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Thanrki nahi game dikhya jaega.OK Bas main e chahta hoon ki aap Raziya ko tharki na banau_kyu ki Agar aap aise hi Raziya ko kisi ke bhi raat dikhao ge to readers ko pasand nahi aayegi...
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Deepika k sath scene hone se mazaa nhi aayega Aur bhai writter ko apne hisaab se likhne do badhiya likh rha heAb kahi Jake story me mja aa ra hai meko sare character pasand aaye bs Tanya k name pr krishma tanna bilkul achi nahi lag ri usko change kro upar se surbhi ka name krishma rakh diya imagination me mja hi ni aa ra plzzz Tanya ka face koi or choose kro sb badhiya ja ra hai hero ka b face reveal kro to or mja aayega read krne me ab kafi acha lag ra hai bs reeta ka roll kuch khas majedar nahi lag ra jo raziya dheema k alawa kisi ko chune nhi deti thi uske sath ho b hua wo chudel k bas me hone ki wajah se hua but ab to usko randi bna diya pati k marte hi koi b kuch b kre ja ra hai iska kuch kro koi dhang ka bnda hona chahiye reeta(raziya) k liye or Deepika k sath apne hero ka scene ho to mja aa jaye sone pe suhaga
Baki aap acha likh re ho likhte jao hum padhte jayenge bs story complete jrur krna or update thoda jaldi jaldi de do to meherbani hum reader pr
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