beech me soul thread ban gaya, Dono ki soul ek dusre se bind ho gayi, Spirit usse daikhne lagi ke ye kya kia hai?


Aarav: Ab hum dono ki soul bind ho chuki hai! Ab tum mera aur main tumhara Mana khud me transfer ker sakte hai.



Spirit: Lekin hume bohat zada Mana chahiye? Guardian ka Mana bhi sirf ek baar he Gate khol sakta tha aur tum-......Tumhara Mana.....*Frowns*..... Tumhare paas itna Mana kaise hai?



Aarav: Ye zaroori nahi hai! Itna kafi hai?




Spirit (Frowns): Haan! Lekin kaise? Tum jab keh rahe the ke tum 49 Dimension me bina ruke larte huwe aye ho to tum sach keh rahe the? Kitne samay se ho tum Prison me?



Spirit Aarav ke andar Mana aur Qi daikh ker chaunk chuki thi, Aarav se uss me Mana transfer hona shuru ho gaya tha, Spirit ne samay barbad na karte huwe Gate kholna shuru ker dia.



Uss soul thread se Spirit ko Mana mil raha tha, Wahan itna Mana tha ke Spirit ko kuch bhi dikkat nahi ho rahi thi Mana lene ke liye, Un ke saamne Dimension ke beech me crack ana shuru ho gaya aur uss Crack me se roshni ane lagi.



Aarav(Sigh): Huh, 4007 Dimension se ho ker aj akhir yahan aya hu main! 113.....113 saal baad wapis jaane wala hu main, 113 saal har din zinda rehne ke liye larne ke baad, Apne saamne ayi har chunauti ko paar karne ke baad main wapis ja raha hu, Aarav Arya waapis aa raha hai.



Spirit: Funny! Tum ye sab itne Josh se keh rahe ho, Lekin ussi samay tumhare andar ek khamooshi chayi huwi hai, Kia sach me tumhe khushi bhi hai kia waapis jaane ki? Tumhare chehre per muskurahat hote huwe bhi tumhare andar ek bhi emotion nahi hai, tum agle pal ka soch bhi nahi rahe ho....Ya shayad......Tum sab kuch soch chuke ho aur tumhe un sab per itna vishwas hai ke tumhe sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai? Akhir kaise insaan ho tum, Aarav Arya?



Spirit ne kaanpti awaaz me pucha, Aarav se soul bind hone ke baad wo Aarav ke andar jhank sakti thi, Lekin usse andar kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha, Andar khamooshi thi jo koshish karne se bhi toot nahi sakti thi.


Aarav ne Spirit ki taraf daikha aur bina kuch kahe he Gate ki taraf chalne laga, Spirit ne bhi Gate ko khol dia aur dimension ke beech me ek Gate ban gaya, Aarav apne saath Spirit ko lete huwe Dimension ke andar chala gaya.

Aarav ke andar jaate he peeche se gate band ho gaya aur Dimension kaanpne laga, Sab kuch tootne laga aur wanhi Asmaan me dobara ek alert aa gaya.



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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye tha hamara Ascension Arc ka pehla Update, Umeed karta hu ap ko Update pasand aye ga, Target 80 Likes ka hai, Milte hai agle Update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]

[Note:- Agar Update 40 ki samajh nahi ayi to ye Link per Click ker ke QNA me Question 5 aur 6 ke answer Parh lo]


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[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai ye kya bakchodi kri h yr?
Mood hi khrab kr dia Sara?
Urvi ko kyu mara?
And akash kha h bc?
Ab story me bss yr rhe ga ki arav kese bhar atta h prison se and urvi ko I think ek bar exiler de kr jinda kr dia jae ga and story ends?
Bss

What the actual Fuck ????
I don't have fucking words to describe the emotions I am feeling right now
Well sirf ek question hai kia Urvi bach jaye gi ????

it was the best update of the whole story till now

Dhamaka Wo bhi jor ka Udhar yu jung ki sister ke death ho gyi idhar Aarav ki sister ki bhi death ho gyi aur archana ne hi Dhokha diya Mujhe Suru se hi lag rha tha jo bahur pyar dikhata hai wo aksar dhokha deta hai Vansh ne bhi koi kasar nhi chhodi aur ye kaun si nyi jagah hai Kanha Aarav pahunch gya hai shayad ye second Arc hoga story ka Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota Hai Kis kis Memory se Aarav gayab nhi hua hoga shayad uska pack hoga Is Arc se aarav aur bhi shaktishali hoga Arav ko CWD ki three drops de di gyi Unka effect Aarav par kya hoga Ye bhi dekhne Wali Baat hogi Aarav ne yu jung Luna urf second Alpha ki Power di hai kya bhavishy me kya hota hai agle arc me dekhte hain

It's shocking update

Ding

Best update Hain bhai...but urvi....next arc ka besabri se intezaar rahega bhai...kon Kia kehta hai pata nahin..but I think you are the best writer...keep it up...

Bhai ek request hai ho sake pori karna story main ap english words bahut zada use kar rahe ho jiske wajah kafi chize saaf nhi ho pa Rahi or na he padhne main maza aa raha hai ho sake tho Kam use Karo

Bhai update ke baare me kya hi khu ek dam ! Bhai lekin aap ne abhi Tak ye nhi bataya ki akash aur arav ka kya connection hai ye samaj me nhi lekin ho sakta hai ki aage aane Wale update me mile.

Areee bhai ye kya tha kaise itna sab soch liye bhai har ek 1 fight ek dusre se jude huwe
Yoo Jung ne bhi apni sister
To bhai pack hoga ki khtam kya sare pack member bhi aarav ke shat infinte Prison mein honge pata nahi I think ab hoga kya inki ma dimag ka dahi krdiya

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

DAAAAMN !!!!!

I can say this is the best update ever delivered by you. story jab start hui thi to lag rha tha k thk hai werewolf ne is forum system genre introduce krwaya hai to sabhi ab isi k pichey bhagne lag gaye hai. even I had heard about this story from Werewolf's thread. but now i admit you're a fucking genius, the way you wrote this update SPEECHLESS. tareef k liye words nahi mil the.

pehly lga k arav apne father ka badla le ga after his father's flashback. but us mein khaas nai tha k yeah normal shit. par is update k bad story ne apne name k sath insaaf kiya hai. ab samj mein aya hai bisi is ka name vengeance q hai. one thing I've just clicked KYA HUMARA PROTAGONIST AB EK VILLIAN HO GA qk k ab mujhy esa hi lag rha hai k arav ab soft-hearted hero nahi rhe ga he'll be just a cold-hearted killer who just wants his revenge. lekin is k liye main sure bhi nahi hun qk shyd arav mein kuch had tak us ka true nature rhe ga we'll see then

urvi ka character fav tha almost sabhi readers ka is ki death dikhana is a very bold step by write I appreciated that. agar ye plot requirement hai to is barey mein writer ko force karna means story ka kabara karwane jesa hai. mujhy khushi hai k ap ne plot ko change nahi kiya warna hume itna zbardast update kese parhne ko milta.

to yoo-jung LUNA hai arav k pack ki to kya ye humare liye hint hai story ki heroien yehi ho gi? yoo-jung ka character to shuru se hi ek strong character tha assassin skills plus leadership bhi nazar aai hai is character mein and most importantly yoo-jung ek bold steps lene wali personality hai. is ka one of the bold move hume arav k death k bad nazar aya hai aur ek leadership bhi nazar aai thi k agar sabhi emotional ho gaye to un ki death easily ho sakti hai then she took a charge. pehly dar tha k yoo-jung apne clan ki wajah se arav ko betray kar sakti hai lekin ab to fire clan khud is ka enimy hai to kuch relief mili ko chlo abhi to esa kuch nai ho ga. lekin pta nahi q yoo-ri ki death ka bohat dukh hua hai yoo-jung k ane se lga tha k yes she can save her PER.... urvi ki death se zeyada dukh yoo-ri ki death ka hua hai qk urvi ki death k scene mein aur bhi kafi scene chal rhe the to itna feel karne ka time nahi tha lekin yoo-ri k scene ko maine dil se feel kiya . kya yoo-jung k bhi mind se arav ki memories mit jayein gi ? achanak yad aya yoo-jung luna hai mtlb alfa ki mate to akanksha ka kya scene hai phir is ka zrur btana bhai qk i forget k in kya patch up hua tha ya nai

bhenchod vansh kya ploting kar geya sala. bhai agar to isey main villain rakhne ka soch rhe ho jo k esa nahi ho ga lekin agar phir bhi soch rhe ho to bhai rehne do ye deserve nahi karta. aur archana kya bakchodi pel gai yahan pe bisi itna sweet character tha lekin acha hai ab revenge mein maza aye ga. i think akash ne jo vansh k sath kiya tha to us ne archana ko btaya ho ga to apne bete ko bachane k liye ye sab kar diya ho ga. vanshika bhi udr hi thi lift mein lekin q sabhi same time pe same place pe. aur itni bari ploting ka akash ko bilkul pta nahi lga i think akash ki security hoti thi kuch urvi k liye agar main galat nai hun to us ka kya wo kidr gai. arav prison mein keyd ho geya aur us ki memories mostly removed ho chuki hain ab to koi us ki help bhi nai kar sakta ho gai lekin ek minute arav ka pack ko to sab yad rehna hi chahiye aur us pack mein se 2 log earth pe hi hain yoo-jung aur belle inhe arav ka dard aur pareshani feel honi hi chahiye nah bhai warna pack ka feel nai aye ga. chahe ek anjana sa dar ya kuch bhi ek hint to milti hi chahiye inhe

agar bhai prison ko explore karne ka mood hai to bhai thora fast forward hi karna agar to plot requirement hai to phir to kuch ho hi nahi sakta baat hi khatam.

yr 15 20 din wait nahi ho sake ga kushish karna k thora jaldi hi update continue kar dena is update k bad to wese bhi intzaaar karna bohat mushkil hai

keep

keep posting

waiting for the next update ​

Unbelievable

Bro dhamekdar update bro

Bhenchod! Mood off hi ho gya.....

3 pointa ki vajha se...

1st point ek hindi story mein jarurat se jyada english use ho rahi hai jisme kuch words sar ke upar se hi nikal jate hai....

2nd point archana ka dhokha jisko maa ki muraat dikha raha tha writer aur ab ek raand bana diya....

3rd aur gandu aarav kisi ko maarke urvi ki maut ka badla bhi nahi le paya maza tab ata jab woh vahi ke vahi marta sab ko verna lambe time baad to kutta bhi pather marne wale ko kaat ke apna badla le leta hai.....


Totallly disappointing update urvi ki death

Bhai thanks Bhai itna bada update or itna accha update dene ke liye finally story title Hero ko mil gya manohar ki memory chali gai hai Akansha ki nhi gyi hai
Ye update unexpected tha mtlb ki aesa kuch hoga hum to soch rahe the urvi leading character main hai but I guess urvi is no more
Ye arc bhut ajib turn pe end hua hai bhai next ke liye wait rahega

nice update bhai kya update diya hai dimag ki sab naase hi kaam karna band kar gayi

Maine Update dobara Read kiya jisme kuch sawal Aa rhe hain
1.Vansh ke Pass CWD kanha se Aayi Jabki CWD to aarav ko prapt Hui thi kya ye vahi cheej hai jo jinho ne Vansh ko di thi ?

Nice update

It's a good update ... Unpredictable... Story

Ab khi jakr aapki story ka title samjh aaya, or update ke bare me to kya hi khun
Shaandaar zabardast zindabad.
Agle update ka besabri se intezaar.

Nice update

Great update. Bahut hi unexpected end hua is Tower Arc ka. Jahan ek taraf Yoo-Jung ki bahan Yoo-ri marr gayi wahin Aarav bhi apni bahan Urvi ko bacha nahi paya. Jahan yeh ek bahut dukh se bhara incident hai, wahin par ab dono Aarav aur Yoo-Jung ki kamzori bhi khatam ho gayi. Ab dekhna hai ki Aarav kaise apne aap ko prison world me wahan ka King banata hai. Sabse badi baat ki uski Will to Live ne sab logon se uski memory erase hone nahi di. Weh jarur laut kar aayega, bahut strong ho kar, aur sabse pehle Luna, apni female Alpha ko dhund lega. Phir to Vansh aur Archana ki khair nahi. Lekin ab usko control kaun kar payega, shayad Akansha, lekin uski memory to erase ho gayi. Next Arc interesting hoga, full of fighting and thrill. Wahan bhi Aarav ka koi romantic attachment ho jaye kisi ke saath, to weh Arc bhi aur interesting ho jayega.
Waise Urvi ko Elixir se bachaya bhi ja sakta hai, dekhte hain ki oont kis karvat baithata hai.

तारीफ़ अपने आप की करना फ़िज़ूल है, खुशबु ख़ुद बता देती है कौन सा फूल है...!!

Bro kis novel se story li hai

Are boss ye story mein kya lafda kar diya, sala dimag ka dahi ho gaya hai.
Please make everything right

You did amazing bro
Literally superb
Heads up

Awesome update Bhai

Kaafi interesting things hui hai es update me ...dil khush ho gya read kr k but saath me dil bhi toot gya Urvi or Yojoong ki sister k marne se....yahan story thodi fast forward bhi hui kuch sawaalo me uljhaate hue
1.... I don't think ki Urvi ka role abhi khatam huaaa hai ...sprit clan se belong krte hai .... to Urvi k liye aage kuch naa kuch interesting sa hi hoga....May Be future me Aarav k Pagalpan ko rokne k liye wo bapis aaye.... kyuki uski body ko samhaal k le jaaya gya hai to Usko safe hi rakkha jaayega jis trha tower me uske father k body ko rakkha gya safe
2....... yahan Yojong ki Past de related baate patta to chali lekin bahut se sawaal khade kar gayi..... Fire clan ki leader ki beti batai gyi hai ..but itne high status k babjood unko itni problem kyu face krni padi.... उनकी maa ka kya huaa..... unke father me enka saath kyu nahi diya ......fire clan enke peeche laga huaa hai haath dho kar to pakka sirf Ye next successor ka nahi ho sakta Cause jinhone bhi fire clan ko enke peeche bheja hai wo Yojong k baare me kuch khaas jaante honge...3rd elder main culprit nahi ho sakti Yojong k liye
3..... archna ka ye sab karna aur without any feelings k wahan khde reh k sab chupchaap hote dekhan...kuch to bahut badde jhol ki taraf ishara kr rha hai ....May Be jis trha Ela ko majdoori kiya gya uske father k against usi trha yahan pe bhi huaa ho yaa may bhi koi big game huaa hai Aarav k saath
4..... es sab me Aakash kha gya.....itna badda kaand ho gya aur use bhanak tak nahi lagi...usko Jisko aarav k har ek pal ki Khabar rehti thi use itne badde kaand ka kese patta naa chala
5 ....... yaa phir ye sab jaanbujh k aarav k saath to nahi kiya gya taaki use es dimension me bheja jaa sake kisi khaas maksad k liye ..kisi khaas person ko us dimension se bahar nikalne k liye ..cause koi bhi us dimension se bahar nahi nikal sakta ...but may be unko malum chal gya ho ki aarav me wo ability h jo ki us dimension se bahar aa sakta hai



Kuch bhi jhol ho sakta hai ....bit over-all kehna chaahunga...behad shaandaar update rhe ab tak k aapke
But Haan...Urvi or Yoo-ri k Characters k saath hue kaand ko justify kiya jaaye
Cause ye wo Characters nahi जिन्हें sacrifice kiya jaaye

Fantastic update.

Start of new beginning.

Kya hi kadak likha hai bro

Saloooo like karrooo

Awesomes bhai

Bhai bahut lamba gap nhi le rhe ho yar. Thoda jaldi update do aur ab time se update dene ko kaha hai apne.

Update kb tk milega

Dada 10 ke phle update do
Itta late n kro

Bhai please update thoda jaldi dena

Mast,ik number

Bhai i have no words ,too good.
Keep it up.

Nice update bhot awala par Kar Maza aya gya ab new update Ka intazar ha bhaii

Not only tutorial arc has ended but also the kind hearted Aarav's chapter has been ended rather most cruelly. Yoo-jung also has suffered a cruel fate in her sister's death at the hands of her adversaries. What a tragedy and a tragic coincidence, alas. Will Aarav ever be able to avenge his sister's death, only time will tell. Congrats dear bro for your giving us such a mind-blowing update. Awaiting your new arc eagerly

Bhai Jaisa ki dekh rhe hai aap ne next arc me target 80 rakhne ko bola hai but 1 weak ki analysis karne ke baad pta chal rha hai ki 80 target complete karna kitna muskil hai 1 weak me 80 nhi touch ho rha hai to aap khud sochiye bura mat maniyega but abhi aap ki story new category me aati hai isliye abhi aapko target 60 likes rakhna chahiye aage jab aap ki story jab famous ho jaye to aap target bdha sakte hai ek bar iss baat par Sochoyega aur jo readers meri baat se agree karte hain wo like kare

Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai....
Mujhe to bahut maja aaya or sath me kafi question bhi aaya ki pehle yoo jung ki behen waqai mar geyi.....akhir us car me kiski body thi......or yoo jung aage kya karegi......or sab japan kyu jaa rahe hai....or ab aate hai Aarav par......mujhe pehle se pata tha archana vansh ko bahut peyaar karti hai isiliye jab aarav urbi pehli baar aaya tab use bhi peyar diya or jab aarav vansh ke liye khatra ban geya to archana ji apni bete ke pakh me chali geyi....usne pehle isiliye peyaar dikha rahi thi.....or wahi aab khud aarav ko marnr ke liye injection laga diya or to or urbi ko khud hi goli maari........or ab aarav kis lok ki prison me pouch geya or waha se kaise wapash aata hai dekhte hai.....
Ab aata hu muddhe per.....story ke naam par......ab dekhte hai aarav ka sweet revenge ka kaise leta hai.....or baki ka kya hoga ki usko aarav yad hi na ho to.....waise me usse kaise pata chalega ki aarav kisliye or kyu un sab se badla lerahe hai.....yahi samapt karta hoon new update intejaar rehega.....ager possible hua to 5 7 dino me dene ka prays karna kyu ki ab jawda intejar nhi seh payunga ki kab story chalu hogi or kab dekhunga ki kaise aarav sabse badla lega....or aakash ka kya roll hoga isme ki uske family ko koi hurt kar rahe hai
Waiting for next update

Superb update

Update kab tak ayega bro

Bhai kya esa ho sakta hai ki next arc me ya aane Wale kisi bhi arc me akansha ko aarav ki life dobara entry ho or abki baar dono ki love story bhi dekhne ko mile ek dam made for each other wali

Already 78 Ho Gaye Hai Tension Nai Lene Ka.

Mast story

Waiting

Bro update

Bhai update kab aayega

Update kab ayega bhai

Bro update kb ayega

Bhai Target to pura nhi huwa kya update mile ga jldi ya fir 15 ke baad kam se kam bata do

bahut hi shandar update

Ab to 80 likes be poory ho gaay hn to ab Q nii aa rha ha update
Jailde jailde update da do bro

Update brother

Bro.... update kab tak aayega...

Must hai Bhai

Ohh sach me itna dhyan se padhne ke bavjud ye baat kaise chhut gyi Aarav aur Urvi ke sath jab ghtna hui to wo din 2012 ka akhiri din tha but yoo jung aur yoo ri ke sath 2013 ke pahle din ghatna ghati
Means Ye ghatna Aarav ke memory erasing Process ke baad ghati Jisse ye prove ho rha hai ki Yoo jung ki Memory se Aarav delete nhi hua hai
Kyo salty bhai sahi guess kiya hai ya ab bhi wrong guess hai batana

Hahaha... Mera matlab pyar se control kerne ko tha. Urvi ke na rehne par Aarav ki personality bilkul change ho jayegi. Ek sanvedansheel aur sabki help kerne wala Aarav ab ek kroor, hinsak aur badla lene wala prani ban jayega. Waise bhi kahani ka main plot 'Venegeance. hai.

ये स्टोरी भी गई 12 के भाव मे

Ok bro

Ok bro eagerly waiting for update.
Jitne zyada update doge utne zyada likes milenge her hafte think about what I said.

Chalo matlab Mera bday pe update ayega...thanks

Sab sahi tha but vansh ko itna importance role Dena samajh nahi aaya .....

Oye tu hai kaun ye bolne wala Writer ne bola hai wait karne ka wait kar itna hi shauk hai to likh ek story fir hum log bhi dekhte hain tu kitne Update weekly deta hai aa jaate hain na jane kanha kanha se wo banda bhi apni daily life se jo time bachta hai nikalkar usme Update ki Preparation karta hai Phir usko likhta hai

आप कोंन हो। राईटर के यहा प्राइवेट चपरासी हो क्या।
जवाब देना होगा तो राइटर देगा तु अपना मुह बंद रख चमचे।

Intejar rehega

Aaj ke Update ki timing kya hogi Bhai

Eagerly waiting for your update

subah ya sham ko

Bhi subah ya sham kab aayega

Okk

15 minutes more

Bhai or kitna time lagega

Bhai update please

Bhai update kab Tak doge reply to kar do

Late from the schedule

Update 40 has been posted Guys!!! ​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Index has been updated ​

 

[CFL7897]

Aarav baht se dimension se ladte hue aa raha hai....jis se pata chlta hai ki wo bahut saktisali ho chuka hai....lekin kaise????

Prision me jane k bad uska system to band ho gaya tha?? To wo khud ko kaise upgrade kiya???

Sayad aage pata chale!!!
Shandar update

 

[Salty~Otaku]

I don't Know ke mera Internet fuck ker raha tha ya site slow thi, Lekin ek ek Picture ko Upload karne me 10-10 Minute lage hai ​

 

[Raj kalita]

Bohot hi shandar update dia hai bhai...maza aa gaya...