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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Jabardast update.
Idhar to beta ek numbri to baap dus numbri nikla.
Hats off to your commitment.
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भावनाओ मे बह कर आपने तो कांड ही कर दिया, ससुरा राणा की रीढ की हड्डी ही तोड़ दिये । बहुत ही सुंदर तरीके से आपने शेहदेब और जोगिंदर के प्रथम भेंट को दर्शाया है । जिसमे हमें जोगिंदर की ईमंदारी और बहादुरी देखने को मिली, और साथ ही साथ शेहदेव और उनके साथियों का एक भयाभह रूप भी देखने को मिला, अप्रतिम ।
अंश के मध्य मे आपने किसी लड़की कर वर्णन किया जो कुछ दिनों से सही से खाना नही खा रही है, एक तरह से किसी अवसाद (depression) मे है । अगर मेरा सोचना सही है, तो हो ना हो.... ये युवती वोही रीचा है, जो अपने घमंड और राज के प्रति अविश्वाश के कारण उसपे घिनौना इलज़ाम लगा बैठी थी । और अब राज का दिया हुआ सबूत उसने देख लिया होगा । खैर उसकी ये हालात, उसके ही कर्मो की सज़ा है ।
अभी फिल्हाल राज को सम्हालने के लिए उसके बहने और एक निष्छल् अथाह प्रेम करने बाली प्रेमिका... सोनाली है उसके पास...
एक अद्भुत और रोमांचक अंश था बंधु । ऐसे ही लिखते रहे । आपकी लेखनी आपका पहचान बन चुकी है ।
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Bahut acha
Hota h bhai agar aap Diya tho..
Sandeep singh nirwan Kayeko nhi hota bhaya tumko agar itihas banane ka hai to aisi tel maarkar update tyaar rakho ki padhne walo ki gandiya phat jayejokes apart,kisi ne diya to n tu de de bhaya uppar heading me likhio Megha update with double dhamaka
sorry haa Jumbo Update name de dena chal jayega
And haa mai update 69 baad me padhta college se aake man
Take care......
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Thank you for precious warm energetic detailed lovely review's
apke pyar aur sath se hum Raj ka safar bahut dur le jayenge ...Aswathama bhai sahdev aur jogindar singh ne kaand toh aur bi kiye the. Jo ab story ke end phase mai he khulenge... Aur bilkul wo richa he h jo sach jaan gayi h abi raj kuch sambhal gaya h sonali h deepika h sunil h shweta h par wo uske pass koun h .... Wo akeli h... Par future mai dhekte h ki kya hota h.
Hiran bhai hypothetical answer smart buddy..
shukriya sanki bro thanks for support kosis rahegi aise update ki...
arjun bhai and shek bhai kosis rahegi har update aur behtrin karne ki...
again thank you so much
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Thak u itni mehnat ke liya aur update mi d blowing hai waiting for next update
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लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere
Fabulous
Bhai dhil kush hogaya laa jawab update he
Bahut bahut Dhanyawad ap sabke besumaar pyar aur sath ke liye
Meri taraf update apko regularly he milenge by chance he aisa hoga ki update na aye
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Super power showtime bro relly nice.
Rocking Update and super learning method.Update 29
Turnament Day 2 Thunder begins
Recap--- pichle update mai apne dhekha ki suddenly richa ka behaviour badal gaya h wo pyar mainpadh chuki h aur Raj aur richa ne pyar ke behad haseen pal sath bitaye h toh wahi sonali bi turnament mai raj se mil chuki h aur raj bi turnament jeet chuka h aur jeved aur ravi ko bata diya h ki jo shuru huva h wo khatm main karunga toh dusri taraf jaggu ke 50 bande uski fielding laga chuke h aur raj in sab se bekhabar apni jeet ki khusi main khus h toh sonali ke khabri ne last moment pe khabar de di h aur sonali bina taiyari ke he bike utha ke nikal chuki h
Ab agai.
Kuch half hour pahle sonali ki baat hone ke
Main – sir laddu le lete h desi gheeke sab khus ho jayenge
Pti sir –ha ha jarur jarur aj toh jo Raj bole
Main ni sir agar ap participate ni karwate toh kaise hota ye
Hum aise he baat karte rahe aur laddu 5 kg pack karwa liye the
Main—sir aj mousam itna thunder wala ho rakha h jaise ki asman bahut gusai mai ho
Pti- muskarakar wo tumhari jeet ki khusi mana rahe h chalo ab jayda late ho jayenge hum warna
Main-- ji sir chaliye warna purai raste he bheegna padega
Gunda—bhai wo abi nikal raha h bike se 2 jane he h ek budha sa admi h uske sath bus aur koyi ni h...
Jaggu – tikh h piche he rahna aur utha ke adai pe le aana aur samne bi inform karde taki woh hishiyar rahe aur koyi chook na hone paye... main drugs lene ja raha hu carodo ki h koyi risk ni le sakte h ab hum addai pe he mlenge...
Gunda –ji bhai hum sambhal lenge aur usai utha lenge ap befikra rahe bhai...
Gunda jor se picha karo sale ka chote bhai ko mara tha na aj dhekhte h isai chalo re..
Ye sab huva tha thodi dair pahle
Ab current time hum 2 km he aye the ki barish shuru ho gayi aur hum dheere dheere bike chala rahe the kyoki pahadi ilaka h isliye dhyan rakhna padta h kanhi landslide na ho jaye par hume kya pata tha ki agai hamre intezar mai 50 log ghath laga ke baithe h aur thunder apne charam par pahuch chuka tha aur lagatar bijliya kadak rahi thi...
Idhar
Sonali full speed se bike chalate huve arahi thi usai na thunder ki chinta thi na apni maut ki usai bus chinta thi toh raj ki usai raj ki sakal aur uski baat yaad arahi thi jo usne thane mai kahi thi jane se pahle “dubara is jindgi mai hum kam se kam aise toh na mile”uski yahi bate dimag mai chal rahi thi aur wo bolti ja rahi thi main galat ni hu raj bus mulakat hamari galat huvi thi ...hum ache dost banege main tumhare pe uthne wale sare hath kaat dalungi...aur usne bike city ki bahar ki aur mode li rafter phir se tez ho gayii thi uski....ab bus kuch he minto ka fasla bacha tha jo sonali ko bahut lamba lag raha tha wo har kosis kar rahi thi jaldi pahuchne ki
Hum jaise jaise agai badh rahe the thunder aur horrible hota ja raha tha hum abhi 10km aye honge ki bich raste mai pather gire huve the aur uske agai thodi dur suv khadi thi hame laga kuch huva na ho hum utar ke agai gaye toh sab tikh laga par car mai koyi ni tha ye sochne wali baat thi hamne idhar udhar dhekha bi par koyi ni dikha aur jaise he hum vapis bike start kar agai badhne wale the hume 50 logo ne gher liya.......
Main—shanti se unhe dhek raha tha bina kisi expression ke
Pti sir—koun ho tum log kya chahiye h aise rasta kyo roka h
Samne se meri taraf anguli utha ke ishara kar diya
Main—main chahiye tumhe kyo bhai maine kounsi tumhari biwi ko cheda h jaisi teri sakal h na us heesab se tuje koyi milni he ni chahiye thi aur mil gayi h toh main soch bi ni sakta wo kaisi hogi .....toh main toh sapne mai na chedu teri lugayi ko saand..
Gunda --- bol le jitna bolna h jab jaggu bhai ke samne jayega na toh bolti band ho jayegi tab fadfadata rahna...
Main --- oh toh tu jaggu ka admi h .ek baat bata jaggu ke itne sare admi kaise ho sakte ho kaise sah lete h tum saando ka wo tumhara jaggu aur tum sale admi ke admi bane kisi aurat ke admi hote toh acha hota pata ni logo ke ajkal ajeeb he shok ho gaye h..
Gunda 2-- ladke jaban ko lagam de ni toh mera sabra tut gaya toh bemaut mara jayega
Main—dheere se pti sir se mila liya kya phone ya hamare marne ke baad milaoge ye bhadak rahe h jaise sach mai main inki biwi leke bhaga hu
Pti sir – yaar kosis kar raha hu network ni araha h
Main toh kya option bacha h ab ladenge hum aur marenge ya marainge par bagodo ni banege
Hum dono ne gardan ha mai sahmati milayi aur maine kaha dair kis baat ki aa jao maine bike ki chain sur silencer tod ke nikal liya chain de di pti sir ko aur silencer mere pass tha hum bi taiyar the bheedne ke liye ..gundai samne se chalte huve arahe the aur kuch ne hame piche se bi gher liya tha
Maine kaha 50 ke samne hum 2 maza ayega aur jaise he main agai bhada ..tabi ek bike hamare upar se udti huvi gayi aur jo gundai hamari taraf arahe the unke bich mai giri aur ek round circle ghumi jisai arahe gunde takrate huve sare niche gire aur bike ko sidha kar un baki gundo ki taraf uchal di aur jump markar niche utri 2 ni 3 h hum
Maine usai dhekha aur mera mu se nikal gaya sonali matlab flower samja kya fire hu mai fire aur usne muje dhekha uski entry kya he shandar thi uske chehre pe ek muskan thi aur mere chahre par bi usai dhek agayi thi ....maine agai kaha ek thunder upar h uski bijli banke hum tum par tutenge...ab ......dhekte h kiska kahar kitna hota h
Gunda – oh toh sonali madam bi ayi h acha h teri jawani bi badi fudak rahi h maja ayega tuje bi le chalenge hum aur tujse apni pyas bhujayenge ha ha ha
Sonali – tumhare bas ki na h tumse na hi payega ab bahut bhonk liya ajaa suwar ki aulad
Aur jaise he unmai se ek bhagta huva aya maine diya silencer sale ke sir par aur wo wanhi past ho gaya phir dusre wale ke mu par pada panch sonali ka uske mu se rasbhari foot padi phir pti sir kanha piche rahne wale the ankh band karke lage chain ghumne chahe kisi ke pade ya na pade par padi toh wo duniya se he nikal le idhar ek mere piche se muje par hamla karne araha tha uski hockey ko sonali ne hawa mai he pakad liya aur di uski chest pe kick jab sonali ki kick se main he gir pada tha toh wo bhaisab toh udte huve dur jake gire ab meri back aur sonali ki back apas mai chipki huvi thi aur dono ki ankho mai gusa tha maine silencer ghumya toh gunda jhuk gaya toh hatho hath diya ghutna uske mu pe sala gira niche phir sikencer agai wale 4 ki taraf fenk diya aur bhag ke samne 2 ki chest pe flying kick di aur 1 ke gale mai panch diya sans ana band ho gayi uski ham takkar toh le rahe the but unki tadat itni jayda thi ki ek mare toh ek taiyar tha ....sonali kisi bhuke sherni ki tarah tuti padi thi piche se kisi na uska gala pakad liya toh sonali ne hath se uske dono ando ko pakad ke itni jor se masala ki sayad foot he gaye honge main bi ghusa mai tha ab tak hum teeno ne 25 ko adh mara kar diya tha baki ke kuch ghayal the hum bi ghayal ho chuke the hame bi chot lagi thi hum bi thak chuke the kyoki ek ka waar rokegr do ka rokoge par ye itne the ki ek na ek waar hume lag he raha tha ....
Main – hanfte huve miss sonali ap toh sach mai behtrin fighter ho
Sonali – hmm....raj khusi h ki main tumhare kisi kaam ayi par ye kuch jayda he h fir bi khusi h ki jisne meri jaan bakhsi thi jisai mere police charector pe shak tha marne se pahle uski galt fahmi dur toh kar saki dubara hum ache dost jarur banenge
Main – hum itni asani se ni marenge sonali ji hum yanha toh katayi nahi marenge. meri jaan itni sasti ni h ki in jaise bi le sake abi apne jana he kya mere bare mai ......
.aur jaise he sabi hum pe hamla karne aye upar pahad se ek saya teji se Jump karta huva niche araha tha agai jo marne arahe the sidha unpe land huva uska chahra meri taraf tha jo full black ninja dress mai tha ek pal unke chahre se face mask hata jisai dhek mere chahre pe hansi agayi .....
Maine unke pair chuve aur bola
Main—pranaam sir
Samne se agar itno se he haar gaye toh kya naam roshan karoge mera tumhari strength tikh tikh h but stamina kam h abse tumhare stamina pe kam karna hoga
Main—maff kar dijiye sir main puri kosis karunga
Gunda abe oh ye kya drama laga rakha h aur tu sale koun h
Xabhi sir—main wo hu jo logo ke agai X laga deta hu jiska matlb h wo duniya mai nahi rahega ab tu tera gutter jaisa mu band rakh aur muje lesson dene de ha toh raj first ki tumhare hath mai hathiyar hona chahiye jo ki nahi h toh agar bande jayda h toh pahle ruko main demo dete hu ab dhekho muje..
Main – ek minut ek minut sir sonaliji ap aur pti sir ap baith jaiye live training ho rahi please h na try to understand aur ha enjoy the X show
Wo dono bus hum dono ko dhek rahe the ki ho kya raha h
Main-- sir suru kare
Xabhi sir – pahle hathiyar halka aur majboot hona chahiye jaise ye bhai inke pass rod h jo behad majboot h aur gunde bhai ap ruke kyo h hamla karo toh raj pahle majboot hathiyar apne kabje mai lo aisa sir ne uske side gale pe ke hath para wo jhuka toh uski ribs pe powerfull kick di aur bole ab ye agle 6 mahine tak aise he teda chalega chalo tumahari bari maine bi ek admi ke gale pe solid diya aur wo jhuka toh di full force ke sath kick wo toh na utha ...
Xabhi sir phir se karo maine phir wahi repeat kiya xabhi sir bole ha abki baar tikh tha practice se tikh ho jayega move.
Sare gundai pareshan ho gaye aur sir khujlane lage ki banchod ho kya raha h aur unmai se 3 ek sath aye toh Xabhi sir ne talwar nikali aur 3 second mai unke gale kaat diye aur bole jinda rahna h toh maximum 2 ek sath aasakte h
Bc gundo ki toh fat gayi ki itni sharp talwar ek he war mai 3 ke gale cut gaye the
Sonali ne piche se siti mari aur pti sir se bolipopcorn hote toh aur maza ata batao koyi madam ko log mar rahe h aur inhe popcorn khane h sala koyi cinema chal raha h
Phir ek sath 2 bhag ke aye marne
Xabhi sir bole close combat mai diversion ka use karo pahle ek ko divert karo kaise dhekho aise unhone niche gili meetti ek ke mu ki taraf uchal di aur dusre ke ghutne pe kick di wo girne wala tha ki side hatke uske chest pe kick di aur phir dusre ke piche gaye aur uski reed ki hadi pe ghutna mar diya ek sath 2 cheek ghunj uthi aur meri taraf dhek ke bole know your turn show what u learn .ab sala main kya he bolta bc man mai yahi duwa thi ki ashram main punishment na de de aj ki haalat dhek ke maine in bato ko jhatka jo dimag mai chal rahi thi aur gusai mai arahe dono ki taraf khichad uchala jisai wo dono bach gaye kyoki unhone isai pahle dhekha tha ki kya huva tha pahle. Wo dono jaise he sidha huve maine phir uchala jo laga ek ke mu pe main dusre ke ando pe kick di aur jaise he thoda niche huva meri laat sidhi uske gale pe lagi aur wo tut gayi dusre wale ko jiske mu pe khichad tha usai uthaya aur utha ke apne ghutne pe de mara ...
Xabhi sir impressive Raj ab suno jab tak tumahare samne wala jinda h wo tumhare liye khatra h toh jo aye uske hath pair tode bina usai halke mai mat lena aur jane se pahle saboot sare mita dena ye dhekho wo gaye ek ke pass uska hath toda phir pair aur chod diya aise he 10 ke sath kiya aur phir mujse bi yahi muje karwaya aur bich bich mai bata te rahe
Main – wao sir awesome sari training muje aisi he karni h aur maine bi baki bache huve ko todne morodne laga .
Xabhi sir --last lesson of the day information jarur le lo hamla karne walo se ki koun h kisne kiya kyo kiya
Main – koun h aur kisne kiya ye pata h kisliye kiya wo ni pata h
Sonali – sir main try karu
Xabhi sir – r u sure
Sonali – yes
Xabhi ok you have only one minut
Sonali what
Xabhi time starts know
Sonali – ne ek pathar ko hath mai uthaya aur gunde se pucha kisliye
Gunda silent
Sonali pather ko utha ke diya uski anguli pe phir dusri teesari chouthi sari anguliya tod di
Main – wo bol raha h
Sonali ---confirm
Main – ha
Gunda – isne jaggu ke bhai ko mara tha
Sonali ye toh muje pata h tu ye bata jaggu kanha milega
Gunda wo city mai drugs lene aya huva h ............
Xabhi sir kil them all aur sirf ek ko jinda chod do humne sabi gundo ko marker kise ke hath toh kisi ke leg cut kar diye the taki jaggu jab subhe ye breaking news dhekhe toh uski halat kharab ho jaye aur hame pata tha ki kal simla ka tempreture pura hot hoga...
humne rasta dhekha toh pura kharab tha pathar road pe gire huve the
Sonali---- ap log mere yanha ruk jaiyiye
Main--- ni sonali ji its ok
Sonali ---koyi dikat ni h chaliye ap sab mere sath main vaise bi akeli he rahti hu
Xabhi sir--- yahi sahi rahega Raj aj ke liye. humne apni bikes uthayi aur wapas chal diye city mai main sonali ke piche baitha tha aur mere hath uski kamar par the jo muje ek ajeeb sa ahsas de raha tha aur yahi halat uski bi thi muje sardi lagi toh main chipak gaya sonali se aur uski halat aur buri ho rakhi thi ab wo kamnpne lag rahi thi ab pata ni ye ki mere chipakne se kamnp rahi thi aur kisi wajah se ye toh usai he pata .....
Aj ke liye itna he .......
Enjoy aur apne precious arthath beskimiti sabd jarur likhe
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Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Choti chachi ji n bhi Sonali ko accept ker lia or Raj n bhi sonali k pyar ko accept ker lia jo bahot achchi baat h
Woh ladi jo doctor k hisab se depression m jaa rahi h woh Richa hi hogi jab use Raj k baare m sachchayi pata chali hogi tow
Tow sweta k pta ji bhi Raj k pita ko achchi tarah se jaante h Sahdev ji bade hi khaternaak thai itne khaternaak aadmi ko marne k liye koyi apna khaas n hi dboka dia hoga nahi jiss aadmi Rana ki poori saltanat ek jhatme khatam kerdi use itni aasani se nahi mara jaa sakta tha
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Choti chachi ji n bhi Sonali ko accept ker lia or Raj n bhi sonali k pyar ko accept ker lia jo bahot achchi baat h
Woh ladi jo doctor k hisab se depression m jaa rahi h woh Richa hi hogi jab use Raj k baare m sachchayi pata chali hogi tow
Tow sweta k pta ji bhi Raj k pita ko achchi tarah se jaante h Sahdev ji bade hi khaternaak thai itne khaternaak aadmi ko marne k liye koyi apna khaas n hi dboka dia hoga nahi jiss aadmi Rana ki poori saltanat ek jhatme khatam kerdi use itni aasani se nahi mara jaa sakta tha
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai