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Fantasy 🗼 TOWER OF GOD

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Frnd's mere family me koi off ho gaya hai. So mujhe waha apni puri family ke sath waha jana hoga. Aur mai aise jagah ja kar ab Update to likhne se raha so ab new Update kab tak aayega mai abhi kuch bata nahi skta hu.
 

Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE - 01


AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


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WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
 
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Xabhi

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UPDATE - 01


AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


images-3
WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Rider aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Rider ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Rider bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Rider ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Rider ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Rider !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Rider hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Rider kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Rider aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Rider agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Rider sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Rider. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
:congrats: for the new story Bhai idhar bhi rider naam rakh diya aapne, kya ye confusing nhi hoga ki same writer ki do story or dono me hi same naam ke hero... Bhai mujhe to Kai jagah confusing lagega...
Ek ladki nisha jo tower ke andar chali gyi hai dark world ko chhod kr vahi uska dost rider bhi Uski talash me tower ke andar aa gya hai uska pichha karte huye or 1st flore ka test dene vala hai taki vo aange ja sake... Superb update bhai sandar
 

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AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


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WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Zaberdast shuruwat bhai
Tow nisha jo dark chhod ker jaana chahti h isliye Tower m kahi gayab ho jaati h or uska dost use talashte talashte Tower k first floor per pahoch gaya ab use aage jaane k liye test dena padega tabhi woh agle padaw per qadam rakh payega
Dekhte h Ruhaan ooper tak pahochne k liye kaisi kaisi mushkilon ka samna kerna padta h
Badhiya shaandaar shuruwat bhai
 

Ajay

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UPDATE - 01


AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


images-3
WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Nice start Bhai
 

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JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


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WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


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Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Bahut he umdastart valentine bro akhir rohan ka pyar jo itna gahra h nisha se toh wo usai payega he payega....kyoki ye toh saaf h tower mai wahi tik payega jismai heemat h aur rohan ne ye sabit kar diya h ki wo nisha ke liye kuch bi karega........
 
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UPDATE - 01


AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


images-3
WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...
Huff... Huff... Huff...


Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


THUMP........

Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

Huff.... Hufff... Hufff.....

Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








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UPDATE - 01


AAP KYA CAHTE HAI ?

1. MONEY 💰AND WEALTH ?
2. HONOUR AND PRIDE ?
3. AUTHORITY AND POWER ?
4. REVENGE ?
5. YA KUCH AISA JO IN SB SE BHI PARE HO ?

JO BHI KUCH TUM CAHTE HO WO....


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WO YAHA HAI.
🗼 TOWER OF GOD ME.



TO CHLIYE SURU KRTE HAI....


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Ek bahut bade pahad ke bicho bich bane hue ek lambe raste pr Ek ladki bhagati hui us pahad me bani guffa ke ander ja rahi thi.
Uske hair sunahre color ke the. Usne black t-shirt ke upar red frock pahan rakhi thi. Aur usne apne kamar me ek dark Red color ka bada sa ribban bandha hua tha.


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Uske piche ek ladka bhagta hua ja raha tha. Ladke ne Red and Black t shirt nd gray color ki trouser pahni hui thi.
Ladke ka name Ruhaan aur lakdi ka name Nisha tha.
Wo use andar jane se rok raha tha. Lakin Nisha uski koi bhi baat sune bina bs ander bhagati ja rahi thi.
Kafi dur jane ke baad Ruhaan ke hath me uska ribban aa jata hai. Aur wo use pakd kr kuch deta hai.


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Ribban ke kichne se Nisha ko kuch ahsas hota hai. Aur jaise hi wo piche mud kr dekhti hai. Wo akdam se niche jamin pr gir jati hai. Aur Quki Ruhaan bhi kafi teji se Nisha ke piche bhag raha tha. Use bhi sambhalne ka mauka nahi milta hai. Aur wo bhi Nisha ke upar hi gir jata hai.

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Dono niche gire hue ek dusre ko hafte hue dekh rahe the.

Ruhaan ( Nisha se ) " Kaha.... "
" Kaha ja rahi ho tum ? "

Nisha phle to kuch der chup rahti hai fir kuch der baad wo kahti hai.

Nisha " Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Yaad hai ! Maine tmhe kya kaha tha Ruhaan ? "
" Mai bahari duniya me ja sakti hu, agr mai is Tower ke top pr pahuch gayi to. "
" Mai din me nila aasaman aur raat me stars dekh skti hu. "
" Isiliye.... Mai Tower ke upar ja rahi hu. "
" Mai is Dark world me rah kar paresan ho gayi hu. "

Itna kah kr Nisha waise niche lete hue hi mujhe gale laga leti hai.

Nisha ( mujhe gale lagaye hue smile ke sath ) " Mujhe maaf kr dena Ruhaan !! "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena.... "
" Mere bare me bhool jao. "
" Mujhe fir se paida hone do. "


FLASH.....

Nisha ke itna kahte hi wo apne aakhe band kr leti hai aur uske Body ke chro taraf ki jamin white color ki shine krne lagti hai. Jo dhire dhire aur bhi jyada increase hoti jati hai.

Mai ( Nisha ko dekhte hue ) " Nahi ! ... Nahi Nisha. "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please !! Aisa mat kro. "


CREAK......

Abhi mai itna hi kah pata hu ki hmdono se kuch duri par ek bhut hi vishal close door open hone lagta hai. Uske ander se bhi bs white light shine kr rahi thi. Ander ka aur bhi kuch nahi dikh raha tha. Us light ke shine ke karan.

Lakin mai in sb bato se bekahbar bs Nisha ki body ko pakde hue usase request kr raha tha.

Mai ( chilla kr ) " Nahi !! Mat jao Nisha. "
" Agr tum gayi... "
" ... To mai tumhara tb tak picha karunga jb tak ki mai mar nahi jata. "


THUDDDD........

Mere itna kah pate hi Nisha waha se ek light me convert ho kr us door ke ander chli jati hai. Aur isase phle ki mai kuch kar pata. Wo door bhi band ho jata hai.



1F-HEADSON's Floor


Mai kisi bade se room me jamin pr leta hua tha. Aur mai nind me hi sayad koi dream dekh raha tha.

Mai ( nind me hi apna right hath upar utha ke ) " Nahi ! Mat jao... "
" Mat jao Nisha. "
" Please ! Mat jao. "

Aur achanak se hi meri aakhe khul jati hai. Aur mai jag jata hu. Fir mai wahi jamin pr uth kr baith jata hu.
Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu. Ek bahut hi bada room tha. Uske ek side ke diwar me bhut hi upar mashale jal rahi thi. Jisase room me kuch prkash tha. Diwalo pr tarah tarah ke picture bane hue the. Kisi aadmi ke to kisi janwar ke.

Mai ( ye sb dekhte hue ) " Mai kaha hu ? "

Tabhi mere samne mujhe pink color ki ek light dikhti hai.

Mai ( light ki taraf dekh kr ) " Light ? "

Fir dhire dhire light aur bhi jyada badhte hue ekdam se gayab ho jati hai.


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Us andhere se se koi mere taraf chl kr aata hai. Jiske kadmo ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai. Abhi tk wo andhere se bahar nahi aaya tha to mai use dekh nahi pata hu.

Wo banda ( mujhe dekh ke ) " Oh !! Wow .... Bhut samay ho gaya jb yaha tumhare jaisa koi visitor aaya ho. "


SWOOSSS....

Mai apne back me chupa kr rakhe hue ek bade chaku ko bahar nikal kr apne hath me pakd leta hu aur usase kahta hu " k...kon hai waha ? "

Aur waha andhere me se ek mere hi jitna bada khargosh apne hath me ek bada si stick, jiske dono corner me do blue color ke circle shape me crystal lage hue the le kr aata hai.
Use dekh kr mai dar se piche ki taraf girte girte bachta hu.

Khrgosh mujhe dekh ke " Whoa ! Whoa ! Mai tmhe chot nahi pahunchaunga. "
( Apne stick ko gol gol gumate hue ) " Bhut samay ho gaya jb kisi visitor ne kud se ye gate khola ho. "
" Tower me tumhara swagat hai young man. "

Mai ( khrgosh ko dekh ke apne man me ) ' kya ye ek Monster hai ? '
' Kya Mai tower ke ander hu.... ? '

Khrgosh " Mera name Headon hai. Aur mai is Tower ke 1st floor ka Guardian hu. "
" Tmhara name kya hai, Young man ? "

Mai " Mera name 25th Ruhaan hai. Quki mai isi tarik ko paida hua tha. "

Headon ( apne thudi pr apna hath rakhte hue ) " Bolne ke liye kitna muskil name hai. "
" Well !! Fir mai tumhe Ruhaan kahunga . "
" Ab ye sunane me bhi acha lag raha hai. "
" So Mr. Ruhaan aakhir aap yaha kaise aa gaye ? "

Mai " Ohh !! "
" Actually mai yaha ek ladki ke piche aaya tha. "
" Kya yaha se ek blonde hair wali ladki nahi gujri hai ? "

Headon ( sochte hue ) " Ohhh !!! Ek blonde hair wali ladki. "
" Hmmm.... "

Mai " To tmne use dekha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe pata hai wo kaha gayi hai ? "

Headon ( fir se sochte hue ) " Well... "

Mai " please mujhe batao. "
" Mujhe use dundhna hai... "


ZOOMMM......

Fir Headon apne stick ko hawa me ghuma ke upar ki taraf ishara krte hue kahta hai " Tumhare sare Jawab upar waha hai. "
" Mai tmhe bs itna hi bata skta hu. "
" Agr tum apne jwab aur us ladki ko pana cahte ho to. "
" Tumhe upar ki taraf jana hoga. "
" Cahe tum wealth , amarta, behisab power, Magical ability ya kuch mysterious jo kuch bhi dhundh rahe ho tumhe sb kuch waha upar milega. "
" Is duniya ki sari sacchayi, khusiya aur Glory sb wahi upar hai. "
" Ye Tower aisi hi jagah hai. "
" Lakin yaad rakhna ye ek bahut hi muskil aur dard se bhara hua safar hai. "
" Young man. "

Mai " Mai bs use dekhne ke liye koi bhi risk lene ko taiyar hu. "

Headon ( smile krte hue ) " Bahut khub ! Mujhe Tmhari himmat pasand aayi. "
" To chlo ek test lete hai ye dekhne ke liye ki tum tower me upar jane ke layak ho ya nahi. "

Mai " Ek test.. ? "
" Kis tarah ka test ? "

Headon " Is tower ke ander jaise hi tum kisi floor ke upar jaoge. "
" Waha tmhara ek test liya jayega ye dekhnne ke liye ki tum upar agle floor pr jane ke liye kabil ho ya nahi. "
" Agr tum wo test paas kr loge to tum agle floor pr ja skte ho. "
" Aur jo test liya jayega wo us floor ke guardian aur rulers log hi decided krgenge. "
" Haa ye to jahir si baat hai ki,jaise jaise tum upar next floor pr phuchte jaoge test ki difficulty badhti jayegi. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to , Mr. Ruhaan agr tmko aage next floor par jana hai to tmhe mere test ko paas Krna hoga. "
" Dekho ye 1st floor ka test hai. "


TAP.....

Aur Headon apna stick ko utha ke ek taraf ghuma deta hai. Jisme se white energy niklne lagti hai. Aur wo ek side diwar me ja kr sama jati hai.

RUMBLE.... BOOM....

Aur waha ka diwar ki jagah ek bahut bada lohe ki rod se bani hui diwar aa jati hai. Jiske andar ek bahut bada Monsters dikhayi deta hai. Jo ki koi fish type Monster tha aur wo pani ke andar tair raha hota hai. "

Headon " The ball. "

Mai ( surprise se ) " kya... Kya the ball ? "
" Aur ye huge Monster kya hai.. ? "

Headon " The ball ek simple test hai. "
" The ball , ye ek human ke size ke jitna bada gola hai. "
" Ise pop krne ke liye design kiya gaya hai jab tum ise bahut jor se maroge. "
" Is test ko paas krne ke liye rule bahut aasan hai. "
" Tumhe in lohe ke salakhon ko andar jana hoga aur Monster se aage nikalna hoga ya use harana hoga is bill ko pop krte hue. "
" Bs itna kro, aur tm test pass kr loge. "

Mai ( us huge Monster ke taraf isara krte hue ) " kya yahi wo Monster hai jise mujhe harana hai ? "

Headon " Tmne bilkul sahi kaha, yahi wo Monster hai. "
" Ye ek ' White Armored EEL' hai. Ye ek bahut badi fish hai jo tower se bahne wali shinsu energy me rahti hai. "
" Normally ye bahut sant swabhav ka rahta hai. "
" Lakin saal ke is samay , isne pichle kuch months se kuch nahi khaya hua hai. "
" To is samay ye bahut hi aggressive hai. "
" Kya tumhe isase dar lag raha hai ? "

Mai kuch nahi bolta hu. Bs us Monster EEL ki taraf dekhta rahta hu. To Headon wapas se apni stick ghuma kr mujhse kahta hai " Bhut bura hai. Agr tum is fish se dar rahe ho to. "
" Aise me tum is test ko kaise paas kroge ? Tum aage kaise ja paoge ? "
" Agr tm aise hi darte rahoge to tm us ladki ko kabhi bhi nahi dhundh paoge. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai use kabhi nahi dekh paunga. '

Headon " Ek akeli ladki is Tower ke ander. Mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi hai. "
" Sayad wo phle hi kisi bhukhi EEL ka khana ban gayi ho... Ya fir bure logo ke hatho kidnapped ho gayi ho.. "
" Lakin Mr. Ruhaan sant dimak se socho. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mai nahi cahta aisa kuch bhi ho. '

Headon " ye tumhare liye lagbhag namumkin hai is ball ko pop Krna. "
" Ye test dena tumhare liye suicide hi hoga. "
" Ye EEL bhut fast aur furtila hai is shinsu ke ander aur tum itne tej nahi ho ki tum isase bach kr nikal paoge. "
" Jaise hi EEL tmhe kha lega tum khtam ho jaoge. "
" Aise suicide karne se acha , mere khyal se tumhe ye sb bhool jana cahiye aur yaha se wapas ja kr apni life bitani cahiye. "

Headon mujhe itna sunata hai ki mai gusse me aa kr usase bs itna kahta hu.

Mai " mai use abhi isi waqt dekhna chahata hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur mai apne hath me wo bada knife pakde hue us EEL ki tarf bad jata hu.

Headon ( evil smile haste hue ) " Aapka Tower me swagat hai Mr. Ruhaan. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Nice and awesome update....
 
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