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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 240 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

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Werewolf

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Xabhi

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Ahm ahm
Subah Subah kin logon
ka muh dekh liye apne veer babu vivek apne mata pita ko lekar ragini k han pohanch hi gaya lakin too bad apni koi daal galti na deakh ker dimagh hi fuse ho gaya uska to or jb Veer ne rangini k kandhe pe hath oh my God sala uski to buri tarah fat k hath me aa gayi abhi to just hath hi rkha hai age or b ae ga thora relax dude😁
convince to bht kare wo log sala pyar tak bol rha ta lakin jb pichwade me goli ghusne ka dar ta tab kaise ro diya pls don't kill me😂
ragini beshak mar jai kise faraq parta hai lakin thanks to Veer babu
suman boli to acha lakin mujhe acha nhi lag rha is character ko le ker kyu k ye lead character me to hai nhi bs side character hai wo b just Pari ki puch puch k liye😂
isliye is ko thora side hi rakho such keh rha hu kuch zaida hi ho gaya hai lagta jaise koi 19&20 saal ki paremika ho Veer ki hope so bura nhi laga apko
main wahi bat bolu ga jo dill me hai jb kyu k story hamare emotions k sath juri hoi to jo b dill me ho wahi zuban pe hona chahiye is bat pe thora ghor kijye ga request smjh lo
Suhana ka to lagta hai k fuse hi ud
gaya aise kon behave karta hai😂
koi atma vatma to nhi ghus gyi usme🤣
mujhe to pure feelings ai ho na ho paka ye ladki phyco hai sali kuch ker hi na de last time pe Veer ki pant gili.hote hote bachi thori dair or continue karti usko to at the spot heart attack hi ho jata😁
lakin shuker hai k churail ko hosh aa hi gaya dair se hi sahi
doctor ko dikhane ko mangta hao suchi koi risk nhi lene ka in jaisu ka koi barosa nhi kab kia ho jai
Nidhi ji ko bht miss ker rhe hain😓
jaldi se unko b lao last time jb wo train wala incident hone ko ta tab usko realize to howa lakin wapis aa k sb kuch bhool gaya shayad ye to unfair hai
khair abhi k liye itna hi phir mile ge chalte chalte😁
Keep going ❤
Superb revo bhai :applause: :applause:
 

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No word for your great and hard work bro... Bahut ho gyi angregi ab Hindi me suno Vaise to mere pass sabdo ki kami hai bahut pr jo 2-4 hai Vo bol deta hu kabhi kabhi...
Veer ne basic martal art tecnik buy kr liya hai yha atish bhau ko veer ke bare me pta chal gya hai ki Vahi hai in sb nakamiyo ke pichhe usne apne jalsha Namak jagah pr veer ki khatirdari karne ka socha hai usne apne pyade Yani Khash admi ka sar uda diya veer pahuch gya hai suhana ke ghar or vha jo usne dekha hai suhana ka pagalpan ek taraf to hashi aa rhi thi or dusri taraf dar bhi lag rha hai veer ko koi is chudail se bcha le... Ab to dekh bhi liya hai suhana ne veer ko
Pari ne veer ko Alfa tread ke bare me btaya hai Jo ki sunne me hi Jabardast lag rha hai indurance me bhi 15 point add kr liye hai dekhte hai atish bhau ke samne ye kya kaam aati hai...
Karunesh or veer ki chachi ke sath sath veer ke bhai ko jo Suman ne sunaya hai Wah wah wah kya bat hai maza type hi aa gya padh kr... Such me great effort bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab update superb
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Update - 32 ~ The Calm before the Storm.
Ab tak...

Idhar Veer saare intezaamo se khush tha aur ab wo ring waapas karne ke liye jaane hi waala tha.

Wo jese hi darwaaze par aaya toh gate ke baahar hi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi dii.

"Aaiye Dad... Aaiye Mom!"

Aur jese hi usne gate khola...

Saamne Vivek, Sumitra aur Karunesh car se utar ke seedha uske saamne hi khade the.


Ab aage...

Jese hi Veer ne gate se baahar nikal ke saamne dekha toh wo chaunk gaya. Aur kyu na chaunkta? Saamne uska bada bhai Vivek aur uske chacha chachi jo khade hue the.

Jab unn teeno ne Veer ko dekha toh unke chehre par bhi wahi bhaav the jo Veer ke chehre par the.

Hairaani ke bhaav!

"Veeeer!??" Sumitra ke hontho se apne aap Veer ka naam usse dekhte hi nikal gaya.

Karunesh bhi hairaan tha aur Vivek bhi. Akhir Veer Ragini ke ghar kya kar raha tha!?

Agla scene yahi tha ki sabhi hall me baithe hue the aur ek ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Na koi kuch bol paa raha tha na hi kar paa raha tha. Mahaul behad hi awkward ho chuka tha.

Aur ye ajeeb sa sannaata jese uss awkwardness ko aur badhaata jaa raha tha.

Karunesh aur Sumitra dono hi Ragini ko dekhte jo unke saamne hi sofe par baithi hui thi aur fir Veer ko dekhte jo uske bagal se lage sofe se baitha hua tha.

Ragini ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Wo ekdum nidar hoke baithi thi jiske chalte Veer khud hairaan reh gaya. Usse laga tha ki uski Bhabhi thoda seham gayi hogi yu achanak apne saas sasur ko dekh ke. Par Ragini toh jese ekdum taiyaar baithi hui thi.

Jese maano wo wait hi kar rahi thi ki aao aur puchiye sawaal aur koshish kariye mujhe ghar le jaane ki.

Uska ye attitude dekh Karunesh aur Sumitra ki bolti band thi. Akhir kaar, kuch palo ke baad Sumitra ne badi hi himmat juta ke baat shuru kii.

Sumitra : B-Beta Ragini?

Ragini (smiles) : Jii?

Ragini ki muskaan dekh Sumitra duwidha me pad gayi aur apne shabdo ko kehne me uski hich-kichaahat aur jese badh gayi.

Sumitra : Wo... Dekho beta. Hume ghar me sabhi ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai. Itni badi ghatna ho gayi... Yaha tak ki ab bhi ye police ke saath lage hue hai... Aur waha uss waqt kya sthiti thi ye hum samajh sakte hai. Tumhare maa baap pe jo beeti wo bhi behad hi dukhad aur chinta janak ghatna thi.

Ragini : Hmm!

Sumitra : Toh... Toh... Beta jo kuch bhi waha hua wo... Wo ek haadsa tha. Iske chalte hume aur ekjut hona chaahiye hai na? Na ki aur aise rishto ke beech misunderstanding paida karni chaahiye.

Ragini : Mene kab hi misunderstanding khadi kii maa jii? Misunderstanding toh... Aapke hi bete ne kari thi. Meri jaan daav pe laga ke.

Ragini ke harr ek shabd kaate ki tarah Sumitra ko chubh rahe the. Akhir baat sach jo thi. Uske apne hi bete se galti hui thi aur wo jaanti thi. Par wo kese bhi karke ye maamla aur nahi bigaadna chaahti thi.

Sumitra : M-Mein jaanti hu beta. Vivek se galti hui hai. Ye toh hai hi naalayak...

Vivek : Huh? W-Wha...!? What?? Maa??

Sumitra : Par... Tum bhi toh samajhdaar ho beta. Aise yu muh ferr ke ghar se aake yaha akele rehne lagna. Ye toh koi hal nahi hua na samasya ka? Humr baith ke baat karke isse suljhaana chaahiye na?

Ragini : Samasya?? Kesi samasya? Mera dil chotil hua hai Maa jii! Mera dil...

Bolte bolte, Ragini ki awaaz tezz ho chuki thi aur aankho me nami bhi panapna shuru ho chuki thi, jo Veer side se gaur se notice kar paa raha tha. Par fir bhi, wo shaant hi raha.

Ragini : Khud ko meri jagah rakh ke dekhiye Maa jii! Kesa lagega aapko? Yadi aap meri jagah hoti aur sasur jii aapko ye kehte ki, "meri jaan bacha lo aur meri patni ki jaan lelo." Kesa lagta aapko? Boliye?? Jawaab dijiyeee!??

Aur bas...

Sumitra ka sarr apne aap jhuk gaya. Wo nazre milaane laayak nahi thi.

Karunesh : Ragini beta... Dekho! Ye baat hum sabhi jaante hai aur tum dono bhi jaante ho ki tum dono hi ek dusre se boht pyaar karte ho. Hai ki nahi Vivek?

Vivek : Of course Dad! Ragini! You do know how much I love you right? Unn baato ko tum soch rahi ho par unn baato ko kese bhul gayi Ragini? Jab humne saath saath jo time spend kiya, saath saath kayi jagah ghumne gaye, kitne sweet moments humne bitaaye... Yaad karo. Kya tum meri bas ek galti ke chalte hamaara saara ateet bhula dogi? Sab kuch?

Vivek ki baat sunn Ragini ki bauhe sikudi aur pal bhar ke liye usse apne ateet ke khush-haal pal yaad aane lage. Waqai! Usne apne dil se Vivek ko chaaha tha. 2 saal se wo dono relationship me the aur uske baad hi unhone shadi kari. Lagbhag teen saal ho chuke the unhe.

Par firse...

Ragini ko jese agle hi pal wo scene yaad aa gaya. Wo scene jidhar wo bandhi hui thi, aur uska pati Vivek, khud ki jaan ki bheenk maang, apni patni ki jaan daav pe laga raha tha.

Aur ye sochte hi Ragini ka paara fir chadh gaya.

Ragini : Mere dil pe jo ghaaat pohuchi hai. Wo tum nahi samjhoge Vivek kabhi. Kabhi nahi!

Vivek : R-Ragini!?

Ragini : Yadi... Yadi uss waqt uss aadmi ne mere sarr par revolver rakh ke yahi sawaal pucha hota toh pata hai mera jawaab kya hota? Mera jawaab hota... Ki meri jaan lelo... Par mere suhaag ko kuch na hone paaye... Mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karte ho Vivek... Par dekho... Dekho! Mein kitni galat thi. Dekho... *Sniff*

Aur Ragini ke aasuo ka baandh toot gaya.
Wo rone lagi.

Tabhi usse kandhe pe apne kisi ka haath mehsoos hua. Jese hi usne apna sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Veer usse dekh uske kandhe par haath rakhe hue tha. Aur na jaane kyu, aaj Veer ko apni taraf se pehli baar pahal karte dekh Ragini ka mann andar se hi behad prafullit ho utha. Wo apna haath badhaa ke Veer ka haath thaamti aur uski bhavnao ko samajhti par...

Saamne uske saas sasur aur uska pati maujood tha. Wo chaah kar bhi... Ye na kar saki.

Idhar Veer ke iss chote se gesture ne jese baaki sab ko hila ke rakh diya. Karunesh aur Sumitra toh the hi hairaan par Vivek aankhe faade Veer ke haath ko dekh raha tha jo iss waqt uski patni ke kandho par maujood tha.

Aur uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi.

Aur jo usse nahi karna chaahiye tha wo akhir usne kar hi diya.

Vivek : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho Veer? Akele? Apni Bhabhi ke saath?

Uska sawaal sunte hi agle hi pal Ragini ki aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Par fir achanak hi uske chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi.

'Mujhe toh samajh jaana chaahiye tha. Tum se akhir yahi ghatiya soch ki umeed thi mujhe Vivek. Mene tumhe kya socha tha aur tum kya nikle. Par... Dosh toh mera hi hai na? Jo mein aise vyakti se pyaar kar baithi? But Thanks to that incident. Akhir meri aankhein toh khul gayi.'

Wo sochte hue ekdum asahaay sii chintan me doob gayi.

Idhar Sumitra apne bete ki baat samjhte hue usse chillaane hi waali thi ki tabhi Veer bol pada.

Veer : Kya kar raha hu matlab? Mein Bhabhi ke saath hi yahi rehta hu.

Vivek : Kyyyyaaaaaa!????

Vivek shock ke maare apni jagah se uth gaya aur unhe ghoorne laga.

Veer : What? Uss ghar se toh mujhe wese hi nikaal diya gaya hai. Uske baad mein apni Ma'am ke saath reh raha tha unke ghar. But mein nahi chaahta tha ki unhe aur pareshaani hoye so I left. Finally, Bhabhi ne mujhe yaha rukne ko keh diya. So, I'm here now. Any problem with that?

Vivek keval daant meesta reh gaya par kuch derr tak bol na paaya. Apni patni ko akele apne chote bhai ke saath dekh, khaas kar uss chote bhai ke saath jis se wo behad nafrat karta aaya hai. Mirchi toh lagni thi. Gussa bhi jayaz tha. Par ek shaq bhi paida ho chuka tha. Wo shaq jo kabhi nahi hona chaahiye tha. Wo shaq jo ghatiya soch ka ek prateek tha.

Aur wo kehte hai na, Gusse me aadmi apna aapa kho baithata hai.

Wahi hua.

Vivek (uchi awaaz me) : Raaaginiiii???? Ye sab kya hai??? Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahi ho? Aas paas ke log kya sochenge yadi unhe pata lagega ki ek aurat apna ghar aur pati ko chorr ke yaha akele apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai? Bolo?? Koi sense hai tum me ya nahi??

Vivek ke teekhe bol poore hall me goonj rahe the . Par Ragini jese helpless ho chuki thi poori tarah. Wo muskuraayi aur fir ek niraasha aur aasha-heen chintan me doob gayi,

'Shayad sach hi kaha gaya hai. Ki insaan apna asli roop tab hi dikhaata hai jab maut uske saamne khadi ho. Vivek! Tumne bhi dikhaaya tha. Aur ab toh tumhaare aur naye naye rang mujhe dekhne ko mil rahe hai. Kitni dukhad gaatha hai na meri? Ya fir yahi sahi tha? Hmm! Veer ke saath bhi toh mene galat kiya tha na? Ye unhi karmo ka fal hai. Uparwaale ki aankho se koi apraadh nahi bachta.'

Wo gusse se Ragini ko dekh raha tha aur jawaab ki maang kar raha tha par bechaari Ragini apne gham me hi doobi hui thi.

Sumitra : Viveeeeekkkkk!

Sumitra ne yaha chillaaya par wo aage kuch keh paati ki tabhi sabhi ke kaano me ek awaaz padi,

"Kisne kaha ki wo yaha akeli apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai?"

Aur tabhi sab ki nazre upar ki orr gayi toh dekha ki...

Suman, Aabha, aur Sonali teeno stairs se neeche utar unki hi taraf aa rahi thi. Aur wo awaaz bhi Suman ki hi thi.

Wo aise chal ke aa rahi thi jese maano iss ghar ki hi mukhiya ho. Uske chalne ka dhang, uska pehnaava, bol chaal me wo wazan ne jese waha maujood sabhi logo ko shaant rehne ke liye majboor kar diya.

Suman : Aapki himmat kese hui apni patni par itna ghatiya laanchan lagaane ki? Kya itna hi bharosa hai aapko uspe? Upar se apne hi chote bhai ke saamne? Kya aap me koi sense hai?

Vivek (jhepte hue) : K-Kaun ho aap?

Suman : Mein Kaun hu? Itna bhi nahi pata aapko? Ki kisi se naam puchne se pehle apna khud ka parichay dena chahiye. Kherr! Mein Suman hu. Ragini ki sakha. Uske bachpan ki dost. Aur yaha uske ghar rehne aayi hu kyuki usse iss dukhad waqt me meri zaroorat thi. Ye dono meri betiya hai. Ab boliye! Kese aapne bina jaache parkhe ye ghatiya sawaal uthaaya? Aur aap dono? Kese sanskaar diye hai apne bete ko? Kya aise le jaane aaye hai apni bahu ko? Le jaane aaye hai ya uske charitra par keechad uchaalne aaye hai? Boliye!!!!

Suman ke hamlo ne jese teeno Sumitra, Vivek aur Karunesh ko aise ghaayal kar diya tha ki ab wo apna muh kholne ke laayak nahi bache the.

Suman : Arre yadi kapdo ki qadr karo toh kapde bhi aapki qadr karte hai. Fir yaha toh ye aapki bahu hai. Ghar ki Lakshmi. Aapki himmat kese hui uss Lakshmi ka apmaan karne ki? Kuch hi dino me Diwali ka tyohaar hai. Jisme Lakshmi ko poojte hai hum. Aasha karti hu tab tak aap apni iss Lakshmi ko apne ghar poori izzat ke saath apni galtiyo ka paschataap karte hue yaha se le jaenge. Par filhaal ke liye... Jaiye yaha se. Meri dost ko jab aapse milna hoga. Wo aapko khud bulaegi ya milne aa jaegi. Aur tab... Mein beech me nahi aaungi. Ab jaiye! Aur meri dost ko akela chorr dijiye.

Suman iss waqt waha khadi aisi prateet ho rahi thi jese maano ek lecture room me scholar khada ho. Sharmindagi ka aisa aayina dikhaaya usne unn teeno ko ki teeno ko hi waha se bina kuch bole hi forun nikalna pad gaya.

Unke jaate hi jese hi Suman ne palat ke dekha toh paaya Ragini rote hue usse dhanyavaad de rahi thi. Wahi jab usne apne maalik ko dekha toh pata chala unka muh hairat ke maare khula hua tha. Aur ye dekh wo mann hi mann muskuraayi.

'Fufu~ Maalik dang reh gaye. Par unhe ab pata lag gaya hoga ki... Unki musibate meri musibate hai. Aur harr waqt harr mod pe mein unki madad karungi.'

Idhar Veer hakka bakka sa Suman ko ghoor raha tha.

'Daaamnnnnn! What the fuck just happened? I think I know ki kyu tumne Suman ko diamond kaha tha Pari. Damn! She's a fucking Leader. She handled that situation without even knowing the actual truth. Was she listening to us the whole time?'

[Haha~ Didn't I told ya?]

Suman : Maaf kijiyega Ragini jii. Mujhe aapka naam lena pada.

Ragini : H-Huh? N-Nahiii! *Sniff* Aap mujhse badi ho toh... *Sniff* Aap mujhe naam se bula sakti ho.

Suman muskuraayi par kuch na boli. Ab kyuki ye samasya filhal ke liye tal chuki thi toh Veer utha aur Ragini ko samjha ke baahar ki orr jaane laga toh Suman usse baahar tak chorrne aayi.

Suman : Maalik? Aap kidhar jaa rahe hai?

Veer : Kuch zaroori kaam hai Suman! Aur madad ke liye shukriya. Yadi tum na hoti toh pata nahi ye maamla kese nipatata.

Suman (smiles) : Kyu na hoti mein? Ab se... Harr jagah aapke saath hi rehna hai mujhe.

Kehte hue wo qareeb aayi toh iss baar Veer ne bina kisi jhijak ke haule se uske narm narm rass bhare honth choom liye.

Veer : Aata hu. Bhabhi ka dhyaan rakhna.

Suman : Hmm! Aap befiqr rahiye maalik.

Aur Veer waha se nikal gaya.

***

Uska mission akhir poora jo nahi hua tha. Mission tha~ Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring.

Ab usne chase down toh kar liya tha par ring waapas bhi karni thi.

Sonia ko call kar usne unke ghar ka address le liya tha. Aur wo wahi ki orr jaa raha tha.

Par raaste me hi usne Pari se uss Alpha trait function ke baare me jaankaari lii.

'What is this Alpha Trait function Pari? Vistaar me samjhao. Tumne kaha tha ki baad me tum samjhaogi.'

[Yes! Master! It's exactly as it sounds. Yaani ki... Ab aap submissive Beta male nahi rahoge. You will become an Alpha male now. Ek aisa male jisse jhukna aata hi nahi. Jidhar bhi jaaye hamesha top pe rahe. Jis bhi hierarchy me ho, hamesha king rahe uska. That is what Alpha male is.]

'Par uss raat wo sab kya tha? Meri body heat up hona and suddenly mera emotional state se ekdum lustful state me chale jaana?'

[It's because of Alpha Trait function Master. Alpha Males, jesa ki mene kaha Submissive nahi hote. Wo jaan de denge ladte ladte par dusre ke saamne jhukenge nahi kabhi. Uss raat aap emotional state me the and Suman ka aapko wese chhuna aur aapko uttejit karna... Uss chakkar me Alpha Trait function trigger ho gaya. Aur ab ye hamesha active rahega.]

'Wh-Whaaatt??'

[Yes! Actually, Master! Levels badhne pe system ka in-built function bhi unlock hota hai. Uss Jatin ko pakadte time waha gaav me aapne yaad hai System ka Path Tracking function use kiya tha?]

'Ab jab tumne uska zikr kiya hai then yeah, I do remember that. Ussi ki wajah se mein Suman ke ghar tak waapas laut paaya tha.'

[Yes! Master! Wo function tab unlock hua tha jab mein level 2 par pohuchi thi.]

'Wait! Wtf? Mujhe notification kyu nahi mila tha fir?'

[Because aapne in-built functions ke notifications band kar ke rakhe hai.]

'The fucccckkk!? Then turn them on now.'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Notifications for In-built functions have been turned on.]

'Good!'

[Haan! Toh jesa ki mein bata rahi thi. Ye Alpha Trait function bhi level 3 par unlock ho gaya tha but trigger nahi hua tha. Trigger hone ke liye aapka emotional state me hona zaroori tha. And then Suman ka attraction hua... So you know...]

'Hmm! I see!'

[Aapko thoda control me rehna padega. It's serious. Shuruaati daur me thodi dikkate aaengi.]

'Wh-What do you mean?'

[What I'm trying to say is... Ki aapko gussa jaldi aaega, aapko apni pride sabse zyaada pyaari rahegi ab, ladkiya mahilaaye, aurte ab aapko kahi zyaada aakarshak lagengi, bhook zyaada lagegi aapko, aap fitness ke peeche bhi bhaagoge, materialistic cheezo ke liye bhi, so... You will have to control yourself.]

'T-This... This is too serious.'

[Hmm! Right! So? Do you want to invest points? 65 points available hai.]

'Hmm! Skill list se Basic Martial Arts Skill purchase karo.'

[Are you sure?]

'Hmm! Aur baaki ke 15 points... Add them to my Endurance.'

[O-Okay!]

*Ding*

[Basic Martial Arts Skill is available now.]

[15 Points have been added to Endurance.]

'So? Ab use kese karni hai ye skill? Turn on karni hai?'

[No master! Ye already turned on rehti hai. You just have to fight now. Martial Arts moves apne aap baahar aaenge. The more you fight the more you will learn and more better you will get. Uske baad aap moderate level martial arts skill buy kar sakte ho.]

'Got it! Next time yadi wo mila... Ranga!!! I'm gonna beat the shit outta him.'

[Also...]

'Hmmm?'

[You were sad last night. Kyuki aap apni Mom ki train ka naam nahi padh paaye the. And aapko laga ki ab aap na jaane fir kabhi mil paoge ya nahi. So don't worry! Aapne bhale hi read na kiya ho but I read it. Train ka naam xxxxxxxxxxxxx hai. Ab aapko sirf unn stations par dhyaan dena hai jaha wo train rukti hai. Unhi kisi stations par aapki Mom utri hogi.]

Pari ki baat sunte hi Veer ki kal raat se jo bechaini bhari hui thi wo jese ek jhatke me usne gaayab kar dii.

'Th-Thank you Pari... I... I don't even... I don't even have words to say right now... Thank you! Thank you! It... It means a lot to me Pari!! I...'

[It's okay Master! I'm here!]

***

Veer finally pohuch chuka tha Suhana ke ghar, entry usse asaani se mil gayi thi kyuki iss baar Sonia ne bol ke rakha tha ki uska khaas guest aa raha hai.

Bangle ke andar aate hi Veer ko alag hi nazaara dekhne ko mila. Ek aisa nazaara jisse uski apne sapno me bhi umeed nahi thi.

Suhana light se kapdo me thi par ye kya??

Wo ro rahi thi...

Ro toh rahi thi beshaq par...!??

Wo ek bade se teddy ko jakde huye thi aur uspe ghuso ki barsaat kar rahi thi aur badbadaaye jaa rahi thi.

"Fuck you chor.... Marr jaa tu... Tere muh me keede pade... *Sniff* Dad ne itna daanta mujhe ughhhuuuu...."

*Slaaaaammmm*

*Baaaangggg*

*Dhhhiiiiiiiiiisshooommmm"

Laato se lekar ghuso tak harr ek vaar kar wo bechaare teddy ka kachumar banaaye jaa rahi thi.

Aur idhar Veer ki haalat ye scene dekh ke hi patli ho chuki thi. Kyuki achanak Suhana zorr zorr se bistar par khade hoke haivaano type hassne lagi.

"Buwaahahahahahaha~ Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~"

'Wh-What the hell? Fuccccckkkk! Is she possessed or what?'

*Baaaaaaangggg*

*Slaaaaaaaaammm*

'Fuuucckkk! This girl is married? Who the fuck married this crazy woman? Rip her husband...'

[Also that Teddy. :laughing:]

Par tabhi Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ke bol par gaya, 'Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~'

Aur ye abhaas hote hi ki uske haantho me abhi wahi ring hai, uske paseene chootne lage. Usne apna thook nigla...

[Rip you too. :laughing: ]

'Shiiiiittttt!!!'

Aur wo palatne ke liye hua hi tha kyuki usne socha jab Suhana normal hogi tab aana hi behtar hoga....

Par...

Par iss se pehle ki wo mud paata...

*Woof woof*

Side me dur bandha ek labrador usse bade chaav se dekh jeebh nikaal apni pooch matkaate hue bhaunk diya.

'Ohhhhh Fuucccckkkkk!!!'

Aur tabhi...

"E-Ehhhh!?" Suhana palti...

Veer ne usse dekha aur usne Veer ko...

Dono ki hi aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi. Khaas kar Suhana ki...

Uska haath se teddy chooth ke bed par gir gaya...

*Gulp*

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Ek alag sii khandar sii jagah me iss waqt ek aadmi table par apne dono perr rakhe, apne haath baandhe ek chair par baitha hua tha. Uska chehra ek hat se dhaka hua tha.

Hat...

Yaani aas paas khade log jaante the ki ye kaun tha. Unka boss. Bole toh Bhau... Aatish Bhau!

Par ye khandar ka adda toh Ranga ka tha. Fir achanak Aatish Bhau khud kyu aa gaye? Aur upar se Ranga ki kursi par baithe the. Kherr! Aatish Ranga ka bhi boss tha toh ye zyaada surprising baat nahi thi.

Par dikkat ye thi ki...

Iss waqt unke Aatish Bhau bade hi kharaab mood me lag rahe the.

Bhala aisa kya ho gaya tha jiske chalte Aatish Bhau aaj itne gusse me the?

Koi kuch nahi bol paa raha tha. Unhe darr tha, ki ek awaaz karne par kahi... Kahi unki gardan hi na udd jaaye.

Tabhi unhe kisi ke kadmo ki awaaz aayi,

"Ayye Pintu... Jaa zara Chai ka bol ke aa re bagal waale Dada ke yaha."

Kehte hue Ranga apne adde me enter hua. Par uske kadam wahi tham gaye jab usne apne Bhau ko apni kursi par dekha...

Ranga : Bh-Bhau!? Aap? I-Idhar?

Aatish : Aao Ranga... Tumhara hi intezaar tha.

Apne Bhau ka aaj vyavhaar dekh Ranga ke paseene chooth rahe the.

Ranga : Kya hua Bhau? A-Aap achanak aaj yaha?

Tabhi Aatish ne apne chehre se hat hataayi aur Ranga ko dekha.

Khade hote hue wo uske paas aaya aur uske ird gird ghoomne laga.

Aatish : Tumhe pata hai kya hua hai?

Ranga : K-Kya hua hai Bhau?

Aatish : Wo ring! Kya hua uska? Kuch pata hai?

Ranga : Bhau... Jatin! Jatin leke gaya tha. Aur wo bataaya tha ki... Ki usne dealer ke aadmi se milne jaana tha.

Aatish : Hmm! Aur?

Ranga : Aur?? Tab se... Tab se uski koi jaankaari nahi aayi hai Bhau.

Aatish : Ohh! Toh tumne ye jaan'ne ki koshish nahi kari?

Ranga : Bhau! Mene usse kayi baar call kiya par wo utha hi nahi raha hai.

Aatish ne tabhi apna phone khola aur usme ek photo dikhaayi...

Photo me ek ladka tha... Jo ki train me maujood tha.

Aur uss ladke ko dekhte hi Ranga ki aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

Ranga : Ye... Ye toh wahi hai... Wo jo... Wo jo uss raat uss Ragini aur parivaar ko bacha ke le gaya tha. Veeeerrrr!!!!

Aatish (smiles) : Ohh! Right! Bilkul sahi.

Ranga : Par ye...

Aatish (smiles) : Ye image mujhe Jatin ne hi bheji thi. Ye bataate hue ki ye ladka uska peecha kar raha tha. Saath hi saath kal hi mujhe phone aaya tha ki ye Veer uss se Ring churra ke le gaya hai. Tum iska matlab samajh rahe ho na!?

Ranga (ghabraate hue) N-Nahi! Aisa...

Aatish tabhi uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola...

"Uss raat bhi wahi tha. Jo tumhe chakma deke unhe bhaga ke le gaya tha. Aur ek baat aur batau?"

Ranga : H-Huh?

Aatish : Club se uss ladki ko uss raat bhi wahi bhaga ke le gaya tha.

Maano ek bomb sa foda tha Aatish ne usse ye bata kar.

Ranga : Ye... Ye...

Aatish : Teen galtiya. Tumhari taraf se. Jaante ho na? Teen galtiyo ki saja?

Ranga : *Gulps* Bhau! Bhau... Suniye...

Aatish bina kuch kahe apna mouth organ jeb se nikaal bajaata hua table ke paas gaya.

Uske mouth organ ki dhwani waha maujood sabhi logo ke raungte khade kar rahi thi.

Ranga : B-Bhau... Maaf kar dijiye... Aage se... Aage se aisa...

Iske pehle ki wo bol paata...

*Baaaaangggggg*

Achanak hi goli chalne ki awaaz aayi aur...

*Thud*

Ek shareer neeche zameen par gir gaya.

Ranga ke sarr ko cheerte hue goli andar ghusi aur uska ek hi baar me kaam tamaam kar dii.

Chehre pe ghabraahat liye hi marr gaya wo. Waha maujood sabhi logo ke badan sihar uthe. Pant me mootne jesi haalat ho chuki thi. Kyuki unke bhau ne apne khaas aadmi ko udaaya tha, Ranga!

"Jalsa me taiyaariya karo. Iss chuhe ko ab mein wo sabak sikhaunga ki ye vinti karega ki kaash ye paida hi na hua hota."

Aur itna keh ke Aatish waha se chala gaya.

Kya kaha tha usne? Ja-Jalsa? Jalsa me? Waha maujood logo ne jese hi ye suna unki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.

Jalsa unke Aatish Bhau ki pasandeeda building ka naam tha. Aur uss se juda ithaas ko yaad kar ke hi unke raungte khade ho jaate the.
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Aaj ek liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Like karna mat bhulna.
Hmm.. As I presumed Vivek ne Ragini ke character par hi ungli utha di... Jo thodi bahut umeed ke saath Karunesh & Sumitra Ragini ko manane aaye the wo bhi chaknachoor ho gayi... Vivek ka character kiss prakaar explain kiya jaaye samajh se pare hai... Selfish se selfish insaan ki zindagi mein bhi koyi ek shakhs hota hai jispar wo sab kuchh vaar deta hai... Par pehle apne bhai Veer ke saath ki gayi harkat aur uske baad Aatish ke saath huyi ghatna... Vivek ne saabit kiya hai ke agar matlab parasti ki koyi hadh hai to wo Vivek hi hai... Aur ab just like Kangaali mein Aata Geela iss update mein huyi baatein... Bhul jaa bhai tu ke tera ghar kabhi dobara basegaa... I'm damn sure tu aese hi marega...

Idhar Suman ke dwara ki gayi baaton se laga ke wo jo dikha rahi hai asal mein hai nahi... Par agle hi pal laga ke nahi shayad ye just Veer ki har tarah se sewa karna chahati hai... Suman ka kirdaar kaafi complications se bhara hua lag raha hai... Ab mujhe halka doubt ye bhi ho raha hai ke kahin Suman bhi to kisi bade parivaar se taaluqaat to nahi rakhti jo apni pehchaan chhipaane ke liye ek naakara se aadmi ke saath shaadi karke baithi thi... A little bit Confused right now :confused:...

'Got it! Next time yadi wo mila... Ranga!!! I'm gonna beat the shit outta him.'

Na munna na ab wo aadmi tumhe naa milega kyonki Aatish miyan ne uske saath aatishbaazi kar di hai... Aatish ka asli rang ab saamne aa raha hai... Apne sabse khaas aadmi ko tapka diya hai usne to ab game kaafi interesting hone waali hai... Jalsa ka raaz bhi dekhne yogya hoga... Shayad apne sabse bhayankar kaam wahin karta hoga Aatish ya fir shayad Slogan ka gunaahon ka adda ho wo...

Idhar Veer ne 15 points apne Endurance mein add kar liye hain aur saath hi 50 points se basic martial arts skill purchase ki hai joki shayad ab jald hi upyog mein aane waali hai kyonki kabhi bhi uska saamna Aatish Bhau se ho sakta hai...

Ab aate hain iss update ke sabse interesting part par...

Wo ek bade se teddy ko jakde huye thi aur uspe ghuso ki barsaat kar rahi thi aur badbadaaye jaa rahi thi.

"Fuck you chor.... Marr jaa tu... Tere muh me keede pade... *Sniff* Dad ne itna daanta mujhe ughhhuuuu...."

*Slaaaaammmm*

*Baaaangggg*

*Dhhhiiiiiiiiiisshooommmm"

Laato se lekar ghuso tak harr ek vaar kar wo bechaare teddy ka kachumar banaaye jaa rahi thi.
"Buwaahahahahahaha~ Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~"
"Buwaahahahahahaha~ Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~"

'Wh-What the hell? Fuccccckkkk! Is she possessed or what?'

*Baaaaaaangggg*

*Slaaaaaaaaammm*

'Fuuucckkk! This girl is married? Who the fuck married this crazy woman? Rip her husband...'

[Also that Teddy. :laughing:]

Par tabhi Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ke bol par gaya, 'Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~'

Aur ye abhaas hote hi ki uske haantho me abhi wahi ring hai, uske paseene chootne lage. Usne apna thook nigla...

[Rip you too. :laughing: ]

'Shiiiiittttt!!!'

Hahahaha...:haha: kya tha ye bhai... O bhai maaro mujhe maaro... Kherr, iske liye main kuchh nahi kahunga bas ye C&P waala saaman hai, Werewolf bhaiya Suhana Ji tak pahuncha dijiyega....

“ A psycho is someone who has serious mental problems and who may act in a violent way without feeling sorry for what they have done.”

And Also... RIP Veer... May your Soul rest in peace & in next birth you don't have to face Suhana... Best Wishes...:flowers::flowers2:

So, aate hain finally on a little bit more discussion about Ragini... Kahin na kahin galti uski khud ki bhi thi.Maana Mohabbat andhe logon ka khel hai par fir bhi aesa thode hi naa hota hai ke aap saamne waale ki galtiyon aur evil ways ko bhi nazarandaaz kar den... Vivek shuru se hi galath tha jo bhi usne Veer ke saath kiya Ragini ko tabhi samajh lena chahiye tha ke wo kis kadar ghatiya aur neech insaan hai... Par chalo der aaye durust aaye... Kabhi na kabhi to Vivek ka asli rang saamne aana hi tha aur finally Ragini ko uski sachayi dikh hi gayi...

Ab dekhna ye hoga ke kaise Veer uss paagal aur pyscho... Ahem.. ahem.. I mean Suhana ko wo ring waapis karega aur kya Veer zinda bach paayega ya fir Suhana naam ke Jawalamukhi ke andar sada sada ke liye sama jaayega... :gaylaugh: Aur agar Veer mar gaya to bechari Pari kahaan jaayegi??? :evillaugh:

Idhar Aatish Bhau ka agla step kya hoga... Shayad jo log Aarohi & Kavya ko follow kar rahe the wo role mein aa sakte hain ya fir Veer ki family ko nuksaan pahunchaya jaa sakta hai...

Overall kaafi badhiya update tha... Teen Chaar scenes cover kar diye aapne matlab length bhi achhi thi update ki... Dheere dheere hi sahi Veer ke stats ab behadh achhe ho chuke hain aur ab ek skill bhi aa gayi hai uske paas... Story ko bilkul bhi rush nahi kar rahe hain lekhak mahodaya aur yahi baat iss kahani ki khubsurti ko badhati hai... Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye aapki wo kam hi hai...

Outstanding Update Werewolf bhai & Waiting For Next...

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Update - 32 ~ The Calm before the Storm.
Ab tak...

Idhar Veer saare intezaamo se khush tha aur ab wo ring waapas karne ke liye jaane hi waala tha.

Wo jese hi darwaaze par aaya toh gate ke baahar hi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi dii.

"Aaiye Dad... Aaiye Mom!"

Aur jese hi usne gate khola...

Saamne Vivek, Sumitra aur Karunesh car se utar ke seedha uske saamne hi khade the.


Ab aage...

Jese hi Veer ne gate se baahar nikal ke saamne dekha toh wo chaunk gaya. Aur kyu na chaunkta? Saamne uska bada bhai Vivek aur uske chacha chachi jo khade hue the.

Jab unn teeno ne Veer ko dekha toh unke chehre par bhi wahi bhaav the jo Veer ke chehre par the.

Hairaani ke bhaav!

"Veeeer!??" Sumitra ke hontho se apne aap Veer ka naam usse dekhte hi nikal gaya.

Karunesh bhi hairaan tha aur Vivek bhi. Akhir Veer Ragini ke ghar kya kar raha tha!?

Agla scene yahi tha ki sabhi hall me baithe hue the aur ek ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Na koi kuch bol paa raha tha na hi kar paa raha tha. Mahaul behad hi awkward ho chuka tha.

Aur ye ajeeb sa sannaata jese uss awkwardness ko aur badhaata jaa raha tha.

Karunesh aur Sumitra dono hi Ragini ko dekhte jo unke saamne hi sofe par baithi hui thi aur fir Veer ko dekhte jo uske bagal se lage sofe se baitha hua tha.

Ragini ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Wo ekdum nidar hoke baithi thi jiske chalte Veer khud hairaan reh gaya. Usse laga tha ki uski Bhabhi thoda seham gayi hogi yu achanak apne saas sasur ko dekh ke. Par Ragini toh jese ekdum taiyaar baithi hui thi.

Jese maano wo wait hi kar rahi thi ki aao aur puchiye sawaal aur koshish kariye mujhe ghar le jaane ki.

Uska ye attitude dekh Karunesh aur Sumitra ki bolti band thi. Akhir kaar, kuch palo ke baad Sumitra ne badi hi himmat juta ke baat shuru kii.

Sumitra : B-Beta Ragini?

Ragini (smiles) : Jii?

Ragini ki muskaan dekh Sumitra duwidha me pad gayi aur apne shabdo ko kehne me uski hich-kichaahat aur jese badh gayi.

Sumitra : Wo... Dekho beta. Hume ghar me sabhi ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai. Itni badi ghatna ho gayi... Yaha tak ki ab bhi ye police ke saath lage hue hai... Aur waha uss waqt kya sthiti thi ye hum samajh sakte hai. Tumhare maa baap pe jo beeti wo bhi behad hi dukhad aur chinta janak ghatna thi.

Ragini : Hmm!

Sumitra : Toh... Toh... Beta jo kuch bhi waha hua wo... Wo ek haadsa tha. Iske chalte hume aur ekjut hona chaahiye hai na? Na ki aur aise rishto ke beech misunderstanding paida karni chaahiye.

Ragini : Mene kab hi misunderstanding khadi kii maa jii? Misunderstanding toh... Aapke hi bete ne kari thi. Meri jaan daav pe laga ke.

Ragini ke harr ek shabd kaate ki tarah Sumitra ko chubh rahe the. Akhir baat sach jo thi. Uske apne hi bete se galti hui thi aur wo jaanti thi. Par wo kese bhi karke ye maamla aur nahi bigaadna chaahti thi.

Sumitra : M-Mein jaanti hu beta. Vivek se galti hui hai. Ye toh hai hi naalayak...

Vivek : Huh? W-Wha...!? What?? Maa??

Sumitra : Par... Tum bhi toh samajhdaar ho beta. Aise yu muh ferr ke ghar se aake yaha akele rehne lagna. Ye toh koi hal nahi hua na samasya ka? Humr baith ke baat karke isse suljhaana chaahiye na?

Ragini : Samasya?? Kesi samasya? Mera dil chotil hua hai Maa jii! Mera dil...

Bolte bolte, Ragini ki awaaz tezz ho chuki thi aur aankho me nami bhi panapna shuru ho chuki thi, jo Veer side se gaur se notice kar paa raha tha. Par fir bhi, wo shaant hi raha.

Ragini : Khud ko meri jagah rakh ke dekhiye Maa jii! Kesa lagega aapko? Yadi aap meri jagah hoti aur sasur jii aapko ye kehte ki, "meri jaan bacha lo aur meri patni ki jaan lelo." Kesa lagta aapko? Boliye?? Jawaab dijiyeee!??

Aur bas...

Sumitra ka sarr apne aap jhuk gaya. Wo nazre milaane laayak nahi thi.

Karunesh : Ragini beta... Dekho! Ye baat hum sabhi jaante hai aur tum dono bhi jaante ho ki tum dono hi ek dusre se boht pyaar karte ho. Hai ki nahi Vivek?

Vivek : Of course Dad! Ragini! You do know how much I love you right? Unn baato ko tum soch rahi ho par unn baato ko kese bhul gayi Ragini? Jab humne saath saath jo time spend kiya, saath saath kayi jagah ghumne gaye, kitne sweet moments humne bitaaye... Yaad karo. Kya tum meri bas ek galti ke chalte hamaara saara ateet bhula dogi? Sab kuch?

Vivek ki baat sunn Ragini ki bauhe sikudi aur pal bhar ke liye usse apne ateet ke khush-haal pal yaad aane lage. Waqai! Usne apne dil se Vivek ko chaaha tha. 2 saal se wo dono relationship me the aur uske baad hi unhone shadi kari. Lagbhag teen saal ho chuke the unhe.

Par firse...

Ragini ko jese agle hi pal wo scene yaad aa gaya. Wo scene jidhar wo bandhi hui thi, aur uska pati Vivek, khud ki jaan ki bheenk maang, apni patni ki jaan daav pe laga raha tha.

Aur ye sochte hi Ragini ka paara fir chadh gaya.

Ragini : Mere dil pe jo ghaaat pohuchi hai. Wo tum nahi samjhoge Vivek kabhi. Kabhi nahi!

Vivek : R-Ragini!?

Ragini : Yadi... Yadi uss waqt uss aadmi ne mere sarr par revolver rakh ke yahi sawaal pucha hota toh pata hai mera jawaab kya hota? Mera jawaab hota... Ki meri jaan lelo... Par mere suhaag ko kuch na hone paaye... Mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karte ho Vivek... Par dekho... Dekho! Mein kitni galat thi. Dekho... *Sniff*

Aur Ragini ke aasuo ka baandh toot gaya.
Wo rone lagi.

Tabhi usse kandhe pe apne kisi ka haath mehsoos hua. Jese hi usne apna sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Veer usse dekh uske kandhe par haath rakhe hue tha. Aur na jaane kyu, aaj Veer ko apni taraf se pehli baar pahal karte dekh Ragini ka mann andar se hi behad prafullit ho utha. Wo apna haath badhaa ke Veer ka haath thaamti aur uski bhavnao ko samajhti par...

Saamne uske saas sasur aur uska pati maujood tha. Wo chaah kar bhi... Ye na kar saki.

Idhar Veer ke iss chote se gesture ne jese baaki sab ko hila ke rakh diya. Karunesh aur Sumitra toh the hi hairaan par Vivek aankhe faade Veer ke haath ko dekh raha tha jo iss waqt uski patni ke kandho par maujood tha.

Aur uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi.

Aur jo usse nahi karna chaahiye tha wo akhir usne kar hi diya.

Vivek : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho Veer? Akele? Apni Bhabhi ke saath?

Uska sawaal sunte hi agle hi pal Ragini ki aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Par fir achanak hi uske chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi.

'Mujhe toh samajh jaana chaahiye tha. Tum se akhir yahi ghatiya soch ki umeed thi mujhe Vivek. Mene tumhe kya socha tha aur tum kya nikle. Par... Dosh toh mera hi hai na? Jo mein aise vyakti se pyaar kar baithi? But Thanks to that incident. Akhir meri aankhein toh khul gayi.'

Wo sochte hue ekdum asahaay sii chintan me doob gayi.

Idhar Sumitra apne bete ki baat samjhte hue usse chillaane hi waali thi ki tabhi Veer bol pada.

Veer : Kya kar raha hu matlab? Mein Bhabhi ke saath hi yahi rehta hu.

Vivek : Kyyyyaaaaaa!????

Vivek shock ke maare apni jagah se uth gaya aur unhe ghoorne laga.

Veer : What? Uss ghar se toh mujhe wese hi nikaal diya gaya hai. Uske baad mein apni Ma'am ke saath reh raha tha unke ghar. But mein nahi chaahta tha ki unhe aur pareshaani hoye so I left. Finally, Bhabhi ne mujhe yaha rukne ko keh diya. So, I'm here now. Any problem with that?

Vivek keval daant meesta reh gaya par kuch derr tak bol na paaya. Apni patni ko akele apne chote bhai ke saath dekh, khaas kar uss chote bhai ke saath jis se wo behad nafrat karta aaya hai. Mirchi toh lagni thi. Gussa bhi jayaz tha. Par ek shaq bhi paida ho chuka tha. Wo shaq jo kabhi nahi hona chaahiye tha. Wo shaq jo ghatiya soch ka ek prateek tha.

Aur wo kehte hai na, Gusse me aadmi apna aapa kho baithata hai.

Wahi hua.

Vivek (uchi awaaz me) : Raaaginiiii???? Ye sab kya hai??? Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahi ho? Aas paas ke log kya sochenge yadi unhe pata lagega ki ek aurat apna ghar aur pati ko chorr ke yaha akele apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai? Bolo?? Koi sense hai tum me ya nahi??

Vivek ke teekhe bol poore hall me goonj rahe the . Par Ragini jese helpless ho chuki thi poori tarah. Wo muskuraayi aur fir ek niraasha aur aasha-heen chintan me doob gayi,

'Shayad sach hi kaha gaya hai. Ki insaan apna asli roop tab hi dikhaata hai jab maut uske saamne khadi ho. Vivek! Tumne bhi dikhaaya tha. Aur ab toh tumhaare aur naye naye rang mujhe dekhne ko mil rahe hai. Kitni dukhad gaatha hai na meri? Ya fir yahi sahi tha? Hmm! Veer ke saath bhi toh mene galat kiya tha na? Ye unhi karmo ka fal hai. Uparwaale ki aankho se koi apraadh nahi bachta.'

Wo gusse se Ragini ko dekh raha tha aur jawaab ki maang kar raha tha par bechaari Ragini apne gham me hi doobi hui thi.

Sumitra : Viveeeeekkkkk!

Sumitra ne yaha chillaaya par wo aage kuch keh paati ki tabhi sabhi ke kaano me ek awaaz padi,

"Kisne kaha ki wo yaha akeli apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai?"

Aur tabhi sab ki nazre upar ki orr gayi toh dekha ki...

Suman, Aabha, aur Sonali teeno stairs se neeche utar unki hi taraf aa rahi thi. Aur wo awaaz bhi Suman ki hi thi.

Wo aise chal ke aa rahi thi jese maano iss ghar ki hi mukhiya ho. Uske chalne ka dhang, uska pehnaava, bol chaal me wo wazan ne jese waha maujood sabhi logo ko shaant rehne ke liye majboor kar diya.

Suman : Aapki himmat kese hui apni patni par itna ghatiya laanchan lagaane ki? Kya itna hi bharosa hai aapko uspe? Upar se apne hi chote bhai ke saamne? Kya aap me koi sense hai?

Vivek (jhepte hue) : K-Kaun ho aap?

Suman : Mein Kaun hu? Itna bhi nahi pata aapko? Ki kisi se naam puchne se pehle apna khud ka parichay dena chahiye. Kherr! Mein Suman hu. Ragini ki sakha. Uske bachpan ki dost. Aur yaha uske ghar rehne aayi hu kyuki usse iss dukhad waqt me meri zaroorat thi. Ye dono meri betiya hai. Ab boliye! Kese aapne bina jaache parkhe ye ghatiya sawaal uthaaya? Aur aap dono? Kese sanskaar diye hai apne bete ko? Kya aise le jaane aaye hai apni bahu ko? Le jaane aaye hai ya uske charitra par keechad uchaalne aaye hai? Boliye!!!!

Suman ke hamlo ne jese teeno Sumitra, Vivek aur Karunesh ko aise ghaayal kar diya tha ki ab wo apna muh kholne ke laayak nahi bache the.

Suman : Arre yadi kapdo ki qadr karo toh kapde bhi aapki qadr karte hai. Fir yaha toh ye aapki bahu hai. Ghar ki Lakshmi. Aapki himmat kese hui uss Lakshmi ka apmaan karne ki? Kuch hi dino me Diwali ka tyohaar hai. Jisme Lakshmi ko poojte hai hum. Aasha karti hu tab tak aap apni iss Lakshmi ko apne ghar poori izzat ke saath apni galtiyo ka paschataap karte hue yaha se le jaenge. Par filhaal ke liye... Jaiye yaha se. Meri dost ko jab aapse milna hoga. Wo aapko khud bulaegi ya milne aa jaegi. Aur tab... Mein beech me nahi aaungi. Ab jaiye! Aur meri dost ko akela chorr dijiye.

Suman iss waqt waha khadi aisi prateet ho rahi thi jese maano ek lecture room me scholar khada ho. Sharmindagi ka aisa aayina dikhaaya usne unn teeno ko ki teeno ko hi waha se bina kuch bole hi forun nikalna pad gaya.

Unke jaate hi jese hi Suman ne palat ke dekha toh paaya Ragini rote hue usse dhanyavaad de rahi thi. Wahi jab usne apne maalik ko dekha toh pata chala unka muh hairat ke maare khula hua tha. Aur ye dekh wo mann hi mann muskuraayi.

'Fufu~ Maalik dang reh gaye. Par unhe ab pata lag gaya hoga ki... Unki musibate meri musibate hai. Aur harr waqt harr mod pe mein unki madad karungi.'

Idhar Veer hakka bakka sa Suman ko ghoor raha tha.

'Daaamnnnnn! What the fuck just happened? I think I know ki kyu tumne Suman ko diamond kaha tha Pari. Damn! She's a fucking Leader. She handled that situation without even knowing the actual truth. Was she listening to us the whole time?'

[Haha~ Didn't I told ya?]

Suman : Maaf kijiyega Ragini jii. Mujhe aapka naam lena pada.

Ragini : H-Huh? N-Nahiii! *Sniff* Aap mujhse badi ho toh... *Sniff* Aap mujhe naam se bula sakti ho.

Suman muskuraayi par kuch na boli. Ab kyuki ye samasya filhal ke liye tal chuki thi toh Veer utha aur Ragini ko samjha ke baahar ki orr jaane laga toh Suman usse baahar tak chorrne aayi.

Suman : Maalik? Aap kidhar jaa rahe hai?

Veer : Kuch zaroori kaam hai Suman! Aur madad ke liye shukriya. Yadi tum na hoti toh pata nahi ye maamla kese nipatata.

Suman (smiles) : Kyu na hoti mein? Ab se... Harr jagah aapke saath hi rehna hai mujhe.

Kehte hue wo qareeb aayi toh iss baar Veer ne bina kisi jhijak ke haule se uske narm narm rass bhare honth choom liye.

Veer : Aata hu. Bhabhi ka dhyaan rakhna.

Suman : Hmm! Aap befiqr rahiye maalik.

Aur Veer waha se nikal gaya.

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Uska mission akhir poora jo nahi hua tha. Mission tha~ Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring.

Ab usne chase down toh kar liya tha par ring waapas bhi karni thi.

Sonia ko call kar usne unke ghar ka address le liya tha. Aur wo wahi ki orr jaa raha tha.

Par raaste me hi usne Pari se uss Alpha trait function ke baare me jaankaari lii.

'What is this Alpha Trait function Pari? Vistaar me samjhao. Tumne kaha tha ki baad me tum samjhaogi.'

[Yes! Master! It's exactly as it sounds. Yaani ki... Ab aap submissive Beta male nahi rahoge. You will become an Alpha male now. Ek aisa male jisse jhukna aata hi nahi. Jidhar bhi jaaye hamesha top pe rahe. Jis bhi hierarchy me ho, hamesha king rahe uska. That is what Alpha male is.]

'Par uss raat wo sab kya tha? Meri body heat up hona and suddenly mera emotional state se ekdum lustful state me chale jaana?'

[It's because of Alpha Trait function Master. Alpha Males, jesa ki mene kaha Submissive nahi hote. Wo jaan de denge ladte ladte par dusre ke saamne jhukenge nahi kabhi. Uss raat aap emotional state me the and Suman ka aapko wese chhuna aur aapko uttejit karna... Uss chakkar me Alpha Trait function trigger ho gaya. Aur ab ye hamesha active rahega.]

'Wh-Whaaatt??'

[Yes! Actually, Master! Levels badhne pe system ka in-built function bhi unlock hota hai. Uss Jatin ko pakadte time waha gaav me aapne yaad hai System ka Path Tracking function use kiya tha?]

'Ab jab tumne uska zikr kiya hai then yeah, I do remember that. Ussi ki wajah se mein Suman ke ghar tak waapas laut paaya tha.'

[Yes! Master! Wo function tab unlock hua tha jab mein level 2 par pohuchi thi.]

'Wait! Wtf? Mujhe notification kyu nahi mila tha fir?'

[Because aapne in-built functions ke notifications band kar ke rakhe hai.]

'The fucccckkk!? Then turn them on now.'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Notifications for In-built functions have been turned on.]

'Good!'

[Haan! Toh jesa ki mein bata rahi thi. Ye Alpha Trait function bhi level 3 par unlock ho gaya tha but trigger nahi hua tha. Trigger hone ke liye aapka emotional state me hona zaroori tha. And then Suman ka attraction hua... So you know...]

'Hmm! I see!'

[Aapko thoda control me rehna padega. It's serious. Shuruaati daur me thodi dikkate aaengi.]

'Wh-What do you mean?'

[What I'm trying to say is... Ki aapko gussa jaldi aaega, aapko apni pride sabse zyaada pyaari rahegi ab, ladkiya mahilaaye, aurte ab aapko kahi zyaada aakarshak lagengi, bhook zyaada lagegi aapko, aap fitness ke peeche bhi bhaagoge, materialistic cheezo ke liye bhi, so... You will have to control yourself.]

'T-This... This is too serious.'

[Hmm! Right! So? Do you want to invest points? 65 points available hai.]

'Hmm! Skill list se Basic Martial Arts Skill purchase karo.'

[Are you sure?]

'Hmm! Aur baaki ke 15 points... Add them to my Endurance.'

[O-Okay!]

*Ding*

[Basic Martial Arts Skill is available now.]

[15 Points have been added to Endurance.]

'So? Ab use kese karni hai ye skill? Turn on karni hai?'

[No master! Ye already turned on rehti hai. You just have to fight now. Martial Arts moves apne aap baahar aaenge. The more you fight the more you will learn and more better you will get. Uske baad aap moderate level martial arts skill buy kar sakte ho.]

'Got it! Next time yadi wo mila... Ranga!!! I'm gonna beat the shit outta him.'

[Also...]

'Hmmm?'

[You were sad last night. Kyuki aap apni Mom ki train ka naam nahi padh paaye the. And aapko laga ki ab aap na jaane fir kabhi mil paoge ya nahi. So don't worry! Aapne bhale hi read na kiya ho but I read it. Train ka naam xxxxxxxxxxxxx hai. Ab aapko sirf unn stations par dhyaan dena hai jaha wo train rukti hai. Unhi kisi stations par aapki Mom utri hogi.]

Pari ki baat sunte hi Veer ki kal raat se jo bechaini bhari hui thi wo jese ek jhatke me usne gaayab kar dii.

'Th-Thank you Pari... I... I don't even... I don't even have words to say right now... Thank you! Thank you! It... It means a lot to me Pari!! I...'

[It's okay Master! I'm here!]

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Veer finally pohuch chuka tha Suhana ke ghar, entry usse asaani se mil gayi thi kyuki iss baar Sonia ne bol ke rakha tha ki uska khaas guest aa raha hai.

Bangle ke andar aate hi Veer ko alag hi nazaara dekhne ko mila. Ek aisa nazaara jisse uski apne sapno me bhi umeed nahi thi.

Suhana light se kapdo me thi par ye kya??

Wo ro rahi thi...

Ro toh rahi thi beshaq par...!??

Wo ek bade se teddy ko jakde huye thi aur uspe ghuso ki barsaat kar rahi thi aur badbadaaye jaa rahi thi.

"Fuck you chor.... Marr jaa tu... Tere muh me keede pade... *Sniff* Dad ne itna daanta mujhe ughhhuuuu...."

*Slaaaaammmm*

*Baaaangggg*

*Dhhhiiiiiiiiiisshooommmm"

Laato se lekar ghuso tak harr ek vaar kar wo bechaare teddy ka kachumar banaaye jaa rahi thi.

Aur idhar Veer ki haalat ye scene dekh ke hi patli ho chuki thi. Kyuki achanak Suhana zorr zorr se bistar par khade hoke haivaano type hassne lagi.

"Buwaahahahahahaha~ Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~"

'Wh-What the hell? Fuccccckkkk! Is she possessed or what?'

*Baaaaaaangggg*

*Slaaaaaaaaammm*

'Fuuucckkk! This girl is married? Who the fuck married this crazy woman? Rip her husband...'

[Also that Teddy. :laughing:]

Par tabhi Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ke bol par gaya, 'Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~'

Aur ye abhaas hote hi ki uske haantho me abhi wahi ring hai, uske paseene chootne lage. Usne apna thook nigla...

[Rip you too. :laughing: ]

'Shiiiiittttt!!!'

Aur wo palatne ke liye hua hi tha kyuki usne socha jab Suhana normal hogi tab aana hi behtar hoga....

Par...

Par iss se pehle ki wo mud paata...

*Woof woof*

Side me dur bandha ek labrador usse bade chaav se dekh jeebh nikaal apni pooch matkaate hue bhaunk diya.

'Ohhhhh Fuucccckkkkk!!!'

Aur tabhi...

"E-Ehhhh!?" Suhana palti...

Veer ne usse dekha aur usne Veer ko...

Dono ki hi aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi. Khaas kar Suhana ki...

Uska haath se teddy chooth ke bed par gir gaya...

*Gulp*

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Ek alag sii khandar sii jagah me iss waqt ek aadmi table par apne dono perr rakhe, apne haath baandhe ek chair par baitha hua tha. Uska chehra ek hat se dhaka hua tha.

Hat...

Yaani aas paas khade log jaante the ki ye kaun tha. Unka boss. Bole toh Bhau... Aatish Bhau!

Par ye khandar ka adda toh Ranga ka tha. Fir achanak Aatish Bhau khud kyu aa gaye? Aur upar se Ranga ki kursi par baithe the. Kherr! Aatish Ranga ka bhi boss tha toh ye zyaada surprising baat nahi thi.

Par dikkat ye thi ki...

Iss waqt unke Aatish Bhau bade hi kharaab mood me lag rahe the.

Bhala aisa kya ho gaya tha jiske chalte Aatish Bhau aaj itne gusse me the?

Koi kuch nahi bol paa raha tha. Unhe darr tha, ki ek awaaz karne par kahi... Kahi unki gardan hi na udd jaaye.

Tabhi unhe kisi ke kadmo ki awaaz aayi,

"Ayye Pintu... Jaa zara Chai ka bol ke aa re bagal waale Dada ke yaha."

Kehte hue Ranga apne adde me enter hua. Par uske kadam wahi tham gaye jab usne apne Bhau ko apni kursi par dekha...

Ranga : Bh-Bhau!? Aap? I-Idhar?

Aatish : Aao Ranga... Tumhara hi intezaar tha.

Apne Bhau ka aaj vyavhaar dekh Ranga ke paseene chooth rahe the.

Ranga : Kya hua Bhau? A-Aap achanak aaj yaha?

Tabhi Aatish ne apne chehre se hat hataayi aur Ranga ko dekha.

Khade hote hue wo uske paas aaya aur uske ird gird ghoomne laga.

Aatish : Tumhe pata hai kya hua hai?

Ranga : K-Kya hua hai Bhau?

Aatish : Wo ring! Kya hua uska? Kuch pata hai?

Ranga : Bhau... Jatin! Jatin leke gaya tha. Aur wo bataaya tha ki... Ki usne dealer ke aadmi se milne jaana tha.

Aatish : Hmm! Aur?

Ranga : Aur?? Tab se... Tab se uski koi jaankaari nahi aayi hai Bhau.

Aatish : Ohh! Toh tumne ye jaan'ne ki koshish nahi kari?

Ranga : Bhau! Mene usse kayi baar call kiya par wo utha hi nahi raha hai.

Aatish ne tabhi apna phone khola aur usme ek photo dikhaayi...

Photo me ek ladka tha... Jo ki train me maujood tha.

Aur uss ladke ko dekhte hi Ranga ki aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

Ranga : Ye... Ye toh wahi hai... Wo jo... Wo jo uss raat uss Ragini aur parivaar ko bacha ke le gaya tha. Veeeerrrr!!!!

Aatish (smiles) : Ohh! Right! Bilkul sahi.

Ranga : Par ye...

Aatish (smiles) : Ye image mujhe Jatin ne hi bheji thi. Ye bataate hue ki ye ladka uska peecha kar raha tha. Saath hi saath kal hi mujhe phone aaya tha ki ye Veer uss se Ring churra ke le gaya hai. Tum iska matlab samajh rahe ho na!?

Ranga (ghabraate hue) N-Nahi! Aisa...

Aatish tabhi uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola...

"Uss raat bhi wahi tha. Jo tumhe chakma deke unhe bhaga ke le gaya tha. Aur ek baat aur batau?"

Ranga : H-Huh?

Aatish : Club se uss ladki ko uss raat bhi wahi bhaga ke le gaya tha.

Maano ek bomb sa foda tha Aatish ne usse ye bata kar.

Ranga : Ye... Ye...

Aatish : Teen galtiya. Tumhari taraf se. Jaante ho na? Teen galtiyo ki saja?

Ranga : *Gulps* Bhau! Bhau... Suniye...

Aatish bina kuch kahe apna mouth organ jeb se nikaal bajaata hua table ke paas gaya.

Uske mouth organ ki dhwani waha maujood sabhi logo ke raungte khade kar rahi thi.

Ranga : B-Bhau... Maaf kar dijiye... Aage se... Aage se aisa...

Iske pehle ki wo bol paata...

*Baaaaangggggg*

Achanak hi goli chalne ki awaaz aayi aur...

*Thud*

Ek shareer neeche zameen par gir gaya.

Ranga ke sarr ko cheerte hue goli andar ghusi aur uska ek hi baar me kaam tamaam kar dii.

Chehre pe ghabraahat liye hi marr gaya wo. Waha maujood sabhi logo ke badan sihar uthe. Pant me mootne jesi haalat ho chuki thi. Kyuki unke bhau ne apne khaas aadmi ko udaaya tha, Ranga!

"Jalsa me taiyaariya karo. Iss chuhe ko ab mein wo sabak sikhaunga ki ye vinti karega ki kaash ye paida hi na hua hota."

Aur itna keh ke Aatish waha se chala gaya.

Kya kaha tha usne? Ja-Jalsa? Jalsa me? Waha maujood logo ne jese hi ye suna unki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.

Jalsa unke Aatish Bhau ki pasandeeda building ka naam tha. Aur uss se juda ithaas ko yaad kar ke hi unke raungte khade ho jaate the.
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Aaj ek liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Like karna mat bhulna.
Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...
 

Werewolf

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Lagtahe aur 2 update lagega ring sahi hath me pahuchneme aur lagtahe ye story 1000 update tak pahuch jayega keu bhai sahikaha na?
1000 updates? Na bhai na :laughing:
Kis writer se compare kar liye hume!? Mein TV serials na likhta.
Ye story lambi zaroor hai but 1000 updates? Bhai jaan nahi deni mujhe...
Ring ka matter solve ho hi gaya hai. Veer already Suhana ke paas pohuch gaya hai. Next update me wo matter finish hai.
 

Werewolf

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ab ye kaisi aawaazien hai :laugh:
Btw wo teddy 🧸 thodi na lohe ya wood se bana hai jo aisi aawaaz nikle :D
I think writer Werewolf ko khush karne ke liye suhaana ko abhi ke abhi kisi lohe ya wood se bane cheej pe waar karni chahiye taaki aisi aawaazien aaye ,chaahe iske chalte suhaana ke hath hi kyun na tut jaaye :D
Kisne kaha aisi awaazein nahi aati?
Kabhi acche bade teddy ki dhulaayi karke dekhna.
Usse bed pe patakna zorr zorr se.
Fir yaad karogi aap hume ki haa yaar Werewolf sahi bola tha... :winknudge:
 

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Update - 26 ~ A Lesson to be Taught (1)
Ab tak...

Yu pose dete hue wo pics toh khichwa rahi thi. Flash baar baar chamak ke uske husn ko aur bhi chamka raha tha.

Par uske andar ke bhaavo ko bhala uske alaawa aur kaun jaan sakta tha!? Unhe nahi pata tha ki iss waqt wo andar se kesa mehsoos kar rahi thi.

'It's again just as I expected. I feel nothing.'


Ab aage...

"Tumhe pata hai tumhari galti kya thi!?"

Saamne baithe chair pe ek aadmi ne apne saamne maujood kayi ladko me se ek se kaha.

Table pe dono perr rakhe hue wo bade hi gusse me sabhi ko dekh raha tha. Aur uske khauf ke chalte, uski aankho me gussa dekh wo sabhi ladke apna sarr jhukaaye khade hue the.

"Bhau... Aage se aisi galti nahi hogi."

Saamne khade ladke ne kaha. Ye aur koi nahi balki Ranga tha jo Veer ke haatho uss din dherr ho gaya tha aur Veer Ragini samet baaki sabhi ko uske changul se churraane me kaamyaab tha.

Uss din ki vardaat jab Aatish ko pata chali thi toh wo itna aag baboola tha ki yadi Ranga wahi uski aankho ke saamne hota toh pakke se Aatish uske haath perr tod deta.

Par shayad Ranga ki kismat acchi thi, Veer ne jo pocket knife uski pasli me maari thi uske chalte uske saathi forun hi hospital me le jaake uska ilaaz karwaaye the jis kaaran wo Aatish ke gusse se bach gaya tha.

Par aaj Aatish uske saamne tha. Iss waqt bhi Ranga ki pasliyo me pattiya bandhi hui thi. Aur ab usse apne bhau ko jawaab dena tha.

Aatish : Tumne yahi baat pehle bhi kahi thi Ranga. Jab wo club se ladki hamaare changul se nikal kar chali gayi thi.

Ranga : Mein jaanta hu Bhau. Mein...

Aatish : Mujhe toh ab bhi vishwaash nahi ho raha ki ek ladka... Ek ladka tum teen logo ko chakma deke waha se sabhi ko churra ke le gaya.

Ranga : Bhau... Mein...

Aatish : Kya tumne uske baare me pata kiya ya abhi bhi gumnaami me chal rahe ho!? Bataana padega mujhe...!?

Ranga : Nahi Bhau! Mene... Sab pata laga liya hai. Veer naam hai uska. Aur wo ussi parivaar ka hissa hai jiski company hum hathiyaane waale the. Uss Vivek ka hi chota bhai hai wo. xxxxxxxx college me padhta hai. Saath hi uski do behne jinka naam Arohi aur Kavya hai wo bhi jaati hai. Ek Pranjal naam ka bhai bhi hai jo unke saath ussi college me jaata hai. Sab pata laga liya hai.

Aatish : Veer haa!? Hmmm! Toh!? Kya karoge ab tum!?

Ranga : Aapki sikhaayi hui harr ek baat yaad hai Bhau. Yadi koi chuuha beech raaste me aaye toh usse kese raundna hai ye mene aapse boht acche se seekha hua hai. Uss Veer se toh badla lunga hi mein... Taaki usse pata chal sake ki galat logo se kabhi kyu panga nahi lena chahiye.

Aatish : Chalo kuch toh aqal hai tum me. Aur!? Kya khabar laaye ho!?

Ranga : Bhau! Khabar kuch khaas toh nahi hai. Bas do hi khabar hai.

Aatish : Bolo!

Ranga : Pehli ye ki wo club waali ladki desh se baahar hai iss waqt. Aur dusri...

Aatish : Hmm!?

Ranga : Dusri kuch khaas nahi hai Bhau...

Aatish : Khaas hai ya nahi wo mein decide karunga. Tum khabar batao.

Ranga : Dusri ye ki... Wo Sonia ki badi behan Suhana...

Aur dheere dheere Ranga poori khabar Aatish ko sunaata hai jisse sunn Aatish ke chehre pe muskuraahat aane lagti hai aur aankho me chamak.

Ranga : Hahahaha~ Ranga, yahi toh asli khabar hai. Tumne soch bhi kese liya ki ye khabar faaltu hai. Mujhe pata hai ab kya karna hai... Suno...

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Na jaane kya planning hui Aatish aur uski gang ke beech uss raat par agli subah ho chuki thi. Veer kal se Ragini ke saath hi uske ghar ruka hua tha. Ek ladke ka apni Bhabhi ke saath yu akele rehna, society me kayi sawaal uthaata hai.

Par Ragini ke liye ye baat acchi thi ki uska ghar kisi society me nahi tha. Alag se usne zameen leke ye ghar banwaaya tha jiske chalte logo ki prashn bhari nazro se aur unke sawaalo se bachi hui thi. Jo log the bhi aas paas toh unse Ragini ki koi pehchaan nahi thi kyuki wese hi uska ye ghar aksar khaali rehta tha aur hafte me ek naukar aake safayi karke chala jaata tha.

Veer ke gharwaalo ko keval yahi pata tha ki Ragini akele apne ghar me reh rahi hai aur Veer apni Ma'am ke ghar. Wo sabhi Vivek ko waapas se Ragini ko ghar laane ke liye usse force karte jaa rahe the jiske chalte Vivek ab kisi bhi din Ragini ke ghar aa sakta tha. Aur yadi Ragini ne tab bhi usse mana kiya toh zaahir si baat hai ki Sumitra aur Karunesh dono ko hi beech me aana padega aur maamla suljhaana padega. Par filhaal ke liye Vivek ne unse samay maanga hua tha ki wo ye maamla jald hi khud solve kar lega.

Par sawaal tha ki kya ab Ragini ke mann me Vivek ke liye wahi puraani feelings maujood hai!? Ya...!?

Kherr! Raat toh badi hi shaanti se uske ghar me guzri par agli subah yahi baat Nidhi ke ghar ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi.

Iss waqt Nidhi sofe pe baithi hui thi, bauhe chinta ke maare sikudi hui thi. Aur uske saamne Juhi muh fulaaye khadi usse ghoor rahi thi.

Nidhi : Beta! Tang mat karo mumma ko. School ke liye late ho rahi ho aap. Van aane waali hai beta...

Juhi (muh fulaaye) : Veeeer maaamu kaha haiiiii!??? Aapne bola tha Maaaaamu kal aaengee...

Wo zorr zorr se chillaate hue Nidhi ki jaangh pe apne haath patakne lagi aur Nidhi bechaari usse samjha samjha ke thak chuki thi. Wo khud hairaan thi ki uski bacchi Juhi, Veer se kitna attached ho chuki thi.

Par uss se bhi zyaada hairaani usse iss baat se hui thi ki wo khud Veer se kitna attached thi. Veer ke jaane ke baad, uska wo letter padhne ke baad wo itna royi thi ki kal wo college tak nahi gayi thi. Shreya harr thodi derr me uske saath baith uss se baat karti, usse samjhaati aur usse chup karwaati.

Bhala itna kese jud gayi wo apne ek student ke saath!? Kuch hi hafte toh Veer raha tha uske saath. Fir ye ajeeb sii peeda kyu ho rahi thi usse subah uska chehra na dekhne par!? Harr roz wo uska chehra dekhti thi, aur usse mehsoos hota tha ki Veer apni puraani zindagi se ubhar raha hai. Aur ye dekh ke wo behad khush ho jaati thi.

Usse proud mehsoos hota tha ki wo Veer ke itna kaam aayi. Wo ek toote hue dil ko jese jod rahi thi aur Veer ko panapta dekh usse apne aap me hi boht khushi hoti thi. Kisi jeet se kam nahi rehti thi wo harr subah jis din Veer ka khila hua chehra wo dekhti thi. Juhi aur uske beech ka wo atoot rishta wo apni ankho se bhali bhaati dekh paati thi.

Kese uski bacchi ke hontho pe wo pyaari si muskaan fel jaati thi jab bhi wo Veer ke aas paas hoti thi. Shreya ka khud ka attitude badalne laga tha Veer ke saath reh reh ke. Wo ab utni haughty nahi thi. Wo mature ho rahi thi aur bhi zyada. Unki nok jhok bhi alag hi maze ki hoti thi jisse dekh Nidhi ko behad pyaar aata tha unn dono pe hi.

Par ab...

Ab jese sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha. Wo shaks ab jaa chuka tha. Veer ab unke beech nahi tha. Jo ladka uske ghar ke vataavaran ko poori tarah se badal ke itni khushiya aur positivity uske ghar me laaya tha, uske jaane se jese saari cheeze jaa chuki thi. Aur ye sab baatein...

Nidhi ko andar se itna tod rahi thi ki uss se kabhi kabhi bola bhi nahi jaa raha tha.

Abhi wo Veer ke hi baare me soch rahi thi ki kya jawaab de apni nanhi sii bacchi ko!? Kal toh usne bahana bana ke keh diya tha ki uske Veer maamu kal aa jaenge. Par aakhir ye jhooth kab tak chalta rahega!?

Abhi wo khoyi hui hi thi ki tabhi uske bagal se Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi,

"Juhi! Tunhare Veer maamu kaam se baahar gaye hue hai. Unko aane me thoda time lagega. Aur wo tumhaare liye gift leke aaenge! Chalo, ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jao."

Juhi (cries) : Niiiiiiiii... Veer maamu chaahiye...
Gift niiiii...

Apni bacchi ko aise dekh, Nidhi ke aasu uske gaalo se fisal girne lage. Unhe jaldi se pochte hue wo kuch soch ke bolti hai,

Nidhi : Veer maamu tumhaare gande hai. Wo bina bataye kahi chale gaye hai. Abhi dekhna, mummy unke kaan pakad ke kheench ke ghar me laegi! Abhi college me aaenge na Veer maamu. Toh dekhna kese mummy pakad ke laati hai. Ab khush!? Ab toh ready ho jao, warna mummy nahi laegi fir.

Juhi : Hmmm!

Jese tese Nidhi ne usko manaaya aur usse school bheja aur khud bhi ready ho gayi college jaane ke liye.

Nidhi : Mein nikal rahi hu Shreya.

Shreya : Hmm! And...

Nidhi : !??

Shreya : What if he doesn't wants to come!?

Nidhi : I.... Kese nahi aaega. I'll bring him back.

Shreya (smiles) : Goodluck.

Nidhi (smiles) : Mmm!

Aur Nidhi Shreya ko chorr college ki orr nikal jaati hai. Pehla lecture class me uska hi rehta tha toh wo ekdum time ke pehle hi aa gayi aaj.

Na jaane kitne messages aur calls kiye honge usne Veer ko jinka ek bhi reply Veer ne nahi diya tha usse ab tak aur yahi baat usse andar se khaaye jaa rahi thi. Usse bechain kar rahi thi.

Wo badi hi aas liye andar aate students ko permit kar rahi thi baithne ke liye. Kayi saare late students aaye aur lecture shuru hue 15 minute ho bhi chuke the par ab tak...

Veer ka koi ata pata nahi tha.

Jis baat ka usse darr tha kahi wahi na ho jaaye. Wo aas liye baar baar darwaaze ki taraf dekhti ki kaash kahi se Veer usse coridorr me dikh jaaye aur wo aake apni seat par baithe. Wo usse padhaaye, usse dekhe waapas se questions solve karte hue, waapas se Veer uske saath gaadi me baith ke uske saath ghar jaaye, firse wo dono pehle ki tarah shopping par jaaye...

Par...

Par jese kuch hi palo baad jese Nidhi ki saari umeedein toot chuki thi jab Veer lecture ke ant tak kahi nazar nahi aaya. Iss waqt andar se wo itna bechain thi ki uske gale se uska thook tha nahi utar raha tha.

'Whyyyy!??? Why didn't he came!??? Kaha hai wo!?? Kuch bata ke nahi gaya... Wo mujhe apna maanta bhi hai ya nahi!? Kya ek baar bhi usne mujhe batana sahi na samjha ki wo kaha par hai!? Usse ye dhyaan kyu nahi aa raha ki mein kitni tension me rahi hungi. Whyyyyy!? Mene toh kaha tha na uss se... Ki padhaayi mat chorrna... Then... Then whyyy!??'

Wo apni saree ke bhaag ko nichode gehre chintan me doob gayi. Kisi bhi waqt uski rulaayi chooth sakti thi.

Par wo iss waqt kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Na hi uske paas Veer ka koi pata tha aur na hi uski Veer se koi baat ho paa rahi thi. Aur itna wo jaanti thi ki Veer apne ghar par toh bilkul bhi nahi hoga.

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Neend se derr se jaagte hue Veer jab uth ke fresh hoke neeche aaya toh usne dekha ki uski Bhabhi Ragini kitchen me vyast thi aur gunguna rahi thi.

Iss waqt bhi wo nighty me hi maujood thi. Ek red colour ki aakarshak nighty.

'Unhe aise kapdo me mere saamne nahi hona chaahiye. Right Pari!? I mean... Wese hi unka relationship sahi nahi chal raha aur upar se mein unka dewar unke saath akele yu reh raha hu...'

[She trust you that is why she's wearing that. Par aapke iraade kya hai master!? Hehe~]

'What the fuck Pari!? I mean to say ki unhe kuch decency rakhni chaahiye mere saamne. Also, She's too touchy.'

[You don't like being touched by her!?]

'Mene aisa toh nahi kaha.'

[Hehe~ toh aapko pasand hai jab wo aapko touch karti hai!?]

'What the...!? Pari!!? Subah subah meri taang kheechne ka mood banaya hai kya aaj!?'

[Haha~ I was just joking. But yeah, it's a fact master. Wo aapke saamne itna open hai because she trusts you completely. Aur kyu nahi hoga trust!? Jis bande se usne aaj tak baat nahi kii, sahi se pesh nahi aayi wo banda uski jaan bachaane aaya, na ki uska apna pati jo uski jaan ki baazi laga diya tha wahi. Toh aise me toh obviously wo aankh band kar ke aap pe bharosa karegi.]

'But...'

[Don't think too much. She's good now. Usse apni galti ka realization ho chuka hai aur she wants to do things for you. Toh karne do usse aur thoda cooperative bhi rehna. She's rich master. Don't forget...]

'Mujhe samajh jaana chahiye tha ki tumhari nazar unke paise par hai...'

[Hehehe~ Money is important master.]

Veer ke kadmo ki aahat paate hi Ragini ne usse spot kiya aur muskuraate hue usse dekhi.

Ragini : Good Morning Veer!

Veer : Good... Morning!?

Ragini : Kya neend theek se aayi!?

Veer : Jii!

Ragini : Koi dikkat toh nahi gayi na!?

Veer : Jii.. nahi...

Ragini : Aise... Aise itna formal mat pesh aao Veer. Mein tumhari Bhabhi hu na!? Khul ke baate karo. Aur ye ghar bhi tumhara hi hai. Beeti baatein jo bhi thi, unn galtiyo ka paschataap toh mein karungi hi. Par... Aise pesh na aao Veer... Please! Mujhe... Mujhe accha nahi lagta hai.

Veer : As I said... I'll try and... No promises.

Uski baat sunn Ragini apna nichla honth daato tale dabaaye usse dekhti hai. Veer ka usse maaf kar dena shayad abhi boht dur tha. Par wo apna prayaas karti rahegi. Ek na ek din Veer usse maaf zaroor karega.

Yahi aas liye wo apne chehre se chinta ke bhaavo ko hataate hue uss se boli,

"Accha chalo! Baitho! Mene aaj Breakfast me Sandwiches banaaye hai."

Naashta banaane me toh Ragini ka koi jawaab nahi tha. Khaana bhi wo behad accha banaati thi par Veer ko yaad hai, sabse accha khana uske ghar me uski Chachi Sumitra aur uski sauteli Maa, Shweta hi banaati thi. Shweta toh hotel ki maalkin thi. Na jaane kitni dishes wo jaanti thi.

Uski behan Bhumika bhi khaana banaane ki race me shaamil thi par yadi Shweta aur Sumitra se compare kiya jaaye toh Bhumika kaafi peeche thi abhi. Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ko ghar ke khaane ka swaad yaad aa gaya.

Par wo jaanta tha. Uss ghar me uski ab koi jagah nahi hai aur na hi wo khud ab jaana chaahta tha waapas.

Wo iss waqt din guzarne ke baad dinner karte hue apne room me aa chuka tha aur lait ke apne future ke baare me soch raha tha ki achanak hi uska phone vibrate hua aur usne message check kiya.

Usne dekha ki kisi unknown number se message aaya hua hai. Jese hi chat kholi usme kuch messages dale hue the.

Hi Veer!
I know tumhare andar dheer saare questions hai.
But please, mein tumse ek baar aur milna chaahti hu.
I hope tum aaoge!
Kal xxxxxxxx hotel me. Please!

Message karne waali aur koi nahi balki jaani maani ladies me se ek thi, Sonia.

Sonia ne upat ke usse message kiya tha. Ye baat chaunka dene waali thi.

'Just... Why does she wants to meet me again!? Unke paas itna paisa hai uske baad mujh jese aam se ladke ke peeche kyu padi hui hai woh!? I don't get it. And that hotel... Shit!'

[You cannot turn her down master like that. Wo ek badi hasti hai. Abhi tak jitne bhi logo ko aap jaante ho unme se. So aapko jaana padega.]

'Damn it!'

Aur majbooran Veer ko milne ke liye raazi hona pada.

Aaj ka din bas yuhi guzra. Veer college nahi gaya tha. Usne jese ab decide kar liya tha ki kya karna hai.

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Agli subah jab wo neeche aaya toh usse Ragini kahi dikhaayi nahi dii. Wo kitchen me aaya tab bhi Ragini ki koi jhalak na mili usse.

Par abhi jese hi wo palatne waala tha ki tabhi...

Achanak se uski aankho ke saamne andhera chha gaya. Do makhmal se komal haatho ka sparsh uski aankho par hua. Aur agle hi pal do badi hi soft sii cheeze uski peeth par aake dabb gayi.

Aur Veer ko samajhne me derr na lagi ki wo kya thi.
Aur ye parakhne me bhi derr nahi lagi ki uski aankhein band kare uske peeche kaun khada hua tha.

Ragini uske peeche uski aankhein apne haatho se band kiye uss se ekdum chipak ke khadi hui thi. Jiske chalte uske stan ekdum Veer ki peeth me jaake dhass chuke the.

Unn nipples ka ehsaas Veer ko bhali bhaati uski peeth par ho raha tha. Aur na chaahte hue bhi uske lund ne ek jhatka maar hi diya.

Aur kyu na maarta!? Veer ab virgin nahi tha. Ek baar ladki ke youvan ka swaad chakh lene ke baad toh ab usme jese aur bhi aag jaag chuki thi. Na jaane kab se usne sex nahi kiya tha. Aur aise me ye chote chote hamle na chaahte hue bhi usse apni hi Bhabhi ke prati aisa reaction dene par majboor kar rahe the.

"Good Morning Veer! I have a surprise for you!"

Ragini ki manmohak awaaz uske kaano me padi, uske haath ekdum garm the ya yu kahe ki wo khud hi aag ka shola thi. Abhi abhi kuch derr pehle hi wo naha ke baahar aayi thi jiske chalte uske geele baalo aur uske badan se aati wo uttejit kar dene waali sugandh Veer ki naak me pad rahi thi.

Veer ko iss waqt khud pe sharmindagi ho rahi thi kyuki wo aroused feel kar raha tha. Isme uski koi galti nahi thi. Galti toh Ragini ki bhi nahi thi. Bas situation ki thi.

"Bh... Bhabhi!?"

Thoda awkwardly usne jawaab diya. Wo ekdum stiff khada hua tha. Ragini ke haatho ka aur peeche uske do aamo ka sparsh usse paagal kar raha tha.

Wo dhakelte hue usse baahar le jaane lagi,

Veer : Bh... Bhabhi!? Kaha le jaa rahi ho!?

Wo chaahta toh tha ki issi waqt uske haatho ko hata de par aisa karne ke liye usse Ragini ke haatho ko thaamna padta aur shayad abhi usme itni himmat nahi thi aur ye shayad sahi bhi nahi tha.

Kuch hi palo me Veer Ragini ke dwaara baahar aa chuka tha aur thodi derr me hi Ragini ne apne uski aankho se apne haath hataaye aur Veer ko saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Saamne dekhte hi uski aankhein dheere dheere ascharya ke maare felti gayi.

Uske saamne porch me ek behad hi nayi Apache RTR khadi hui thi. Ekdum nayi.

Veer : Ye!??

Ragini : Mene mangwaayi hai. Tumhare liye. Meri taraf se tumhare liye gift hai Veer. Kal tumne kaha tha na!? Tumhare paas koi vehicle nahi hai. Aur kesi hoti!? Ghar se tum... Kuch bhi leke nahi gaye the. Isliye, parso mene dad se keh ke unke showroom se... Ye mangwai hai. Kai... Kaisi hai Veer!? Tumhe pasand toh aayi na!?

Veer ki bolti band ho chuki thi. Itna bada tohfa aaj tak usse kisi ne nahi diya tha. Par abhi wo khush nahi tha. Balki duwidha me tha. Ki bhala Ragini uske liye itna kyu kar rahi hai aur dusri baat ki bhala usse ye gift accept karni chahiye ya nahi!?

Ragini (chinta me) : Kya tumhe pasand nahi aayi Veer!?

Veer : I... I don't think ki... Mujhe ye rakhna chahiye.

Abhi shabd uske muh se nikle hi the ki Ragini ne zorr se uska haath thaam liya.

Veer (surprised) : Huh!?

Ragini : Please don't say that Veer. Please! Aaj tak ghar me tumhara b'day celebrate nahi kiya gaya tha. Aaj bhale hi tumhara b'day na ho. Par aane hi waala hai right!? So, as an advance gift hi samajh lo!? Aaj tak mene tumhe tumhare b'day par koi gift na diya. In fact tumhare b'day me maujood tak nahi rehti thi tumhaare aas paas. Unn sab baato ko yaad karke hi... I feel so... So bad... Veer! Rona aata hai mujhe. Please! Accept this. Ye mere Dad ki taraf se bhi hai. Uss din tumne unki jaan bhi bachaayi thi Veer. Yadi meri nahi sunn'na toh kam se kam unki toh sunn lo.

Veer : I...

[Accept it master.]

'Accept it!? Petrol kya tumhare chacha aake dalwaenge Pari!?'

Ragini : And petrol ki chinta mat karna Veer. Tumhaare liye, Tank will always be full. Mein servant se kehke bharwa dungi. Use it according to your need. Tumhe kaam aaegi Veer. Please accept it.

[Hahaha~ Ye lo. Ho gaya kaam.]

'Damnnn!!'

Ragini ka chehra aur wo aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aasu bahaane ke liye ready thi, wo dekhte hue finally Veer ne ek aah bhari aur bola,

"Fine! Mujhe wese hi aaj kahi jaana tha. And... Thank you! Aapko bhi aur... Aapke Dad ko bhi."

Ragini ko pata nahi kya hua par agle hi pal wo itni khush ho gayi ki wo Veer ki chaathi me kood padi aur uske zorr se gale lag gayi.

Ekdum stabdh Veer wahi khada raha, na kuch kar saka aur na kuch bol saka. Par Ragini bina kuch realize kiye ki abhi abhi usne kya kiya, wo naashta banaane ka bol andar chali gayi.

Din ka samay hua aur Veer ready tha hotel jaane ke liye. Sonia se usne milne ka keh ke jo rakha tha. Ab jaana toh padega hi.

Apni nayi bike uthaaye Veer nikal pada hotel ki taraf.

Aaj kitne dino baad usse koi bike chalaane ka mauka mil raha tha. Khush toh tha wo andar se par aur bhi khushi hoti yadi ye bike uske apne paiso ki hoti.

Koi baat nahi, jald hi wo apni bike bhi lega.

Aisa soch wo kuch hi derr me pohuch chuka tha hotel ke saamne.

Bike ko parking me laga kar wo andar jaane ke liye ready tha par abhi bhi uske kadam ruke hue the.

Andar jaane se wo katra raha tha.

Ek gehri saas lete hue wo finally andar gaya.

Hotel behad hi shandaar thi. Aur andar ghuste hi usse side waale area me Sonia baithi hui nazar aa gayi.

Wo area thoda mehnga area tha. Jaha baithne ke liye zyada paise dene padte the.

Abhi wo andar jaane hi wala tha ki door pe hi khadi ek lady ne usse rok diya.

Lady : Sir! Your reservation!?

Veer : Reservation!?

Lady : Yes! Sir! This is a special area. You must have a reservation to enter here. Do you have it!?

Veer : I...

Lady : Sorry Sir! If you don't have it. We can't allow you to enter.

Wo lady muskuraate hue usse dekhi. Par uski muskaan jese bayaa kar rahi thi ki saale aukaat me aaya karo. Jab aukaat nahi hai toh kyu ghus rahe ho!?

Kuch aise hi shabd uski muskaan bayaa karna chaah rahi thi jisse Veer bhaamp chuka tha.

Wo abhi palat ke jaane hi wala tha ki kismat se Sonia ki nazar uss pe padi aur wo forun hi uth ke door ki taraf aayi,

Lady : Sir! Please leave...

Veer : Fine!

Veer palat chuka tha jab achanak uske kaano me awaaz padi,

"Veeeeeeerrr!"

Aur palat ke dekha, toh Sonia uske saamne thi.

Sonia : Andar kyu nahi aa rahe hai!?

Veer : Well! She told me I can't... And told me to leave so...

Sonia (surprised) : She told you what!??

Ab bechaari uss lady ki phat rahi thi. Usse pata tha ki aage kya hone wala tha.

Sonia : Mene tumse kuch derr hi pehle kaha tha na!? A gentleman may come anytime and you have to recieve him. Kya aise hi orders follow karti ho? Should I complain or what!?

Lady : I'm so sorry! Ma'am! I'm so sorry! Mujhe laga tha koi...

Kehte hue Wo Veer ke kapdo ki taraf dekhi jo keval ek simple white shirt aur blue jeans me tha.

Aur usne jese hi Sonia ko dekha toh darr ke maare uski nazre neeche ho gayi.

Sonia bhaamp chuki thi ki wo lady kya kehna chaah rahi thi. Usse abhi itna tezz gussa aa raha tha per jese tese usne khud ko control kiya.

Sonia : Remember! Kapdo se aadmi ki pehchaan nahi hoti samjhi!? You don't even know who he is. He's my benefactor. Aur ahinda se... Yaha ke staff me se kisi ne bhi mere guest ke saath iss tarah behave kiya na... I'll sue them.

Lady : I'm sorry! Ma'am! I'm really sorry!

Sonia : Hmph! Veer! Aao...

Wo Veer ko apni table ke paas le gayi. Baithate hue usne apna coffee ka mug uthaaya aur Veer ko order karne ke liye kaha.

Par Veer ne kuch bhi order na kiya.

Sonia : Yaha ki coffee acchi hai Veer. Isliye yaha aksar aati rehti hu.

Kehte hue usne ek jhalak waapas se uss lady ko dekha aur apni coffee peene lagi.



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Veer : I... I see! Toh!? Kis liye bulaaya hai aapne!? Yadi firse wahi paise...

Sonia : Noooo Veeeer!! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..
Asal me...

Par abhi wo apni baat keh paati uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi,

"Sorry! Ma'am! Mein aapko personally recieve karne nahi aa paayi. Welcome to our hotel again."

Ek jaani maani awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi. Aur jis baat se wo andar aane ke liye katra raha tha akhir wo ho hi gayi.

Peeche ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki khadi hui thi. Usne Sonia ko dekh muskuraate hue uska swaagat kiya. Par jese hi uski nazre Sonia ke saath baithe shaks par gayi pehle toh wo kuch pal usse dekhi aur fir uski aankhein asycharya ke maare fel gayi.

Veer (mann me) : Bhumika... Dii...

Bhumika (mann me) : V... Veeeeer!!!???

Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Veer ke chehre pe jaha koi bhaav nahi the toh wahi Bhumika ekdum stabdh sii khadi usse hi dekh rahi thi. Sabse pehla sawaal mann me yahi tha. Kya ye wahi Veer hai!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

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