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I had a hard time posting pictures.Starting hui thi Veer and team ki Natalia se milne jaane ki... Uske baad Divya ke saath teasing and kiss.Fir Nat se again meet up
Nat ne thanks bhi keh diya Veer ko...
Uske baad Divya ka veer ke sath amount share karna... And then the date with Suhana
my god!!! Kitne beautiful moments the woh. Those pictures...Uffff!!!
Now that you've mentioned it. Yeah it might be true.Look at the way Veer looks at SuhanaIt's so cute and adorable. Never knew Veer was soooo hot
I think it's the first time we are seeing Veer. Ab mere mind me yahi image rehne waali h...
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Juhi ko kese bhul sakte hai?Nooooooooo
Ye line... It made me so emotional. Main ye bhul hi gayi thi... Juhi ko promise kiya tha Veer ne... Aapko abhi bhi yaad tha? Who does that??Upar se... He said meri juhi
Veer acknowledged her as his own. Noooo!!! My heart!!
I controlled myself here.
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Everything was going smooth. Par fir aapko toh twist lana tha na...
suddenly we see a guy with no information. 16 enemies... Veer running away... Car chase... Gun shots... Trapped... Veer fighting against the goons.
and then... Suhana getting shot.Nooooooo!!!
Yes! Suhana really loves Sonu a lot.And this broke me... Why you have to do me like that???Uski dusri maang bhi apni behan k liye hi thi... The fact that Suhana always thought of her sister first just makes me so emotional... Aatish k time pe bhi... Slogan k time pe bhi.. Suhana was always there for Sonia as her shadow. Sonia ko toh pata bhi nahi h ki Suhana ne kese usse ab tak bacha k rakha hua h... And even at this time..
She's asking Veer to always look for her younger sis...The selfless love she has for Sonu...
Pehle updates padh toh le nadaanThis part too ...
the fact tgat her body moved by its own... Of course it will... Veer already became an important figure in her heart... She realised it later now ... Aur ab wo iss condition me h ...
main bata rahi hu... Suhana ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.... Itna build up sirf usse maarne k liye?? Noooooo my heart cannot take it...
if something happened to her... Main bata rahi hu... Aapki kherr nhi fir ..![]()
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and the last part which fucked all our minds ... Veer is not the only one to have a system...what is going on????? I'm totally mind blown... That part gave me creeps... Total goosebumps... Par uske pehle Suhana ... Save her please....
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I'm always cool!
Usse kuch bhi nhi hona chahiye...![]()
Thanks man!Bahut hi super duper story hai bhai. Aap toh jaante hai site ki top story kaun sab thi usme v joh padhne ka nasha hota hai woh nhi hota tha, kabhi kabhi mai khud bore ho jata padhte padhte break Lena padta tha.
But aapki story it's just mind uda dena wala aisa hai. No boring no break i read it in just 36 hr( means one and half day).
But Nat toh celeb hai.Nat ne jo ishara kiya tha last mein kahin vo isi baare mein to nahi tha ???
Suhana jinda rahegi lekin ab favourability jyada ho jayegi veer ke prati aisa lagta hai …. Attracted to thi hi ab baawli ho jayegi. You know shadishuda attracts more unka koi saani nahi hota
Thanks a lot man. Keep supporting!Yeh update as always super duper hai. others jitne updates the woh v Kamal the.
Now, I am literally becoming a huge fan of yours and your writing skills and ofcourse this story also.
Thank you.
Jinhe samajh hai unhe samajh aa gaya man. Tabhi toh haha react kiya hai logo ne.Dekho baat ko mat ghumao yrr
Ek hai to saala
Jayada hai to saale
Or hamare yaha saale or saalo dono hi bola jata hai
Mai koi aap se bahas nhi kar raha hu ho sakta hai aap saalo kuch or kahna chahte ho
Barbaad seconds Mai
Thanks!Unexpected
Next level
mind blowing
Suspense
Unable to wait for next update!!!!
Waah waah waah... Dekh rahe ho guys.Aisa hi hai....es thread ki eklauti JAGMAG JAGMAG ladki aap hi ho... Werewolf bhai bro aap ke kahne se elephanttak ban jaye ! Update dena to mamuli cheej hai.
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Ye aage pata lagega man. Thanks!Bro this update is mind blowing I m very excited to know ki ye naya banda hai kon
System kisne banaya aur sabse important hero ke pass ye kaise gaya aur kyu
System se related dherro raaz hai bhaaya. Jese jese raaz aaenge hume system ke baare me acche se jaan'ne ko milta jaega. Btw thanks a lot man!Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...
Akhir kar veer ko house of killer arc k sare villan se thodi shanti mili thi or thoda quality time spend karne ko mila suhana or Divya k sath per Divya ko kaam tha isliye suhana k sath shopping kari or raat m dinner bhi kiya lekin sab kuch shanti se ho jaye ye kaha hota h Werewolf bhai ki story m is time bhi wahi hua veer k piche 12 14 Enemy pad gaye or is bich jab veer 2 enemy se lad raha tha tab piche se 1 Enemy fire karne wala tha veer pe per suhana bich m aa gaye or usse bullet lag gaye us time jesa scene likha tha Werewolf bhai ne mujhe laga suhana ka chapter over ho jayega ab (abhi bhi uski life danger me he) or last me wo person bhi aa gaya jab veer hotel ki balcony m khada suhana ka intezaar kar raha tha or ek person usse ghur k ja raha tha or uske wo word mujhe bhi hila k rakh diya "System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!" matlab ye h ki yahi h veer ka or is story k main villan or iske is word k hisab se iske pass bhi ek system h...
Mujhe laga tha system shirf ek h pure world me wo bhi veer k pas lekin me galat tha wo hotel wale person k pass bhi system h isiliye jab veer ne usko check kiya tha to no information bata raha tha system...
System k bhi do use hote h just like human koye acha to koye bura system bhi kuch isi prakar ka h system jiske pass h agar wo uska sahi istemaal kare to wo logo k dil pe raaz kar sakta h or koye uska galat istemaal kar logo ka dil thodta h...
Abhi toh ju ne dekha hi nahi kuch.Haa.. yaad aagaya Bhai kidar kidar ka tukda jod rahe ho lagta aur puzzle baki he reveal hone ki
Profit path ne path diya tha. Veer ne usser follow kia toh usse 4 crores ka fayda hua.Why system gave this order? Anyway Veer only gains here also.
Jarur kisi aur ladki se " Ilu Ilu " karne lage hai wo...abb aap naam chose kijiye ..mohar main laga dunga.
Ladke bhi bahut dhokhebaaz hote hain... Werewolf ek aur hi sahi.![]()
Thanks man!SYSTEM SIRF TUMHARAY PASS NHI HAY ......
the coldest moment for veer that he is not the only one. DAAAAAMNNNN tooo good bhai too good amazing love it. Waiting for the next.
Itna zorr se lag gaya kya jhatka?प्रभु
इस अनुच्छेद मे इतने झटके दिये है आप ने की विरले ही लोग उबर पाये हैं,
और जो पाठकगण हैं जिन्होंने अपनी प्रतिक्रिया दी है वो भी तो कम नहीं हैं,
कभी कभी कुछ लोग अपनी भावनाएँ शब्दों के माध्यम से व्यक्त नहीं कर पाते और आप तो इतने अच्छे लेखक हैं तो ये भी भलीभाँति जानते होंगे कि भावनाएँ भी ज्वार-भाटे के समान ही होती है,
कभी उनका अस्तर ऊचाईयों की तरफ होता हैं तो कभी ढलान की तरफ
और
जब तक आप अगला अनुच्छेद देंगे तब तक तो पता नहीं कितनी ही प्रतिक्रिया और भावनायें देखने को मिलेगी
Woh sab toh theek hai, par tab tak aap ka kya hoga?Seed jab tak treehoga tab tak aap kahi grand father na ban jao
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Thanks a lot! Keep supporting!Damnit how is it possible its totally shocking nd thrilling. Ye tu locha hogaya Werewolf bhai. How is it possible. Ab kua hoga or kesey veer os ky sath deal kry gaa. Or sugana ka kia baney ga. Kia wo bachey gi yaa ...... I m totally stuck after reading this update. Saab khuch axha chal rha tha phr ek daam sy villan baan kr agaya wo bhi system rakhny wala. Ohhhh man.
Aisa mein karta hu.Inki aisi ki taisi mere dimag ka santulan bigad diya aapne, aisa kon karta hai bhai itna bda twist, itna bda shock, suhana ko hi shoot karva diye, system akela nhi hai usko hunt karne ke liye hunter hai jinhone aise logo ko chuse kiya hai Jo nakaratmak pristbhumi se ho... :bang
Harr baar pappi karne ke liye hi nahi bolega.Divya ko chumne se aadha paisa mil gya, ye system ke nye feature ke to bade hi Jabardast mazedar parinam hai...
Dhanyavaad bhaaya! Bullet ricoch ho gayi thi. Ricochet toh jaante hi honge aap. Kabhi kabhi bullets jab kisi angle par jaake kisi behad those cheez se bhidti hai toh woh uske andar ghusne ki bajaye apni disha badal leti hai. Yaani ek prakaar se reflect ho jaati hai. Suhana ko ussi ke chalte bullet galti se lag gayi. Wese woh bullet kisi ko nahi lagti. Uss aadmi ka aim hi bekaar tha. Suhana agar nikalti nahi toh bullet kahi aur hi jaa rahi thi. But sadly... Uss bechaari ko pata thodi hi tha ye.Suhana ne jo veer ke bare me feel kiya hai vo care se Bahut jyada aage ka hai, veer ne apni taraf se dinner karvaya Pr uske baad jo turn or twist diye ho bhaya oye hoye hoye maza aa gya padh kr, vo villan ya jo bhi hai usne kya scary vibe di hai bhaya mere to rongte khade ho gye... Sabse shocking moment to vo tha jb veer ne pari se check karne kaha or uski info hi nhi nikla, veer ko yah pta bhi nhi tha ki suhana ke bare me dushman ko jankari hai Ya nhi pr suhana ko yha chhodna khatre se khali nhi tha, or hua bhi vhi, gadiyo ka unko pichha karna saboot tha, veer ne suhana ko chhupane ki Kosis ki pr suhana ne jb dekha ki veer pr goliya Chalne vali hai to khud Bich me aa gyi or natija ek goli pith pe lagi, aapne yha kya describe kiya hai awesome hai bhai...
kya picture dali hai Vo Nat ka isara Karna jaan hi le gyi...
Gaand bhi toh kitni ghisni padi.Mehnat dikhti hai bhai,
To Isiliye Siraj Bhai ne vo 15-20 alag se image upload karne vali site ka link bheja tha Aapko... Man is effort ke liye![]()
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Pata nhi yaar aap ke updates se mtlb haiJinhe samajh hai unhe samajh aa gaya man. Tabhi toh haha react kiya hai logo ne.![]()
Use shayad doubt hua ho ki Veer uski pahchan nikaal lega shayad isiliye Veer ko marwane ka try kiya lekin bich mein favours ke chakkar mein Suhana bhabhi aa gayiBut Nat toh celeb hai.You mean She's trying to kill Veer?
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