Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[Ankitarani]

Unbelievable Update...... Superb....All events are outstanding.. Specially Prof. , Rajbeer , Dharmesh and Asthana Wala.

Sanju ji...is update ko banane me sbse jaada mahnat or dimak lgaya hai.....ye update sbse mushkil kaam tha ki itni tough thoery ko kaise asaan bnakr reader tk pahuchau...bht sochna pda tha iske lie...bht google youtube kie...tb jaakr bna ye...inme shayad ek exapmle hi fake hai baaki sbhi example true hai...

 

[Ankitarani]

Sanju ji...is update ko banane me sbse jaada mahnat or dimak lgaya hai.....ye update sbse mushkil kaam tha ki itni tough thoery ko kaise asaan bnakr reader tk pahuchau...bht sochna pda tha iske lie...bht google youtube kie...tb jaakr bna ye...inme shayad ek exapmle hi fake hai baaki sbhi example true hai...

Dr tha ki shayd ye update reaadr ko smjh aayega ya nhii

 

[Naina]

Upsate 7


Rajveer apni gun lie samne vaishali pr aim krke khda tha....
Rajveer ki ankho se aansu bah rhe the...lekin dil majbuut krkr wo trigger dbaane hi wala hota hai ki...
Vaishali-papa ek min....kya meri akhri wish puri nahi hogi...

Rajveer-kyaa chahiye tumhhe...
Vaishali-meri akhri wish hai ki...muje bs 2min chahiye...mai isse...ravi se maaafi mangna chahti hu...

Desai-ye iski chaal hai sirr...
Ravi-nahi uncle..ye...bahut khtrnaak hai...ise aap mar dijiye
Vashali-ravi...agr mai mr gyi to bhutt banke kya haal krugi tera ...soch sakta hai tu...

Ravi kuch second sochne ke bad -uncle uncle...mt maariye ise...ise jaane do...ise guraftaar krlo...jail me daal dijiye plsa... plss maarna mt...mt maaro uncle. .

Vaishali-bss 2min...plsss papa meri last wish...uske baad aap jo chaho...
Rajveer-okay...pr tum uske pas nhi jaogi

Vaishali-bilkul nhi...
Rajveer-hath upar kro....ye haddi idhar feko...

Vaishali haddi ko rajveer ke paas fek deti hai...or dono hath upar kr leti hai....

Rajveer gun aim vaishali prr set krta hai..

Vaishali-Ravi....tum kyaa sochte ho...tum bach jaoge....agr mai mri...to tum tumhe ye police wale bhi mujse n bcha payege....socho insan aisi hu to bhut kaisi bnugi...
Ravi to phle se hi dra hua tha...bchi kucchi hawa vaishali nikal rhi thi uski...


Vaishali apni baat ko puri krti hai...
"Orrr agr mai bchi...to bhi ye police wale tumhe mujhse nhi bcha paege.....dono hi surat me tumhara marna tay hai..."

Vaishali chillate hue-blii chadhaugii teri...bliii...."
Vaishali itni tej chillaati hai ki desai ko apne kaan pr hath rkhne pdte hai...

Ye gun agr desai ke haath me hoti to vaishali ke is garjan se kbki gun uske haath se chhoot chuki hoti..

Wo to rajveer tha jo uski dahad se dr nhi rha tha..

Rajveer-aisa isne kya kia hai...jo tum iske piche itna buri trh se pdi ho...kyuu maarna chahti ho ise...
Vaishali-har us insan ko maarugi jiski vjah se kisi jeev ko nuksaan hota hai....

Rajveer-isne kya kia hai...
Vaishali-pucho isse....
Vaishali gusse me ravi ki taraf badhti hai..
Rajveer-stop vaishali....wrna i'll shoot u...
Vaishali ruk jaati hai...

Rajveer-kya kiya tha isne...
Vaishali-raajni ka khoon kiya isne...
Rajveer-whattt...kon rajni.....
Vaishali-Rajni ko bhul gye papa aap....hmare pdos me as a pg aayi thi...

Rajveer-haa yaad aaya...
Vaishali-is kmeene ne use apne pyar ke jaal me fsaaya ...orr...
Vaishali chup ho jaati hai...
Rajveer -bolo kya kia...
Vaishali thoda hichkicha rhi thi...kuki samne uska baap tha...prr himmat krke bolti hai...

Vaishali-uske sath sb kia isne...jb wo pregnent ho gyi to...use abortion kraane ki salah isne di.....wo roti rahi...chillati rahi...pr isne usse shadi n ki...

Usne har kr abortion kraaya or wo ye sadma sahan n kr paayi...or mr gyi...
Ravi hairani-kyaa...rajni...mar gyi...

Vaishali-haaa mr gyi...tune maara use...tu hai uske bchhe ka kaatil or us rajni ka...2,2khuun kiye hai tuune

Rajveer-agr isne aisa kia hai to...iski sja kanuun dega ise...
Vaishali-ab tk di.....apko to abtk pta bhi n tha...ki aisa kuch hua bhi hai..aap sja doge...mai marugi ise...mai...blii chadhaugi iski ...aisi mot dungi ise ki pyar ke naam pr kisi ki life ke sath khilwad krne se phle 10bar soche...papa...mujhe iski grdn chahiye...us grdn se footbaal khelugi..

Desai ne aajtk itna bhyank roop kisi ka nhi dekha tha...phle baar uska kisi psycho killer se samna pda tha...wo bhi itni drawank desai ke maarhe se psina tpkne lgaa tha...or ravi ki to haalat phle se khrab thi...prr rajveer hi isse nhi dr rha tha..

Rajveer-or nisha...nishaa ko kyu maara tumne...
Vaishali-to aapne pta lga hi liya ki mene maara hai didi ko...to suno...maine didi ko kyu maara...didi se meri achhi khaasi banti rhi...lekin ek din didi ne...

Tbhi vaishali gate ki taraf dekhti hai
"Mummy....mummy dekho...papa mujhe maar rhe hai...muje bchalo mummy"
Vaishali ke itna bolte hi sb gate ki taraf dekhte hai...orrrr..
Vaishali furti se baalo me se chaaku nikaalti or sidha war rajveer ke hatho pr..

Rajveer ke hath ke pnje pr chaaku lga or gun jhatke se dur jaa giri...rajveer ko itna hosh n hua ki wo smbhl paaye....
Rajveer apne hath ko pakad leta hai...kyuki..uska hath thoda ghayal ho chuka tha...
Gun desai se thoda sa dur giri jaakr

Rajveer-desai gun uthao..
Desai gun ki trf dekhta hai...
"Desai uncle....age aapne gun uthai to next noumber aapka hoga...tdpa tdpakr maarugi...blii chadhaugi apki bhi...smjhe aap..."

Vaishali ki garjana se desai ki dhadkne bhadh gyi hi ...blki heart atteck sa hone ko ho jaatabhai use...or gun ki trf dekhne ki himmt bhi n kr paata...

Rajveer-desai...kyaa kr rhe ho...jao uthao gun..
Vaishali-tujhe chhodugi nhi ravi....mai aaugi ot teri bli chadhaugi...hahahahaah
2mhine ke aandr teri rasveer pr maala chadhwaugi...



Vaishali chillaate hue bolti hai..
Rajverer use pakadne ko bhagta hai..
Vaishali piche ki window se kuud jaaati... hai...

Rajver bhi uske piche kuud jaata hai...
Aage vaishali bhagti hai or piche rajveer bhagta rahta hai...
Rajveer-ruk jao vaishali...
Dono ke bichme lagbhag 150meter ka faasla tha...

Vaishali samne ki ek gali me ghus jaati hai...rajveer usme ghusta hai to vaishali use dikhnii band ho jaati hai...
Tbhi rajveer ko piche se shor sunai deta hai...
Wo wo ek ldka chilla rha tha...
"Meri bike....hey rukk..."

Ldka side me khda hokr dukan se kuch le rha tha.....vaishali uski bike lekar bhaag jaati hai...

Rajveer apne mn me-ye ghr me rhkr...bike chlaana,car chlaana kaise sikh gyi...
Rajveer us ldke se bike ka no leta hai..or aaspas ke chek post pr us bike no naa crosss hone dene k lie kahta hai...

Rajveer wapas jaata hai..
Desai us ldke ko khol chuka tha...or uske hath pr koi kapda bandh rha tha...

Rajveer-tum thik ho ravi...
Ravi-usko pkda...
Rajveer-nahi...wo bhag gyi...
Tabhi rajveer ke phon pr call aati hai..
Rajveer-hello
""Hello sir...meri bike mujhe yhi khdi mili thoda dur...."
Rajveer-okk...police chek post pr tumhe rokege....meri baat kra dena...
"Okk sir..."

Rajveer- to mr. Ravi...mja aaya kisi ko like krne ka...
Ravi kuch n bolta...
Rajveer-jail to tum bhi jaoge...bss us rajni ke baare me thoda sa pta kr le....chlo ab...or tum...police me ho desai tum...gun bhi nhi utha paaye..

Desai-mai dr gya tha sir...
Rajveer-kuu...wo to bchhi hai na...nadan hai...tumhhi bolte the...
Desai chupchap khda tha ...uske muh se kuch m nikal rha tha...
Desai-sir...wo apki beti nhi h...yaa fr usme koi bhuut bda hua hai..
Ravi-haa uncle...she is very dengerous...


Rajveer ghar aata hai......
Uma-kya hua...
Rajveer-Uma...wo pta nahi kaha chli gyi...wo criminal bn chuki hai...agr hm time pr nhi pahuchte to wo maar chuki hoti ravi ko...

Rajveer mathe pr hath rakhkr beth jaata hai....

Uma-ab kyaa hoga...
Rajveer-bhul jao use...bhavnao me bahne ki jrurt nhi hai....apni normal life jiyo....chlo khana lgao...

Uma-kaise baap ho aap beti ghr chhodkr chli gyi...kaise rhegi...upr se ladki ...bchhi hai wo..ye sb soch n rhe or khaana khaa rhe ho......

Rajbeer gusse me- ldki hai wo lekin 2ldko ko peetkar 1 ko apne sath le gyi thi...bchhi nhi hai wo...bdo bdo ko dhuul chtaa di hai usne....

Uske rahne ki tnsn mt lo...jo ghr use pasand aayega uske sb membr ko markr wha rah skti hai wo...khana lgao...or uska koi jikr nhi krega ghr me...smjhe ....
Rajveer ka gussa dekhk uma bhi dr jaati hai...



Soni-bhot drd ho rha hai kya bhaiya.....
Ravi-haaa...
Soni-bhabhi ko aisa nhi krna chahiya tha...
Ravi-bhabhi....bhabhi mt bol use...uska naam bhi mt le..

Soni-aap hi to bolte the ki soni wo teri bhabhi hai....
Ravi-mt maari gyi thi meri...rahu shani ka kaal tha mujhpr jo maine aisa kaha...are wo...chudail hai...bhut,pishaach...pta n kya hai wo...bht khtrnaak hai...wo...

Soni-kabhi aap uski taareef nhi krte thakte the.. mujhe to lga aaj bhaiya ka kaam bn gya...or use uski dream girl mil gyi...

Ravi-tujhe ek baat btau...btana mt kisi ko
Soni-bolo....
Ravi-uski daahad se...inspector sahab ke pasine chhoot gye the...gun tak n utha paaye wo...orr mera susu nikal gya tha..
Soni pahle to dhyan se sunti hai...fr achank hasne lgti hai..

Soni-bhaiyaa.....hahahaha......
Ravi-tu has rhi hai...mai yaad krta hu to bhi dr lgta hai....wo aaj maar hi chuki hoti muje....
Soni-ab dro mt...aaap ghrme ho...or araam kro...
Rajveev khana khakr wha jaata hai...jaha rajni rahti thi...
Rajveer-mai ye puchne aaya hu...ki 2saal pahle yha ek ldki rahti thi...rajni nam ki...uska koi adress ya phon no hai....?

"Nahi ...kya hua prr..."
Rajveer-bs kuch case ke silsile me chahiye...
"Okk mai dekhta hu...aap bethiye..."
Rajveer wha soffe pr beth jata hai...
Lagbhag 5min baad...
"Li jiye sir...uska adhar card ki copy mili hai..."
Rajveer uspr likha adress dekhta hai...
Usne adress hariyana ka tha..
Rajveer hariya headqaurter me call krke rajni ke ghr jakr uske bare me pta krne ko bolta hai...
Rajveer-thank u bhaisahab...

Rajveer wapas apne ghr aajata hai...or so jaata hai...


Karib 1bje raat ke...

Ravi ke hath per bandhe hue the...or uski grdn kisi lakdi prr rkha hua tha...
Lakdi upr ki trf khadi thi...
Ravi ki bs grdn hi ldki pr tiki hui thi..baki body free thi...or ravi aage ki taaf jhuka hua tha...peeth pr jakr uske hath bndhe hue the ..

Tbhi samne se vaishali aati hai...jiske hath me ek bda khanajar tha...or baal khul the...
Aakr ravi ke paas khdi ho jaati hai...

Vaishali-maine kaha tha na...mai aaugi...or tujhe marugi...hahahahaahah...
Teri BLI CHAHIYE MUJHE TERI BLI....hahahaha
Or vaishali tej war revi ki gardan pr krti hai...
"Nahi......vaishaali....mujhe chhod do mt maro...ravi bahot tej cheekhta hua jaagta hai...wo sara pasino me nhaya hua tha..
Uski cheekh itni tej thi ki uski family ke sath sath rajveer ki bhi ankh khul gyi...

Rajveer bhagta hua ravi ke ghar aata hai...ravi ka chhota bhai gate kholta hai...
Dekhta hai to ravi ke paas sbhi priwar ke sadasy khde the...
Rajveer-kyaa hua...
Ravi ki ma-dekhiye bhaisahab...ise ab bhi vaishali ke sapne dikh rhe hai...hme bhut dr lg rha hai...


Rajveer-ravi...kaha hai vaishali...wo bs sapna tha...isme drne ki kya bat hai...
Ravi-nahi uncle...wo aansakti hai kabhi bhi...aapne suna nhi tha...wo kah rhi thi muje maaregi...
Rajveer-aisa kuch nhi hai...wo nhi aayegi....
Ravi-wo kisi se nhi drti...wo jrur aayegi uncel...
Ravi ki ma-bhaisab...kuch kijiye...ap to jante hai...yha koi bda aadmi b n hai...
Rajveer -thik hai tum dro mt...mai ek constable ko tumhare ghar pr rkhwa deta hu ...okk


Rajveer 2 constable ko ravi ke ghar pahra krne ko bol deta hai..
Rajveer raat ko leta hua sb ghatnakram ko soch rha tha...
Kya se kya hoga...kitna brbad ho gya wo...abhi 5saal bhi n hue the beti ki chita ko agni diye....ki ab...dusri beti..kya hoga uska...
Rajveer bed pr leta hua rone lgta hai....bss rone ki awaj baahr nhi aarhi thi....
"Jis beti ko paala posa...wo itni khtrnak...itni drawni kuu...or kaise bn gyi..rajveer ko vaishali ki bchpn ki yaad aati hai...jb wo chhoti thi... ice cream k lie hmesa sbse ldti thi...uski favourite ice cream thi.....rajveer ko yad aata hai...jb rajveer ek baar vaishali ke lie frock laaya tha to vaishali khush hokr rajveer ki god me aagyi thi..raajveer ki peeth pr bethna....vaishali ka hasna ,bola sb use yad arha tha...

Rajveer rok n paata or uske muh se rone ki aawaaj bahar ajati hai...
Jise sunkr uma uth jaati hai.
Uma-kyaa hua apko...or uma lite on krti hai...
Rajveer rota hua-kuch nhi...bss...meri beti...
Ot rajveer or jor se rone lgta hai...

Uma-smbhaliye khud ko...pta n upr wala kuu hmare liye itna kathor ho chuka hai...aap presan mt hoiye...sb thik ho jayega.
Rajveer-uma....use bike chlaani kb aayi...use car chlaani...wo to hmesa ghr me rhati thi...bss 1 hr k lie apni coaching orr fr apne ghr....ye sb...wo bolti thi ki...use koi dustrb n kre...hme lgta tha wo pdhai kr rhi hai...galti hmaari hai..uma...hme uspr dhyan rkhna tha...jb 2,3saal se usne hm sbse vasta km sa kr diya tha...hme tb hi is sbpr dhyan dena chahiye tha...kuu...hm itne beprwaah ho gye...hm luut gye uma...hmare bchho ko kiski najar lg gyi....
Rajveer ka rona dekh uma bhi pighal jaati hai...

Uma-aap ese royege to hme kon smbhalega....aap ese mt roiye...
Rajveer-mai use apne hatho se kaise maarta...achaa hua uma wo bhag gyi...wrna mai nhi jee paata use markr...krta bhi kya...din b din uska ravaiyya bdlta ja rha tha...mai nhi chahta tha ki wo kisi ko maar de...
Uma-ha mai jaanti hu...ap roiye mt..



After 10 days.....

Delhi.....
Disha subah subah cycling kr rahi thi...
Samne achank ek pillla(puppy) aajata hai...jo bahut chhota tha...or disha ki cycle se takra jaata hai...
Pilla rone lgta hai...disha ko bura lgta hai...
Wo utarkr us pille ko uthane wali hi hoti hai ki samne se ek kutta bhokta hua aata hai...

disha dr jaati hai...or cycle ki taraf bhaagti hai...lekin late ho gya tha...
Kutta us tak aagya tha...or kutta uspr jhappatta marne wala hi hota hai ki samne se ek ldki us kutta ko pakadkr piche ki taraf fek deti hai...

Disha dekhti hai ki ek ldki...jisne track suit pahna tha jo bahut ganda ho chuka tha..kutte se ulajh bethi thi...kutta ki vjh se wo gir gyi thi.....kutta uske upr tha...or kutta panjo se uspr waar kr rha tha...

Us ldki ne kutta ka muh pkda tha...lekin panjo se kaafi waar ho chuke the uspr...disha paas pda ek pathhar uthti hai or kutte ko marti hai.....
Kutta bhag jata hai...lekin wo ldki ke chahre or hath pr panje se jakhm ho gye he..

Actually ye ldki koi or nhi...apni vaishali thi...

Disha-hey...kon ho tum...tum....thik ho na...
Disha apni cycle basket se pani ki bottle nikaalkr vaishali ko deti hai....

Vaishali ko sans chadh gya tha...
Vaishali paani piti hai...or disha ko thanks bolkr wo bolttle deti hai..

Disha-kyaa naam hai tumhara...
Vaishali -varsha...mera naam varsha hai
Disha-tum bahut bahadur ho...prr tumhe maine aaj phli baar dekha hai...mai roj aati hu yha...

Vaishali-mai...mai yha ki nhi hu...mai Shimla se hu.....hostel me rhkr pdhai kr rhi thi...but...
Disha-butt kya....

Vaishali-meri family mansa devi ke darshan k lie jaa rhi thi...upr se pahad slip ho gya or....
Disha-ohhh so soryyy..

Vaishali-ye ghtna 2saal pahle hui thi...uske bad mai job krne lgi orr akeli rahti hu...
Yha bhi job ke lie aayi thi..prr reject ho gyi...orr mere pese bhi khtm ho gye..2din se khana bhi n mila mujhe...mobile chori ho gya....

Vaishali rone jaisa muh bnaa leti hai...

Disha ko bhut dyaa aati hai..
Disha-dekho varsha...mera ghr yhi hai...aao tum khana khaao pahle...
Vashali-nahi mai...its okk...

Disha-aree aao bhi...dekho kpde bhi itne gnd ho gye hai tumhare...aao kuch kpde le lena...fr chle jana...mai tumhe shimla ki train me bitha dugi...

Vaishali-okk...
Disha vaishali ke sath chl deti hai...
Malti-are preity....dudh fat gya...ye apshakun hota hai...
Preity-are nhi mummy..aisa nhi hota achha sochiye achha hoga...
Or kuch hi der me dor bell bajti hai..

Preity gate kholti hai..

Disha ke kpdo ko ganda dekh..
Preity-are disha kya hua...tum kahi gri gyi thi kya....
Disha-nahi bhabhi...dekho...mere sath koi aaya hai...disha vaishali ko bulaati hai...vaishaali aati hai...
Or preity ko dekhkr hath jodkr namaste krti hai....

Preity-namaste...
Or isharo se disha se puchti hai kon hai...
Disha-muje kuttaa kaat rha tha..ye bich me aagyi...dekho...kitni jakhmi hai...
Preity-aao aandr aao...betho..
Vaishali sofe pr beth jati hai...

Disha preity ko lekar andr chli jaati hai...
Disha usko sb btati hai...
Preiry-hmmm so sad...koi baat n khana khilao...achhe kpde or kuch pese dekar bhejna use...

Tbhi vijay or maalti aajate hai....
Disha unhe sb btati hai....
Phle vijau bahar aata hai...samne dekhta hai. ..vaishali bethi thi ...gande se pkdo me...bhut din se nhaayi bhi nahi thi.....baal uljhe hue...lekin bholi si surat...
Vijay-hello...

Vaishali vijay ki trf dekhti hai-hello sir...
Vijay-mai disha ka bhai hu...tum araam se khana khakr or araam krke jaana okk..
Vaishali-ji thik hai...
Maalti bhi aakr vaishali se milti hai..
Malti-beti tum presan mt hov ...jitne pese ki jrurt ho bolna...okk or pet bhrkr khana khaana...
Vaishali bhi smile kr deti hai...


Next update will be soon....

are par, lekin vaishali kaise kaatil ho sakti hai.. woh toh us waqt bachhi thi aur uske joh lakshan hai woh haalhi mein 2-3 saal se suru huyi gharwalo kate Kate dur rahna.. phir kaise?

kya yaar itni achhi story character ko villain na banao ankita mam..
lo ab toh yeh Delhi bhi pahunch gayi.. ab is pariwar ke sath kya karegi ye vaishali..?
kahani mein kaafi thrill aur suspense hai par vaishali apni hi didi ki hatyaran hai iski ummid na thi..
waise dudh ka dhula toh woh ravi bhi nahi hai uske wajah se ek masoom is duniya mein na rahi
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

 

[Naina]

Update 8

Delhi...

{Friends...delhi ke lie mai vaishali ko VARSHA hi likhugi....cnfues mt hona...}


Disha-varhsa....khana ready hai...tum phle nahana chahogi ya khaakr nhaogi...
Mujhe bahut bhuuk lgi hai...mai pahle khana khaugi...
Disha-okk thik hai...tum hath dho lo okk...mai khana ready krti hu...

Varsha apna bag uthaarti hai or bathruum me jakr hath muh dhoti hai....use apne kapde bahut gande lg rhe the ...pr kya krti...
btaane ko to usne 2din btaya tha pr asal me wo 5din se bhuki thi....

10din se wo ghar se bahar thi...lekin 5din me uske acount ke sare pese khtm ho gye the...uske bad se usne kuch n khaya tha...jisse use kamjor bhi bahut masus ho rhi thi....

Varsha aakr sofe pr beth jaati hai...disha uske lie table pr khana lgaaati hai...
Tbhi preity aati hai..

Preity-are...disha kapde nhi diye chang krke ko...
Disha-bhabhi wo 2 din se bhuki hai...
Preity-haa thik hai ...pahle khana khao...
Varsha khana khaane lgti hai...
Phle tukda muh me jaate hi varsha ko jaise chain si pdti hai......

Varsha thoda jaldi jaldi khaaati hai...
Disha-araam se khao...yha se bhi pack krakr le jaana khana ...or kuch pese le jaana...koi tensn nhi hogi okk....

Karib 15min me varsha khaana khaa chuki thi..
Disha-kya hua...or khao na..
Varsha-bas...ho gya...or varsha bartan uthakar chal deti hai....

Disha-are ye sb mai kr lugi...
Varsha -nahi koi baat nhi mai kichen me rakh dugi...

Disha-nahi...ab tum nahakr kpde chnage krlo.....
Disha varsha ko tannu ki koi tshirt or lower deti hai.....
Varsha bathroom se karib 15min me nahakr nikalti hai...

Varsha bahr aakar soffe pr beth jaati hai...
Disha thodi der bad kichen se aati hai..
Disha-are wahh...tum to bahot cute ho...ab nahakr dikhi ho achhe se...tumhare chehre pr thoda kharoch hai...antiseptic lgalo ok..
Varsha muskura deti hai...


Thodi der me preity or disha uske pas aakr beth jaate hai..
Disha-varsha ye meri bhabhi hai...wo mere bhaiya the...or jo phle aapse mili wo mummy hai...papa kisi kaam se bahr gye hue hai...or ek chhoti bahan hai...jo tumhare jaisi hai..wo coaching gyi hai...
Varsha-aap sab log bahut achhe ho...thnks...

Disha-are isme thanks kaisa....tumne kitni bahaduri se us kutte ki pitai ki...hehehe...
Varsha-aapne bhga diya...mai to uska KHUN karne wali thi...
Preity or disha uski is baat pr hsne lgte hai...

Prr unhe kya pta...wo schme us kutto ko maar daalti...
Varsha pure ghr ko dekhte hue....
Wese apka ghr bahut achha hai...
Preity-thank u...aap bhi bahut achhi ho...
Varsha-kyaa sachme...
Preity hairani se-haa...prr tum aisa ku boli...

Varsha-bhut din baad kisi ke muh se ye suna maine...wrna to sb buri bolte hai...
Preity-nahi babu...tum bahut pyari or achhi ho...
Ye sunkar varsha ki ankho me aansu ajate hai.....

Disha-hey...kya hua...tum ro ku rahi ho...
Varsha ansu ponchte hue-wo...inhone babu kaha to....pta nahi kuu rona aagya mujhe......


Preity ko uspr bhut dyaa ati hai...uske maasum chehre ko usse dekha nhi jaata...
Preity use ekdm khud ke seene se lga leti hai...or uske baalo ko sahlaati hai....
Preity-rov mt...tum bahut bahadur ho na...ese rote nhi...

Varsha orr uske seene se lagkr or jor se rone lgti hai...or preity ko hug kr leti hai...
Jise dekhkr disha or preity ki ankho me bhi aansu ajate hai....

Preity-aareee...varshaa...bchho ki tarah ro rhi ho tum to...aise nhi rote kbhi...chup ho jao...ekmdm chup....orr preity varsha ke ansu ponchhti hai...

Itne me hi gate pr tannu aajati hai...
Tannu sbko ese emotion dekhkti to sochti h kya hua...tbhi use varsha dikhai deti hai...

Tannu-didi...
Disha tannu ko dekhkr apne aansu ponchti hai...
Disha-aagyi tu..
Disha-varsha ye meri chhoti bahan hai...tannu..
Tannu-hii...
Varsha apne ansu puchnte hue-hello...
Tannu-kyaa hua...aap sb...ese..

Preity tannu ko sb btati hai...
Tannu-tum fikr mt kro...ise apna hi ghr smjho jbtk rahna hai rah skrti ho...or mere kapde pahan sakti ho...

Sbhi tannu ki baat pr hasne lgte hai...bss...varsha ko chhodkr...hasna wo jaise bhul hi gyi thi..

Preity-wese tum...hasti hui achhi dikhogi..

Varsha soffe se uthti hui-kyaa kru...meri khushi to..mere family ke sath hi chli gyi...ab kyuu...or kaise hasu....mujhe nahi aata hasna...

Tannu-koi baat nahi...mai sikha dugi.....
Varsha-kya mai 2ghnte k lie so skti hu yha...bahot nind aarhi hai...
Disha-haa kyu nhi...araam kro tum...
Tannu-aao mere room me so jana...
Tannu varsha ko apne kamre me lekar jaati hai...

Tannu-kya ham frdn bn skte hai...tum mujhe phon no deke jana mai tumhe call kiya krugi...
Varsha-mera mobile chori ho gya hai...
Tannu-koi baaat nhi...tum mera no lekr jaana...mujhe call krna.

Tannu-ye rha bed...araam se so jao...
Varsha bed pr let jaati hai...or 2min ke andr use nind aajati hai...
Tannu baahr aati hai...
Disha-kyaa hua...dikha diya kmra...
Tannu-are wo to so bhi gyi...lgta hai bahut thki hui thi...


Mumbai
Yha rajiv ko beti ka ek trf gam sta rha tha...uske dimak ne jaise kaam krna band hi kar diya tha...agle din uska dimak thoda kaam krta hai to wo vaishali ke room ko chek krne ki sochta hai...jaise hi vaishali ke room ki taraf jaata hai ki Arun raste bich me mil jaata hai...


Arun-kaha jaa rhe ho papa...
Rajveer-vaishali ke kamre me...
Arun-mat jao...
Rajveer-kyuu...

Arun-kal uska call aaya tha raat me...boli ki...agr mere kamre me jaane ki kisi ne kosis ki to ...wo muje maar degi...bol rhi thi..ki papa hmesha ghr me rahte nhi hai...kbhi bhi ghr me aakr mujhe maar degi...

"Arun itna dra hua hai...kmre ko iske jaane ke baad dekhta hu .."rajveer apne mn me sochta hai...
Rajveer-tum dro mt...wese bhi uske kamre ki talashi lene se kuch hone wala nhi hai ..
Itna bolkr rajveer wha se chla jata hai...

Rajveer- hello desai...tum 1bje ghar pr aana...
Desai-kyuu sir...
Rajveer-vaishali ke kamre ki taalashi leni hai...or hand gloves lenkr aana..
Desai-thik hai sir...
Or desai aun ke jaane ka wait krne lgta hai...
Arun 10bje college ke lie nikal jaata hai...

Sahi 1bje desai aata hai...
Desai-hello sir..
Rajveer-haa desai aao...hand gloves-
Desai- ye rhe sir...
Uma ye sb dekh rhi thi prr bol kuch nhi rhi thi....


Rajveer-desai yaad rkho...hm ye sb unofficially kr rhe hai...kisi ko is case ke bare me pta nhi lgna chahiye...
Desai-fikar mt kijiye sir...
Rajveer ek fake key se vaishali ke room ko unlock krta hai....

Rajveer or desai andar ka najara dekhkr hairaan rah jaate hai..
Hr diwar pr bdi bdi chaadar ltki hui thi...lg nhi rha tha,ki ghar pathhr ya eeto se bna hai...esa lg rha tha jaise ye ghr sirf kapdo ka bna hai...

Rajveer-dekha desai..
Desai-sir vaishali ne kitne raaz chhipaye hai...
Rajveer-sb pta lg jayega...chlo in chadar ko htao...
Desai bad pr chadhkr jaise hi ek chaadar htaata hai...

"Aare baap re..."desai jor se chillata hua ..piche ki taraf bed pr gir jata hai...
Rajveer ki ankhe bdi ho jaati hai...samne ka najara dekhkr...
Samne ek...KANKAAL latka hua tha...
Rajveer-itna bhi mt dro desai...ye vaishali ka kmra hai...yha bahut si ajib chije milegi..

Rajveer-utaro is kankaal ko...
Desai thoda sankoch krta hua-sir...
Rajveer-mujhe pta hai desai...ye sb kaam constable ya hawaldae se kraaye jate hai prr...mai mjbur hu...tumhare alawa kisi prr viswas n kr skta..
Desai-wo baat nhi hai sir...muje bs dr sa lg rha hai...


Rajveer-utaro...
Desai drta drta us kankaal ko utaarta hai...
Rakho ise niche...

Desai-sir...ye kisi insan ko maara hoga vaishali ne..
Rajveer-ho skta hai....
RAJEEV DHYAN SE JB KANKAAL KO DEKHTA HAI...TO USE KUCH SAMJH ME ATA HAI....or rajveer muskura pdta hai...
Desai-sir....iska kya kru ab...

Rajveer-kuch nhi or chadar hatao...
Desai - dusri chadar htaata hai...to wha kuch cartoons bne hue the...

Desai-ye cartoon bhi dekhti thi kya...
Is trh desai charo chadar htata hai...is trh ek ke niche kankaal,ek ke piche cartoon ek ke niche vaishali ke signature to sbse last me family photo hoti hai...jisme vaishali ne nisha ki phoro ke upr red colour se cross kiya hua tha...

Desai-sir....nisha ko cross....iska mtlb...vaishali ne hi nisha ko maara hai...
Rajveer-haaa desai...vaishali ne hi nisha ko maara hai.

Tb wo dono pure kmre ki talashi lete hai...
Bed ki chadar ke niche rajveer ko ek diary milti hai...jisme ...kuch khas nhi bs kuch notes the...or uski best frnd NEETU ka naam tha..
Udhar desai ko bhi esi esi chije milti hai...jisse case me koi khas help nhi milne wali thi...

Rajveer drawer kholta hai...
Jaise hi drawer kholta hai..
OHH SHITTTTTT"
ohh apni ankhe band kr leta hai..
Desai ki to halat tight ho gyi thi..
Desai-kyaa hua sir...kyaa milaa..
Rajveer drta drta apni ankho se haat htaata hai...orr ye kya...ye bs ek doll ki KTI HUI GRDN thi...jise rajveer ne achank dekhne ki vajah se ek bchhe ki grdn smjh liya tha...

Dobara dekhne pr rajveer ko smjh aata hai to wo chain ki sans leta hai...
Desai-sir. ...ye doll hai...
Rajveer-hai...muje lga...anyway....fr dekho...
Tbhi rajveer ke pas ek call aata hai...
Rajveer-haa bolo
"Sir...forensic me paya gya hai...ki wo haddi ek kutte ki haddi thi..."
Rajveer-okay...thank u..


Rajveer-desai....jis haddi se vaishali ravi ko ghayal kar rhi thi wo ek kutte ki haddi thi...
Desai-mujhe lga tha...
Rajveer-wo dekho...bed ke niche kuch hai...
Desai bed ke niche dekhta hai...to use vaishali ke ek jeans dikhayi deti hai...jeans me kuch tha...
Desaj jeans ko nikaalta hai..
Desai-sir isme kuch hai...
Rajveer-kholo ise...
Desai-nahi sir...ye kuch gol hai...isme bom ho sakta hai..

Desai drta drta sa bolta hai...
Rajveer-to ise hath me ku pkda hai...araam se yha is table pr rkho...
Desai table pr rakh deta hai
Orr dhire se us jeans ke andr lipte kisi gol chij ko bahar nikalta hai....
Tbhu jeans se niklti kuch chij ekdm jmeen pr girti hai...


Jiski awaaj se desai ekdm dr jata hai...
Drasal wo ek ball thi....cricket ball..
Rajveer-cricket ball....vaishali ko ye cricket ball ka kya kaam pd gya..
..rajveee dhyan se dekhtan hai..
Rajveer-desai...jara blade laana...
Desai andr se dhundkar blade laata hai...
Rajveer ball ki silaai ko kaatne lgta hai...
Silai katne ke baad ball 2hisso me alag ho jaati hai...
Orr andar milta hai ek kaagaj..
Desai-ye kya hai..
Rajveer-dekhte hai...


Rajveer us kaagaj ko kholta hai ...usme ek no likha hota hai...
Rajveer-9811003700...
Desai-sir iske piche bhi likha hai kuch...
Rajveer use palat kr dekhta hai.
Rajveer- 2 WAR SE GRDN KAATUGI OR DONO TANGE KAATUGI...

Desai-sir...ye mat kahna ki mai dr rha hu prrr jo schhai hai wo kah rha hu...agr mai jaada aapke sath rha to pagal ho jauga...is case ne mere dimak ki nse faad di hai...kya hai ye sir...grdn kaategi...kankaal...doll ki gardn kti hui....sir...meri mot pkka heart atteck se hogi....

Rajveer -ye mobile noumber pta kro kiska hai...jiska bhi hai...uski jaan ko khtra hai...use boldo call krke

Desai no dial krta pr...not exist...
Desai-sir...not is service...
Rajveer-kisi ki jaan ko to khtra hai desai...kon hai uska shikaar...
Rajveer us kaagaj ko apni jeb me rakh leta hai...

Rajveer or desai pure kamre ko achhe se chek krte hai...unhe kuch khas nhi milta...lekin jo khas sa lga uspr dhyaan dete hai...or bad me us saman ko jaisa tha wesa rakh dete hai...taaki koi dekhe to shak n ho ki kmre me cheking hui h..

Rajveer-dekho uma...ye baat kisi se jikr mt krna ki kmra khula tha...khaskr Arun se to bilkul nhi...
Uma-thik hai....
Rajveer uski frdns neetu se bhi milta hai...par wha se nhi kuch khas pta n lga paata...neetu yhi bolti hai ki uski utni jaada bhi usse baat n hoti...lgbhag 3 saal se wo uski frnd hai pr mahine me ek balar hi baat ho paati hai.




Is trh rajveer ke din katne lgte hai...rajveer us noumber ki guthi ko har trh se suljhane ki kosis krta hai...prrr nakaam rahta hai....najane kitni baar usne us no ko google pr daala...pr aajib ajib responce aaya...usne us no ko mobile no smjhkr us comlny ke operator se bhi baat ki...pr pta lga ki is no ka simcard abbi tk nikla hi nahi hai...


Fir kya ho skta hai ye...kuch to maajra hai...
Aakhir vaishali kya krne wali hai...ya kya krna chahti thi...isi trh presan hote hue...tension me...10din gujaar jaate hai...

In 10dino me rajveer din me ek police wale ki trh tahkikaat krta tha...lekin raat me ek baap ki trh apni beti ko yad krke tadpta tha...ki akhir kaha hogi wo...khana khaya hoga ya nhi...kisi musibt me to nhi fas gyi...raat me kaise soti hogi ..vgera vgera. ..

Police or baap...rajveer ek sath ye dohri jindgi nhi jee pa rha tha..ahayd isliye wo kafi mansik tannaav se gujar rha tha jisse uska kaam bhi prabhavit ho rha tha..
Is bich wo rajni ke bare me bhi pta krta hai..





10din baaad...
Rajveer job pr jaata hai...chhote mote kaaam krne ke bad ...
Desai-sir abhi kaise hai aap...
Rajveer-achha hu desai...

Desai-apki haalat smjh skta hu sir....
Rajveer-nahi ab mai thik hu...
Desai-sir...vaishali ka kuch pta lga...
Rajveer-nahi.....

Desai-or sir us...rajni ka case..
Rajveeer chehre pr smile lata hua.....
Rajveer-desai...usne hm sbko bekwkuf bnaya tha.....rajni thik hai..
Desai-kyaaaa....rajni thik hai...wo nhi mri...
Rajveer-nahi wo ekdm thik hai...
Desai-vaishali kitni tej hai sir...

Rajveer-maine khud rajni se baat ki...uksa ravi ke sath chkkr to tha...or wo pregnent bhi ho gyi thi...bad me obortion kraana pda use...bs yhi tk vaishali ki baat sch thi...kuki...samne ravi tha..jo ravi janta tha usne bs wo baat sch boli...baki...ravi khud nhi jaanta tha ki rajni jinda hai ya mr gyi...

Desai-hmm...usne hme bewkuf bnaya...
Rajveer-taaki hm uski baato me aakr thode bhavuk ho jaye.......bss yhi sb use chahiye tha...

Desai-or nisha...
Rajveer nisha ko usi ne maara hai...ye to kabool kr hi chuki hai wo....tum bhi jante ho....prr kyuu mara..ye nhi btaya...wo chahti to bta skti thi...lekin...kyuu nhi btaya usne...aakhir kya vajah ho sakti ki usne apni bahan ko maar diya...

Desai-metally disorder sir...or kya...uske kmre se kitni drawni or ajib chije mili thi...ye wb lakshan metaly disorder ke hai..

Rajveer-mentally disorder wo ab hai..
5saal pahle wo normal thi...."nisha ke murderer ko dhundna mushkil ho rha tha...or ab wo mila...to ye usse bhi bda case ye bn gya.....
Desai-iss bich apko phon krna chahta tha..prr apk aaram kre yhi sockr apko distrb n kia...sir ek baat btaiye...aapko kaise pta tha ki vaishali us ghr me hai..

Rajveer-wo hmara hi ghar hai...jb car key lene ki mai bdha to...car key ke niche hmare us ghar ki key hoti...jo us samay nhi thi..
Rajeev thoda sans lete hue


Rajveer-jo baat sabse jaada paresaan kr rhi hai mujhe...wo ye hai...ISE CAR YA BIKE CHLANA KAISE AAYA.....orr wo noumber...uska kuch nhi pta lag paa rha hai...



Delhi

Karrib 4ghnate baad varsha ki ankhe khulti hai...wo hadbdaker uthti hai...or bahar bhaagkr aati hai...

Bahr preity bethi hui tv dekh rhi thi...
Preity-are uth gyi tum...
Varsha-soryyy....ankh nhi kholi...
Preity-koi baat nhi...nind to puri ho gyi na...ab lunck krlo...kuki tumhari vajah se kisi ne bhi khana n khaya...sb bol rhe the ki varsha ke sath khayege...


Varsha bathroom jaakr thoda fresh hoti hai...orr aakar beth jaati hai..
Finally sbke sath khaana khaaati hai...or sbhi bethke baate krne lgte hai...

Varsha kuch sochkr-kyaa mai aapse ek baat bol skti hu
Preity-bolo na...
Varhsha-wo...kya mai yha...2din or ruk sakti hu...
Preity disha ko dekhne lgti hai or disha preity ko...



Varsha-bahot kmjori feel ho rhi hai...ab yha se shimla jaugi puri din lgega...orr...muje dr hai ki kahi firse tbiyt khrab n ho jaaye....

Preity-dekho varsha...bura mt manna prr ye to hm ladies decide nhi kr skti...hme puchna pdega...wese hme khushi hi hogi...prr u know...
Varsha-ji thik hai...


Thodi der baat krne ke baad disha thoda side me aakr vijay ko call krti hai...
Disha-bhaiya wo ldki thi na...wo...2din or rukne k lie bol rhi hai...bol rhi hai bahut thki hui hai...uski tbiyt khrab ho jaegi jada safar kiya to...

Vijay-hm usko jaante bhi nhi h disha...ese kaise...achha ek kaam kro uska adhar card dekhaa...
Disha-uska purse chori ho gya....
Vijay-okkk...roklo...
Disha bahar jaati hai or preity ki trf ishara krti hai. .

Preity-varsha...tum 2din araam kro okk..baat ho gyi h...
Varsha-thnkss aab sblog bhut achhe ho..
Krjb 1ghnte bad...

"Do din to yha ruk gyi hu mai...lekin...wo ravi...wo to mujhe bhul gya hoga na...hmm...aise nhi bhulne dugi...."vaishali apne mn me sochti hai...

Or paas rakhi ek diary ke ek page pr kuch likhti hai...
Orr..
Varsha-tannu....mujhe ek latter send krna hai....wo...meri frdn ko job k lie...mobile nhi hai to nomber bhi nhi h...to...

Tannuu-tum latter or addrs likhkr mujhe do..mai send kr dugi sham me...
Varsha-sham..me...mai bhi chlu...vahi se kr dege...

Tannu-haa ye bhi thik hai.....
Sham latee post krke ate time..
Tannu-ek baat puchu...
Vaishali-haa pucho...
Tannu-tum single ho ya fir....
Varsha-ha mai single hu...
Tannu-kyu...itni sunder ho fr bhi single ho..

Varsha-mai kaha sundar huu..
Tannu-are ho to...or sunder kise kahte hai...

Varsha-tum bhi single ho...
Tannu-haa...ek ldka mujhe pasand tha...pre wo kisi ko like krne lga...orr mujhe to college me kai ldke like krte hai wese...prr apni bhi to koi choice honi chahiye na...

Varsha-tumhe nahi lgta ye sb boaring baate hai...
Tannu-to fir intresting konsi hoti hai...
Varsha-maar dhaad...bhaagna...kuudna...khuun krna...kisi ko kidnap krna...orr
Tannu-orrr?
Varsha ek kaatil muskan ke sath-kisi ki BLI chadhaana....

Tannu-ohhh to tumhe movies pasand hai...
Varsha kuch nhi bolti ...
Tannu-waise mujhe bhi movies pasand hai...lekin...sirf love stories...
Tannu-wese tum kis class me ho..
Varhsa-b.sc first year....with physics...orr tum?

Tannu-same but mera commarce hai...
Varhsa kuch nhi bolti...
Tannu-tum bahht shant rahti ho...itna sidha or shariif bankr nahi rhna chahiye....dunia faeda utha leti hai...
Varsha-hmmm..koshish krugi...

Tannu-tum icecream khaogi...
Varsha-nahi...tum khalo...
Tannu-to fr...family pack leleti hu...raat me sb khayege...
Taannu ice cream ka family pack leleti hai...
Tabhi varhsa ko wo pilla dikhai deta bai...jo subah disha ki cycle se takra gya tha...

Varhsa-ye wohi kutta hai...jo subah cycle se tkraya tha....
Tannu-isko jaada lgi hogi shayd islie ye yha se chl nhi paaya...isko ghar le chle...
Varsha-jaisa tumhe acha lge...

Tannu-ye lo...tum icecream pkdo...
Or tannu us doggy ko utha leti hai...
Tannu-ye kitna swt hai na...
Varsha-haa achha hai...
Or dono baate krte hue chl dete hai..

"Uffff...kash bnane waale ne mujhe kutta bnaya hota......"
Wawahh waawah ...
"Arz kiya hai...kash bnane wale ne mujhe kutta bnaya hota ,usne seene se lgaya hota,uski banho me soya hota hai..."
Wahh ustaad kya baat hai...


Gali me khade 3 awaara ldke tannu ko chhed rhe the...
Varsha dekhti hai tannu kuch nhi bolti...
Varsha-kash bnane wale ne ise kutta bnaya hota...
Varsha tannu ko ishara krti hai..

Tannu drti drti si-wahwah wah wah...
"Kash bnane wale ne ise kutta bnaya hota...iske pichwade me petrol daalkr puri sadak pr ghumaya hota..."

Tannu dr rhi thi lekin varsha ki shayri sunkr use bht tej hsi chhoot jaati hai...
Pahla ladka-kon hai ye...
Tannu-meri bahan hai...tumhe koi matlab...
Pahla-smjha de ise...ldki hai...ldki bankr rahakre...
Tannu chup ho jaati hai...
Varsha -tuu...
Tannu bichme bol padti hai...
"Chlo varsha...inke muh mt lgo..."

Ldka- haye...hm to chahte koi hmaare muh lge...hahahaha...
Sbhi ladke hasne lgte hai..
Tannu vaishali ko chalne ko kahti hai
Varsha-ek baat bolu...
Tannu-haa...

Varsha-itna sharif or sidha bnkr nhi rahna chahiye...dunia faeda utha leti hai...
Tannu chup ho jaati hai..
Varsha-tumhare bhaiya to achhe bodybuilder typ hai...fir bhi inse drte hai...


Tannu-aisa nahi hai....bhaiya ko bs btate nhi hm log...ye bigde hue log hai....sunne me aaya hai ki inhone rape or murder bhi kia hua hai...kisi ldki ka..
Rape or murder sunte hi varsha ki ankho me chamak aajati hai...

Varshsa-kyaa schme.....
Tannu varsha ko dekhti hui-haa prr tumhe kya hua achank...
Varsha apni galti ko smjhte hue-nahi bss..ese hi...
Tannu-hmm...bas isliey hm inke muh nahi lgna chahte...wrna chahe to bhaiya ko bolkr in sbko pitwa du...
Varsha-okk


Or tabhi ye dono ghar aajate hai...
Ghar par vijay or Rajesh aachuke the..
Rajesh -hello varsha...
Varsha rajesh ko dekhti hai...
Tannu-papa hai mere ..
Varsha-hello uncle...

Rajesh-tum yha araam se raho...presaan mt hona...kisi bhi chij ki jrurt ho to...hm me se kisi ko bhi bolna...
Varsha-jii...jrur...



Tannu us chhote pille ko biscuiit khilaa rhi rhi...or sbhi bethe hue use dekh rhe the..
Ye kitna cute hai na...iska kich naam rkhte hai...kya nam rakhu...

Tannu-varsha tum btao iska kya naam rakhe..
Varsha-chaaku...
Tannu-haaa...chaaku...ohh cheeku...haa cheeku achha hai....hey swetuu cheeku....
Disha-wow... very nice name...
Tannu-hmmm ab hmara cheeku yhi rhega hmesha hmare sath......

Tannu thoda dur jaakr-heyy cheeku....idhar aao..
Cheeku nhi sunta bs chupchap khaata rahta hai...
Tannu-cheeku...comon baby...
Tannu-ufff ye to sunta hi nhi hai...

Tbhi varsha khadi hoti hai..
Varhsa thoda dur jaati hai...
Varsha-chaaku....yha aao
Pilla bhagkr varsha ke paas pahuch jaata hai...
Tannu soch me pd jaati hai...disha bhi varsha ko dekhkr muskuraane lgti hai..

Tannu is bar-hey chaaku...come here..
Kutta bhaagkr tannu ke paas aajata hai...
Tannu kutta ko uthati hai

Tannu- to tujhe chaaku naam pasand aaya...cheeku nhi..prr chaaku kuch ajib nhi hai....
Tannu-okkk ham to tujhe cheeku bulayege or varsha tujhe chaaku okkk..
Or kutte ko chum leti hai.....



Next update will be soon...

as a reader badi uljhan mein hoon.. ek taraf daya ya taras aaye vaishali pe aur dusri taraf yeh bhi lage ki ushe uski kiye ki saza mile woh bhi kanoonan..
well uske room se joh chijen mile woh kaafi hairan karne wali baat hai aur khaskar woh kankal.. par rajveer kankal ko dekh kya samajh gaya tha
Oh toh rajni mari nah balki jinda hai..
par ravi ko maarna kyun chaahti thi.. wajah kya hai.. kya propose karne ki wajah se..
Ab rajveer bhi dukhi hai.. akhir beti hai uski..
aur idhar tannu ke ghar vaishali, versha naam se dera jama li hai.. pata nahi aage ab kya hoga par itna toh hai ki vaishali sabke liye hanikarak hi hai.. jaise un gundo ke liye hogi joh tannu ko ched rahe the.. ya phir ravi ke liye kyunki woh uska shikar hai...
par sawaal ab bhi yahi hai ki akhir ushne apni hi didi ki hatya kyun ki... . aur woh phone number kiska hai..
kahani kaafi interesting hoti ja rahin hai
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

 

[kamdev99008]

Prefix thriller ka rakh leti aap koi nahi bolta for incest likhne ko

Jaise maine apni story me incest ka part sabse jyada hote huye bhi... Prefix... Romance ka rakha....
Kyonki mein mainly sex ko nahi... Pyar ko samne rakhkar likh raha hu.... Jabki readers ko usme suspense thrill jyada lagta hai
Anyway..... Kahani itni jabardast hai ki ise sex ke sahare ki jarurat hi nahi

 

[AK 25]

Jaise maine apni story me incest ka part sabse jyada hote huye bhi... Prefix... Romance ka rakha....
Kyonki mein mainly sex ko nahi... Pyar ko samne rakhkar likh raha hu.... Jabki readers ko usme suspense thrill jyada lagta hai
Anyway..... Kahani itni jabardast hai ki ise sex ke sahare ki jarurat hi nahi

Wohi main kehna chahta hu ki khani thriller hai to incest ke prefix ki jaroorat hi nahi

To kaahe jabardasti incest ka prefix laga ke logo se pucha jaaye ki incest daale ya nahi
Ab prefix incest ka lagaoge to readers to sex ki demand karenge hi


I think inhe PREFIX thriller rakh lena chahiye aur story ko isi flow mein aur aise hi aage badhana chahiye

 

[AK 25]

Ohh abbi aap purane updates pdh rhe ho...achha hai apko uldte ka intjar krne mi jrurt hi nhi....wese likhna to muje incest tha...pr thoda bht story me chang kia to thriller jaada achhi bn gyi...

Nahi main kayi din tak to ye story isliye nahi kholi kyuki mujhe laga ki ye ek sex story hai lekin fir parso mere dost ne bataya ki achi thriller story hai ye padh ke dekh to maine kal hi saare update padhe they, aur mujhe story ek dum badhiya lagi bas prefix thriller hota to maja hi aa jaata
Ek dum sahi flow mein story jaa rahi hai, halanki kayi jagah kuch loop holes hai lekin unko baad mein dekhenge
Keep writing
Aur main to yahi kahunga ki story ka prefix change karo aur bina incest chalne do isey nahi to bewajah sex scene skip karne padenge

 

[AK 25]

Aur naina ka cheerharan to pehle se hi chaalu hai yahai

 

[Ankitarani]

Nahi main kayi din tak to ye story isliye nahi kholi kyuki mujhe laga ki ye ek sex story hai lekin fir parso mere dost ne bataya ki achi thriller story hai ye padh ke dekh to maine kal hi saare update padhe they, aur mujhe story ek dum badhiya lagi bas prefix thriller hota to maja hi aa jaata
Ek dum sahi flow mein story jaa rahi hai, halanki kayi jagah kuch loop holes hai lekin unko baad mein dekhenge
Keep writing
Aur main to yahi kahunga ki story ka prefix change karo aur bina incest chalne do isey nahi to bewajah sex scene skip karne padenge

Are yee ye prefix change n kia hai...ye muje incest hi likhna tha....but thoda suspanse ke sath lekin bad me story ke sath sath kuch nye nye ideas aate gye...to yeb thrillelr hi bn gyi...islie mene ploll bnaaya poll me aap dekh skte ho mene saaf likha bai ki uncest k bina ye story jada achhi rhegi...pr vote jaada incest ke favour me h...prr m kosis krugi ki story ese hi achhi bni rhegi isse story prr koi frk n pdega...glti wese mujse hi hui hai...prr kyaa kru story phle se likhi hui thi ...lekin nye ideas ki vjh se cnfusn hua...iske lie mai sbhi reader se maafi chahti hu...prr incest hone k baad bhi kahani intresring bni rhgei esi m koshish krugii

 

[Naina]

Wohi main kehna chahta hu ki khani thriller hai to incest ke prefix ki jaroorat hi nahi

To kaahe jabardasti incest ka prefix laga ke logo se pucha jaaye ki incest daale ya nahi
Ab prefix incest ka lagaoge to readers to sex ki demand karenge hi


I think inhe PREFIX thriller rakh lena chahiye aur story ko isi flow mein aur aise hi aage badhana chahiye

kahani abhi build up ho rahi hai..
writer hoke itna na samjha ju