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[Casinar]

wow wow wow.... each update is better than the other
What a transformation going on in the story casi bro... it's turning out to be a thriller now it seems....
What a breathtaking update you have written today my dear, just loved ir..... once read is not enough i will read it again, but let me first give my point of view on this fantastic update....
Anand still playing his role, he dominates the scene where chawla and sanjana got to remain silent, only Anand's monologue invades the scene, still you do not forget to mention how sanjana and chawla react and what they are doing....
during i could feel like watching a movie scene, i was visualising how sanjana.s facial expressions could be, how chawla would be looking and watching at Anand... you described the hug between chawla and sanjana very well which needed to be there, it was intense and very well placed. Anand is strong in his speech delivery. you made him become very strong with this part indeed.
but the way you transformed the scene towards Chawla's strength suddenly is worth it. w en he stood to leave, despite that Anand still got the power mentioning about the DNA... still chawla and sanjana leave and seem to be the winner despite all odds..
I also loved the parts you mentioned the GSA... i also have read lot of things about that phenomenon... its true... and i alao know about real siblings living together in countries where incest is not a crime....
Casi bro the way you have ended this episode is drastical..... “Papa kill that bastard!! Kill him now!” This is so bold, never expected such words will be uttered by Sanjana......
You are an amazing, fantastic, wonderful, superb writer casi bro.
Hats off to you...... want to read more and more and much more from you. keep writing my dear friend. never stop.

thanks very very much for the appreciative post rowdy bro, you always enhance my mood to write better

 

[Casinar]

vah casi bhai vah, bilkol sapnon mein bhi nahin socha tha eisa twist aega is kahani mein
kamaal kar diya aap ne eisa twist daal kar iss kahani mein
#aap ne chaar chand laga diya iss thread ko woooowww
fantastic bhai maja agaya padhke!
:

bahot bahot shukriya indian bhai

 

[Casinar]

kamaal bhai kamaal bahut hi badhya jaa raha hai kahani
ajib o gharib haadsaat pesh aa rahe hein wow
aap ne Anand ko vilain bana diya wo bhi jabardast wala
superb casi bhai bahot hi umda update hai bahut jabardast hai jamke ghamasayne update diye ho aap

shukriya dost achah laga ke tum sab ko passand arahe hein updates

 

[Casinar]

lo kallo baat yeh to ab kamaal pe kamaal hota ja rah hai
itna jabardast par jabardast update dene lage ho aap
ab to thriller ka roop bhi lene lagi hai kahani..
to ab kia murder hoga kia?
sanjana eise kahegi yeh bhi bilkool soch se bahaar tha
kia likhte ho yaar aap... buss chihunka dete ho....
bahut hi stronmg update hai bhai teenon update ek se badhkar ek hai... baut hi powerful hai
anand ka character ab mazbut ho gaya haiu magaar aap ne sanjana se ussko maarne ki baat kehkar ussko phuss kara diya ek h pal eij magar ab kia hoga yeh to suspense wala update bhi ho gaya..
wah casi bhai eise hi aap ko legend nahin kehte aap ho sach mein legend..
ek incest story mein eisa twist to kabhi nah dekha nah padha..
you rocj casi bhbai

iss appreciation ke liye bahot dhanyawad bhai

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic update with lots of emotions and twists

thanks very much my dear

 

[Casinar]

agle update ka badi besabri se itejaar rahega bhai

thodi der mein update karta hoon

 

[Casinar]

Well, You should be surprised to know that I came to this platform because of your story.
The story really touched me and went on reading it non stop. You are really a very good writer who puts the emotions in such a way that it looks very much real.
Thanks for such a good story and many more ftom you.

really its a great pleasure then, happy to know this.
thank you so very very much.

 

[Casinar]

Awesome update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
And welcome back bhai,
sanjana khud apne ghar nikal gayi aur idhar aarav ke liye usne saanvi ko chhod diya hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

aap ke comments ko wapas dekh kar bahot acha laga jitu bhai, aap ka tehe dil se shukriya

 

[Casinar]

Awesome update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
bhai ye kya dangerous update diya hai,
poora ka poora dimaag hi ghoom gaya hai,
ab bhi yakin karna muskil hai ki sanjana chawla sahab ki beti hai,
ab ye anand kaun sa naya dhamaka karne wala hai,

dil ki gehraayi se shukriya Jitu bhai

 

[Casinar]

Awesome update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Ye anand to had se jyada kamina nikla,
Chawla sahab to uski baate sunkar hi jadwat ho gaye hain,
lekin sanjana ka pyaar chawla sahab ke liye aur badh gaya hai,
ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai

thanks very much again jitu bhai, keep reading.