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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,441 82.7%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 237 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 37 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,742

Werewolf

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Werewolf

𝕮𝖍𝖎𝖊𝖋
Supreme
17,507
113,009
259

Werewolf

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113,009
259
कल भी ' काला नाग ' के स्टोरी थ्रीड पर यही समझाना चाह रहा था कि दूर की हर चमकती हुई वस्तु डायमंड नही होती। ग्लैमर से भरी हुई हर फिल्म कलाकारों का लाइफ वास्तविक जीवन मे उतना ग्लैमर नही होता। हर बड़े बिजनेसमैन की तरक्की के पीछे कोई बहुत बड़ा कारण होता है। उनका हर स्टेप्स कांटो भरे पथ पर चलने जैसा होता है।
Aur na chaahte hue bhi unke haath kahi na kahi gande keechad se sane hue rehte hai. Jaise Kishor.
काइरा की लाइफ भी वैसी ही थी। मां ने बचपन मे ही साथ छोड़ दिया । भाई ने कभी उसे समझने की कोशिश नही की। और बाप ने अपने व्यापारिक फायदे के लिए उसका मशीनीकरण कर दिया। सोनिया , जो उसकी उस वक्त की एकमात्र फ्रैंड थी , ने भी उसकी काबिलियत , उसकी सुपीरियरटी पर सब समय जलन की भावना पाले रही।
वर्तमान मे वो एक प्रतिष्ठित बिजनेस वुमेन है लेकिन इसे प्राप्त करने के लिए उसने कितनी कुर्बानियां दी है , यह कोई नही समझ सकता।
Par Veer samajhta hai. Karan ko bhi baad me iss baat ka ehsaas hua. Sonia Suhana anjaan hai. Unhe nahi pata Kaera ke andar ye change kaise aaya. Woh jaanti hai ki Kaera ghar par hi raha karti thi. Par woh ye nahi jaanti ki Kaera apne emotions kho chuki hai. Isliye uske ravaiyye se Suhana harr baar khud se prashn karne lagti hai ki akhir kya hua tha uske saath?
वीर ने परी की मदद से एक और अद्भुत स्किल हासिल किया , सीर वीजन। वैसे
उसे सीर वीजन नहीं कहते :D :noo:
उसे सीयर विज़न कहते हैं। :declare:
वैसे वीर के पास पहले से क्षमता थी कि वह पहली नजर मे ही किसी व्यक्ति का पहचान मालूम कर लेता था। पर इस स्किल की वजह से वो व्यक्ति का अब तक का पास्ट भी मालूम कर सकता है।
इस स्किल ने उसे काइरा के अतीत का दर्शन कराया जो बहुत भी दर्द से भरा था।
Sanju bhai, skill sirf ajeevit cheezo par upyog kii jaa sakti hai. Pendant ajeevit cheez thi. Isliye Pari keh rahi thi ki isse apne pendant par istemaal kar lo. Saare raaz saamne aa jaate. Par Veer ne apna fayda nahi dekha. Kaera ke liye usne ye skill uss diary par daav par laga dii.

Aur usne diary aur diary se jude logo ka ateet dekha.
स्किल चूंकि बहुत बड़ी और अनोखी थी , इसलिए प्रयोग के दौरान कीमत के रूप मे उसे आठ दस घंटे के लिए मेंटल ट्रामा से भी गुजरना था।
Skill ka prayog zyaada derr tak nahi hua. Kaera wahi thi uske saath. Par haan, vaastav ka samay aur Veer jab labyrinth me tha uske samay me antar tha.

Bhale hi Veer vaastav me kuch minutes tak out tha. Par labyrinth ke andar usse kam se kam 1 ghanta ho hi gaya tha. Isliye wo mental pressure kaafi zyaada tha. Aisa kisi cheez ka saamna Veer ne pehli baar kiya tha. Isliye woh behosh ho gaya. Woh jitna aisi cheezo ka saamna karega uski mental pressure handle karne ki shakti aur badhegi. :smartm:
लेकिन यह समझ मे अभी भी न आया कि काइरा की विश्वसनीयता वीर के प्रति अचानक कम क्यो हो गई ?
Kaera ke andar kuch na kuch trigger hua hai uss diary ke kuch panne padhne ke baad.
फूड ट्रक -- मोस्ट डिपेंड करता है फूड के स्वाद और क्वालिटी पर। चूंकि वीर के पास यह स्किल भी है इसलिए उसके बनाए गए फूड्स पर कोई प्रश्न चिन्ह लगा ही नही सकता। लेकिन बाकी लोग के लिए यह कठिन है ही। इसीलिए आज-कल होटल मैनेजमेंट की शिक्षा की काफी मांग है। वीर को कम से कम सोनाली को यह कोर्स जरूर कराना चाहिए।
Bhumika aa gayi hai na ab. :smartm:
तमन्ना मैडम एक फूड क्रिटिक थी और उन्होने अपने प्रोफेशन के बारे मे जो कहा , वो भी सच था। लेकिन अचानक से भाग क्यों खड़ी हुई ?
वैन के अंदर सोनाली को वीर द्वारा दिया हुआ झटका जोर से ही लगा होगा। ऐसा उसने एक्स्पेक्ट ही नही किया होगा।
देखते है मोहतरमा का रिएक्शन क्या होता है !

बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग।
और जगमग जगमग भी।
Dhanyavaad bhaaya. Bane rahiyega aise hi saath me. :five: ✨
( मै काइरा के अंदर कियारा को देख रहा था
Kaera kiara se zyada khubsoorat hai. :heh:
लेकिन यह लड़की भी सिध्दार्थ से आज के दिन शादी कर पराई हो जायेगी। कोई बात नही फिर काइरा को शादी-शुदा लाल कपड़े मे ही इमेजिन कर लेंगे :hehe:
Kaera ko kaun byaah ke le jayega? :D
 

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Agar keara ki filling, emotions jaag gyi to kya veer ke liye pareshani khadi hogi ya kuch or hoga
Kahi keara ki veer ne versinity le li thi to usse veer ki jindgi m kuch pareshani to jarur aayegi
Complications toh hoyenge hi.
Bhai dekha jaye to jo samne wala Banda hai jiske pas bhi system hai wo veer se high level main veer ko abhi bhuut mehnat karni hogi or i think kaera ka mission complete ho gya hoga , ho skta hai kaera unconscious ho gyi hogi sayad isi liye pari detect nhi kar pai hai or isi wajah se koi notification nhi aya hai
Itne dino tak thodi unconscious rahegi. :think:
Kaera ka past to bahot painful hai or ab achanak se sare emotional kaera ke under jaag gaye to kaera depression me ja sakti hai. Abhi kaera ki condition ke bare me soch pana bada muskil hai ki diary ka use par kya asar hua hai.. Or uss me or kya kya raaz chupe hue hai.?
Kaera ke baare me filhaal zyada na socho abhi warna confuse hote jaoge.
Mission failed bhi nahi hua or complete bhi nahi hua to koi baat to hai.. kaera ke under kuch changes aaye honge lagta hai.
Jo saamne dikhaya jaa raha hai uss par dhyaan dene ka. :D
Veer ki halat bhi kharab ho gay kaera ke past me gush ke .. Khair jo skills use veer karta hai uss ke side effects to hone hi the ..

Superb update bhai
Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Update - 5 ~ System Activation

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...


Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

***

Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai p
ar call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whtsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!
Kya bhakchodi h ye yarr
 

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Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

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Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


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Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
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Pehle se ye soochna de raha hu. Next update aane me ho sakta hai thodi derri ho jaaye. Ya aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki apne time se aa jaaye. Aisa isliye hai kyuki mein USC ke liye bhi ek kahani likh raha hu. Toh ju log woh zaroor padhna. Link mein apne siggy me daal hi dunga. Apna support dikhaana na bhulna. :thanx:
 

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Crimson as usual ek badass villian jaisa situation hai well abtak sabse badass villian samne aaya jiska charecter veer se ek alag hi way me hai haa charecters har person ke same nhi ho sakte but idhar situation alag hai dono ke pass system ek alag atittudness hoga dono me khaskar crimson ka jo veer se bohot aage hai system se but who know kab kon sa pasa veer bhi phek de crimson ke shatranj me jaise crimson ne ek situation create kia ava ke jariye veer ko paris me lane ke liye, may be in this cr. Festival the target of crimson is ava for the festival night,ho sakta hai kyuki pichli bar ki last victim yahi hone wali thi khair ab aate crimson ke kuch common points jo hue (1)Crimson ka ye festival bhi night me hi active obviously jo pichle H.O.K ARC ke killers ke scene hue wo bhi night me hi anzam diye gaye. (2)jo H.O.K tha wo crimson se hi juda hua hai aur isi karan veer bhi uske nazar me aagaya ya pahle se hi. (3)crimson ka atittude me ek alag hi fetish dikhta hai jo ki system ke milne ke baad aur badh gayaho
 

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Update - 134 ~ Crimson Festival
Ab tak…

Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~

“I need you! ASAP!”


Ab aage :

Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-

Apna bag pack karne ki.

Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.

“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”

Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.

Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.

Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.

Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.

Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.

Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.

Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?

Veer : Hein???

Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?

Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.

Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!

Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,

Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.

Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?

Veer : Business ke!

Tej : Kaisa business?

Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!

Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?

Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?

Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?

Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?

Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?

Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?

Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?

Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.

Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.

Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.

Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.

Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?

Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.

Tej : Ohhh!

Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?

Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.

Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~

Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.

Bhavna : Bas?

Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?

Bhavna : Samjhi!

Veer : Hmm!

Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,

Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.

Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.

Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.

Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.

Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.

Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.

Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,

Shweta : Huh!?

Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.

Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.

Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,

Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.

Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-

Veer ne uska haath thaama,

Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!

Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.

Shweta : O-Okay~

‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.

[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]

Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.

Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.

Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.

Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.

Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~

Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.

Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.

Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.

Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.

Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.

Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?

Bhavna : Hmm?

Tej : Kaho Veer!

Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.

[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]

‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’

[Right away Master!]

Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.



‘Hmm! I see!’

Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!

Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?

Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?

Veer : Umm~ Woh-!

Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?

Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.

Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?

[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]

Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.

Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?

Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?

Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.

Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,

Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.

Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.

Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.

Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?

Bhumika : Hmm?

Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.

Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!

Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.

Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.

Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.

Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!

Ragini : Huhhh!?

Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!

Tej : Arohi??

Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.

Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?

Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?

Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.

Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!

Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.

Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhumika : W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm!?

Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.

Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.

Veer : Whaaaatttt??

Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?

Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??

Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.

‘She- She’s cute!’

[Ahem!]

Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!

Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.

Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.

Veer : Huh?

Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.

Veer : Par-

Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.

Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.

Tej : M-Mom!?

Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.

Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.

Veer : Label?

Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.

Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.

[Woah! She’s intelligent.]

Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.

Ek teer se do shikaar.

Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.

Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!

Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.

Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.

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Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.

Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.

Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.

Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?

Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~

Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.

Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.

Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~

Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~

Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.

Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!

Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~

Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,

*Gulps*

Woh usse nigal gayi.

“Ahhhhhhhh~~”

Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,


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Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.

Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.

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Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.

Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,

Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?

Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!

Bhavna : Kya?

Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.

Bhavna : P-Par?

Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.

Bhavna : Lekin kyu?

Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.

Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?

Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.

Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.

Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.

Veer : Ab kya hua?

Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.

Veer : Ye kya hai?

Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.

Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?

Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!

Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?

Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.

Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.

Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.

Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.

Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,

Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?

Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.


Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’

Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.

6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.

Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.

30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.

Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.

Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.

Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.


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Ava!!!

Ya yu kahe ki,

Natalia!!!

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Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM


Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.

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Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.

Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,

“Ladies and gentleman!!”

Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.

“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”

“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.

Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.

Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.

Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.

“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.

Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.

Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,

Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.

Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,

*Bammmm*

Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.

Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.

Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,

*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*

“Oooooooooo~~~”

“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”

“Woooohooooooooo~”

Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.

Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.


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Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.

*Boooom* *Booooom*

*Swooooooosssshhh*

Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.

Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,

Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?

Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.

Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,


“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”

Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?

Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.

Dhanyavaad!
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