Adultery Veer ki Kahani......... (AGNIVEER)

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DOSTON main ish forum pe naya hun .....
Main ek nayi story start karne jaa raha hun.... Umeed karta hun aapko pasand aayegi.
"Veer ki kahani ..... (AgniVeer)"

Ish kahani ke sab partr kalpanik hain, Yeh kahani keval manoranjan ke liye ish forum pe likhi gayi hai, jiska kisi jeevit ya mrat insaan se koyi lena dena nahi hai. Aap sab mera sehayog v saath de ish kahani purn kar sakun..... Dhanyawad.

Update - 24-(1) ........ posted today

 

[Lib am]

Update 21

( Mummy ne chai pe bulya hai)


Subha 6:30 baje akhade me kusti ka mukabla ho raha tha, 8 phelwan ek ke baad ek Veer se haarte jaa rahe the woh aaj alag hi josh me tha, mulable ek taraf lag raha tha jab 9ve phelwan se veer apni sidhi jaangh pe thapki de kar bola - Aaja Jitu (phelwan ka naam) kab tak chhupa rahe gaya.....

Jitu usse 1 saal bada tha body bhi uski tagdi thi par woh veer jitna phurtila nahi tha isliye aaj tak usse harta aa raha tha, dono langot me haathon me panje fasa ke ek doosre ko jhuki de rahe the..... Jitu ko laga ki Veer thak gaya hoga itne phelwanon ko chit karke par nahi usne ek daav chala, jaise hi Jitu ka haath miti se chuha Veer iska faiyada lekar uski kamar pe dono haathon ka fanda laga ke usko gira diya......

Tabhi akhade me ek jawan khubsurat ladki aayi aur Coach, joh dur se dekh rahe the, se puchi Veer kahan hai.....

'Yeh toh prachi hai'....... jab veer ne sar utha ke dekha toh Prachi ek shorts aur sleeve less tops me usko dekhkar Hi boli......

Prachi....

Veer ka dhayan ek baar chuka aur jiska phaidya Jitu ne utha ke uski pakad se ulta ghum ke Veer ko piche patak diya aur teji se uska ek kandha niche laga diya, Veer bhi doosre kandhe ko loose chhod diya yeh soch kar beta aaj tu jeet le......

Veer ke chit hote hi sab phelwanon ne rahat ki saans li aur seeti maari ke taali baja ke bole ..... Veer ko hara diya Jitu ne...... sab Jitu ko utha liye aur Veer bhi jhat se khada hokar..... "Haan bhai main haar gaya"..... aur jaldi se kisi ka toliya apni kamar pe lapeta phir Prachi ke paas chala gay.....

Veer - Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai aur uska haath pakad ke akhade ke bahar le gaya, sab Prachi aur Veer ko hi dekh rahe the..... gate ke bahar Prachi ki scooty khadi thi.

Veer thoda gusse me - Tu yahan kyun aayi ?

Prachi ko laga ki veer usko dekhkar khush hoga par nahi woh toh ushpe hi naraaj ho gaya..... Kal raat ko Ragni Thakur ( Prachi ki mummy) ne usse bola ki teri daadi ne aur maine veer ko kal subha ke naste pe bulaya hai, tu ek kaam kar apni scooty lekar veer ke ghar chali jaana aur khud uski daadi se hamre yahan naste pe invitation de dena maine unse baat kar li hai unko koyi problem nahi bas formality ke tu veer ko bulane chali jaana...... Prachi ki khusi ka thikna na raha woh ati utsahit hokar main subha hi chali jaungi, shaam ko mujhe hostel bhi jaana.
Prachi ko kya sujhi ki veer ke ghar na jaa ke woh akhade me chali gayi apne lover ko milne aur doosre phelwanon ko jaalane....

Prachi - Agar meri wajah se haar gaye toh I am sorry..... main tumhe daadi ka invitation dene aayi thi, mummy ne tumhe subha naste pe bulya hai.....

Veer - Tu scooty lekar ghar jaa main tujhse wahi milta hun...... aur akhade me chala gaya.

Prachi ko veer ka attitude samajh nahi aaya isliye key laga ke scooty self start ki aur Veer ke makan pe chali gayi.....

Woh saare raste yehi soch rahi thi ki veer ne usse kitni berukhi se baat ki joh usne aaj tak nahi ki thi, shayad veer ko preeti ne patta liya..... nahin nahin woh toh aadhi pagal ladki hai mera veer aisa nahi kar sakta...... Preeti chahe lakh koshish kar le par veer ki jeevan saathi sirf main hi banugi..... bachpan ki dosti ka galat phaida utha rahi hai preeti mujhe Saloni didi se baat karni hogi.

Scooty makan ke ander laga ke woh palti hi thi ki sheru uspe ek baar bhonk ke uske pass aane laga par gale me patta tha..... Prachi muskar ke - Ale ale ..... mere sheru ko kya huya ? scooty se ek biscuit ka packet nikali aur uske pass jakar uske sar aur gardan pe haath pherne lagi..... sheru ko bhi Prachi acchi lagti thi woh hamesha uske liye dog biscuit aur snacks lekar aati thi aaj bhi laayi thi, maalik ko patana hai toh uske kutte ya noukar se dosti karo.....
Prachi aur sheru ki dosti veer ne hi karai thi, usko dog jaada pasand nahi the par veer ke saath sheru ki care karne lagi jab bhi aati uska special bond ban gaya tha ki sheru ke saath, jaanvar bhi pyaar ka bhookha hota hai aur Prachi wahi kar rahi thi sheru ke saath usko biscuit bhi khila rahi thi, usse khel bhi rahi thi.....

Kitchen se Rani aur bethak ke doosre gate joh khula huya tha Ramadevi ladoo bandh rahi thi v Prachi ko dekh kar khush bhi ho rahi thi yeh soch kar aa gayi meri doosri veer ki dulhaniya...... haan usko dimaagh me nayi nayi khichdi paak rahi hi thi..... " Preeti uski pehle number ki bahu thi, ab Prachi doosri aur Padmani bhi secret biwi banegi mere veer ki jab woh uski kokh me beej daalega".....

Rani kitchen se bahar aakar Prachi ko awaaj di toh woh boli - Aati hun aunty pehle mere bacche sheru ko pyaar kar lunn..... arre mera baby.....

Rani haskar - Main toh yeh remind kar rahi hun ki parson hi tere ish baby ne 5 gundon ko kaat kaat ke unko behosh kar diya tha...... Tu sambhal kar reh isko jaada laad dekhne ki koshish mat kar...... haahaahaa

Prachi ne ek baar sheru ko dekha woh araam se biscuit khaa raha tha, usko kuch bol kar Rani ke paas aayi - Namste aunty aur uske paon chuhi..... rani usko utha ke gale lagi..... " Arre !!! betiyan paon nahi chuhti, humko paap lagega specially unmarried ho toh"......

Prachi bhi sharam ke - Bas mann kiya maa...... kya main aapko maa keh sakti hun aunty ki jagah.....

Rani uska maatha chum ke - Maine tujhe kabhi parya nahi samajha, joh mann karke woh keh ke sambodhit kar......

Rama ki bethak se awaaj aayi - Bas Rani ko Phupi mat kehna chaha daadi , naani , tai etc etc etc bol le..... haahaahaa.....
Rani ko chodkar Prachi bethak me jaakar Rama ko dekhi joh ek piddhi pe beth kar ek badi paraat me dono haathon se desi ghee ke ladoo ban rahi thi woh bhi mote mote, uske haathon me jaadu tha jish ko haath laga de woh chiz jaada swaadisht ban jaati thi..... sach me Rama devi annapurna ka ek roop thi.....

Niche bethkar Daadi ke piar chuhi - Bhagwan tujhe sabse gunwaan aur balshali Var de..... sada khush reh meri bacchi.....

Prachi khush hoti huyi - Daadi ladoo bana rahi ho kitni aachi smell aa rahi hai, wow veer ke liye ban rahi ho mujhe bhi dena aapke haathon ke ladoo mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai..... Rama ke gale lag gayi.....

Joh khawab dekhe the Prachi ne woh aisa lag rahe the ki jaldi poore honge, baat toh sahi thi ki prachi ko sab pasand karte the aur woh preeti se woh kam sundar nahi thi, prefect matching pair tha uska veer ke saath sab jaante the par preference Preeti thi jisko Prachi bilkul pasand nahi karti thi..... Jaise mahabharat me kaaran ko arjun pasand nahi tha ushi tarah Prachi aur Preeti ek doosre ki ghor pratidwandi the joh veer ke birthday waale din sabko nazaar aa rahe the..... Jab preeti ne veer ke face pe lage cake saaf karne ke bahane kiss kiya tha wahi prachi ne apne rumal se veer ka face saaf kiya tha...... ish baat pe behas hone lagi toh Ramadevi ne dono daanta tha..... tum dono bhene ho yeh kabhi nahi bhulna.

Rama haskar - Sab ke liye bana rahi hun bas veer ke alag hain usme garam cheezen daali hain.

Prachi - Woh toh kaafi garmi kha raha tha mujhse, agar jaada garmi chad gayi toh jaada gussa karega..... woh serious tone me boli....

Reena aur Saloni nichhe bethak me aa gayi aur Reena ke haath me packed trolly suitcase tha woh tyaar hokar aayi thi.....
Reena - Kisko garmi chadi hai uski abhi utar dungi naam bata Prachi uska.....

Saloni uske kandhe par maar ke aankhein dikhayi - Woh chotu ki baat kar rahi hai..... tu bhi na hamesha tash me rehti hai...... Veer se milkar aayi hai na prachi par woh toh abhi akhade me hoga......

Prachi dono didi ke gale mili aur boli - Maine socha ki Veer ko daadi ka nimantarn de dun isliye usse milne chali gayi par woh mujhse bahot rudely baat kiya aur mujhe bahar ka rasta dikha diya..... uski aankhon me aasun aa gaye last sentence bolte huye.....

Rani uske paas jaakar - Arre meri bacchi ko usne rulya hai usko aane do main uski taang todkar usko ghar ke bahar nikal dungi..... rote nahi tu toh sabse samajhdar beti hai na..... uske aansun phonch ke gale laga li.....

Baaki teeno hasne lagi ki maa veer ko daantegi yeh sirf sapnon me ho sakta hai na ki hakikat me.....
Rama - Yeh toh hona hi tha, veer kya kar raha tha akhadhe me ?

Prachi - Woh kusti haar gaya tha.

Rani chaunk ke - Veer haar hi nahi sakta, main nahi maanti.

Rama - Agar yeh chadi aur baniyan me sab mardon ke saamne jayegi woh gussa nahi hoga toh iski aarti utarega.....

Saloni - Veer ko prachi ki dress se nahi joh mardon ki aankhon me hawash najar aati hai usse problem hai, tum suit salwar pehn ke jaati toh woh gussa nahi hota, kya koyi doosri ladki bhi thi wahan.

Prachi ab baat ki gambheerta ko samajhi aur naa me mudi hila di - Bas main akeli gayi thi....

Reena maje leti huyi - Itni chikni gori taangein dekhkar sab akhadhe me tujhe dekh kar laar tapka rahen honge, ek toh yeh ashriwarya jaisi sunder hai dusre iske baal bilkul ishki sundarta pe char chand lagte hai..... kabhi kabhi toh mera bhi mann karta hai ki kash mein ladka hoti aur Prachi meri girlfriend..... hiihiiihiii..... Veer tujhe apni girlfriend ki tarah toh nahi daant raha tha..... haahaahaa.....

Prachi apni tareef sunkar aur jaada sharmane lagi..... nahi nahi aisa nahi hai.....

Reena - Lagi reha kabhi toh Mohan milege, vaise Preeti advanced book karwa li hai......

Saloni - Chup ho jaa mata..... kabse kuch bhi baake jaa rahi hai, Prachi tu tension na le chotu ka gussa jaada dair nahi tikta woh jab aayega tab yeh baat bhi bhul jayega...... maa kuch khane ko de aur teri taxi kab aayegi Reena.....
Rani apne saath Prachi ko Kitchen me le gayi......
Rama sabki baat sun rahi thi aur apna kaam pe bhi focus kar rahi thi........

(***Doston ek baat main aapko clear kar dun ki aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Veer hamse jeet hi jaata tha kusti me woh kayi baar usse jaada skill waale phelwano se haar bhi jaata tha par uski ek khasiyat yeh thi woh bhi apne Coach ki tarah jaldi hi samne waale ki kamjori jaldi pahchan jaata tha aur wahi galti nahi karta tha usko haarane me......)

Veer jab wapas aaya akhade me toh sabse pehle Jitu ko badhai diya haath mila ke......

Coach - Jitu ko 251 rs ka inaam milta hai yeh main ghosna karta hun..... sab jitu jitu karne lage..... unhone sab ki shant karwaya aur bole.....
" Karamveer pe 100 rs ka jurma lagata hun " ...... sab apas me khusur pusur karne lage......

Veer bhi Coach ke paas jaakar - Sir main 100 rs kahan se launga, 100 rs badi rakam hai.....
( Doston kusti me inaam aur dand rakam se nahi akante bas haar jeet ki baat hoti hai, dand kisi bhi phelwan ko saja hi lagti hai )

Coach - Dhayan bhatakne se tum gir toh gaye the par tumne koyi jor nahi lagya ya keh lo khud har gaye..... isliye fine aur warning di hai warna main phelwanon ko kya saja deta hun yeh bhi tum acchi tarah jaante ho.

Veer bhi khamosh ho gaya, woh sar jhuka ke changing room me chala gaya aur kapde lekar hauz ke paas aakar nahne laga..... 4 ladke bhi nahane lage aur baaki practise karne lage.....
4 ladkon me Jitu bhi tha woh bola - Yaar maine toh bas ek mouka dekha toh tujhe chit kar diya par coach shabh ko yeh nahi karna chahiye tha.....

Ghanshyam - Veer 100 rupee fine bahot badi rakam hoti hai 5 rs jeet ke score ke milte hain, lagta hai coach shabh tujhe koyi badi kusti me utarne waale hain.....

Shakib - Arre Veer ko harna muskil nahi namumkin hai agar yeh jeetne ki thaan le....

Raju - Bhai kuch bhi kehlo bhabhi ki taange bahot chikni hai bilkul rasmalai jaisi..... hiihiihiii.......

Veer ek dum uski baat sunkar hauz me uski gardan pakad ke uska muh apni dono jhaangon me biche ke dubne laga..... woh bas jhatpata raha tha par veer haskar - Saale woh meri acchi dost hai aur agar teri baat Sachin ya Raghav thakur ne sun li toh teri ghar me koyi aurat kya mard bhi pehle sabka rape hota phir maar jaate.....

Jitu haskar - Bhenchod ka muh hamesha laudiya dekhkar khul hi jaata hai, jhaant ke pisu pehle soch toh le jaban kholne se..... Veer susura mar na jaaye.....

Veer - Shakib iske haath pakad saala meri jaanghein chil diya hai..... bhenchod 2 min aise hi reh varna hum sab teri sukhi gaand bina tel laga ke marenge..... haahaahaa......

Ghanshyam - Abbe veer mar jaagega haramkhor....... chhod de yaar, yeh saala landi kuttiya ki mafik hai.....

Veer ne usko chhod toh woh khulu khuluuu karta hauz ki diwar pe chadke khaste huye saans le raha tha..... 4on hasne lage......

Raju ki halat aisi ho gayi thi ki Shakib uski gaand sehla raha tha paani ke ander se, Veer ko pata nahi thi dekhne me Raju kuch jaada chikne phelwan ki tarah tha, ht bhi normal thi aur body bhi halki thi baaki ke mukable lekin ek number ka harami tha comments karne aur ladkiyon pe phabtiyan kasne me koyi kami nahi karta tha, veer usko acchi tarah se jaanta tha ki yeh kabhi nahi sudherga.....

Saans lekar woh Shakib aur Ghanshyam se bhid gaya..... Phir coach shabh ne sabko daanta......

Veer akhade se jab ghar phoucha toh ek taxi gate pe khadi thi, usko pata tha Reena didi ne bulai hogi.....
Sab bethak me mil gaye tab Saloni boli - Lo Veer bhi aa gaya aur kusti haar ke aata, Reena jaane waali thi.....

Veer ne kisi ki taraf dhayan nahi diya seedha apni choti didi Reene ke gale mila, woh bhi Veer ke gale lagi thodi se bhavuk ho gayi thi - Chotu sabka dhayan rakhna tu ab bada ho gaya hai...... uske dono gaalon ko chumiyon se bhar di...... phir se gale lagke boli - Ab jaane de varna main kuch din aur ruk jaungi.... haahaahaa.....

Veer apni didi ka maatha chuma - Didi ghar aapka hai jabtak mann kare ruk jaana vaise bhi aap time ki bahot paband hain so main nahi rokta aapko.....
Trolly suitcase lekar aur Reena ka college bag lekar bahar chala gaya......

Reena - Daadi ji 2500 rs taxi ka kirya hai, woh dena hai advance me.....

Dharam ke saath sab hasne lage, Rama bhi muskara ke apne room me chali gayi.....
Saloni - Kya baat hai Daadiji woh budhiya aaj kahan gayi ?

Reena chaplusi karti huyi - Meri pyaari daadi hain, main unko kuch bhi bolaun aapko kya ?

Dharam bhi veer ko dekhne chal gaya bahar, Rama ne 5000rs diye - Yeh le 5000 hain, dhayan se jaana aur sambhal ke kharach karna.....

Reena sabko jeebh chida ke note gini aur apni daadi ke gaal pe kiss ke - My best grandmother.....

Rama - chal chal ab nikal dair ho rahi hai tujhe aage train bhi pakadni hai.....
( Baap bada na bhaiya, sabse bada rupiya)

Dharam ne bhi reena ko 2000rs diya aur Rani ne raat me hi 10,000rs de chuki thi...... Ek bag me mithai aur namkin, lunch tiffin Rani ne diya aur sabko bye bye karti Veer ki Reena didi bhopal ke liye chali gayi Taxi me..... sab ladies ki aankhon me aasun the, Dharam bhi bhavuk ho gaya tha Choti beti ki vida se..... Veer bhi dukhi tha par woh sabko majak karte huye ander le gaya...... Humsab ke parivar me aisa hi hota hai jab parivar ka sadas bahar jaata hai toh dukh hota hai par jeevan yun hi chalta rehta hai..... ladai jhagde ek taraf parivaar ka pyaar ek taraf joh hum sabko jodke rakhta hai.

Veer tyaar ho raha tha college ke liye, Prachi ke ghar naste ke baad seedhe college jaane waala tha, Rama ne usko kaha ki woh bhi uske chote dadaji ka ghar hai tujhe pyaar se naste pe bulaye hain chala jaana..... Veer jaata rehta tha prachi ke ghar par uska bada bhai Sachin Thakur hamesha uska majak udta tha ya keh lo woh Veer se nafrat karta tha par veer uski baat pe dhayan nahi deta jitna ho sake usko avoid karta tha......

Saloni ke room me Prachi bethi thi aur usse apne kuch sawal ka jawab maang ki koshish kar rahi thi,
Prachi - Didi woh Preeti ne sach me seat book karwa li hai kya ?
Saloni ko Prachi acchi ladki lagti thi chahe uske baap ya bhai bhale hi kameene ho par woh apni maa aur daadi jaisi thi..... Reena ko bhi Prachi acchi lagti thi par Preeti se jaada nahi.

Saloni - Haan lagta toh hai par I think you should not worry about her..... bas apne carrier pe dhayan de main toh bolti hun ki law ki study karne degree ke baad...... Veer bhi bahot mehnat karta hai aur usko bhi bada aadmi banana hai uske liye ek suitable partner ki jaurat hogi joh aage chal ke uska haath tham aur kandhe se kandhe mila ke uske saath chale..... mujhe tum me ek potienal dikhkta hai par prove toh tum ko hi karna hoga ki your are the one worthy. Preeti mentally strong nahi hai uska advantage tujhe mil sakta hai...... Wait na watch ki policy apnani chahiye tujhe.

Prachi thoda confidence se - Par kitne samay, woh veer ko emotional blackmail karti rahegi.....

Saloni - Kam se kam 5-6 saal toh lagenge veer ko career banane me, uske saamne tu bhi ro degi toh tujhe bhi chup karna apna farj samajhta hai par weakness se nahi strong attitude se uska dil jeetna hoga.....

Prachi 5-6 saal ka sun kar thodi dukhi huyi - Tab tak toh Preeti veer ko apne jaal me phaisa legi..... woh puri khiski huyi hai.....

Saloni - Tere support me kyon hai teri daadi, mummy ke alwa sirf main..... Preeti ki side dekh sab uska hi naam lenge..... Tera bhai aur baap unka kya, woh toh jaise hi veer ka naam sunege toh tum dono ko hi mitane ki baat karenge...... yeh bahot bada risk hai Isliye samay ko dekhkar Veer ke liye tujhe kabil banna hoga sirf ek goal ke liye 6 saal baad dekhte hain tere liye kitna support badhta hai..... ab jaada mat soch yeh umer ilu ilu ki nahi apne ko kabil banne ke hai..... samajhi....

Baat toh sahi thi saloni didi ki, abhi saare option close the Prachi ke liye par ab woh faisla kar chuki thi ki usko Veer hi chahiye chahe sabse ladkar ya raaji se...... 18 saal umer aisi hi hoti hai hosh kam josh jaada rahta hai nujawano me......

7;30 baje Prachi scooty pe aur Veer apni bullet pe Thakur Kamur Singh ki alisan kothi Bhikampur pahunch gaya, Safed kothi ke size ki nahi thi par dekhne me usse kam bhi nahi thi......

Drawing Hall me Thakurian Madhu (daadi) aur Ragni thakur ( Chachi) dono ka wait kar rahi thi, Sachin Thakur apne alishaan gym me boxing ki practise kar raha tha, Gate ki ek guard ne usko suchna di ki Veer bhaiya aayen hain.....

Sachin nafrat se 3-4 punch apne trainer ke block pe maara - Harami ki aulad bol usko....... bhaiya kahene ki jururat nahi hai..... samjha nikal ab yahan se.....

Guard bhi dum daba ke bhaga.....
BoxingTrainer - Koi tumhara dushman hai kya yeh Veer.

Sachin haskar - Yeh keh lo bas ek paltu kutta hai veer bade thakur ji ka, sabse pehle uska hi game bajane hain mujhe ush budhe ke marne ke baad.....

Trainer - Lekin bade Thakur Shabh abhi bhi fit lagten hain..... unko marna me bahot muskil hogi.....

Sachin apne golves utar ke - Main nahi marunga par Lakhan jarur maar dega apne baap ko, wahi sahi time hoga saare dushmano ko ek saath niptane ke liye aur woh din dur nahi hai aur Trainner ka gaal thapka ke shower lene chal gaya......

Udhar subha-2 Imlidevi ne doosre mobile se Lakhan ke doosre number pe call kar diya, dono sab se chhipa ke baat karte rehte the...... Uska pati aur beti abhi so rahe the, raat bhar woh sochti rahi usko apne apman ka badla lena tha Ramadevi se aur Lakhan uski madad kar sakta tha...... kehte haina sanp ki dum pe vaar karke ghayal karo toh badla jarur lega..... Udhar Lakhan bhi bhara betha tha ki uske baap ne saara plan chopat kar diya veer ko phasne ka aur usko dur bhej diya aur ab Imli pe Rama ne poora pehra bitha diya tha..... Rajveer ko Imli control kar leti thi par kahin na kahin doosre ke ghar me haath dalna Rama ko bahari na pad jaye.....

Imli ne sab details me bata diya tha aur Lakhan ko laga ki paani sar se uper nahi unko dubo de ushse pehle usko kuch karna padega.....
Lakhan - Tu mere baap ko nahi jaanti woh agar apni pe aa gaya toh hamra ticket ish duniya se uth jayega, bas abhi mahaul shaant hone de phir usko aur uski rakheil Rama ka patta ek saath ish duniya se utha dunga yeh vada hai meri jaan......

Imli - Tu bas dheenge hankta hai, ushi din ush budhiya randi ko maar deta toh saara kissa khatam ho jata jab ussne hum dono ko pakda tha bagh ki tubewell ke kamre me..... Bas tu peet ta raha aur mujhe bhi maar khilwaya tha harami ish din ke liye.....

Lakhan ke bister pe hotel ke room me uski doosri rakheil nangi so rahi thi uske saath, uski ek choochi daba ke bola - Chitna mat meri chinal bhabhijaan ish baar pakka hai..... maine done kaate ek saath saaf kar dunga..... bas sabar ki dawa le phir sirf main aur tu aish se jiyenge..... tu bhi ush budhiya pe nigha rakh saali pakka mere baap ko seese me utar li hain..... chal ek chuma to dede meri jaan.....

Imli thoda gusse se - Abhi mood nahi hai aur umhmaaaa li awaaj mobile pe aayi..... call cut gaya......

Woh muskar diya aur apni nangi rakheil ke thaan se muh laga diya joh usse 15 saal choti thi......
Rakheil ne bola - Tu bahot harami hai Lakhan uski beti aur jawan bahu pe teri najar hai usko apne aadmion se bas dara ke kidnap karwata...... ahhhhhhh bhenchod kaat hi khayega kya ...... ahhhhhh siiiiiiiiiii......

Lakhan uski choochi chhod ke apne khada kaala 6 inch lamba lund uske muh se laga diya..... bhenchod saare nikame nikle haramkhor khud hi Roshni ki ijjat lutne lage, bas woh bach gayi ush kutte Veer ki wajah se...... ahhhhhhh chusss meriiiii jaannnn......

Lakhan maje se sharab peekar hotel me apni rakheil ko saath le aaya tha, woh ab full proof plaining karne laga tha ki dono thakur v Ramadevi ko apne raste se haate, usne ek din pehle hi Sachin se baat kar li thi ab Rama bhi list me saamil ho gayi thi..... Usko Imli me koyi intrest nahi tha haan uski kawari beti renu aur patka bahu Roshni ko chodna tha jiske liye Imlidevi kabhi raaji na hoti.....

Veer ne Prachi ki maa aur daadi ke paon chuhe dono ne usko ashirwaad diya, unko veer Sachin se jaada pyaara tha..... Sachin Thakur apne baap ki tarah nikla usko kisi ki fikar na thi...... Ragni ko lagta tha ki Veer uski beti Prachi se shaadi kar sakta hai, Prachi ki daadi Mudhu Thakurian ko bhi aisa lagta tha par woh dono apne bacchon pe faisla thopne ke paksh me nahi the..... agar dono ek doosre ko pasand karte hain toh unka ashriwad bhi unke saath tha..... Haan Prachi na sahi Preeti sahi kam se kam ek toh ish khandan ki beti Veer se shaadi kare woh yeh chahti thi...... par unko kya pata tha Veer ki kitni deewaniyan ho gayi hain yahan tak ki uski sagi daadi aur Maa bhi.....

To be continued.....

***Doston update lamba tha isliye do part me complete hoga.... next part sunday ko post karunga.....

Bechara Veer Prachi ki wajah se haar gaya aur Prachi ko daant bhi padi. Saloni ne Prachi ko sahi salah di ki Prachi ka parivaar hi Veer ko pasand nahi karta to fir shaadi to badi baat hai.

Ye Imli, Lakhan aur Sachin kuch bada hi plan kar rahe hai Bade Thakur aur Rama ko raaste se hatane ke liye., Veer abhi bhi naasamajh hai in sab baato se aur agar usne apne ko thoda chokanna nahi kiya to uske parivaar ho hi khatra hone waala hai, sabse jyada uski daadi aur maa ko, kahin apne isi bevakofi ki wajah se kuch galat naa ho jaye? Nice update.

 

[rahultheruler]

Bhai in dono me prachi ka character strong laga aur yadi in dono se bhi badh kar koi he to vah preeti ki badi bahan he.

Haan bhai Rubi Thakur aage chal ke parivaar ko lead karegi..... woh sabse damdar character hai Hero ke baad.... i agreed.

 

[rahultheruler]

Bechara Veer Prachi ki wajah se haar gaya aur Prachi ko daant bhi padi. Saloni ne Prachi ko sahi salah di ki Prachi ka parivaar hi Veer ko pasand nahi karta to fir shaadi to badi baat hai.

Ye Imli, Lakhan aur Sachin kuch bada hi plan kar rahe hai Bade Thakur aur Rama ko raaste se hatane ke liye., Veer abhi bhi naasamajh hai in sab baato se aur agar usne apne ko thoda chokanna nahi kiya to uske parivaar ho hi khatra hone waala hai, sabse jyada uski daadi aur maa ko, kahin apne isi bevakofi ki wajah se kuch galat naa ho jaye? Nice update.

Thanks bhai......
Saloni lawyer banne waali hai thoda partically baat karti hai..... Prachi asani se haar manne waali ladki nahi hai..... haan Veer khud mana kar de tab baat alag hai par woh kabhi Prachi ko mana nahi kar sakega.....
Veer ko thodi chalaki seekhni hogi aur Rubi usme master hai...... aap samajh hi gaye hoge ki main kya baat kar raha hun

 

[rahultheruler]

Sorry doston main kal update nahi de saka kuch problem ho gayi hai.....
Abhi kuch edit karna baaki hai.....
Next update kal raat ko post kar dunga.....
Dhanyawad.

 

[Ek anjaan humsafar]

aap sabka dhanyawaad, jaldi hi update dunga........

Congratulations for your new story, bro.

 

[Ek anjaan humsafar]

UPDATE 1


Yeh kahani hai VEER ki joh ek chote se gaon Sherpur me rehta tha.....
Aaj uska janamdin hai, poora 18 saal ka 6 ft se jaada ht ka gabru jawan ban gaya hai aur uski maa Rani apne bete ko gaon me bane mandir ko lejane aayi thi subha-subha.
Jab woh apne laal ,apni aankhon ke taare, Veer, ke kamre me aayi joh palang pe beshud so raha tha....

RANI ki umer 40 saal thi aur woh ati sunder hone ke saath aaj bhi jawan lagti thi,uski dono betiyan bhi uski umer ki si lagti thi.....
haan yeh baat zaroor thi woh ish gaon ki sabse sundar aurat thi jiske husn pe saare mard, kya budhe kya jawan sab latoo the.....
hamesha se saree pehti thi, gola aakar chand jaisa gora chehra, badi-badi kaali aankhein, rasbhare gulabi honth , lambe ghane kaale baal joh uske mast pichwade ke niche tak aate the jab woh choti karti thi, uski choti nagin dance karti uske bhari pichwade ko aur jaada sexy banti thi.....
figure ki baat karen toh uska size 36-28-36 tha joh uski 5ft 7 inch ki ht ko jaada madak aur jaanleva banta tha.
Malai jaisi chikni aur rangat waali uski twacha joh bedaag thi usko apsara kehna sahi hoga. Actress tabu se uski kuch kuch sakal milti thi.....

Uske pran apne bete Veer me baste the, woh apne bete ko khud ki jaan se bhi jaada pyaar karti thi.....
aur Veer ki aatma uski maa Rani ke ander basti thi, woh sabse jaada pyaar apni maa se karta tha aur uska har adesh ka palan karta tha.

Jab Rani kamre me dakhil huyi toh niwad ke bade palang ke paas jaakar apne ladle bete ko sidhi karvat lekar ek baniyan aur kacche me soya payi...... kamre me 10 watt ka bulb jal raha tha woh apne bete ko pyaar se dekh rahi thi.... uska thoda sa salwan saaf rang, halki halki dadhi, lambi naak ke niche honthon pe pyaari si muskan thi joh kuch keh rahi thi aur woh putr moh me bawli si bankar niche jhuki aur Veer ke maathe ko chumne se na khud ko rok saki...... phir bayen gaal pe aur akhiri me uske honth pe halke se kiss kar di.
Thodi piche huyi toh uske laal ki muskan bhad gayi thi, yani woh jag raga tha par usne aankhein na kholi thi......

Subha ke 5 baje the, Rani apne kamre se pati ko soya chhodkar jeena chadkar ek halke peele chint ke blouse aur kaale peticot me apne bete ke kamre me uske palang pe apne masal kuhlon ko tika ke Veer ki kamar se sata ke beth gayi.....
Jaldi hi usko ahasaas ho gaya ki uske sidhe kulhe pe apne bete ka khada vishal ling kacche ke upar se sparsh kar raha hai......
Uska dil me ajeeb si tarang uthne lagi.

Rani (apne mann me) - 'Aaj kal ish ka hathiyar hamesha kuch jaldi hi khada ho jaata hai aur dusri taraf iska baap hai joh kabhi-kabhi 1-2 mahine me theek se utha le yehi ganimat hai, mujhe apne pe kabu karna hoga yeh mera beta hai...... dil ke doosre kone se awaaj aayi toh kya huya, poora hatakata mard ban gaya hai tera yeh laal..... iska hathiyar tujhe asli sukh de sakta hai..... tu abhi jawan hai, himmat dikha aur pakad le iske musal laude ko woh aaj baligh ho gaya hai'.

Uske kann me 'aaj baligh ho gaya hai' yeh shabd kayi baar gunjne lage.....

Jitna Veer ko dekhti uski muscular body joh jawan pehlawan ki tarah thi, usko apne bete se jaada pyaar hone laga tha..... 5 min tak Veer ko niharti rehi aur apne sidhe kulhe pe ling ka sparsh uske utjeet karne laga tha.

Idhar Veer poori tarah se jaag chuka tha, woh dair raat 1 baje sone gaya tha, uske keypad waale mobile pe call aur sms ka jawab dete huye sab usko birthday wish kiye..... ab uski maa subha usko wish karne aayi thi.
Rani jab Veer ke kamre me aayi toh uske badan ki khushbu Veer ne sote-2 hi pehchan li thi ishliye uske chehre pe muskan thi..... woh adhinindra me bhi apni maa ki khushbu pehchan leta tha yahan tak ki apni dono sagi bhene aur dadiji ke bhi bandan ki khushbu.

Uski badi bhen Reena aksar usko picchle janam ka kutta bulati thi, uski teji se sunghne ki aadat ko...... sach me Veer ki naak bahot tez thi lekin apne pitaji ki sharab ki durgandh bhi woh achi tarah se 100 mt dur se janch leta tha, aaj kal woh jaada peene lage the.

Veer apni maa ki khushbu kareeb pakar utejit hone laga kuch sec me uska ling ne angadi li aur poora khada hokar sakhat kathor ho gaya tha aur jab maa uske paas bethi palang pe apne mast bhari kuhle tika ke woh poori tarah se jaagh gaya.....
Rani ko achank shararat suji aur Veer ke aur maje lene ke liye, palang pe thodi jagah bachi thi woh Veer ke aage karvat leke let gayi aur dono pair utha ke bistar ki painta pe rakh li.....
piche hokar uske khade ling pe apne dono chuttad ke bich ki khai naapwane lagi peticot ke patle kapde ke upar se, Veer ke kacche me bada tambu ban gaya tha aur uski maa uske khade akade ling se apne dono gudaj chuttadon ki dabav laga ke usse khel rahi thi.
Rani ne kacchi aur bra nahi pehni thi, woh jab ghar se bahar jaati tab bra penty pehti thi, raat me saree bhi nikal deti thi.

Veer kab tak na jaaghta, woh thoda bed pe piche khiska aur apni maa ko jagah diya taaki woh gir na jaye.....
apna ulta haath apni maa ke chikne makhmali pait pe phira ke acche se pakda aur 65 kilo ki Rani ko ulte haath ka jor laga ke apni taraf khich liya......

Iska yeh parinam hua ki uska khada vikral lund ka ubhar apni maa ke dono bhare nikle chuttudon ke bich ek dum sahi fit ho gaya......
bade bade chuttadon ki bich 9 inch lamba aur 3.5 inch ke kareeb mota musal lund, Rani ko ek baar ko dara hi diya tha lekin jaldi hi ish nayi position me adjust karti huyi woh apna sidha haath apne bete ke ulte haath pe rakh di joh ab uske chikne aur gore pet ko sehala raha tha.....
Na woh kuch bol rahi thi aur na Veer bas dono ish anokhe sukh ka maja lene lage.
Rani ne apna sar uper kiya takiye se aur Veer ne apni seedhi muscular baju uske sar ke nichi rakhi jispar woh apna sar rakh tika di.....
dono ke piar bhi ek dosre ke pass huye aise sidhi karvat liye ek dosre se chipke lete the..... dono ke jism ish position me, hawa pass bhi nahi ho rahi thi lekin dono ke dilon ko chan mil raha tha bas utejna charam pe thi......

DHARAMVEER (veer ke pitaji) ke purkhe kai sadiyon se kheti karte aa rahe the sherpur gaon me, kheti karna unka pushtani kaam tha..... phele se hi unki jameen jaada upjau thi aur inke gaon me bade Thakur ji ke baad sabse jaada jameen thi, kareeb 50 ekad (acres). Iske alawa 7 acre ka aam ka bada bagh bhi tha joh 2 km dur nadi ke kinare tha mukh chak se.
Sabse badi baat jab gaon me chakbandi aayi 1980 me, unki jameen ghati nahi 1990 ke baad paidawar jaada hone lagi aur parivaar me khushali aayi. Dharamveer ke pitaji ,Sohanveer, ka dehant 2008 me ho gaya tha tab Veer 4 saal ka tha, sab unka samman karte the dil se unko aaj bhi yaad karte the..... Bade Thakur ji aur Sohanveer (Veer ke dadaji) aache dost the aur saath me pehalwani karte the......
Dharamveer ki mehat rang la rahi thi, kehti ki amadani se usne aur jaada jameen khreed li uske alawa kasbe me 2 pakke makan aur sehar me ek 300 gaj ka plot bhi khreed liya tha.
Uski tarakki kisi ki aankhon me khatak rahi thi par woh kuch nahi kar sakta tha jab tak bade thakur ji zinda the.

Aaj Veer ka janamdin tha ishliye apne khandaan ke eklaute chirag ko Dharamveer ne ek sawari dene ka mann bana liya tha apni maa ke kehne par, BULLET Royal Enfield motor cycle joh 1 mahine pehle book kar di thi par delivery aaj milegi...... yeh surprise usko aaj milega, vaise uska ek hi toh ladka tha, betiyaan toh praya dhan hoti hain shaadi karke vida kar dena hain.
Rani, Maa aur main hi toh reh jayenge ish naye makkan me, ab sirf Veer ko hi sab sambhalna hain, usko mujhse bada kisan banna hoga par woh kahan janta tha ki Veer ek din fauj join karega.
Veer ki dadi usko bahot bada neta banana chahti thi, maa usko pilot, bhene doctor aur lawyar banna chahti thi par kon janta tha uske mustaqbil me kya likha tha.

Year 2022, 22nd March (Veer ka birthday)

Aaj subha dono maa bete karvat liye aage piche se jude hone ka maja le rahe the, Rani ko yeh ling ki chubhan kitni acchi lag rahi thi jaise uske pass shabd nahi the ish pal ka varnan karne ke liye......
wahi uska mann keh raha tha yeh galat hai, yeh mera saga beta hai, yeh paap hai ......
uske dil ki pukar balwati ho gayi - par mujhe kyon lag raha hai ki abhi hum apni had mein hi hain......
lekin 1 min baad ab jaada ho raha tha rani ki utejna tirva ho gayi jab woh aage piche apna pichwada ko Veer ke musal laude pe ghisne lagi......

Veer ne apni aankhein poori tarah se kholi aur uski nazar apni maa ki sundar gardan pe gayi..... uske ghane lambe kaale baal jiska woh juda me bandh li thi, peele colour ka blouse me unki sexy pith ko dekhkar woh aage hokar gardan pe ek chumban ankit kar diya ..... puchhhh

Ishhhhh..... aaaahhhhhh..... pehli baar Rani ki siski nikli......

Apni gardan ghuma ke boli - Mere gaal ko kyon chumega...... kya main inti budhiya ho gayi hun ki tu meri gardan pe kiss kiya? ...... trichi nazaron se dekhte huye yeh sawal daagi ......

Veer muskura ke apni maa ke gaal ke kareeb gaya aur uske tamtar ki rangat jaise sundar left gaal pe kiss kar diya ..... puchhhhh

'GOOD MORNING maa, tu meri maa hai joh kabhi budhiya nahi hogi, tu ish jahan ki sabse acchi aur pyaari maa hai..... dil karta hai ki main tujhe saare din raat kiss karta rahun.... ek baar aur uske left gaal pe kiss kar diya.... puchhhhh .....
Rani bahot khush huyi aur apne bete ka pyaar dekhkar phuli na samai lekin uska mood dosra tha.....

Rani apne bete ko chedne lagi - Lagta hai teri shaadi karni padegi, kaise khunta gaade mujhe daboch rakha hai kahin main bhag na jaun..... haa haa haa haa..... main nahi patne waali, apni biwi ko pyaar dena yeh sab..... haa haa haa ......

Veer ka chehra dekha joh thoda murjha gaya tha, apni majak rok ke boli joh veer sunna chahta tha.....

'HAPPY BIRTHDAY mere Veer, jamandin ki bahot mubarakbad' aur sar utha ke Veer ke honthon ko apne labon se chusne lagi ..... muhhhh..... umhhhhh.... mmmmmmm..... 10 sec baad Veer se alag huyi..... uski saanse aur dhadkan badh gayi thi aur Veer ka dil jaise tript ho gaya ho......
aksar woh akele me jaada laad karke apne bete ke lip pe kiss kar deti thi par aaj pehli martaba woh smooching ki ...... shayad maa-bete ka pyaar dilojaan se jaada ghera tha......

'THANK YOU Maa...... '

Veer kuch hichak ke piche hone laga tab Rani ne uske chuttad pe haath rakha - 'Aisa hi reh mujhe accha lag raha hai' ...... apni jibh daanton se daba ke apna chehra ek haath se chipakar gardan ghuma li...... ki yeh main kya bol gayi, usko apne kaano pe vishwas nahi huya..... shayad utejit hokar galti se bol gayi......

Veer apni maa ki halat samajh gaya aur pyaar se bola - Tu meri maa hai, tujhe poora hak hai mujhpe..... main toh aaj bhi tera chota sa veer hun jab tu mujhe pyaar se doodh pilati thi, tu hi meri guru hai tu hi palanhaar..... main tujhse bahot pyaar karta hun bas mujhe tere anchal ki chaav me hamesha rehna hain ..... maa i luv you aur uske left kaan pe kiss kar diya uski sharam mitne ke liye.....

Veer - Isse pehle koyi aaye main darwaja bandh kar deta hun aur Rani se alag hokar palang se niche utara, uska lund kacche me bada sa tambu bane huye tha usko jaate huye woh dekh rahi thi..... kiwad bandh karke kundi laga diya aur bulb bhi off kar diya..... andhre me aage badhke woh apni padhne waali mej ke pass gaya aur night lamp on kar diya..... Lamp ko jaada jhuka diya taaki kamre me halki si light aati rahe aur kisi ko pata nahi chale koi bhi darwaja ke paas aa jaye toh......

Rani jaanti thi ki Veer ab kya karega, usko bas apni saas (Ramadevi) ka thoda dar tha......
woh kitni baar bol chuki thi tera beta jawan ho gaya hai ab toh usko choochi pilana bandh kar de par aaj bhi matritva ke moh se aur apne bete se alag nahi hona chahti thi, aksar woh apne jawan ho gaye bete ko stanpan kar deti thi....

yeh baat Dharaveer ko bhi pata thi lekin woh maa bete ke bich me nahi aana chahta tha, uski wajah woh Rani ke rudr roop se darta tha. Rani jaisi pativarta aurat usko ish janam me nahi milegi, uske bahar ki 3 auratein se bhi sambhand the isliye bhi darta tha ki woh poori pol khol degi.
Lekin woh apne bete se bahot pyaar karta tha isliye bhi chup reh jaata tha..... maa hi toh hai Rani Veer ki, thoda doodh pila degi toh kya burai hai..... kisi ko pata na chale itna kafi hai mere liye varna maa bhi rani ki side legi....

RAMADEVI - Joh roj subha tadke 4:30 baje uth jaati thi, pehle apne bhagwan aur gurudev ka smaran karti, phir nityakram se farigh hokar snan handpump ke pass bethkar karti aur apni pooja karti apne kamre me bane chote se mandir me.
Ramadevi kathor swabhav ki nidar aurat thi, woh rasookh khandaan se thi jahan uske makye me baap angrejo ki fauj me afsar the, bhai bada neta tha aur bhatija minster ban gaya hai.....
Lagbhag 6 ft ki aurat woh thoda mardan si lagti thi bhari bharkam, poori hatikati aurat 3-4 aadmiyon pe bhari padegi, wajan bhi 100 kilo ke aaspas tha..... ish umer me gajab ki furti thi uska rasookh saare gaon me tha....
par uski bhi ek kamjori thi uska pote ,Veer, jispar apni jaan bhi nichwar kar de itna pyaar karti thi.
Veer ki ht apni dadi se 1 inch jaada thi isliye woh usko takatwar neta banana chahti thi aur state ka CM.

Veer ki do sagi badi bhen thi .......

(1) SALONI - Jitni khubsurat thi usse jaada dimagh ki dhani thi, age 22 saal, law ki degree complete hone waali thi, bas result ka wait kar rahi thi.... ht 5ft 6 inch , gori jaise aasma ka chand ho, fig 34-26-34, seher ke law college me thi, uska boyfriend ek bade neta ka beta tha naam ROHAN tha uska classmate tha, sab ladkiyan usse darti aur irsha karti thi par saare ladke uske husn ke aashiq the..... woh apne chote bhai Veer se sabse jaada pyaar karti thi, hamesha uske liye gift lati thi aur jab gaon me rukti toh sabse jaada uske saath time bitati thi.

(2) REENA - Ek no. ki Veer ki dushman thi, poora rob jhadti thi apne chote bhai pe..... age 21 yrs.
ht 5ft 8 inch, boycut baal rakhti thi, sunder bahot thi aur uske gaal me dimple padte the jisse uski smile bahot pyari thi, hamesha Veer ko danat ti rehti thi..... BDS pass kar gayi thi, Dentist ke course me internship kar rahi thi Bhopal city se, uska boyfriend mbbs karke medicine me PG kar raha tha bhopal se, naam Anshul tha.

end.....

next update will come soon......

Update posted on page no 5
pls comments on the update .....

Mast update tha, Bhai.

 

[Ek anjaan humsafar]

Update 4

( Pyaar, dosti aur dushmani)

Veer jabse hosh sambhala hai uska inh kuch shabdon se khaas lagav hai..... kushti, akhada, barhmand, army, politics,pyaar ....etc.... etc..... jaise kuch khaas nata jud gaya tha..... 7 saal ki umer me woh apni umer se bade bacchon ko kushti me hara deta tha, shayad apne dada ki tarah kusti uske khoon me thi. Bade thakur ji ne Ramadevi ko kaha tha ish bacche me apne dada se jaada gunn hai poora phelwan banne ke, dekhna kusti me Sohanveer ka naam roshan karega..... Rama, thakur ji ki baat hasi me uda di , isko main neta banungi.
Jab veer 14 saal ka ho gaya tab bhi thakur ji ne Rama aur Dharam ko sujaav diya, yeh ladka 18 saal ke goan ke phelwano ko dhul chata deta hai, veer ko peshawar kusti ladni chahiye yeh ladka bahot aage jayega..... isko ek accha sa trainer chahiye jitne paisa lagenge main kharcha uthunga bas isko phelwani karne do.... phir wohi baat aayi ki veer ko uski maa apne se alag nahi karna chahti joh akhade me seekhta hai wohi kafi hai, isliye toh veer ko rani gaon ke school me daali hai aur 12vi tak woh school me hi padhega waise bhi woh apni class me aaj tak 1 aata raha hai, yeh Ramadevi ka tarak tha jabki woh apne mayeke waalon ki tarah veer ko neta banana chahti thi, kusti me kya rakha hai, veer ka dimagh bhi tez hai jab 21 saal ka ho jayega main usko apne bhatije ke paas lagwa dungi, woh minister hai aur rahega chahe govt kisi ki bhi ish party ki ya vipakshi party ki.

Wahin Dharam ka yeh kehna tha mera toh ek hi beta hai, dono ladkiyan ish kabil banayi hain woh dosre ghar jakar apni gharshti acche se sambhal le- ek vakil hai aur doosri doctor hai..... kaash mere do bete hote ek ko sirf phelwan banta, veer hamri budhepe ki lathi banega..... itni zameen hai aaram se kheti karke kaam khaage..... uski maa rani uske bin ek din bhi nahi reh sakti woh khatiya pakad legi ya apni jaan de degi agar kisi ne uske bete ko usse dur kiya, uski dono bheno ke pran usme baste haim woh kaise uske bina jeeyegi..... na na thakur shabh main haath jodta hun humko veer se alag mat karo hum sab uske bina mar jayege..... aur rote huye wahan se apne khet pe chala gaya apni maa aur bade thakur ji ko chhodkar.

Rani apne bete ko pilot banna chahti thi jab gradution ho jaaye, uska ek hi sapna tha ki ek din veer aur main aeroplane me udh rahein ho.... Saloni didi usko apni tarah lawyer banna chahti aur Reena didi doctor hai woh, dentist ka course join ki thi unko aaj bhi malal tha woh mbbs nahi kar pai bas 2 number kam rah gaye unke. Waise toh sab chahte the ki veer unhi muskurta, khush rahe aur kamyab insan banye..... aaj bhi veer apni jindgi me khush tha aur apne parivaar ko bahot pyaar aur care karta tha lekin uski zindgi badalne waali thi inhi kuchi mahino me.....

Ab aage.....

Veer apni maa aur daadi ke saath nange pairon paidal gaon paar karte huye shiv mandir ke paas phauchga ..... mandir aur gaonon ki tarah jaise aam mandir the, na itna bada na itna chota, haan paas me dhaksin disha se ek choti nadi bheti thi aur mandir ki purvi disha me ek ghana, mota v vishal bargad ka prachin ped tha jiski jataayen dur tak phaili thi kuch gaon ke log kehte hain 200 saal se yeh ped yahan hai aur shivling ki raksha kar raha hai..... mandir bade thakur ki pitaji ne banwaya tha..... isliye sab thakutji ka mandir bhi kehte the bolchal me, haan pandit jaroo thakur ji ka pandit hota tha, kabhi kisi ko rok tok nahi thi mandir jaane ke liye, sab jati aur dharam ke log shubh kaam se pehle shankar bhagwaan ka naam lete the..... ish gaon me shanti aur miljul ke log rahte the.....

Lekin padosi gaon joh 5 km dur tha woh bhi bade thakur ji ka gaon tha yani Thakur ji ke 2 gaon me unka hi raaj chalta tha, ek Bhikampur aur dosra Sherpur joh veer ka gaon tha. Bhikampur size me 5 guna jaada tha ek bada gaon tha jiski abadi karib 12 hazar thi aur sherpur ki abadi keval 2500 thi. Politics aur varchasv ki ladai har din kheli jaati thi, maar pitai, chori daketi loot maar yeh aam si baat thi Bhikampur me aur dosri taraf sherpur tha koyi chori bhi karta pakda gaya itni maar lagti thi ki seedha chala bhi na jaye ush chor se. 5 km ka fasla zameen aasman ka sa tha mahoul me..... wajah sharab ke theke. Bhikampur me 5 sharab ke theke the aur Sherpur me ek bhi nahi...... India ke gaonon me jis gaon me sharab ka theka khul gaya woh gaon jarur barbad ho gaya ya ho jaata hai dheere-2.

वैधानिक चेतावनी = Sharab peena hanikarak hai, sharab peene se liver aur cancer ho sakta hai.

Joh gaon waale raste me Veer ko milte woh usko janamdin ki badhai dete aur Ramadevi se ramram karte..... kuch 3-4 auratein bhi joh umer Rani se choti thi unhone Rani ko namaste ki Rama ko ramram aur Veer ko badhai di..... karan Rani ne ghoonghat kiya huya tha.

Jab woh log mandir ke kareeb phauch gaye, Veer ne apni daadi se pucha - Kya mera janamdin sab ko yaad hai yeh baat toh mujhe pata hi nahi thi, dono auratein hasne lagi. Woh bhi Veer ko chane ke jhaad pe chada di.....

Rama - Mera ek hi sundar aur honhar pota hai, log uska janamdin kaise bhul sakte hain.

Rani apna ghoonghat thoda uper ki - Ab toh internet ka jaman hai, har ek ke pas smart mobile hai sivay tere, sabko pata chal jaata hai ki kiska birthday hai screen par message apne aap aa jata hai.

Veer - Theek hai main smart phone le lunga, daadi ne paise bhi de diye hain, ab toh khush ho na Mata.

Rani jhat se - Reena ne mehanga mobile tere liye gift me khareed liya hai, chahe toh maaji waale paise Reena ko de dena bichari bahot mehanga mobile gift kar rahi teri birthday pe.

Veer ke paas key-pad wala mobile tha, didi ke used laptop pe dongal se internet use karta tha, usne 18th birthday par bol diya tha tab smart phone lunga......

Rama - Reena ko main aur paise de dungi tu paise apne pas rakh.

Veer - main itne rupee ka kya karunga, pitaji ne bhi toh diye hain mujhe.

Rani - Main rakh lungi bas ab kuch mat bol, baap ki tarah tu bhi jaada kanjoos banta jaa raha hai.

Veer aur Rama hasne the Rani ki baat sunkar, mandir ki seedhiyon ke paas phauch gaye the...... 3-4 mangne waale bhikari bhi mandir ki niche ki seedhiyon pe bethe unko dekhar ramram kar rahe the..... Veer ke haath me badi si plastic bag me 5 dibbe the meethai ke.... Rama ke haath me mala aur phoolon ki tokri thi. Rani ke haath me puja ki thali ka saaman tha kayi cheez ek bag me thi.

Teeno mandir ki niche ki seedhi par matha take aur karib 18 seedhiyan upar chad ke prangan me aa gaye..... 10-12 bakhat log ke alawa do sundar jawan ladkiyan bhi mandir ke andar dikhi jihnone suit salwar phena tha..... woh pujari ji se baat kar rahi thi, Veer ne dono ko dekhe bhi liya tha aur aachi tarah se phechan bhi liya tha, usne itni jorse mandir ka ghanta bajaya tannnnnn ki awaaj dur sunai di aur sab dekhne lage uski taraf..... itni jaan toh Veer ke haathon me hi ho sakti hai ...... pujariji haath jod ke unke sawagt me aaye jaise unhi ka intzaar kar rahe the sab ne unko namasty ki aur veer ne pair chuhe..... Rani ne ghoonghat mandir ki seedhi chadte huye sar pe le liya tha..... uski hasi nahi ruk rahi thi dono ladkiyon ko mandir me dekhkar..... wahin Ramadevi bhi Veer ko dekhkar muskara rahi thi..... wahin Veer aisa dikhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki woh kitna bada bhakat ho shivji ka..... woh wakai me bholenath ka bhakat tha.

Dono ladkiyon ke chehre pe smile rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi...... dono kitni khush thi Veer ko yahan mandir me dekhkar woh main bhi nahi bata sakta par ek baat hai dono ka close connection hai Veer se..... panditji ne saara saaman le liya unke haathon se aur mandir ke ander chale gaye.....

Ek ladki joh doosri se 2 inch choti thi Rama aur Rani ke gale mili aur aur joh lambi thi usne pair chuhye dono ke, dono ne usko gale laga ke kaan me kuch kaha toh uske gaal jaada laal ho gaye.....

Ab suspence bahot ho gaya aap logon ko bata hi deta hun, jish ladki ne pair nahi chuhe woh Veer ke paas aayi aur boli - Happy Birthday Veer..... iska naam Rubi Thakur tha aur joh malai jaisi goori, ht 5ft 9 inch, kathai badi badi aankhon waali aur model jaisi patli kamar uska naam Peeti tha Rubi ki choti sagi bhen. Ji haan doston heroine aa gayi hai joh chahe karo..... matlab tareefan.

Preeti dekh toh veer ko rahi thi aur baat Rani se kar rahi thi, Rama panditji ke saath chali gayi thi...... sab jaante the ki yeh dono Bade Thakur ji ki potiyan hai joh sirf Veer ke liye aayi thi, Rani ne Preeti ko phone pe bata diya tha Veer ke saath main mandir jaungi kal subha..... par yeh nahi kaha tha tum bhi tapak jaana jaise apni saas ko formalty dekhane ke liye bulai thi woh mere veer ke picche mandir tak aa gayi aur inh dono ko sharam nahi aati mere bete pe dore daalein aa gayi. ( yeh rani dil hi dil me soch rahi thi)

Veer - Thanks Rubi, mandir me dekhkar tumko accha laga. ( veer rubi ko tu ya tum hi kehta tha jabki woh 3 saal badi thi)

Rubi - (haskar) Yeh maharani ji layi hai mujhe, warna tum toh mere nature jante ho aur aankh maar di.... hi hi hi..... Preeti tujhe veer ko wish nahi karna kya?

Preeti pyaar se sweet tone boli - Janamdin ki dharon shubhkamnaye Karam.
( Preeti veer ko karam hi bulati thi bachpan se )

Veer - Bahot bahot dhanyawad, maa chalo pujari ji kya sochenge...... aur mandir ke ander chala gaya.....

Rani - Cold war abhi bhi jaari hai, kyun Rubi ?

Rubi majak me boli - Aunty lad kar hi toh pyaar pakka hota hai.... haa haa haa....

Preeti thoda sakpaka si gayi yeh sunkar apne mann me sochi main didi ko kyun leke aayi yeh kitni muhfat hain main yeh bhul gayi thi..... Rani bhi Rubi ko ghoor ke dekhi tab Rubi me jawab diya - Itna shock mat hoye auntyji main toh apni baat kar rahi thi, maine aapko bataya tha ki main veer se pyaar karti hoon aap meri baaton pe vishwas nahi kari thi, waise bhi aapka ladka kis ko ghas nahi dalta ..... haa haa haa..... samjahne waale samajh gaye the ki rubi kiski baat kar rahi hai.

Rani - Aaj hi toh 18 saal ka huya hai mere veer, 3 saal aur tujhe rukna hoga phir sochungi tu mere bete ke layak hai ki nahi agar naa kar du toh dil pe na lagna. ( yeh baat rani ne preeti ko dekhkar kahi thi ) Usko paata tha puch kon raha hai aur jawab kisko dena hai.....

Rubi - Main wait kar lungi, bas aap mujhe veer ke liye pasand kar lo main aapke charan dho dho ke piyongi, aapke saare din pair dabaungi ......

Preeti jhat se Rubi ke muh pe haath raki - Maa yeh didi majak kar rahi hai, aap ko maaji bula rahi hain...... ( Preeti bhi rani ko maa bulati thi veer ki tarah)

Rubi, preeti ka haath hat kar boli - Aunty main serious hun.....

Rani haskar - Jaanti hun kyon serious hai aur kyon nahi..... aur mandir me jaane lagi phir palat ke boli Preeti tum log bhi puja me saamil ho sakti ho koyi manahi nahi hai, bhagwan sabki sunte hai..... yeh kehkar muskara di.....

Dono khush hokar puja me veer, uski maa aur daadi ke saath samlit huyi, ek taraf veer ke rani bethi doosri taraf preeti, panditji saamne bathe aur pandit ji ke right-left Daadi aur Rubi...... yeh intzaam riswat dekar rubi ne karwa tha pandit ko chetawni dekar poore 2,000 rs ..... agar kisi ke saamne juban kholi toh tu zinda toh rahega par mouh nahi khol payega kunki main teri jaban kaat dungi, samajha kuch...... main kiski poti hun yeh mat bhulna....

Bheema Thakur jinko sab bade thakur ji ke naam se sambhodit karte the unka rutba kayi zilon me tha.

(***Bade Thakur ji ka poora details next kuch update me aayega, abhi story pe focus karte hain varna story ka flow kuch aur direction me chal jayega )

Rubi se sab darte the woh hamesha pistol lekar ghumti thi, kafi muhfat thi....... pandit toh kaapne laga jab uski dhamki suni...... Law college me 3rd year ki student thi..... Veer ki badi bhen Saloni University college me thi, Rubi apne district ke law college me padhti thi, padhti toh khaak thi bas gunda gardi karti thi law college me..... dada aur baap ka naam kafi tha, aache aache badmasho ladkon ki halat kharb kar di thi ish akeli ladki ne, isse koyi panga nahi leta tha, seedha rape aur murder attemped ka charge lagati thi akhir law ki knowlege isko kafi jaada thi..... hamesha jeens shirt pehanti thi, Preeti ne bahot request ki suit salwar me mandir jaana hai didi warna kya impression padega mera.

Preeti chor nazar se veer ko dekhti puja karte huye uska lagta tha koyi nahi dekh raha hai par sab ki preeti pe nazar thi yahan tak ki panditji ki bhi, ek toh thakur ki dushmani bahot bhari padegi aur dosra Rubi ka dar tha woh joh kehti hai woh kar bhi deti hai. Teeno jaanti thi ki Preeti Veer se bahot pyaar karti hai par Veer ko samjha nahi paayi hai aur Veer bhi jaanta tha ki Preeti uski acchi dost hai uski woh bahot care aur help bhi karta tha par pyaar sirf apni maa Rani se karta hai, uski zindgi me uski maa sab kuch thi.... Maa jisse kahegi usi ladki se shaadi karega.

Rubi madam ke dar se panditji ne jaldi hi puja ki saari vidhi se purn ki aur Rani ne 500 rupee dakshina di, aur Veer ne panditji ke pair chuhye phir apni daadi aur maa ka ashriwad liya pair chuhkar.....

Rubi uske kaan me boli - mere pair bhi chu le itni aachi ladki ne tujhe pasand kiya hai.

Veer uske kaan me - ish sadu ladki ko kyun laayi tu, mujhe phir paka degi aur ek hi baat bol kar..... rubi veer ko khoni maari - sudhar jaa.....

Huya yeh ki Veer aur Preeti ki acchi jamti thi bachpan se dono dost the lekin dusri ladki ne entry maar di inki dosti me, uska naam Prachi Thakur tha woh bhi 18 saal 4 mahine ki thi yaani teeno humumer the lekin preeti aur prachi ki nahi jamti thi balki dono ke khandan me goliyan chal chuki hai kayi aadmi aur auraten maare jaa chuke hain dono ek hi haveli se belong karti hain aur ek hi ladke se pyaar karti hain. Veer ki dosti sabse thi kya ladki ya ladka par agar koyi ladki direct bol de uske mouh pe I love you toh patli gali se nikal leta aur palat ke uski taraf nahi dekhta tha..... chahe sab uska yeh attitude kehlo ya apne pe ghamad usko ghanta farak nahi padta tha par yeh baat sach thi jiski maa, dono badi bhen, uski daadi, uski bua ji saari thakurian itna pyaar karti ho toh koyi sarfira hoga ek ladki ke pyaar me sab ka pyaar thukara de..... sabki choice se direct shaadi karunga, mujhe pyaar vaar me nahi padna abhi toh 18 saal ka hi hun bahot padhai kareni hai, pyaar karne ke liye sirf meri maa hi kaafi hai.

Rubi Thakur aur Preeti Thakur

Lekin preeti uski bachpan ki dost thi 12 saal ki umer me woh shimla chali gayi boarding school me, wahan se 12th paas kiya aur corona mahabimari ki wajah se aur uski iccha se 1 saal pehle veer ke college me admission li Veer usko aur uski dosti ko nahi bhula tha phir se dosti ho gayi par veer ne uska pyaar accept nahi kiya 93 days se koyi baat nahi ki par acchank aaj subha apni badi gundi bhen ko lekar mandir tak aagayi thi aur veer ko wish bhi ki, shayad sudhar gayi ho..... par veer ko laga ki woh kuch nahi bhuli uski aankhein bahot kuch keh gayi thi.

Prachi Thakur kuch aisi si dikhti hai......


Prachi Thakur uski life me 11th class me aayi, dono ki jaldi dosti ho gayi, Veer class ka topper tha, handsome aur caring tha..... dono best friend ban gaye the...... tabse dosti hai. Woh doosre collage me yani sehar me chali gayi par chuttion me Veer ke saath time bitati usne abhi tak I love you nahi bola lekin aaj woh bhi usko bolna chahti hai shayad veer usko samajhe aur haan kar de...... Woh subha 7 baje veer ke ghar phauch gayi usko Dharamveer mila usne bola aadhe gante me aa jayege beta tum tv dekh lo tab tak...... Sheru bhi prachi ko jaanta tha isliye shaant betha tha.

Yudh ki ghani sambhavna hai jab Prachi aur Preeti ka aamna-saamna hoga....... tab veer kya karega yeh dekhne layak hoga....

The end.

Osm update tha Bhai

 

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Update 21

( Mummy ne chai pe bulya hai)


Subha 6:30 baje akhade me kusti ka mukabla ho raha tha, 8 phelwan ek ke baad ek Veer se haarte jaa rahe the woh aaj alag hi josh me tha, mulable ek taraf lag raha tha jab 9ve phelwan se veer apni sidhi jaangh pe thapki de kar bola - Aaja Jitu (phelwan ka naam) kab tak chhupa rahe gaya.....

Jitu usse 1 saal bada tha body bhi uski tagdi thi par woh veer jitna phurtila nahi tha isliye aaj tak usse harta aa raha tha, dono langot me haathon me panje fasa ke ek doosre ko jhuki de rahe the..... Jitu ko laga ki Veer thak gaya hoga itne phelwanon ko chit karke par nahi usne ek daav chala, jaise hi Jitu ka haath miti se chuha Veer iska faiyada lekar uski kamar pe dono haathon ka fanda laga ke usko gira diya......

Tabhi akhade me ek jawan khubsurat ladki aayi aur Coach, joh dur se dekh rahe the, se puchi Veer kahan hai.....

'Yeh toh prachi hai'....... jab veer ne sar utha ke dekha toh Prachi ek shorts aur sleeve less tops me usko dekhkar Hi boli......

Prachi....

Veer ka dhayan ek baar chuka aur jiska phaidya Jitu ne utha ke uski pakad se ulta ghum ke Veer ko piche patak diya aur teji se uska ek kandha niche laga diya, Veer bhi doosre kandhe ko loose chhod diya yeh soch kar beta aaj tu jeet le......

Veer ke chit hote hi sab phelwanon ne rahat ki saans li aur seeti maari ke taali baja ke bole ..... Veer ko hara diya Jitu ne...... sab Jitu ko utha liye aur Veer bhi jhat se khada hokar..... "Haan bhai main haar gaya"..... aur jaldi se kisi ka toliya apni kamar pe lapeta phir Prachi ke paas chala gay.....

Veer - Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai aur uska haath pakad ke akhade ke bahar le gaya, sab Prachi aur Veer ko hi dekh rahe the..... gate ke bahar Prachi ki scooty khadi thi.

Veer thoda gusse me - Tu yahan kyun aayi ?

Prachi ko laga ki veer usko dekhkar khush hoga par nahi woh toh ushpe hi naraaj ho gaya..... Kal raat ko Ragni Thakur ( Prachi ki mummy) ne usse bola ki teri daadi ne aur maine veer ko kal subha ke naste pe bulaya hai, tu ek kaam kar apni scooty lekar veer ke ghar chali jaana aur khud uski daadi se hamre yahan naste pe invitation de dena maine unse baat kar li hai unko koyi problem nahi bas formality ke tu veer ko bulane chali jaana...... Prachi ki khusi ka thikna na raha woh ati utsahit hokar main subha hi chali jaungi, shaam ko mujhe hostel bhi jaana.
Prachi ko kya sujhi ki veer ke ghar na jaa ke woh akhade me chali gayi apne lover ko milne aur doosre phelwanon ko jaalane....

Prachi - Agar meri wajah se haar gaye toh I am sorry..... main tumhe daadi ka invitation dene aayi thi, mummy ne tumhe subha naste pe bulya hai.....

Veer - Tu scooty lekar ghar jaa main tujhse wahi milta hun...... aur akhade me chala gaya.

Prachi ko veer ka attitude samajh nahi aaya isliye key laga ke scooty self start ki aur Veer ke makan pe chali gayi.....

Woh saare raste yehi soch rahi thi ki veer ne usse kitni berukhi se baat ki joh usne aaj tak nahi ki thi, shayad veer ko preeti ne patta liya..... nahin nahin woh toh aadhi pagal ladki hai mera veer aisa nahi kar sakta...... Preeti chahe lakh koshish kar le par veer ki jeevan saathi sirf main hi banugi..... bachpan ki dosti ka galat phaida utha rahi hai preeti mujhe Saloni didi se baat karni hogi.

Scooty makan ke ander laga ke woh palti hi thi ki sheru uspe ek baar bhonk ke uske pass aane laga par gale me patta tha..... Prachi muskar ke - Ale ale ..... mere sheru ko kya huya ? scooty se ek biscuit ka packet nikali aur uske pass jakar uske sar aur gardan pe haath pherne lagi..... sheru ko bhi Prachi acchi lagti thi woh hamesha uske liye dog biscuit aur snacks lekar aati thi aaj bhi laayi thi, maalik ko patana hai toh uske kutte ya noukar se dosti karo.....
Prachi aur sheru ki dosti veer ne hi karai thi, usko dog jaada pasand nahi the par veer ke saath sheru ki care karne lagi jab bhi aati uska special bond ban gaya tha ki sheru ke saath, jaanvar bhi pyaar ka bhookha hota hai aur Prachi wahi kar rahi thi sheru ke saath usko biscuit bhi khila rahi thi, usse khel bhi rahi thi.....

Kitchen se Rani aur bethak ke doosre gate joh khula huya tha Ramadevi ladoo bandh rahi thi v Prachi ko dekh kar khush bhi ho rahi thi yeh soch kar aa gayi meri doosri veer ki dulhaniya...... haan usko dimaagh me nayi nayi khichdi paak rahi hi thi..... " Preeti uski pehle number ki bahu thi, ab Prachi doosri aur Padmani bhi secret biwi banegi mere veer ki jab woh uski kokh me beej daalega".....

Rani kitchen se bahar aakar Prachi ko awaaj di toh woh boli - Aati hun aunty pehle mere bacche sheru ko pyaar kar lunn..... arre mera baby.....

Rani haskar - Main toh yeh remind kar rahi hun ki parson hi tere ish baby ne 5 gundon ko kaat kaat ke unko behosh kar diya tha...... Tu sambhal kar reh isko jaada laad dekhne ki koshish mat kar...... haahaahaa

Prachi ne ek baar sheru ko dekha woh araam se biscuit khaa raha tha, usko kuch bol kar Rani ke paas aayi - Namste aunty aur uske paon chuhi..... rani usko utha ke gale lagi..... " Arre !!! betiyan paon nahi chuhti, humko paap lagega specially unmarried ho toh"......

Prachi bhi sharam ke - Bas mann kiya maa...... kya main aapko maa keh sakti hun aunty ki jagah.....

Rani uska maatha chum ke - Maine tujhe kabhi parya nahi samajha, joh mann karke woh keh ke sambodhit kar......

Rama ki bethak se awaaj aayi - Bas Rani ko Phupi mat kehna chaha daadi , naani , tai etc etc etc bol le..... haahaahaa.....
Rani ko chodkar Prachi bethak me jaakar Rama ko dekhi joh ek piddhi pe beth kar ek badi paraat me dono haathon se desi ghee ke ladoo ban rahi thi woh bhi mote mote, uske haathon me jaadu tha jish ko haath laga de woh chiz jaada swaadisht ban jaati thi..... sach me Rama devi annapurna ka ek roop thi.....

Niche bethkar Daadi ke piar chuhi - Bhagwan tujhe sabse gunwaan aur balshali Var de..... sada khush reh meri bacchi.....

Prachi khush hoti huyi - Daadi ladoo bana rahi ho kitni aachi smell aa rahi hai, wow veer ke liye ban rahi ho mujhe bhi dena aapke haathon ke ladoo mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai..... Rama ke gale lag gayi.....

Joh khawab dekhe the Prachi ne woh aisa lag rahe the ki jaldi poore honge, baat toh sahi thi ki prachi ko sab pasand karte the aur woh preeti se woh kam sundar nahi thi, prefect matching pair tha uska veer ke saath sab jaante the par preference Preeti thi jisko Prachi bilkul pasand nahi karti thi..... Jaise mahabharat me kaaran ko arjun pasand nahi tha ushi tarah Prachi aur Preeti ek doosre ki ghor pratidwandi the joh veer ke birthday waale din sabko nazaar aa rahe the..... Jab preeti ne veer ke face pe lage cake saaf karne ke bahane kiss kiya tha wahi prachi ne apne rumal se veer ka face saaf kiya tha...... ish baat pe behas hone lagi toh Ramadevi ne dono daanta tha..... tum dono bhene ho yeh kabhi nahi bhulna.

Rama haskar - Sab ke liye bana rahi hun bas veer ke alag hain usme garam cheezen daali hain.

Prachi - Woh toh kaafi garmi kha raha tha mujhse, agar jaada garmi chad gayi toh jaada gussa karega..... woh serious tone me boli....

Reena aur Saloni nichhe bethak me aa gayi aur Reena ke haath me packed trolly suitcase tha woh tyaar hokar aayi thi.....
Reena - Kisko garmi chadi hai uski abhi utar dungi naam bata Prachi uska.....

Saloni uske kandhe par maar ke aankhein dikhayi - Woh chotu ki baat kar rahi hai..... tu bhi na hamesha tash me rehti hai...... Veer se milkar aayi hai na prachi par woh toh abhi akhade me hoga......

Prachi dono didi ke gale mili aur boli - Maine socha ki Veer ko daadi ka nimantarn de dun isliye usse milne chali gayi par woh mujhse bahot rudely baat kiya aur mujhe bahar ka rasta dikha diya..... uski aankhon me aasun aa gaye last sentence bolte huye.....

Rani uske paas jaakar - Arre meri bacchi ko usne rulya hai usko aane do main uski taang todkar usko ghar ke bahar nikal dungi..... rote nahi tu toh sabse samajhdar beti hai na..... uske aansun phonch ke gale laga li.....

Baaki teeno hasne lagi ki maa veer ko daantegi yeh sirf sapnon me ho sakta hai na ki hakikat me.....
Rama - Yeh toh hona hi tha, veer kya kar raha tha akhadhe me ?

Prachi - Woh kusti haar gaya tha.

Rani chaunk ke - Veer haar hi nahi sakta, main nahi maanti.

Rama - Agar yeh chadi aur baniyan me sab mardon ke saamne jayegi woh gussa nahi hoga toh iski aarti utarega.....

Saloni - Veer ko prachi ki dress se nahi joh mardon ki aankhon me hawash najar aati hai usse problem hai, tum suit salwar pehn ke jaati toh woh gussa nahi hota, kya koyi doosri ladki bhi thi wahan.

Prachi ab baat ki gambheerta ko samajhi aur naa me mudi hila di - Bas main akeli gayi thi....

Reena maje leti huyi - Itni chikni gori taangein dekhkar sab akhadhe me tujhe dekh kar laar tapka rahen honge, ek toh yeh ashriwarya jaisi sunder hai dusre iske baal bilkul ishki sundarta pe char chand lagte hai..... kabhi kabhi toh mera bhi mann karta hai ki kash mein ladka hoti aur Prachi meri girlfriend..... hiihiiihiii..... Veer tujhe apni girlfriend ki tarah toh nahi daant raha tha..... haahaahaa.....

Prachi apni tareef sunkar aur jaada sharmane lagi..... nahi nahi aisa nahi hai.....

Reena - Lagi reha kabhi toh Mohan milege, vaise Preeti advanced book karwa li hai......

Saloni - Chup ho jaa mata..... kabse kuch bhi baake jaa rahi hai, Prachi tu tension na le chotu ka gussa jaada dair nahi tikta woh jab aayega tab yeh baat bhi bhul jayega...... maa kuch khane ko de aur teri taxi kab aayegi Reena.....
Rani apne saath Prachi ko Kitchen me le gayi......
Rama sabki baat sun rahi thi aur apna kaam pe bhi focus kar rahi thi........

(***Doston ek baat main aapko clear kar dun ki aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Veer hamse jeet hi jaata tha kusti me woh kayi baar usse jaada skill waale phelwano se haar bhi jaata tha par uski ek khasiyat yeh thi woh bhi apne Coach ki tarah jaldi hi samne waale ki kamjori jaldi pahchan jaata tha aur wahi galti nahi karta tha usko haarane me......)

Veer jab wapas aaya akhade me toh sabse pehle Jitu ko badhai diya haath mila ke......

Coach - Jitu ko 251 rs ka inaam milta hai yeh main ghosna karta hun..... sab jitu jitu karne lage..... unhone sab ki shant karwaya aur bole.....
" Karamveer pe 100 rs ka jurma lagata hun " ...... sab apas me khusur pusur karne lage......

Veer bhi Coach ke paas jaakar - Sir main 100 rs kahan se launga, 100 rs badi rakam hai.....
( Doston kusti me inaam aur dand rakam se nahi akante bas haar jeet ki baat hoti hai, dand kisi bhi phelwan ko saja hi lagti hai )

Coach - Dhayan bhatakne se tum gir toh gaye the par tumne koyi jor nahi lagya ya keh lo khud har gaye..... isliye fine aur warning di hai warna main phelwanon ko kya saja deta hun yeh bhi tum acchi tarah jaante ho.

Veer bhi khamosh ho gaya, woh sar jhuka ke changing room me chala gaya aur kapde lekar hauz ke paas aakar nahne laga..... 4 ladke bhi nahane lage aur baaki practise karne lage.....
4 ladkon me Jitu bhi tha woh bola - Yaar maine toh bas ek mouka dekha toh tujhe chit kar diya par coach shabh ko yeh nahi karna chahiye tha.....

Ghanshyam - Veer 100 rupee fine bahot badi rakam hoti hai 5 rs jeet ke score ke milte hain, lagta hai coach shabh tujhe koyi badi kusti me utarne waale hain.....

Shakib - Arre Veer ko harna muskil nahi namumkin hai agar yeh jeetne ki thaan le....

Raju - Bhai kuch bhi kehlo bhabhi ki taange bahot chikni hai bilkul rasmalai jaisi..... hiihiihiii.......

Veer ek dum uski baat sunkar hauz me uski gardan pakad ke uska muh apni dono jhaangon me biche ke dubne laga..... woh bas jhatpata raha tha par veer haskar - Saale woh meri acchi dost hai aur agar teri baat Sachin ya Raghav thakur ne sun li toh teri ghar me koyi aurat kya mard bhi pehle sabka rape hota phir maar jaate.....

Jitu haskar - Bhenchod ka muh hamesha laudiya dekhkar khul hi jaata hai, jhaant ke pisu pehle soch toh le jaban kholne se..... Veer susura mar na jaaye.....

Veer - Shakib iske haath pakad saala meri jaanghein chil diya hai..... bhenchod 2 min aise hi reh varna hum sab teri sukhi gaand bina tel laga ke marenge..... haahaahaa......

Ghanshyam - Abbe veer mar jaagega haramkhor....... chhod de yaar, yeh saala landi kuttiya ki mafik hai.....

Veer ne usko chhod toh woh khulu khuluuu karta hauz ki diwar pe chadke khaste huye saans le raha tha..... 4on hasne lage......

Raju ki halat aisi ho gayi thi ki Shakib uski gaand sehla raha tha paani ke ander se, Veer ko pata nahi thi dekhne me Raju kuch jaada chikne phelwan ki tarah tha, ht bhi normal thi aur body bhi halki thi baaki ke mukable lekin ek number ka harami tha comments karne aur ladkiyon pe phabtiyan kasne me koyi kami nahi karta tha, veer usko acchi tarah se jaanta tha ki yeh kabhi nahi sudherga.....

Saans lekar woh Shakib aur Ghanshyam se bhid gaya..... Phir coach shabh ne sabko daanta......

Veer akhade se jab ghar phoucha toh ek taxi gate pe khadi thi, usko pata tha Reena didi ne bulai hogi.....
Sab bethak me mil gaye tab Saloni boli - Lo Veer bhi aa gaya aur kusti haar ke aata, Reena jaane waali thi.....

Veer ne kisi ki taraf dhayan nahi diya seedha apni choti didi Reene ke gale mila, woh bhi Veer ke gale lagi thodi se bhavuk ho gayi thi - Chotu sabka dhayan rakhna tu ab bada ho gaya hai...... uske dono gaalon ko chumiyon se bhar di...... phir se gale lagke boli - Ab jaane de varna main kuch din aur ruk jaungi.... haahaahaa.....

Veer apni didi ka maatha chuma - Didi ghar aapka hai jabtak mann kare ruk jaana vaise bhi aap time ki bahot paband hain so main nahi rokta aapko.....
Trolly suitcase lekar aur Reena ka college bag lekar bahar chala gaya......

Reena - Daadi ji 2500 rs taxi ka kirya hai, woh dena hai advance me.....

Dharam ke saath sab hasne lage, Rama bhi muskara ke apne room me chali gayi.....
Saloni - Kya baat hai Daadiji woh budhiya aaj kahan gayi ?

Reena chaplusi karti huyi - Meri pyaari daadi hain, main unko kuch bhi bolaun aapko kya ?

Dharam bhi veer ko dekhne chal gaya bahar, Rama ne 5000rs diye - Yeh le 5000 hain, dhayan se jaana aur sambhal ke kharach karna.....

Reena sabko jeebh chida ke note gini aur apni daadi ke gaal pe kiss ke - My best grandmother.....

Rama - chal chal ab nikal dair ho rahi hai tujhe aage train bhi pakadni hai.....
( Baap bada na bhaiya, sabse bada rupiya)

Dharam ne bhi reena ko 2000rs diya aur Rani ne raat me hi 10,000rs de chuki thi...... Ek bag me mithai aur namkin, lunch tiffin Rani ne diya aur sabko bye bye karti Veer ki Reena didi bhopal ke liye chali gayi Taxi me..... sab ladies ki aankhon me aasun the, Dharam bhi bhavuk ho gaya tha Choti beti ki vida se..... Veer bhi dukhi tha par woh sabko majak karte huye ander le gaya...... Humsab ke parivar me aisa hi hota hai jab parivar ka sadas bahar jaata hai toh dukh hota hai par jeevan yun hi chalta rehta hai..... ladai jhagde ek taraf parivaar ka pyaar ek taraf joh hum sabko jodke rakhta hai.

Veer tyaar ho raha tha college ke liye, Prachi ke ghar naste ke baad seedhe college jaane waala tha, Rama ne usko kaha ki woh bhi uske chote dadaji ka ghar hai tujhe pyaar se naste pe bulaye hain chala jaana..... Veer jaata rehta tha prachi ke ghar par uska bada bhai Sachin Thakur hamesha uska majak udta tha ya keh lo woh Veer se nafrat karta tha par veer uski baat pe dhayan nahi deta jitna ho sake usko avoid karta tha......

Saloni ke room me Prachi bethi thi aur usse apne kuch sawal ka jawab maang ki koshish kar rahi thi,
Prachi - Didi woh Preeti ne sach me seat book karwa li hai kya ?
Saloni ko Prachi acchi ladki lagti thi chahe uske baap ya bhai bhale hi kameene ho par woh apni maa aur daadi jaisi thi..... Reena ko bhi Prachi acchi lagti thi par Preeti se jaada nahi.

Saloni - Haan lagta toh hai par I think you should not worry about her..... bas apne carrier pe dhayan de main toh bolti hun ki law ki study karne degree ke baad...... Veer bhi bahot mehnat karta hai aur usko bhi bada aadmi banana hai uske liye ek suitable partner ki jaurat hogi joh aage chal ke uska haath tham aur kandhe se kandhe mila ke uske saath chale..... mujhe tum me ek potienal dikhkta hai par prove toh tum ko hi karna hoga ki your are the one worthy. Preeti mentally strong nahi hai uska advantage tujhe mil sakta hai...... Wait na watch ki policy apnani chahiye tujhe.

Prachi thoda confidence se - Par kitne samay, woh veer ko emotional blackmail karti rahegi.....

Saloni - Kam se kam 5-6 saal toh lagenge veer ko career banane me, uske saamne tu bhi ro degi toh tujhe bhi chup karna apna farj samajhta hai par weakness se nahi strong attitude se uska dil jeetna hoga.....

Prachi 5-6 saal ka sun kar thodi dukhi huyi - Tab tak toh Preeti veer ko apne jaal me phaisa legi..... woh puri khiski huyi hai.....

Saloni - Tere support me kyon hai teri daadi, mummy ke alwa sirf main..... Preeti ki side dekh sab uska hi naam lenge..... Tera bhai aur baap unka kya, woh toh jaise hi veer ka naam sunege toh tum dono ko hi mitane ki baat karenge...... yeh bahot bada risk hai Isliye samay ko dekhkar Veer ke liye tujhe kabil banna hoga sirf ek goal ke liye 6 saal baad dekhte hain tere liye kitna support badhta hai..... ab jaada mat soch yeh umer ilu ilu ki nahi apne ko kabil banne ke hai..... samajhi....

Baat toh sahi thi saloni didi ki, abhi saare option close the Prachi ke liye par ab woh faisla kar chuki thi ki usko Veer hi chahiye chahe sabse ladkar ya raaji se...... 18 saal umer aisi hi hoti hai hosh kam josh jaada rahta hai nujawano me......

7;30 baje Prachi scooty pe aur Veer apni bullet pe Thakur Kamur Singh ki alisan kothi Bhikampur pahunch gaya, Safed kothi ke size ki nahi thi par dekhne me usse kam bhi nahi thi......

Drawing Hall me Thakurian Madhu (daadi) aur Ragni thakur ( Chachi) dono ka wait kar rahi thi, Sachin Thakur apne alishaan gym me boxing ki practise kar raha tha, Gate ki ek guard ne usko suchna di ki Veer bhaiya aayen hain.....

Sachin nafrat se 3-4 punch apne trainer ke block pe maara - Harami ki aulad bol usko....... bhaiya kahene ki jururat nahi hai..... samjha nikal ab yahan se.....

Guard bhi dum daba ke bhaga.....
BoxingTrainer - Koi tumhara dushman hai kya yeh Veer.

Sachin haskar - Yeh keh lo bas ek paltu kutta hai veer bade thakur ji ka, sabse pehle uska hi game bajane hain mujhe ush budhe ke marne ke baad.....

Trainer - Lekin bade Thakur Shabh abhi bhi fit lagten hain..... unko marna me bahot muskil hogi.....

Sachin apne golves utar ke - Main nahi marunga par Lakhan jarur maar dega apne baap ko, wahi sahi time hoga saare dushmano ko ek saath niptane ke liye aur woh din dur nahi hai aur Trainner ka gaal thapka ke shower lene chal gaya......

Udhar subha-2 Imlidevi ne doosre mobile se Lakhan ke doosre number pe call kar diya, dono sab se chhipa ke baat karte rehte the...... Uska pati aur beti abhi so rahe the, raat bhar woh sochti rahi usko apne apman ka badla lena tha Ramadevi se aur Lakhan uski madad kar sakta tha...... kehte haina sanp ki dum pe vaar karke ghayal karo toh badla jarur lega..... Udhar Lakhan bhi bhara betha tha ki uske baap ne saara plan chopat kar diya veer ko phasne ka aur usko dur bhej diya aur ab Imli pe Rama ne poora pehra bitha diya tha..... Rajveer ko Imli control kar leti thi par kahin na kahin doosre ke ghar me haath dalna Rama ko bahari na pad jaye.....

Imli ne sab details me bata diya tha aur Lakhan ko laga ki paani sar se uper nahi unko dubo de ushse pehle usko kuch karna padega.....
Lakhan - Tu mere baap ko nahi jaanti woh agar apni pe aa gaya toh hamra ticket ish duniya se uth jayega, bas abhi mahaul shaant hone de phir usko aur uski rakheil Rama ka patta ek saath ish duniya se utha dunga yeh vada hai meri jaan......

Imli - Tu bas dheenge hankta hai, ushi din ush budhiya randi ko maar deta toh saara kissa khatam ho jata jab ussne hum dono ko pakda tha bagh ki tubewell ke kamre me..... Bas tu peet ta raha aur mujhe bhi maar khilwaya tha harami ish din ke liye.....

Lakhan ke bister pe hotel ke room me uski doosri rakheil nangi so rahi thi uske saath, uski ek choochi daba ke bola - Chitna mat meri chinal bhabhijaan ish baar pakka hai..... maine done kaate ek saath saaf kar dunga..... bas sabar ki dawa le phir sirf main aur tu aish se jiyenge..... tu bhi ush budhiya pe nigha rakh saali pakka mere baap ko seese me utar li hain..... chal ek chuma to dede meri jaan.....

Imli thoda gusse se - Abhi mood nahi hai aur umhmaaaa li awaaj mobile pe aayi..... call cut gaya......

Woh muskar diya aur apni nangi rakheil ke thaan se muh laga diya joh usse 15 saal choti thi......
Rakheil ne bola - Tu bahot harami hai Lakhan uski beti aur jawan bahu pe teri najar hai usko apne aadmion se bas dara ke kidnap karwata...... ahhhhhhh bhenchod kaat hi khayega kya ...... ahhhhhh siiiiiiiiiii......

Lakhan uski choochi chhod ke apne khada kaala 6 inch lamba lund uske muh se laga diya..... bhenchod saare nikame nikle haramkhor khud hi Roshni ki ijjat lutne lage, bas woh bach gayi ush kutte Veer ki wajah se...... ahhhhhhh chusss meriiiii jaannnn......

Lakhan maje se sharab peekar hotel me apni rakheil ko saath le aaya tha, woh ab full proof plaining karne laga tha ki dono thakur v Ramadevi ko apne raste se haate, usne ek din pehle hi Sachin se baat kar li thi ab Rama bhi list me saamil ho gayi thi..... Usko Imli me koyi intrest nahi tha haan uski kawari beti renu aur patka bahu Roshni ko chodna tha jiske liye Imlidevi kabhi raaji na hoti.....

Veer ne Prachi ki maa aur daadi ke paon chuhe dono ne usko ashirwaad diya, unko veer Sachin se jaada pyaara tha..... Sachin Thakur apne baap ki tarah nikla usko kisi ki fikar na thi...... Ragni ko lagta tha ki Veer uski beti Prachi se shaadi kar sakta hai, Prachi ki daadi Mudhu Thakurian ko bhi aisa lagta tha par woh dono apne bacchon pe faisla thopne ke paksh me nahi the..... agar dono ek doosre ko pasand karte hain toh unka ashriwad bhi unke saath tha..... Haan Prachi na sahi Preeti sahi kam se kam ek toh ish khandan ki beti Veer se shaadi kare woh yeh chahti thi...... par unko kya pata tha Veer ki kitni deewaniyan ho gayi hain yahan tak ki uski sagi daadi aur Maa bhi.....

To be continued.....

***Doston update lamba tha isliye do part me complete hoga.... next part sunday ko post karunga.....

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[Pardeep Singh meena]

Bhai mast majedar lavely update bhai waiting for next update bro

 

[Ek anjaan humsafar]

Maja aagaya. Waah Bhai, Dil Kush Kar diya