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*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'

Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

***

Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer
Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100

Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad! This update contains more than 4.7k words. Mega update ke kaafi nazdeek hai ye waala. Toh apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka aur apni sameeksha rakhne ka.

Fantastic update
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Werewolf bhai yeh review hai ki update

Bhai! Death Kiñg ke revos apne aap me updates hote hai. Ju bhi kuch seekho.

 

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Update - 69 ~ The Grand Banquet!
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Ab tak...

Intermediate Martial Art Skill!!!

Neeche price likha hi tha~

400 Points!

Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'

Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

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Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer
Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100

Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad! This update contains more than 4.7k words. Mega update ke kaafi nazdeek hai ye waala. Toh apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka aur apni sameeksha rakhne ka.

Sandar update maja agaya

 

[hunter49g]

Intezar...

 

[Werewolf]

No One Cares About You Being Second”... Well, that's true, It's a fact which can be depressing for some people just like Sonia in the story but that's the truth... Being second sometimes makes you feel worse than failing in a task!

Yes! Exactly! And on top of that you are bound to be compared with the first taker. You cannot avoid it no matter what.

Sonia ke saath bhi aisa hi kuchh hua, Kaera ko sirf ek baar harane ki chaah mein wo apni life kharaab karti jaa rahi hai, or should I say karti jaa rahi thi because After Veer saying that “For me, you and Miss Kaera are equal”, things will change for Sonia...

Yes! Because no one has ever said that to her. This is what her inner self wanter to hear that she's equal to Kaera. And Veer just fulfilled her wish.

Shayad bachpan se hi Sonia comparisons ki shikaar rahi, har baat mein use Kaera se compare kiya gaya, chahe wo beauty ho ya studies ya fir kuchh aur... Aur ek gehra impact pada Sonia par is cheez ka, dheere - dheere uske man mein ye cheez baith gayi ke use khudko Kaera se better saabit karna hai... That time when she scored more than Kaera, although Kaera was ill at that time! Wo waqt shayad sabse kathin raha hoga Sonia ke liye, pehli baar use wo khushi mehsoos huyi jo use chahiye thi par kuchh hi palon ke liye... I think in future Kaera ko us baare mein pata chal sakta hai & That could have an impact on their “forgotten” friendship.

Yeah! Future Kaera kya karti hai Sonia ke saath ye Veer pe majorly depend karega. Kyuki, wo dono hi ab Veer ke peeche hai.

But of course, Veer ke liye Sonia aur Kaera dono hi barabar hain, at least ab tak to yahi sach hai... Of course Kaera is something else, Either its appearance or brain, she has been trained like a robot to function that good... Let's see ke Kaera aur Sonia ki friendship dobara zinda kab aur kaise hogi... Definitely jabtak Veer Kaera ko life ka paath poora nahi padha deta, tab tak ye hona thoda mushkil nazar aa raha hai... Aur inki teesri saheli Ava urf Natalia bhi aage picture mein aa sakti hai...

Nat ko aane me, abhi samay hai.

Jaisa ke Update 67 ke ant mein Veer ko mission mila tha to take Sonia on a date, wo iss update mein poora hua and as a reward use 600 points mile... Dheere dheere rewards ke taur par milne waale points badh rahe hain, because Pari is levelling up and of course expenditure bhi badh raha hai Veer ka points ke maamle mein... Limbo,Enemy Tracker and the one which was anticipated from some updates - Intermediate Martial Arts Skill, teeno ek hi update mein purchase kar li Veer ne aur end mein uske paas 200 points bache the...

Hmm! Jese jese level badhega, expenditure bhi badhega hi.

Limbo is one hell of a skill, matlab tod fod aisi jise saala koyi jod bhi naa paaye aur isi skill ke chalte Balhaar ab Veer ke kaam aane waala hai... Of course, wo jaakar hospitals mein try to karega hi par theek to hone se raha, to apna haath waapis salaamat karwane ke liye Veer ka kaha use maan na hi padega... This time around Veer is behind Slogan, not the vice versa as it used to be... Slowly, Veer is becoming a proper Baadshah kind of guy, of course he has a long way to go... But for the first time I felt like that yes he can be the exact person that Pari told him when she was activated for the first time inside Veer... Meanwhile, kaafi lambi journey cover kar chuka hai Veer in 68 updates mein, definitely abhi kaafi long story baaki hai ye but that Veer who was beaten brutally in the first update is behind a Crime Boss here, and that crime boss is trying to hide from Veer... That's kinda unbelievable thing, but when there's a Pari there's a way ...

Limbo is definitely great but it has it's shortcoming too. That is the reason why it was sold for just 300 points. You'll know soon!
This is called character development. Of course it's a bit slow but story is long so pace is perfect! Veer in update 1 VS Veer now.
He has come a long way. But the journey is long.

To, Balhaar ki information se jald hi Slogan ka kaam khatam hota nazar aa raha hai, I think firstly Steve and then Slogan, Veer se agli mulakaat dono ke liye aakhiri hogi..

Idhar doosra Villain, arthat Pranjal Saahab aka chhota kameena, uski kya planning chal rahi hai,ye to sabke saamne hi hai... But the question is how would he get the entire property? Kyonki usne Manorath ka bewakoof bana diya hai to of course use apna hissa to mil hi jaayega, but Aarohi ne apna Hissa Veer ko dene ki baat kahi, Bhumika ko shayad kuchh naa mile, and Veer ka khud ka bhi ek hissa banta hai... Vivek ko bhi kuchh naa Milne waala, I think... Aise mein Veer aur Pranjal mein most probably 50-50 ho sakta hai... Let's see Pranjal kya khichdi pakaye baitha hai ise lekar... But the interesting part was Brijesh coming to see Veer at the doctor's clinic! I don't know what to say about that... Kahin aage chalkar ye naa bolna pade ki yaar Brijesh utna bhi bura nahi, shayad uski bhi ek back story ho, I don't know, let's wait to get a clear insight of what he's upto...

He's preparing for something big.

In the end, Veer ka Intermediate Martial Arts Skill purchase karna Pranjal ko dhyan mein rakhte huye, next update can be a banger I think! Waise to Pranjal ka kaam Basic se bhi ho jaata shayad par dekhte hain Veer ne kya plan kiya hai...

Fighting skills are not for Pranjal. Uska kaam basic se hi ho jaega haha.

So, some questions here, pehla to Sonia ka matter, how she's going to handle this thing - “For me, you and Miss Kaera are equal”... Kaera ke mann mein kya chal raha hoga Sonia ke Veer ko hug aur Kiss karne ke baad... Karan ki friendship Veer ne accept kar li hai,. Let's see uska aage chalkar kya role hoga... Wahin sabse important matter filhaal ye property hi hai, Manorath kya faisla lega dekhna hoga aur Pranjal aur Veer dono ki hi planning kya hai ye bhi ek question mark hai... In the end, Nidhi, what she would be thinking after she saw Kaera with Veer, aur Shreya kidhar gayi, wo milne naa aayi Veer se??

Nidhi ke scenes jald hi dekhne ko milenge. Along with Shreya!

Dono hi updates bahut hi khubsurat the Werewolf bro... Especially that Sonia part was amazing, Uska un purane dinon ki yaadon mein kho jaana and then those tears, her reaction on Veer's thoughts, everything was just superb! Idhar Ek baar fir action sequence bhi badhiya tha, and of course how can we ignore that Veer ko threesome ka chaska lag chuka hai, afterall he has Aabha and Suman alongside him!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai!!
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Date with sonia...completed
Now ,ab time hai family k liye problem creat karne walo ko bakfoot par lana.

Veer sab kar lega!

Lot of things in a single update..... Great as usual.

It seems Veer is in a hurry. In a single update two skills acquired by Veer..a) Limbo Skill, b) Intermediate Martial Arts skill (a first in this story till now)

Abhi ke liye romance between Veer and Kaera as well as Veer and Sonia gaya tel lene. (Though I would have liked to see the romance getting developed a lot more)

Over all next update seems to be full of action. Pranjal ke liye bura lag raha hey!!!!!

Party me konsa action!? There won't be any action!

Ab kya batau update ke bare me jitna batau utana kam hai

Dhanyavaad bhai!

Jabardastt Updatee. Maza aagaya padhke.

Thanks bro!

Superb awsm update.
To gud luvdit
Plzz do cont asap takecare
And plz kuch scenes nidhi aur veer ke bhi dikhao eagerly waiting for some romantic and cozy moment from them

Nidhi aur Veer ke beech scenes jald hi aane waale hai. Dhanyavaad! Bane rahiyega!

Agressive Veer is good.

Of course!

nice update..!!
yeh kishor bol raha hai usne madat bheji hai lekin veer ko bachane nahi..bas veer ki mout ka tamasha dekhne..!! kisi ko bhi bura lagega, jealousy feel hogi agar uske bhai behen ko ghumne, firne ki permission ho aur usse ghar me kaid rakha jaye..yahi haal kaera ka tha isliye woh karan se jyada nahi boli..!! slogan ne photo jarur bheje hai veer ke lekin ab kaera ka mobile hai karan ke paas toh slogan ka photo bhejna ka idea flop hogaya..!!

Dhanyavaad bhai!
Kishor selfish hai thoda.
Anyways! Keep supporting!

 

[Vik1006]

Update - 69 ~ The Grand Banquet!
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Ab tak...

Intermediate Martial Art Skill!!!

Neeche price likha hi tha~

400 Points!

Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'

Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

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Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer
Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100

Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad! This update contains more than 4.7k words. Mega update ke kaafi nazdeek hai ye waala. Toh apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka aur apni sameeksha rakhne ka.

Shandaar update...

 

[Werewolf]

zabardast awesome maiendblowing update
so Sonia k 7 date mar hi li veer ne
suman or abha ko bhi bja li

shukr h k sex ko detail mai nahi likha warna mai bor ho jata dosro ka PTA nahi

Jidhar zaroorat padegi, keval udhar hi sex ko detail me likha jaega!

nice update..!!
veer ne apne legendary card ka use toh achhese kiya lekin pari chahti thi ki veer waha se bhag jaye lekin woh toh ladne laga..ek baar toh slogan ko bhi laga hoga ki uska ant honewala hai veer ke hatho lekin steve ke wajah se bach gaya..!! achha huva jassi, raghu aur karan timing pe aagaye..!! bhai bahot achha fight sequence likha hai aapne..!!

nice update..!!
arohi ka veer ke liye sad hona toh banta hai lekin woh kuchh bolna chahti hai lekin bol nahi paati..!! ragini aur veer bahot close aagaye hai aur shayad ragini veer se pyaar karne lagi hai..ragini ke liye yeh devar bhabhi ka rishta khatam hogaya hai ab sirf ragini veer se pyaar karna chahti hai..veer ko bhi jald hi samajh aayega..!! nidhi aur veer ke bich yeh awkwardness kab kam hogi..dono ko kab realize hoga jo dono ke dil me hai aur ab yeh kaera ko gale laga dekh kar fir naraj hogi nidhi..!! sonia ka toh naraj hona banta hai veer ko aise kaera ke sath dekh kar kyunki sonia pehle hi kaera aur uske bich honewala comparison bardasht nahi kar paati aur ab woh veer ko like karne lagi hai aur fir kaera bich me aayegi toh uska bhadkna toh banta hai..!! sonia ko veer hi achhese samjha sakta hai ki sonia uske liye bahot important hai..!!

Thank you so much bhai!
Nidhi aur Veer. Bhai rishta hi aisa hai. Student teacher ka. Upar se umr ka gap. Dono ke beech inn do deewaaro ko tootne me samay toh lagega hi.
Kherr, bane rahiyega yaara!

प्रिंजल तो गयो .
वीर उसे छोड़ने नही बाला.
लजबाब update था भाई

Dhanyavaad bhai!

Wow ek aur interesting update mazedar hain bhai maza aa gaya. Lekin Har baar lodey lagne waley hi mission mil rahey hain ghareeb ko. Ab ek date Sonia ke sath. Lekin us ka Kiya Karey Sonia pat to gayi hain magar set nahi हो Rahi.
Waisay story me jo beech beech me pari n Veer ko nok jhok hoti hain uska koi jawab nahi mast icing on the cake hain.

Pari aur Veer ki nok jhok ki alag hi baat hai.
Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting!

nice update..!!
sonia ko bura lagna toh banta hai kyunki bachpan se usse kaera se compare kiya gaya hai aur jab sonia bachpan me kaera ko as a friend accept kiya uske baad hi kaera ne usse sampark tod diya aur sonia ke maa ne bhi bola ki yeh tumhari behen hai iska khayal rakhna..toh sonia yeh bhi try kiya lekin usko kaera ne notice nahi kiya..aur ab uska sabse khaas dost ya pyaar kehlo usko bhi kaera ke paas dekh kar sonia ko gussa aana toh banta hai..kyunki kaera ke sath bachpan se ab tak kya huva hai yeh sonia ko nahi pata..!! aur iss jacket ne aur uss teddy ne aag me ghee dalne ka hi kaam kar diya hai..lekin veer ne sonia ko achhese sambhal liya..kyunki kuchh bhi hojaye sonia veer ke life me kaera se pehle aayi hai as a friend..!!

nice update..!!
veer ne enemy find karne ki skill se balhar ko dhundh liya aur limbo skill use kar ke usko jakhmi bhi kar diya..veer ne usse bas slogan ki information dene ka kaam diya hai lekin pehle woh jarur apna hath thik karne ki sochega lekin jab hath thik nahi hoga toh usse veer ka kaam karna hi padega aur veer ne usse lalach bhi diya hai slogan ki jagah dene ka..!! sonia ke dil me toh veer ne apne naam ki ghanti baja di hai..aur date pe bhi veer ne sonia aur kaera ko equal hi bataya toh sonia ka khush hona toh banta hai..ab dekhte hai sonia kab apne dil ki feelings share karti hai veer se..!! suhana ka veer ke liye sorry bolna shocking toh hai lekin achha hai..!! bhai aap nidhi ki behen shreya ko bhul gaye ho..bichari woh bhi veer se pyaar karti hai toh usko bhi thoda dkhao..!! yeh pranjal ne bahot natak kar liya ab uske natak se parda utne ka samay aagaya hai..ab dekhte hai veer kaise usko sabak sikhata hai aur sath uss harami vivek ko bhi..!!

Jii sahi kaha aapne. Ab yadi Balhaar ko apne qabze rakhna hai bina usse kaid kiye toh kuch toh karna padega. Yahi kaam Veer ne kiya. Limbo se haath toda. Aur ab Balhaar thak haar ke waapas Veer ke paas aaega. Anyways! Thanks a lot bro! Keep supporting!