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Indeed!Wolf abhi sant hai apne sikar ko dekh raha hai jaise hi sikar ne kuch kiya wolf ko chidfad dega
Isliye jaldi update denekaIndeed!![]()
Aaj raat me aaega na.Isliye jaldi update deneka![]()
Congratulations brotherFor completed 7lk views on your story thread..
Je bat apni taraf se happy walaFor completed 7lk views on your story thread..
PYAR VYAR TO NA HOGYAYA APKOAre naina ji aisa julam mat kariye
ap pls
wo kia hai na k pari se ap jitna marzi
salta lo us me koi dikat nhi mgr pls
NIDHI ji ko kuch mat kahiye ye ap
se nivedan hai warna humara dill
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Superb revo bhaiSo, Bhumika ke mutaabik wo Veer ko jaanti tak nahi... Achha hai bahut accha hai... Poore aasar dikh rahen hain ke jald hi Bhumika madam ka bhi Ragini Bhabhi waala haal hone waala hai... Sapne to isse aate hi hain pehle se hi joki isse jald hi uss paschataap ke bawandar mein dhakelne waale hain... Veer ko Soniya jaisi hasti ke saath dekhna aur fir Suhana ki beizzati karte dekhna (joki iss update ka mera favourite part tha) uske baad Bhumika ke mann mein duvidha paida honi hi hai...
Review aage badhane se pehle thodi Pari Madam ki baat cheet to banti hi hai...
Kya samajhna chahiye in baaton se... Pari ne jab Veer ke shareer mein entry lee thi tab hospital mein kaha tha ke uska koyi physical form nahi hai... Kya ye sach hai... I doubt it... Kahin baad mein Insaan bankar prakat hi naa ho jaaye ye?? Aur haan usne to apne aap ko genderless bataya tha & then later on she said that she's a girl ... Pari mujhe iss kahani ki sabse suspicious character lagi.... Lagta to yahi hai ke bahut se raaz khulne baaki hain Pari ke baare mein.... Waise Veer ki disrespect par itna gussa kyon aaya usse... Kya samjhein hum masoom log iss reaction ke kaaran ko
Sonia aur Suhana... Saala kiss angle se ye behne lagti hain... Zaroor inka baap rangeen mizaaz raha hoga... You know ek gharwaali and ek baahar waali theory...
Chaliye bahute accha hua iss Suhana ke saath... Fuck this ghamandi auratIsse koyi batao ke hero ki aesi beizzati bardaasht nahi ki jaayegi... Aayi badi dedh crore ki angoothi waali... Haan haan 1.57 crore ki ... Saala sab log kachra failane mein lage hain aur sabka kachra sametna bechare Veer ko padta hai..
Ofcourse ye angoothi churao kaand apne Aatish Seth ka hi hoga... Dekhte hain ke Veer kaise ye mission poora karegaa aur kitne points milenge isse poora karne par ...
Haan ek baat to reh hi gayi... Kya abhi bhi Veer ka level itna nahi hua hai ke wo Sonia/Suhana ko *Check* kar sake?? Agar haan to jaldi karo bhai... Sonia ki Veer ke prati favourability dekhna rochak hoga... Aur uss Suhana ne to shayad negative mein hi pahunchayi huyi hogi... Hmppphhh..
Iss update ki sabse khubsurat baat ye rahi ke aapne Bhumika ho, Sonia ho ya for wo ghamandi aurat Suhana ho sabki feelings aur manobhaav bahut hi baareeki se dikhayein hain.... Ye aapki shaandar writing skills ko darshaane ke liye kaafi hai ...
Ye lo bhaiya ek chhote update jitna revo chhaap diya maine.... Issi baat par 5-6 update ek saath dedo aaj kal mein...Ek masoom reader ki masoom si request
Outstanding Update brother & Waiting for another Rocking Update....
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Superb revo Naina jiSonia...... ye kirdaar samajh se pade hai... veer ke piche aise hath dhoke padi hai ki jaise wo uska husband ho... upar se jab bhi wo veer se milti hai, lage ki veer ko beijjati karne liye hi milne aayi ho ya milne ke liye bulati ho... jaise aaj us hotel mein wo kaand huye..
Suhana........ pata nahi Kyun par lage ki in future veer aur suhana ki jodi banegi.... abhi ke liye to pyar se bhari nok jhok hai dono ke darmiyaan. Chahe paise ko lekar hi sahi..... lekin jaise hi veer wo ring dhundh ke suhaana ke hatho mein dega.. ushi waqt ,ushi pal dono ek dusre ko pyar ka izhaar kar denge
waise ye ek karwi sachhayi hai ki Paisa bolta hai... chaahe veer maane ya na maane... par sach yahi hai
Bhumika.....ab tak is bhumika ki bhumika is kahani mein badi ajeebogreeb thi... I mean to say iski feelings aur soch...
baaki business ke maamle mahir is kirdaar ko jab bhi veer ka khayal aaye iske mann mein...tab iski soch vichaar zero ho jaati hai....dilo dimag mein ek ajib si ladayi suru ho jaati hai, ek ajib se kashmakash mein fansh jaati hai bhumika har baar...Zameer bole isko ki isne bhi gharwalo ki tarah bura kiya veer ke sath,, par mann bole ki nahi.. veer ke bare mein mat socho bas apne raah pe chalo... upar iski mom ki wo baatein...
Khair.... I think wo dil ki buri na hai... Wo to uski mom ne bataye huye raah chal rahi hai bas..
lekin is glani ka kya kare wo....
even jaisa bhi ho ,sautela hi sahi par bhai hai uska... are bus , train journey mein bhi paas baithe insaan se jaan pehchan ho jaati hai, yaha to itne saal ek hi chath ke niche rahe ek sath dono... ab jab itne dino baad phir se mulakaat huyi to yun anjaano jaise behave kar to li usne veer ke sath.... par baad mein glani bhi hua apne behavior ko leke...
aur iski wajah uske dilo dimag ho rahi ladayi thi aur sath hi uski mom dwara sikhayi huyi wo baatein bhi thi....kiski sune wo...ye decide nahi kar pa rahi hai wo....Ek taraf lage ushe ki veer nirdosh hai, uske sath galat kar rahe hai sabhi ya phir mom ki baat maan ke bhumika ko sirf khud se matlab rakhni chahiye...
Wo machine pari jo bhi naam hai uska.....
Everytime pari be like
baashah banane ka khwaab dikhake jaane ky kuch nahi karwa rahi hai veer se
abhi dekho anguthi laane ka task pe laga diya usko
Shayad wo machine bhi yahi chahti hai suhana veer ki heroine bane aur veer bane sonia ka jija
Well... shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next...
brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()
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