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Dhanyavaad bhai!Waah bhai kya gjb ka update diya hai apne fight scene bhot achhi Dikhayi hai
Veer ke wajah se slogan ko bhi goli lagi ab dekna hai slogan kya karta hai
Dhanyavaad yaara! Jii haan, apni kuch pehchaan dena chaahta tha story me. Isliye Beowulf card banaya fir mene.Are yaar ek baar fir slogan bach gya veer ke itna karne ke bavjood bhi Jassi ne ek hi goli Mari ek do or Thok deta to kya bigad jata pr nhi vhi Kishor ke aadmi bhi nire chutiya type hi bas dekhte rhe btao aise hi securty karenge inke samne se 2 baar slogan bhag gya... Veer ki skill to awesome thi bhaya bhediyamanav ne apni hi skill veer ko card ke roop me de di... Dada ne rocket launcher se Kishor ka chauper uda diya Dekhte hai jb use pta chalega to kaisa react karega... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Arre bhai dhanyavaad!Super se bhi uper update the bro ... Kasm se mje aagae padh ke ... Kya likhte ho aap ... Awsm ...
Veer bhi koi super human nahi hai bhai! He's just a normal human with some skills. Thoda logically chalo bhai. Slogan Crime boss hai. Uske andar dherro aadmi hai. Wahi Veer akela. Bhala kese Slogan itni asaani se marr sakta hai? Aatish thodi hai bhai woh.YR SLOGAN KO MAAR HE DETAY AJE TO SLOGAN VEER KY TAKAR KA VILLAN NI HY YR VILLAN B KOI VEER KY JAISA HEE HONA CHAHIYA SUPER HUMAN TYPE BAKKI UPDATE BHADIYAA THA MAZA AGYA![]()
Fighting scenes toh abhi shuru hue hai bhai.Apki writing skill ke kya hi kehne itne achche se shayad hi koi explain kar paye abhi tak ke padhi sabhi stories me aapke action scene ki baat hi alag hoti hai Kamal kar diya bhai keep writing and so amazing update
Timing Card ki tab hi badhegi jab Veer ke stats badhenge aur jitna zyaada wo iss card ko use kar ke apne aap ko niyantran me rakhega. Card ki timing aur badh jaegi. But for now, Veer ki body jitna handle kar sakti thi uss hisaab se usse 25 minutes hi mile. Dhyaan rahe ki Veer chotil bhi tha pehle se hi.Ye timing badhao bhai is card ki,
Sala jab 2 min baki ka msg aya to aisi gaand fati ki jaise veer ki jagah main hi chudne wala hun.
Yes! Par time limit bhi uski condition ke hisaab se usse dii gayi thi. Wo pehle se hi chotil tha. Aise me aur zyaada derr tak wo Beowulf ko nahi sambhaal paata. Isliye 25 minutes hi mile usse.Card tow achcha mila lekin ager time ki validity thoda or ziada hoti tow Veer aaj sabko khatam ker dene wala tha or Slogan bhi mara jaata
Sahi time per jassy n Slogan k haath per goli chala di nahit tow aaj veer ka time poora ho jata
Baherhal dekhte h hosh aane k baad Veer ka kia reaction hote h
Badhiya bahot shaandaar tareeke k fight scene lika gaya padh ker maza aa gaya
Lajawab update bhai
Bilkul! Veer baazigar hi hai.एकदम से भौकाल मचा दिए हो। क्या कहते है - "हार के जितने वाले को बाज़ीगर कहते है।"
Read the description of the card again bro. I think tumne padha hi nahi. Card me ye kahi nahi likha ki Veer ki power badh jaegi. Uski keval agility, senses, healing badhi thi. Power nahi. Aur Slogan itni asaani se kese marr jaega bhaiItni power hone ke baad un gundo ko to maar hi sakta tha Veer phir bhi circus ke joker ki tarah idhar udhar kudta raha verna aaj Slogan ka kaam tamam ho jana tha. Ye saala Slogan Kishor ko chod kar Kiara ke peeche kyon pada hai, seedhe Kishor ko kyon nahi khatam kar deta. Veer to chutiya tha, hai aur rahega. Saala itni power home ke baad bhi chutiyon ki tarah pit ke aajata hai. Maza kharab ho gaya, har baar same story Slogan Kiara ke liya plan karega, Veer ko mission milega aur Veer apni marwa ke aajayega.
Who thinks like that? Ek baar me hi yadi Veer Slogan ko maar dega toh wo kaha se kaha na pohuch jaaye. Slogan akela banda thodi hai bhai. Uske saath dherro aadmi hai. Wahi veer akela. How can you expect Veer to fight them head on? Ye toh apni hi gaand marwaana ho gaya.
Steve ne Slogan ko bachaaya. Slogan wahi toh Steve ko nahi maarta.Jabardasttt Updateeee
Mujhe laga thaa last mein Steve mara jaayega Slogan ke haatho. Par saale bachh niklee. Par ek kaam achha hua Slogan ko ek goli toh lagi hai.
Idher kya Karan ko abhi bhi apne baap pe koi shakk nhi huaa. Kyoki usne toh kah tha ke usne help bheji hai. Par agar usne help bheji thi toh Veer pakda kaise gaya.
Dekhte hai ab Veer ka kyaa hota hai. Woh kaise sabko batayega ke uski aisi halat kise hui.
Thank you bhai!Bahut badiya bhai aap itni mehnat se stroy likh rhe hon hmre liye itna he buhut h.... zabardast action update bro
मेरे मित्र की बंदी..., बनी मेरी र*डी
सब कुछ मिल गया जहाँ मे..
बस अरमान है कहानी की अगला अंश पढ़ने की
Dhanyavaad! Famiglia arc update 66 se start ho jaega.Full of action scenes and I think this one is one of the best updates in this story till now....
Familial arc kab se suru ho gaya hey pata nahi chala.
Ye kuch zyaada ho gaya yaaraBhai bhai bhai full action even games of thrones fail.... Xcellent writing skill and... Hads off to you for your suspence and thiller.... Keep going.... And one request can you update... Story daily!!

Dhanyavaad bhai!Werewolf bhai you have just left me "Speechless"....
Bilkul ek hollywood movie mafik action packed update....![]()
Thanks a lot mate!Super से भी उपर वाला update है बंधु Werewolf, So today again Karan's luck was overpowered the strength of Veer, let see who many lives this cunning cat has.
Steve ne bacha liya...Or isky sath hi Slogan Bach gya veer k hath sy or aik or Hollywood movie ka action scene khatam howa bht khoob maza a gya