Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Quick Recap of the Arc: After Aarav's encounter with kim Min-soo as Avinash Kim Min-soo ran away. Then Kunle got invitation from the Carnival of death (COD) to save him and for Aarav's alterior motive aarav and Yoo-Jung decided to go with him and joined them Becky and also Caroline who wanted undiscovered her father's murderer.

In carnival with Aarav and Yoo-Jung's help they clear each floor and Aarav was taking all game master out until at floor 3 they got tricked by the game master and lost becky there.

Later they are joined by another team's 2 remaining players (Mira&Daryl) and they entered the 4th floor where they got summoned into another world to complete a quest, Save this world from demon kind and from the demon king and an side quest to save both of Priestesses twin daughters(Eira&Sola). To save them Aarav made a sacred bond(Marriage by earth means) with both of daughters them and get into a physical relationship with them.

*End of recap*

 

[Salty~Otaku]

bhai bade budhe keh gaye do kashti mai panv rakhoge to naiya par kaise lagegi

True

gharwalo ko kya pata laga ye smjh nahi aya sory agar kuch personal puch liya ho to

Sarcastically bola ke jaise unhe pata lag gaya ke aj busy hu main

 

[Salty~Otaku]

bahut badhiya update hai bhai.......jinhoo aur chang ne vansh ke sath kiske khilaf khara kar diya hai.

Obviously Yoo-Jung ke khilaaf he bheje gye Vansh ko

or aarav ka matlab kya tha ki main apko ander se mehsus kar sackta hoon.....????

Like wo ek tarha ki xray vision posses karta hai not exactly but kind'a

bahut badhiya update hai bhai.......jinhoo aur chang ne vansh ke sath kiske khilaf khara kar diya hai......kya wo dono aakash ke khilaf istemmal karna chaha......or aarav ka matlab kya tha ki main apko ander se mehsus kar sackta hoon.....????
waiting for next update

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Awesome update bro
Kuch kehna hai but after next update bologna kyu ki Kya Pata us update Mai un SAWALO ki jawab mil jai

Konse sawal the

 

[Salty~Otaku]

B

Bhai itna panic mat hoya kro thoda late chalta hai tension free hoke likho Bhai
Apna bhi dhyan rakho or family ka bhi yahan se kuch nhi milta hai hum sabhi log bs ek bond se jude hai
Usi bond ki wajah se writers late night Tak story prepare krte hai or readers wait hai
To isme itna panic mat ho apke reader kahin nhi Jane Wale apki story achi hai bhai or depends on update size it can be consider that 2 update or more then 1
5k word is not a joke yahan koi page dekh ke nhi likhna hai bhai ki dekho or likho
Apko plot join krne padte hai image add Krna perfect image dhundhna hai bhut Kam hai bhai
Quality maintain krna hai
Lastly bs ek hin bat bolunga relax raho tension free hoke update likho but update and ke bad readers bhi like kro or apna review do bhai log apko kya acha lga kya khrab review Dene se writer ko thoda courage milta hai bhai
Jo writer acha kar rahe hai unko promote kro review do like kro apne thoughts batao ek writer ko or kya cahiye Bhai site koi payment to deti nhi hai

Yup Kuch issue huwe the lekin wo sabhi sambhal raha hu, Nect Arc se kam se kam 1-2K update likhne ke baad he Date dia karu ga! Main dates ke saath itna acha nahi hu, Thora lazy type ka banda hu lekin mujhe Quality 100% Chahiye hoti hai, Abhi kuch word mistake bhi hai unhe bhi agle Arc ke saath sudhar lu ga Replies aur likhne ka time nahi ban raha tha koi super busy nahi tha sirf kuch aur New intrest ko try ker raha tha Aur reviews ek writer ke liye yahan payment ki tarha he hai, Ache review parhne ko mile to alas bhi khatam ho jati hai, Lekin jab review sadharan ho to Uss Excitement ke saath likhna mushkil ho jata hai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Zabardast update bhai keep posting

Awesome update

Bro shandar lajab mast update bro weting for next update bro

Nice update, really like it.

Nice update bro

nice update

Ny
Nyc update bhai
Hopefully ab Saturday ko update mill jae gme

Mast update hai bhai...Dil khush ho gaya...

Wonderful update Bhai

Shandar update bro

Nice update

Nice update

Bahot achhi story hai bhai best of luck

Nice one

Waiting

nice update

Fantastic update

all for giving your valuable Reviews on Update 31. stay with me until the end. Love you all!

 

[DINNA]

super awesome update. one of the best.

 

[DINNA]

waiting for update

 

[DINNA]

super awesome update. one of the best.

 

[navrose]

UPDATE 37 ~
(ALL IN ONE)​

Dhaulpur Market
Kullu ~ 12:08 PM


*Ring* *Ring*


Avinash ki pocket me uss ka mobile teesri baar baja to Avinash ne apne haath me pakri Fruit Basket neeche rakhi aur Truck ke kinare chala gaya.



Larke ate rahe aur Truck me se Fruit Basket uthate rahe, Avinash ne mobile nikaal ker daikha to Call ghar se aa rahi thi.



Avinash: Hello!



Aarav(Otherside): Hello! Papa, Aarav baat ker raha hu.



Avinash: Haan, Kuch huwa hai kia? main yahan kaam ker raha hu, Agar kuch zaroori hai to jaldi batana.


Avinash ne truck ke baahir khare larko jo uss ka intezar ker rahe the un ko ishaara karte huwe kaha ke wo abhi ata hai.



Aarav: Haan ji ek zaroori baat thi! Wo aj Urvi pehli baar khana bana rahi hai, Kia aj ap jaldi aa sakte ho? Urvi ka bohat Mann hai to agar ap bhi saath khana khao gye to usse acha lage ga, Wo khud puchne se dar rahi hai to main ne call ki.


Avinash ne apni kalayi me pehni ghari me waqt daikha aur Truck ke andar rakha huwa samaan daikhne laga.



Avinash: Abhi mujhe yahan samay lage ga! Samaan utaar ker kuch samaan uthana bhi hai phir wahan aa ker dobara Unload karna hai, Tum sab khaa lo agar rakh sako to rakh lena main raat ko wapis aa ker khana ho ga to kha lu ga.



Avinash ki baat sun kuch lamhe dusri taraf se Aarav ki awaaz nahi ayi, Avinash ko jaldi thi to uss ne Aarav ko call band karne ka kaha.



Aarav: Theek hai Papa! Agar kaam jaldi ho jaye to please aa jana, Urvi ka bohat Mann hai.



Avinash ne bina kuch kahe Call cut ker di, Larke baahir he khare huwe the, Avinash ne un ke saath mil ker baki ke Fruits utaare, Truck khaali ker ke uss ne wahan hotel walo ke saath pura hisaab kia aur Truck me samaan rakhwane laga.



Lekin uss ka dhayan kaam me lag he nahi raha tha, Uss ne kuch pal koshish ki lekin uss dhayan bhatakta ja raha tha, Avinash ek baar dobara Side me gaya aur kisi ko Call karne laga.



*Ring* *Ring*


“Hello” *Otherside*


Avinash: Hello Manohar! Kaise ho?



Dusri taraf Manohar tha, Avinash ka Manali ane ke baad ban'nne wala sab se acha dost, Avinash beech beech me Manohar ki madad leta rehta tha.


Manohar: Main badhiya! Tum batao kaise yaad kia hume?



Avinash: Wo aj mujhe kuch Personal kaam tha! Lekin ek delivery bhi karni hai mujhe, Kia tum kisi larke ko bhej sakte ho? Wo haath bata de ga to kaam jaldi ho jaye ga.



*Hahahahaha*



Dusri taraf se Manohar ek zor ka kehkaha laga ker hansa Avinash bhi heraan ho gaya ke ye kia tha?



Manohar(Laughing): Gadhe tu kab jhoot bolna seekhe ga? Zaroori kaam ka bahan kis se ker raha hai? Seedhe seedhe nahi keh sakta ke Urvi beti ka banaya khana khaane ka mann hai tera?



Manohar ki baat sun Avinash sharminda hone laga, Lekin manohar bhi uss ke pure maze le raha tha.


Avinash: Wo to bus aise he bhook lagi thi-



Manohar: Nahi bola jata tere se jhoot bola bhi mat ker! Bacho ko bhi aise he bol dia pagal, Arrey kab chore ga apni ye harkate *laugh* Apna pyaar kabhi dikhana kiu nahi chahta tu?



Avinash: Hmm! Abhi tum maze lene band karo, Aur ye batao ke bhej sakte ho kia kisi ko?



Manohar: Tu fikar mat ker! Tere se Pehle Aarav ne mujhe keh dia tha, Main ne baat ker li hai yahan, Tu truck le ker Ghar ke paas aa ja baki delivery ka kaam main karwa du ga, Waise bhi aj to hum bhi apni beti ke haath ka khana khaye gye.


Avinash ko samajh aa gaya ke Aarav ne kiu usse kaam jaldi khatam ho jaane per ghar ane ka kaha tha, Avinash ne Manohar se kuch der baat ker ke Call band ki aur waapis kaam per lag gaya.



Kuch aur samaan rakhne ke baad pura samaan truck me rakh lia gaya, Avinash ne ek baar dobara sab kuch check kia aur Driving seat per baith gaya.



Night Drive nahi thi to Avinash ne saath me Driver nahi laya tha, 40KM ke kareeb ki drive thi jo aksar Avinash akele ker leta tha, Avinash truck ko ghar ki taraf le jaane laga.




Avinash ka haath paas me rakhi sharab ki choti bottle ki taraf gaya, Lekin uss ne apna haath beech me he rok lia aur kuch sochte huwe haath Waapis kheench lia.




Avinash (Sigh): Aj sharab nahi! Aj seedhe ghar jana hai.



Avinash driving ke beech peene ka bhi adi tha, Lekin Urvi ke khaane ka soch ker wo ruk gaya, Avinash kabhi apne bacho ko pyaar dikhane me safal nahi huwa, Shayad wo khud ko bhi kabhi samjha nahi paya ke uss ke bache uss ke liye kitne zaroori hai.



Lekin subha aye Aarav ke phone ne usse khush ker dia tha, Jab uss ne suna ke uss ki beti pehli baar khana bana rahi hai to ek garv ka ehsaas aur saath me wo apna khayal rakhe gi kia ye chinta ka ehsaas dono he Avinash ko huwe the.



Avinash ke chehre per kab muskurahat aa gayi usse khud pata na chala, Avinash muskurate huwe ghar jaldi pohanchne ki khawahish karte huwe truck Chalta raha.



*Thunder*



Saaf din ke waqt Achanak Asmaan ne rang badalna shuru ker dia, Avinash ek pahari raaste per tha to uss ke liye Truck chalan mushkil hone laga, Avinash ne truck ko side per lagate huwe roka aur baahir nikal ker halaat daikhne laga.



Raasta puri tarha se khaali tha, Aisa mosam Avinash ne bhi kabhi nahi daikha tha, Avinash ne ghar ki halat pata karne ke liye phone nikala lekin uss ke haath beech me he ruk gye.



Avinash ko apne paas ajeeb circle bante dikhne laga, Avinash ne wahan se hatna chaha lekin uss ke saamne jaise ek deewar ban chuki thi, Avinash idhar udhar daikhne laga ke usse koi dikh jaye.



Avinash: Ye sab kia ho raha hai?



Circle me se ek roshni nikli aur Truck jo thora circle ke beech aa raha tha wo ek jhatke ke saath uchalte huwe saath wali khayi ki taraf chala gaya, Apne saamne apne Truck ko aise barbaad hote daikh Avinash ne aage barhna chaha per wo uss circle se baahir nahi nikal paya.



*Burn*



Circle ki roshni aag ki lapto me badalne lagi aur beech me Avinash ghabrane laga, Usse kuch samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke Wahan kia ho raha hai? Lekin Avinash ne khud ko shaant kia aur Ankhe band ker dhayan lagane laga.




Avinash (Mumble): Qi Armour!!!



Avinash ke gird ek transperent parat ban'nne lagi, Wanhi ek unche dhamake ke saath Avinash ka truck khayi me gir chuka tha, Avinash ne khud ko aag ki lapto se to bacha lia, Lekin aag ki lapto ne usse gher lia aur agle he pal wo whan se gayab tha.


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[Welcome, Player]


Avinash ke saamne Notification window khul gayi, Uss ke saamne uss ke ke stats ane lage sabhi stats dikhane ke baad uss ke saamne Quest aa gayi.

Avinash kuch khaas samajh to nahi paya, Lekin wo khud ko shaant rakhte huwe sab kuch dhayan se parhta raha, Sab kuch dikhane ke baad Avinash ko Tutorial Tower me bhej dia gaya.



Avinash ne daikha ke uss ke saath wahan 5 log aur khare huwe the, 1 Larki aur 4 larke sabhi ek dusre ki taraf heraani se daikh rahe the, Wanhi kuch ke chehro per dar tha to kuch sab kuch samajhne ki koshis ker rahe the.

[Enhanced Language Understanding]

[Capabilities: The user has the ability to understand, decipher and translate any written and typed language into the user's own native tongue, or through subliminal intuition of what by physical communication means. This ability may even employ telepathic faculty, where the psychic energy is read (by hearing or sight) to understand what the message is meant to convey.]

[3 intelligence points will be deducted]

[(Accept)~(Cancel)]


Notification saamne ate he sab ne kuch der soch ker Yes keh dia, Yes kehte he sabhi apna sar pakar ker neeche baith gye, Kuch der yun he dard se karahne ke baad sabhi khare hone lage.



Larki(Shivering): Y-Ye sab kia ho raha hai? Mujhe kon laya hai yahan?



“Kon laya hai yahan? *Smile* Kon bhi laya ho yahan, Lekin aj pehli baar mujhe tumhari tarha ki ameer Baap ki bachi akeli dikhayi di hai, Ye moka main kaise chhor sakta hu”



Un 4 larko me se 1 ne daant meeste huwe kaha, Uss ki aankhe laal thi jaise wo bohat zada nashe me ho, Wo uss larki ko ghoore ja raha tha wanhi wo larki dar se kaanpne lagi thi.



Larka: Tum jaisi ghatiya Aurate jo sirf apni khubsurati aur Baap ke naam per mashoor hoti hai, Aakhir kahan dobara akele dikho gi mujhe? Tere jaise insaan ki wajha se hume kabhi apna hunar dikhane ka moka nahi mila, Lekin aj main wo sabhi badle pure karu ga.



Larke ne apni pocket me se ek Folding Knife nikali aur bina kuch soche larki ki taraf bhaagne laga, Larki to kisi pagal larke ko apni taraf yun bhaagte ate Daikh he khoof se hil nahi payi.




Avinash: Qi Blade!


*Swish*


Wo larka us Larki ke kareeb pohanch sakta uss se pehle he wo apne gale per kuch nukila mehsoos ker ke ruk gaya, Uss ke saamne Avinash khara huwa tha uss ke haath me Qi Blade bani huwi thi.



Lekin wahan sirf wo larka he nahi Avinash bhi heraan ho gaya jab uss ne daikha ke larke ke gale me ek aur bhi Qi Blade rakhi huwi hai, Avinash ne apne saath daikha to chehre per mask pehne ek aur larka wahan khara huwa tha.



Dono ne ek dusre ki taraf daikha aur samajh gye ke dono he Qi User hai, Wanhi wo pagal larka Knife ko gira ker haath khare ker ke khara ho gaya.



Avinash: Pehle iss ko sambhalte hai, Baad me baat kare gye!


Avinash ne larke se kaha to wo uss pagal larke ki talashi lene laga ke uss ke paas koi aur Weapon to nahi hai kia? Wanhi Avinash uss Larki ke paas chala gaya.



Larki darte huwe peeche hone lagi, Ye halat sirf larki ki nahi saath me aye un 2 larko ki bhi ye he halat thi, Ek to wo Achanak kanhi la diye gye phir un ke saamne murder ka attempt huwa, Upar se un ki aankho ke saamne he 2 logo ne apne haatho se talwaren nikal li.



Un ka darna banta tha, Avinash khud kuch nahi samajh paya tha lekin wo itna jaan chuka tha ke koi bhi wahan apni marzi se nahi aya hai.



Avinash ne larki ki taraf daikha to wo 20-21 ke kareeb ki ek khubsurat larki thi, Gora rang Perfect Body shape ke saath Baby Face usse aur bhi khubsurat bana raha tha, Avinash ko bhi uss ka chehra pehle kanhi daikha huwa laga lekin uss ne abhi ke liye apne sawalo ko apne paas he rehne dia.



Avinash(Comforting): Daro mat, Hum ne usse pakar lia hai! Hum jab tak yahan hai tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Tum sirf mere Peeche rehna agar kuch bhi khatra lage to mujhe bula lena.

​

Avinash kabhi bhi kisi ko honsla dene me acha nahi tha, Lekin uss ke shabdon ne uss larki ko kuch shaant ker dia, Wanhi mask wale larke ne uss pagal larke ke haath apni belt se bandh diye.



Larka: Abhi bhi agar koi pagalpan karna chahta hai to bata do?.....Hum sabhi ko yahan bina puche laya gaya hai, Hume abhi ek dusre se nahi larna chahiye, Main mehsoos ker sakta hu ke ye hamari duniya nahi hai, Aur abhi tak main ne yahan sirf ajeeb cheeze he daikhi hai, Acha ye he ho ga ke hum mil ker kaam kare, Sab se pehle sabhi apna naam batao.



Larka sahi keh raha tha, Avinash bhi wahan apni Urja me ek bhaaripan mehsoos ker raha tha, Wanha har cheez me Urja thi ya ye kaho ke wahan Urja ka khazana tha, Wanhi wo larka sab ko ache se shaant ker raha tha.



Larka: Shuruaat main karta hu! Mera naam Soo-hyun hai, Main South Korea se hu.



Larke ne un sab ke beech Icebreak karte huwe kaha, Sabhi bataane ke liye tayar ho gye.



Larka2: Mera Naam Kevin hai! Main London se hu.



Larka3: Mera Naam Junaid hai aur main Dubai se hu!



Soo-hyun ne uss pagal larke ki taraf daikha, Wo abhi bhi larki ko ghoor raha tha aur larki Avinash ke peeche chupi huwi thi, Avinash ne uss ko ghoor ker daikha to wo shaant ho gaya.



Pagal Larka: Mera Naam Jinho hai aur main bhi South Korea se hu!



Avinash ne Soo-hyun ki taraf daikha to uss ne naa me sar hila ker ishara ker dia ke wo usse nahi jaanta, Avinash ne bhi kuch nahi pucha aur apna intro dene laga.



Avinash: Mera naam Avinash Arya hai aur main India se hu!



Avinash ne apne peeche khari Larki ki taraf daikha to wo abhi bhi dar rahi thi, Avinash ne uss ka haath pakar ker usse aage laya aur bolne ke liye kaha.



Larki: M-Mera naam Ela hai aur main Turkey se hu!



Soo-hyun: Okay, Kisi ko kuch idea ke yahan kia ho raha hai?



Kevin: I kinda get it! Hume ek Quest mili hai aur kuch weird Super Powers mili hai, Hume apne stats barhaane hai aur Hoblin ko maarna hai, Ye kuch Cartoons ki tarha hai, Mera beta daikhta hai shayad Anime kehte hai unhe?


Soo-hyun: Hmm! Abhi ke liye hume Explore karna chahiye aur Reward me likha hai ke Hoblin ko maarne ke baad hum waapis ja sakte hai, Lekin hume pehle daikhna ho ga ke usse maarna chahiye bhi ya nahi? Hum aise he to nahi maar sakte kisi ko.



Junaid: Mujhe manzoor hai, Lekin ye larka hamare saath nahi jaye ga! Main kisi pagal ke saath nahi rehna chahta.



Kevin: Same!



Jinho: Mera jahan mann ho ga main wahan jau ga! Tujhe nahi ana saath to mat ana.



Jinho bhi samajh chuka tha ke agar usse survive karna hai to usse Avinash aur Soo-hyun ke saath rehna ho ga.



Soo-hyun: True! Hum kisi ko saath ane se rok nahi sakte.



Kevin: Theek hai phir! Main aur Junaid apna alag raasta dhoond le gye, Ye pagal tumhe mubarak.




Soo-hyun ne unhen samjhana chaha lekin wo alag jaane ka soch chuke the, Avinash ko kuch khaas farak nahi parta tha, Usse sirf apne bacho ke paas wapis jana tha, Andar se wo cheekh raha tha lekin baahir se pura shaant aage kia karna hai soch raha tha.



Kevin aue Junaid wahan se nikal gye, Soo-hyun ne Jinho ko uss ki had me rehne ka keh ker uss ke haath khol diye aur wo bhi shaanti se un ke saath chalne laga, wanhi Ela Avinash ke paas he chal rahi thi.


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Tutorial Tower
~ 23rd Day


“Fire Ball”



Soo-hyun ne apne muh ke paas haath rakha aur Aag ke gole phainkne laga, Fire Balls saamne se aa rahe Goblins ke lagti rahi aur wo wanhi jalte rahe.




“Kitni baar batau ke Unhen pura nahi jalana hota”



Avinash ne Peeche se kaha to Soo-hyun ko ehsaas huwa ke wo josh me kuch zada he aage barhne laga tha, Avinash aage aya aur uss ne apne haath un jalte Goblins ki taraf ker dia.



[Unique Ability (Soul Binding) Activated]




Avinash ke haatho se white thin dhaage nikalte huwe un goblins se ja ker connect ho gaya, Avinash ne un ki soul ko pakar lia aur un thread's se goblins ki bodies ko apne control me ker lia.



Soo-hyun: Kitni baar bhi Daikh lu tumhari ye Ability har baar mujhe heraan ker deti hai! Kaise tum moat ko vash me ker sakte ho?



Avinash sirf muskura dia aur un Goblins ko un ke he saathiyo ke khilaf larvane laga, Wanhi Jinho bhi ek sword haath me liye saamne aa rahe goblins horde ka khatma karne per laga huwa tha.



Wanhi Ela peeche khari un sab ko Heal ker rahi thi, Daikhte he daikhte Goblins wanhi dum torte rahe aur un ka pura horde khatam ho gaya.



[Party member James Kevin is dead]



Ek notification saamne ate he sabhi ek dusre ki taraf daikhne lage, Unhen Tower me aye 23 din ho chuke the, Un 23 me unho ne tower ke baare me aur ek dusre ke baare me kuch cheeze pata ker li thi.



Ela Turkish actress thi, Uss ke Maa Baap bhi celebrities he the, wanhi Jinho ek struggler tha, Wo hamesha se movie industry me ana chahta tha, Lekin nepotism aur paiso ki wajha se wo haar baar fail ho raha tha.



Jinho uss din bhi ek Audition se reject ho ker aya tha, Uss ki jagha ek businessman ke bete ko wo role de dia gaya, Jinho ne gusse me kuch zada he pee li thi.


Jaise he uss ke saamne Ela ayi to wo apna gussa shaant nahi rakh paya, Lekin samay ke saath uss ne Ela se maafi maang li, Ela ne maaf to ker dia lekin wo Abhi bhi Avinash ke paas he rehti.



Jinho ne kuch Martial Arts aur Swords Play seekhe the, Uss ko waisi he Abilities mili, Wanhi Ela ne Acting career ke saath Medical Training bhi ki thi, Wo ek doctor to nahi bani lekin uss ka shauk Surgeries ki taraf hone se usse Healing Abilities mil gayi thi.



Soo-hyun tower me ek leader ke roop me baahir aya tha, Soo-hyun Fire Clan se aya tha ye uss ne Avinash ko bata dia tha, Clan me training ki wajha se wo most calm Decision leta tha, Wanhi uss ki apni shakti he itni thi ke wo bina Player Abilities ke bhi ek kehar tha Tower ke liye.


Ek Master Level Qi User hone ke saath wo Clan leader ban'nne ke liye First Candidate bhi tha, Soo-hyun ke paas blacksmithing ki bhi skills thi.



Wanhi Soo-hyun ka sab se zada saath dene wala tha Avinash, Soo-hyun Fire Clan se tha wanhi Avinash khatam ho chuke Spirit Clan se tha, Shuru me to Avinash apni Qi ko sahi se stable nahi ker paya.



lekin Soo-hyun ki madad aur kuch mehnat se uss ne apni Inner Qi ko stable ker lia, Avinash Unique Abilities possess karta tha, Wanhi kuch he dino me wo Soo-hyun ke saamma karne ke layak Inner Qi bhi possess karne laga.




23 din me unhone goblins ke baare me kuch cheeze seekhi thi aur wanhi har roz Hords se larne ki wajha se un ka Level bhi bohat barh chuka tha.



Ye 4 jahan waapis jaane ke liye mehnat ker rahe the wanhi kuch din pehle 14ve Din he unhe Junaid ki death ka Notification aa gaya tha, Kevin zinda tha lekin unhe uss ke baare me kuch bhi pata nahi tha, Lekin Kevin ka death Notification bhi aa gaya.




*Chirp* *Chirp*


*Crackle* *Pop*


Raat ka andhera wahan phail chuka tha, Ek mehfooz jagha daikh ker un sab ne wanhi raat beetane ka socha, Avinash guard duty per baitha upar asmaan me chaand ko Daikh raha tha.


“Kin khayalo me doobe huwe hai ap?”



Avinash ne saamne daikha to Soo-hyun chalte huwe aa raha tha, Avinash ne side hote huwe usse baithne ki jagha di to wo wanhi paas baith gaya.



Avinash(Sigh): Huh, Soch raha tha ke moat kaise aa jati hai! Kahan wo dono bachne ke liye hum se alag huwe the, Lekin ab daikho hum yahan zinda hai aur wo dono, Un ko daikh ker mujhe bacho ki chinta ho rahi hai.



Soo-hyun: Haan, Main bhool he jata hu ke ap to Bacho wale hai! Waise kaise 45 ki Umar me bhi 25 ke lagte ho ap?




Avinash(Chuckle): Hamare Clan ka ek ye he to faida tha! Hamari Umar dheeme barhti hai, Tabhi to Clan Leader ban'nne ke Candidate bhi Leader ke marne ka intezar karte karte mar jaate the.



Soo-hyun: Hmm, Waise Spirit Realm jaisa Clan band kaise ho gaya? Ap ka to koi Competition bhi nahi tha?



Avinash: Ye he to baat hai ke hamara koi Competition nahi tha! Hamara Clan Spirit Arts me maharat rakhta tha, India me bhoot Pareto ko vash me karne ki shaktiya ho aur usse log bhagwan na maane ye kaise ho sakta hai, Lekin tumhe pata hai shaktiye ap ki dushman kab banti hai?




Soo-hyun(Curious): Kab?



Avinash: Jab un shaktiyon ke saath ap me ahankar aa jaye! Kisi ne sach he kaha hai ke Ahankar andha ker deta hai! Logo ki bhalayi ke liye mili shaktiyon ka apne liye prayog karna shuru ker dia tha hamare Clan walo ne, Baki logon ko to keere makode samajhne lage the, Clan House ke kareeb ke sabhi gaon hamare Vash me the, Kisi ki bhi Beti utha lena ghar ke beto se gulamon se bhi zada kaam karwana, Har din wahan ashleelta ka nanga naach chalne laga tha.



Soo-hyun: Lekin ant ki wajha kia bani?



Avinash (Smile): Mere Papa ji! First Elder mere Papa the, Wo samajh chuke the ke ye shaktiyan iss Yug ke liye theek nahi hai, Unhone ne hamare Leader ko bohat samjhaya lekin wo nahi samjhe, Ant me mere Papa ko un se yuddh larna per gaya, Ek raat me clan me 581 log maare gye the, aur bache huwe logo ne apni shaktiyon ko tayag dia, Uss yuddh me mere Papa ji ne apne Inner Core ko ant tak le ja ker apne din ghata diye the, Lekin kabhi main ne un ke chehre per afsoos nahi daikha un ke faisle ke liye, Kabhi kabhi udaas ho jate the wo ye soch ker ke unhen apne haatho se apne he behan bhayio ka khoon bahana per gaya, Main yuddh me tha lekin wo mere haatho per jitna khoon lagne se bacha paye unho ne bachaya.



Dono ke beech khamooshi cha gayi, Soo-hyun pura samay de raha tha Avinash ko un yaado se ubharne ka, choti umar me he wo samay ki Gambhirta ko samjhta tha.



Avinash: Chalo ab tumhara samay hai! Hume kal dobara larne bhi nikalna hai, Phir hum bhi to daikhe ke ye Hoblin kia cheez hai.


Avinash muskurate huwe utha aur subharati keh ker sone chala gaya, Soo-hyun bhi dhayan rakhne laga ke kanhi koi monster na aa jaye.


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Tutorial Tower
~ 30th Day


Aj Quest ka akhri din tha aur unhe bata dia gaya tha ke Hoblin kahan Evolve hone wala hai, chaaro wahan pohanch ker intezar karne lage.



Un ke saamne ek Goblin khara Huwa tha uss ke paas Goblins ka jhund bana huwa tha, Wo 4 tayar khare huwe the, Goblin ghutno ke bal gir gaya aur uss ke shareer me badlav ane shuru ho gye.



*Eeeehhhhhh*


Goblin ka pura shareer buff ho gaya aur wo dahar ke saath khara ho gaya aur uss ke paas Goblins ka khushiyon se shor mach gaya.



*Slash*
*Swish*
*Pop*
*Zip*



Kuch tez awaazo ne Hoblin ko haqeeqat me ane per majboor ker dia, Uss ne daikha ke uss ke paad khara jhund chup ker ke khara hai, Uss ne apne peeche daikha to uss ke saamne Soo-hyun khara huwa tha.



Uss ke saath he Jinho khara huwa tha, Un se kuch dur he Avinash aur Ela khare huwe the, Avinash ke haatho se dhaage nikal ker sabhi Goblins ke andar ghuse huwe the.



Soo-hyun(Smirk): you have absolutely no idea how dead you are about to be, Buddy!

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Un ke saamne ek E rank ka Monster khara Huwa tha, Lekin wo log bohat badal chuke the, Ek maheene me har din wo sab Training aur Level barhaane per dhayan de rahe the.



Avinash aur Soo-hyun Level me 30 ke upar ja chuke the, Wanhi baki dono bhi 20 se aage ja chuke the, Wo sabhi pehle se zada strong the, Lekin wo bina Player's ability ke bohat strong the, Aise me wo E Rank ka monster un ke saamne kia tha?



Soo-hyun ne ek Fire Ball se attack kia, Lekin Hoblin ne apne staff se usse khud ko bacha lia, Jinho ne ek taraf se attack karna chaha lekin Hoblin usse bhi dodge ker gaya.



Ek E Rank monster hote huwe bhi uss ka Defence bohat zada strong tha, Lekin unhe abhi kuch dikkat huwi bhi nahi thi, Hoblin muskuraya lekin wo muskan agle pal he gayab ho gayi.



Avinash: Mujhe bhool gye kia?



Ek taraf se Avinash nikla aur ek zordar punch Hoblin ke muh per maar dia, Hoblin hava me uthte huwe neeche gir gaya, Avinash ne sabhi Goblins uss per chorr diye.


Wo apni species ko khaane lage, Hoblin ne bachna chaha lekin Soo-hyun ne usse uthne he nahi dia, Palak jhapakte he Hoblin ka ant ho chuka tha.



Unhe andaza tha ke Hoblin kamzoor nahi hai sirf wo uss level ke Monster se zada shaktishali ho chuke hai, Un ke paas circle dobara ban'nne laga.



[Quest Completed]


[MVP (Avinash Arya)]


[1) Each party member received 20 stat points, and (Avinash Arya) received an additional 20 stat points.
2) The party obtained Hoblin Armor.
3) Players can now return to their own world.]


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Kullu, India
~ 3:24 PM


“Hume kitne din aur yahan khare hona ho ga?”



Ek Suit pehne Car ki bonnet per baithe Admi ne dusre Admi ki taraf thaki huwi awaaz me pucha, Dusra Admi Disposable Cup me chaye ki chuskiye leta raha, Wo dono Officer's the



Unhen Kullu Manali ke beech ke road per khara karwaya gaya tha, Road per mostly traffic rok bhi di gayi thi sirf necessary log he wahan se guzar rahe the.



Bonnet wala Admi: Yaar 2 hafte ho gye hai! Ab to ghar ki yaad bhi ane lagi, Kitne din yahan khara kare gye?



Chai wala Admi: Upar ke orders hai! Ab rukna to ho ga he.



Bonnet wala Admi: Yaar yahan iss khaalo road per konsa pahar tootne wal-




*Booom*



Ek zordar awaaz ne un ko khamoosh karwa dia, Dono ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to un ke saamne Avinash aag ki lapto ke beech khara Huwa tha, Dono ki gaand he fatne ko ho gayi.



Bonnet wala Admi: Bhai sahib Y-Ye kia hai?


Aag ki lapte tham gayi aur wahan Avinash he khara tha, Dono bhaagte huwe uss ke paas chale gye, Uss chai wale Admi ne foran apni pocket me se ek picture nikali wo Avinash ki he thi.



Jahan wo kabhi picture aur kabhi Avinash ko daikhta, Wanhi Avinash apne paas yun Achanak 2 ajeeb admiyo ko daikh ker heraan tha.



Chai wala Admi: Mr. Avinash! Ap ko hamare saath ana ho ga.



Uss ne ek badge nikaal ker Avinash ke aage karte huwe kaha-



Avinash: Zaroor! Lekin mujhe pehle mere ghar jana hai.


Avinash uss ka badge daikh ker heraan to huwa, Lekin usse abhi apne bacho ke paas jana tha, Na-Jaane kia soch rahe ho gye uss ke bache, Wo ghar pohanchna chahta tha sirf, Lekin wo Admi uss ke saamne aa gaya.



Admi: Ap ko abhi hamare saath ana ho ga! Aarav aur Urvi ke liye he ap ko ana ho ga.



Avinash ne dono ko dhayan se daikha to wo wahan bohat samay se khare maloom ho rahe the, Avinash ka ghar jaane ka Mann tha lekin wo abhi kisi bewakoofi se apne saath Urvi aur Aarav ko pareshan nahi karna chahta tha.



Avinash ne haami bhari aur un dono ke saath Car me baith gaya, Baahir daikhte huwe usse yaad ane laga yanhi uss ka truck bhi gira tha, Avinash ka ek bara nuksaan ho gaya tha Truck ke girne se lekin usse uss ki itni chinta nahi thi.



Dono he pure raaste me na Avinash se aur na he ek dusre se baat kiye, Unhe strict order the khamooshi ke saath Avinash ko le ker ane ka, Kuch samay baad ek Building ke baahir Car ruki aur Avinash ko neeche utaar ker andar le ker aya gaya.



Avinash ko ek kamre me baitha dia gaya, Wo ek tarha ka Interogation room tha lekin saaf aur thora decent, Avinash ko samajh nahi ayi ke wo 2 log wahan pehle se kaise khare the? Kuch samay beetne ke baad ek aur Admi andar aya.




Admi: Hello Mr. Avinash! Mera naam Dineshwar hai, Intelligence Bureau ki taraf se aya hu, Ap se kuch sawal puchne the agar ap comfortable ho to?



Avinash: Sure!



Dineshwar: Badhiya! Aj se 1 maheena pehle ap ke truck ka ek bhayanak Accident huwa tha aur mosam bhi kharab tha, Sabhi ne ap ko wahan death announce ker dia tha, Lekin ap zinda kaise ho?



Dineshwar ne shaanti se pucha, Avinash ko andaza ho gaya tha ke ye baat sirf Accident tak ki nahi hai, Avinash ne baat ko na ghoomate huwe seedhe point per aya.



Avinash: Aur ap ko kaise pata tha ke main wapis aoo ga? Ap ne apne Admi wahan khare kiye matlab ap ko kuch shaq tha!




Dineshwar (Smile): Smart Man! Ek saath Duniya me 6 alag jagha ek saath saaf mosam me mosam kharab Huwa, sabhi jaghao se koi na koi gayab huwa aur sabhi jagah ek Circle ka nishaan dikhayi dia, Hume confirm nahi tha koi waapis aye ga, Lekin hum ne phir bhi dhayan dia and here you are.



Avinash ko samajh ane laga, Wo abhi chahta to jhoot bol deta lekin wo sirf uss ke liye ulta kaam he karta, Agar bakiyon me se koi bhi kuch bata deta to sach saamne ane he wala tha.



Avinash ne kuch bhi na chupate huwe sab kuch sach sach batana shuru ker dia, Dineshwar ke chehre per rang aa aur ja rahe the, Wo vishwas nahi karna chahta tha lekin usse ye sab jhoot bhi nahi lag raha tha.



Avinash: Phir hum ne uss Hoblin ko maar dia, Aur hume uss Tower se waapis bhej dia gaya! Abhi main ap ke saath hu.



Dineshwar ne saamne rakhe glass ko uthaya aur paani pee ker Avinash ko dhayan se daikhne laga, Jaise wo daikh raha ho ke Avinash ki baat me kitna sach hai?



Dineshwar: Tum sabit ker sakte ho kia?



Avinash: Sure!



Avinash ne saamne rakhe uss table ko pakra aur zor lagate huwe usse beech se cheerne laga, Dineshwar ki ankho ke saamne ek sadharan sehat wala insaan ek steel ke table ko bina kisi pareshani ke cheer raha tha.



Dineshwar ko uss ka saboot mil gaya tha, Avinash ko wanhi rukne ka keh ker wo baahir chala gaya, Avinash wanhi baith gaya aur sochne laga ke wo kahan phans gaya hai?



Dineshwar ne baahir ja ker baki har jagha se sab kuch confirm karwaya, Usse tabhi vishwas ho gaya jab Avinash ke kahe mutabik 2 log Waapis nahi aye the, Un ki ek lambi meeting chali aur ek baar dobara Dineshwar avinash ke saamne khara Huwa tha.



Dineshwar: Tum ne kaha ke abhi 3 Quest baki hai! Hum tumhe aise baahir nahi jaane de sakte, Avinash Arya tumhe kuch din hamari nigarani me rehna ho ga.



Avinash ko andaza tha wo usse rokane ki koshis kare gye, Lekin wo itne direct he usse keh de gye ye usse nahi pata tha.



Dineshwar: Ofcourse tumhe apne bacho ki chinta ho gi! Lekin hum ne uss ka bhi intezam ker dia hai.



Dineshwar ne Avinash ke saamne ek tab phenk dia, Avinash ne Tab me daikha to uss ke saamne Aarav aur Urvi ki video aa gayi, Avinash apne bacho ko daikha bhavuk ho gaya.



Dineshwar: Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Hamare Admi har samay un ke upar nazar banaye huwe hai to un ke saath kuch bura ho uss ki chinta mat karo, Jab tak tum yahan ho.



Avinash ne ek kha jaane wali nazar Dineshwar per daali, Dineshwar sirf usse ye nahi keh raha tha ke wo uss ke bacho ka Dhayan rakhe gye, Wo ye bhi keh raha tha ke agar Avinash un ke khilaaf gaya to uss ke Admi order ke wait ke wanhi baithe hai.



Avinash ko gussa to bohat aa raha tha, Lekin wo karwa ghoont bhar ker wanhi baith gaya, Uss ke bacho ki nazro me wo mar chuka tha, Usse kuch aur samay yahan rehna tha.


Avinash ne haami bhar di, Dineshwar ne muskurate huwe ye khabar Baahir de di.



Dineshwar: Haan, Soo-hyun naam ke larke ne tumhe training ke liye kaha hai, Hum tumhare liye ek Special private Training room tayar karwa de gye.



Uss ke baad Avinash ko wanhi ek kamra de dia gaya aur ek Training room de dia gaya, Agli quest 30 din me thi, Avinash har din Training karta aur khud ko tayar karta.



Usse andaza tha ke wo bureau ki nazar me sirf ek nuclear weapon ki tarha hai, Uss ke wahan hone se bakiyo me khoof ban sakta tha, Lekin Avinash aur bhi shaktishali ho ker apne bacho ke saath un sab se dur jaane ka soch chuka tha




30 din guzar gye aur Avinash ek baar dobara Tutorial tower jaane ke liye tayar ho gaya,



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Tutorial Tower -
2nd Quest ~ Day 27th



Ek baar chaaro Tutorial tower me 27 din Survive ker chuke the, Ab ki baar un ke liye pehle ki tarha mushkil nahi tha kuch bhi, Wanhi Avinash aur Soo-hyun ke wahan hone se un ki problems aur bhi kam ho gayi thi.

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Un ke paas Quest puri karne ke liye abhi bhi samay tha, Unhone ye pura Samay surf Level Up per lagaya, Avinash bhi Level Up per dhayan de raha tha, Usse aur bhi Shaktishali ho ker Aarav aur Urvi ko le ker wahan se nikalna tha.



Har din un ka Level Up karne me chala jata, Unhone ek baar dobara Hoblin ko bhi maar dia tha, Avinash aur Soo-hyun Level 40 Reach ker ke Rank barha chuke the, Pura din mehnat karne ke baad sabhi raat ko araam ker rahe the.



Avinash ek baar dobara Guard Duty per baitha huwa tha, Ek baar dobara apne bacho ke yaado me wo asmaan ki khubsurati ko nihaare ja raha tha.



“Kitna pyaara chaand hai na!”


Avinash ke paas laiti huwi Ela ne Chaand ki taraf daikhte huwe kaha, Avinash ne uss ki taraf daikha to uss ke masoom chehre per ek muskurahat saji huwi thi.

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Avinash: Hmm! Lagta he nahi hai aisi khatarnak jagha per itna khubsurat chaand bhi ho sakta hai.


Ela: Sach kahu to mujhe iss jagha se pyaar hone laga hai!



Ela ki baat sun ker Avinash ko heraani huwi ke Yahan usse kaise pyaar hone laga, Lekin Avinash ne bhi ye cheez daikhi thi ke Ela ab ki baar zada khush thi.



Ela: Ap ko yaad hai? pehle din Jinho ne mujh per attack kia tha ye ilzaam lagate huwe ke main apne mummy papa ki wajha se star bani hu? Uss ka wo ilzaam sahi tha.




Avinash ko aur bhi heraani huwi, Lekin Ela ko mann kholta daikh Avinash ne usse bolne dia, Uss ki awaaz me dard tha.



Ela: Mujhe ek doctor ban'nna tha! Lekin meri Mummy ne meri padhayi ko sirf ek award ki tarha duniya ke saamne dikhaya, Bachpan se mujhe star ban'nne ke liye train kia surgeries pills aur Na-Jaane kia kuch Use kia ke main ek Star ban saku, Lekin unho ne kabhi mujh se pucha he nahi ke main kia chahti hu?



Ela ki Ankhe bhar gayi, Wo upar daikhte huwe apne ansoo ponch ker dobara bolne lagi.



Ela: Ap ko pata hai unhe ye sab ka pata chala to un ki sab se bari chinta kia thi?



Avinash: Kia?



Ela: Ke meri jo dates aur concerts skip huwe hai un ko kaise cover kare? Mujhe Government ki taraf se pakre jaane se bacha ker unhone mujh se uss maheene ki sabhi shoots puri karwayi hai, Lekin yahan ane ke baad aisi koi dikat nahi hai, Main khul ker saans le sakti hu, Mujhe mere jeene ki kuch wajha mil rahi hai aur ap ko sach me meri mehnat dikhti hai, Main yahan se waapis nahi jaana chahti, Mujhe yahan aur bhi rukna hai uss Narkh me waapis nahi jana mujhe.



Avinash ne Ela ke haath per haath rakh usse himmat di, Ella Avinash ki kamar se lipat gayi aur ansoo bahane lagi, Avinash bhi usse mann halka karne ka samay de raha tha, Ella uss ki Urvi ki umar ki he to thi, Wo kaise usse rote me chhor sakta tha.



Ansoo baha lene ke baad Ela Avinash se alag huwi aur uss ke chehre per ek santushti ke bhav aa gye.



Ela: I'm sorry main ek crybaby ki tarha rone lagi bina ap ko bolne dene ke!




Avinash: Koi baat nahi! Jab tumhara dil kare mere paas aa ker roo sakti ho tum *smile*



Ela(Smile): Apne bacho ki koi kahani sunayie na ap! Jab bhi ap Aarav aur Urvi ki baat karte ho to ap ke chehre per khushi aa jati hai, Kaisi personalities hai un ki and all thatm



Avinash: Huh! Urvi ki Personality thori shararti aur demanding hai, Lekin uss ki demand bhi hamesha achi he hoti hai, Usse sirf apne Papa aur Bhai ke liye cheeze chahiye hoti hai, Wanhi har samay apne bhai ko tang karna to uss ki routine hai.



Ela: Matlab Daddy's Princess hai wo *Chuckle*




Avinash: Haan! Aarav, hmm Aarav ki Personality ek dum shaant hai, Hamesha apna kadam soch samajh ker rakhna, Har kaam me apni puri koshis karna, Parhai me best Sports me best aur ek ache dil ka malik, Aarav kabhi apne emotions nahi dikhata, Lekin ye sirf tab tak hai jab tak uss ke papa aur behan per baat na aa jaye.



Ela: Kia matlab?




Avinash: Aarav ek silent Beast hai! Tum kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti ke wo larka kia kuch ker sakta hai lekin kabhi karta nahi hai, Ek baar Urvi ko kuch larko ne pareshan kia tha wo un ke Seniors the, Urvi ghar aa ker bohat royi, Hum ne principle se shikayat ker ke un larko se maafi mangwa li lekin Aarav maafi se shaant nahi huwa.




Ela(Curious): Phir?




Avinash: Aarav raat ko kuch zakhmo ke saath ghar wapis aya! Pucha to bola ke kuch halki si larayi huwi hai, Lekin agle din mujhe pata chala ke wo un larko se bhir ker waapis aya tha, Aarav ne unhen maaf nahi kia tha aur unhe raat ko raaste me rok dia tha, Lekin Aarav jahan sirf kuch ghaav ke saath Waapis aya tha uss ne apne se 3-4 Grades Seniors ki halat kharab ker di thi, Kisi ke haath ki hadi toot gayi thi to kisi ki pasali ki hadiye, Tabhi wahan ke logo ne uss ko ek nick name de dia tha, The Vengeance.



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Tutorial Tower -
Quest 2 ~ Day 29



“Dhayan se”


Soo-hyun ne sabhi ko chaukanna karte huwe kaha, Un ke saamne he Twinfang tha ek bara 2 muh wala saanp, Unhe Abhi tak kuch idea nahi tha ke wo kitna khatarnak hai?



*Thud*



*Ahhhhh*


Jinho ka paon ek kamzoor tehni per aya aur wo toot gayi, Twinfang ek jhatke me un ke paas aa gaya, Uss ki raftaar ankho se ojhal ho jaane wali thi.


Twinfang seedhe Jinho ke paas aa gaya aur seedhe usse zinda nighalne ke liye aage barha, Jinho uss raftaar per kuch respond nahi ker saka.



*Ignition*



Soo-hyun ke haatho se fire sparks nikle aur Twinfang ko pakarne ke liye aage huwe, Lekin Twinfang apni raftaar se agle lamhe je Soo-hyun ke saamne tha.



[Unique Ability (Bind) Activated]



Avinash ne apna haath neeche rakha to Twinfang ke Neeche zameen se Zanjeere baahir aa gayi aur unho ne usse jakar lia, TwinFang Avinash ki pakar me aa chuka tha, Peeche se Jinho ne uss ke sar kaatne chahe lekin Twinfang ne muh khola aur wajan Poisonous Gas urne lagi.



Soo-hyun: Sabhi Peeche ho jao!




Sabhi Peeche ho gye, Avinash abhi bhi Peeche hote huwe Twinfang ko pakre huwe tha, Soo-hyun uss poisonous gas ko dhayan se daikhne laga.




Soo-hyun: Ye burnable hai guy!



Soo-hyun ne sab ko inform kia to sabhi Peeche hone lage, Soo-hyun ne apna haath gas ke upar kia aur Ankhe band ker ke focus karne laga.



Soo-hyun: Explosion!



Soo-hyun ke kehte he wo puri gas Aag me badal gayi aur ek dhamake ke saath phat gayi, Soo-hyun bhi impact se peeche push ho gaya.



[Quest Completed]


[MVP (Soo-hyun)]
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Yup Kuch issue huwe the lekin wo sabhi sambhal raha hu, Nect Arc se kam se kam 1-2K update likhne ke baad he Date dia karu ga! Main dates ke saath itna acha nahi hu, Thora lazy type ka banda hu lekin mujhe Quality 100% Chahiye hoti hai, Abhi kuch word mistake bhi hai unhe bhi agle Arc ke saath sudhar lu ga Replies aur likhne ka time nahi ban raha tha koi super busy nahi tha sirf kuch aur New intrest ko try ker raha tha Aur reviews ek writer ke liye yahan payment ki tarha he hai, Ache review parhne ko mile to alas bhi khatam ho jati hai, Lekin jab review sadharan ho to Uss Excitement ke saath likhna mushkil ho jata hai

Exactly brother review se hme apni galti pta chalti hai or kya acha lag raha hai logon ko uska bhi pta chalta hai
Readers ke liye itna request krunga ap update padhiye apko kya acha lga kya khrab lga wo likho Bhai bs itna hin Krna
Usse writer ko apni skill improve krne main help hoti hai