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Update accha tha,magar chota tha. Aap replies 2 pages mein dete hai aur update 1 page mein. Kahani bhout Bariya hai to update bhi barhe aur regular aane chaiye. Nice work.
 

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Shayad kiran ke karan nisha ya soumya se koi akki ki heroin babe ya phir arti, sakshi, kanak, aur sunana se story lnstant hai to 2 heroin to honi chahiye 1 family wali aur 1 baharwali
Alko kya lagta hai wo kiran ho sakti?
 

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Update............ ?
Me gaadi me Beth gaya aur komolika aunty ke yaha par nikal gaya.
Ab aage............
Me kanak,shreya,madhvi aur Supriya ko ajay ke saath gaadi me ghar par le jaaney ke liye bola aur me apni gaadi me Beth kar ke komolika aunty ke yaha par nikal gaya.komolika aunty ke ghar par pohanchney ke liye mujhe 3 ghantey lag gaye aur phir me takriban 3 ghantey baad me komolika aunty ke bunglow ke pass pohoch gaya.phir me watchman se kaha to usne mujhe andar jaaney ke liye keh diya aur phir me gate ke andar aa gaya aur phir apni gaadi se utra aur phir me ne dekha ke teen log mere swagat ke liye khadey they.ek aadmi aur 2 aurtey thi.phir me door ke pass gaya.me ne usme se ek aurat ko pehchana jo komilika aunty thi q ke mujhe dad ne unki photo batayee thi.phir me door ke pass gaya to us aadmi ne kaha.
aadmi..............welcome akki,kaisey ho tum.aur safar kaisa raha tumhara.
akki.................accha tha.lekin aap kon hai
aadmi...............mera naam Sourav hai aur me komolika ka bhai hu.aur ye meri biwi Sameera aur ye komolika hai.
akki...............k aap sab se mil kar khushi huyee.
sameera...............hum ko bhi bohot khushi huyee tum ko idhar dekh kar.ruko me tumhari aarti utarti hu phir tum ghar ke andar aa jaana.
Phir sameera ne meri aarti nikaali aur phir mujhe andar aaney ke liye kaha aur phir ghar ke andar aa gaya.phir me sofey par betha.itne me sameera ne mere liye paani laaya aur phir me ne paani piya.
sourav..............akki aaney me kuch taklif to nhi huyee na.
akki ................nhi uncle.
Idhar abhi tak me aur komolika aunty ne baat nhi ki thi.phone par baat karney aur face to face baat karney me bohot faasla hai.hum dono ko abhi tak jijhak mehsus ho rahi thi.
sameera............akki tum nhi jaantey tumharey yaha aaney se hum kitna khush hai.
akki...................k
sourav.............tum ek kaam karo akki tum fresh ho kar aa jao phir sab saath me beth kar lunch kartey hai.
akki.................k uncle
sourav...........sameera tum akki ko kamra bata do.
sameera...............ha,chalo akki
Phir me sameera ke saath chalney laga to sameera ne kaha.
sameera.............akki tumharey yaha aaney se sab se zyaada di khush hai.jab unko pata chala ke tum aaney waaley hai to unke khushi ka tikhana nhi tha.
akki................hmm
sameera................kya hua tum kuch tension me ho kya.
akki................nhi aunty
sameera.............akki tum mujhe mami keh saktey ho.komolika di ke bacchey bhi mujhe mami hi kehtey hai.aur tum mujh par bharosa kar saktey hai.aur tum ko jo tension ho mujhe bata saktey ho.
akki................thik hai me bhi aapko mami kahunga.lekin kuch tension ki baat nhi hai.
sameera.............k thik hai tum kehtey hai to me maan leti hu.
akki..............waisey komolika aunty ke bacchey dikhayee nhi diye.
sameera...............vo thora bahar gaye hai bas aatey hi hongey.tum jab tak fresh ho jao.
akki................k thik hai.
Phir mujhe sameera ne mujhe ek room diya.aur phir me fresh hua aur apney kapdey change kar ke me phir se sab ke pass aa gaya.
Sourav................aa jao akki bas 5 minute me lunch ready ho jayenga.
Akki..............k thik hai.
Phir lunch ready ho gYa to hum sab dining table par Beth gaye.
Sameera..............di Nikita aur saaniya kidhar hai wo abhi tak aayee nhi.
Komolika...............bas abhi aatey hi hongey.
Sameera................thik hai.akki tum khana start karo.tum travel kar ke aaye ho to tum ko bhook lagi hongi.
Akki................nhi me wait karta hu sab saath me khana khayenge.
Sourav..............komolika ek baar dekho phone kar ke dono ko.
Komolika...............k sourav
Abhi komolika phone hi laga rahi thi ke itne me 2 ladkiya ghar me enter huyee.ek ki umar 23 ki thi to doosri ki umar 19 ki thi.phir dono ghar me aayee to sameera ne kaha.
Sameera...............kidhar they tum dono.kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahey they.
Nikita..................mami hum log shopping par gaye they isliye late ho gaya.
Komolika.................accha to jaldi se fresh ho jao.aur lunch karney ke liye aao.akki kab se aaya hai aur usko bhook bhi lagi hongi wo tum log ke aaney ka intezaar kar raha tha.
Jaisey hi komolika ne mera naam liya dono ke chehrey par gussa aa gaya tha.
Nikita.................maa hum ne kaha tha ke hum ko iske saath iske ghar nhi jaana hai.me ne aapko boli thi na isko idhar bulana nhi to aap ne q idhar bulaya.in logo ki wajah se dad hum logo ke saath nhi reh paatey they.
Komolika.............Nikita tum kaisey baat kar rahi ho akki ke saath.akki ko abhi sorry bolo.
Nikita.................maa me sorry nhi bolney waali hu.in logo ki wajah se dad ne aap ke saath bhi zyaada time nhi bitaya.aur naa hi hamarey saath.hamara bachpan dad ki namojudgi me guzra hai.hum ko dad ka pyaar kabhi mil nhi paaya hai jitna in logo ko mila hai.
Saniya.................ha maa hum log sorry nhi bolengey aur naa hi hum is ke saath jayengey.
Aur phir dono itna kehtey huye apney room me chali gayee.idhar komolika,sameera aur sourav ko bohot gussa aa raha tha Nikita aur saniya par.
Sameera................akki tum in dono ko maaf kar dena.in logo ko maalum nhi kis se kaisey baat karnry ka.
Akki...................ok aunty
Komolika................nhi sameera in dono ne galti ki hai akki se badtamizee kar ke.in dono ko sorry to kehna hi padenga.
Akki..............rehney dijiye.galti ho gayee hongi.mujhe unki baato ka bura nhi laga hau.
Komolika..................nhi akki Nikita aur saaniya se galti huyee hai.wo to tumhari acchayee hai jo tum ko bura nhi laga hai.lekin mujhe to bura laga hai tum se badtamizee kar ke.
Itne me komolika dono ke pass gayee.uske pichey pichey sameera bhi gayee.phir komolika ne kaha
Komolika................Nikita aur saaniya tum dono ne akki se badtamizi se baat karey ho.akki ko aa kar sorry bolo.
Nikita...............maa hum sorry nhi kahengey.in logo ki wajah se dad hum se milney bhi nhi aatey they aur na hum ko time de paatey they.
Un logo ki awaaz mujhe bhi sunayee de rahi thi q ke Nikita ke room ke paas hi dining table tha.phir me Nikita ke room me gaya aur mere pichey sourav uncle bhi aaye.phir me ne kaha.
Akki.................aap dono ko bhi mujh se sorry kehney ki zarurat nhi hai.aap dono ne koi galti nhi ki hai.agar me aap dono ki jagah hota to me bhi yaha karta.mujhe malum hai dad ne aap sabhi ko time nhi diya tha.shayed unki koi majburi hongi.lekin Marney se pehle mujhe kaha tha akki me ne komolika aur apni betiyo ko time nhi de paaya hu.un dono ka bachpan bhi nhi dekh paaya hu.lekin mere Marney ke baad tu unka khyaal rakhna.unko apney parivaar me shaamil karna.aur unka khyaal rakhna.aur ye dad ki aakhri iccha thi.
Komolika.................akki is me tumharey dad ki galti nhi thi balkey meri thi.jab hum dono ki shaadi honey waali thi tabhi hi unho ne mujhe bataya tha ke meri ek biwi aur 2 bacchey hai.me unse bohot pyaar karta hu aur unko chod nhi sakta hu.aur tum se shaadi honey ke baad me tum ko time nhi de sakta hu.
Us wakt mujhe tumharey dad se pyaar ho gaya tha.me ne phir bhi tumharey dad se shaadi karnry ko maan gayee thi q ke mujhe pyaar jo ho gaya tha.aur mujhe malum tha ke tumharey dad mujh ko time nhi dengey lekin me ne phir bhi unse shaadi ki.isliye Nikita aur saaniya is me galti meri hai.tumharey dad aur akki ke parivaar ki nhi.agar me us wakt tumharey dad se shaadi karnry ko manaa kar deti to ye nobat nhi aati.isliye tumhari gunahgaar me hu.tumharey dad nhi.
Komolika..............aur jab tum dono paida huyee thi tumharey dad kuch na kuch kaam ka bahana kar ke tum dono ke paas aatey they.
Sameera...................ha Nikita aur saaniya is me tumharey dad aur akki ke parivaar ki koi galti nhi hai.aur akki ko tum itna bura bhala keh rahi ho wo to tum logo ko apney parivaar me shaamil karnry aaya hai.tum hi batao aaj ke zamaney me apne sagey rishtedaar saath nhi detey hai.aur akki apney sagey rishtedaaro se lad kar tum logo ko apney parivaar me shaamil karnry aaya hai.mujhe lagta hai tum dono ko sorry kehna hi chahoye.
Akki...................me ne kaha na kisi ko sorry kehney ki zarurat nhi hai.
Komolika................thik hai akki tum kehtey hai to hum maan jaatey hai.lekin tum dono fresh ho kar lunch ke liye to aa sakti ho na akki tum logo ke liye hi ruka hai.
Nikita..........k maa
Phir hum sab unke room se nikal kar phir se dining table par aa gaye phir itne me Nikita aur saaniya bhi aa gayee to sab lunch karney lagey.komolika aunty mere bagal me bethi huyee thi.hum ne abhi tak ek doosrey se baat bhi nhi ki thi.phir hum logo ka khana khatam hua to Nikita aur saaniya begair kuch kahey apney room me chaley gaye.idhar sourav ne mujh se kaha.
Sourav.................akki tum bhi ab jaa kar ke aaram kar lo.tum bhi thak gaye hongey.
Akki..................k uncle.
Phir me bhi room me aa kar so gaya tha q ke me bhi thak jo gaya tha kanak ko churaney ke isme.
Idhar ajay sab ko le kar ghar ki taraf aa gaya tha.idhar ajay ne Ankit ko poora maamla bata diya tha aur ankit ne bhi sab ko bata diya tha jisey sun kar neha ko apney baap ke oopar gussa aa raha tha.idhar ajay ne sab ko ghar par le kar aaya.ajay ne gaadi bunglow me park ki aur sab ko ghar ke andar le jaaney laga tabhi kanak ne kaha.
Kanak.................yahi new ghar hai na.
Ajay.............ha mam
Phir ajay aur baaki sab ghar ke door par pohanchey to bua ne kanak ko dekh li.q ke bua kanak ke hi aaney ka intezaar kar rahi thi.aur jaisey hi kanak ne bhi bua ko dekhi bhaagtey bhaagtey bua ke galey mil kar roney lagi.itne me ghar ke sabhi log aa gaye.phir kanak sab ghar waalo se mili.idhar shreya,madhvi aur Supriya abhi bhi khadey they sab ko dekhtey huye.
Bua.................kanak tu ab kaisi hai.tujhe malum hai mujhe kitna tension ho raha tha.aur oopar se tera phone bhi nhi lag raha tha.
Kanak................ha maa agar aaj akki bhai nhi hotey to me zinda nhi rehti.
Mom.................kya matlab akki nhi rehta to tu zinda nhi rehti me kuch samjhi nhi.
Kanak..............ha mami aaj akki bhai ne hi hum ko bachaya hai.
Chacha.................aakhir bata to kya baat huyee thi.
Bua................ha kanak bata kya baat thi.
Kanak...............batati hu.
Phir kanak ne poori kahani sab ko bata di jisey sun kar sab shocked ho gaye they.aur mujh par sab garv bhi karney lagey they.phir madhvi ne kaha.
Madhvi.................hum aap sabhi se maafi maangtey hai.hamari wajah se kanak bhi problem me phans gayee thi.
Mom.................arey aap sorry mat kahiye.aap ne bhi to kanak ki help ki thi aur aap ne usko apney ghar ka hi sadasya samjhey they.
Chacha...................aur ha akki ne ye accha kiya ke aap logo ko bhi yaha bhej diya.abhi aap hamarey saath hi rehna jab tak aap chaho.
Bua................ha akki ne ye accha kiya hai.
Chacha..............aap sab guest room me rehna aur abhi aap sab fresh ho kar aaram kar lena.aap sabhi thak gaye hongey.aarti inko guest room dikhao.
Aarti................ha papa
Phir aarti ne shreya,madhvi aur supriya ko guest room dikhaya jaha par wo fresh ho kar aaram karnry lagey.idhar kanak bhi fresh huyee aur wo bhi aaram karney lagi.

Freinds ye update hai ?.is ke aagey ke updates me akki ka safar kuch aisa honga.
1..........akki komolika,Nikita aur saaniya ko apney ghar le kar aayenga.
2...........akki apni behno ke close aayenga aur unlogo se sex karenga.
3.............akki ki life me heroine ki entry hongi.
4...............akki apni maa aur step mom ko handle karenga.
5..................rehansh akki se panga lenga.
6.................bakhtawar apni bezzati ka badla lenga.
Aur sab se last me.
7.................akki ke lund ko kunwari bur aur gaand milengi chodney ke liye.
Aur freinds aap sabhi se meri guzarish hai ke jis tarah aap ne kahani ko itna pyaar diya hai aagey bhi dena aur mera hosla bhadana taa ke me aur accha likh sakoo.
Aur kuch readers hai jo kahani ko padhtey hai aur like bhi kartey hai lekin apna feedback nhi detey hai.mujhe un sabhi readers se guzarish hai ke aap apna feedback zarur dijiye.

Freinds aapko update kaisa laga comment section me zarur batana.
Behtreen update hai mitr.
 
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update...........101
Idhar me lunch kiya aur room me aa kar so gaya.
Ab aage...............
Idhar me ne lunch kiya aur phir me room me aa kar so gaya.q ke subah me kanak ke liye bakhtawar se fight kar ke me thak gaya tha.aur mere haatho aur ghutno ke oopar thora maar bhi lag gaya tha jis wajah se me room me aa kar so gaya.idhar kanak bhi ghar pahonch gayee thi.
Phir meri neend Shaam ke 7 bajey khuli to me fresh ho kar hall me aa gaya jaha par sameera aur komolika bethi huyee thi.
sameera............akki aa jao betho hamarey saath me tumharey liye coffee laati hu.
akki..............ok thik hai.
Phir sameera chali gayee coffee laaney ke liye idhar me aur komolika hi bethey huye they.abhi bhi hum dono ko jijhak ho rahi thi baat karney ke liye.hum dono chup chaap ek jagah par Beth gaye they.itne me Nikita aur saaniya aayee.dono bhi ek dum khoobsurat lag rahey they aur western dress pehney huye they.shayed kisi party me jaaney ke liye nikal rahey they.dono ne bhi ek backless dress pehna hua tha.phir wo komolika ke pass aayee aur kehney lagey.
nikita...............mom hum anushka ki birthday party me jaa rahey hai.
Itne me sameera bhi aa gayee.
Komolika...............akki aaya hai to tum log akki ko shahar ghuma kar lao na.party me jaana cancel bhi kar saktey ho.aur kal tak to tum dono party me jaana nhi chahtey they to ab q jaa rahey ho.
sameera..............ha kal jab anushka tum ko invite karney aayee thi to tum jaaney se manaa kar rahey they to ab q jaa rahey ho.
Nikita..............mom lekin ab hum ko jaana hai.
komolika...............lekin tum jaana cancel kar do aur akki ko shahar ghuma kar lao.
Idhar komolika aur sameera ke kehney par dono ka chehra utar gaya tha.un dono ko mujhe shahar nhi ghumana tha.phir me ne kaha.
akki.............rehney dijiye mujhe waisey bhi ghoomney nhi Jaana hai.aap Nikita aur saaniya ko jaaney do party me.wo unke freind ki party hai to jaaney do nhi to inki freinds ko bura lagenga.
komolika..............thik hai akki tum kehtey ho to me jaaney deti hu.lekin raat me jaldi aa jana aur 10 ke pehle dono bhi mujhe ghar par chahiye.
nikita.............k mom
Phir dono bhi ghar se Nikal kar anushka ki birthday party me jaaney ko nikley aur ghar se Nikal kar saaniya kehney lagi.
saaniya............Nikita di ab kya karey party me to jaana hi padenga.
nikita............ha na agar akki nhi aaya hota to me to party me jaati hi nhi.
saaniya.............ha di ab party me jaa rahey ho to Rana se bachkar rehna.wo aapke liye kuch zyaada hi possesive hai.
nikita..............Rana ki wajah se to bohot pareshan ho gayee hu me.har jagah mera picha karta hai usko kitni baar kahi hu ke mujhe tujh me intrest nhi hai phir me bhi mera picha karta hai
saaniya.............di ab agar aap ko wo pareshan karey to keh dena ke hum mumbai jaa rahey hai.aur waisey bhi to hum mumbai jaa hi rahey hai na.hum mom ko to akeley jaaney nhi de saktey hai akki ke ghar par.
nikita............ha ye sahi rahenga Rana ko bol doongi shayed is bahaney wo mera picha karna chod de.aur agar hum mumbai chaley gaye to wo to pareshan kar hi nhi paayenga.
saaniya...............ha di isliye aaj bata dena Rana ko.uske oopar se pyaar ka bukhaar utar jaayenga
nikita..............ha thik hai chal ab hum chaltey hai party ke liye.
saaniya..........ok di
Phir Nikita aur saaniya dono bhi party ke liye nikal gaye idhar komolika aur sameera mujh se kehney lagey.
komolika..............akki tum inko maaf kar do.
akki..............ha aunty aur mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.
komolika.............ha kaho na
sameera.............aap baat karo me jaati hu.
akki.............aap bhi sun saktey hai aisi kuch khaas baat nhi hai.
Komolika...............ha kaho na kya baat hai.
akki................me Nikita,saaniya aur aapko ghar to le jaa raha hu lekin aap ko thora mujh par bharosa aur sabr rakhna honga.
komolika............akki tum kehney kya chahtey ho me kuch samjhi nhi.
akki............aunty aap to dekh rahey hai ke Nikita aur saaniya abhi mujhe accept karney ko tayyar nhi hai.wo dono mujh se abhi naraaz hai waisey hi mere ghar waaley bhi abhi aap ko accept nhi kar paayengey.khaas kar ke meri mom aur behan.
komolika............ha akki is ka andaaza to hai mujhe
akki..................lekin aunty me aapko bharosa deta hu ke aap ko aur Nikita saaniya ko mere parivaar waaley accept karengey q ke me apney parivaar ko jaanta hu.wo aap ko ek na ek din zarur apnayengey.
komolika................ha akki mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai.aur me us din ka intezaar karungi jab tumhara parivaar bhi hum ko apney parivaar ka hissa bana lenga.
akki...............me aapko poora vishwas dilaata hu ke aapko mera parivaar apna hissa zarur banayenga.
Sameera..............akki tum tension mat lo.didi bhi koshish karengi ke tumhara parivaar inko apney parivaar ka hissa banaye.
akki...............hmm
komolika...............akki tum batao raat me kya khaongey hum aaj tumhari pasand ka khaana banatey hai.
akki................aap kuch bhi bana saktey hai mujhe har cheez pasand hai.
sameera..............thik hai aaj hum biryani banatey hai.
akki...............k thik hai.
Phir dono bhi kitchen me chaley gaye idhar me apney room me aa kar Beth gaya.
Vahi doosri taraf
Bakhtawar idhar tension aur shocked me rehta hai usko samajh hi nhi aa raha tha ke kya se kya ho gaya tha ek ghsntey ke andar.idhar jaisey hi poorey goan me khabar pohoch gayee thi ke ek akela ladka balhtawar ki haveli me aa kar apni behan ko bacha liya tha aur uske gundo ko maar diya tha.ye khabar jaisey goan me pohchi logo ke dilo se bakhtawar ka darr khatam honey laga tha.idhar bakhtawar abhi bhi shocked me tha tabhi uske phone par ring baji jisey bakhtawar ne utha liya.
bakhtawar...............ha bol
aadmi.............kya hua kuch pata chala kaancha ka.
bakhtawar...............nhi rehansh abhi tak kuch pata nhi chala hai.
Ye call aur kisi ka nhi balkey rehansh ka tha.
rehansh..............kya abhi tak pata nhi chala.ek kaam kar kaancha ki family ko maar daal
bakhtawar..............uski family ko yaha se kisi ne aa kar chura kar le gaya.
rehansh...............kya,teri haveli se kaancha ki family ko chura kar le gaya.kon tha wo aur kis me itni himmat thi ke tere kabzey se kaancha ki family ko le kar gaya.
bakhyawar..............nhi pata yaar wo aandhi ki tarah aaya aur aandhi ki tarah apni behan aur kaancha ki family ko le kar gaya.
rehansh..............kya uski behan.me ne to tujhe sirf kaancha ki family ko kidnap karney bola tha to tu ne kisi aur ko kidnap q kiya.
bakhtawar...............mere gundo ne usko galti se kaancha ke parivaar ka hissa samajh kae kidnap kiya.
rehansh...............kuch to tujhe pata honga na jis ne tere yaha aakar tere haveli se kaancha ki family ko chura kar le gaya.tu ne kuch to notice kiya honga na.
balhtawar............ha wo meri beti aur tere betey sanjay ke college me hi padhta hai aur uska naam tha akki.kaancha ki bhabhi usko akki akki keh kar pukaar rahi thi haveli me.
Jaisey hi rehansh ne mera naam suna shocked ho gaya.
rehansh.............kya akki tha
bakhtawar............ha usko to akki keh kar hi pukaara jaa raha tha.bas mujhe ek baar uska pata chal jaaye me usko chodunga nhi.
rehansh................ye akki aur koi nhi balkey wahi hai jisne mere betey sanjay ko maara tha.akki to mera bhi dushman hai aur mujhe to lagta hai kaancha bhi uske paas hi hai.
bakhtawar..............me us haraami ko chodunga nhi.usne mera poora darr khatam kar diya hai aur meri beti ke saamney mujhe badnaam kar ke rakh diya hai.neha mujh se baat karney ko tayyar nhi hai.jis se me sab se zyaada pyaar karta hu usne hi mujhe us se door kar diya hai.me usko kuttey ki mout maarunga .
rehansh...............wo to mera bhi dushman hai me bhi usko nhi bakashney waala hu.bas ek baar election ho jaaye.tu ek kaam kar tu mumbai aaja.uski fielding to lagani hi padengi.
bakhtawar.............ha rehansh me aata hu mumbai lekin idhar ka thora saa kaam poora kar ke.
rehansh..............k thik hai tu apna kaam finish kar ke idhar mumbai me aa jaana phir hum dono us akki ko zameen me gaad dengey.
bakhtawar..............ha thik hai.chal me ab rakhta hu phone.
rehansh...............ha thik hai bye.
bakhtawar............bye
Abhi raat ke 10.30 baj rahey they aur hum sab Nikita aur saaniya ka intezaar kar rahey they.dono abhi tak aaye nhi they aur na hi unka phone lag raha tha.idhar komolika aur sameera tension me aa gaye they.
sourav.............komolika tu tension mat le wo dono aa jayengey.
komolika..............sourav mujhe to bohot tension ho rahi hai.un dono ka phone bhi nhi lag raha hai.
akki...............ek kaam kartey hai uncle hum dono party me jaa kar dekhtey hai.dono abhi waha par hi hongey.
sourav...............ha thik hai hum dono dekh kar aatey hai.
Phir hum dono abhi door se nikal kar bahar hi aaye they ke itne me Nikita aur saaniya bhaagtey huye aayee.ye dekh kar komolika,sameera aur sourav dekh kar darr gaye they q ke dono ke chehrey par pasina tha aur dono bhi haanf rahey they.
Komolika.............kya hua tum dono ko.tumharey chehrey par itna pasina q aa raha hai.
Komolika ke bolney par bhi dono se kuch boley nhi jaa raha tha q ke dono ki saansey tez jo chal rahi thi.phir jab unki saansey thori normal huyee to Nikita kehney lagi.
nikita...........maa wo party me Rana ne phir se hungama kar diya hai aur wo hamara picha kar raha hai.
komolika.............tum ko kitney baar boli hu Rana se door rehna.tum log meri baat ko samajhtey hi nhi ho.aur kya kiya us Rana ne.
nikita.............maa me Rajat ke saath party me dance kar rahi thi aur jab Rana ne mujhe Rajat ke saath dance kartey huye dekha to beer ki bottle Rajat ke sir par de maara jis se uske sir se khoon behney laga aur wo behosh ho gaya.aur jab me ne usko boli ke hum mumbai jaa rahey hai to usko aur bhi gussa aa gaya aur hamara picha karney laga.
Akki...............ye Rana kon hai.
komolika...........Rana nikita ki class me padhta hai aur ameer baap ka beta hai.aur nikita se pyaar karta hai lekin nikita us se pyaar nhi karti hai.wo thora pshycho type ladka hai.
Itne me Rana aur uske kuch saathi Nikita aur saaniya ka picha kartey huye aaye aur phir Rana kehney laga.
Rana..............me tum ko pyaar se kehta hu tum logo ko mumbai jaana hai to jaao lekin nikita ko yaha rakh kar jaana honga q ke me us se pyaar karta hu.
nikita............me ne tum ko kitni baar bolu ke mujhe tum se pyaar nhi hai tum q mere pichey padhey huye hai.
Rana............Nikita tum abhi nhi karti ho lekin tum ek din zarur mujh se pyaar karongi.lekin agar tum ko yaha se kisi ne bhi le kar gaya to me usko zinda jalaa kar maar doonga.
sourav...........chalo sab andar isko jo kehna hai kehney do.
Rana............ha meri nikita darling thak gayee hongi usko andar le kar jao aur aaram karney do.lekin yaad rakhna agar usko yaha se kisi ne bhi le kar gaya na to usko zinda jalaa doonga.
Rana ka suntey hi sourav sab ko andar le jaaney laga lekin me udhar hi khada raha.
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idhar Rana aa kar nikita ke liye dhamki de raha tha
Ab aage............
Idhar Rana aa kar dhamki de raha tha ke koi bhi nikita ko yaha se le kar nhi jaayenga to usko zinda jalaa doonga.itna kehtey hi sourav aur baaki ghar waaley darr gaye.tabhi sourav ne kaha.
sourav.............chalo sab ghar ke andar.nhi to ye yaha par tamasha bana denga hum sab ka
Komolika...............ha sourav.chalo andar.
Phir nikita,saaniya,sourav,sameera aur komolika andar jaa rahi thi lekin me udhar hi khada raha to itne me komolika ne kaha.
komolika.............akki chalo andar isko jo kehna hai kehney do.
akki...............aap sab jao andar me baat karta hu Is se.agar isko roka nhi gaya to iski himmat aur badhengi.
Sameera................nhi akki plz andar chalo.rana Thora pshycho type ladka hai.iska kuch bharosa nhi hai ye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.
akki................me hu na ye kuch bhi nhi karenga.
nikita..............tum jaantey nhi ho ye bohot danger hai.
rana................kon hai be tu.aur is ghar me kya kar raha hai.
akki................me hi hu wo jo kal nikita ko mumbai le kar jaunga.kal 4 bajey niklunga.agar tere me himmat hongi na to mujhe rok ke dikhana.
Rana..............accha to tu hi hai wo jo meri nikita ko mumbai le kar jaa raha hai.tu nhi bachenga.abhi bhi tere pass time hai nikal ja nhi to kal tu zinda nhi bachenga.
akki................me to Nikita ko mumbai saath le kar jaunga.tujhe jo ksrna hai kar lena.
rana .................thik hai tujhe agar marna hi hai to me kya kar sakta hu.kal tera aakhri din honga.
akki................ha thik hai kal dekh lengey abhi yaha se nikal
Mere kehtey hi rana waha se chaley gaya aur phir me bhi sab ke saath ghar ke andar aa gaya.
nikita..............tum ne ye kya kiya wo koi chota mota chor nhi hai jis ko tum daraa saktey hai.wo rana hai hamarey college ka most wanted ladka aur pshycho bhi hai wo.
komolika..............ha akki ye tum ne kya kar diya hai.ab wo nikita ko mumbai jaaney nhi denga.
akki.................aap sab daro mat.me hu na.agar us rana ko kuch nhi kiya to uski himmat badhengi.agar ab usko roka nhi to aagey chal kar wo nikita ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta hai.
sourav...............lekin akki
akki.............aap sab tension mat lo me hu na.abhi khana khatey hai bhook bohot lagi hai.
Sameera..............thik hai aap sab betho me khana lagati hu.
Phir hum sab khana khaney ke liye Beth gaye aur phir sab ne khana khaye.khana khaney ke baad phir me apney room me aaya aur phir so gaya.
Subah meri neend 7 bajey khuli.me fresh ho kar hall me aa gaya jaha par sab they lekin tension me they.q ke unko aaj Rana ka tension tha.unko darr lag raha tha ke Rana kuch kar na dey.
akki.................hum log dopahar ka khana kha kar nikal jaayengey.ghar pohachney me 5 ghantey lagengey isliye.
sourav................akki me kehta hu aaj mat jao.rana ka kuch bharosa nhi hai wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai.aur oopar se tum ne usko challenge bhi diya hai.
akki.................uncle me kisi se nhi darta hu.aur oopar se wo nikita ko pareshan kar Raha hai.aur mere parivaar ko koi pareshan karey me ye bardasht nhi kar sakta hu.
Mere aisa kehney se sab khush ho gaye they.unko khushi ho rahi thi ke me unko apney parivaar ka hissa banaya hu.
Sameera.............chalo abhi sab nashta kar letey hai time ho gaya hai.
sourav.............ha akki Beth jao nashta ke liye
akki.............ha uncle
Hum ne phir sab mil kar nashta karney lagey phir nashta ho jaaney ke baad me ne kaha.
akki.............aap sab apni packing kar ke rakh do hum dopahar me niklengey.
Komolika.............k akki
Phir hum sab apney room me aa gaye idhar me ne chacha ko phone laga kar keh diya ke hum raat tak aa jayengey.idhar komolika aur sameera baat kartey hai.
komolika...............sameera tu bhi hamarey saath chalna mumbai.tu rahengi to mujhe bhi accha lagenga.
sameera...............di me udhar aa kar kya karungi aur agar me udhar aayee to sourav ka dhyaan kon rakhenga.
komolika..............wo abhi baccha nhi hai wo apna dhyaan rakh sakta hai.aur tu mumbai saath chalengi to tu doctor ko bhi dikha dena.
sameera...........Doctor ko q dikhana hai di.
komolika..............doctor ke pass se tera ilaaj karayengey na.shaadi ko itna saal ho gaye hai phir bhi tujhe baccha nhi ho raha hai.ek baar doctor ko dikha kar pata to kar lengey na problem kya hai.
sameera................lekin di sourav nhi manengey doctor ko dikhaney ke liye.
komolika..............usko nhi batayengey.lekin tu bhi saath chal hamarey saath.ek baar doctor ko to dikha hi dengey.
sameera.............thik hai di lekin aap ko sourav ko manana honga.
komolika..............ha me sourav ko mana loongi ke tu hamarey saath aa rahi hai.
sameera...............k thik hai di
Idhar komolika ne sourav se baat kar li aur sourav bhi ready ho gaya tha sameera ko mumbai bhejney ke liye.phir komolika mere pass aayee aur kehney lagi.
komolika...............akki me chahti hu ke sameera bhi hamarey saath mumbai chaley.agar tum ko kuch problem na ho to.
Akki..............mujhe q bura lagenga agar wo aaye to accha hi honga.
Komolika. .................ha akki aur mujhe sameera ko kisi doctor ko bhi dikhana hai.shaadi ko 10 saal ho gaye hai lekin abhi tak koi baccha nhi hua hai.to tumhara koi pehchan waala doctor hai kya jis ko hum sameera ko dikha sakey.
akki...............ha hai aunty me mumbai me dikha doonga doctor.
komolika................thanks akki.chalo ab khana bhi ban gaya hai aa kar kha lo.phir nikalna bhi hai na.
akki................ha aunty chalo
Phir me aur komolika dopahar ka khana khaney nichey aa gaye aur phir hum ne lunch kiya.lunch honey ke baad me ne komolika,sameera,nikita aur saaniya ka samaan apni gaadi me rakh diya.idhar sab log apney apney room me tayyar ho gaye they.phir sab ready ho kar nichey aa gaye.phir hum sab sourav se miley aur usko bye bol kar gaadi me Beth gaya.me gaadi chala raha tha.aagey mere saath komolika aur pichey nikita,saniya aur sameera bethi huyee thi.
Abhi gaadi chalaye huye mujhe 10 minute hi huye they ke mujhe achanak se gaadi me break lagana padha q ke iski wajah ek gaadi thi jo mere raastey me aa kar khadi thi.aur us gaadi se Rana bahar nikla aur uske 2 saathi bhi nikley.aur teeno ke paas hockey stick thi.aur teeno bhi raastey ke bich me khadey huye they.idhar in teeno ko dekh kar sab darr gaye they.tabhi nikita ne ksha.
nikita...............me ne kaha tha rana bohot danger hai ab ye hum ko jaaney nhi denga.lekin idhar kisi ko hero banney ka tha na.ab dekhna ye kya karta hai.maa jaldi se gaadi ko ghar ki taraf ghuma leney bolo nhi to ye raaste ke bich me hi aap sab ko haani pohchayenga.
komolika..............akki ha pichey le lo.iske pass to hockey stick bhi hai kahi ye hum ko maarey na.aur iska darr itna hai ke hum ko koi bachaney waala bhi nhi aayenga.
Tabhi waha se Rana ne kaha.
Rana...............me ne kaha tha na nikita ko mumbai nhi le kar jaana phir bhi tum sab ne meri baato ko suna nhi.ab tumhari laash jalengi aur waha meri aur nikita ki shaadi ke shehnayee bajengi.
Rana ke kehney se idhar sab darr gaye they.
komolika................ab kya karengey.ye to hum ko maar denga.nikita ab tum ko hi rana se baat karni hongi.q ke wo hi tumhari baat ko abhi sunenga.
nikita..............ha ma me Rana se sorry kehti hu.
Akki................koi kuch nhi kahenga aur na koi sorry kahenga.aap bas gaadi ke Andar hi bethna.
Phir me apni gaadi se utra aur gaadi ki dikki ke pass gaya aur waha se wahi koyta nikala jo kal subah bakhtawar ke gundo ko maarney ke liye use kiya tha.koytey par abhi bhi khoon laga hua tha jo koytey par lag kar sookh gaya tha.koyta poora laal laal ho chuka tha.me ne vahi koyta nikala aur phir Rana ki taraf badha.
Idhar Rana ne bhi dekh Liya tha ke mere haath me koyta hai aur wo bhi poora laal laal hai.
akki...............me ne kaha tha tujhe ke me nikita ko yaha se mumbai le kar jaunga.aur agar tu ab beach me aaya to teri laash par se hi jaunga me.
Mere kehney se rana ko bhi darr lag raha tha tabhi usne apney ek saathi ko mujhe maarney ke liye bheja tabhi komolika ne kaha.
komolika..............akki gaadi ke andar aa jao nhi to ye tum ko maarengey.
Me ne komolika ki baato ko ansuna kiya itne me Rana ka ek saath mere paas hockey stick liye huye aaya aur jaisey hi usne mujhe hockey stick se mere sir par maarney laga to me ne apna koyta hockey stick beech me le kar aa gaya aur us gunday ki hocky stick mere koytey se takra gayee aur takratey huye mere koytey ki dhaar se uski hocky stick toot gayee.jaisey hi uski hocky stick tooti me ne apna koyta us gunday ke ghutno ki haddi par maara aur jaisey hi maara wo tadapney laga tha q ke haddi par maar bohot tez lagta hai.wo tadaptey tadaptey zameen par gir gaya tha.
Apney saathi ko aisa tadapta dekh Rana ka doosra saathi darr gaya tha.aur khud rana bhi dar gaya tha.idhar apney saathi ko tadapta dekh rana ke saath jo doosra ladka tha wo hocky stick ko le kar bhaagney laga tha.rana ne usko awaaz dekh kar rokney ki koshish karney laga lekin wo nhi ruka.
Ab me koyta le kar rana ke paas jaaney laga.jab rana ne dekha ke me uske paas koyta le kar aa raha hu to wo darney laga tha.uska chehra poora pasiney se bheeg chuka tha.mere nazdeek aaney se wo kaanpney laga tha.idhar jab nikita ne bhi rana ko kaanptey dekha to wo bhi shocked ho gayee thi q ke usko to ab tak lag raha tha ke Rana kisi se nhi darta hai.jaisey jaisey me Rana ke karib jaaney laga wo pichey Hatney laga.aur phir wo apni gaadi ke pass aa gaya aur jaisey hi gaadi ke paas aaya wo gaadi me betha aur waha se rafoo chakkar ho gaya.
Uske rafoo chakkar hota dekh sab ne rahat ki saans li.phir me bhi gaadi ke pass gaya aur koytey ko phir se gaadi ki dikki me rakha aur phir gaadi me aa kar Beth gaya.
Sameera...............akki hum ko to vishwas hi nhi hota hai ke Rana dar ke maarey bhaag sakta hai.
Nikita...............mujhe to laga tha wo kisi se nhi darta hai.
akki................jo ladki par apni mardaangi dikhata ho wo andar se darpok hi hota hai.me to kal uske bol bacchan sun kar hi andaaza laga diya tha ke wo darpok hai.agar kal aap sab ne mujhe roka nhi hota to me kal hi usko thikaney laga diya hota.
komolika..............thanks akki Nikita ko rana se bachaney ke liye.
akki...............aap thanks mat boliye ye to mera farz tha.
Phir me ne apni gaadi start kiya aur phir ghar ki taraf jaaney laga aur dekhtey dekhtey 5 ghantey guzar gaye aur me ghar ke gate par pohoch gaya.phir sab gaadi se utar gaye aur me ne gaadi ko park kiya aur ghar ki door bell bajayee.

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