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Koi baat nahi bhaaya.First of all really really sorry bro ki itne lambe time se silent reader bn kr hi read krke like tk aa gaya tha actually kafi busy ho gya tha dusri stories finish krne or Ghar ka kaam khatam krne Mai pr sach Mai Apki updates mast ja rhi hai words kam padh jate hai tarif ke liye bhi
Pari ko bas ek mission aur chahiye aur woh level up ho jaegi.first of all jabse veer ne las Vegas Mai pair rakha divya ne tease kr kr ke uski leni deni kr rakhi thi fir drug mafia then Nightwalker Or ab ye gandu pitcher pr veer ne bhi Bakhubhi apni powers or pari ki support se sab handle krta rha or sabko unke julmo ke hisaab se saza bhi dilata aa rha hai or pitcher ko to marna hi tha akhir kamina haseenao ko to marta hi tha pr Fred ko mara Pehle or ab veer ko dhokhe se marna chahta tha pr apni jaan se hi hath dho betha pr pitcher se Pehle divya Apni chut veer ke lode ke hatho kho bethi or ab apna dil bhi or Shayad sath Mai miss suhana bhi pr kya hi tabadtod chudai kiya veer divya ki wo bhi usi ke bed pr alag 2 position or style Mai or pitcher ko jiska sabse jyada ghumaan tha usi Ko weapon bna kr veer ne usko nark log ki sewa pr bhej diya ab dekhna hai veer ke liye or Kitne missions wait kr rhe or pari kab grow up kregi next lvl pr or kab tez pahunch payegi Apne Bhai ke pass or kya Bhai behan mil kr khod payenge pure gadhe hue murde or raaz
I know ki Veer ke maal par koyi aur haath saaf nahi kar paayega..Veer claimed Suman and Aabha. Even Niharika. They belonged to other men. But have we seen a sex scene where these three did the deed with other males after Veer claimed them?![]()
Kisi aur writer se kehna ye baat.. Ro dega bechara.Compare it with the other recent updates.![]()
Village arc aur famiglia arc dono chalenge. Village wala dheere dheere aaega.Khair mai review jyada bada nhi dunga aaj normal hi rahega
Ab aate hai tej par jo veer ki bahen hai ussne kuch to socha hai veer ke liye and saayad wo jald hi wo saare raj khol hi legi yaa to apni maa bhavna se yaa to pata lagakr par I think ye sab hame VILLAGE ARC me dekhne ko milega aur jo tej ko sapna aaya veer ko lekr wo feel to tha hi ek bhai ke prati lagaav nhi pyar tha wo jo bohot jyada tha aakhir wo apne bhai se mili nhi hai utne saalo se boleto kabhi bhi nhi mili haa anjaan ban ke mile the wo baat alag hai
It's infatuation. Sexual Attraction. Not love!!!Ab aate hai divya ke scenes par to wo alag sa tha boleto aisa ki ab divya bohot hi jyada aattract hai veer se ab wo attraction dil me jagah bana raha hai to lajmi hai ki veer ke prati uske dil me ek aisa corner ban chuka hai jo jald hi ek alag hi jaam par chadhega
But ek yaha question tha ki veer ko Mike pahle hi Jakr bathroom check kr ke bahar kyu nhi nikala why ?? I think ye nik ka kia dhara tha ki veer ne jaher kha liya hai to mar jaega issliye ussne unhe ye na bataya but ye bhi ho sakta hai ki ye sab sirf itefaq ho mera ??
To divya ko jo baate veer ne batayi container se lekr bahar hall wali baate kaise sab jhut tha bas ek baat sacch thi wo Secret practice wali
Aur idhar veer gussa bhi tha aakhir ho bhi kyu na veer Mr bhi sakta tha agar ussne wo one time skill nhi kharidi hoti time rahte to
And ab aate Hai dark web par to uske baare me to sab yaha jaante ho ge ki wo hota kya hai aur ussi se veer ke baare me ppata chala aur hame ye bhi ki NIGHTWALKER ke mansion photage log enjoy krte the waha ke murders aur gore scenes aur yaha bhi wahi hota tha aur ye sab photage dark web par upload hote the
Khair ab aate secrete practice par to wo mere khyalaat se bhi uppar ka nnikla gajab mtlab maine socha hi nhi tha poison se hi related kuch Khair yaha to pitcher ki maut poison se hi ho gayi jisse wo apne aap ko cure smmjhta tha wahi uske death ka karan bana......yaha ye kahawat fit baithegi ....ki jo dusre ke liyye gadha khodta hai wo khud ek din uss gadhe me girta hai.... Aur ye yaha fit baithi bhi aakhir wo poison se logo ki jaan leta tha aur aaj ussi poison ne uski jaan le li aur ye sab hua kiske karan obviously apne veer ke kaaran usne hi to uss wine ke bottle me poison ki matra badha di aur wahi poison ki matra badhne ke kaaran pitcher ki death hui aakhir wo low amount poison se cure tha na ki jyada amount se
Yahi pe toh ju galat ho.Ab aate hai veer ke uss jhut pr jispar divya ne wiswas kiya aur department ne bhi ektrah se haa apan unn vaardaat ke baare me hi bol raha hu jaise ki wo container wala jhut aur wo blood color wala jhut bc unlogo ne biswas kaise kr liya are lawde se kiya hai bhosdika unlogo ne are bhai jara common sense bhi to hai isme yaar ki ek baat batao utne logo ke bich me jaha sabki nigahe veer par thi waha veer poison ko container me kaise ugallta how ?? Bc majak hai kya itna to common sense tha ki divya ne uspar dout kiya aur tab veer ne fir bhola ki mai lucky tha are lawde ka lucky tha bahenchod sabki nigahe matlab adhe se jyada ki nigahe to uspar hi thi boleto pitcher ke admi yaa kaho to khud wo fir how ?? Ab iss baat par bhi divya maan gayi chalo koi n ye bhi thik lekin lekin poison chalo ugala muh se veer ne lekin kuch poison elements to gaye honge n uske muh me aur fir body ke ander ye lajmi hai yaar lekin nhi yaha to divya madam ne yaha par bhi dimag nhi lagaya......aur sab scene mast dikhaya ju ne wo blood color wala bhi......
Veer time to time system ko explore karta rehta hai. Usse itna pata tha ki aisi skills shop me maujood hai jo poison cure kar sakti hai. Par usse harr ek ke naam nahi pata the. Isliye usne aisa kaha, "find me a skill which can cure this poison." Kyuki usse naam nahi pata the.But but but I think divya ko bhi dout hai in sab baato par aakhir uuski wo smjh me kuch nhi aaraha tha par usse bhi dout hoga hi akhir detective ka dimag hai itni jaldi !!
Ab idhar ek baat apan ne notice ki.....
★ "Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available" ye notification jab aayi to apan smjh gaya tha ki veer ne uss poison ko check kiya hai(system se) obviously aur fir uss poison ka cure dhunda hoga slot me par ju ne ye baat mention nhi ki.....kya ye sahi tha ??......and ek aur baat ye line jo veer ne khud kahi
"Find me a skill which can cure this poison "
Aur ye line ne khud confirm kar diya ki wo poison ko veer ne check kiya tha uska name tha "Sylvia's Venom" ..... that's it !!
You will find this in the next update.abhi ek aur baat akhir kisne yaha pitcher yaa party me ye baat ko leak kiya ki ye party me aane wala veer hai obviously koi aisa banda jo NIGHTWALKER se pahle bhi tha issabme aur I think ye department se to koi ho nhi sakta hai lekin agar hota bhi hai to veer ne pahle bhi to may be check kiya hi hoga lekin ju ne mentioned nhi kiya may be this possible lekin agar aisa nhi hai to kon ho sakta hai aage pata chalega dekhte hai and I think issi se related kuch jhatka ju ham log ko dene wale ho agle Update 108 me Am I right Werewolf ??
Suhana's build is personally one of my favourites. She now considers Veer as her equal friend.Khair ab aate Hai suhana par to uski to puri personality hi change ho gayi hai yaar matlab literally wo kya thi aur ab wo veer ke prati kya ho gayi hai matlab yaar uski do personality hai ek gusse aur bacho wali to ek bussiness minded and normal like and abhi to jaise wo veer ke prati bohot jyada lagaav me aachuki hai just like ki uske dil me ek alag hi jagah ban chuki hai divya ke jaise lekin sayad uss se bhi uppar ab Suhana pahle jaisi na rahi ab wo veer ko dil se manne lagi hai haa iss pyaar wyaar nhi kah sakte abhi bilkul nhi jo log ye para padh ke to yahi smjhne lagte hai ki she is in love are lawde ka love hai wo abhi wo love na hai wo attraction se bohot uppar hai lekin abhi love se bohot niche bhi.....ye emotion jo suhana ke dikhe last me wo the uski dil ki emotion the na ki pyaarhaa aaage dekhenge ye kaha tak jaata hai !!
Ju 100% confirmed ho?ab yaha ek aur baat maine notice ki wo thi ki jab suhana ko khyaal aaya ki veer uska patti nhi hai isse saaf matlab hai ki jo baat last me kahi veer ne ki
"aap kuch chupa rahi hai miss suhana" iss se to saaf saaf pata chal gaya apan ko ki Suhana really me jo baat chupa rahi hai wo hai apne pati se related kuch baat and jab suhana veer ko gale lagi hui thi iss se to saaf hai ki wo bohot akeli hai dil se matlab mera matlab tha ussko apne pati ka pyaar nhi milta matlab waise wala nhi yaar it's Emotion of heart that type of loveand I am there 100% confirm ki jo suhana hai uski saadi arrange hui hai aur wo bhi isko kah sakte ho ki matlab power,paisa waisi saadi it's means ki uske father ne uski saadi uski sirf arrange marriage nhi ki uski saadi unhone bussiness related se ki hai....mai jo kahna chahh raha hu I think tum smjh jaoge Werewolf.
Dhanyavaad man! Late reply kew liye maafi...Ab aate hai update par to Update bohot hi jyada alag trah ka ju ne likha alag hi level tha lekin NIGHTWALKER wale plot ke hisaab se ye bohot hi Normal tha ye. Pitcher wala plot and I think ju jo jhatka dene wale ho agle Update 108 me wo meri ye Normal wala compliment ggalat saabit krde......and ek baar aur yahi kahunga ki ju ke likhne ka jo criteria tha iss Update me wo bohot hi alag tha matlab har point ko ju ne ek alag scenes me create kiye aur fir last me suhana wala jo scene tha wo bohot amazing tha jaise ju ne wo last update 106 ne divya ka scene dikhaya tha last me waise !!
Take care.......
Niharika has a son. You forgot?I know ki Veer ke maal par koyi aur haath saaf nahi kar paayega..Aapke writing style ko to jaanta hi hun.
Waise Niharika ko lekar ek sawaal tha, Veer ke use thokne se pehle bhi Vikaas use touch kar paata tha ya nahi?![]()
Niharika ka to hai, par Vikaas ka hai, iska kya saboot..Niharika has a son. You forgot?
Ritvik is his name. (As far as I remember)
Uska hi hai.Niharika ka to hai, par Vikaas ka hai, iska kya saboot..![]()
Ye kya tha
mind blowing
bolti band update
Thanks man!Nice and dhamekadar update...sala dimag hi chakra gaya...ab to atish aur whistle bajane wale villain se badh kar aa gaya...ab to veer ki phir imtihan hoga ki kaise wo in sab se bachta hn...
Ye kya tadka hai bhai ye kya dhamaka kerdiya veer jaise ya usse bhi adhik koi aur bhi hai Awesome update bhai
Toh dhundh ke laane ka man. Apun ko kuch inspiration bhi mil jaega.Very good brother aisa ha aik manga bhi tha mujhe name yaad nhi magar us ma ya twist tha ka hero ka elawa bhi dosre logon ka pass system tha jo un ko mar hero ka system un ka system ko devour karta tha ..........
Bola toh yahi hai usne.Ye kya he bro
Or bhi systam he kya
Or ydi he to veer se kya dusmani he uski
Or shuhana ka kya huaa , use marne mat dena yr
yrrrrr
yrrrr please , dont kill suhana..... please
kuch bhi krke bcha lena, please
Bro zabardast bro aur wo dailog ." System sirf tumhare paas nahi hai VEER.". Awesome![]()
ThanksShaandar update bhai maza aa gaya to system us unknown person k paas bhi hai. Ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.
Dekhte hai kya prepare kar rakha hai next update ne.Last statement was to cold abto story ma 2x maja ana vala ha asa lagta ha
And one suggestion Suhana ki death mat hona dena
Uske baad bhi reaction score last updates se kam hai.What was that, aise bhi koi update likhta hai kya ki story ke characters ki hi nahi, padhne waalo ki bhi saansein ek pal ke liye ruk jaaye. This is totally wrong Werewolf bro, aise update dene se pahle warning deni chahiye ki this update can increase bloodpressure and heartbeats.
Kayi possibilities ho sakti hai. Ye abhi dekhna padega ki uss vyakti ka system high tha ya low.Kitna pyara aur romantic update jaa raha tha, Veer ko kiss mil gayi thi, Nat ke saath bhi thoda flirting ho gayi thi, paise bhi mil gaye the. Suhana ke saath shopping, ek saath achcha time beet raha tha, dinner date bhi ho gayi thi. Update was close to happy ending ke boom twister started. Ek insaan jisko system bhi check nahi kar sakta, suddenly bahut saare enemies. Car chase, fight, shooting and Suhana's injury , itna sab kum tha ki atom bomb fod diya Werewolf bro ne ki system kisi aur ke paas bhi hai aur wo system ko higher level par le jaa chuka hai isliye use Veer ke baare mein pata hai magar Veer uske baare mein kuch nahi jaanta hai.
Ye sab spoilers hai. Jo dheere dheere khulte jaenge. Bane rahiyega!Now emotional part, Suhana ne saare favours bhi maang liye. Kya Veer ab usi sadme mein khada rahega yaa fir Suhana ko bachane ki koshish karega? Kya Suhana bach paayegi? Ye dosra System waala Banda yahin USA se hi hai yaa ye Veer ko follow kar raha tha? Kya ye story ka main villain hai? Bahut saare sawaal ho gaye hai re baba iss update ke baad.
Ye kya bawaal update likh daala re Werewolf bhau? Ohh man, it took few seconds to absorb the impact of ending of this update. Seriously aisa bhi koi likhta hai bhala?
Haan par mujhe dikkatein boht gayi. Imgbb update dene ke time hi behakta hai. Dhyaan rakhna hoga mujhe iska.Magar mehnat ka fal bahut hi shaandaar tha.