Asal me sabse bada challange yahi hai ab...

Ek simple si story likhna chahta tha main jisme gaav ka pariwesh ho. Title bhi usi ke hisab se rakha tha. Fir jab
Death Kiñg aalu kamdev99008 &
SANJU ( V. R. ) Bhaiya ke response dekhe to suddenly zahan me khayaal aaya ki kya sach me mujhe ek simple si story hi likhni chahiye??? Mera ab tak koi simple si story nahi likhi thi. Thriller suspense aur mystery likhna padhna mujhe shuru se hi pasand raha hai fir itne mahaan readers ke saamne ek simple si story kyo pesh ki jaye?? Ye sawaal mere saamne khada ho chuka tha....maine sochne laga ki ab kya kiya jaye? Kyoki story ka title already daal diya tha maine aur story ke update bhi kai de chuka tha main. Fir maine socha chalo koi baat nahi....ab jo ho gaya hai use cut nahi karunga balki isi me thrill aur mystery ko add karunga. Lauda jab apan ko hi bina thrill suspense aur mystery ke likhne ka mood nahi karega to kaise kuch likh paaunga main?? Anyways challenge to ab bahut bada ho chuka tha is liye is challenge ko accept kiya aur shuru ho gaya....
Shuru to ho gaya tha but story ka title zahan se kabhi nahi hata kyoki wo tha hi aisa. Uske hisaab se to is kahani ko love story hona chahiye tha but apan ne thrill suspense aur mystery wali khuji mitane ke liye love ke angel ko kopche me hi rakh diyela tha. Khair ab jab ki story yahan par aa pahuchi hai to kisi na kisi tarah title ko bhi justify karna hi hai, fir bhale hi chaahe wo betuka ya fir thoda sa hi ho....
Thrill suspense aur mystery wali khujli zyada maayne rakhti hai apan ke liye baaki love shav maa chu***ye...

Apan ne to reply me hi 5% story ka update likh diya....iska review ju alag se dena
Bataya na suspense wali khujli
Bhai pyar me tadapna aur rona dhona zyadatar female ko shobha deta hai....vaibhav ko jo shobha deta tha uski to usne khud hi lanka la di hai. Kaha bechara

ghapaghap ke kaam se khush tha aur kaha ab wo achha insaan banne ke chakkar me apne laude par lock hi laga baitha hai. Isse badi saza kya hogi uske liye...Aakhir chaahte kya ho...wo jaan de de??
Aur kya chaahta hai apan???

Yaha log writer ko khush karne ke liye tareefon se bhare comments athwa reviews chemp dete hain. Sawaal to koi kar hi nahi raha... These anpadh aur bailbuddhi logis
Nahi bataaunga