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Aapke sawaal ka jawaab update 54 me hai.बहुत ही जबरदस्त
चलो एक बात तो साफ है
वीर की दिल की धड़कन निधि के लिए, निधि के वजह से बढ़ जाती है और वही हाल निधि की भी है
चलो अब वीर को चार सौ पॉइंट और मिल गए अब उन पॉइंट्स का इस्तेमाल कैसे करेगा यह बाद में पता चलेगा
पर मुझे एक बात जननी है रघु को स्लोगन के हाइड आउट का पता कैसे चला
Update 55 me kaafi kuch hone wala hai.lovely update ..ragini gussa ho gayi thi veer se ,apni halat bhulkar bike ke baare me puchhne laga veer..
aur ye suman ko to chat hi liya hospital me ,ye bhi nahi socha ki nidhi ya ragini ander aa sakti hai.. suman ko abhi bahut kuch sikhna hai aur wo ragini se sikh bhi rahi hai ,
par ye veer kab business start karega.. nidhi ko paise ki madad karni hai par nidhi ke paas sirf 1 saal hai apne bachche ko pati se vapas lene ke liye
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veer aur nidhi ke bich baate huyi aur veer ne care karne par shayad pyar me gir jayega ye bhi bol diya .
There's a reason ki kyu aisa hai. Update 54 yadi padh liya hoga then you might have got your answer.Reward to penalty ratio kuch gadbad nahi hai.
Nice update. It seems story on a freeze aage nahi badhi. But again a good one.
Boht boht dhanyavaad bro!★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...
★ Veer ki heartbeat me uchal mtlb kuch 2 hota hai...
★ suman se akhir veer chahta kya h q usko sab chize sikhne ke liye bola veer ne..
★ Ragini bhi ab uspar apni jaan chidkne lagi hai..
★ ye update Tha Veer ke liye teeno me kitni care aur kitna pyar chuppa tha..
★ dekhte hai aage kya hoga...?
★ Waiting for next update...![]()
Vivek ki nazro me property pehle hai fir Ragini.Brilliant update bhai. Teen prichit aurten. Sab ki ek alag feeling hy veer k Liye aur veer ki in k Liye. Kaera toh rescue ho gayee aur points bhai mil gaye ab dada g ka matter dekhna ho ga. Aur yeh Sala Vivek apni naraz biwi ko Bhool kar property k Liye sazishen rach Raha hy iski toh main......
A Terrific story of this forum
Fully romantic update.Thanx for giving this masterpiece.
Yahi toh samay hai bhai, aur yahi zindagi.Ye to kuch jayada hi chemical lochcha-e-ulfat ho gaya. Kahan to koi bhi Veer ko nahi poochta tha aur kahan ab sab ke sab toot ke pade jaa rahe hai. Samay aur kismat kabhi bhi badal sakti hai. Magar pari aur slogan dono ka hi kuch to gadbad ghotala chal raha hai. Mast update.
Story lambi hai. So, uss hisaab se pace sahi hai. Ye typical incest story nahi jaha kuch updates ke baad sex ho jaaye. Kayi saari cheezo ko zehen me rakhna padta hai bro. System! Jo itni badi cheez hai usko saath leke chalna padta hai. Logic se baahar hone ke baad bhi story aapko real World se jode hue hai. Ye maintain karke hi chalna padta hai.Bht puzzle hai phli bat to mother ka kuj pta ni Bhai story achi hai bt thodi fast kro to i think kuj intrst bna rhe bht slow hai story
Yes! Jaisa ki mene upar kaha. This story is longer than my previous one.Ya to bht lmbi khich rhe ho ap ya phir kya reson hai bt story hai bht mst
Yes! Let me tell you one of my secrets.is episode me jayda kuch to hua nhi lekin emotional scene bohat dhasu tha.............. #update of emotions .
and at last update jhakaas tha![]()
Or she might not!? Remember! Nidhi has a reserved personality when it comes to accepting feelings. Because she's married woman. Plus Veer is her student. And lastly, veer is around 8-9 years younger than her. That alone makes things quite complicated for her. Will she accept? Will she not!?So bro finally veer has given a great hint to nirdhi Or we can say indirectly tells her right feeling let's see what nidhi will give response bcz evry action has equal and opposite reaction![]()
What he will do with points? This will be shown in update 55.And in last pari also awakes with 400 points in bag i think veer should buy or upgrade his martial arts or some extra tricks and technique from shop with 400 of those points
First of all thanks a lot!i have just finished this story
it's amazing
i liked the concept
story main kuch sawal hai, jis karan story ko padhne main maza aata hai
jaise abhi ke liye
veer ki maa or haveli ki kahani
veer nidhi ko kaise problem solve karta hai
slogan keara ke piche kyun padi hai or slogan ki kahani
pari ka vaise behave karna or system ke bare main sare jawab
aise hi kayi sare sawal hai
but story ka pace slow hai
story track se bhatak rahi hai
but overall the story is Fantastic