Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Ab tak...

Jassi ko churraate hi wo dono hi hotel baahar jab nikle the toh unki car par ek kaagaz chipka hua tha.

Ek note...

Jispar likha tha~

"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.
~ Tumhara Shubh chintak."

Ab aage...

Ek nayi subah thi, aur lagta hai Veer aaj kuch naye josh me bhi tha. Kal raat me hi usne Suman ko apne hi room me lita liya tha. Aur fir derr raat tak kya hua tha ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Iss waqt subah ke 7 ho rahe the aur Veer hamaara razaayi ke andar laita hua tha. Par itna hi nahi tha. Uske upar Suman adhnangi uski chhaathi par apni badi badi chuchhiya tikaaye laiti hui thi.

Aankh khulte hi Veer ko sabse pehle Suman ka komal sa chehra nazar aaya. Unn khule baalo me wo badi hi pyaari lag rahi thi sote hue. Saath hi saath chehre par wo nikhaar bhi jhalakne laga tha Suman ke jo aksar shadi shuda aurato ke chehro par jhalakta hai.

Veer usse dekh muskuraaya aur usne Pari ko sleep mode me daal diya. Shayad kal raat ki kasar abhi bhi poori nahi hui thi.

Pyaar se uske sarr par haath ferrte hue usne Suman ko jagaane ki koshish kii aur kuch hi derr me Suman uth bhi gayi.

Suman : Mmm... Maalik!?

Veer : Uth gayi?

Suman : Hmm~

Veer ne apne ek haath ko dheere se uske peeche le jaate hue uski kamar par firaaya. Aur fir neeche ki orr karte hue uske chutado ko zorr se jakad liya.

Suman : Nnnn~

Sehlaate sehlaate Veer ka khud ka hathiyaar bhi tann chuka tha. Aur Suman samajh chuki thi ki isko shaant bhi ab ussi ko karna hoga.

Kal raat Veer ne saara ka saara paani apna Suman ki choot me hi chorra tha. Uski Sex protection skill on thi toh usse pregnancy ki baat ki koi parvaah hi nahi thi. Wo jee bhar ke Suman ki chut me jhadta aur uski phuddi maarta.

Apne Maalik ke ishaare samajhte hue Suman ne forun hi jhukte hue Veer ke hathiyaar ko kuch jhatke maare aur usse apne muh me bhar liya.

Ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi ki Veer ka lund raat bhar ki chudaayi se poora sana hua tha. Wo saaf nahi tha. Par uske bawajood, Suman ko jese koi parvaah nahi thi.

Veer : Ohhhh! Fuckkkkk~

Veer ki nazro me aaj tak wo jitni bhi aurato se mila tha ya ladkiyo se, Suman ab tak ki sabse zyaada kinkiest aurat thi. Aur sabse bade than waali bhi.

Aur wahi aurat uski slave thi. Uski raand, uski rakhel, uski daasi. Wo uski sab kuch thi. Siwae ek patni ke.

Ye auhda kabhi bhi Suman ko praapt nahi hone waala tha. Ye baat wo khud jaanti bhi thi aur chaahti bhi yahi thi. Uska kehna tha ki meri jagah keval maalik ke perro me hai, unke bagal se khade hone ke liye mein nahi, unki aane waali biwi hogi.
Mein toh hamesha unke perro par hi rahungi.

Kayi baar toh Veer bhi uski baatein nahi samajh paata tha.

Suman : Unmm.... *slurp* sssssss....nfu... *lick* nmuu... *chu* fuuha...

Veer : Ahhh! Shitttt!!!

Veer se Suman ke hontho ki zorrdaar chusaayi aur na sahi gayi aur usne Suman ko paltaaya aur seedhe uski chut par apna hathiyaar lagaate hue kuch dhakko me hi andar uski bacchedaani tak pel diya.

Aur kuch derr Veer bas iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob kar Suman ki nangi chuchhiyo par hi lait gaya.

Veer : Ah! It's so good! Tumhari chut itni garam kyu hai Suman.

Suman (smiles) : Harr chut andar se garam hi hoti hai Maalik. Aap bujhaaiye na iski aag. Isse thanda kariye na maalik.

Veer : Karta hu, thoda chut ki garmaahat toh mehsoos karne do mujhe. Bhatti ki tarah aarrrghh.... Ekdum garam hai. Damn!!!

Suman : Aahhh! Ssss~ Maalik!! Ab aur mat tadpaaiye.

Veer : Karta hu. Par pehle ye doodh toh pee lu.

Kehte hue Veer ne Suman ke thano ko muh me bhar liya aur uske nipples ko chaba chaba ke unme se doodh nikaalne ki koshish karne laga. Subah subah hi Veer aur Suman ka chodampatti ka khel shuru ho chuka tha.

Suman ne kayi baar mana bhi kiya tha ki subah subah sex na kiya jaaye. Warna aise me saara din Veer ko thakaan avum kamzori hi mehsoos hogi.

Par Veer ko koi fiqr nahi thi. System jo tha uske paas. Wese hi uski recovery tezz thi. Aur ab usse inn choti moti baato ki tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Wo jab chaahe sex kar sakta tha.

Acche se doodh ko choos lene ke baad jab Veer ne dhakke lagaane shuru kiye toh Suman ki siskiyo ki awaaz uske kamre me goonjne lagi. Harr dhakke par uska bistar charar marar ki awaazein karne lagta . Aur harr dhakke ke baad Suman sihar ke reh jaati. Wo taangein Veer ki kamar par baandhe apni chut ko poora jadd tak Veer ke lund se chipkaane ki koshish karti.

Aur kuch hi derr baad, Veer ne apna subah ka ye pehla load Suman ki chut me khaali kar diya.

Suman ke jism par paseene ki boondein saji hui thi. Uski badi badi doodh ki thailiya tezz saase lene ke chalte upar neeche ho rahi thi. Aur ye baat bhi nahi bhulaayi jaa sakti thi ki wo kisi aur ki biwi thi jisse Veer apne neeche lita ke chod raha tha.

Bhale hi Suman ne mann se aur shareerik roop se apne pati ka tyaag kar diya tha par divorce nahi diya tha abhi bhi.

Kuch derr apni saaso ko durust karne ke baad jese hi wo uthne ko hui uski nazar darwaaze ki dehleez par gayi aur usne dekha ki...

Darwaaze ke neeche se kisi ka saaya nazar aa raha tha. Ye dekhte hi wo ekdum darr gayi. Par agle hi pal jese baahar khade vyakti ne bhi andar ki khamoshi ko mehsoos kiya aur waha se forun hi nikal gaya.

Apne maalik ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferr usne Veer ko side me litaaya aur apna blouse pehente hue wo uthi aur ahista ahista darwaaze ke paas gayi.

Darwaaza khola toh usse koi bhi na dikhaayi diya.
Wo aage badh apne room ki taraf gayi jisme wo aur Aabha sote the. Aur usne thoda dhakka diya toh paaya ki darwaaza band tha.

Wo kuch sochte hue jab waapas aayi toh Veer ke room ke baahar hi usse kuch zameen par nazar aaya. Jhukte hue usne uss cheez ka jayza liya aur jese hi usse pata chala ki wo kya tha. Uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan bikhar gayi.

Veer ke paas aate hue usne apni panty uthaayi aur uske saamne hi pehente hue boli,

Suman (smiles) : Kal aap ke liye ek tohfa hai maalik.

Veer : Hmm!? Kesa tohfa?

Suman : Ye toh... Kal hi pata chalega. Fufu~

Veer : Tum aur tumhari ye baatein. Kherr! Ye batao! Bhabhi se kya kya seekh liya abhi tak?

Suman : Ah!! Haan! Kal na mene na maalik... Kal mene phone chalana seekha. Wese toh wo telephone mujhe chalaana aata hai. Par ye mobile nahi. Pehle haveli me boht mene...

Veer : !???

Suman : Wo... K-Kuch nahi! K-Kal mene yahi phone chalana seekha maalik. Kese dusre vyakti ko phone karte hai aur kese phone kaat'te hai. Kese number dhoondte hai. Yahi sab.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Suman : Kya aap ab bhi nahi bataenge ki mujhe ye sab kyu sikha rahe hai aap?

Veer (smiles) : Samay aane par.

Suman : Toh!? Aap abhi kahi jaa rahe hai kya?

Veer : Hmm! Suhana jii se milne. Sonia jii ki badi behan. Tumhe bataaya tha na.

Suman : J-Jii!

Veer : Wahi!

Suman : Kab tak aaenge aap!?

Veer : Kuch keh nahi sakta.

Suman : O-Okay!

Kehte hue Suman jaane lagi toh Veer ne...

'Favourability check!'

[Suman's Favourability : 90]

'Holy shittt!!!! Y-Ye... Wtf? Sex ke baad Suman ki feelings badh jaati hai kya? Ye toh... Waqai...'

*Ding*

[System has been activated.]

[Wtf??? Tumne mujhe sleep mode me achanak kyu daala? Huh???]

'Aa gayi tum? Ahem! Well! I had some business!'

[Waah waah waah waah! Business my foot! You were having sex right?]

'Haan toh? Can't I? Meri bhi personal life hai. Aur mein nahi chaahta ki ek weird sii presence jo mere andar hai wo mujhe sex karte time mujhe dekhe.'

[Whaaaaaattt??? Weird prescence se kya matlab hai tumhara haan!? Bolo? Y-Youuu.... You think I don't know. I hate you so much! Hmph~]

'Bakwaas baad me. Let's go!'

[Huh!? K-Kaha?]

'Suhana se appointment hai aaj uske hi ghar par. She's busy isliye badi mushqil se usne time nikaala hai mere liye. Business se related baate karni hai.'

Aur itna bol Veer naha dho ke kuch do ghanto ke baad breakfast karte hue ghar se nikla. Wo Suhana ke ghar pohucha toh iss baar bhi sabhi workers ne waha ke usse asaani se andar aane de diya.

Pata nahi kyu par usse dekhte hi waha ke workers aapas me khusur pusur karne me lage hue the jinhe Veer kuch kuch sunn paa raha tha.

"Arre! Ye toh wahi hai na?"

"Haan haan~ Arre ye toh wahi hai. Jo uss din aaya tha."

"Arre ye ladka kayi baar aa chuka hai."

"Kayi baar? Arre mene ek baar isse Suhana madam ke saath hotel me bhi dekha tha."

"Kahi Suhana madam aur iss ladke ka aapas me kuch..."

"Arre chup raho tum sab! Suhana madam ko khabar lag gayi toh hamaari kherr nahi."

"Sahi kaha. Inn ameer logo ke chochle hamaare pare hai. Hume kya karna? Madam jiske saath ghume phire, humko kya? Pagaar se matlab rakho bas."

'What the hell? Are these guys nuts?'

[Logo ka toh kaam hi hai baatein banaana.]

*Knock knock*

Darwaaze par knock karte hi Veer ko andar se ek awaaz aayi,

"Come in..."

Aur Veer ye sunte hi unn workers par ek nazar daal andar chala gaya.

Suhana apni working table par baithe laptop me kuch kar rahi thi.

Suhana : Lock the door!

Veer : Huh?

Suhana : Aise muh kya bana rahe ho? Lock the door!

Veer : Well! If you say so...

*Click*

Door lock kar wo saamne Suhana ke baith gaya.

Suhana : Hmm~ Toh? Bolo! Kesa kya plan hai? Hum straight away start kar denge yadi sahi raha toh!

Veer : Hmm? Well! Aap ne hi toh kaha tha na? Ki kapdo ka business sabse sahi rahega mere liye? Aur aap apni koi jagah bhi dene taiyaar the kam rent par?

Suhana : Haan kaha tha but baaki ka kya? Mein tumhe jagah de dungi aur rent bhi kam kar lungi par fir kya? Chalo mein tumhare ek legal business ke documents bhi set karwa lungi. Par... Like... Shuruaat kese karoge? Kisi se baat kii? Kya brand ka naam rakhna hai? Tumhe brand banaani bhi hai ya nahi? Ya fir collab karna hai? Ya normal unn local kapdo waalo ki tarah hi shop kholni hai?

'Fuck! Iske baare me toh mene kuch socha hi nahi!'

[She's right! Tumhe pehle se sochna tha.]

'Tum toh jaanti ho na? Slogan aur inn sab me mein kitna uljha hua hu. Nidhi ma'am ki problem, ghar par dada jii ka haadsa, bhabhi ki problem, Suhana ke favours, Miss Kaera ko diya hua vaada. Inn sab se ghira hua hu mein. Toh mujhe samay hi nahi mila.'

[Umm... Well! Aise kahoge toh yeah. Y-You were quite busy I guess.]

Veer : 5 minute milega sochne ke liye?

Suhana : Well! Soch lo. Dekho zyaada time mat lena. Mujhe urgently kahi jaana bhi hai. Mene badi mushqil se tumhaare kehne par time nikaala hai.

'Hmm~ Pari! What do you think?'

[Mere hisaab se... Aisa business karo jiski harr insaan ko need rehti hi hai.]

'Insaan ko survive karne ke liye keval teen hi cheeze chaahiye hoti hai. Right? Roti, kapda aur makaan.'

Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan bikhar gayi ye sochte hue.

'Looks like... I found the solution.'

[You mean...!?]

'Yes! Hum aise hi proceed karenge. What a genius I am. Hahaha~"

[Ohhh!]

'Bina khaane ke toh koi bhi jeevit nahi reh sakta. Yes! Food!!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha! Kapdo ka business is good but starter ke liye. Food hi best choice hai. Jab enough paisa ho jaega then mein kapdo ka business bhi shuru kar sakta hu. Uske baad aur jab enough ho jaega. Then...'

[Then!?]

'Real Estate ka business... Makaan se mera matlab yahi tha.'

[Ohhhh! Are you sure? Ye success hoga?]

'Kyu nahi hoga? Open the shop menu'

*Ding*

Veer ke mann me shop khul chuki thi aur usne search me ek food ko lekar skills dhundne ka prayaas kiya toh usse kayi saari skills ke results saamne dikhaayi diye.

[Skills :
Absolute Chef ~ Cost : 400 Points.
Chef at service ~ Cost : 400 Points.
Magical Hands ~ Cost : 200 Points.
Foodpedia ~ Cost : 400 Points.
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'Damn! Yaha toh kayi saari available hai.'

[Tell me? Kisse buy karna hai?]

'I'm guessing ki 200 points waali ko chorr kar baaki sabhi Gold Tier Skills hai atleast.'

[Yes! 200 points waali Silver Tier skill hai.]

'Hmm! Unme differences kya hai?'

[Absolute Chef jo hai wo Gold Tier Skill hai. Tumhe sab kuch as a chef knowledge rahega. Behatreen food bana paoge tum. I mean... Bilkul as a chef.]

'Hoooo~ Sounds interesting!'

[Chef at service jo hai wo bhi Gold Tier hai but... Usme tumhaari cooking ki thodi speed badhegi but taste ki quality thodi ghat jaegi.]

'Nope! Taste matters!'

[Magical hands is not for cooking but for assisting. Tumhe baaki sab kuch karte banega. Like sabziya kaatna, and all. But you won't be a fine chef.]

'Rejected then.'

[Foodpedia is the encyclopedia about food. Food ka knowledge rahega tumhe bas. Chaahe jaisa bhi food ho.]

'Alright! I have decided! Hum Absolute Chef buy kar rahe hai.'

[Are you sure?]

'Yes! Do it!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Absolute Chef has been unlocked.]

'Do I have to turn it on?'

[Nahi! Already On hai. Yadi band karna ho toh bas bolna hai swich Off Absolute Chef. Aur bas kaam ho jaega.]

Veer : So I have decided.

Suhana : Huh? Kya decide kiya?

Veer (smiles) : Food business!

Suhana : Whaaaaattt!???

Veer : Yeah!

Suhana : Wait! What?? Food ka business? Arre par abhi toh... You were...

Veer : Haan, but I changed my mind. Aur mujhe ab pata hai sab aage kese badhna hai.

Suhana : okay! Zara batao mujhe bhi...

Veer : Ek food truck lunga. Aur mein khud serve karunga.

Suhana ne jaise hi ye suna toh usse laga jese Veer ne boht bada koi chutkula maara tha.

Suhana : Ek minute! Kya kaha tumne? Food truck? Aur tum khud serve karoge?

Veer (smiles) : Yes!

Suhana : M-Matlab tum khud khana banaoge?

Veer : Of course~

Uska confidence se bhara jawaab sunn Suhana ne apne maatha pakda kuch derr ke liye aur uss par aankhein ghumaate hue boli,

Suhana : Dekho Veer! Tum yadi subah subah saste nashe kar ke aaye ho na toh please kisi aur ko jaake ye baatein sunao. Yaha nahi! Kyuki mein already pehle se hi kaafi fed up hu. Aur mujhe ye bakwaas nahi sunn'ni abhi.

Suhana ne keh toh diye the ye shabd par Veer ke chehre par muskuraahat gaayab hokar ek serious face saamne aa chuka tha uske.

Veer : You think I'm joking...!?

Suhana : Of course! Baccho ka khel thodi hai ye. Aur ye kya bekaar se business shuru kar rahe ho haan? Food truck? Really? Paagal ho gaye ho kya? Arre start up kar lete koi accha sa? Food truck? Tumhe pata hai aaye din kitne food truck khulte hai? Na jaane kitne saare. Aur unme se chalte keval ek do hi hai. Aur wo bhi itna hi chalte hai ki do waqt ki roti se pait bhar sake wo apna.

Suhana toh jese apni poori badhaas nikaal rahi thi. Uski nazro me ye jese tucch kaam tha.

Suhana : Arre tum ek college ke student ho yaar. Mene tumse better hi expect kiya tha.

Veer (smiles) : So aap isme involve nahi hona chahogi?

Suhana : Of course not! Paagal ho kya? Why would I? Inn chote mote maamlo ke alaawa mujhe dherr saare kaam hai Veer. Mujhe laga tha tum ek fine brand apne liye kholna chaahte ho so I thought ki mein thodi help kar dungi. Par ye Food truck? Really? Zara imagine karo ki Suhana xxxxxx company ke C.E.O ki wife aur xxxxxxx company ke maalik ki beti, ek food truck ke saamne khade hoke vada paav khaa rahi hai. Really? Ughhh! J-Just go Veer! Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai. Yadi idea change kar rahe ho tabhi baat karna iss baare me nahi toh...

Kehte hue Suhana waapas apne laptop me lag gayi. Usne ek nazar bhi fir Veer par nahi daali. Shayad aaj wo waqai busy thi.

Par Veer ko uska uttar mil chuka tha. Ki Suhana uske iss plan me koi madad nahi karne waali thi.

[She... How can she be so rude? Huh!? I mean... Idea wasn't that bad... But itna kya isko irritation ho raha hai?]

Veer wahi baitha hua tha. Usne kuch pal tak kuch nahi kaha. Wo bas ek badi hi halki sii muskaan liye Suhana ko dekh raha tha.

Aur kuch derr baad hi wo utha, usne apni jacket haath par latkaayi aur waha se jaane laga.

Aahat paate hi Suhana ne nazre upar kar Veer ko dekha toh paaya ki wo jaate jaate ekdum se rukk gaya.

Veer ne rukte hue ek nazar peeche mud Suhana ko dekha aur bola,

"Remember! Kaam chota ya bada nahi hota. Aur yadi hota bhi hai aapki nazron me toh... Ek chote kaam se shuruaat karke hi aadmi bade mukaamo par pohuchta hai. You'll soon see... What I will do."

Bas unn shabdo ko rakh Veer waha se nikal gaya.

Par...

Suhana bhauchakii sii wahi baithi darwaaze ko dekh rahi thi jaha se Veer nikal ke gaya tha.

Ye sab kya tha? Ye ajeeb sii feeling kyu aa rahi thi usse? Ek deja vu waali feeling. Ye... Ye toh bilkul wesa hi tha jis din Veer usse hotel me paiso ke guroor ke baare me lecture deke gaya tha.

Aur wo yaad karte hi Suhana ne apna angootha daato tale daba liya.

'Shit! Did I say too much!? I won't regret this right? Of course I won't! Hmph~ Mein bhi dekhti hu wo kese business chalaata hai mere bina. Usse kya pata kya kya problems aati hai ek business start karne se pehle. Rote hue aaega khud mere paas. Hehehe~ fir mein ek aur favour maang lungi uss se. Market me dherro food trucks hai. Par chalta wahi hai jiska chef sahi ho. Aur usne kaha wo khud banaega hahaha~ I will wait to see his funny face.'

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Suhana ke kahe gaye shabd kathor bhi the aur Veer ko dil par bhi lage the. Isme galti Suhana ki nahi thi. Wo wese hi itne bade business ko bachpan se dekhti hui aayi hai aur usme saath rahi hai toh ye sab food truck toh usse chota lagega hi na.

Par Veer ke paas wo tha jiske baare me Suhana nahi jaanti thi.

Pari!

Aur ab toh usse Absolute Chef skill bhi mil chuki thi.

Ye kaafi tha Veer ko apna business shuru karne ke liye.

Par abhi dikkat wo nahi thi. Dikkat thi ye message.

Ye anjaan number se uske phone par aaya message jis par likha tha ~

Meet me at xxxxxxxx Park @ 2 PM

Kaun tha ye shaks jo Veer ko yu iss tarah se bula raha tha message karke?

Ye toh waha jaa ke hi pata lagne waala tha.

Uske waha jaate hi usse filhaal aisa koi bhi nazar na aaya toh Veer ek bench par baith gaya aur wait karne laga.

Aur tabhi usse ek mesaage aaya.

"Kaha par pohcuhe tum?"

Uska reply karte hue Veer ne likh diya ki wo pohuch gaya hai.

Aur firse... Ek mesaage aaya.

"Haan toh fountain ke bagal me lagi bench par aao."

'Fountain ke bagal me lagi!? Huh?'

Sochte hue jaise hi Veer ne fountain spot kiya toh usne uske bagal me dekha.

[Idiot! Wo aadmi issi bench ki baat kar raha hai.]

'Bro whaaatt!?'

Veer ne fir ek message bheja.

"Mein ussi bench pe baitha hu tum kaha ho?"

Toh ek mesaage aaya.

"Mein bhi ussi bench pe hu. Par tum nahi dikh rahe."

'Wtf????'

Aur jaise dono Veer aur uss vyakti ko baat samajh me aayi. Aur dono ne hi palat ke peeche dekha toh paaya ki dono hi ek dusre ke peeche baithe hue the ab tak.

Veer : Wtf??

Ladka : Y-You...

Veer : Toh itni derr se tum peeche baithe the? Aur mein saamne dhundh raha tha tumhe.

Ladka : What the heck? Mein bhi toh wahi kar raha tha.

Veer : Bruh! Ek call hi kar liya hota. Ye sab kya message message khel rahe ho.

Ladka : Ahem! Mein aise anjaan logo se aise ekdum se phone par baat nahi karta.

Veer : Dafuq?

Ladka : Ahem! Wo sab chorro aur yaha aake baitho.

Uski baat maan Veer uske bagal se aake baitha.

Veer ne dekha ki ye ladka dikhne me kaafi smart tha. Kapde bhi kaafi acche pehne hue the usne. Yaha tak ki Veer ne uski accesories ko bhi check kiya toh paaya ki uski ghadi se lekar joote tak sab kuch top class brand ka tha.

'This guy is rich!'

[Yeah!]

Ladka : Toh tum Veer ho right!?

Veer : And you are the unknown guy right?

Ladka (embarassed) : Ahem! Sorry! I forgot my manners. Hi! I'm Karan!

Kehte hue usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne bhi uska haath thaama aur apna naam bataaya.

Veer : So? Mera number kese mila? Kyu milna chaahte ho tum?

Karan : Ahem! So yeah... You know Miss Kaera, right?

Kaera ka naam sunte hi pal bhar ke liye Veer thoda chaukanna ho gaya.

Veer (frowns) : Tumhe kese pata?

Karan : Don't make that face. I'm... I'm her brother.

Veer (surprised) : Ehhhh!?

Karan : Hmm~ Mein... Mein unka chota bhai hu.

Waqai, dikhne me toh wo ekdum Veer ke barabaar ka hi lag raha tha umr me.

Veer : Toh!?? I mean... Mujhse kya kaam?

Karan : Sabse pehle toh... Thank you! Thank you for saving her twice.

Veer : !??

Karan : Haan! Mein jaanta hu. Tumne hi unhe Club se aur uss din Slogan ke changul se churraaya tha.

Veer : Tumhe Slogan ke baare me...!?

Karan : Hmm! Actually, mein out of India tha. Studies ke liye. Par saari details yaha ki mujhe Raghu bhejta hai roz. Ab ye mat puchna ki mujhe Slogan ke baare me kya kya pata hai. Mujhe bas yahi pata hai ki wo ek boht bada crime boss hai. Kayi saare cases me uska naam hai. Aur foreign me uska main adda hai. Wese kayi aur hideouts hai uske. Bas! Itna hi pata hai mujhe. Baaki zyaada jaankaari intelligence team ko hogi hamaari.

Veer : Intelligence team?

Karan : Hmm~ Didi ki security ke liye hire ki hai humne.

Veer : O-Ohhh!

Karan : So thank you! Aur... I want to talk about something.

Veer : Kis baare me?

Karan : Raghu mujhse harr detail share karta tha. Including details about you. Mujhe pata chala hai ki kayi baar Raghu ne didi ko tumhaare saath dekha hai, wo bhi muskuraate hue. Didi muskura rahi thi. Wo khush thi. So... I want to tell you about something. Kya tum sunoge? It's about her.

Veer (frowns) : ....

Karan : ....

Veer (sighs) : Fine... Talk!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka.
Dhanyavaad!!!

Fantastic Update
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[Death Kiñg]

I'm Back ...

Update 53...

Basically Slogan naam ke toofaan ke beech Veer naamak kashti ko sukoon dene waala Update tha ye... Nidhi, Suman aur Ragini teeno ke saath hi kuchh waqt bitaya Veer ne...

Ragini ki chinta Veer ko lekar poori tarah jayaz thi... Aakhir jhooth bolkar hi to nikla tha Veer ghar se aur fir yun Chotil awastha mein Hospital Bed par Veer ka hona... Ab Ragini maatra Veer ki Bhabhi nahi rahi... They are friends officially but unofficially she has started developing feelings for Veer... Gaalon par yun baar baar laali chhaa jaana, yun baar baar sharmana... Ye Prem roopi maayajal mein fansne ke shuruaati lakshan hain... Abhi tak Veer ne Suman aur Kaera ke saath Relation banaya hai aur kisi ke saath nahi... But agar dekha jaaye to ek saath Parallel mein kayi ladkiyan/aurten uske nazdeek aa rahi hain... Nidhi ka matter of course complicated hai, par Ragini aur Shreya seedhe seedhe uski taraf jhuk rahi hain... Aabha bhu mujhe zyada door nahi lagti... Arthat aane waale samay mein poore maze hone waale hain Veer ke...

Secondly, Suman Veer se milne aayi aur Veer ussi prakaar uspar hakk jama raha hai jaisa ki Suman ko pasand hai... Aur ab wo Ragini se bhi kaafi kuchh seekh rahi hai... Don't know why Veer wants her to learn all these things par ek broader prospect mein ye kaafi important ho sakta hai...

But then again, usne Nidhi ko kabhi uss nazar se nahi dekha tha. Par fir bhi nazre toh chali hi jaati hai.

Kya matlab Men Will Be Men...

After both of them entered the room Nidhi... Nidhi ka case sabse zyada dilchasp hai... She has already started developing sone sort of different feelings for Veer... For a moment she realises this thing but then she just don't want to accept... I'm waiting for the day when she'll accept what she feels for Veer... But jiss prakaar wo Veer ki chinta karti hai aur uske liye, uske future ke liye tensed rehti hai uss kaaran Veer ka bhi Nidhi ke liye alag tarah feel karna swabhaavik sa hi hai... Ab dekhna hai ke inke beech huyi iss mulaakat ke baad Nidhi ke thoughts kya hote hain...

you stupid Ma'am!?"

Haan bhai, Pari bhi Stupid, Kaera bhi Stupid & Idiot & now Nidhi bhi stupid... Bas ek ye Veer naamak chutiya hi intelligent hai...

Beware... I might fall for you!

Sounded like... Beware Of Dogs

In the end Veer ko Mission Successful hone ke chalte 400 points ka reward mila... I think this time he might go for a gold tier skill... So, overall ek emotional kinda update tha ye joki kaafi achha laga Slogan ki problem ke beech mein... Updates like these play the role of bridges in The thrill atmosphere of a story ...

Update 54–55...

Veer hospital se discharge hokar ghar pahunch gaya... Iss beech notable baat ye rahi ke Shreya, Juhi, and especially Sonia – Suhana bhi uss se milne hospital pahunch gayi thi... But another point is that ke Kaera wahaan uss se milne tak naa aayi... Aur Update ke aakhir mein shayad iska jawaab tha, Kaera maybe apne Pitaji maane Father ki wajah se nahi aayi hogi... He might not have granted her permission for this... Khair, jo bhi ho dekhna hai ke Veer aur Kaera ki agli mulaakat kab hoti hai...

'Yup! Fabulous! Now Go to sleep mode!'

Btw. Pari be Like – Gazab Beizzati hai ...

Veer kitne hi waqt baad apne asli ghar joki shayad ab uska raha hi nahi wahaan pahuncha... Manorath ki khushi Veer ko wahaan paakar dekhte hi Banti thi... Ab ye to spasht hi tha ke Veer ko ghar se nikaalne ke waqt wo haalaat ke maare the anyatha Veer se Pyaar to wo bahut karte hain... Wahin Aarohi aur Veer ke beech bhi sab normal ho chuka hai... And Aarohi will start to Love her Brother more very soon...

Idhar Kavya dobara se Veer ke saamne ek cute si bachi ban gayi... She's my favourite character in this story after Juhi... Wahin Pranjal urf Chhota Kameena apne Bastardism ka tokra fir se lekar pahunch gaya wahaan... Veer par itna Prem barsa raha hai jaise sach mein duniya ka bestam best brother ho... Par uss bewakoof ko ye nahi pata ke ab Veer ki Intelligence 80 par pahunch chuki hai... Pranjal aur Vivek to kya unke farishte bhi Veer ka chutiya nahi kaat sakte ab... Khair, Aarohi ko bhi Pranjal ki activities par doubt to ho hi raha hai, dekhte hain ke Kameene Brothers ka sach kab tak saamne aayega...

Wahin Shweta ke to kya kehne... Saala hoti kaun hai ye poochhne waali ke Veer, tum yahaan kya karne aaye ho... Kasam se Werewolf dada agar iss aurat ko Veer aasani se maaf kar diya naa to Ju soch bhi naa sakte apun Veer ko story khatam hone tak kitna roast karega ...

Shweta : Ab kesi hai tabiyat aapki Dada jii!?

By the way Bahu logis apne Sasur ko Dada Ji kabse bulane lagi ...

Bhumika, joki pehle hi Hotel mein Veer se huyi mulaakat ke baad se hi Glaani ke saagar ke saahil tak pahunch gayi thi... Ab iss mulaakat ke baad uss saagar mein doob chuki hai... Veer ke kahe gaye shabd uske dil – o – dimaag mein kaafi samay tak rehne waale hain jinke chalte usse jald hi apne behaviour ka realisation hoga... Par I don't think ke Veer Aur Bhumika ke beech aasani se sab kuchh normal ho jaayega... Kab aur kaise hoga iska to apun ko Koyi Idea nahi hai ...

"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.

In the End iss note ke baare mein pata chala hume... Jisne Raghu aur Jassi ki madad ki Kaera tak pahunchne mein... I'm sure ke ye “Shubh – Chintak” aur koyi nahi balki wahi shakhs hai joki Veer ke baare mein Slogan ko information de raha tha... Ek pal ko to mujhe laga ke ye Suhana ho sakti hai, par fir why will she get Veer trapped in the cage of Slogan... Of course Raghu aur Jassi ko wahaan pahunchne ka raasta bata diya gaya tha shubh chintak dwara par agar Veer ko Slogan uss se pehle hi tapka deta... But still agar ab tak story mein aa chuke characters mein se koyi ye shakha hai to definitely Suhana hi hogi, uske alawa koyi hai to wo New Character hi hona chahiye...

Veer pahunch gaya Suhana ke paas apne business ko start karne ke silsile mein... Par jaisa ki Suhana ne pehle kaha tha ke use Clothes and all ka business karna chahiye, Veer filhaal iss baat se taalukaat nahi rakhta... Manoj Kumar Saahab ki movie Roti, Kapda aur Makaan ke hi tarj par wo in teen areas mein apna business khada karna chahta hai... And the best thing to start with according to him is Food... Mujhe bhi ye idea kaafi badhiya laga kyonki agar chef acchha ho to Food Truck, Mumbai jaise shehar mein kam samay mein hi bada kaam kar sakta hai...

Aur ek baar Food Truck ka business chal gaya then, Clothes yaani Kapda uska Target hoga to be followed by Makaan, in the sense, Real Estate business... And Real Estate ka business kitne tagde returns waala hota hai ye to sabhi jaante hain... Basically Veer ka Vision bahut bada hai aur Suhana iss baat se anjaan hai... Anjaan to wo iss baat se bhi hai ke Veer has became an absolute chef... Pichhle Update mein 40 points apni Intelligence aur Strength mein use karne ke baad Veer ne 400 points se Absolute Chef joki ek Gold Tier Skill hai usse khareed liya hai... Now he remains with 0 points...

Khair, Suhana ko hum sabhi jaante hain, she's a little bit of egoistic attitude and from her Point Of View Food Truck is just a shit basically... Par jald hi wo apne shabdon par pachhta rahi hogi... Waise achha hi hua ke ab Veer apna business khud hi shuru karega aur khud hi usse ek Bade Empire mein tabdeel bhi karega... Otherwise Suhana would have Stinged her throughout his Life ke usne hi Veer ka business setup karwaya tha...

Idhar Veer se ek Karan naamak ladka joki Update ke Title waala shakhs yaani “A New Friend” hai... Karan aur koyi nahi balki Kaera ka bhai hai... Raghu aur Jassi ke through hi usse Veer ke baare mein pata chala hoga... Aur wo Veer se milne pahuncha... I think wo Kaera ke iss tarah “Unknowingly Broken” hone ki wajah Veer ko batane waala hai...

Wahin Subah subah Veer ne Suman ke saath param aanand ki praapti bhi kar li... Par koyi tha jo un dono ko dekh raha tha... Ye aur koyi nahi balki Aabha hi thi jo in dono ki kaamleela dekh kar hastmaithun & all kar rahi hogi... Nateejtan ya to uska load ya fir uski Panty wahaan chhoot gayi hogi, jo Suman ne dekh liya... Aur lagta hai Aabha hi wo Gift hone waali hai jiska zikr Suman ne kiya... Saala Zindagi ho to Veer jaisi ho warna Zinda to Pranjal aur Vivek bhi hain ...

Let's see aage kya hota hai kyonki kayi saare sawaal hain... First of All Suman ka wo Gift joki Aabha hi honi chahiye, uss baare mein Veer ki kya pratikriya hogi... Secondly, Veer ka Food Truck ka business kab aur kaise shuru hoga... Third, Suhana apne iss faisle par pachhtayegi ya aise hi attitude banakar rakhegi... Karan, Veer se kyon milne aaya hai aur Kaera ke baare mein kya batayega wo Veer ko... Wahin Ragini aur Veer ke beech jo kuchh bhi chal raha hai wo aage chalkar kya mod lega... And of course Kameene Brothers ka aage ka kya plan hoga aur kya Shweta bhi usmein unke saath hogi... Bhumika bhi ek sawaal hai, aakhir wo bhi Guilt ke bhanwar mein fansna start ho chuki hai... Wahin Kaera apne Father se milne pahunchi thi to uska kya hua...

Saala kitne saare sawaal hain, abhi to Slogan ka zikr bhi naa hua fir bhi ... At last,Nidhi ... Iski baat kiye bina Revo poira ho jaaye ye Mumkin nahi ... Nidhi ke saath Veer ki hospital mein huyi mulaakat ke baad uske manobhaav kya hain aur Veer se next conversation ke dauraan kya hoga ye dekhna bhi dilchasp rahega...

Teeno updates behadh hi khubsurat the Werewolf bhai... Jahaan Update 53 & 54 Emotions based the... Jinmein Ragini, Suman aur Nidhi ke saath kuchh pal shaamil the to wahin Dadaji ke saath bhi Veer ne samay bitaya... To ab Waapis se Veer apne Business ki taraf rukh kar raha hai... Veer ho ya Suman ya fir the most beautiful Nidhi , sabhi ke emotions ko bakhoobi chitrit kiya Bhai aapne... Wahin Kavya ki cuteness bhi bahut pasand aayi mujhe... Waiting for that moment jab Kavya aur Juhi ek saath ek hi scene mein hongi... That scene would be amazing, Cuteness ki baarish hogi...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

वीर का सोचना सोलहों आने सच है । कोई भी काम बुरा नहीं होता । और किसी भी व्यापार की शुरुआत कम पूंजी और छोटे पैमाने से ही शुरू करनी चाहिए । खास तौर पर यदि आप पहली बार बिजनेस करने जा रहे हैं ।
ख्वाब हमेशा ऊंचे होने चाहिए पर पांव हमेशा धरती पर ही रहनी चाहिए । मतलब " ताते पांव पसारें जाते लांबी सोर "

वो फुड के बिजनेस में उतर रहा है ‌। शायद रेस्टोरेंट खोलने वाला हो । यह भी बढ़िया बिजनेस है । हेड शेफ वो खुद ही रहेगा और परी की बदौलत खाने का स्वाद लजीज होना ही होना है ।
बात उसे यह ध्यान रखना है कि किस लोकेशन पर रेस्टोरेंट खोलना है ! सही जगह का चुनाव ऐसे बिजनेस में बहुत कारगर सिद्ध होता है ।
वैसे मेरी नजर में दो बिजनेस ऐसे हैं जिसमें मुनाफा बहुत ज्यादा है पर इन्वेस्टमेंट भी काफी है । एक है जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी और दूसरा है रियल एस्टेट का बिजनेस ।
जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी सबसे ज्यादा टफ है क्योंकि हीरे-जवाहरात की पहचान सिर्फ जौहरी ही कर सकता है ।


इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं कि वीर को एक अच्छे फ्रैंड की तलाश पूरी हुई । मुझे लगता है काईरा के भाई करण से उसकी अच्छी निभेगी ।

वेयरवोल्फ भाई ! सुमन के मुंह से वीर के लिए बार बार " मालिक " कहना मुझे पसंद नहीं आता । ऐसा लगता है कि एक बार फिर से स्लेव डायनेस्टी शुरू हो गई है । दोनों के बीच में शारीरिक संबंध है तो कुछ बढ़िया नाम से सम्बोधित करे ! उम्र में भी तो वो उससे काफी बड़ी है ।


बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice update

 

[sweet but psycho]

वीर का सोचना सोलहों आने सच है । कोई भी काम बुरा नहीं होता । और किसी भी व्यापार की शुरुआत कम पूंजी और छोटे पैमाने से ही शुरू करनी चाहिए । खास तौर पर यदि आप पहली बार बिजनेस करने जा रहे हैं ।
ख्वाब हमेशा ऊंचे होने चाहिए पर पांव हमेशा धरती पर ही रहनी चाहिए । मतलब " ताते पांव पसारें जाते लांबी सोर "

वो फुड के बिजनेस में उतर रहा है ‌। शायद रेस्टोरेंट खोलने वाला हो । यह भी बढ़िया बिजनेस है । हेड शेफ वो खुद ही रहेगा और परी की बदौलत खाने का स्वाद लजीज होना ही होना है ।
बात उसे यह ध्यान रखना है कि किस लोकेशन पर रेस्टोरेंट खोलना है ! सही जगह का चुनाव ऐसे बिजनेस में बहुत कारगर सिद्ध होता है ।
वैसे मेरी नजर में दो बिजनेस ऐसे हैं जिसमें मुनाफा बहुत ज्यादा है पर इन्वेस्टमेंट भी काफी है । एक है जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी और दूसरा है रियल एस्टेट का बिजनेस ।
जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी सबसे ज्यादा टफ है क्योंकि हीरे-जवाहरात की पहचान सिर्फ जौहरी ही कर सकता है ।


इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं कि वीर को एक अच्छे फ्रैंड की तलाश पूरी हुई । मुझे लगता है काईरा के भाई करण से उसकी अच्छी निभेगी ।

वेयरवोल्फ भाई ! सुमन के मुंह से वीर के लिए बार बार " मालिक " कहना मुझे पसंद नहीं आता । ऐसा लगता है कि एक बार फिर से स्लेव डायनेस्टी शुरू हो गई है । दोनों के बीच में शारीरिक संबंध है तो कुछ बढ़िया नाम से सम्बोधित करे ! उम्र में भी तो वो उससे काफी बड़ी है ।


बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

Apne mere dil ki baat keh di Bhai ... Sacchh kahu to me Suman or veer ki conversation ke scans skeep karta hu, reason vhi 'malik' ... Veer ka role ek acche insan ka hai jo apne se bdo ka adar samman karta hai .... Ha agar Suman uske sath kuch bura karti to Hume koi appatti nhi thi ... Werewolf eske bare me thoda sochiyega jarur

 

[Anu3832]

Bhai har baar aap ek din late update dete ho aaj ek din pehle hi de do ham readers ka bhi kuchh khayal rakha karo

 

[Luffy]

Update - 55 ~ A New Friend!?
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Ab tak...

Jassi ko churraate hi wo dono hi hotel baahar jab nikle the toh unki car par ek kaagaz chipka hua tha.

Ek note...

Jispar likha tha~

"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.
~ Tumhara Shubh chintak."

Ab aage...

Ek nayi subah thi, aur lagta hai Veer aaj kuch naye josh me bhi tha. Kal raat me hi usne Suman ko apne hi room me lita liya tha. Aur fir derr raat tak kya hua tha ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Iss waqt subah ke 7 ho rahe the aur Veer hamaara razaayi ke andar laita hua tha. Par itna hi nahi tha. Uske upar Suman adhnangi uski chhaathi par apni badi badi chuchhiya tikaaye laiti hui thi.

Aankh khulte hi Veer ko sabse pehle Suman ka komal sa chehra nazar aaya. Unn khule baalo me wo badi hi pyaari lag rahi thi sote hue. Saath hi saath chehre par wo nikhaar bhi jhalakne laga tha Suman ke jo aksar shadi shuda aurato ke chehro par jhalakta hai.

Veer usse dekh muskuraaya aur usne Pari ko sleep mode me daal diya. Shayad kal raat ki kasar abhi bhi poori nahi hui thi.

Pyaar se uske sarr par haath ferrte hue usne Suman ko jagaane ki koshish kii aur kuch hi derr me Suman uth bhi gayi.

Suman : Mmm... Maalik!?

Veer : Uth gayi?

Suman : Hmm~

Veer ne apne ek haath ko dheere se uske peeche le jaate hue uski kamar par firaaya. Aur fir neeche ki orr karte hue uske chutado ko zorr se jakad liya.

Suman : Nnnn~

Sehlaate sehlaate Veer ka khud ka hathiyaar bhi tann chuka tha. Aur Suman samajh chuki thi ki isko shaant bhi ab ussi ko karna hoga.

Kal raat Veer ne saara ka saara paani apna Suman ki choot me hi chorra tha. Uski Sex protection skill on thi toh usse pregnancy ki baat ki koi parvaah hi nahi thi. Wo jee bhar ke Suman ki chut me jhadta aur uski phuddi maarta.

Apne Maalik ke ishaare samajhte hue Suman ne forun hi jhukte hue Veer ke hathiyaar ko kuch jhatke maare aur usse apne muh me bhar liya.

Ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi ki Veer ka lund raat bhar ki chudaayi se poora sana hua tha. Wo saaf nahi tha. Par uske bawajood, Suman ko jese koi parvaah nahi thi.

Veer : Ohhhh! Fuckkkkk~

Veer ki nazro me aaj tak wo jitni bhi aurato se mila tha ya ladkiyo se, Suman ab tak ki sabse zyaada kinkiest aurat thi. Aur sabse bade than waali bhi.

Aur wahi aurat uski slave thi. Uski raand, uski rakhel, uski daasi. Wo uski sab kuch thi. Siwae ek patni ke.

Ye auhda kabhi bhi Suman ko praapt nahi hone waala tha. Ye baat wo khud jaanti bhi thi aur chaahti bhi yahi thi. Uska kehna tha ki meri jagah keval maalik ke perro me hai, unke bagal se khade hone ke liye mein nahi, unki aane waali biwi hogi.
Mein toh hamesha unke perro par hi rahungi.

Kayi baar toh Veer bhi uski baatein nahi samajh paata tha.

Suman : Unmm.... *slurp* sssssss....nfu... *lick* nmuu... *chu* fuuha...

Veer : Ahhh! Shitttt!!!

Veer se Suman ke hontho ki zorrdaar chusaayi aur na sahi gayi aur usne Suman ko paltaaya aur seedhe uski chut par apna hathiyaar lagaate hue kuch dhakko me hi andar uski bacchedaani tak pel diya.

Aur kuch derr Veer bas iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob kar Suman ki nangi chuchhiyo par hi lait gaya.

Veer : Ah! It's so good! Tumhari chut itni garam kyu hai Suman.

Suman (smiles) : Harr chut andar se garam hi hoti hai Maalik. Aap bujhaaiye na iski aag. Isse thanda kariye na maalik.

Veer : Karta hu, thoda chut ki garmaahat toh mehsoos karne do mujhe. Bhatti ki tarah aarrrghh.... Ekdum garam hai. Damn!!!

Suman : Aahhh! Ssss~ Maalik!! Ab aur mat tadpaaiye.

Veer : Karta hu. Par pehle ye doodh toh pee lu.

Kehte hue Veer ne Suman ke thano ko muh me bhar liya aur uske nipples ko chaba chaba ke unme se doodh nikaalne ki koshish karne laga. Subah subah hi Veer aur Suman ka chodampatti ka khel shuru ho chuka tha.

Suman ne kayi baar mana bhi kiya tha ki subah subah sex na kiya jaaye. Warna aise me saara din Veer ko thakaan avum kamzori hi mehsoos hogi.

Par Veer ko koi fiqr nahi thi. System jo tha uske paas. Wese hi uski recovery tezz thi. Aur ab usse inn choti moti baato ki tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Wo jab chaahe sex kar sakta tha.

Acche se doodh ko choos lene ke baad jab Veer ne dhakke lagaane shuru kiye toh Suman ki siskiyo ki awaaz uske kamre me goonjne lagi. Harr dhakke par uska bistar charar marar ki awaazein karne lagta . Aur harr dhakke ke baad Suman sihar ke reh jaati. Wo taangein Veer ki kamar par baandhe apni chut ko poora jadd tak Veer ke lund se chipkaane ki koshish karti.

Aur kuch hi derr baad, Veer ne apna subah ka ye pehla load Suman ki chut me khaali kar diya.

Suman ke jism par paseene ki boondein saji hui thi. Uski badi badi doodh ki thailiya tezz saase lene ke chalte upar neeche ho rahi thi. Aur ye baat bhi nahi bhulaayi jaa sakti thi ki wo kisi aur ki biwi thi jisse Veer apne neeche lita ke chod raha tha.

Bhale hi Suman ne mann se aur shareerik roop se apne pati ka tyaag kar diya tha par divorce nahi diya tha abhi bhi.

Kuch derr apni saaso ko durust karne ke baad jese hi wo uthne ko hui uski nazar darwaaze ki dehleez par gayi aur usne dekha ki...

Darwaaze ke neeche se kisi ka saaya nazar aa raha tha. Ye dekhte hi wo ekdum darr gayi. Par agle hi pal jese baahar khade vyakti ne bhi andar ki khamoshi ko mehsoos kiya aur waha se forun hi nikal gaya.

Apne maalik ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferr usne Veer ko side me litaaya aur apna blouse pehente hue wo uthi aur ahista ahista darwaaze ke paas gayi.

Darwaaza khola toh usse koi bhi na dikhaayi diya.
Wo aage badh apne room ki taraf gayi jisme wo aur Aabha sote the. Aur usne thoda dhakka diya toh paaya ki darwaaza band tha.

Wo kuch sochte hue jab waapas aayi toh Veer ke room ke baahar hi usse kuch zameen par nazar aaya. Jhukte hue usne uss cheez ka jayza liya aur jese hi usse pata chala ki wo kya tha. Uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan bikhar gayi.

Veer ke paas aate hue usne apni panty uthaayi aur uske saamne hi pehente hue boli,

Suman (smiles) : Kal aap ke liye ek tohfa hai maalik.

Veer : Hmm!? Kesa tohfa?

Suman : Ye toh... Kal hi pata chalega. Fufu~

Veer : Tum aur tumhari ye baatein. Kherr! Ye batao! Bhabhi se kya kya seekh liya abhi tak?

Suman : Ah!! Haan! Kal na mene na maalik... Kal mene phone chalana seekha. Wese toh wo telephone mujhe chalaana aata hai. Par ye mobile nahi. Pehle haveli me boht mene...

Veer : !???

Suman : Wo... K-Kuch nahi! K-Kal mene yahi phone chalana seekha maalik. Kese dusre vyakti ko phone karte hai aur kese phone kaat'te hai. Kese number dhoondte hai. Yahi sab.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Suman : Kya aap ab bhi nahi bataenge ki mujhe ye sab kyu sikha rahe hai aap?

Veer (smiles) : Samay aane par.

Suman : Toh!? Aap abhi kahi jaa rahe hai kya?

Veer : Hmm! Suhana jii se milne. Sonia jii ki badi behan. Tumhe bataaya tha na.

Suman : J-Jii!

Veer : Wahi!

Suman : Kab tak aaenge aap!?

Veer : Kuch keh nahi sakta.

Suman : O-Okay!

Kehte hue Suman jaane lagi toh Veer ne...

'Favourability check!'

[Suman's Favourability : 90]

'Holy shittt!!!! Y-Ye... Wtf? Sex ke baad Suman ki feelings badh jaati hai kya? Ye toh... Waqai...'

*Ding*

[System has been activated.]

[Wtf??? Tumne mujhe sleep mode me achanak kyu daala? Huh???]

'Aa gayi tum? Ahem! Well! I had some business!'

[Waah waah waah waah! Business my foot! You were having sex right?]

'Haan toh? Can't I? Meri bhi personal life hai. Aur mein nahi chaahta ki ek weird sii presence jo mere andar hai wo mujhe sex karte time mujhe dekhe.'

[Whaaaaaattt??? Weird prescence se kya matlab hai tumhara haan!? Bolo? Y-Youuu.... You think I don't know. I hate you so much! Hmph~]

'Bakwaas baad me. Let's go!'

[Huh!? K-Kaha?]

'Suhana se appointment hai aaj uske hi ghar par. She's busy isliye badi mushqil se usne time nikaala hai mere liye. Business se related baate karni hai.'

Aur itna bol Veer naha dho ke kuch do ghanto ke baad breakfast karte hue ghar se nikla. Wo Suhana ke ghar pohucha toh iss baar bhi sabhi workers ne waha ke usse asaani se andar aane de diya.

Pata nahi kyu par usse dekhte hi waha ke workers aapas me khusur pusur karne me lage hue the jinhe Veer kuch kuch sunn paa raha tha.

"Arre! Ye toh wahi hai na?"

"Haan haan~ Arre ye toh wahi hai. Jo uss din aaya tha."

"Arre ye ladka kayi baar aa chuka hai."

"Kayi baar? Arre mene ek baar isse Suhana madam ke saath hotel me bhi dekha tha."

"Kahi Suhana madam aur iss ladke ka aapas me kuch..."

"Arre chup raho tum sab! Suhana madam ko khabar lag gayi toh hamaari kherr nahi."

"Sahi kaha. Inn ameer logo ke chochle hamaare pare hai. Hume kya karna? Madam jiske saath ghume phire, humko kya? Pagaar se matlab rakho bas."

'What the hell? Are these guys nuts?'

[Logo ka toh kaam hi hai baatein banaana.]

*Knock knock*

Darwaaze par knock karte hi Veer ko andar se ek awaaz aayi,

"Come in..."

Aur Veer ye sunte hi unn workers par ek nazar daal andar chala gaya.

Suhana apni working table par baithe laptop me kuch kar rahi thi.

Suhana : Lock the door!

Veer : Huh?

Suhana : Aise muh kya bana rahe ho? Lock the door!

Veer : Well! If you say so...

*Click*

Door lock kar wo saamne Suhana ke baith gaya.

Suhana : Hmm~ Toh? Bolo! Kesa kya plan hai? Hum straight away start kar denge yadi sahi raha toh!

Veer : Hmm? Well! Aap ne hi toh kaha tha na? Ki kapdo ka business sabse sahi rahega mere liye? Aur aap apni koi jagah bhi dene taiyaar the kam rent par?

Suhana : Haan kaha tha but baaki ka kya? Mein tumhe jagah de dungi aur rent bhi kam kar lungi par fir kya? Chalo mein tumhare ek legal business ke documents bhi set karwa lungi. Par... Like... Shuruaat kese karoge? Kisi se baat kii? Kya brand ka naam rakhna hai? Tumhe brand banaani bhi hai ya nahi? Ya fir collab karna hai? Ya normal unn local kapdo waalo ki tarah hi shop kholni hai?

'Fuck! Iske baare me toh mene kuch socha hi nahi!'

[She's right! Tumhe pehle se sochna tha.]

'Tum toh jaanti ho na? Slogan aur inn sab me mein kitna uljha hua hu. Nidhi ma'am ki problem, ghar par dada jii ka haadsa, bhabhi ki problem, Suhana ke favours, Miss Kaera ko diya hua vaada. Inn sab se ghira hua hu mein. Toh mujhe samay hi nahi mila.'

[Umm... Well! Aise kahoge toh yeah. Y-You were quite busy I guess.]

Veer : 5 minute milega sochne ke liye?

Suhana : Well! Soch lo. Dekho zyaada time mat lena. Mujhe urgently kahi jaana bhi hai. Mene badi mushqil se tumhaare kehne par time nikaala hai.

'Hmm~ Pari! What do you think?'

[Mere hisaab se... Aisa business karo jiski harr insaan ko need rehti hi hai.]

'Insaan ko survive karne ke liye keval teen hi cheeze chaahiye hoti hai. Right? Roti, kapda aur makaan.'

Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan bikhar gayi ye sochte hue.

'Looks like... I found the solution.'

[You mean...!?]

'Yes! Hum aise hi proceed karenge. What a genius I am. Hahaha~"

[Ohhh!]

'Bina khaane ke toh koi bhi jeevit nahi reh sakta. Yes! Food!!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha! Kapdo ka business is good but starter ke liye. Food hi best choice hai. Jab enough paisa ho jaega then mein kapdo ka business bhi shuru kar sakta hu. Uske baad aur jab enough ho jaega. Then...'

[Then!?]

'Real Estate ka business... Makaan se mera matlab yahi tha.'

[Ohhhh! Are you sure? Ye success hoga?]

'Kyu nahi hoga? Open the shop menu'

*Ding*

Veer ke mann me shop khul chuki thi aur usne search me ek food ko lekar skills dhundne ka prayaas kiya toh usse kayi saari skills ke results saamne dikhaayi diye.

[Skills :
Absolute Chef ~ Cost : 400 Points.
Chef at service ~ Cost : 400 Points.
Magical Hands ~ Cost : 200 Points.
Foodpedia ~ Cost : 400 Points.
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'Damn! Yaha toh kayi saari available hai.'

[Tell me? Kisse buy karna hai?]

'I'm guessing ki 200 points waali ko chorr kar baaki sabhi Gold Tier Skills hai atleast.'

[Yes! 200 points waali Silver Tier skill hai.]

'Hmm! Unme differences kya hai?'

[Absolute Chef jo hai wo Gold Tier Skill hai. Tumhe sab kuch as a chef knowledge rahega. Behatreen food bana paoge tum. I mean... Bilkul as a chef.]

'Hoooo~ Sounds interesting!'

[Chef at service jo hai wo bhi Gold Tier hai but... Usme tumhaari cooking ki thodi speed badhegi but taste ki quality thodi ghat jaegi.]

'Nope! Taste matters!'

[Magical hands is not for cooking but for assisting. Tumhe baaki sab kuch karte banega. Like sabziya kaatna, and all. But you won't be a fine chef.]

'Rejected then.'

[Foodpedia is the encyclopedia about food. Food ka knowledge rahega tumhe bas. Chaahe jaisa bhi food ho.]

'Alright! I have decided! Hum Absolute Chef buy kar rahe hai.'

[Are you sure?]

'Yes! Do it!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Absolute Chef has been unlocked.]

'Do I have to turn it on?'

[Nahi! Already On hai. Yadi band karna ho toh bas bolna hai swich Off Absolute Chef. Aur bas kaam ho jaega.]

Veer : So I have decided.

Suhana : Huh? Kya decide kiya?

Veer (smiles) : Food business!

Suhana : Whaaaaattt!???

Veer : Yeah!

Suhana : Wait! What?? Food ka business? Arre par abhi toh... You were...

Veer : Haan, but I changed my mind. Aur mujhe ab pata hai sab aage kese badhna hai.

Suhana : okay! Zara batao mujhe bhi...

Veer : Ek food truck lunga. Aur mein khud serve karunga.

Suhana ne jaise hi ye suna toh usse laga jese Veer ne boht bada koi chutkula maara tha.

Suhana : Ek minute! Kya kaha tumne? Food truck? Aur tum khud serve karoge?

Veer (smiles) : Yes!

Suhana : M-Matlab tum khud khana banaoge?

Veer : Of course~

Uska confidence se bhara jawaab sunn Suhana ne apne maatha pakda kuch derr ke liye aur uss par aankhein ghumaate hue boli,

Suhana : Dekho Veer! Tum yadi subah subah saste nashe kar ke aaye ho na toh please kisi aur ko jaake ye baatein sunao. Yaha nahi! Kyuki mein already pehle se hi kaafi fed up hu. Aur mujhe ye bakwaas nahi sunn'ni abhi.

Suhana ne keh toh diye the ye shabd par Veer ke chehre par muskuraahat gaayab hokar ek serious face saamne aa chuka tha uske.

Veer : You think I'm joking...!?

Suhana : Of course! Baccho ka khel thodi hai ye. Aur ye kya bekaar se business shuru kar rahe ho haan? Food truck? Really? Paagal ho gaye ho kya? Arre start up kar lete koi accha sa? Food truck? Tumhe pata hai aaye din kitne food truck khulte hai? Na jaane kitne saare. Aur unme se chalte keval ek do hi hai. Aur wo bhi itna hi chalte hai ki do waqt ki roti se pait bhar sake wo apna.

Suhana toh jese apni poori badhaas nikaal rahi thi. Uski nazro me ye jese tucch kaam tha.

Suhana : Arre tum ek college ke student ho yaar. Mene tumse better hi expect kiya tha.

Veer (smiles) : So aap isme involve nahi hona chahogi?

Suhana : Of course not! Paagal ho kya? Why would I? Inn chote mote maamlo ke alaawa mujhe dherr saare kaam hai Veer. Mujhe laga tha tum ek fine brand apne liye kholna chaahte ho so I thought ki mein thodi help kar dungi. Par ye Food truck? Really? Zara imagine karo ki Suhana xxxxxx company ke C.E.O ki wife aur xxxxxxx company ke maalik ki beti, ek food truck ke saamne khade hoke vada paav khaa rahi hai. Really? Ughhh! J-Just go Veer! Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai. Yadi idea change kar rahe ho tabhi baat karna iss baare me nahi toh...

Kehte hue Suhana waapas apne laptop me lag gayi. Usne ek nazar bhi fir Veer par nahi daali. Shayad aaj wo waqai busy thi.

Par Veer ko uska uttar mil chuka tha. Ki Suhana uske iss plan me koi madad nahi karne waali thi.

[She... How can she be so rude? Huh!? I mean... Idea wasn't that bad... But itna kya isko irritation ho raha hai?]

Veer wahi baitha hua tha. Usne kuch pal tak kuch nahi kaha. Wo bas ek badi hi halki sii muskaan liye Suhana ko dekh raha tha.

Aur kuch derr baad hi wo utha, usne apni jacket haath par latkaayi aur waha se jaane laga.

Aahat paate hi Suhana ne nazre upar kar Veer ko dekha toh paaya ki wo jaate jaate ekdum se rukk gaya.

Veer ne rukte hue ek nazar peeche mud Suhana ko dekha aur bola,

"Remember! Kaam chota ya bada nahi hota. Aur yadi hota bhi hai aapki nazron me toh... Ek chote kaam se shuruaat karke hi aadmi bade mukaamo par pohuchta hai. You'll soon see... What I will do."

Bas unn shabdo ko rakh Veer waha se nikal gaya.

Par...

Suhana bhauchakii sii wahi baithi darwaaze ko dekh rahi thi jaha se Veer nikal ke gaya tha.

Ye sab kya tha? Ye ajeeb sii feeling kyu aa rahi thi usse? Ek deja vu waali feeling. Ye... Ye toh bilkul wesa hi tha jis din Veer usse hotel me paiso ke guroor ke baare me lecture deke gaya tha.

Aur wo yaad karte hi Suhana ne apna angootha daato tale daba liya.

'Shit! Did I say too much!? I won't regret this right? Of course I won't! Hmph~ Mein bhi dekhti hu wo kese business chalaata hai mere bina. Usse kya pata kya kya problems aati hai ek business start karne se pehle. Rote hue aaega khud mere paas. Hehehe~ fir mein ek aur favour maang lungi uss se. Market me dherro food trucks hai. Par chalta wahi hai jiska chef sahi ho. Aur usne kaha wo khud banaega hahaha~ I will wait to see his funny face.'

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Suhana ke kahe gaye shabd kathor bhi the aur Veer ko dil par bhi lage the. Isme galti Suhana ki nahi thi. Wo wese hi itne bade business ko bachpan se dekhti hui aayi hai aur usme saath rahi hai toh ye sab food truck toh usse chota lagega hi na.

Par Veer ke paas wo tha jiske baare me Suhana nahi jaanti thi.

Pari!

Aur ab toh usse Absolute Chef skill bhi mil chuki thi.

Ye kaafi tha Veer ko apna business shuru karne ke liye.

Par abhi dikkat wo nahi thi. Dikkat thi ye message.

Ye anjaan number se uske phone par aaya message jis par likha tha ~

Meet me at xxxxxxxx Park @ 2 PM

Kaun tha ye shaks jo Veer ko yu iss tarah se bula raha tha message karke?

Ye toh waha jaa ke hi pata lagne waala tha.

Uske waha jaate hi usse filhaal aisa koi bhi nazar na aaya toh Veer ek bench par baith gaya aur wait karne laga.

Aur tabhi usse ek mesaage aaya.

"Kaha par pohcuhe tum?"

Uska reply karte hue Veer ne likh diya ki wo pohuch gaya hai.

Aur firse... Ek mesaage aaya.

"Haan toh fountain ke bagal me lagi bench par aao."

'Fountain ke bagal me lagi!? Huh?'

Sochte hue jaise hi Veer ne fountain spot kiya toh usne uske bagal me dekha.

[Idiot! Wo aadmi issi bench ki baat kar raha hai.]

'Bro whaaatt!?'

Veer ne fir ek message bheja.

"Mein ussi bench pe baitha hu tum kaha ho?"

Toh ek mesaage aaya.

"Mein bhi ussi bench pe hu. Par tum nahi dikh rahe."

'Wtf????'

Aur jaise dono Veer aur uss vyakti ko baat samajh me aayi. Aur dono ne hi palat ke peeche dekha toh paaya ki dono hi ek dusre ke peeche baithe hue the ab tak.

Veer : Wtf??

Ladka : Y-You...

Veer : Toh itni derr se tum peeche baithe the? Aur mein saamne dhundh raha tha tumhe.

Ladka : What the heck? Mein bhi toh wahi kar raha tha.

Veer : Bruh! Ek call hi kar liya hota. Ye sab kya message message khel rahe ho.

Ladka : Ahem! Mein aise anjaan logo se aise ekdum se phone par baat nahi karta.

Veer : Dafuq?

Ladka : Ahem! Wo sab chorro aur yaha aake baitho.

Uski baat maan Veer uske bagal se aake baitha.

Veer ne dekha ki ye ladka dikhne me kaafi smart tha. Kapde bhi kaafi acche pehne hue the usne. Yaha tak ki Veer ne uski accesories ko bhi check kiya toh paaya ki uski ghadi se lekar joote tak sab kuch top class brand ka tha.

'This guy is rich!'

[Yeah!]

Ladka : Toh tum Veer ho right!?

Veer : And you are the unknown guy right?

Ladka (embarassed) : Ahem! Sorry! I forgot my manners. Hi! I'm Karan!

Kehte hue usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne bhi uska haath thaama aur apna naam bataaya.

Veer : So? Mera number kese mila? Kyu milna chaahte ho tum?

Karan : Ahem! So yeah... You know Miss Kaera, right?

Kaera ka naam sunte hi pal bhar ke liye Veer thoda chaukanna ho gaya.

Veer (frowns) : Tumhe kese pata?

Karan : Don't make that face. I'm... I'm her brother.

Veer (surprised) : Ehhhh!?

Karan : Hmm~ Mein... Mein unka chota bhai hu.

Waqai, dikhne me toh wo ekdum Veer ke barabaar ka hi lag raha tha umr me.

Veer : Toh!?? I mean... Mujhse kya kaam?

Karan : Sabse pehle toh... Thank you! Thank you for saving her twice.

Veer : !??

Karan : Haan! Mein jaanta hu. Tumne hi unhe Club se aur uss din Slogan ke changul se churraaya tha.

Veer : Tumhe Slogan ke baare me...!?

Karan : Hmm! Actually, mein out of India tha. Studies ke liye. Par saari details yaha ki mujhe Raghu bhejta hai roz. Ab ye mat puchna ki mujhe Slogan ke baare me kya kya pata hai. Mujhe bas yahi pata hai ki wo ek boht bada crime boss hai. Kayi saare cases me uska naam hai. Aur foreign me uska main adda hai. Wese kayi aur hideouts hai uske. Bas! Itna hi pata hai mujhe. Baaki zyaada jaankaari intelligence team ko hogi hamaari.

Veer : Intelligence team?

Karan : Hmm~ Didi ki security ke liye hire ki hai humne.

Veer : O-Ohhh!

Karan : So thank you! Aur... I want to talk about something.

Veer : Kis baare me?

Karan : Raghu mujhse harr detail share karta tha. Including details about you. Mujhe pata chala hai ki kayi baar Raghu ne didi ko tumhaare saath dekha hai, wo bhi muskuraate hue. Didi muskura rahi thi. Wo khush thi. So... I want to tell you about something. Kya tum sunoge? It's about her.

Veer (frowns) : ....

Karan : ....

Veer (sighs) : Fine... Talk!
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