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Cliffhanger pe chorrna toh number one rule hai art of writing ka.Ye writer har baar aisa karta hain, suspense suspense suspense

Thanks bro!nice update ..pari ka sujhaw sahi nahi laga veer ko..
aur ye raghu ko kisne address diya tha .kya veer ya koi aur .
Nice
Very nice update
Awesome update
Thank you guys!Superb update...
Fantastic update
Superb update
Nice update
UPDATE BHOT ACHI THI BRO AUR JAISA KE STORY CHAL RAHI HE US HISAB SE TO RAGHU WO NOTE VEER NE HY DIYA HOGA BAKHI TO STORY MA HYPATA CHALE GA KE AGE KIYA HOWA HE
Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update
Lajwab update bhai mza aaya gya
Dhanyavaad guys!Nice update
Then only you maintain reader's interest for next episode......Cliffhanger pe chorrna toh number one rule hai art of writing ka.![]()
aur chaadar ke niche kuch interesting dekhne ko milegaRaaz pe raaz chadhte jaa rahe hai par ek samay aane ki derri hai bas.
Aur fir wo saare raaz chaadar ke bhaati hat'te jaenge.
Thanks a lot!![]()
Uske liye mega updates bhi toh deta hu na aksar!?Bhai itne gap kar dete ho aap to ek update extra me hi de diya karo month me
Nidhi ka matter famiglia arc me hoega. Jo ki next arc hai.Bhai nidhi ka kuch karo bechari kab tak aise he bhatakte Rahegi![]()
Bhumika ko toh pehle se hi kuch theek nahi lagta tha. Aur ab veer ne uske andar guilt ka wo baandh tod diya hai. Pari Veer ko nuksaan kabhi nahi pohuchaegi.Ohoo... शायद अब भुमिका के दिल मे भी वीर के प्रति एक soft corner बनने लगा है ।
अच्छी बात है ।
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परी के दिन प्रतिदिन बदलते व्यवहार के कारण मुझे कहानी के नायक श्री वीर जी की चिंता होने लगी है।
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कहीं ऐसा न हो की देवी परी ही....
श्री वीर का चीर हरण कर दे![]()

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
Nice update bro
Nice update
Awesome update bro
Thanks a lot guys!Nice update..slogan to kuch or hi chahata hai veer or kaera sai or lgta hai use pari kai bare m bhi pata hai ki veer kai pass hai ..bht sai swaal hai jo dhire dhire khulte jae gai
"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.
~ Tumhara Shubh chintak."
kon hai ye kya ye veer hai jisne ye likha kar rkha tha..
Ye ho na ho Suhana hi hai jo veer aur keara ki chup kar jasusi kar rhi thi ussi ne ye note chodda tha..
ho sakta hai maybe!?
Waqt bataega!Akhir bhumika ke dil me bhi ek soft corner ban rha hai veer ke liye dekhte hai kya kbhi Veer wo jaan payega.
Dadaji ab phele se better hai Qki unka favorite pota jo aj unse milne aaya tha ' Veer '
hmm...Yessss!!!prinjal ko lagta h aj bhi ye wo hi veer hai hai phele wala jab undono ka amna samna hoga to dekhne layak hoga..
Ye kaam complicated hoga dono ke liye ...Arohi ab apne bhaiyo se jada Veer par trust krne lagi hai Qki usne sara such bata diya h veer ko Aur ab dono mil kar pta laga lege ki dadaji gire to akhir gire kese..
Thank you so much bro!Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...![]()
Satya kaha aapne. Nidhi ko apni chinta nahi hai, uske apno ki chinta zyada hai. Khaaskar Dhruv, Shreya, Juhi, uske mata pita aur... Maybe even Veer!?Veer ki harqat kisi aur ke liye beshak uncomfortable ho sakti thi lekin veer aur nidhi ke beech ke rishte me itni si baato se uncomfortable hone se aage ja chuka hai.....lekin Nidhi bhi apni jagha puri tarha galat nahi thi Nidhi us aurat ko daikh ker ghabrayi zaroor lekin apne liye nahi use iss cheez ki fikar huwi ke ghar se nikalne ke baad wo Shweta aur juhi ko le ker kahan jaye gi....wo kehte hai na
' Insaan apne liye nahi.....Apno ke liye darta hai
Next update padhiye!Lo ji ab Veer atish se bhirne jaye ga lekin ab us ke paas suhana ka support ho ga jis se us ko Atish se nibatne me asani ho gi....Zahir si baat hai ye baat bohat aage tak jaye gi
Yessss! Suhana ki kaafi hadd tak personality uske control me rehti hai. Wo tab hi baahar aati hai jab wo gusse me rehti hai. Aur akeli rehti hai. Par saath hi saath wahi uski asli personality hai. Wo personality cute bhi hai, thodi aggressive bhi par yadi handled with care kiya toh boht hi pyaari bhi saabit ho sakti hai. Hehe~Split personality hmm....split personality ki bhi bohat tarha ki iksam hoti hai....jaise kuch ka bus halka sa behavior change hota hai wanhi kuch to 2 Zindagiya he jeene lag jate hai.....jahan ek personality Achai ke kaam ker rahi hoti hai wanhi dusri burai se ghiri hoti hai....ab daikhna hai ke Suhana kis kisam ki split personality ko shikar hai
Mushkil he lagta hai mere ko....kiu ke atish main lead role me hai wo itni jaldi to nahi mare ga hope ke veer ko zada nuksaan na pohanche
no spoilersHahaha~Chand he lamho me Veer ke liye golu ka kia mukam ho gya hai ye ap ne bohat khoobi se dikhaya hai.....lekin mere ko abhi bhi lag raha hai ke golu zinda ho ga aur villan ke role me aye ga....sawal hai mere ko aisa kiu lag raha hai ....wo iss liye ke main ne nagin serial bohat shok se daikha tha us me aisa he hota tha![]()