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Update - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)
Ab tak...
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
Ab aage...
[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]
'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'
[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]
'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'
[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]
'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."
[I-I'm so sorry.]
'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'
[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]
Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,
"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."
Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.
Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!
Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.
'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'
[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]
'Yeahhh!'
Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...
*Plop*
Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.
"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"
Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.
Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.
Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.
Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.
Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.
Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.
Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?
Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.
Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?
Of course! None other than Veer!!!
Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.
Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.
Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...
[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]
"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."
[But still...]
"Shhh!!! Let's get going."
Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.
Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,
Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.
Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
Veer (smiles) : Sure!
Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.
Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.
She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.
Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.
Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...
Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.
Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.
Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.
Veer : What do you think?
Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.
Veer : Then that means...
Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.
Veer : Other participants?
Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!
Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.
Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.
Veer : Hope so...
Mike : Shall we head inside?
Veer : Alright!
Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.
Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.
Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.
Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.
Veer (nods) : Do it!
Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...
*Click*
Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.
Mike : It actually worked.
Veer : The info was true then...
Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.
Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.
Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.
Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.
Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.
Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.
Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.
Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.
Mike : Let's go!
Veer : Yeah!!!
Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.
Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.
Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.
Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,
Veer : Huhh???
Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.
"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."
Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.
Veer : These guys...
Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,
Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??
Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!
Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.
Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.
Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.
Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.
Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.
Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.
Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.
Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*
Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.
Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.
Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.
Usse dekhte hi...
*Ding*
[Name : Zoey Clarkson
Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.
Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]
'I see!!!'
Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.
Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.
Mike : And who are they?
Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.
Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.
Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.
[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]
'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'
[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]
'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'
[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]
'Good job!!!'
Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.
Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.
Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.
Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.
Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.
Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.
Mike ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.
Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi Jaa rahi thi.
Ye ek boht badi baat thi.
Emma : So? What are we gonna do?
Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.
Emma : What do you mean?
Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.
Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!
Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.
Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.
Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.
Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.
Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.
Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...
Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.
Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!
Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.
"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."
"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."
"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"
"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."
"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"
"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."
"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."
"Good luck!"
Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.
[Maaasterrrr~]
Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,
'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'
[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]
Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.
Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????
Ronnie : Seems like it.
Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?
Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3 se 3:30 tak ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.
Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...
Maut!!!
Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.
Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?
Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?
Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.
Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.
Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???
Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.
Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?
Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.
Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.
Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.
Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!
Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.
Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.
Zoey : Alright!
Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.
Ronnie : Okay!
Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?
Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.
Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.
Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.
Veer : Which one?
Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!
Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!
Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.
Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike karne se rok rahi thi. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.
Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.
Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,
Mike : You are not going with them?
Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.
Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.
Veer : !!!???
Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.
Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.
Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.
Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.
Veer : Hmm?
Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.
'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'
[Yeah!!!]
Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.
'Ohhhh~'
Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.
'Hmm? That's weird!'
[Room number?]
'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada hona chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur hi tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'
[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]
'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'
Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.
[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]
'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'
[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]
'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'
[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]
'Naah!!!'
Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.
Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.
Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.
Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.
Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.
Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.
Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...
'These are weird!! Check!!!'
*Ding*
[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]
'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'
[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]
'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'
[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]
'Wese...'
[Hmm?]
'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'
[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]
'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'
[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]
'Kaash....!'
Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.
Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.
*Ding Dong*
Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.
Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.
Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?
Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.
Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.
Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.
Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!
Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...
"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"
Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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Mast update BhaiUpdate - 98 ~ The NightwalkerAb tak...
[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]
'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'
[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.
Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.
Ab aage...
Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.
Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.
Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!
Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.
Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.
Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?
Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.
Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.
Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.
Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.
Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.
'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'
Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.
Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?
Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.
Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.
"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"
Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.
Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.
Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...
Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.
Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.
Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,
"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.
Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,
Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?
Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.
Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...
Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.
Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.
***
Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.
Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,
Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...
Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.
Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!
Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.
Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...
Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.
Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...
Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.
Juhi : Haan???
Nidhi : Haan!!!!
Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.
Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.
Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!
Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.
Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.
Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...
Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.
Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~
Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??
Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!
Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?
Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...
Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?
Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.
Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?
Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?
Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.
Juhi : Badi waalii...
Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!
Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?
Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...
Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...
Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.
Nidhi : H-Hello!!??
Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.
Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.
Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!
Nidhi : Mmm~
Veer : Kaisi hai aap?
Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.
Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.
Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?
Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.
Veer : Accha!!!
Nidhi : T-Tum...
Veer : ???
Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?
Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?
Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...
Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~
Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?
Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.
Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.
Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.
Nidhi : I-I see!!
Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.
Nidhi : O-Okay!!
Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.
Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!
Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.
Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.
Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.
***
Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.
Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.
"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"
Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.
Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.
"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"
Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.
Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.
Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.
Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.
Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?
Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.
"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"
Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.
"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"
Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...
*Drip*
"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.
"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"
Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.
"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"
Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...
Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.
Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.
"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"
Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.
*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*
*Drip* *Drip*
"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"
Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.
Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?
Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???
"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"
Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.
"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"
Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.
Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.
Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.
Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....
*Splurrrrtttttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Wo fir jharr gayi.
"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"
Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.
"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"
***
Vegas
Evening ~ 7:14 PM
Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.
Ek khushkhabri thi.
Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.
Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?
Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.
Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.
Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.
Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.
Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.
Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.
Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...
Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.
Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.
Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.
Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.
Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.
Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.
Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.
Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.
Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.
Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.
Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.
Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,
Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.
Veer : Huh??
[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]
Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.
Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.
Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.
Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.
Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.
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*Click*
Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.
Nik : What happened ?
Nolan : Look for yourself.
Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.
Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.
Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.
Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.
Aur fir unhone dekha...
Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.
Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.
Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,
"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"
"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"
"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"
"H-Huhhhhhh????"
Par tabhi...
Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,
"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"
Aur agle hi pal...
*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*
Uske haatho se camera gira...
Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.
Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.
Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.
Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.
Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.
Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?
Suhana : I have no clue!
Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!
Suhana : Hmm??
Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.
Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!
Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.
Suhana : Divya kya hua????
Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.
Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,
Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!
Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?
Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!
Suhana : ...
Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!
Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.
Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,
Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?
Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.
Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?
Nik : Th-That's....
Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!
Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.
Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??
Nik : W-We... We do!!!
Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!
Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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वावUpdate - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)
Ab tak...
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
Ab aage...
[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]
'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'
[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]
'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'
[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]
'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."
[I-I'm so sorry.
'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'
[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]
Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,
"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."
Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.
Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!
Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.
'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'
[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]
'Yeahhh!'
Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...
*Plop*
Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.
"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"
Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.
Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.
Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.
Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.
Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.
Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.
Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?
Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.
Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?
Of course! None other than Veer!!!
Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.
Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.
Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...
[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]
"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."
[But still...]
"Shhh!!! Let's get going."
Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.
Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,
Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.
Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
Veer (smiles) : Sure!
Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.
Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.
She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.
Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.
Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...
Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.
Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.
Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.
Veer : What do you think?
Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.
Veer : Then that means...
Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.
Veer : Other participants?
Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!
Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.
Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.
Veer : Hope so...
Mike : Shall we head inside?
Veer : Alright!
Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.
Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.
Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.
Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.
Veer (nods) : Do it!
Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...
*Click*
Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.
Mike : It actually worked.
Veer : The info was true then...
Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.
Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.
Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.
Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.
Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.
Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.
Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.
Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.
Mike : Let's go!
Veer : Yeah!!!
Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.
Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.
Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.
Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,
Veer : Huhh???
Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.
"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."
Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.
Veer : These guys...
Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,
Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??
Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!
Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.
Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.
Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.
Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.
Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.
Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.
Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.
Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*
Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.
Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.
Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.
Usse dekhte hi...
*Ding*
[Name : Zoey Clarkson
Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.
Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]
'I see!!!'
Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.
Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.
Mike : And who are they?
Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.
Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.
Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.
[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]
'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'
[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]
'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'
[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]
'Good job!!!'
Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.
Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.
Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.
Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.
Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.
Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.
Mike ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.
Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi Jaa rahi thi.
Ye ek boht badi baat thi.
Emma : So? What are we gonna do?
Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.
Emma : What do you mean?
Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.
Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!
Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.
Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.
Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.
Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.
Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.
Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...
Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.
Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!
Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.
"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."
"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."
"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"
"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."
"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"
"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."
"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."
"Good luck!"
Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.
[Maaasterrrr~]
Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,
'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'
[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]
Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.
Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????
Ronnie : Seems like it.
Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?
Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3 se 3:30 tak ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.
Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...
Maut!!!
Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.
Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?
Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?
Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.
Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.
Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???
Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.
Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?
Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.
Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.
Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.
Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!
Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.
Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.
Zoey : Alright!
Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.
Ronnie : Okay!
Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?
Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.
Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.
Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.
Veer : Which one?
Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!
Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!
Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.
Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike karne se rok rahi thi. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.
Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.
Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,
Mike : You are not going with them?
Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.
Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.
Veer : !!!???
Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.
Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.
Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.
Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.
Veer : Hmm?
Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.
'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'
[Yeah!!!]
Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.
'Ohhhh~'
Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.
'Hmm? That's weird!'
[Room number?]
'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada hona chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur hi tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'
[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]
'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'
Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.
[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]
'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'
[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]
'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'
[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]
'Naah!!!'
Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.
Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.
Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.
Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.
Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.
Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.
Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...
'These are weird!! Check!!!'
*Ding*
[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]
'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'
[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]
'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'
[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]
'Wese...'
[Hmm?]
'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'
[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]
'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'
[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]
'Kaash....!'
Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.
Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.
*Ding Dong*
Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.
Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.
Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?
Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.
Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.
Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.
Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!
Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...
"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"
Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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Update thoda जल्दी-जल्दी karo na bhai
Nice mast update broUpdate - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)
Ab tak...
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
Ab aage...
[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]
'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'
[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]
'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'
[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]
'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."
[I-I'm so sorry.
'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'
[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]
Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,
"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."
Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.
Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!
Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.
'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'
[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]
'Yeahhh!'
Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...
*Plop*
Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.
"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"
Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.
Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.
Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.
Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.
Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.
Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.
Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?
Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.
Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?
Of course! None other than Veer!!!
Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.
Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.
Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...
[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]
"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."
[But still...]
"Shhh!!! Let's get going."
Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.
Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,
Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.
Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
Veer (smiles) : Sure!
Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.
Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.
She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.
Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.
Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...
Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.
Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.
Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.
Veer : What do you think?
Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.
Veer : Then that means...
Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.
Veer : Other participants?
Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!
Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.
Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.
Veer : Hope so...
Mike : Shall we head inside?
Veer : Alright!
Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.
Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.
Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.
Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.
Veer (nods) : Do it!
Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...
*Click*
Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.
Mike : It actually worked.
Veer : The info was true then...
Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.
Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.
Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.
Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.
Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.
Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.
Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.
Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.
Mike : Let's go!
Veer : Yeah!!!
Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.
Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.
Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.
Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,
Veer : Huhh???
Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.
"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."
Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.
Veer : These guys...
Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,
Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??
Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!
Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.
Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.
Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.
Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.
Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.
Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.
Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.
Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*
Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.
Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.
Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.
Usse dekhte hi...
*Ding*
[Name : Zoey Clarkson
Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.
Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]
'I see!!!'
Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.
Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.
Mike : And who are they?
Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.
Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.
Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.
[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]
'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'
[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]
'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'
[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]
'Good job!!!'
Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.
Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.
Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.
Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.
Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.
Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.
Mike ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.
Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi Jaa rahi thi.
Ye ek boht badi baat thi.
Emma : So? What are we gonna do?
Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.
Emma : What do you mean?
Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.
Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!
Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.
Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.
Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.
Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.
Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.
Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...
Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.
Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!
Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.
"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."
"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."
"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"
"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."
"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"
"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."
"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."
"Good luck!"
Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.
[Maaasterrrr~]
Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,
'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'
[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]
Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.
Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????
Ronnie : Seems like it.
Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?
Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3 se 3:30 tak ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.
Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...
Maut!!!
Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.
Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?
Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?
Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.
Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.
Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???
Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.
Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?
Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.
Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.
Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.
Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!
Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.
Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.
Zoey : Alright!
Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.
Ronnie : Okay!
Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?
Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.
Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.
Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.
Veer : Which one?
Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!
Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!
Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.
Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike karne se rok rahi thi. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.
Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.
Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,
Mike : You are not going with them?
Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.
Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.
Veer : !!!???
Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.
Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.
Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.
Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.
Veer : Hmm?
Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.
'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'
[Yeah!!!]
Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.
'Ohhhh~'
Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.
'Hmm? That's weird!'
[Room number?]
'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada hona chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur hi tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'
[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]
'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'
Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.
[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]
'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'
[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]
'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'
[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]
'Naah!!!'
Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.
Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.
Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.
Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.
Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.
Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.
Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...
'These are weird!! Check!!!'
*Ding*
[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]
'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'
[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]
'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'
[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]
'Wese...'
[Hmm?]
'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'
[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]
'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'
[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]
'Kaash....!'
Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.
Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.
*Ding Dong*
Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.
Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.
Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?
Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.
Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.
Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.
Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!
Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...
"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"
Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad! Like thokne ka aur comments karne ka. Matlab revos chhaapne ka.
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Suhana investigation me kuch khaas madad nahi kar sakti. Kyuki wo uska forte nahi hai. Uska kaam ye sab nahi hai. Investigation me Divya maahir hai. Nik se bhi zyada.
Ye sirf Divya hi nahi, koi nahi jaanta
Ek mard ne usse daboch ke acche se bajaaya hai. Mardo se chidhti hai woh. Kese chup baithegi woh?
Par kya Ragini succesful ho paegi?Ragini my fav
wo to ab veer ke Bina nahi reh shkti ....veer jab aayega wo to tut padegi or apna pyar jarur lagi...
Thanks a lot man!
Keep supporting!
Okay! To sabse pehle main ye batana chahungi ki Sir...
Mujhe pata tha update late aaega.
Taunt nahi kar rahi hu... Bas main bata rahi hu...
To mne pehle hi around 11 pe alarm laga diya tha 2 baje ka.
I can agree to this. Yes delivering goosebumps to your readers is a tough job.Mazak nahi kar rahi hu. I legit got goosebumps...
Writer easily humour daal sakta h story me, sad scenes daal sakta h. Par mere according toughest thing
Sab ju logo ke liye hi toh karta hu. Taaki ju logo ka experience badha saku reading karte waqt.Ye mere according bohut hi tough cheez hoti h achieve karne k liye. For that... Hats off Sir!!!Aap itni mehnat kar k ye sari pic edit karte ho, hamare liye banate ho. Aap k jesa itna dedicated writer mne nahi dekha yaha. Stories to sabhi likhte h, par
(Porn wale gif ki baat nahi karungi main...
No they didn't saw him getting die. But they did know he was killed. Because they saw Nightwalker after that. Toh you can assume ki Nightwalker ne Connor ko maara aur fir uske haath se camera liya, jiske chalte uska face camera me aaya. And then he delivered the video to the investigation department. Wo ye bata raha tha ki mere ilaake me ghusoge toh yahi hoega. Open challenge bhi tha ye ek prakaar se.Hmmm... Continuing...
Connor bhi maara gaya. Ye sab ho kya raha hai baba?Pehle bechara Daniel aur ab connor? Aur video me zaroor nik and divya ne kuch horror dekha h. Something really terrifying. Maybe Connor ki death live dekhi ho.
Next update me pata lag jaega.because connor ne video me kaha tha ki... He will kill one of us. We are being watched... Kuch aisa hi kaha tha usne. Dark web!!!! I'm guessing someone is watching them getting killed live...
You are right. Iske pehle Nightwalker ke baare me woh nahi jaante the. Suhana got scared because of that scary mask.
Aur ye connor ko waha ka address kese mila?
Yes! Jim gave the details about those cards. Connor purchased one and went to island. But got killed. Veer and Mike are on the run now. Jim Nightwalker ko hi kyu jaanta hai? Maybe others are way too above him that they don't even consider Jim to be one of them. Thus, only Nightwalker knows about Jim? You can deduce that. Juhi sabki pyaari hai.Leaving that... Juhiiiiiiiii!!!!My cutest little darling!!! I just love her sooo muchhh!!!!
She's the best!!! THE BEST!!!
Jab usne kaha ki wo nana ji ki tarah nakli new new daat lagwa legi... I laughed so hard...
main bhi bachpan me aisa hi karti thi. Meri nani ji ko nakli daat lage hue the. To main puchti thi mummy se ki ye nani ke daat kese nikal jaate h???
juhi ne mujhe bachpan ki yaad dila dii. So cute
Next Ragini ji!!! She's missing Veer!!! Aur karlo uske jaane se pehle kuchi kuchi kuu...
Kya zarurat thi uss time karne ki? Arre baba jab aa jata Veer tab kar leti. Ab jhelo...
Suman ko shayad sab pata lag chuka h... Aur wo I think Shweta k baare me bhi janti h...
she might have seen shweta going in Veer's room!!!! Righttttt????
Exactly!Hmm... Niharika... ABhi bhi ego me h... She thought she was a dominator but baby you are wrong. You were the submissive female since the beginning. You just didn't know about it....
One question... What is this keylogger??? Niharika ne kaha ki keylogger install kiya h Veer k phone me... Is it some type of app??? Wait!!! Is it for hacking???? Omggggg...
boht dimaag chal raha hai ju ka... Yes! I cannot show Everything in one update.Ant me apne abhi Arohi kavya kaera sonia inka scenes nahi dikhaya h... Par ek update me sab kuch dikhana impossible h... Fir bhi apne kaafi alag alag jagah k scenes dikhaye... For that I really appreciate you.
Iss arc me ek suprise milne wala hai boht jald.I'm waiting for Tejal's approach. Kese wo Veer ko search karegi. Arohi's time with Veer. Final villian ki koi jhalak ...Suhana ka past... Ava ka appearance
And tons of other things...
Aaj k liye bas itna hi guys...
likes thokne ka aur comments karne ka...
sorrrrryy I copied your style... Jab yaha kaafi dusre writers ye kar sakte h to main kyu nahi???
boht masti soojh rahi hai aaj kal haan? 
Thanks a lot dear for such a massive review. Dil se apni baat likhti ho. Yahi toh mujhe khush karta hai. Bas yahi toh chahiye ek writer ko. Keep supporting just like this.Next update ka wait h ab Sir... Safe rahiye... Health par dhyan dijiye. Aur aise hi likhte rahiye ... Hum sabhi aap par acche acche comments ki varsha karte rahenge...
Take care...
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Apun hai hi creative.The last picture which you drew of WANTED is superb. It shows your Amazing creativity
Indeed! Kingu apna bestest hai...Every author needs a reviewer just like you
Apni baat honestly rakhne ke liye thanks man! Haan ho sakta hai ye utna khaas na raha ho. Kyuki alag alag jagaho ka zikr tha isme. Flow change hua narration ka harr jagah alag alag scenes me. Toh ho sakta hai baaki updates se ye neeche laga ho. Par alag alag jagah ke scenes dikhana bhi zaroori tha yaha. Readers ko ye pata lagte rehna chahiye beech beech me ki mumbai me baakiyo ke saath kya ho raha hai.
Juhi se kaun pyaar nahi karta!?
Indeed!
Thanks man! Keep supporting as usual!
Yahi toh sawaal hai bada.
Sochiye sochiye...Jab PD honhaar ho aur pehle bhi department se judi hui ho. Toh department dubaara unki madad lene se nahi katraega. Haan wo sab govt. ke andar aata hai aur PD govt. Sector se bandhe hue nahi hote. Par department ke paas poori authority rehti hai. Wo jab chaahe Nik aur Divya ko case se baahar nikaal sakte hai. Par yadi kisi ki madad mil hi rahi hai toh kyu na le madad? Khaaskar kab case itna mushqil aur khatarnak hai.
Nightwalker is the protector of the treasure and the Mansion. Abhi tak toh yahi saamne laga hai. Naya update padhna padega uske liye aapko.
Iss sawaal ka uttar mein pehle de chuka hu. Par fir bhi ek baar aur de deta hu.
Divya ne unhe sirf aur sirf 3 kaaran se bulaaya hai.Pehla ye ki usse ek emotional support chahiye tha iss crisis me. Jo ki uski sabse khaas dost Suhana hi usse de sakti hai.
Dusra ye ki Suhana ke muh se usne Veer ki baate sunit hi. Aatish aur Slogan se woh familiar thi. Toh Veer ko aazmaane ke liye usne Suhana ke sang usse bulwaaya.
Teesra kaaran hai... Update 93 ki ending padhiye.
Usme hi hint hai.Aapka matlab Suman devi?
Dekhte hai woh kya karti hai.Hmm ye dekhne laayak hoga.
Dekho kya hota hai...Boht boht dhanyavaad Sanju bhai!!!
Bane rahiyega saath me. Keep supporting!