Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update ki umid jag gayi h is sunday se likhna suru kar raha hu toh umid h bahut jald he update read karne ko mil jayega....itne samay tak intezar kiya uske liye dil se dhanyawad ...

Coming soon ...Update 264
HYPERTENSION....

 

[Babasarkar]

Deny bro jarur puri hogi aur bahut long story h 250 plus updates jayenge bro....or meri jung meri bi pasandita stories mai se ek h.....

250update nhi Aisa mat karo bro story ko lamba chalne do jaisa plot apne start Kiya he usmai to 250update mai helf story he complete hoga aisa mujhe lagta he so plz plz bro 500+update chahiye

 

[tpk]

Update 97...

Finding past—Revenge begins

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Huu....hmmm....fuuuu.....huuuu....hmmm..fuuuu...

muje aur strong hona hoga..dagger hawa mai saye...saye..ki awaj se jaldi jaldi ghum raha tha pichle 3 hour se lagataar workout kar raha tha raj.....kafi time se disturbance ki wajah se workout nahi kar paya tha...

Mera agai ka time bahut tuff hone wala h....muje practice reguler rakhni h...

Workout se uski body ka har shape perfectly dikh raha tha.....

Rajeev ke influence se attendence ki problem solve ho gayi thi school ki....raj nahakar relax ho gaya shweta school gayi thi ..isliye aram se coffee pikar sochne laga .....



Ek hour baad gardan mai bane basement mai samne board par kafi sari images aur clues pin ups kiye huve the...jismai wo har information thi jo usai chahiye thi ....ek jagah ungli point kar yanhi jana hoga.....



Kafi Dair baad ek jagah pahucha aur puchtaz karne pe bi kuch pata nahi laga toh thak kar ek jagah baith gaya ....

Akhir kanha ho ap....main haar nahi maan sakta...pura din dundhne par bi usai koyi jankari nahi mili. khali hath he wapas agaya.....

Jab apne ko dhundne jaye aur wo na mile toh kaisa mahsus hota h waisa he usai feel ho raha tha man toh kah raha tha ki wo yanhi h ass pass ...bahut gahri kasmakas dimag mai chal rahi thi ki kaise wo apni bua ko dhunde par koyi raah usai nazar nahi nazar arahi thi ...online naam se document bi dhude. par koyi clue he nahi mila usai jaise ye naam ho he nahi ...is duniya mai

Agle din school se ane ke baad phir usne naam se aur year ki ghatna batakar har ashram har anathalay har hotel har mukin jagah talash ki par koyi atapata nahi mila....jis udeshya se wo yanha aya tha usai wo pura karna tha par aj sabi raste band nazar arahe the...

Par dundne se khuda bi milta h toh usai bi pata chal he gaya ek gaanv se ek aurat ne usai call kiya...

Raj ankho mai khusi liye bike bhagta huva ja raha tha......aj usai ek umid ki nayi raah nazar ayi ....wo jald he pahuch gaya gaanv dur gaanv mai

Khat khat ....

Maa ji apne phone kiya tha ladki ki jankari ke liye....

Aurat---andar ao..

Aurat--- ...ha wo ayi thi yanha bahut buri halat thi uski ...jagah jagah chot ke nishan the khun ñikal raha tha mere pass he chupi rahi ek mahine tak...maine bahut baar pucha par usne yahi bataya sabko maar diya h sabko maar diya...wo kisi se nahi bolti thi ek mahine baad chot tikh huvi toh chali gayi bahut bhali ladki thi... Ha usne madad ke taur pe ye ek chain di thi... Kuch dair baad wo ek locket type chain layi aur boli usne kaha tha wo ek din wapas ayegi isai lena isai bechna mat .....

Raj ne usai hath mai le liya aur apne seene se laga liya phir usai yaad aya ki kaise uski bua usai godh mai uthaye ghumti rahti thi aur us manhoos din bi wo unki he godh mai khel raha tha....man ke andar hazaro bhav arahe the uthal puthal machi huvi thi vicharo ki jisai us aurat ne toda.....beta kya lagti h wo tumhari...

Raj sukhriya apne bure waqt mai madad ki aur wo sabkuch h meri ... ye ek lakh h apke kaam ayenge ...

Raj bina piche dekhe he nikal gaya aur us gaanv se bahar jane wala har aasspass ki jagah par puchtaj karta raha ....par agai koyi jaankari nahi mili .....raj sidha rajeev ke office pahuch gaya ...

Janha pahle se he shuruti abhay ajju moujud the...

Rajeev--- kya baat h raj ..

Raj locket dikha kar wo jinda h ye saboot h ...ap in rasto par har jagah puchtaz karwayiye jarur kuch pata chalega.....har budhe bhudiya se khaskar muje unse jald se jald milna h...

Rajeev--- ok main karwata hu tum inse baat karo

Shuruti --- agai ki kya planning h ...

Raj----- ek gaya ab uske sathi jo aj bi pashupati ke he sath h unhe cheerna h aur unhe main khud saza dunga..ajuu bhai apne kaam kiya ....

Ajju – projecter on karta huva har baat samjta gaya ..

Raj ke chehre ke expression toh change na huve par baki ke chahre ke expression sakht ho gaye...

Abhay--- sir ye toh bahut jayda he khatarnaak nikla ....ye baate toh pahle nahi pata thi...

Rajeev--- Raj....

Raj—khada hokar ...maine apna bachpan aiso se kaise ladna h sikhne mai he bitaya h ye 5 ho ya 50ya 500 he kyo na ho ...karma toh milega he...mai. Wo hathiyaar hu jo inko cheerne faadne ke liye he bana h

Abhay – filhal ye abhi bahar h par iska adda yanha se 80 km ki duri par he h janha se iska bhu mafiya ka kaam hota h.......

Raj—toh taiyari karo...aur ha jinda jalna h petrol bombs banao maut asan nahi honi chahiye .....ye baat mere guru xabhi aur aag sir ne kahi thi jitna tadpaoge utna sukun tum paoge...



Raj ki pith dekh kar koun kah sakta tha ki ek young ladka itna behrahm ho sakta h.....



Toh wanhi ...

Aurat--- apni beti ko godh mai uthaye sahar se bahar nikalne ki kosis kar rahi thi kumbh ka mela suru ho chuka tha khub bheed thi....usi ka wo fayda uthana chahti thii ...muu ko dhak kar wo agai jati ja rahi thi na saman tha na kuch bus apni beti ki jaan bachane ki kosis thi...wo kaise bi karke bus mai chad gayi ....aur sabse piche chipkar baith gayi uska dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha ....wo bus yahi dua kar rahi thi ki kaise bi ye bus chal pade bus .....wo baar baar dua kar rahi thi ...Uska dhayan apni beti ki awaj se tuta ..

Jhanvi – mumma ap tension mat lo god hamari help karega wo sabki help karte h ....dekhne wo hume invisible kar. Denge wo gande uncles hume dhund he nahi payenge....aur fir super hero ayega aur un sabko punish karega.....

Apni beti ki bholi baato ko sunke uska dil paseej gaya usai seene se lagakar boli ..ha meri bachi .......aisa he hoga ...par uska dil janta tha ki wo log kitne khatarnak h ......wo bus intezaar karti rahi ...15 minut ho chuke the bus na chali tabi 2 jane bus mai chade ...

Pahla ache se dekhna re ....

Dusra tikh h...

Wo har seat pe check karta huva araha tha ..

Aurat ne jaise he ye dekha wo jaldi se seat ke niche ki taraf jhuk gayi uski toh sanse he atak gayi thi ...aur uski akhiri bachi huvi umid ne heemat tod di ....ab bachna muskil tha....wo bus last tak pahuchne he wala tha ki bus ka horn baj gaya .....

Pahla chal be wo maabeti yanha nahi h dusri bus check karte h .....

Aurat ko jab bus chalne ka ahsas huva tab uski jaan mai jaan ayi....aur wo seedhi baith gayi h.....aj phir maut usai chukar nikal gayi aur nikalni he thi 17 saal ki umar se he maut se rubaru hoti arahi thi....ab usai sukun tha ki wo bach nikal jayegi aur apni beti ke sath nayi jindgi ki suruwat karegi.....par dar se dil abhi bi dhadak raha tha aur yahi haal uski beti ka bi tha ....



Dusri tarf......

Delhi

Cheif--- i dont want any excuse sonali...you know very well kya hoga if we failed ....

Sonali--- sir humne sari jagah talash ki but vithal nahi mila h....aur rdx bi wanha nahi h janha danger ne bataya tha...

Jogindar--- sir humne sab jagah monitoring rakhi huvi h kuch bi hoga hume pata chal jayega ...

Chief--- no no jogindar ap samaj nahi rahe wanha itna rush rahta h ek afwaha bi hazaro ki jaan lene ke kiye kafi h aur ye toh bloody fucking rdx h sorry to say but truth is truth....

Jogindar--- toh usai bolte h jo best h ....aur main kinki baat kar raha hu ap jante ho pura heemachal 24 hours mai clean ho gaya tha

Chief--- i think you r right uski team he best rahegi ..

Shivani ko kuch samaj nahi aya.....

Sonali--- seriously sir ...uski team u mean killing machine xabhi and Aag ...came on sir they are monesters....aur sunil...wo tank.... blood lusty h...kitno ko marega pata nahi aur mostly raj kya hoga agar wo ruka nahi no no no...lashe ginte ginte thak jaoge ap ...no never ...

Cheif--- tumahara pyar bol raha h ...

Sonali--- ap jo chahe wo samje but wo nahiiii..

Jogindar--- sonali log mare jayenge ...aur uski he team ye kar sakti h...

Sonali--- nope bilkul nahi main dhund lungi promise h ye mission hum pura karenge har baar uski madad nahi le sakti hu pichli baar he....nahi sir....Hum aj he nikal rahe wanha har jagah nazar rakhenge aur ap vithal ko dhundhiye.....

Bahar akaar .....Sonali chup chap baith gayi ...

Shivani--- team ye kounsi team h aur raj ye koun h

Sonali--- tum jisai hath kadi lagi rahi thi

Shivani jo pani pi rahi thi usai jaise he yaad aya uska pani gale mai he atak gaya....jorse khansi ane lagi......usne sapne mai bi nahi socha tha ki uski pahuch itni unchi hogi.......

Shivani--- Raj wo ek ladka h young ladka h wo lead karta h....

Sonali--- ne usai ghoor kar dekha....

Shivani ko kuch yaad aya andar ki baato ka toh wo jaldi se chup ho gayiii.....



Dusri taraf......

Train mai ....

Baba apne ye toh liya he nahi....

Poonam budha hogaya h tera baba itna he kha sakta h ab...

Poonam—budha honge apke dushman abhi bi bilkul tandurust lagte ho ...ap...bahar niklo toh pura gaanv dekhta h....abhi jawan ladko se jawan lagte ho dubara byah ho jaye apka toh

sab hasne lag jate h .......

Poonam jhep si jati h sabko hansta dekh

Baba--- are muje na dhundhni dusri teri chachi he tikh h mere liye ab tere liye dhundenge ladka tu padh likh le pahle....

Poonam—ap fir shuru ho gaye maine kaha tha na ki main apko kanhi chod ke nahi jaungi...

Baba--- are pagli main ja he isiliye raha hu ki tuje humse jayda khayal rakhne wala ladka mile ....samji ....

Ab wo bechari kya he bolti par ha upar wali birth par late kar wo itna jarur sochne lag gayi thi ki kya sapno ka rajkumar kahaniyo ke ilawa hakikat mai bi hota h aur hota h toh kaisa hota h ...muje kaise pata lagega wo he mere sapno ka rajkimar hoga ....kya main pahchan lungi ...wo gusai wala toh nahi hoga na .... Jaisa bi ho bus khadus na ho sweet sa ho ...

Ab usai nahi pata tha ki uparwale ne jodi likh di h aur wo bankar rahegi

“ ek bin maa baap ki ladki aur ek bin maa baap ka ladka dono he ek dusre ke jajbaat ko samjhenge ek taraf masoom ladki aur dusri taraf ek beast “

Kya hoga jab dono milenge

Kaise milenge

Kya pahchan payenge ek dusre ke pyar ko......

Kya sonali bi hogi us waqt .....

Sawal bahut h jawab...ek bi nahi....

Likes aur revoes mai kanjusi na karne ka

Aj ke liye itna he ......

very nice update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Epic update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai , maja hi aa gaya , kya update tha.
Ab to such me wait hi nahi ho raha hai ki aakhir kab raj apne bua se milega. Kb uske bua aur uske bich ka moment aayega.

Ha ha ha moment ke andar moment h....

Aur kaisa lagega jab wo choti ladki raj se milegi. Bhai bas aap jldi se ab dono ko milwa do ab aur wait nahi hoga hai. Warna hum sub readers aapse gussa ho jayege.

Jab wo milenge uske baad jarur ap gusa ho jaoge mujse...ye paka h....

Aapne last ke kuch Updates me aise chote chote part dikhaye hai ki ab wait hi nahi ho raha hai seriously me.
Aur kahte hai na bache man ke sachhe aur god ka hi ek roop hote hai wahi aapne sone story ke us scene se dikhane aur batane ki kosis ki hai.

Ha aur upar wala unki sunta bi h ab dekhna h ki kab aur kis trah sunta h...

Dono pakde hi Jane wale the ki bach gaye. Isase ye baat bhi ab clear hota hai ki ab inke dukh ke din bas khtam hi ho chuke hai.
Aur raj apne bua ko find karne ke sath wapas se pashupati ke piche lag chuka hai. Bahut jald hi uska bhi no. Aane hi wala hai.

Ha wo pal hoga he aisa ki sayad heart beat readers ki tez ho jayegi aur ye collapse bahut romanchak hoga

Aur tab sayad hame ab tak ke story ka sbse kahtarnak tourchar dekhne ko milega.

Tourture uske liye kuch aur socha h ...

Wahi dusri taraf S&S lagi padi hai boom ka pata lagane me rdx ko dhundhne me lakin yaha unhe wo mil nahi raha hai. Aur ye dekh kar mujhe is liye bahut acha laga ki aapne yaha villane ko bhi kafi dimak wala aur shatir show kiya hai. Jo ki story ki quality ko bhut ache se batata hai

Sukhriya wakayi raka ne bahut dimag lagaya h is baar itni asani se na pakde jane wala wo aur s&s behad pareshan hone wali h....

. Ab ye hero aur main character log bhle hi kitne hi tej ho lakin wo bhi bhai villane hai itne salo se aise kaam ab bina dimak ke to kar nahi raha hoga. To ye part mujhe sbse acha laga.

Right villian ko chutiya dikhane se story ki quality wakayi he girti ha wo alag baat h villian khud galti karke fans jaye toh....

Fir baat karte hai Raj ke team ko mana karne ki. Lakin mujhe kyu lagta hai ki last moment par unki entry jarur hogi. Aur tb jo bhi inke karname dekhega wo pakka bas shocked me hi jayega.

Apko sab clear ho jayega next 3 updates mai jo megha updates hone wale h.....aur team ....ha ha ha

Overall excellent Update bhai.
Besabri se next update ka intezar hai.

Sukhriya rider bro shandar jaandar review ke kiye

 

[Anas moavia]

Update 6

Bang Bang


Recap----


Pichle update mai apne dhekha Raj ka school jana aur bade chacha ki planning .. Aur mandir ke rast mai hamle ki sajish....


Ab agai......


Hum sabi 2 gadiyo mai baith gaye aur chal diye mandir ki aur janha ke khatre se anjaan sab masti mai ja rahe the ye mandir maa bhawani ka h ye mandir Do pahadi ke bich mai h yanha kaisa bi ashant man ho shant ho jata h....

Raste mai.....

Dada ji – Beta Nirwana bhagwan se ap jo chahte h uska nivedan karna matlb jo ap chahe wo mangna maa bhawani apki jarur sunegi....
Raj--- ji dada ji muje bahut kuch mangna h bhagwan se main jarur mangunga

Bheema ---- babuji agai ped kata huva h raste mai kuch gadbad h ...

Dada ji ---- kutte agaye lagta h chalte raho aur Raj beta kuch bi ho jaye bilkul bi bahar mat nikalna samje..


Raj--- ji Dada ji


Kalu---- Ustad wo arahe h taiyar ho jayiye ..aj kaam tamam karna he warna hum ni bachenge agar thakur bach gaya toh .thakur ke sath uska driver aur uska pariwar he hoga


Ustad—Are kalu main toh pichle 2 saal se mouka dund raha hu par aj mila h aur jor se taiyaar ho jao sab muje barbaad kiya tha na.Aj tu ni bachega thakur

Kalu – ustad 2 gadiya arahi h har saal toh ek he ati h kuch gadbad h rahne dete h ustad kanhi lene ke dene na pad jaye
Wo kahte h na Din mai ek baar mu se sarawati bolti h matlb sach nikalta he h aur aj wahi huva tha kalu ke sath


Ustad---nii kalu aj toh main ya wo ek he jinda bachega phir ek saal aur intezar ni hota h pichle saal bi kuch ni kiya tha .gadiya arahi h taiyaar ho jao gher lo sabko.

Gadiya ped ke pass akar rukii aur gadi se niche utre Dada ji ..

Dada ji – samne dhek ke bole chupne se kya muje pata ni h ki lakad baggai sher ka sikar karne aye h ajao bahar aur dhekho ki sher ke pass sirf mout h dene ko uski jaan tumare bus ki ni h.....aur apni mucho pe taav dete huve bole aj pahli baar kisi ko jinda chodunga par usai dhek ke koyi ni kahega ki wo jinda h log kahenge ki “JINDA MURDA PAHLI BAAR DHEKHA H “ jo bolta ni h

Uske baad jhadiyo se sare gunde bahar ane lage kisi ke hath mai talwar toh kisi ke pass lath toh kisi ke pass rod sariye the...

Ustad---- Thakur aj tak ka pata ni par aj lakadbhagai jarur karenge sikar “ teri mout hogi aur hamari aj dawat hogi” tera kaleja khaunga main aj raat par afsouse tu ni hoga dhekne ke liye

Dada ji------Hariya choudhary tera baap pata h bahut nek insaan H uski he wajah se pichli baar stree ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis ki wajah se sirf dand deke chod diya tha par aj aj aj ..ek sabak hoga sabke liye shaitan phone laga iske baab ko dr lane ko bol de...

Shaitan singh ke bahar nikal ne se hariya bi soch mai padh gaya ki thakur akela ni h par usai dar na laga usne socha dono ko he mar denge aj kyoki uske pass itne admi jo the sath aj.


Dada ji—phir bole mera khun ya maans pachana tere bus ki baat ni h babbar sher ka sikar karne aya h pahle kisi aur se hokar gujarna hoga

Aur dada ji chillaye Bheeemaaaaaa.....


Car ka fatak khula aur ek nukili jhutiya (shoes type) pahne bheema nikla gadi se jisai dhek ke 20 gundo ki halat kharab ho gayi thi wo ache se jante the ki bheema jo mout deta h wo kaisi hoti h.......baki jo gunde the wo naye the bheema abi ladayi kam karta tha toh wo usai sakal se itna ni jante the .....par bheema ke karnamai jisne dhekhe h usai us raat nind ni ayi h ......


Hariya---- oh toh thakur ka kutta bi h sath aj sabko maar dunga aur chillake bola agar inko maar diya toh 1 cr ni 5 cr tum sabke aur piche jo baithi h dono wo bi tumari ...

Hariya ki baate sun jo gunde dar rahe the paiso ka naam sunke khus ho gaye aur hamla kar diya pahle dus gunde dada ji ki taraf aye dadaji ne ek hath car mai dala aur car mai se apni talwar nikali jiska wajan he 10 se 15 kg ke beech tha aur usai dono hatho se bari bari ghumne lage charo taraf aur bolo bahut din ho gaye kasrat kare bheema intezar kariyo dheku jara kitna dum h inmai..

Bheema—babuji apko bahana chahiye ladne ka ap aram kariye main aur chote malik nipat lenge inse ..


Dada ji ---Chup kar ladne de muje acha tikh h hariya aur 10mere baki tum dono ke ...

Ab agai story
Raaj ke najariye se...

Aur agaye dus gunde dadaji ke pass pahle ne lath ghumake sir par marna chaha Dada ji ne jhuk kar uske pair he kaat diye ye dhekar piche wale ek baar ruk gaye par heemat kar phir agai bhade 2 ek sath aye dono ke hath mai rod thi jo sidhi kar mari sir par dada ji ne agai talwar karke rok li aur piche dhaka de kar talwar ghumayi ab talwar he itni bhari thi sidhi gale pe lagi aur gardan dhad se alag ho gayi..dono ki...udhar shaitan chacha ne bi lath nikal lath se pure lathait ban kar gundo pe tut pade aur sir par maar kar phodne lage sir jaise koyi matki phod rahe h par udhar bheema chacha toh alag he. Kulhadi wo bi do taraf wali leke chale the gundo ki taraf pahla jaise he aya teji se mara sir ke bicho bich ye kya.... ek waar ni 2 ni 5 waar kar faad diya bich mai se piche walo ki toh gaand he fat gayi ki ye bc h kya gunde ek dusre ki taraf dhek bol rahe the rakhshas h ye toh..

Udhar Dada ji 7 logo ko maar diya tha baki ke teeno ke ek hath aur ek leg kaat diye .....Aur chal diye hariya ke pass hariya bi talwar pakde taiyaar tha ur bheedi talware apasmai hariya bi tawlwar baaz tha talwar takrane se din mai bi chingariya dikh rahi thi.. par dadaji bhari pade hariya pe..
Dusri taraf shaitan chacha janha lathiyo se sir phod rahe the wanhi bheema chacha gundo ko cheer faad rahe the 20 gundo ko faad diya tha bich mai se aur bheema chacha gusai mai chillaye babuji par ankh uthayi h tum logo ne aj koyi jinda ni bachega sabko khol dunga aur aisa kholunga ki dr bi jod ni payega ..tumhari atma bi dubara ni judegi haramzado..aur itna kahte he tut pade phir se ..5 ki shaitan chacha ne matki matlab sir faad diye the...

Wanhi chachi ne pass ke gaanv ke sarpanch ke pass munim ji se phone karwa diya tha hazaro ki bheed bhagi arahi thi lath fawda katar leke

Gunde jo bache huve the unhone bheema ka kahar aur dada ji talwar se gardan kat ti huvi dhekhi toh wo bhag khade huve....
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Charo taraf khun he khun tha 15 gunde bach ke bhag gaye wo bi ghayal the ...aisa laga jaise lal rang ki holi kheli ho abhi yanha....

Dada ji----- bheema rook jao jane do unhe bus bahut huva shant ho jao kyo ki unhe pata tha ki uska gusa bahut bura h...aur unhone kaha shaitan logo ko bulao rasta saaf karne ke liye

Shaitan chacha --- jarurat ni h wo dhekhiye babuji charo taraf se log arahe tractor aur gadiya aur bhag kar...

Gaanv walo 15 minut mai pahuche unhone 10 logo ko tractor ki toli mai se nikal ke phek diya aur bole thakursaab ye log hame bhagte huve dikhe hum pakad ke le aye aur baki 3 ko log ghasit kar dusri taraf se la rahe the aur 2 ko dusri taraf se

Dada ji ---Hmmm inhe wapas daldo gadiyo mai

Gaanv wale ek sath chillane lage bali bali bali chahiye thakur saab inhone hamre bhagwan pe hamla kiya inhe hum jinda ni chodenge aur bheema bi bola babuji bali dijiye inki ya hum cheerfaad karenge inka...

Dadaji--- kuch pal sochke thik h par is hariya ko jinda chodenge chalo mandir maa bhawani ke mandir mai chadegi bali inki

Mandir ke sath mai bali ka sthan h janha bakro ki bali di jati h ....

Dada ji hey ma bhawani rakhsa karna hamari aur hame shakti dena taki in jaise papiyo ki bali deke dharti paap mukt karta rahu.
Thakur saab pe hamle ki khabar se ass pass ke ganvo se hazaro log doude aye the mandir tak .mandir mai jor jor se nare lag rahe the jai ma bhawani jai ma bhawani....aur
Sab gundo ki ek ek kar bali di gayi... Bali dhek ke hariya moot chuka tha 2 baar. Aur mare huve gundo ke mans ko chod diya kutte aur cheel kauvo ke liye

Hariya ke 2 no hath pair ki ungliya aur jeeb kat di gayi sabke samne taki sabko ye yaad rahe....ki anjaam kya hota Thakur jagmal pe hamla karne pe....hariya jinda toh h par murda saaman matalb
WO JINDA...... MURDA JO ....BOLTA H PAR... MARE HUVE SE BI BATTAR HAALAT MAI....

Aj ke liye itna he Sath bane rahiye milte h agle
Agai ab Raj ko 4saal bada ho kar 10 saal ka ho jayega

Nice update bhai

 

[Anas moavia]

UPDATE –7


RECAP—Pichle update mai bheema aur dadaji ka action aur gundo ki bali dhekhi .sath he gaanv ke logo ka pyar dhekha dada ji ke liye...


Ab agai .....


In mandir---

Raj—hey ma bhawani maine apne ma aur baap toh ni dhekhe par unki kami mere dada ji ne puri ki h ..hey ma bhawani muje itni shakti dena ki koyi bi mere apno pe ane wale kisi bi dhuk dard ko dur kar saku aur is layak banu ki Dadaji ko muj par garv ho main apna ek wajud bana saku khud ki pahchan bana saku.....
Hey maa bhawani mera koyi apna aur bi h kya h toh wo kanha h kya wo mujse pyar karte h agar karte h toh unse milna h muje...
Bus maa muje yahi mangana h apse is balak ki ye pukar puri kardo maaa.......

Dadaji – beta nirwana maa bhawani se apni khawaish mang li ho toh chale...


Main – ji Dada ji


aur hum sab ne mandir mai Bhojan sabko karwaya matlb bhandara lagwaya tha wanha Dada ji ne sab ke liye aur hum khud parsad lekar ghar ki aur chal diye....

Next morning utha main aur school chala gaya yahi schedule tha mera Sunday toh ap sab jante he h tourture etc . chacha ji ne jo plan kiya tha usai chachi ne cancel karwa diya bheema ka trailer dhek ke ...aur dusri planning karne lage teeno milke ..baki sab normal raha phir..

Aise he din bit te rahe city taraki karti rahi
Dada ji ne haveli ko aur surakhshit kar diya tha is beech choti moti ghatnaye hoti rahi


After 5 year


Main 7th class mai hu aur babita 9th mai surendra 11th mai h aj school ka new session start ho raha h main ye batana bhul gaya hu abi height meri 4 fit h rang gora h smart hu but one thing about me.main abi shakt lounda hudont Lough
Yaar ghar mai. Mahol ap sabhi lago ko pata he h. respect ladies ki bado ki etc etc ka naraa h dadaji hka so readers thats why i m shakt lounda abi ke liye lol meri class mai 30 ladke aur 20 ladkiya h ab ye ni pata h muje ye ghurti kyo rahti h .. ohh main ye batana toh bhul he gaya ki main topper hu class ka ek baar ache se padh lu toh phir bhulta ni hu mere frnds h but close frnds ni h chalo ab bahut huva class start karte h

Table pe duster thokne ki awaj ayi thak thak Students silent kisi ne shor kiya toh murga bana dunga
Main dheere se lol ye teacher toh gender change karwata h ladkiya murgi se murga banegi..

Teacher – my self sunil sethi and i m your new class teacher so all of you stand up one by one and give your intro...
Sabne intro dena suru kiya maine bi diya aur sirf Raj naam liya aur baith gaya


Teacher – tell me your fathers name

Main chup raha kuch ni bola
Teacher – i said tell me your father name tumahare papa ka naam batao
Main again chup raha kyoki aisa kabhi kabhi hota tha jab new teacher ata tha aur phir kuch na bolta dhek baitha deta tha but is teacher ke achi khasi khujli thi pichwade mai
Teacher lawarish h kya jo baap ka naam ni pata h ...

Teacher phir se bol be lawarish h kya lawarish h toh tera admission kisne karaya yanha pe sur muskarane laga
Main chup raha par ye chuppi us teachr ko ni pata tha uske liye kitni bhari padne wali h ..meri ankho mai ansuu aur chera pe krodh tha aur mere mu se nikal gaya wo jo ni kahna chahiye tha.....

Main chillake
Lawarish...
Lawarish...
Lawarish...
Ye tu banega is janam ni har janam kyo ki

“MERA NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA AUR JISKA MTALB H MOKHS.... WO MAIN DETA NI HU AJ SE TERI ROOH BHATKEGI AUR TERE SARIR KO KHAYENGE ASMAN KE UDTE PARINDE AJ AUR IS PAL SE TU KHATAM”
AUR TERI MOUT ITNI DARDNAAK HOGI KI TUJE KOYI PAHCHAN NI PAYEGA
YE MERE WORDS H NIRWAANA MOKHS DENE WALE KE WORDS
Gusai ke mare mera sir dard hone laga tha aur main behosh ho jata hu

In between two hours
Jab main behosh tha kya huva


In call
Teacher –maine kosis ki thi pata karne ki wo uski he aulad h ya ni ya Jagmaal ke pariwar se h ya ni par register mai kuch ni likha h aur class ki sari baat batata h sivaye raj ki dhamki wali....
In call samne se madarchod sab gudgobber kar diya tune nikal wanha se jaldi se ab sab satark ho jayenge teri wajah se sab khatm ho gaya bhag mc jaldi wanha se

In 2 hours mai mere behosh hone ke baad teacher ne kisi se baar ki aur dusri traf principal side jo huva
Jab principal ko pata laga toh uski gaand he fat gayi usai apni mautnazar arahi thi ki ..principal sunil se kaha mr sunil apne usai force kyo kiya maine apko kaha bi tha ki class ke kisi bi bache ko koyi personal detail ke liye force ni karega ap pahle he state ke bahar ke h maine sirf apko thakur hari singh ke kahne pe naukri di thi ap abi ke abi resign kijye aur chale jayiye....
Muje school medical room mai dr ne check kiya aur ek injection laga ke bola principal sir iske mind mai bahut stress h jo gusai mai nikla h.....ye bahut khatarnak h iske liye aur sabi ke liye jinse isai nafrat h matlb ap aisa samaj lijiye ek bomb fit h mind mai jo jab bi fatega toh iski frustration anger gussa niklega aur phir kya hoga i dont know ye sirf mera andaza h i hope main galat ho jau itni si umar mai itna gussa actualy dr ne class ki camera recording dheki thi .... Isi liye wo itna judge kar paya detail mai..

Aj ke liye itna he
Next update mai Raj ka chota. Sa khatarnak roop dhekne ko milega... Jo usi pe bhari padega batao kare toh mare na kare toh mare...........Dada ji punish jo karenge diffrent tarike se .........
Sath bane rahe........

Nice update bhai

 

[mkgpkr]

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[Anas moavia]

UPDATE 8


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Pichle update mai apne padha ki Raj ab 11 saal ka ho gaya h aur apne dhekha ki kaise usai teacher ke uksane pe gussa agaya aur bahut kuch bol diya aur phir behose ho gaya...
Ab agai....

In Principal room-----

Principal idhar udhar chakkar kaat raha tha aur uski phati padi thi kyoki usai pata h uski jara si laparwahi se ab usai koyi ni bacha sakta h ...dar ke mare ab tak usne phone tak ni kiya tha thakur saab ko ..

Time 1 .00 pm
Medical room ---

muje hosh aya toh maine khud ko bed pe leta paya bahar bacho ki halki halki awaj arahi thi main idhar udhar watch dhundi jo muje dikh gayi abi ek baja h matlb mai school mai he hu abi aur chutti huvi ni h phir main kuch sochne laga

Thodi dair mai Dr uncle aye
Kaise ho Raj beta

Main--- tikh hu uncle
DR—Ye toh bahut achi baat h .ab apko thodi dair rest karna h phir sidhe school bus se ghar chale jana ok aur ha beta itna gussa tikh ni h ..ap abi chote ho dayan rakha karo aur sirf studies pe dhayan do ok beta

Main—ok Dr uncle aur phir ek devil smile ke sath mud kar uncle ek call karlu ghar par dada ji ko aj unke sath jane ka man h unhe bula lu.


Dr—kuch dair baad toh ap chale he jaoge ghar par apka man h to ye lo phone...


Main-----again devil smile ke sath call lagaya 95------89 hello main Raj bol raha hu school ajaiye medical room mai aur call cut kar deta hu

Dr—Beta apne dadaji ko namaste kuch kiya he ni aur sidha ane ka bol diya


Main-----Thank u for call uncle aur main chupppp ho gaya again devil smiles

Dr sichne laga ki kyo itna muskra raha h dr ne nind ki tablet dene ki kosis ki but maine mana kar diya ki main tikh hu dr ko lag gaya tha kuch toh galat h ....wo muje observe karne laga..

Thodi dair baad peon aake bola apko koyi lene aya h
Main bye dr uncle aur peon ke sath chala gaya...

Samne wala shaks –Beta ap tikh toh ho na dikhao muje aur wo muje ache se dhekne lage

Main ---- samne wale shaks se hamare pass 1hour 15 minut h muje ek teacher sunil sethi chahiye h aj he new teacher join kiya h main apka principal room mai intezar karunga

Samne wala shaks par beta

Main-- muje chahiye.... H...aur meri ankho mai gusaa aur mera sarir gusai mai kanpte dhek wo bole ok mil jayega...

Main—office mai baitha hu usai leke ao..

Ap bhai log agar ni samje h toh bata du maine Dada ji ko phone ni lagaya tha maine lagaya tha bheema chacha ko koyoki muje khud us teacher ko saja deni thi apne hatho se Main principal ke saamne ankh bandkar baitha tha bus ankhe khulti toh sirf ghadi dhekne ke liye time beet raha tha 10 minut..20 minut...40 minut....1 hour....aur darwaja khula...sunil ake gira mere kadmo mai.....kyoki sunlil ki photo maine principal ke mobile se bhej di thi bheema chacha ko ...aur bheema chacha ne sabi admiyo ko bhej di thi isiliye jaldi mil gaya...

Raj--- ao sunil babu bahut shok h na intro lene ka aj hum apka intro lenge.aur ap denge.main bola principal se sir.... aisa koyi room janha awaj dur tak na jaye

Toh principal sir pahle toh ni b bole phir bheema chacha ne ghura toh bola school backyard mai ek basement h jo furniture etc ke liye istemal hota h wo thik h phir hum usai backyard basement mai le aye aur ab bari meri thi..


Raj--- toh sunil babu bahut intro lena tha na tume ab tum do pahle naam aur phir kanha se ho aur yanha teacher kyo bane...


Sunil----- silent.............raha


Raj---- bheema chacha wo maine ek hollywood movie dhekhi thi jismai agent kisi ki anguli kaat kaat ke torture karte h aur jankari nikalte h jara kariyo isai. chodo ap rahne do ap ko toh bus kholna ata h admi ko lao cutter muje do meri bate sun sunil ke sarir mai sursurahat suru ho gayi wo kuch bolna chahta tha par uska mu mai meri rumaal fansi thi ....maine cutter se uski choti unguli katti woh laga gaandfaad chillane aur tadafne aur main hans raha tha maine phir uski dusri anguli bi kat di aur phir sunil uchalne laga .......ahhhhhhh gurrrr hmmm.....
Main kuch der ruka aur principal ki taraf dhekha uski halat toh aisi thi jaise usai he sunil ki jagah baitha rakha ho main muskarakar sir se apse sawal main ni bheema chacha puchenge sir filhal show ka maza lo aur ye phati principal ki dubble gaand....maine mud kar idhar udhar dhekha aur phir ek hathoda uthaya aur khada ho gaya sunil ke samene aur dhekne laga uska ghutna aur main bola smile ke sath pahle practice karlu phir marunga ghutne pe aur mudke ruk gaya wapas palta aur bola ki muje kounsa gold lana h olampic mai lol practice tuji pe kar leta hu agai kaam ayegi aur mud ke diya ghuma ke hathoda sunil ke ghutno pe aur sunil chillaya gaan faad ...aur jor jor se gardan hilane laga main samaj gaya ab bolega ye main uske samne baith gaya aur bola toh sunil babu intro ab suru hoga galat bataya ya ruka toh dobara suru karenge ok.... Aur ha chillana mat aur piche principal thar thar kaamp raha tha Sunil ke mu se rumal hat te he wo bola

Sunil—mera naam. Sunil h main Dhelhi se aya hu wanha kidnapping ka kaam aur jasusi ka kaam karta hu ....

Bheema chacha—mc kisne bheja h tuje yanha


Sunil---- chupp........

Raj – maun mu band karke sunil ka time out second round suru sunil babu apka maun cutter leke phir kaatne laga toh main ruk ke bola maza ni aya toh maine uske anguthe kaat diye dono hathke aur main hanske bola ha ye sahi h aur phir khada hoke hathoda uthaya aur uske dusre guthne pe mara sunil ne pair hilka ke nishana chukwa diya main hansa aur bola well played aur phir mara hathoda gutne pe dubara se abki baar laga jor se aur moot nikal gaya uska
Bheema chacha ---bus bahut huva Raj
Main muskara ke abhi toh suru kiya h chacha..

Bheema chacha—bus bahut huva Raj matlb bahut huva

Main—ok jaisa ap chaho aur palat ke

“MERE NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA AUR MAIN MOKHS DETA NI HU TADPATA HU TADPATA HU USKI ROOH KO”

Aur agai bheema chachake tourture se sunil ne bataya ki usai Hari singh thakur jo hamri mandawa city se 100 km ki duri par durgapur city h usne bulaya tha 1 se 8 class tak ke bacho ke baap ke naam aur gaanv ka pata karne ke liye ......aur phir sunil ko maar ke gaad diya aur principal ko pata tha ki usai chup he rahna h agla number uska aur hari singh ka he h

Sham ke waqt haveli mai Dada ji chakkar kaat rahe the aur behad he gusai mai the unke samne Raj baitha tha aur pass bheema nazar niche karke baitha tha.......
Main --- man mai aj pata ni kounsa bhoot agaya tha josh jhosh mai kya he kar diya ab dada ji pata ni kya he karenge ...bhagwan bachale muje...aur banle agent ....bada aya hollywood ka agent...

Dada ji --- bheema apse ye umid na thi hame ki apne Nirwaana ko ye sab karne diya
Bheema chacha--- babuji main toh bus...
Dada ji ---- Raj aj se ap sirf exam dene school jayenge apki sari padhayi ab ghar hogi aur kal subhe 5 baje ap muje bhandare ke pass milenge ...
Aur ha ye apke liye meri pahli aur akhiri chetawani h apko bola tha na ki ap sirf padhayi karenge koyi kuch bi kahe ni bole ge aur ake hame batayenge apki maa chahti thi ap us school se padhe par apne unke sapno ko tod diya h unki icha apke liye koyi mayne ni rakhti h ......
Main—Dada ji maaf kar fijiye dubara aisa ni hoga main apko vachan deta hu ki main dubara kisi se ladayi ni karunga

Dada ji---- toh tikh h ap vachan do ki ap jab tak jeene marne ka sawal na uthe ap ladayi ni karoge aur apki saja h ap agle 3 saal tak school sirf pepar dene jaoge

Main—mu latka ke ji dada ji

Aj ke liye itna he
Agle updates se shuru hoga Raj ka sadhu baba ke sath naya safar...

Words mistake ho tih maaf kijyega aur sath bane rahiye

Nice update bhai

 

[Anas moavia]

Update 9


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Pichle update mai dhekha ki dada ji ne Raj ko 3 saal school keval pepar dene ke liye he jane ki permission di h.....jo ki Raj ne dhukhi man se maan li h

Ab agai.......


Dada ji------ Ap apne room mai jayiye

Raj--- ji Dada ji

Raj ke jane ke baad dada ji ne bheema se kuch baat ki aur bheema bi chala gaya khet vagairah dhekne
Kamre mai Dada ji akele chakkar kaat rahe the aur badbada rahe the aisa ni hone chahiye raj ko sabki nazro se bach ke rahna h jaisa bheema ne bataya h agar iska gusa waisa h toh ye apni baap wali galtiya karega aur sab barbad ho jayega aur un chupe huve dusmano ki nazar mai ajayega ni ni ni aisa ni hone dunga main abi iske ye sab karne ki umar ni huvi h aur wo turant bheema ko call lagate h aur chale jate apne kool guru ke pass samasya ke niwaran ke liye


In ashram.....


Dada ji ----- parnam gurji ....

Guru ji – pranam putra kaise ana huva aj chahre pe aj tez ki jagah chintao ne basera laga rakha h...

Dada ji ha gurudev main apne pote ko leke chintit hu uska krodh is umar mai apne pita sahdev par gaya h jo uske liye uchit ni

Gurudev---muskrakar kya sahdev ne tumahara path yani rasta choda tha toh uska putra se aisi apeksha kyo na ho...uska pita kya tha ye toh tume pata he h phir itni soch kyo putra....

Dada ji --- Gurudev dusman bahut h us jaan ke aur chahne wale bi bahut h .....bahut se apne uske intezar mai h .....par main ni chahta wo sabki nazar mai aye.....maine puri duniya se chupa rakha h usai kitne he apne bichad gaye the us hamle mai apko pata he h jo abi tak mile he ni h

Gurudev – putra moh na karo putra.. usai taiyar karo putra jagmaal raj ko tum bade guru ji ke pass bhej hum parso ja rahe h usai sath le jayenge ...
Dada ji--- jaisi apki agaya gurudev main bus usai sab khatro se dur rakhna chahta hu

Gurudev –Muskra kar sadev khus raho putra jao taiyari karo jane ki

In haveli...


Bade chacha aur badi chachi ---- bahut ud liya tune ab tere din wahi suru hone wale h samja ...
Choti chachi—manhoos tu dur he tikh tha ab phir ghar mai teri sakal dhekni padegi ...
Chachi ye sab mamta kavita ke samne ni kahti thi kyo ki wo dono har baat dada ji ko bata deti thi to chachi ki bi phat ti thi ..... Pahle kayi baar undono ne sikayat kar di thi ...


main mu latkata huva unki bate sun raha tha aur jab sahan na huvi toh apne room mai chala gaya aur sochne laga ki itni badi galti kardi kya maine ki Ab school ni ja sakta hu roj..please Dada ji main dubara ni karunga aisa..ye bolke chup ho gaya...aur apni soch mai ghoom ho gaya.

Dada ji ne piche se principal ko dhamki de di thi ki ek aur galti aur tera pariwar khatm unhone usai jinda isliye choda taki hari singh ko sak na ho aur wo suspence mai he rahe matlb jiske liye kaam karta h uske liye karta rahe ......taki time ane pe us dusman ko pakda ja sake...usai yahi lage ki sunil dar ke mare kanhi bhaag gaya h..

Thodi dair baad raj ke room ka darwaza khula aur kavita bhagte huve ayi aur uske upar kuud gayi aur usai chumne lagi aur phir gud gudi karne lagi main bola kabbuu bus kar yar bahut tang karti h tuu
Kavit hhhhhh main tang karti hu ruko jara aur phir se gudgudi shuru kar di
Main ok ok meri galty. Sorry
kavita bhai ap dukhi mat raha karo hansa karo bus ap hanste ache lagte ho bhai ap kabhi mujse dur mat jana
Itne mai mamta bi agayi acha bachuu dono ho gaye sath muje bhul gaye
main bola ni bhula hu ajja aur wo bi agayiii aur dono ek sath bili aj hum dono apke sath soyegi ek ek karke acha ni lagta bhai aj hum teeno sath soyenge
Main bola ok ok khana khake ajana chalo khana khate h hum niche agaye sur dinning table pe baith gaye khana khate waqt dada ji bole

Dada ji--- beta Nirwaana apko ab hamre bade guru ji ke yanha agai kuch saal sikhsa leni h

Main-- ankhe badi aur hairani ke sath par dada ji kyo aur kanha jana h kuch bi ho hame apse dur ni hona h ...

Dadaji --- kanha jana h ye toh hum ni bata sakte h kyoki unka ashram gupt sthan par h par jagah hame pata h ...aur ap hamari icha puri ni karenge kya . hum dil se chahte ki ap guruji ke maarg darshan mai kuch saal sikhsa le hume atyant khushi hogi..

Maine kavita aur mamta ki tarafdhekha jo bheegi ankho se muje dhek rahi thi jaise kisi ne unse unki rooh maang li ho kuch logo ke chahre pe khusi thi toh kuch chahro pe dhukh jismai main khud tha .hamne khana khaya phir dada ji kaafi bate batayi aur samjayi muje aur main chala gaya sone..raat ko sote waqt hum bhai bahne bahut roye aur kavita mamta ne kaha hume bhul mat jana bhai maine kaha ni bhulunga aur mera intezar karna main tume wanha se call karunga...aise he khub sari bate ki aur hum so gaye ek dusre se lipat ke..
2raat nikal gayi in 2 raato mai hum bhai bahan sath he soye aur pure din bi sath he rahe kisi ne bi pareshan ni kiya aur phir..

kool guru aagaye muje lene unhone sabko ashriwaad diya aur raj ke pass aye aur uske sir par hath phira kar bole chale beta hame bahut dur jana h

Main ji chaliye phir maine Dada ji ke pair chuhe phir baki sabke aur phir kavita mamta ke gale laga liya
Sirf Dadaji kavita mamta ki ankho mai ansu the aur baki ke ankho mai khusi sirf dadi he jo halki dhukhi thi kyoki tha toh unke bete ka beta he main
Aur nikal gaye hum naye safar


Aj ke liye itna he
Agle update mai naye charector introduce honge ....agai raj ki sikhsa bade guru ke ashram aur mordern school dono mai hogi........maza ane wala h sath bane rahiye

Nice update bhai

 

[Anas moavia]

UPDATE—10


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Pichle update mai apne padha ki kool guru Raj ko bade guru ke pass lejane ke liye kahte h agai ki sikhsa ke liye.wahi uski bahne dhukhi h usai dur jane aur sath he Raj bi majbur h Dada ji ki baat manne ke liye....


Ab agai.....

Haveli mai pichle 3 din mai

Choti chachi --- mamta kavita chalo ajao khana khate h
Mamta kavita- ni hame ni khana h khana ap logo ke sath
Choti chachi --- jid ni karte chalo niche ajao thoda gusai se
Kavita mamta – ek sath ap sab bahut bure ho pahle bhaiya ko marte ho aur ghar se bi bhej diya aur unhe ap sabne bahut rulaya h aur apna roomband karleti h
Yahi sab ye roj kar rahi h Raj ke jane se dono bahne Tut gayi h kyoki wahi toh tha jo unke sath khelta aur masti karta tha ab bus uski yade rah gayi h aur wo dono he uski yaade samete uske he kamre mai soti thi aur saaf kah diya jab tak raj ni ayega wo wanhi soyengii...

Choti chachi B chachi aur B chacha surendra aur babita sab dangg rah the dono ne aisa pahli baar kiya tha Par inhe ni pata tha nafrat ka beej inke dilo mai ugg gaya h in sabke prati..ab dhekte h ye kaise bhadega waqt ke sath sath...

Idhar Raj train mai Safar kar Raha tha 2 din baad train se kool guru aur Raj utre janha. Unke liye car khadi thi aur chal diye wo agai ke safar par....apan inhe chalne dete h 12 hour lagenge pahuchne mai....
Thodi dair kanhi aur ghoom ke ate h

Wanhi dusri taraf phone par madarchod hariya lagta h teri biwi chodni padegi tuje jinda rahne ki icha ni h pata ni kiya ki us school mai koyi thakur jagmaal ke yanha se h ya ni aur uske baap ka naam sahdev sing h kya....
Hariya maalik maine teacher bi bheja kisi ko banake par usko bi ni pata laga aur abi wo kudh bi gayab h baki uske gaanv mai bi laalach dilwaya par uske saare ganvo mai se koyi bi na toh paise lekar ya kaise bi kuch bi batane ko taiyar ni h ....ap he bataye kya karu
Samne se tu pata karta rah samja aur saamdand bhed jo lagana h wo kar aur admi laga pure rajasthan mai faila de main baki jagah uske pariwar par nigrani rakhta hu...
Ab ye log pata ni koun h jo badi siddat se Raj ko dhund rahe h in future pata lagega..

Khair idhar Raj aur kool guru ek jungle ke samne ruke aur paidal chaal diye manjil ki aur

Raj--- guruji hum kanha h


Kool guru --- beta ab ap akele ho toh suno hum hemachal pardesh mai h aur hamara ashram yaha se 5 km andar pahodo ke bich mai h

Raj --- itni dur ...par guruji muje yanha kya karna h

Kool guru – beta ap yanhi he rahoge aur agai ki sikhsa loge aur ha yanha se ap kisi se bi koyi sampark ni karoge dadaji ne bi apko ye bataya tha na .....

Raj --- par maine toh apni bahno se wada kiya tha ki main unse roj baat karunga

Kool guru --- beta pahle ap layak ban jao phir apko unke sath he toh rahna h na abi ke liye ap sab bhul jao aur sirf padhayi aur guruji ki sikhsa par ache se man laga ke dayan dena Aur ye lo hum pahuch gaye

Raj—maine samne dhekha toh mere mu se nikla sirf wao.....Samne ashram tha baans ki lakdiyo se khub bada bana huva charo taraf chote bade room the samne ek pake pathro se bani huvi imarat bi thi....charo taraf ped. Aur pahado ke karan kisi ko bi ni dikhta tha par mera man behad khus ho gaya tha ..ashram dhek ke.....

Kool guru--- andar leke gaye aur bade guru ke room ke bahar khade ho gaye ..kool guru ne wanha khade sisya ko kaha ki bade guruji se kahe ki rajasthan se umed aya h ...

Thodi dair baad sisya bila guruji ne andar bulaya h ...

Kool guru aur main andar gaye toh kool guru ne unke pair chuve toh maine bi chuve

Bade guru—ayushmaan bhava sada sukhi raho putra kaise ana huva umed aur ye balak koun h ..

Kool guru – guruji ye Raj h jaagmaal singh ka pota aur sahdev ka beta..

Bade guru – raj ki aur muskarahat ke sath dhekte huve bole mukh ka tez apne pita par h ....beta Raj apko pata h apke pita bi yanha padh chuke h aur wo mere sisya the aur unhe apke koolguru umedne he sikhsadi h h ...

Booom Ye foota bomb mere upar main kabhi kool guru ko dhekhu toh kabhi bade guru ji ko aur hazaro km ke heesab se mera man mai andhi tufaan chal rahe the ....jisai kool guru aur bade guru ne padh liya tha muje dhek ke muskra rahe the

Bade guruji ko ab main sirf guruji he likhu ga

Guruji – Beta Raj vyakul na hovo samay ane pe apko hum apke pita ke bare mai batayenge .ab p thake huve h toh aram kijiye aur kal subhe pratah . 4 baje naha dhoke muje yanhi milyega ..
Phir unhono kisi bache ko bulaya aur usko bola ki ye Raj h aur apke sath he rahenge wo bola ji guruji aur main chal diya uske sath wo bola mera naam sunil h maine bola mera naam raj h phir usne kaha main akela he rahta hu chota hu na baki sabi bache bade h ashram mai sab 18 saal se upar h isiliye mera koyi dost ni h tum banoge mere dost maine kaha mera bi koyi dost ni h lagta h apan dono ki kismat ek jaisi h so hum dost huve aj se aur sunil bola bhai mera guruji ke alawa koyi ni main unhe sahar mai road ke kinare mila tha vo yanha le aye aur main tab se yahi hu..aur aise he hum baat karte karte kamre tak pahuch gaye...

Wanhi dusri taraf bade guruji se kool guru baat kar rahe the ki guru ji is bache ke dusman bahut h jagmaal ke kahe anusar wo chahte h ye sahdev se bi agai jaye. Usai jayda takat aur dimag se tej ho ye wo hathiyaar bane jo burayi ko jad se kaat sake jisai na takat se mara ja sake aur khaskar dhoke se toh katayi niii .....
Bade guru --- putra isai hum khud taiyar karenge pahle dimaag se phir jism se isai hum wo banayenge jiske naam se he logo ki rooh kanp jayegi par uske liye samay h...pahle isai taiyar karna hoga ab tum jao umed aur isai hum par chod do aj ye 5 vars hamre pass rahega hum isai adhunik aur prachin dono trah ka gyan denge ..

Kool guru – jo agya gurudev main jagmaal ko bi bata dunga

Guruji – khus raho aur unhe bata dena ki 5 saal koyi ni ayega isai milne hum isai bhijwa denge rajasthan

Kool guru--- jo agaya gurudev

Aur gurudev chale jate h ab sala 3 se 5 saal ho gaye lag gayi meri toh aur muje pata he ni h ye sab aur main sunil ke sath dosti mai khoya ashram ghoom raha hu khusi khushi jisko ye pata he ni ki 5 saal uske sath kya hone wala h.....

Aj ke liye itna he kal se Raj ki ashram life aur mordern life suru hogi

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