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Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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Update ... Wednesday night / Sunday morning or night...
 
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:lol1: mazedaar update
Nazim ke liye thoda bura lag raha hai
par theek hai,,,,
Tony ekdum se sudharne lag gaya hai
:gaylaugh: kuch hadd tak Tony ka haath tha bigadne me suddenly Tony ne party change kar liya... Aur Nazim ke lag gye... 😁😁
 

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Fans....Ju to celebrity nikle :chill2:

Backup nahi rakha tha kia mind me :D
Backup tha but istori jiss disha mai jaa rahi thi... 😁😁 Ghor paap ho jata..
Fan prediction se to Marvel bhi nahi bachi to ju ki story kaise bache gi :lol:
😁😁 Manga Novel anime dekhne waale pehle hi pridict kar dete hai fir kehte hai wohi hua jo socha tha... Ab ek chote se update mai kya twist dun..🤔

Miss_balti toh alg hi kehti hai maar kar zinda karo fir maar do... 🤣🤣
Lemme use my math skills.... Month me 4 hafte minimum matlab 8 Update 2.5 Maheene hone wale hai to....19-20 Update hone chahiye the.....Gadari ker be :slap:
Election... Bhull rahe ho mahoday... 😁😁 Poora do week mai 2 update bhi nahi aaye...
Itna Excited hu ke 3 maheene me sabhi Update parh lu ga :yo:
🤣 15 update 3 month... 2 ghante mai nipat jayega men... 😁😁
Abhi kuch Idea nahi hai ke kia daikhne ko mile ga, Lekin Story Fantasy based lag rahi hai to fantasy ke liye to main har samay ready hu, Umeed karta hu ek achi story parhne ko mile gi aur ju bhi umeed karo mere ko achi lage warna :bat:
He he he... It was a surprise... Istori kaise rahegi... As Title it was Kalyug story so Jayda fantasy nahi hai Normal... 🤔

Good to see you here... :hug:
 

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KALYUG... Part.. 16



( I Miss you Maa )


Evening Time... 5 : 35 PM...


Location... Unknown...


...Huhhhhh... Woh jaa chuki hai... Mujhe chodd kar... Kaash maine usse baat ki hoti mai usko bta pata woh mujhe kitni pasand hai... Toh shayad halaat kuch aur hote... Shayad woh mere saath hoti... Yeh sab meri wajah se hua mujhe Jana hi nahi chahiye tha use akela chodd kar... Sab meri galti hai... Mujhe maaf kar dena agar tum mujhe sun rahi ho... Agar mai tumhe chod kar nahi jata toh syad kuch nahi hua hota... Sab meri galti hai sab meri...


Vimala... Beta Tony...


Tony... ( Soch se bahar aate hue ) Huhhh kya hua...


Vimala... ( Kandhe par hath rakh kar ) Beta Nandu subh se akela hai usne hospital mai kuch nahi khaya yeh khana laayi thi uske liye... Ab jo ho gaya usko hum badal nahi sakte... ( Nam aankhon se ) Yashoda ab kabhi wapis nahi aane waali... Woh hume chod kar jaa chuki hai iss baat ko tumhe maan Lena chahiye... maanti hun kaafi muskill hai magar Nanduu uska kya... Tum aise rahoge toh usko kon sambhalega... Kya use tumhe aise dekh khushi hogi... Kya woh kuch nahi tumhare liye...


Tony... ( Chonkte hue ) Yeh kya keh rahi hai aayi... Beta hai woh mera...


Vimala... ( Aansun ponchte hue ) Toh aise baithne se kuch nahi hoga... Yeh le khana usne subh se kuch nahi khaya... Usne apni maa ko khoya hai ab tumhe baap ke saath use maa ka pyaar bhi Dena hoga...


Tony... ( Uthkar khada hote hue ) hmmmm... La de mai jaa raha...


Tony hath se Tiffin le leta hai aur jaane lagta hai... Vimala usko jaate hue dekhti hai tabhi Tony rukta hai...


Tony... Nazim ghar aaya kya...


Vimala... ( Ghabrate hue ) naaahiii.... Kkyyuuu...


Tony... Bas aise hi...


Tony waha se nikal jata hai uske jaate hi... Vimala ka chehra paseene se bheeg jata hai... Woh samjh Rahi thi Tony ka ishara kiss baare mai hai... Use apne bete ki fikar bhi ho rahi thi... Aur uske kiye par sharminda bhi thi...


Usne apne dimaag ko samjha Diya tha... Ki Nazim ne jo kiya woh galat hai use iski Saza milni hi chahiye...



Lekin Dil nahi maan raha tha Maa jo thi 9 maheene pet mai pala use, uske baad kaafi sangharsh kiya usne Nazim ko bada karne ke liye... Naurkiri bhi ki jisse ghar chal sake lekin khoobiyon ke saath khaamiyan bhi hoti hai...


Ghar chalane ke liye bahar kaam karte samay woh Nazim ko Sikhsha nahi de paayi ho maa apne bacche ko bachpan se sahi galat ka chnaav karna shikhati hai... Kya accha hai kya bura... magar woh kaam ke chalte Nazim par dhyaan nahi de paayi aur kab Nazim basti ke logo ki sangat mai bigadna chaalu hua use pta na chala... Aur jab chala tab tak der ho chuki thi... Aane waali pal ki kalpana kar uski ruhh kaamp rahi thi kya hoga aage...


Evening Time... 6 : 20 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...



...Nandu kya hua bta na... Bol kyun nahi raha kya likha hai isme... Dekh mera dil ghabra Raha h... Mujhe fir se Rona aa jayega tune merese baat nahi ki toh... Sunnn Naa... Nanndu...



Mai Jo file mai likhi baaton ka matlb samjhne ki koshish kar raha tha... Lekin Sweety karne de tab na... Aadhe ghante se pareshan kar rahi hai... Pehle khud muhh Fula leti hai aur na manao toh bhi meri hi galti hai maine kyun nahi manaya... Huhhhh Ladkiyon ke kitne Nakhre hote hai... Baap re pta nahi jisse Shaadi hogi uska kya haal hoga bhagwan uski aatma ko shanti de... he he he... Mai bhi kya soch raha agar isko pta chal gya... toh mai gya kaam se chup rehne mai hi bhalai hai...


Mai... ( Jhunjhulate hue ) kya hai 2 min chup nahi baith sakti bad bad kare jaa rahi kab se... Abhi thodi der pehle muhh Fula liya tha kya hua... Ab kyun baat kar rahi hai mujhse...


Sweety... ( Gusse mai ) Huhhh... Aur Tune jo mujhe Rulaya uska kuch nahi... Dekh meri aankhein laal ho gayi hai subh se khana bhi nahi khaya Maine... Aur tune mujhe rulaya thoda sa pyaar se baat kar leta toh kya ho jata...



Mai... Toh aisa bol na bhookh lagi hai bhukkad kahi ki... Maine khaya kya subh se kuch... haan... Yeh nahi ki khana khila de 1 ghante se bass dimaag kha rahi hai... Tujhse aacha meri Dimpi hai kitna khayal rakhti hai mera...


Sweety... ( Gusse me ) kyaaaaa kaaahaa ek baar fir se kehna...


Mai... ( Ghabrate hue ) kucch nahi... Woh mujhe bhookh lagi jaa bahar dekh kar aa baba yaa koi aaya hai kya Tiffen leke...


Sweety... ( Rukhe swar mai uthte hue ) Huhhhhh... Tumhe toh mai baad mai dekhti hun... Ek baar theek ho jao fir aisi dhunayi karungi ki dubara mere saamne uss kutiya ka naam nahi loge...


Mai... Tum usse itna chidhti kyun ho...


Sweety... ( Ghoorte hue ) Huhhhh...


Mai... Kuchhhh nahiii...


Sweety mujhe ghurti hui Room se bahar nikal gayi uske jaate hi maine ek aaahhhh bhari tabhi mera dhyaan ek baar fir File ki taraf gya aur mai sochne laga...


Isme likha sach hai yaa jhooth kaise pta karun... Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai gaadi aaker ruki thi yeh Reports bata Rahi hai ki humara gaadi se accident hua jisme maa ko chot lagi... Lekin maa toh mere upar thi jab mai gira tha fir isme accident kyun likha hai... Aur Dusri Post Mortem hai lekin... Kyun samjh nahi aa raha...


Abhi mai soch hi Raha tha ki Ek baar fir Darwaza khulta hai jisme se Sweety ander aati hai Naak par gussa abhi bhi tha uske... woh chalte hue mere paas aati hai aur khana plate mai nikal bed par rakh deti hai... Mai usko gusse mai dekh kuch bolne ki himmat nahi juta pata aur uth kar baithne ki koshish karta hun...



Pairon mai patti ki wajah se mushkil hoti hai jise dekh Sweety paas aati hai mujhe sahara dekar baitha deti hai... khana khane ke liye hath badhaya toh dard hua aahhhh nikal gayi... Tab woh paas mai baith jaati aur plate apnr hath mai le ek nivala bna kar muhh ke pass kar deti hai...


Mai uski harkaton ko dekh muskura raha tha... Aur saath mai khana bhi kha raha tha... Ab bhi uska muhhh Fula hua tha jisper mujhe hasi aa rahi thi magar mai jaise taise karke roke hue tha khudko... Mujhko muskurate dekh pta nahi use kya hota hai aur woh khana khilane ki wjh mere muhhh mai khana thoosne lagti hai... Aur Uthkar baahar chali jaati hai...


Mid Night... 9. :45 PM...


Sweety ko gaye kaafi der ho gayi thi woh aayi nahi shayad Baba yaa kisi ke saath ghar chali gayi hogi... Ab maine aaram karne ki Sochi magar jaise hi aankhein band ki toh maa ka chahra dikhayi diya jise dekhte maine aankhein khol li... Aur meri aankhon mai ek baar fir nami aa gayi...


Kitna bhi mai khud ko sabke saamne saabit kar lun ki sakht launda hoon mai sambhal chuka hun... Magar saachai yeh hai ki aaj hi meri maa mujhe chod kar jaa chuki hai... woh maa jisne mujhe paal posh kar bada kiya... Jise mujhe chalna shikhya , sahi galat ka chayan karwaya , apne sanskaar diye... Aur aaj woh mujhe akela chod jaa chuki hai....


" Ghutno se rengte rengte kab pairon par khada hua...
Teri Mamta ki chaanv mai jane kab mai bada hua...

Mai hi mai hoon har jagah , maa yeh pyaar Tera kaisa hai ?
Seedha saccha bhola bhala Mai hi sabse aacha hun..

" Kitna Bhi Bada Ho Jaun Maa mai Humesha Tera Baccha hoon ""


Yaad mai mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi... Aansun ponch kosish kar raha tha sone ki... tabhi gate khulta hai...Baba ander aate hai... Unki aankhein bhi dekhne mai Laal lag rahi thi... Shayad rone ki wajah se ho yaa pta nahi abhi mai unhe dekh hi raha tha ki woh ladkhadate hue ander aaye aur mere baaju mai baith gye...


Unki haalat dekh mai samjh gaya ki daaru pee kar aaye hai... Woh mujhe hi dekh rahe the saath hi mere sir par hath ferte rahe... Main unko aur unki harkaton ko dekh raha tha... Lekin bola kuch nahi unhone bhi mujhe kuch nahi bola bass mere sir par haath ferte rahe... kaafi time baithne...


Tony... Ab kaise tabiyat hai mere bete...


Mai... ( Unko dekh normal hote hua ) ab theek hai aap Kab aaye...


Tony... Bas abhi... Soye Nahi abhi tak...


Mai... ( Hichkicha kar ) wwohh basss aiiseee hiii...


Tony... Maa ki yaaad aa rahi hai...



Mai... Huuuhhhhh ( ekdum se shock ho gaya ) hmmmm...


Tony... Mujhe bhi....


Maine Baba ko dekh unki aankhein Nam thi maine maa aur Baba ko kam hi baat karte hue dekha tha... Mujhe laga shayad dono ke beech jhagda hai isliye dono baat nahi karte lekin Baba bhi maa ko utna yaad kar rahe jitna mai kar hoon... Hmmm maine unka unka ek hath jo khali tha usko thaam liya unhone ek baar meri taraf dekha... Aur kuch kha nahi... Kaafi der tak woh mere sir par hath ferte rahe...


Aur pta nahi kab mujhe neend aa gayi....



Mid Night... Time 10 : 55 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Daddddd...


Aadmi... ( Chonkte Hue ) Huhhhh sukuuu... Tumhe Hosh aa gya... Ruko mai Doctor ko bula kar lata hun...


Ladki... ( Dubara awaaz dete hue ) Nahi Dad mere paas jayada Time nahi hai main jaanti hun... Mujhe kya hua hai uska ilaaj...


Aadmi... Beti tumhe kuch nahi hua... Ab tum theek ho Doc ne kha hai hafte bhar mai tumhe chutti mill jayegi... ( Nam aankhon se ) Aur fir tumhe apni Maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai na... Apna sapna poora karna hai...


Ladki... Lekin Dadddd...


Aadmi... Maine kaha na tumhe kuch nahi hoga... Jab tak apna sapna poora nahi kar leti... Abhi tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai...



Ladki... Daddd....


Aadmi... Shhhhhhh.... aankhein band karo... Sab theek ho jayega...


Ladki ne apne Dad ki taraf dekha jo uske paas baith uske sir par hath fer rahe the... Usne bhi unka ek hath thaam liya aur aankhein band kar li... Jaise usne bharosa kar liya tha jo Dad ne kaha woh sach hai... lekin kaise.... ???


Wanhi Aadmi bhi kisi aur soch mai gummm tha... Mujhe maaf kar dena beti abhi mai tumhe kuch nahi bata sakta... Mai jo kiya galat ya sahi mujhe Nahi pta lekin iske alawa koi aur raasta nahi tha mere pass...


Raat Gehri hoti Gayi dheere dheere sab log so gye... Sivay teen Logo ke... Jo aap sab jante hi Hain... Tony , Unknown Aadmi , Vimala....



Tony / Aadmi ne poori raat apne bete / beti ke saath baith kar nikaal di... Wanhi Vimala ko apne bete Nazim ka intjaar tha uski neend bhi gayab thi ab tak Nazim Ghar jo nahi aaya tha... Aur aata bhi kaise... Woh kisi aur ka shikaar ban chuka tha....


( Hhhhh again update late ho gya... Mai real reason btaunga toh aacha nahi lagega... Toh yeh samjh lo ki kal ishowspeed India aaya tha bhai ko chat mai rasta bta Raha tha... 🤣

likes aur review dene ka... Update Monday ko aayega Sunday ki jagh... 🤞 )


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Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Such a emotional update

awesome update

Shandar update

Awesome update bhai 👏

Shandar update

timely update na ane ki wajah se logo ka bhi man nahi karta us kahani ki taraf jane ka
aur jaha tak apki kahani ka sawal hai jo theme hai aur jaise chal rahi hai kahani ko samajhne wale log hi attract honge jo kahani padhte waqt use bahut imagine karte hai
jaise is kahani ko hindi forum ke page 1 par pin bhi kiya gaya tha jaha tak mujhe yad hai aur reach bhi badhi hogi par story base line aur late updates karan ban rahe hai
sunday ka update tuesday ko mil raha hai to wednesday ka update kab milega
mante hai apki bhi life hai to kuch samay ke liye weekly update de diya karo par is decision se aur approch ghategi


is reveiw ko ap positive view mai bhi le sakte hai aur negative bhi wo apke upar hai
agar dil se likh rahe ho to ap likhte rahoge ya bas reveiw aur like ke liye likh rahe ho to sorry kahi kisi mod par jake apko kuch aur sochna padega ya likhna chod doge 10 sal ka experience hai mera aur najane kitni haseen kahaniya lekhak ne khud adhuri chodi hai aur chand hi hoti hai jo majburiyo ki wajh se adhuri chute
baki raha samay ka sawal to har kisi ke pas plenty of time hota hai jo wo akele spend karta hai

Nice update

Kuch time se kisi bhi story par koi review nahi diya maine, busy tha.

Nazim apne plan main kamyab to nahi ho paya, lekin sab kuch barbad kar gya.

Jo nahi chahta tha vahi hua, yashoda ki death. Dekhte hai ye incident kahani me konse mod le kar aati hai.

Kahani ke background me bahut kuch chal rha hai. Nazim ko marne vala vo ladka yaa phir yashoda ki maut ki vajah.

Pichle update me iss aadmi ki beti ki jaan khatre me thi. Aur ab yahan yashoda ki death hona. Aur uss aadmi aur aurat ki baat se lag rha hai ki shayad apni beti ko bachane ke liye unhone yashoda ke sath kuch Kiya hai. Ab kya Kiya hai ye to aage hi pta chalega. Aur dekhte hai bhavishya me iske kya parinaam honge.

Baat karu reviews yaa view kam hone ke to uske 2 reasons lag rhe hai mujhe.
1. Update ka time par naa aana aur unke bich ka badhta gap.

2. Kahani ab tak apne plot ko establish nahi kar payi. Yu to kahani me koi kami nahi hai writing style aur plot acha hai. Lekin unexplained hai.

Aapne hi kaha tha ki kahani me fantasy aur supernatural powers ka bhi role hai, lekin ab tak kahani puri tarah se emotional rahi hai, ab aise me thodi boriyat to hone hi lagti hai. Emotional, action, thriller sabka cocktail ho to maja aata hai, jyada vakt tak agar ek hi tarah ki tone me story chale specifically emotional tone me to ubaupan ho jata hai.

Don't take it wrong, sirf mujhe Aisa lagta hai. It's upto you totally ki kahani kaise likhni hai.

Nice update, eagerly waiting for update

Thanks

Yashoda mar gayi to Tony nazim ko chhodega nahi. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Tow Yashoda ka chapter yahi se khatam hota h bechari Yashoda ko kabhi sukh nahi Mila nandu Jawan ho raha tha tow shayad ab sukh bhare din aate ya fir tony Shaadi ker leta tow lekin woh bhi kuch nahi huwa
Woh aadmi aisa kyon keh raha tha ki (kia hamne sahi kia) tow in Longo ki wajah se Yashoda Mari
Baherhal sweety ki wajah se nandu k honto per thodi muskan tow aayi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai

Waiting for next update

Emotional update
Abhi Yashoda ko lekar jaa raha hai wo baccha
jiski Maa usko janm dete mein marr gayi thi

Nice update


Bahut hi mazedar update

Bhai, Aap apne update ke schedule par nahi dete. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
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